关于旅行的英语议论文作文【精彩20篇】

导语：你出去旅游喜欢用什么交通工具呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Air travel has two advantages compared with train travel. It’s very fast and comfortable, and we can have a good rest in the plane. But air travel is very expensive.

Not only do we cost less when we travel by train, but we can also see much good scenery. Take the trip from Beijing to Guangzhou for example, if we go there by train, it costs us about 250 yuan, and we will spent about 24 hours on the travel. Besides, it is very crowed, and we may not have a good rest. But we can see much good scenery along the way.

If we go there by air, it only takes us two hours, and it costs at least 900 yuan. It’s also very fast and comfortable, and we will have a good rest as well. On the contrary, we will miss much beautiful scenery.

However, different people like different ways of traveling. People will choose the best way which is suitable for them to travel.

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与火车旅行相比，航空旅行有两个优点。它又快又舒服，我们可以在飞机上好好休息一下。但是乘飞机旅行很贵。

我们乘火车旅行不仅要花更少的钱，而且还可以看到许多美丽的风景。比如从北京到广州，如果我们坐火车去那，大约要花250元，我们大约要花24个小时去旅行。此外，它非常拥挤，我们可能不能好好休息。但是沿途我们可以看到很多好的风景。

如果我们乘飞机去那，只需两个小时，至少要花900元。它又快又舒服，而且我们也会好好休息。相反，我们会错过许多美丽的风景。

然而，不同的人喜欢不同的旅行方式。人们会选择适合他们旅行的最佳方式。

Yestoday,our Chinese teacher told us that we would have a school trip.And today is the school trip day.So,we get school in the early morning.We will go to the park by bus.And all of us spend 150 yuan in buying bus tickets.

When we get there.We see so many trees and flowers.The flowers are so colorful and nice.There are many different birds in the sky.Oh,there are also a big poor in the park.The water in the poor is so clean.We fall in love with the park.

Summer vacation is coming soon.I’m going to Beijing,the capital of China with my parents.We’ll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way(沿途).We’ll visit the Great Wall first because it’s a symbol of our country.After that I’ll go to Tian’anmen Square,the Palace Museum and so on.Of course,I must enjoy Beijing Duck.During the trip ,I will take lots of photos.

I believe I’ll have a wonderful trip.

When I was a primary school student, my family and I took a trip to five

cities which were in the south of China.

First, we came to Nanjing by plane. That was the first time I had taken the

plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. We arrived in Nanjing in

the morning. At 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. The food tasted

delicious. In the afternoon we went to “Zhongshanling”. It was the place that

preserve the tomb of Mr. Sugshan.

The next day, we came to Wuxi and then Suzhou where we visited the region

of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. It was a beautiful and old place. The house there

were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.The fourth

day, we came to Hangzhou where We visited “The West Lake. It was very beautiful

and the water was clear .

As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some

beautiful silk and famous tea of “龙井”.The last place that we visited was

Shanghai. It was one of the biggest city is China. The night view in Shanghai

was more beautiful than Beijing. We visited the TV tower of “东方明珠”. It was the

third tallest tower in the world. Standing in the tower you could see the whole

city. In the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. I was very excited

that evening.

This trip took us seven days and we went back to Beijing by plane. The

plane was very very big. There were three engine rooms. I felt happy and I would

never forget the trip.

If I were to leave my home for a year, there is one thing I definitely

would take with me: my cell phone. With my cell phone, I could call my friends

or family if I ever was lonely, needed advice, or just wanted to talk.

It is good to keep a diary in English

Keeping a diary in English does a great deal of good to my English study。 Keeping a diary can help you review all the English knowledge you have learned。 For example， you must know the correct spelling of each word needed in the diary； you must use the phrases correctly and choose the suitable sentence patterns， meanwhile， it is also necessary to use you knowledge of grammar in a correct way。

Keeping a diary can help you not only to console your knowledge of English， but to form the habit of thinking in English。 Practice makes perfect。 By and by， your English writing will be greatly improved。

[英语议论文写英语日记的好处

For most people， they will choose to travel during holiday because they want to relieve themselves from the high pressure of work。 However， it happens quite often that people often ran into traffic jams on the way to travel。 Some people think that we can relax ourselves by traveling no matter of how many people there。 Some people would rather to stay in home than going out to travel because they think there are too many people swarm into the scenic spots。 In my point of view， I would rather to stay indoors rather than going out to travel。 Reasons are listed below。

Firstly， during holiday， so many people swarm into the travel spots that we can’t enjoy ourselves to the full。 For most people， they want to travel because during holiday， they can have several days to relieve themselves by traveling。 However， so many people crowd together will make their tour lose the original fun。

Secondly， during holiday， price will be rising drastically。 It is known to all that you need to spend much more to buy things or taking bus or any other transportation since many retailers will raise goods’ price during this holiday to get fat profits。

All in all， travel during holiday is not a good choice for us since its inconvenience in traveling among a huge crowd of people and also the dramatically high price for goods and transportations will let us pay extra money。

England is the best place I’ve ever been. Everything is so beautiful. I spent about one and a half days on the plane. When I arrived at Heathrow Airport in London, it was evening and the GREat trip was starting. there were many places I v is ited in London, like Big Ben, Westminster, the Tower of London…….those are very famous.

Most of the time in the afternoon, my parents and I sat and walked in the park. Have you seen“Notting Hill”before? the story in the movie happens in London. the Brit is h museum, Musee de Louver and the Metropolitan Museum of art are the three largest museums in the world. I’ve v is ited two of them. then we left London for Cambridge, Windsor Castle, York and Stonehenge. they were excellent . Every small town has a h is tory of one or two thousand years. there was an art festival called“Tutto”in Edinburgh, and there were many street players who their lives to the shows. then we went to northern Scotland. It was dangerous! then we went back to London, and sat in the park, and the fat geese were so cute. That journey was the nicest memory of my life. I won’t forget it.

Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

1. 有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游（package tours）

2. 有的人喜欢自己独立行动（travelling on one’s own）

3. 比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是……

范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest. While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.

I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach. At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.

True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

[初中英语作文说说你喜欢哪种方式的旅行

Sometimes, suddenly between, just want to start a simple travel, not far, also need not how long, a person, a bag, a way, a journey, one kind of mood, without any bondage, without any fetter.

Maybe the meaning of travel is not that you see how much scenery along the way, also is not whether you reach the desired destination, but the mood changes in your travel and rich experience.

I want to travel to our eternal temptation is: cant stop, no end. And the places where we have reached, perhaps is the most beautiful scenery in our heart at that time, but deep down he was sometimes have another voice told himself, perhaps next place will make us be dead set to stop. Because the road ahead forever full of unknown and challenges.

Life is a no end of travel. People born and keep running forward, racing against the clock, and their own race, will life in the unconscious sparse inside hua lost along the way, and time is like a necklace of off-line, lost along the way the feel of reality, these feelings only to the elderly can find they are a shining pearl. Then understand experience is true, is their own, adorn them empty heart, melting in life.

As travel has become a rogue, we see life as a kind of real life. Remember once said: yu street is a kind of farewell, farewell, some put it into words, words cant describe others, real tramps mostly belongs to the latter, is forced to describe, just fobbed off. I thought, so had been simply wandering, this is also a way of life and state!!!! The quiet joy, enron to heart, can let a person is very comfortable.

Sometimes we always aspire to the lines of travel hand in hand, bloom all the way, all the way singing, so in the course of the journey will not feel lonely. But perhaps a persons travel, can let us learn to grow up more. Some people say that loneliness is the self-supervision of mind, girl lonely, because of good boy excellent because of loneliness. When you are a person carrying luggage, stepping a solid pace, towards the unknown distance, maybe well want maybe we will feel dejected, but these perhaps is the necessity of life. When you had the so-called arduous journey. You may suddenly know: originally all already doomed, but inadvertently learn to grow up, learn to strong. Like tea, if there is no water soak, it can only be huddled in a corner. And if there is no fate we scour, life will only turgid. Then put a persons trip as a soul relief and self heart dialogue. Then we can accept on the wind and rain on the road.

The meaning of travel is always from the heart. I dont want dont eager to see many places of interest in the journey of life, how many sites, can only hope that there is a under their feet. Even if the eyes are endless fields, I can still smile on the safety flower...

有时候，蓦然之间，就是想开始一段简简单单的旅行，不用多远，也不用多久，一个人，一只包，一条路，一段旅程，一种心情，没有任何束缚，亦没有丝毫羁绊。

也许旅行的意义并不在于你在沿途中看了多少风景，也不在于你是否到达了预期的目的地，而是在于你旅行中的那种心境的变化和丰富的经历。

我想旅行对我们永恒的诱惑就是：不能停留，没有终点。而那些我们曾经到达过的地方，也许在当时是我们心中最美的风景，但有时内心深处却有另一种声音告诉自己，也许下个地方会让我们死心塌地地停下。因为前方的路永远充满了未知与挑战。

人生是一场没有终结的旅行。人一生下来便不停地向前奔跑，和时间赛跑，和自己赛跑，无意识中便将生命和时间稀里哗啦地丢了一路，就像一条脱线的项链，沿途失掉一颗颗现实的感受，这些感受只有到老年才会发现它们是闪光的珍珠。那时才懂得经历的才是真实的，拥有的才是自己的，把它们点缀在心空，融解于生活。

当旅行成为一种流浪，我们便把生活看成是一种生命的真实。记得余秋雨曾经说过：流浪是一种告别，告别的原因，有的付诸言表，有的则难以言表，真正的流浪大多属于后者，被迫言表，只是搪塞。我想：就这样一直简单地流浪，这也是一种生活的方式与状态吧!其中的寂静欢喜，安然于心，会让人很惬意。

有时候我们总向往那种结伴而行的旅行，一路花开，一路欢歌，这样在旅途中就不会感到孤寂。但或许一个人的旅行，更能让我们学会成长。有人说寂寞是心灵的慎独，女孩因优秀而寂寞，男孩因寂寞而优秀。当你一个人背着旅行包，踏着坚实的脚步，走向未知的远方时，也许我们会触景生情，也许我们会黯然神伤，但这些也许是生命的必然。当你度过了这段所谓艰辛的旅程。你也许会突然顿悟：原来一切已注定，而在不经意间学会成长，学会坚强。就像茶叶，如果没有水的浸泡，它只能蜷缩一隅。而我们如果没有命运的冲刷，人生只会索然寡味。那就把一个人的旅行当作一次灵魂的释然与自我心灵的对话。那时我们就能坦然接受前行路上的风雨跋涉。

旅行的意义，从来都是由心而定。我不奢求也不渴望能在人生的旅程中观赏多少名胜，多少古迹，只希望有一条能在脚下延伸。即使眼前是漫无边际的田野，我依然能微笑着陌上花开……

Hainan is the southernmost province of our country. I heard the scenery was picturesque and the temperature was suitable, so Id like to see it. In this year I again begged mom and dad in the travel agency, the newspaper, I finally have a chance to see the South China Sea Pearl - Hainan face!

What impresses me most in Hainan is all kinds of tropical fruits, tall coconut trees, gold and golden beaches, and the boundless sea. Now, let me give you a brief introduction of these things.

Lets talk about the fruit of Hainan first! Because of the warm climate here, many kinds of fruit are produced. Is eating stinky smell fragrant durian, nutrient rich pitaya, eat like egg yolk like fruit, carambola star like, with sweet and sour sapodilla, have long durian like jackfruit, a thin meat, sweet emperor banana, a body is a treasure of coconut...... Many kinds, right?

The fruit should be introduced to the tree of the long fruit. Hainan Island is also called the "Coconut Island" here coconut and areca trees everywhere, and they look like, but the coconut tree tree, some slightly thicker than areca shorter, so the coconut tree is known locally as "elder brother tree" areca tree is called the "Mei tree". Ninety-nine percent of Chinas coconuts are produced in Hainan, which is because of the warm climate in Hainan and coconut in all the year.

Hainan province is located in the southernmost Chinese, Sanya city is the southernmost province of Hainan, but also in Sanya city "the remotest corners of the globe" on the south end, so each person will travel to Hainan for a visit here, at the entrance there is a scenic star model inside the remotest corners of the globe, inlaid with a crystal, abnormal beautiful. The golden beaches were spread near the blue and blue sea. The seaside "South Tianzhu" stone is called fortune stone, because it appears on the back of the two yuan RMB, and there are "Tianya" and "Jiao Jiao" stone. When Jiang Zemin and Li Changchun came here, there were all kinds of coconut trees on the right side of "Tianya" and "Jiao Jiao" stone.

Is it beautiful in Hainan? I hope theres a chance to have a look at the students.

In the morning, a grand flag-raising ceremony in Beijings Tiananmen Square will attract many people.

National Day is commemorated every year by special flag-raising ceremonies. Crowds gathere at Tiananmen Sqaure in Beijing early morning for this event. It was part of the National Day celebrations for the birthday of the Peoples Republic of China.

The national flag was first raised over Tiananmen Square in 1949, marking the birth of New China. And it has been repeated every day since then. The ceremony still attracts the interest of millions of people each year. Although the flag has meant different things to different people, it now rises over a more confident and prosperous country.

Along the Changan Avenue, the major street in downtown Beijing,lamps and colored lights illuminate the whole street.

At the Tiananmen Square, artificial flower parterres will be decorated with specially designed lighting facilities

Hello, my name is Jian Xuanyi.I’m a boy.I’m 12 years old.I’m in Class 5,Grade 5.I’m tall and thin.

In the school,I’m a good student. At my home,I’m s good son.

I like playing badminton, playing the violin and so on. Sometimes, I play badminton with my good friends, sometimes; I watch badminton games on TV.I like blue and green, because they’re very beautiful. I like eating watermelons and mangoes very much.

This is me. Do you like me?

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region. Besides you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Finally you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people. Today people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the faster growing industries in most countries.

The main reason why people travel is perhaps for pleasure. For example having worked hard throughout the weekdays people will find a widened trip to the nearby mountains or beaches a real relaxation. For another example spending an annual holiday travelling abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much of an opportunity to be away from their homelands. When people return from their travel they will generally feel fresh and energetic ready to work harder.

I think there is no one would say “no” to travel. People love travel, for it can make them relax and widen their vision. Some people like to travel with friends, because they want to share the pleasure of traveling, and they think the journey will be much easier for they can take care of each other. While some people like to travel alone, they can go anywhere in anytime. They don’t have to care about what the partner’s idea. In my opinion, I’m much preferred to travel with friends, but I always have an urge to travel alone.

我想没有人会对旅行说“不”。人们喜欢旅游，因为旅游可以使他们放松并开阔视野。有些人喜欢和朋友一起旅行，因为他们想要分享旅游的乐趣，他们认为旅行会变得更容易，在旅程中将他们可以互相照顾。有些人喜欢独自旅行，他们可以在任何时候去任何地方。他们不必在乎对方的想法。在我看来，我更喜欢和朋友一起旅行，但我总是有一种冲动想独自旅行。

Firstly, I was told that travel alone can help people to grow up quickly, and that’s what I really need. If you travel alone, you have to do everything by yourself in the journey, for instance, to buy a ticket, to book hotel, and ask directions. That maybe just a small case for extrovert, but for introvert, like me, it’s really a big challenge. I remember the first time I go to travel with friends and my little brother, they did everything, and I just follow and had fun. I even too shame to check into a hotel, and my little brother did it for me. I was humiliated for that. So, travel alone could force introvert to do the things that you don’t dare to do. It could help you to build an outgoing personality. For extrovert, travel alone could enhance your ability to handle emergence case.

首先，有人告诉我独自旅行能帮助人们迅速长大，这才是我真正需要的。如果你独自一人旅行，你必须在旅途中，自己做所有的事情，比如，买机票，预订酒店，问路。这些对于外向的人也许只是小事，但对于性格内向的人，像我，就是一个非常大的挑战。我记得我第一次与朋友和我的小弟弟去旅行的时候，他们把所有的事情都做好，而我只是跟着并寻找乐趣。我甚至太害羞而不敢到酒店登记，结果是我的弟弟为我登记的。对于这一点我感到很羞愧。所以，独自旅行能强迫内向的人做你不敢做的事情。它可以帮助你形成外向的性格。对于外向的人，独自旅行能提高你处理紧急情况的能力。

Secondly, travel alone gives you peace of mind. Image that, you walking alone in the beach, there are no sounds of human beings, just burst of sound waves. You close your eyes, enjoy the moment, you will feel peace.

其次，独自旅行可以让你心情平静。想象一下你一个人独自走在沙滩上，那儿没有人类的声音，只有浪花的声音。闭上眼睛，享受这一刻，你会感觉到平静。

In short, travel alone could be loneliness and dangerous, especially for girls, but it’s worth having a try for the beautiful scene in the journey, it seems like all the things are just exist for you.

总之，独自旅行可能会有孤独和危险，特别是对女孩子，但为了旅途中美丽的景色是值得一试的，似乎所有的事物都只为你而存在。

SpringThere are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. And every season has three months. I think every season is beautiful and I think spring is the

best season of the year! So I like spring very much. What about you?

When the weather become warm and sunny, everything comes to life again, they seem to tell us— spring has come . In much of China. Spring is usually very short. But the days get longer. It’s usually from March to May. Sometime it’s colder but it gets warmer. At spring times, In the fields everything begins to grow. Trees turn green, and flowers start to come out.

Spring can make people happy! If you do some sports at that time, you will join them. Like flying the kite, going fishing, going hiking and so on. It’s can make people happy and also can keep people healthy. I think it’s very interesting!Summer, full of vigor, is beautiful, but I think spring is more beautiful because it is a naivetest season.

Who has the most unforgettable thing, no one brigade to swim. Remember the fifth grade one weekend, my mother called the travel agency travel agency take everyone to play in the hengdian studios. We went to four places, one is the Ming and qing dynasties today, one is guangzhou street there is a valley of Hong Kong street, with a dream. Travel to hengdian, but my dream.

I saw the tiananmen square in the Ming and qing dynasties today, my mother told me this is imitation, really tiananmen square in Beijing. Later, I saw the meridian gate, the guide told me that there is a place where the beheading, I took a photo on the meridian gate. I found there is a lawn, taihe door is a place where play "curse".

We are all helping the journey tired, hengdian studios is guided to the gates. Dad told me that the studio is the place where a film, also tells us "the princess huanzhu" shot is taken here. We walk while see, feel the artistic crystallization of generations of craftsmen. There will be "Ming yuan yuan" panoramic display. We went to visit the emperor to eat the "man-han banquet". Im sitting on the dragon took photos.

Play in the morning, at noon we casually find a place to eat lunch, take a break and began the next trip. In the afternoon, we went to see the horse eight flag visited the imperial palace of the internal structure of acting. Each other inside the night we went to the water-sprinkling festival, people in water at the end we all got wet. The next day we Chen car return.

This is a good weekend, happy memories, happy weekend. I like it here. I gently waved, get on the bus say goodbye to everything here. Look at the city ran back.

谁都有最难忘的事，谁都旅过游。记得五年级的一个周末，妈妈报了旅行社旅行社带大家去横店影视城玩。我们去了四个地方，一个是明清宫苑，一个是广州街还有一个香港街加一个梦幻谷。到横店旅游，可是我梦寐以求的情。

我在明清宫苑里看到了天安门，妈妈告诉我这是模仿的，真的天安门在北京。后来，我又看了午门，导游告诉我，那里是砍头的地方，我在午门上拍了照片。我发现太和门前有一个草坪，是演《满城尽带黄金甲》的地方。

我们大家顾不上旅途的劳累，就跟着导游来到横店影视城城门。爸爸告诉我影视城就是拍电影的地方，还告诉我们《还珠格格》就在这里拍射的。我们边走边看，感受着几代工匠的艺术结晶。还有“圆明圆”全景展示。我们参观了皇上吃的“满汉全席”。我还坐在龙椅上拍了照。

上午玩好了，中午我们就随便找了个地方匆匆吃了中饭，稍作休息又开始了接下来的行程。下午我们去看了战马旗八的表演参观了故宫的内部构造。晚上我们去了泼水节，人们在里面互相泼水在最后我们全身都湿透了。第二天我们陈车返程。

这是一个美好的周末，美好的回忆，快乐的周末。我喜欢这里。我轻轻的挥手，上了车告别这里的一切。看着这座城市向后奔去。

When I was a primary school student, my family and I took a trip to five cities which were in the south of China.

First, we came to Nanjing by plane. That was the first time I had taken the plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. We arrived in Nanjing in the morning. At 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. The food tasted delicious. In the afternoon we went to “Zhongshanling”. It was the place that preserve the tomb of Mr. Sugshan.

The next day, we came to Wuxi and then Suzhou where we visited the region of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. It was a beautiful and old place. The house there were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.The fourth day, we came to Hangzhou where We visited “The West Lake. It was very beautiful and the water was clear . As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some beautiful silk and famous tea of “龙井”.The last place that we visited was Shanghai. It was one of the biggest city is China. The night view in Shanghai was more beautiful than Beijing. We visited the TV tower of “东方明珠”. It was the third tallest tower in the world. Standing in the tower you could see the whole city. In the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. I was very excited that evening.

This trip took us seven days and we went back to Beijing by plane. The plane was very very big. There were three engine rooms. I felt happy and I would never forget the trip.

随着越来越多的省市进行自主命题，开放式、半开放式作文愈加受到青睐。因为此种题型可以更准确地考查考生是否能使用英语准确表达自己的观点，充分体现了对实际解决问题的能力的考查。此类作文多为议论文性质，所以议论文的写作显得愈加重要根据议论文的特点，最好采用三段式论证法，第一段提出问题(总写)，即主题段，陈述自己的观点;第二段用论据进行正反两个方面的论证(分写)，即拓展段，摆出支撑论点的论据;第三段得出相应的结论(总写)，为总结段，总结自己的观点。类似中文里(总——分——总)的写法。这种写法可以使文章层次分明，结构清晰。

1.在议论文三段式里，首先要写好开头，好的开头是成功的一半。开头写得好，会给阅卷者留下美好的印象，有吸引力。任何一篇文章都应该做到主题鲜明，中心突出，提出论点要开门见山，紧扣题目。高考作文篇幅短小，因此开头不能冗长拖沓，务必要点题，即说清楚文章的人物、事件和作者的观点。

2.要深化中间段。中意部分是文章的主体，需要用具体的事例、细节来阐释主题句，因此中意的部分应该是具体的、详细的，不可泛泛而谈或点到即止，安需要围绕主题句的内容而展开，不能谈论与之无关的东西，即论述主题要具体而又有说服力。常用方法有：比较法、举例法、归纳法、推理法、对照法和驳论法。

3.把好结尾关，避免虎头蛇尾，使结尾缺乏力量。好的结尾会深化主题，进一步强化阅卷老师的良好印象。文章最后可以回到开头提出的中心思想上，达到再次肯定强调的效果;或者引用格言或名人名言总结全文，即言简赅又有较强的说明力;也可用几句话概括全文的内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者观点。

4.注意一些关联词的使用，使文章更连贯顺畅、条理清晰。

表因果的：as, as a result, because of, for, due to, owing to, thanks to, etc.

表意思的：in one’s opinion, have different ideas on, my idea/view is, it strikes me that, etc.

表比较的：unlike, in the same way, on the contrary, etc.

表结论的：in brief, to end/ sum up, in other words, in conclusion, in short, in summary, etc.

5.注意文章的层次和段落。

为了更好地考试中运用三段式的写作手法，考生在平时的学习中要进行严格、系统的训练，练习题材要丰富，选票质量要高，讲求写作效果，训练时要限时完成，只有严格的训练，才能确保考试中的超水平发挥。

【典例1】根据以下关键字，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

【范文】

We want to have our own time.

As we all know, today students have more and more homework. They spend their spare time doing the homework and taking lessons. Therefore, students have no time for themselves. In my opinion, students should have more time to develop themselves.

First, students should have time to relax and play. It doesn’t mean that they will waste time. They also can study and learn from playing. After doing homework for a long time, it is necessary to have some time to relax. As saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” We don’t want to dull boys. Second, we should have our own time in order to make our body strong enough. This can be helpful in our further study.

In short, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves.

专家点评：这篇范文充分体现了议论文的三段式的精髓，从以下几个方面我们可以充分感受到它和闪亮之处。

1.结构合理，富有条理性。文章分为三段。第一段简要描述了图画内容，直接点题，观点明确;第二段提出了自己的观点并列瘵出论据支撑论点;第三段简明扼要地概括了自己的观点。

2、开门见山，没有在图画上费太多笔墨，简要描述后直接引入主题：Students should have more time to develop themselves.

3、文章描述得非常清晰，有层次感，逻辑性强。段落间和句子间连贯自然，过渡巧妙。作者充分地发挥了连词及副词的功能，例如：as we all know, therefore, in my opinion, first, second, in short等。

谋篇布局

1.仔细审题，确定体裁格式，选择文章主体时态，弄清中心人称。

2.确定文章的中心论点。

3.围绕中心论点列出提纲，选好论据。

4.选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。

5.利用所列短语、句型组句成文，打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达，根据自己所掌握的词汇，在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇，使文章增色。

6.将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。

7.最后做一次全面检查，注意文章的文体、格式是否正确，要点是否全面，是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误，是否有单词摭写错误，字母大小写是不是恰当，词数是否符合要求。

旅行是快乐的，能给我们增长很多见识。下面请看小编为大家带来的难忘的旅行英语作文，希望你喜欢。

【第1篇】难忘的旅行英语作文

Making a trip to ShangHai on May 18 was an experience which I will never forget.

I arrived in ShangHai at about 2 oclock,and immediately took a No.5 bus to the sea area.The beautiful blue sea was so large that I couldnt see the other side of it.After getting off the bus,I went straight to the shore.Taking off my shoes,I put my feet into the water.The water was cool,and walking in the water was such a great joy that I didnt want to stop.Then I collected shells.When it got dark,I sat on the shore,watching the sea.The night scene was simply marvelous!

Finally I had to go back.It was an unforgettable day in my life.

【第2篇】难忘的旅行英语作文

My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghaineses lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so its very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.

This is the trip l never forget.

【第3篇】难忘的旅行英语作文

I went Chong Qing in July 22.It is a city which was built near mountains.

So people call it Mountain City. In Chong Qing,I went to the Red Stone Center, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There are a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisons are good, they didnt want to tell the bad people where the other people were. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink.They had only twenty minutes to stay out side per day but they still said nothing.

I think they are the heros in that century. I will follow their spirit.

Huhehot is in Inner Mongol. There are lots of large grasslands. The grasslands are endless. The sky is bright blue. There were a lot of horses and sheep. They were running or eating grass. I rode a horse on the graland. I picked some colourful flowers. We drank the tea with milk. There is a small desert, it was very hot when I walked on it. The sand could sing.

I enjoyed my day.

My travel plans

Hello,everyone!My name is Sun Yumeng.I am ten years old.I have a-month holiday every summer.It starts in August. During this summer holidy,I went to Shan Xi by car with my parents.Shan Xi is a

beautiful place!There are many mountains ,trees and flowers.I like Shan Xi very much!

We had a good time in Shan Xi.