0

我的父亲英语作文5句话(精选20篇)

浏览

1550

作文

61

我的父亲英语作文

全文共 398 字

+ 加入清单

My father is very tall, short hair, thin face, black eyebrows, small eyes, but very God, high nose, thick lips. Father is to do the wine business, every day now, but my father loved me, have time to play with me, my father has a lot of advantages, father is my chauffeur, accompanied me to school every day. Dad never beat me, and bought me a lot of good food.

This is my father, "I love my father."

展开阅读全文

更多相似作文

篇1:我的父亲英语

全文共 438 字

+ 加入清单

My father is an ordinary people. He is a driver. He doesn’t receive too much education. But he is kind-hearted. He always ask me to be down-to-earth and keep an optimistic mind. Everyone likes him because of his good personality. He is always ready to help others if he can. Sometimes when he drives the old, he will not take monet frome them. He is so great. He has set a very good example for me. He is my idol. I will love him forever.

展开阅读全文

篇2:描写父亲的英语作文

全文共 1991 字

+ 加入清单

Sarah Liang Liang1 Mrs Fu

College Writing 123

November 5, 2014

My family portrait

Are you seeing that picture of my familyThe sun was shining brightly! My parents sat together in sofa. My mother hugged my brother, and I stood beside on my father. We were smile sweetly to the camera. All we us look like very happy although we were a poor family at that time.

My mother is not tall, not short but slim. She has a round face, two big eyes, a small nose and small mouth. She’s beautiful. She is forty-three years old, but she looks so young! She is my dear friends .

You must feel very strange to my father because he having full-white hairs, just look like a old man. My parent’s relationship is old husband and young wife. He is older than my mother 20 years. He can as my grandfather at his age.

You can see that my father wear a long sleeve shirt and look like a gracious man to camera. In my daily life, he is a bad-tempered man. He looks up to boy and down on girl. So he is very strict to me because I am a girl. He takes particular care for my brother. Well , his finger is long and thin. He often uses finger to tooth my ears as I was a child , wow!

Liang 2

My father has a bad habit that he likes smoking very much. I hate it. See, the house is full of smoke. I know it bad for his health as well as my mother, brother and mine. We advise him to give up smoking. I’m sure he will follow my advice some day.

My father like to reading newspapers after meals. He also likes reading in his spare time. He told me reading little by little. I like books, because they help me in many ways.

I ever upset that my father having white hairs before I enter to college as I would always compared him to my friend’s young father. You know, I rebelled when I was in high school. Well, I am very respecting him now. I am having the feelings of important to my family. I love my parents and brother. They are plays an important roles in my whole life.

Such is my family, I am proud of having such a good family!

展开阅读全文

篇3:我的父亲英语

全文共 502 字

+ 加入清单

I have a nice father.He has short curly black hair and big brown eyes.He is tall and thin.He likes telling stories to me,and its often makes me laugh,of course,he is very funny,when I was sad or angry with my friend ,he always tell jokes and makes me happy.he is very simple and always wares a old suit.But he isoptimistic,nothing can attract him.He likes drawing picture but it isnt very well,but he is hard and drawing again and again.This is my father,a kind、honest、sanguine person.I love my father.

展开阅读全文

篇4:我的父亲英语作文

全文共 902 字

+ 加入清单

Hi. Everyone! My name is Peng Jiadong. I m 15 years old. Today I tell you about my father.

My father is a good man. He washes dishes every day and cleans the house every week. He wakes up early, then he has breakfast. After breakfast, he goes to work. He works for 10 hours. It s time for him to go home at 6 p.m. After supper, he sits on the sofa and reads newspapers. He likes playing basketball and playing with me. But he doesn t run fast, because he seldom does any exercise.

He wears a pair of glasses. He works hard; he usually goes to the library to buy some books. He loves reading books very much. He always says, A man is never too old to learn! So he knows lots of things. I can ask him to teach me Chinese, Maths and other subjects. But he doesn t know English and can t speak English. So he always asks me for help when he meets English-speaking people.

Mother and I both like him very much!

展开阅读全文

篇5:2024高中英语作文大全:父亲

全文共 1687 字

+ 加入清单

Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.

This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didnt have a lot of money.

Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night.

One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be.

The mother was holding her husbands hand, looking up at him as if to say, "Youre my knight in shining armor."

He was smiling and basking in pride, looking back at her as if to reply, "You got that right."

The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, "Please let me buy eight childrens tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."

The ticket lady quoted the price. The mans wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to quiver. The father leaned a little closer and asked, "How much did you say?"

The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didnt have enough money.

How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight kids that he didn‘t have enough money to take them to the circus? Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. (We were not wealthy in any sense of the word!)

展开阅读全文

篇6:介绍我的父亲的英语

全文共 609 字

+ 加入清单

A Letter to My Dear Father

Dear father,

This Sunday is Father’s Day. I am very happy. I’m writing a letter for you now. But my classmates are playing games.

Today is rainy. Please take care. Do you know? My study is good. There fore, don’t worry about my study. I have a good news to tell you. I have won the second award at the piano competition. Are you happy ?

On the weekend, I usually go hiking on the Song Shan Lake. We are very happy. But after we walk for a long time, we feel a little tired. When the sun goes down, we return home. I like going hiking. What about you?

Happy Father’s Day to you!

Yours

Shiqi

展开阅读全文

篇7:父亲节英语作文:父亲和我

全文共 911 字

+ 加入清单

导语:在你的成长过程中,父亲一定做了许多令你感动或印象深刻的事情。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

父亲节就要到了,Teen Times杂志正在组织感恩父亲征文活动,请以“Father and me"为题写一篇英语短文,参加本次活动。

内容包括:

1.描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情;

Z.你的感受或对你的影响;

3.表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。

要求:

1. 80-100词;

2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

父亲和我英语作文范文:

I used to think Father didnt care for me. But one thing changed my mind.

One Sunday, I was sad because of another "C" in English. At that time Father invited me toclimb a mountain. Soon I felt tired and wanted to give up. Father encouraged me and gave me a hand when necessary. At last, we got to the top. Then I found the way up wasnt so hard. Suddenly, I understand Father: stick to your dream and you can to it.

Fathers Day is coming, I want to say, "Thank you and best wishes to you. I love you, father."

【参考译文】

我过去认为父亲不关心我。但有一件事改变了我的想法。

一个星期日,我因为英语的另一个“C”而伤心。当时父亲邀请我爬一座山。很快我觉得累了,想放弃。父亲鼓励我,必要时帮我一把。最后,我们到达了顶端。然后我发现的方式不是那么难。突然,我明白了父亲:坚持你的梦想,你就可以做到。

父亲节快到了,我想对你说:“谢谢你,并向你致以最美好的祝愿。我爱你,爸爸。”

展开阅读全文

篇8:Myfather我的父亲:高二英语作文

全文共 709 字

+ 加入清单

My Father My father is a teacher. He was born on January 5th, 1968 in Beijing. He works very hard. Three years ago, he worked in a middle school in the countryside. He often went to work by bus. Now he works in No. 4 Middle School. He walks to school every day. In the school, he often plays basketball with his students. He likes his students and they like him very much too. He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s kind of dangerous but very exciting. Thieves are afraid of him. I love my father and I’m proud of him.

我的父亲我的父亲是一名教师。他于1968年1月5日出生于北京。他工作很努力。三年前,他在乡下的一所中学工作。他经常乘公共汽车去上班。现在他在4中学工作。他每天步行去上学。在学校里,他经常和他的学生打篮球。他喜欢他的学生,他们也很喜欢他。他想当一名警察。他认为这是一种危险,但非常令人兴奋。小偷都怕他。我爱我的父亲,我为他感到骄傲。

[My father 我的父亲:高二英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇9:描写父亲英语作文

全文共 960 字

+ 加入清单

Ive been happily drifting for a lot of years, Dad, and I didnt see you getting older.

I suppose I saw us and our relationship as aging together, rather like a fine wine. Numbers never seemed important. But the oddest thing happened last week. I was at a stop sign and I watched as you turned the corner in your car. It didnt immediately occur to me that it was you because the man driving looked so elderly and fragile behind the wheel of that huge car. It was rather like a slap in the face delivered from out of nowhere. Perhaps I saw your age for the first time that day. Or maybe I saw my own.

Somewhere along the line, the generation gap evaporated. Age separates us now and little else. We agree on most everything, perhaps because weve learned there isnt much worth disagreeing about. However, I would like to mention that fly fishing isnt all youve cracked it up to be, Dad. You can say what you want about wrist action and stance and blah, blah, blah...

展开阅读全文

篇10:给父亲的一封信英语

全文共 835 字

+ 加入清单

my dearest daddy,

I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need. You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape, so I can pay more attention to teacher’s instruction. Yesterday, I went to library and read some books about jogging. I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise. I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.

I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school. Daddy, you will help me buy this pair, won ’t you? The on sale may not last for long. Please send money as soon as possible, so I can start my jogging right away. I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor. I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise. Thank you for your consideration. Take care and wish you happiness.

Yours beloved son.

展开阅读全文

篇11:给父亲的一封信英语作文

全文共 640 字

+ 加入清单

Fathers Day

Yesterday was Fathers Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didnt remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I

got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.

What a wonderful surprise!

展开阅读全文

篇12:介绍我的父亲的英语

全文共 594 字

+ 加入清单

My father is a bus driver. He has been working on it for more than ten years. He drives the No.9 bus of my city. Its routine starts from the east and then cross the city goes the the west. This work is toilsome, especially in the summer and winter, because its hot in summer but cold in winter. Everyday, my father just stays in the narrow place and barely moves. He always gets up very early and comes home late. His work is boring but my father says that he must work hard to support our family. I hope I can grow up quickly and have a good job, so that my father do not have to work so hard.

展开阅读全文

篇13:拥抱拾荒的父亲英语作文

全文共 3494 字

+ 加入清单

70-year-old father was in town to live after I received one to dusk, he always liked the balcony, looking at the misty sky in a daze.

One day, my father asked me: "Son, this city people, do not have firewood to cook it how there is so much smoke.?" My father always get lost in the city, he said: "Son, village crossed a ridge on the home, home town road too many. "

Came to town, my father always felt weak legs, not as brisk pace in the country field. Dinner, my father always Qieqie look, just kept Grilled rice, rarely bite, not soup.

Middle of the night, I got up to go the bathroom, there is a shadow on the living room couch to see. I turned on the light, and asked: "? Dad, you do Why do not sleep."

"Take a ride with me okay? Son, I always feel that I am a person Chixian Fan." Father deflated lips, eyelids droop, like a child full of grievances.

"Dad, how do you say you are, you kept me for my college life so much pain to eat, enjoy life now that you go to sleep, tomorrow morning, I had a meeting to be open."

Father hurriedly got up and said:. "Well, well, Ill go to bed."

The next morning, my father quietly got up to go out. Later, I was making breakfast for her son. He came back. My father said: "I think people in town all morning workout, I walk out, exercise, exercise." Since then every day.

One weekend a month later, his father suddenly go to the market, buy a black hen, he gasped excitedly said: "This is the authentic chicken countryside, killed after you taste the stew soup . "

That night, a man sipping fragrant soil chicken soup, my wife and I have Zaza Zui that does not taste the same. This time my son asked: "Grandpa, where only chicken that way?" Father startled by startled, said to me: "? You let me go home, give you specialized feeding chicken okay," I patted his fathers shoulder, smiled and said: "Now we keep you very much, want you to go back and raise chickens doing ah."

When watching TV, I quietly asked his father: "? Money wheres your chicken," his father said:. "Im kind of in the countryside pipe down for so many years, how many have little savings."

Since then, every ten days and a half, my father always buy a chicken, a duck stuff like that. Watching us eat tasty look, he grinned at the side. On the table, he is no longer buried dinner. After consultation with my wife said it would follow the father, lest his heart, let him feel Chixian Fan.

One night I came home late, in an unused garage downstairs and saw a shadow in the rock. I walked over and opened the phone screen by light, a look, a father, I saw the garage heap there are a lot of plastic bags, water bottles, waste paper stuff like that.

Father saw me, Dayton was embarrassed, he arrayed his hands, motioning me not to say anything.

Father pulled me into a tree, said:. "I put the garbage to retrieve, to sell the waste station, could always sell some money thing."

My nose acid, said: "Dad, you do this, how long?" Father Hehedixiao said, from the morning to go "exercise" the day began. My father said: "do this, do not hard to grow crops in the country, while in rural Reaper, I do not often go to the wheat fields also pick up some wheat it."

Father whisper begged me not to let daughter know this, should I keep his secret.

I promised my father. Helped his father upstairs, I could not help but suddenly, grabbed a small, emaciated father, tears dripping on his shoulders gradually collapse. It is the city after his father, the first time I come to embrace this old town scavengers.

展开阅读全文

篇14:介绍父亲的英语作文

全文共 1255 字

+ 加入清单

Father, how great words; The father love, how beautiful melody. Dear dad, when busy, can you find such a festival of fathers day?

Today, is my dads first holiday, I carefully prepared a card, then tape posted a petal in the upper left corner. It with the aromatic, with my feelings, as the wind blows gently, the beautiful kind hearts float into dad.

The father loves the warmth in June and Thanksgiving. When I was in elaborate greeting card, write the handwriting which asm, I hand in trembling, my heart in the jump, the sincere words from time to time pull at my heart!

In fact, fathers love is gentle, father use it rough hands stroked my head; Dad with his warm words of comfort me; When he humorous language make me laugh... At that time, I really realized the father loves the also gentle.

Dad is the pillar of the family, when his broad shoulders to assume the burden of the family; When I found a piece of white silk on his head; When I find the wrinkles on his face. My heart is with sour.

Generation of letters, mostly because their children mother selfless and moved, so for the selfless love left countless love. And for the whole family outside the hustle and bustle of the father? Nothing left.

Here, I want to sing loudly fathers love is great!

展开阅读全文

篇15:关于我的父亲的英语作文及翻译

全文共 998 字

+ 加入清单

In my eye, my father is so adorable, because he can give me advices and help me to make the best decision. My father experienced a lot. When he graduated from college, his first job was to work in the office, then he found life was boring to sit in the office all the day, so he decided to quit and then started his trip to many places. My father had been traveled to many places, he opened his vision and then went back home to find another job he liked. When he met my mother, he thought it was time to settle down. I was so interested in his life experience, I couldn’t help thinking what if I go with him. I must will meet many new persons and then see the beautiful scenery. I want to live as my father, when the time comes, I will travel too.

在我眼里,我的父亲是如此的可敬,因为他能给我建议和帮助我做出最好的决定。我父亲经历了很多。当他从大学毕业时,他的第一份工作是在办公室里工作,然后他发现生活是多么的无聊,整天坐在办公室里,所以他决定辞职,然后开始他去很多地方。我父亲已经去过很多地方,他开阔了视野,然后回到家找到另一个他喜欢的工作。当他遇见了我母亲,他认为是时候安定下来。我对他的生活经验很感兴趣, 忍不住想如果我和他一起去会怎么样。我一定会遇到很多不认识的人,然后看到美丽的风景。我想像我父亲那样活着,当时机成熟的时候,我也会去旅游。

展开阅读全文

篇16:给父亲的一封信英语作文

全文共 1468 字

+ 加入清单

Dear dad,

It’s so late,almost 11:00 at night.Have you entered into the sweet dream yet?I haven’t seen you for a long time.I miss you so much.Can you hear my sincere words?Maybe you’ll never know I miss you so much!

Do you still remember the happy days when we were all together?During those days we were full of sunshine.You and mum often took brother and me to the park.We always saw the ice-cream tear.Sometimes,you stayed at home and cooked some delicious food for us.We often waited for you and played with you.You could lift me very high.We always had a good time.You also concerned about my lesson.But you have never chastised me and lectured me.You were full of thoughts for me.What’s more,you were my best father in my heart.You were the envy of my friends.I was happy for a long time.But now,all things have changed.You can’t take care of me.You aren’t at home all day.Sometimes,I go to bed late,but I still can’t see you.Are you busy?No!you often play cards with your work friends in the factory.So you can’t go back home early.I’m angry to hear that!Do you know?If you don’t come back,we’ll worry about you.I often see you and mum should divorce in my dream.I’m very scared,because I want to have a happy family.I can’t control my tears and often suffer from insomnia the whole night.

Dad,I want to see you and talk with you.But I have no courage to tell you.But I hope you can care our family.Dad!Could you hear my voice?

Hope you keep healthy and best wishes.

展开阅读全文

篇17:我的父亲英语词四:ALettertoMyFather

全文共 603 字

+ 加入清单

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Father’s Day!

Yours,

Li Hua

展开阅读全文

篇18:描写我的父亲的英语作文

全文共 830 字

+ 加入清单

01 My Father

01 我的父亲

One of my earliest memories of Dad is that he would often leave the house at dawn to go jogging.

我对父亲最早的一些记忆之一是他以前常在黎明时离家去慢跑.

He was a traditional Chinese father,which means that he didnt show his affection for his kids easily.

他是一个传统的中国父亲,这意味着他不轻易对儿女表露他的情感.

And he and I didnt talk much.

而且我和他并不常交谈.

Some time ago, he made me go jogging with him.

前一阵子,他叫我和他去慢跑

I hated it be-cause I didnt know what to say to him.

我讨厌和他慢跑,因为我不知道要和他说什么.

Needless to say, I did not enjoy exercising with Dad.

不用说,我不喜欢和爸爸一起运动。

However, as time went by, he and I began to talk while jogging.

然而,随着时间推移,我和他开始在慢跑时交谈。

Later, he even began to tell me jokes!

后来,他甚至开始讲笑话给我听!

It was a side of him that I had never seen before.

这是我以前从未见过的一面。

Im gald that he made me go jogging with him because our relationship has greatly improved as a result.

[描写我的父亲的英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇19:描述父亲的英语作文80字

全文共 1571 字

+ 加入清单

My dad is a great mathematician, what questions are difficult to fail him, of course, everybody knows him. High bridge of the nose, with a black frame glasses, a look, and I knew he is a doctor. Today, he is a face of serious drop packing, he have what important thing? Find out just know, he was to go to see the teacher. I doubt asked my father: "what do you have a teacher?" Dad is patted me on the map, said: "these are the secret," "I asked dad took me to meet his teacher, father to consider for a moment, said:" ok." But you want to quietly, not nonsense... I promise all his request, we hit the road.

I thought that he would take me to which universities, however, we came to what I study in primary school and came to the class I attended a (3), at this moment, I finally met my dads teacher, the teacher is my math teacher, is my dad once the teacher. Teacher patted my dads shoulders, and said: "you over the years, achievements in mathematics is really great, we all are proud of you!" Father is modestly said: "I want to thank the teacher you, are you people I learned more knowledge."

At this moment, I realized, dad is a mathematician, but he also had a grade teacher.

我的爸爸是位大数学家,什么题都难不倒他,当然,谁都认识他。高高的鼻梁上,架着一个黑框眼镜,一看,就知道他是一个博士。今天,他一脸严肃滴收拾东西,他有什么重要的事?一打听才知道,他原来是要去看望老师。我疑惑地问爸爸:“您怎么还有老师?”爸爸则拍拍我的图,说:“这些都是秘密》”我请求爸爸带我去见见他的老师,爸爸考虑了片刻,说到:“那好吧。”不过你要安安静静的,不能胡闹……我答应了他所有的要求,我们便上路了。

我本以为他会带我去哪个大学里,可是,我们居然来到了我所就读的小学并来到了我曾上过的一(3)班,这时,我终于见到了爸爸的老师,这个老师竟然是我的数学老师,也是爸爸曾经的老师。老师拍拍爸爸的肩膀,说:“你这些年,在数学是上成就确实很大,我们全校都以你为荣!”爸爸却谦虚地说:“我要感谢老师您,是您人我懂得了更多的知识。”

这时,我才明白,爸爸虽然是数学家,可是他也有一年级的老师。

展开阅读全文

篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

全文共 3240 字

+ 加入清单

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

展开阅读全文