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397初三英语作文:英语作文的结尾方式范例
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+ 加入清单文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:
1、首尾呼应,画龙点睛
在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如I Cannot Forget Her (我忘不了她)的结尾:
After her death,I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away,but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2、重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如I Love My Home Town(我爱家乡)的结尾:
I love my home town,and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.
3、自然结尾
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如Fishing(钓鱼)的结尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours,but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing,we lay down on the river bank,bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
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篇1:初三英语
全文共 4853 字
+ 加入清单由于现在竞争激烈化,对于学生来讲,也承受着来自各个方面的压力,他们现在的学习任务很重,所以有些学生就写出了自己心中理想的学校,请描述一下你心中理想的学校。
My Dream School
I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn.
We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.
Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.
I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.(约140字)
初三英语作文:How I Spent My Summer Vacation
Summer can be very hot in southern Taiwan where the temperature usually goes up to 32"C or more. Because of the heat it is a trying experience to go to school or do anything else in a place that is not air-conditioned. Also because of this I stay at home most of the time during the summer vacation and occasionally go to the beach to plunge myself into the cool water as a way to keep my body less sticky. Actually I like swimming think nothing is more refreshing than a swim. In the summer vacation that has ended I went swimming many times with my classmates we all had a good time. This summer vacation, however, was not spent entirely in seeking fun. As a second-year senior student I had to prepare myself for the college entrance examinations that were a year away. In other words, I must find time to study, too. So I divided my time between work play during the summer vacation derived benefit from this arrangement.
初三英语作文:Fathers model
A winebibber,when he has wine addiction,that he is going to the bar and drink some cups of wine.
He will goes to the bar every day before he going to work.Its a snowy morning.He goes to bar before he going to work again.He fells there is somebody follows him on his way to his office.He turns his head and he see his son is treading his footmark.His son is following him.
His son is excited and says:"Dad! Look,I am treading your footmark!"The man is very surprise that his son shocks to him. He thinks:"I will go to the bar, but my son is following me!"
After that day,the man gives up the wine.He doesnt go the bar any more.
初三英语作文:Waiting
We were sitting in the classroom quietly, waiting for the invigilator. We were anxious to get the examination paper and see whether it was easy or difficult.
The invigilator came into the classroom. He first looked around. Then he counted the papers. We could only hear the papersfricative. I had a look at my watch. We would be examined in eight minutes. I felt a bit nervous. I thought to myself,"Will the exam be easy or difficult? Will the last question be very hard for me to work out?"The invigilator began to deliver us the papers. I had been ready. As soon as I got the paper, I began to write quickly. At this, the invigilator said loudly,"You cant write until the bell rings".I felt sorry for that. I watched the hands of the clock and thought hard. I counted quietly,"four minutes, three minutes, two minutes,thirty seconds, twenty-five seconds""Ding" The bell rang. We picked up our pens and began to write quietly.
What a long time we had been waiting!
初三英语作文:Our Dreams Of Life
As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.
We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.
But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!
初三英语作文:My lovely bother
During May Day holiday, I went to my uncle’s home to meet my new little bother and he is a baby.
My little bother has got big eyes, a small nose, and a small mouth that looks like a cherry. But my little bother cant talk, and the only thing he can do is crying.
My little bother is very lovely. He likes frown very much. When he frowns, it looks like that he is just thinking some questions. When he falls to sleep, it looks like swimming. When he cries, the sound is very interesting. It sounds like he is counting numbers or he is singing. Maybe he wants to be a singer.
I love my little brother, Do you like him? I hope my little bother can be a super star in the future. At that time I will be proud of him.
篇2:初三英语作文ThatDay-160字
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.
That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.
When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.
[初三英语作文 That Day-160字
篇3:优秀初三英语作文:OurSchool
全文共 850 字
+ 加入清单Our school, which was set up in 1945, lies in the south of Changchun City. It is famous in our city.
It has 24 classes. 8 classes in each grade. The number of the students and teachers adds up to over 2,000. In the front of the school stands a high classroom building, behind which is a lab buiding. We have many of our chemistry and biology classes in it. Between them is a new library built 3 years ago. There are a large number of books there. After lunch a number of students like reading there.
On the right there is a football field and two basketball courts. They are our favorite places in our spare time. It is said that a swimming pool will be built to the left.
Our school is big and beautiful, covered with green trees and colorful flowers. Many piople call it a garden school. Its really a good place for us to study in.
篇4:初三上册英语作文辅导
全文共 620 字
+ 加入清单I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted
by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens
come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight
against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these
stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain
a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another
galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we
can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the
universe.
篇5:话说千古风流人物作文李白_初三上册语文第六单元
全文共 885 字
+ 加入清单在我们中国这个有着五千年历史的泱泱大国里,有这麽一个人,他既机智过人又愚不可及,既坦率真诚有狡猾奸诈,既心胸豁达有小肚鸡肠,既是菩萨心肠又是小人嘴脸,没错,如此自相矛盾的人,正是被称为治世之能臣,乱世之奸雄的千古风流人物——曹操。
曹操出身于官宦之家,年轻时便当上了官,他厌恶官场的阴险狡诈,憎恨那些贪了官污吏,年轻气盛的他,有着鸿鹄之志,所以他不愿意与那些人同流合污。执政为民。见义勇为,为名除害,两袖清风。是老百姓心目中的清官。
东汉年间,天下大乱,烽火连天,民不聊生。他亲眼目睹这个动荡不安的社会,便产生了一个大胆的想法——统一天下,并且已经牢牢的在他的心里扎下了深根。从此,他为了这个梦想开始在这条漫漫之路上艰苦跋涉
可是,他的人格却发生了巨变。竟忘恩负义的杀死了救他多次的项羽,残忍的杀害了神医华佗,而且对自己的手下的人疑心重重,消灭了大量军人队,引起了许多人的不满。这足以说明他是何等的奸,但是,在更多的时候,他表现的是雄。因为,就连亲刘贬曹的罗贯中,都无不赞叹他独特的智慧和英勇的胆魄!
有的人一生挥毫泼墨,也有的人一生与刀枪为伴。而曹操呢,却是文武双全。一生征战于沙场,却懂得广开言路,开张圣听,重视人才,而且满腹珠玑,难得一个全能之才。一句宁可我负天下人,不可天下人负我足以可见他的狼子野心,他曾只身行刺暴君董卓,可见他那非凡的胆魄。他还大胆的使用空城计虚张声势并打败吕布,而且取得官渡之战的胜利,这是历史上典型的以少胜多的著名战役,可见他拥有多么卓越的政治和军事才能。
然而,一想做事严密的他,却在赤壁之战大败,这是他败得最惨的一回。面对人生最大的失败,刘备伐东吴兵败,损失惨重,最终因病崩逝。周瑜心胸狭隘被诸葛亮活活气死。杨仪也是畏了罪自己杀。然而,此时年近花甲的他,面对茫茫大海,发出强有力的感叹:老骥伏枥,志在千里!然后又积极的投入到沙场,英勇作战。如果他没有很好的心理素质和强键的体魄,在如此大年龄又怎能会作出那麽惊人的举动!
有人说,刘备的江山是哭出来的,孙权的江山是继承下来的,只有曹操的江山是靠自己打出来的!我想,这句话对于曹操来说,是当之无愧的!
篇6:初三英语作文:HowtoLearnEnglishWell
全文共 601 字
+ 加入清单How to Learn English Well
English is one of the most important subjects in middle school.
Almost everyone knows that we should learn English well, but few of us know how to learn it well. Karl Marx has set a good example for us. He once said, "When one is learning a foreign language, he must use the foreign language." In this way, he could use several languages. A saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." When we learn English, we should read more, speak more, listen to English from time to time and practise writing every day. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Only in this way can we learn it well.
篇7:初三英语作文之Thespace
全文共 685 字
+ 加入清单The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.
The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.
The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.
The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.
篇8:HowIlearnedtolearnEnglis初三英语作文
全文共 806 字
+ 加入清单In order to learn English well, you should keep practicing it as much as possible. There are several good ways to help you with the English study.
First of all, you must listen carefully and be active in class .Speak as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes .Second, you’d better read widely and learn some important points by heart .Third you should practice writing often .Of course there are many other ways , You can also see English films ,learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners . You can listen to English programs on the radio and you can join English clubs and so on .They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it .If you do it like this in your English study ,I am sure you will learn English well.
篇9:初三年级英语作文:Special day
全文共 1127 字
+ 加入清单Late one afternoon, I was on my way home from school. I walked slowly along the street with my head drooped. The scenes on both sides of the street were beautiful, but I had no interest in them at all. I walked and walked, thinking of what had happened that day.
Just a few minutes before the second class began that afternoon, I was asked to go to the teachers office. I heard my teacher talking to my mother with anger.
How could you dare to go to see a film this morning without permission? Mother said at the top of her voice, slapping me in the face heavily. I look at Mother, dumbfounded…
I walked more slowly, for I had seen my house ahead, where Mother was always standing at the door, smiling at me, at this time every day. But now, she wasnt there. My heard was beating faster. I even didnt dare to open the door for fear that Mother should beat again.
Not knowing what to do, I sat on the ground near the door, blaming myself for what I had done. I was lost in deep agony.
Suddenly a soft hand patted me on the head. I looked up, seeing Mother standing beside me. I couldnt help crying, Mum! tears rolling down my cheeks.
篇10:初三关于中秋节的英语作文
全文共 1456 字
+ 加入清单In China, Mid-autumn Day is considered to be a symbol of family reunion. On this day, all the family members gather together at home to celebrate this special occasion. Last year, I could not celebrate the festival with my family because I was in university. However, this special day left a deep impression on me.
I still remember the atmosphere of that evening. All the students who could not go back home assembled in our classroom, having a party to celebrate this traditional festival. We tried our best to show our own enthusiasm. As an ethnic minority, I performed a peacock dance, which received warm applause. After the two-hour party, we went out to the playground and sat together to appreciate the moon because it is a tradition on Mid-autumn Day. We ate moon cakes, played cards, and listened to romantic poems recited by one of our classmates. In that harmonious atmosphere, nobody felt lonely or homesick even though we were far away from our homes.
Thanks to our classmates, I experienced such a colorful and interesting Mid-autumn Day at my university. Thus, I learned to value all the festivals I spent during my university life.
在中国,中秋节是家庭团聚的象征。在这一天,所有的家庭成员聚在一起在家里庆祝这特别的时刻。去年,我不能和我的家人庆祝节日,因为我在大学。然而,这个特殊的日子给我留下了深刻的印象。
我还记得那天晚上的气氛。所有的学生不能回家聚集在我们的教室,有一个派对庆祝这个传统节日。我们尝试努力显示自己的热情。作为少数民族,我进行了孔雀舞,热烈的掌声。两小时后,我们去操场,坐在一起欣赏月亮,因为它是一个传统的中秋节。我们吃月饼,打牌,听浪漫的诗就被我们的一个同学。在这种和谐的气氛,没有人感到孤独和想家,即使我们远离家园。
感谢我们的同学,我经历过这样一个多彩和有趣的中秋节在我的大学。因此,我学会了珍惜所有的节日期间,我花了我的大学生活。
篇11:初三中考英语
全文共 637 字
+ 加入清单My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon。 Looking
back, I have many memories of my English study。
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my
English。 I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t
master the words and phrases。 For a time I wanted to give it up。 Later, with the
help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in
class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible。 Step by
step I made great progress in English。
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn
it well。
篇12:初三保护环境的英语词
全文共 2199 字
+ 加入清单Environment is a basic human existence conditions, if we destroy the environment, it is ruined our survival conditions.
At present, the ecological environment is becoming more and more bad, is the greatest influence on our water resources. According to the relevant information reported: the laying of drainage system and detergent used to grow, consume the oxygen in the water, fish died, deterioration of ecosystem. Human activities can make a lot of industrial and agricultural pollutants into the water, the water is polluted. The world each year about 4200 sewage into the river, polluting the 5. 5 trillion of fresh water.
This is how the startling fact, protect the environment is everyone duty, why want to destroy?
Lies a small river near my grandmas home, on the bottom, before my sister and brother in ones childhood often swimming in the river, and their friends to play in the water, uncles and aunts are often in the river to wash clothes, wash dishes, and now, near the river built a chemical plant, the production of waste water discharge into the river, originally the bottom stream gradually turned into a black sending out the smell of the river. The adults never go to the river to wash clothes to wash the dishes, friends never go to the river to play, too!
How I miss the crystal-clear stream! I think: cherish resources, good care environment, these are GongZaiDangDai, force and art event! If we are in such polluted water, that we can use water resources will be less and less, we destroy the environment, is destroying our living conditions.
Let us join hands to jointly protect the environment, dont let water into water, protect the environment, is our common responsibility!
环境是一个人类生存最基本的条件,如果我们破坏了环境,这等于破坏了我们生存的条件。
目前,生态环境日益恶劣,对我们影响最大的就是水资源。据有关资料报道:排水系统的铺设和清洁剂的使用有增无减,消耗水中的氧,使鱼类死亡,生态系统恶化。人类的活动会使大量的工业、农业污染物排入水中,使水受到污染。全世界每年约有4200多亿的污水排入河中,污染了5。5万亿的淡水。
这是多么让人触目惊心的事实啊,保护环境是人人有责的,为什么要破坏呢?
我外婆家附近有一条小河,以前清澈见底,我的姐姐、哥哥小时候常常在小河里游泳,和他们的小伙伴们在水中嬉戏,叔叔、阿姨们也常常在这小河中洗衣服、洗菜,而如今,小河旁建造了一个化工厂,把生产的废水排放到河里,原本那清澈见底的小河渐渐变成了黑黑的散发着怪味的小河。大人们再也不去小河洗衣服洗菜了,小伙伴们也再也不去河里嬉戏!
我多么怀念那条清澈见底的小河啊!我想:珍惜资源,爱护环境,这些都是功在当代、力及千秋的大事啊!如果我们在这样污染水,那我们可以用的水资源就会越来越少,我们破坏环境,就是破坏我们生存的条件。
让我们携起手来,共同保护环境,不要让淡水变成污水,保护环境,是我们共同的责任!
篇13:清明节的初三英语
全文共 1867 字
+ 加入清单Time came slowly to the Qingming time.
The afternoon of April 3rd, our school organized a class five and class together to worship the martyrs cemetery. Walking into the cemetery, looking around, surrounded by mountains, quiet and silent. Occasionally, there are several birds singing, but they also disperse quickly. Most of the students were lowering their heads, wondering what they were thinking in silence. I sighed with a sigh and thought: it was a long time away from the time of the war, and the soldiers who died for the country were fading away. How many people could remember them? Everyone left with a strain of white flowers, looked up at the distance. Looking at the tall marble statue of the martyr, there was a feeling of admiration in mind, and my thoughts went to that distant age. Those young girls who are still in flower season have sacrificed their lives in the cruel war. Did they ever regret when they died? At that moment, they thought of their parents at home, or the security of their country, or just such a departure?
The worship of the process is very simple, but the atmosphere is dignified. No matter what, what is on your mind at this moment, everyone is silent and soundless. Finally, we put the paper flowers in front of the stone tablets and leave them together. The whole process is somewhat solemn and heavy. Returning to school, my mind is always relaxed and depressed. Whenever I think of that stone tablet and think of the soldier who is sleeping underground, there will be a lot of sadness and weakness. Todays life is because of them, we can live so happily.
Qingming Festival is the traditional festival of our nation. At this time, everyone will pay homage to their loved ones or martyrs. In this Qingming Festival, we can do too little or too little. Only hope that we can use a sincere heart to face our elders and martyrs.
篇14:高考英语语法:形同意合的谚语口译
全文共 714 字
+ 加入清单Pride goes before a fall 骄者必败
Fish in troubled waters 浑水摸鱼
Business is business 公事公办
The style is the man 文如其人
More haste,less speed 欲速则不达
Great minds think alike 英雄所见略同
Misfortunes never come alone 祸不单行
Hedges have eyes,walls have ears 隔篱有眼,隔墙有耳
Man proposes,God disposes. 谋事在人,成事在天
Beauty is in the eye of beholder 情人眼里出西施
Time and tide wait for no man 时不待我/岁月无情
A young idler,an old beggar 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲
A man should not bite the hand that feeds him 不要恩将仇报
Health is better than wealth 家有万贯财,不如一身健
Out of office,out of danger 无官一身轻
In time of peace prepare for war 居安当思危
The tongue cuts the throat 祸从口出/言多必失
Out of sight,out of mind /far from eye,far from heart 眼不见为净
All shall be well,Jack shall have Jill 有情人终成眷属
篇15:记我的英语老师初三作文
全文共 455 字
+ 加入清单我的英语老师唯一的爱好就是跳江南styl,他喜欢笑,讲起课来很随意,讲着课随便都可以插入5分钟的笑话,或者不经意间就和同学们聊起天来,所以他整个人看起来很随和,同学们都喜欢他的课,因为在他的课堂上总是乱七八糟的。
我也不例外,我特别喜欢上英语课,当然喜欢英语课的另外一个原因是我的英语成绩还不错。有一天上英语晚自习的时候,英语老师组织同学们考试,先交完试卷的同学们可以自己干自己的事情,他要求同学们不要说话就行,于是我拿出一张纸,在上边画上两只小猪,用英语在旁边标注着英文两只小猪的对话,写完后我居然大胆的在纸上边用铅笔标注着英语老师的名字。当我拿着自己的杰作开心的给同桌看时,居然被我那小气的同桌给告发了。
我知道自己闯了祸,像一个犯了错的罪人一样顿时立在自己的座位旁边不敢出声。还好老师给我面子,没当着全班同学的面数落我,让我和同桌跟着他去办公室谈,他让我写份检讨拿给他,可当我第二他拿给他检讨的时候他看也没看一眼,告诉我说下不为例,果真是宰相肚里能撑船,多么随和的一个人,他大人不记,我这个小人自然就好过了。
篇16:以ToExperience为题目的初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单Saturday Nov. 15, 2003 Cloudy
My teacher gave me an assignment "experience life" last week. I had been thinking how to finish it because I had never done any thing by myself before.
Mother was out today. It was a good chance to complete the assignment. Seeing the barrel was empty, I decided to fetch water from the well.
I took the empty barrel and went towards the well outside the yard. It snowed yesterday, so the alley was very slippery. A layer of thickice was frozen on the platform of the well. I was frightened by the sight, but I gathered my courage to walk towards it.
The alley was so slippery that I walked with difficultly. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down, water in the barrel totally poured down on the ground. I stepped on the platform carefully. After standing steadily and squatting down slowly, I hooked the barrel at the end of the rope and put the rope down slowly. I made an effort to drag the barrel up after it was filled with water. I was very careful because it was easy to slip and fall. Then, I carried the barrel of water and returned to my house. My figners were frozen stiff. I realized my effort was in vain. I hated myself.
I failed to finish the assignment but I did experience life through a trifle which seemed easy but difficult to do well. Such was my first experience of life.
篇17:初中一年级英语上册
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+ 加入清单我的假期
I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。
then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
篇18:青少年与父母关系初三英语作文_初三年级英语作文900字
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+ 加入清单某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:
1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
2.你对这些问题的看法;
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
篇19:关于初三英语写作技巧汇总
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+ 加入清单一、认真审题,切中题意
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容,在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
二、围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
三、语言通顺,表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用
自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:①外表特征:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等;②内心境界:
glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;③感情描写:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等;④动作描写:come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:①表示并列关系的过渡词:and,aswellas,or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词:but,yet,however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词:first,andthen,
finally,after,before,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthe
meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to),far(from),inthefrontof,beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词:inthesameway,justlike,justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词:but,still,yet,however,ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词:also,and,then,too,inaddition,moreover,again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词:because,since,then,thus,otherwise,so,therefore,asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词:forexample,infact,inthiscase,for,actually等。
四、不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
五、锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:(1)句型多样化,不要i(we)……到底,使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
六、书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
七、检查错误
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。