关于旅行的英语议论文作文20篇

篇一：

The ancient said the world is a book and those who do not travel read only one page. I like travel, because travel not only allows me to enjoy the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, but also brings me knowledge and exercise. Beautiful sceneries make me impressed and friendly people make me warm. Travel is a process of discovery of beauty that would company my whole life. I like the feeling on the road, which greatly enrich my life and fields of vision. Being to different places, seeing different views makes me know how big the world is, so that I won’t bother my trifles. I think a broad mind is extremely important to a person, and traveling is a good way to get it. Maybe some people would say that I travel just because I want to relax. There’s no doubt about that. No matter for what reason, traveling is attractive to us all.

古人云：读万卷书，不如行万里路。我喜欢旅行，旅行不仅让我饱览祖国的大好河山，而且在学到知识的同时还锻炼了自己。美丽的风景让我印象深刻，有好的人们也让我倍感温暖。旅行就是一个发现美的过程，这种美的感受将会陪伴我的终生。我喜欢在路上的感觉，这极大的丰富了我的生活和视野。到不同的地方，看不同的风景会让我知道世界之大，从而不会被琐事叨扰。我认为开阔的胸襟对一个人来说尤为重要，而旅行是开阔胸襟的一个好方式。也许有的人会说，我之所以去旅行，只是因为想得到放松，这是毫无疑问的。不管出于什么原因，旅行总是充满诱惑。

篇二：

As for this essay, I want the person who likes travel to read. And, I also want the person who yearns to the solitary journey to read.

I like travel very much. I often go to travel. It meets a lot of people when traveling. It can touch not only the person but also the region. Therefore, it comes to want to go even times how many.

I was traveling and all the people met had a very warm mind. It was very kind. There is a person who taught variety of land, too. I do not think meeting with two another degrees in the person. However, I do not think that I forget. Because, The reason is that there are a lot of very good memories.

Therefore, travel is not stopped. It went to not only the country but also foreign countries. The communication of the intention can have been done with the person in the country though the word did not run well. However, I thought that the handicap of the word was large. I thought it was good if the word could be understood more many times. Therefore, I think that I should study the language study more. It can meet the one different according to the land when traveling. The tourist spot is, and there is a lot of one not so either. There are a lot of very good points of the place taught to the person in local. Therefore, it is always made to speak. I have not traveled still alone. I want to go out to travel alone sometimes. How about you? Traveling with someone is also good. However, I yearn to the solitary journey very much. It is not, and yearns for the destination to free travel. I want to go out to unrestrained travel some time.

Finally, I yearn to the solitary journey. However, I do not hate tour travel. I think that there is a merit also in the tour. I think that traveling with the person who does not know also has the enjoyment. However, I like independent tour more. Which do you like?

篇三：

The ancient said the world is a book and those who do not travel read only one page. I like travel, because travel not only allows me to enjoy the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, but also brings me knowledge and exercise. Beautiful sceneries make me impressed and friendly people make me warm. Travel is a process of discovery of beauty that would company my whole life. I like the feeling on the road, which greatly enrich my life and fields of vision. Being to different places, seeing different views makes me know how big the world is, so that I won’t bother my trifles. I think a broad mind is extremely important to a person, and traveling is a good way to get it. Maybe some people would say that I travel just because I want to relax. There’s no doubt about that. No matter for what reason, traveling is attractive to us all.

[我喜欢旅行英语高中作文

Since I went to college, I have made many friends and we shared the same

interest. My friends and I liked traveling so much. We decided to travel abroad.

The destination was Thailand. We spent ten days there and had a nice trip. It

was such an unforgettable trip, and I learned a lot.

Firstly, it was my first time to travel abroad. My friends and I had made

many preparations. We read the travel guide and chose the information that was

useful to us. I classified the information and wrote down tourist sites. During

the trip, I become much independent. Sometimes I even walked down the foreign

street by myself, appreciating the beautiful scenery.

Secondly, I broadened my vision and enrich my mind. Before I came to

Thailand, I needed to read some information, then I got to know this countrys

culture and their tradition. When I was in Thailand, I could feel its religious

belief. Whats more, there were so many foreigners here, and I talked to them

happily.

Traveling is a good way to learn knowledge, and I know the importance of

English. It is the key to know about the world.

Making a trip to Beidaihe on May 18 was an experience which I will never forget.

A arrived in Beidaihe at about 2 oclock,and immediately took a No.5 bus to the sea area.The beautiful blue sea was so large that I couldnt see the other side of it.After getting off the bus,I went straight to the shore.Taking off my shoes,I put my feet into the water.The water was cool,and walking in the water was such a great joy that I didnt want to stop.Then I collected shells.When it got dark,I sat on the shore,watching the sea.The night scene was simply marvelous!

Finally I had to go back.It was an unforgettable day in my life.

Tom is a boy of st week,it was his first trip in Shanghai.Although he only traveled Shanghai for one day,but he was very happy at all.First,he played in Changfeng Park.He had photos with dolphins and seals.Then he visited Yu Garden.It is a traditional place.He bought many small articals.After that,he traveled the most highest building—Oriental Pearl Tower.It is also the most highest building in Asia.In the tower,he knew a lot of things of Shanghai.Finally,he looked at the magnificent Huang Pu River.Tom was so excited in Shanghai,he said that he wanted to visit Shanghai again becaust he liked this morden city.

It was already late when we set out for the next town, fifteen miles away on the other side of the hills. It got dark soon; we drove fast along the narrow winding road that led to the hills. Wecouldntidentify any sign of the town marked on the map. Suddenly the car stopped. We had run out of petrol. Therefore, although we had little food with us, we decided to spend the night in the car.

在我们动身前往下一个镇的时候已经很晚了，那个镇在山的另一边离我们十五英里远。天黑得很快;我们沿着狭窄曲折的道路往山上的方向把车开得飞快。我们在地图上找不到去那个镇的任何标志。汽车突然停了下来。我们的汽油用完了。所以，虽然我们只有一点点食物，我们还是决定在车里过夜。

Our meal finished very soon. I went to sleep at once. But my companion Bill who was a poor sleeper went for a walk up the hills. From the top of the hill he saw the lights of the town we were looking for. We unloaded all our luggage and pushed the car to the top of the hill at once. Then we went back to the luggage, loaded the car again and set off down the hill. We reached the town less than a quarter, and found a hotel quite easily.

我们的晚餐很快就吃完了。我马上去睡觉。但我的同伴比尔睡眠质量不太好所以他就到山上去散步。从山顶上他看到我们正在寻找的镇的灯光。我们马上卸下我们所有的行李，把车推到山顶。然后我们回去拿行李，把它装到车上之后就下山了。不到一刻钟我们就到达镇了，并且很快就找到一个酒店。

How an exhausting day!

多么疲惫的一天啊!

When I was a primary school student, my family and I took a trip to five

cities which were in the south of China.

First, we came to Nanjing by plane. That was the first time I had taken the

plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. We arrived in Nanjing in

the morning. At 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. The food tasted

delicious. In the afternoon we went to “Zhongshanling”. It was the place that

preserve the tomb of Mr. Sugshan.

The next day, we came to Wuxi and then Suzhou where we visited the region

of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. It was a beautiful and old place. The house there

were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.The fourth

day, we came to Hangzhou where We visited “The West Lake. It was very beautiful

and the water was clear .

As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some

beautiful silk and famous tea of “龙井”.The last place that we visited was

Shanghai. It was one of the biggest city is China. The night view in Shanghai

was more beautiful than Beijing. We visited the TV tower of “东方明珠”. It was the

third tallest tower in the world. Standing in the tower you could see the whole

city. In the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. I was very excited

that evening.

This trip took us seven days and we went back to Beijing by plane. The

plane was very very big. There were three engine rooms. I felt happy and I would

never forget the trip.

If I were to leave my home for a year, there is one thing I definitely

would take with me: my cell phone. With my cell phone, I could call my friends

or family if I ever was lonely, needed advice, or just wanted to talk.

一、议论文写作三要素

议论文主要包括三要素：论点、论据和论证方法。论点必须正确。论据是为说明论点服务的，既要可靠又要充分，事实胜于雄辩，是最好的论据。论据也可以是人们公认的真理，经过实践考验的哲理。论证的方法多种多样，常用的方法有：

1. 归纳法

从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。

2. 推理法

从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析，而后得出结论。

3. 对照法

对所有事实、方面进行对照，然后加以分析，得出结论。

4. 驳论法

先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点。

二、议论文的特点

议论文的结构一般有引子、正文和结论句三部分。一般在引子部分提出论点，即文章的主题，在正文部分摆出有利的事实，对论点进行严密的论证，最后根据前面的论证得出结论。

三、议论文的写法

要写好议论文，必须注意以下几点：

1. 确定论点

论点通常在文章的第一段提出。

2. 要有足够的论据，可以列举生活的实例

3. 论证要有严密的逻辑性

所有事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论连接起来。

4. 层次要清楚

5. 态度诚恳、友好，因为议论文重在说理，以理服人

议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论中的说明常为议论的开展创造条件，或是议论的补充;议论文中的叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据的因此，叙述应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。

6. 论据要充分

欲证明自己的观点必须有充分的证据。作者可以列举事实、展示数据、提供事例、借助常识或利用亲身经历。

议论文尽管有多种写法，但中学生的英语作文都有提示，因此，论点、论据一般都是确定的，我们首先应准确找出论点、论据及其间的相互关系，也即是要找出要点;然后考虑如何组织材料，也即是论证的方式，短文的写法;还应考虑文章的时态、语态等。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，可用过去时态;预测将来时，要用将来时态;也经常使用被动语态;有时假设一种虚拟情况时，还需要用上虚拟语气。在考虑了短文的写法、时态、语态等后，可根据行文的需要，使用恰当的连接词，按适当的顺序将写好的句子组合成短文。

１．I was born and grow up in the south where is not too cold in winter and I had never had a chance to see, snow. Happily, I made a trip Harbin this winter and I finally enjoy the snowing.

One of my aunt lives in Harbin and she invited me to visit her. I stayed at her home for almost ten days. It snowed two times when I was there. One day, the weather report said that there would be a snow in the next day. Since then, I expected it so much. Next morning, when I woke up and looked out the window, I saw the outside become white. It was so beautiful. I went out immediately after I had my breakfast. The snow was on everywhere, the street, the car, the tree and the roof. I was excited to walk on the snow, leaving my footprints. Besides, I also went to see the ice engraving. They were all made by ice and were made into various figures, such as castles, cartoons, animals and so on. When the colorful lights turned on at night, it was another amazing image. It seemed in the fairy tale.

How wonderful the visit to Harbin was!

我在南方出生、成长，这里的冬天并不算太冷，所以我一直没有见过下雪。值得高兴的是，这个冬天我去哈尔滨旅游，终于欣赏到了雪景。

我的一个阿姨住在哈尔滨，她邀请我去玩，我在她的家里住了差不多十天，期间下了两次雪。有一天，天气预报说第二天会下雪，我十分期待。第二天早晨，当我醒来看向窗外时，外面全部变成了白色，非常漂亮。早餐过后，我迫不及待地出门去。外面到处都是雪，街道上、汽车上、树上和屋顶上都铺满了雪。我兴奋得踩在雪地上，留下一串串脚印。另外，我还去看了冰雕，它们全都是用冰做成的，被刻成了各种形象，有城堡、卡通人物和动物等等。晚上，当亮起彩灯时，又是另外一番美景，像在童话故事里一样。

这真是一次精彩的哈尔滨之行！

２．Last year, I traveled to Beijing by train. It was very fast. I like travel by train, because I like the feeling in the train. Besides, I can enjoy the scenery on the way.

However, after the journey last week, I dont want to travel by train anymore, because it is too tired to have fun. It took me sixteen hours on the train. I was very tired and I had to spend a day to have a good rest. And it was boring on the train. Therefore, I think it should not travel by train if its far.

去年我坐火车到北京旅游。火车速度很快。我喜欢坐火车去旅行，因为我喜欢在火车上的感觉。除此之外，我还可以享受沿途的风景。但是，上个星期的旅程过后我就再也不想坐火车了，因为我累得不能好好玩。我在 火车上度过了十六小时。我觉得很累，不得不花一天时间休息。而且火车上很无聊。所以，我觉得路途遥远的话就不要坐火车旅行。

３．Nowadays, people prefer to travel by air. This is

because air travel has some advantages. First of all,

airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport. It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another. Besides, traveling by air is

convenient and comfortable. Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. They look after passengers all the way to their destinations. In addition, on long

distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.

As a popular saying goes, "Everything has two sides." The same is true of air travel. It has some disadvantages, too. For one thing, air travel is expensive. The average

Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money.

For another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.

As for I am concerned, the advantages mentioned

above exceed the disadvantages. If I were given choice between traveling by air and by train, I would certainly prefer the former, especially the long distance journey,

because time is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do.

现在，人们喜欢坐飞机去旅游。这是因为坐飞机旅游有一些优点。首先，飞机是人类发明的奇迹，是最快的交通方式。坐飞机从一个地方到另一个地方花的时间最少。此外，坐飞机旅游方便舒适。友好的空姐深情体贴。她们一路上都照顾乘客。另外，长途飞行有电影和音乐给人们自娱自乐。

正如一句流行的话说的：“任何事物都有两面性。”航空

旅游也一样，它也有一些缺点。一方面，航空旅游费用昂贵。一般的中国人都不是很富裕，付不起昂贵的航空费用。所以他们宁愿坐火车，这样能节省很多钱。另一方面，尽管乘客们有安全保障，他们在旅途中还是会担心，因为飞行或多或少总包括一些风险。

在我看来，上述优点多于缺点。如果让我在火车和飞机之间选择,我宁愿选择前者，特别是长途旅行，因为不管我做什么，时间是我应该考虑的最重要的东西。

This is the second time for mr. brown to visit jinan. during his stay in

shandong, he will visit several schools. net week mr. brown will visit some

places. first, he will take a train to taian to climb mount tai. then he will go

to qufu by bus to visit the temple of confucius. after that, he will return to

jinan by bus. then he will fly to qingdao for a visit. there he will stay for

some days and give a talk on american english. at last he will take a plane to

go back to america from qingdao.

mr. brown comes to shandong for a visit to several schools. he is in jinan

now. this is the second time for him to come here. net week he will visit some

places. first, he wants to go to taian by train to climb mount tai. then he will

visit the temple of confucius in qufu. after he returns to jinan by bus, he will

fly to qingdao to stay there for some days. there he will give a talk on

american english. after the talk, he will fly back to america and end his visit

to china.

导入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ

After Labours drive, you finally reached his destination. If you dont want to be like the usual tourist hotel, sofa guest is also a good choice. When you are with a new identity in a new environment new step, you will be surprised to find: the original, travel and tourism is very different. The travel just to look at the scenery, is to look at themselves. In the strange place every inch of land is sending out the fresh enough to attract your attention, everyone is you never meet, meet by chance, so you will more cherish the time with them. Dont know why people always dont have much passion on their original life, perhaps because the familiar place without a view.

Such travel can not last too long, up to a month you are going to have to turn back. Is you life also need you to run; Because the time is long you will travel to voice tiredness. Because of a brief separation, go home after you will find your life and that kind of lovely forehead.

Many people like to travel, of course, I was no exception. I love to travel on a green train, roaming between different cities. As to the meaning of travel, who CARES? Happy is good.

经历过车程的劳碌，你终于到达了自己的目的地。如果不想和往常旅游一样住酒店的话，沙发客也是个不错的选择。当你以新的身份在新的环境迈出全新的一步时，你便会惊奇地发现：原来，旅行和旅游是截然不同的。旅游只是为了看看风景而已，旅行则是为了看看自己。在这个陌生的地方每一寸土地都散发着足够吸引你目光的新鲜感，每一个人都是你素未谋面、萍水相逢的，所以你更加会珍惜与他们在一起的时光。不知道为什么人们总是对自己原有的生活没有太多的激情，也许是因为熟悉的地方没有风景吧。

这样的旅行不可以持续的太久，最多一个月你就不得不返航了。一来是你原本的生活还需要你去经营;二来是日子久了你会对旅行也心声倦意。因为有过短暂的别离，回家后的你会发觉你原本的生活还是挺可爱额的。

很多人都喜欢旅行，当然我也不例外。我最爱搭乘一辆绿皮火车去旅行，游荡在不同的城市之间。至于旅行的意义嘛，谁在乎呢?自己开心就好啊。

I went to climb the Great Wall with my parents this summer vacation.I’m glad to know you’re interested in this trip.I’ll tell you as much as possible now.

The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world.It attracts thousands of tourists both at home and abroad every day.It runs across the mountains,like a dragon.

When we got there we were very excited that we began toclimbimmediately.The steps sometimes were very flat,but sometimes very steep.After two hours of climbing,we got to the top at last.I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos.I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying:He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.

If you come to China,I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of the Great Wall.

It is exciting to visit different places.As you travel,you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region.Besides,you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races.Finally,you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people.Today people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the faster growing industries in most countries.

The main reason why people travel is,perhaps,for pleasure.For example,having worked hard throughout the weekdays,people will find a widened trip to the nearby mountains or beaches a real relaxation.For another example,spending an annual holiday travelling abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much of an opportunity to be away from their homelands.When people return from their travel,they will generally feel fresh and energetic,ready to work harder.

Travelling is also one of the best means for learning.You may have read or heard about something but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself.Seeing is believing.Furthermore,if you are a careful observer,you can learn much during your travel about the geography,biology,and history of the places you visit.No matter how well educated you are,there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.The knowledge acquired from travel,as you will have found in your life,is no less valuable than that from any influential reference book.

拜访不同的地方是令人激动的。当你旅游时,你会看到美丽的风景的典型地区。除此之外,你可以满足,和不同颜色和不同种族的人交朋友。最后,您可以了解当地人民的风俗和生活习惯。今天,人们如此喜欢旅游,旅游已成为大多数国家增长最快的行业之一。

人们旅行的主要原因可能是为了乐趣。例如,整个工作日辛苦工作,人们会找到扩大前往附近的山区或海滩一个真正的放松。另一个例子,支出年度假期出国旅游是一个特别令人满意的经历对于那些没有太多的机会离开他们的祖国。当人们从他们的旅行回来的时候,他们通常会感到新鲜和精力充沛,准备努力工作。

旅游也是学习的最好方法之一。你可能读过或听说过一些,但你永远不能得到准确的照片,直到你看到它自己。眼见为实。此外,如果你是一个认真的观察者,你可以在你那里学到很多旅游地理,生物,历史的地方你的访问。无论如何你是受过良好教育,总是有很多你学习通过旅行。旅行所必须的知识,你会发现在你的生活中,没有比这更有价值的有影响力的参考书。

During National Day my parents and I went to Hong Kong in South China.It is a beautiful seaside city because there are many places of interest in it.At first we visited my cousins house.His house is quite different from mine.It is big and clean.Each room is decorated in different kinds of styles.Those made us feel excited.And then we visited Hong Kong Disneyland.It is one of the most famous theme parks in the world and includes four parks—Main Street USAFantasylandTomorrowland and Adventureland.There we did some meaningful activitiesfor examplewe took some wonderful photos with Disney characterswatched all kinds of showshad lunch in a fast food restaurant and went to buy some souvenirs in Main Street.Finallywe went to many other interesting places.In all we stayed in Hong Kong for five days.It was a really exciting trip and we all had a good time.

在国庆节，我和我的父母去了香港中国南方地区。这是一个美丽的海滨城市，有许多名胜古迹。首先我们参观了我的表弟家，他的房子和我的不同。它又大又干净。每个房间都装饰在各种不同的风格。那些让我们感到兴奋。然后我们参观了香港迪斯尼乐园，它是世界上最著名的主题公园，包括四个公园的美国小镇大街，幻想世界，明天的土地和探险。我们做了一些有意义的活动，例如，我们把迪士尼的字符的一些精彩的照片，看各种节目，有在快餐店吃午饭，去大街买点纪念品。最后，我们去了很多人R的有趣的地方。我们在香港待了五天，这真是一个令人兴奋的旅行，我们都有一个很好的时间。

随着越来越多的省市进行自主命题，开放式、半开放式作文愈加受到青睐。因为此种题型可以更准确地考查考生是否能使用英语准确表达自己的观点，充分体现了对实际解决问题的能力的考查。此类作文多为议论文性质，所以议论文的写作显得愈加重要根据议论文的特点，最好采用三段式论证法，第一段提出问题(总写)，即主题段，陈述自己的观点;第二段用论据进行正反两个方面的论证(分写)，即拓展段，摆出支撑论点的论据;第三段得出相应的结论(总写)，为总结段，总结自己的观点。类似中文里(总——分——总)的写法。这种写法可以使文章层次分明，结构清晰。

1.在议论文三段式里，首先要写好开头，好的开头是成功的一半。开头写得好，会给阅卷者留下美好的印象，有吸引力。任何一篇文章都应该做到主题鲜明，中心突出，提出论点要开门见山，紧扣题目。高考作文篇幅短小，因此开头不能冗长拖沓，务必要点题，即说清楚文章的人物、事件和作者的观点。

2.要深化中间段。中意部分是文章的主体，需要用具体的事例、细节来阐释主题句，因此中意的部分应该是具体的、详细的，不可泛泛而谈或点到即止，安需要围绕主题句的内容而展开，不能谈论与之无关的东西，即论述主题要具体而又有说服力。常用方法有：比较法、举例法、归纳法、推理法、对照法和驳论法。

3.把好结尾关，避免虎头蛇尾，使结尾缺乏力量。好的结尾会深化主题，进一步强化阅卷老师的良好印象。文章最后可以回到开头提出的中心思想上，达到再次肯定强调的效果;或者引用格言或名人名言总结全文，即言简赅又有较强的说明力;也可用几句话概括全文的内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者观点。

4.注意一些关联词的使用，使文章更连贯顺畅、条理清晰。

表因果的：as, as a result, because of, for, due to, owing to, thanks to, etc.

表意思的：in one’s opinion, have different ideas on, my idea/view is, it strikes me that, etc.

表比较的：unlike, in the same way, on the contrary, etc.

表结论的：in brief, to end/ sum up, in other words, in conclusion, in short, in summary, etc.

5.注意文章的层次和段落。

为了更好地考试中运用三段式的写作手法，考生在平时的学习中要进行严格、系统的训练，练习题材要丰富，选票质量要高，讲求写作效果，训练时要限时完成，只有严格的训练，才能确保考试中的超水平发挥。

【典例1】根据以下关键字，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

【范文】

We want to have our own time.

As we all know, today students have more and more homework. They spend their spare time doing the homework and taking lessons. Therefore, students have no time for themselves. In my opinion, students should have more time to develop themselves.

First, students should have time to relax and play. It doesn’t mean that they will waste time. They also can study and learn from playing. After doing homework for a long time, it is necessary to have some time to relax. As saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” We don’t want to dull boys. Second, we should have our own time in order to make our body strong enough. This can be helpful in our further study.

In short, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves.

专家点评：这篇范文充分体现了议论文的三段式的精髓，从以下几个方面我们可以充分感受到它和闪亮之处。

1.结构合理，富有条理性。文章分为三段。第一段简要描述了图画内容，直接点题，观点明确;第二段提出了自己的观点并列瘵出论据支撑论点;第三段简明扼要地概括了自己的观点。

2、开门见山，没有在图画上费太多笔墨，简要描述后直接引入主题：Students should have more time to develop themselves.

3、文章描述得非常清晰，有层次感，逻辑性强。段落间和句子间连贯自然，过渡巧妙。作者充分地发挥了连词及副词的功能，例如：as we all know, therefore, in my opinion, first, second, in short等。

谋篇布局

1.仔细审题，确定体裁格式，选择文章主体时态，弄清中心人称。

2.确定文章的中心论点。

3.围绕中心论点列出提纲，选好论据。

4.选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。

5.利用所列短语、句型组句成文，打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达，根据自己所掌握的词汇，在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇，使文章增色。

6.将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。

7.最后做一次全面检查，注意文章的文体、格式是否正确，要点是否全面，是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误，是否有单词摭写错误，字母大小写是不是恰当，词数是否符合要求。

Now National Day is coming. I have made a plan for it .I am going to Beijing with my parents.Because there are many places of interest .First we want to visit the Great Wall ,which is considered one of the seven wonders in the world. Second we want to visit the summer palace ,where lived many emperors during the hot days. Then we want to visit the Water Cube,where many important events are held .Finally we want to visit hutong to get a knowledge of the culture of old Beijing .I think this trip must be very interesting and we will have a good time.

国庆节要到了，我已经定了一个计划，我和我的父母去北京，因为那有很多名胜古迹。首先我们要去长城 ，它被认为是世界七大奇观之一。第二我们要参观颐和园，许多帝王避暑的地方。然后我们去水立方，很多重大的体育比赛都在那举行。最后我们要去参观胡同 去了解一下老北京的文化。我想这次旅行一定很有趣，所以我们一定会玩得很高兴。

[初中英语国庆假期旅行作文

Boracay in the Philippines, is a beautiful island, where the scenery is very beautiful, has a long white beach, the sea is very clear and different time have different color changes, so beautiful!

The first day, we sit boracay characteristics of ship - crab boat out to sea fishing and snorkeling. I hang the fish food shrimp on the hook, and then put the rope down slowly, after a while feeling slightly moving thought have fish bait, turned out to be a small fish to fish food eaten but didnt rise to the bait. Many people catch fish by it, Im in a hurry. Mom said, "dont be impatient to slowly, such as fish bait fishing." After a long while, the next to peer Lv Shushu caught a, IP, clown fish, although I didnt catch but also very happy. Snorkeling is also very fun, underwater world is very beautiful, there are a lot of fish swimming around, I seems like a small fish.

The second day early in the morning, we went to the seaside sail, sail like crab boat, but sitting place, sail is sitting on both sides of the Internet, is the feeling of freedom. Is all enough wind and sails. Call into the middle of the sea a few waves, make our clothes are wet, mother also cried. The water here is very blue, the sky is blue, there are a few white clouds float by, watching the distant sea and days like together, the harmony is such. In turn, control the sails of the sail down the familiar back again, so that the ship have turned the corner, is amazing. Mother likes to sit sails, said to play again.

Boracay island is famous for white beach and listen to the tour guide is one of the worlds seven big beach, the sand here is just as soft and fine like cotton. Unconsciously I toru castle on the beach, played for more than two hours, during which there is a Shanghai little sister church together with me. We both had a good time.

Boracay is fun, next time again!

长滩岛在菲律宾，是一个美丽的海岛，那里风景非常优美，有长长的白沙滩，海水很清并且不同时间看有不同的颜色变化，美极了!

第一天，我们坐长滩岛的特色船——螃蟹船出海钓鱼和浮潜。我把鱼食小虾挂在鱼钩上，然后把绳慢慢放下去，过了一会儿感觉有轻微动的感觉以为有鱼上钩，原来是小鱼把鱼食吃完了但没有上钩。 旁边许多人都钓到鱼了，我很着急。妈妈说，“钓鱼不要心急要慢慢的等鱼上钩。” 过了好一会儿，旁边同行的吕叔叔钓到了一条，船家说是小丑鱼，虽然我没有钓到但也很高兴。浮潜也很好玩，海底世界很漂亮，有许多的小鱼在身边游来游去，我仿佛也象小鱼一样了。

第二天一早，我们到海边玩风帆，风帆有点象螃蟹船，不过坐的地方不一样，风帆是坐在两边的网上，很自由自在的感觉。还有风帆是全部够风力的。 到了海中央几个大浪打过来，把我们的衣服弄得湿透了，妈妈还大叫起来。这里的海水很蓝，天空也很蓝，有几朵白云飘过，看远处海与天就象连起来一样，海天一色就是这样的吧。到了转弯的时候，控制船帆的人把帆落了又很熟悉的装回去，这样船就转了弯，很神奇。妈妈很喜欢坐风帆，说还要再玩一次。

长滩岛的白沙滩很出名，听导游说是世界七大沙滩之一，这里的沙就似棉花一样软和细。我在沙滩上彻城堡，不知不觉就玩了两个多小时，其间还有一个上海来的小妹妹与我一齐彻。我们两个都玩得很高兴。

长滩岛真好玩，下次还要再去!

With the rapid development of economy, the number of Chinese traveling abroad has increased enormously, which definitely benefits both China and the world.

随着经济的快速发展，中国出国旅游的数量增加了，这无疑有利于中国和世界。

In the past three years, the number of Chinese traveling abroad has kept a high growth rate. In accordance with the figures from a survey, there were about 7.5 million people traveling abroad in 1999. In the year after 1999, the number continued to rise. By 2000, it reached 10 million people. And the year 2001 saw an ever-growing number of 12.1 million people going abroad.

在过去的三年里，中国出国旅游的人数继续保持较高的增长率。根据调查的数据，大约有7500000人出国旅游的1999。在一年后的1999，数量持续上升。2000，达到10000000人。2001年度及12100000个人看到出国越来越多。

The reasons why the number of Chinese traveling abroad grows so rapidly are just as follows. First of all, after 20 years reform and opening up to the world, our economy has developed very quickly. Now Chinese have more money in their pockets than before. They can do whatever they want. Moreover, with more spare money in their hands, many Chinese would like to better the quality of their lives by going out to see different people, to hear different ideas and experience different cultures. And traveling abroad is just one way on the list to meet their demands.

为什么中国出国旅游的人数增长如此迅速，如下。首先，改革开放20年后，我们的经济发展很快。现在中国有更多的钱在他们的口袋比以前。他们可以做他们想做的事。此外，有更多的闲钱在手上，很多中国人都喜欢去看不同的人改善他们的生活质量，听到不同的想法和体验不同的文化。出国旅游是一种单上满足他们的要求。

From the above analysis, we can easily draw the conclusion that such an increase in the number of people traveling abroad is reasonable and will continue to prove on a rise.

从以上分析，我们可以很容易得出结论，在人出国旅游的人数的增加是合理的，将继续在上升的一个证明。

Travel, for everyone has a different meaning. Some travel, is to smooth some pain, some travel, is to want to breath, somebody to travel, is in order to achieve the dream. No matter what purpose, travel, represents a meaning.

In my eyes, travel is a good way to make people relax, can let you forget you in "another world" unhappy. Unpleasant, thoroughly enjoy the trip wonderful taste. In the way of travel, you can try new things youve never tried. The ancients said: "section of the rolls of line is a good book," every time travel, all will allow you to learn, read a pile of books, than go to a trip, the outside world, certainly more than recorded in the book.

"Travel makes active life, reading make thought can open", confirms this sentence reading time is equal to the travel, because travel is equal to the life. Reading is equal to the thought, no life, no thought? Anderson also said: "only in travel, can you feel that their life becomes full and vibrant". "the journey is life", on behalf of the travel is closely connected with how life. Interlocking.

Travel, represents a certain level of enjoyment, in different stages, travel represent the meaning is different also, have pleasure. Have a sentimental, but every time travel, all shows some sort of transmutation, travel is to learn, let oneself see wide increase, is also in order to find, the meaning of some kind of travel.

旅行，对每个人而言都有不同的意义。有人旅行，是为了抚平某种的伤痛，有人旅行，是为了想要透一口气，有人旅行，是为了实现梦想。不管什么目的，旅行，都代表着一个意义。

在我眼里，旅行是个让人身心放松的好方法，可以让你暂时忘却你在“另一个世界”的不开心.不愉快，彻底享受旅行中美妙的滋味。在旅行的路上，你可以尝试你从未试过的新事物。古人说：“段万卷书不如行万里路”，每回的旅行，都必定会让你有所收获，读了一堆书，不如去一趟旅行，外面的世界，肯定比书里记载的要多上更多。

“旅行使生命活跃，阅读让思虑开阔”，这句话印证了阅读次等于旅行，因为，旅行等于生命.阅读等于思虑，没了生命，何来的思虑呢?安徒生也说过：“只有在旅行中，你才觉得自己的生活变得充实而有活力”.“旅行就是生活”，代表旅行与生活是多么的密不可分.环环相扣。

旅行，代表着某种层次的享受，在不同的阶段，旅行分别代表的意义也都有所不同，有愉悦的.有感伤的，但每次的旅行，都显示了某种程度的蜕变，旅行是为了学习，让自己的见广增加，也是为了寻找，某种旅行的意义。

For most people, they will choose to travel during holiday because they

want to relieve themselves from the high pressure of work. However, it happens

quite often that people often ran into traffic jams on the way to travel. Some

people think that we can relax ourselves by traveling no matter of how many

people there.

Some people would rather to stay in home than going out to travel because

they think there are too many people swarm into the scenic spots. In my point of

view, I would rather to stay indoors rather than going out to travel. Reasons

are listed below.

In the summer holiday.Our family took a trip by plane . We come to the Chinese Capital Beijing.

Beijing is a prosperous city. It has many places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

We visited the Museum of the Imperial Palace. I saw the chinese great leader Chairman Maobody ， he is still worth every personal admiration. Then， we visited the Summer Palace， where the scenery is very beautiful. We also went to the birds nest ，there is very great. Finally ， we went to the Great Wall ，really spectacular. I hear the Great Wall is in order to defend the invasion was built here ，with many peoples blood.

Beijing trip is very meaningful . I love you beijing very much !