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364初三英语作文ThatDay-160字
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.
That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.
When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.
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篇1:初三学生英语作文
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+ 加入清单I’m a student of a university. I’m short and thin with thick glasses. I usually go to the library on weekday afternoons. I always read in the library from morning till night on Saturdays and Sundays.
There are fifteen reading rooms in the library. I like reading in the No.15 Reading Room. It is on the fifth floor. The reading room is clean and tidy. It is small but quiet. The librarian is an old woman. She is very kind to me.
One Sunday morning I saw a girl standing there when I came into the No.15 Reading Room.
She gave me a book. I was very surprised. The book which I wanted to read was in my hand! “The old librarian and I live in the same building,” said the girl. “And your teacher, Professor Li, lives next to me. You come from a small village far away. You have studied in the university for about six years. They told me all about you.”
An hour later she came back into the reading room and put a bookmark in my book. She closed the book and asked me to have a rest.
More and more young people like reading in the No. 15 Reading Room. One Friday afternoon, when I came into the reading room, I saw many people reading there. I thought I had to go to another reading room. The girl came up and told me there was a seat for me.
The book was open. There was a cup of tea beside it. The tea was hot. I asked the boy next to me, “Why don’t you drink the tea for free?”
The boy smiled. “The beautiful librarian has only two cups. One is for you, and the other is for herself. Are you clear?”
篇2:初三寒假英语日记
全文共 586 字
+ 加入清单How to get happyness 如何获得快乐
there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.
First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.
Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.
无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它,人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐,你须注意下面两点。
健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。
快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。
篇3:网络影响弊端英语作文
全文共 1154 字
+ 加入清单Corruption is another constraint welfare agencies welfare development issues. Now many people are reluctant to contribute to the welfare agency, not everyone love are gone, but we suspect that you donate more money in the end is where to go, they can successfully reach the hands of school children, those poor widows and orphans whether the elderly get everyones love. Some even suspect that the modern welfare, is the civil affairs department coffers. Some welfare organizations that there are problems, and some agency personnel took the love of money you donate food and drink to enjoy.
In addition there is a problem welfare organizations, benefits paid some units there are individuals phenomenon pocketing welfare items. For example, a unit for retired workers paid moon cake, moon cake obviously provides 5 pounds per person, but into the hands of workers has become a moon cake five per person.
Units issued beautifully boxed fruit, into the hands of the bulk of the workers became. All of these, are not conducive to the development of Chinas welfare. Therefore, we should increase attention, let welfare really implement the hands of the people.
篇4:初三年级英语作文:我的梦想
全文共 518 字
+ 加入清单My ambition is to be a teacher.Because I love the children. I want to stay with then. Then I feel happy and young. And the most important thing is I can teach them many thing. I will tell them love is very important. I will try to love others around you. Then others will be friendly to you.The world will be more and more interesting.Do you think so?
To make the goal ,come true,I will study hard.
我的梦想是成为一名教师。因为我喜欢孩子们。我想留在那。然后我感到快乐和年轻。最重要的是,我可以教他们许多事情。我将告诉他们爱是非常重要的。我将试着去爱周围的人。然后别人会对你友好。世界将变得越来越有趣。你这样认为吗?
目标,成真,我要努力学习。
篇5:DoWeNeedSpaceExploration初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单Man has been fascinated by outer space for thousands of years, It has been almost over forty years since man s first landing on the moon. Now, some people believe that space exploration is a sheer waste of time and money. They point out the thct that it cost billions of dollars to can3 on the space research, but a little infrmation was brought back. In addition, the time and money spent on space exploration is too much to calculate.
However, every coin has two sides. There are still a majority of other people who believe that space exploration has more advantages. And I agree with those people. Many new products, such as weather and communication satellites, are also products of space programs, and they have benefitted people all over the world. And what s more. scientific knowledge about outer space has been acquired by the mankind.
We benefited a lot from space exploration. We believed that it will bring more benefits in the future, which perhaps we can not even imagine now. Space exploration is a challenge to human beings. That s why several nations try hard to carry out space exploration continuously.
篇6:2024初三年级英语作文带翻译:我的暑假
全文共 3127 字
+ 加入清单This summer vacation, because mom and dad to go to work, as usual, I go home, because I am more introverted personality, mom feel to give me a cake, it make me increase the chance of meeting people, learning some knowledge, summer holidays are still let me really let me a headache.
One day, grandma and grandpa took me to mother in advance to contact me good golden microphone host computer classes, I will be here on my summer vacation the first lesson. After go in, I saw one man sat on a small wooden bench, I cant help but think: this is the nursery? Havent I how this group of children. I wanted to think, and then found a small wooden bench to sit down, and the bench is too small to bearing force is insufficient, plus I chubby, bench almost to be overwhelmed. "Jingle bell" finally class, the teacher told us the stance of the host, how to vividly to introduce myself, at this point, Ive just had a little bit on the cram school. But the age difference with other classmates or embarrassing me. At the end of the first class, the teacher also let the parents in auditing students introduce themselves. Well, I will be like the little avoid performance which in turn, I cant help but feel very hurt. When I played seriously, the audience a group of parents might see me with other children age difference, could not help but laugh, suddenly, a thick hate to my heart, I hate this interest class, hate with this group of children, also hate these parents laugh. Mother after listening to my protest, afraid that her child is too small I cant adapt to, and teachers coordinate pulled out of the cake course.
Left the golden microphone host interest after work, I on to the second class interest class - the international phonetic alphabet. In after I am very surprised, because this is big and my age children in the class. Finds a seat, I also see the teacher, "wow, too good, is Mr Zhu", I used to English class is on her, my heart secretly pleased. A tall, thin boy became my deskmate, my deskmate also chatted with me, we talk about the game, chat to play, a lot of common language, therefore became good friends. I like go to class every day, has a strong interest on British standard, tested after the training for us, I also did very well in the last exam.
I think will do this summer vacation interest class, age, there are many students can chat, to both the interest and learn knowledge.
今年暑假,因为爸爸妈妈要上班,我照例回老家过,由于我性格较内向,妈妈觉得要给我报一个兴趣班,说是让我增加与人交往机会,学习一些知识,暑假还让我上课真令我头疼。
这天,爷爷奶奶带着我来到妈妈事先给我联系好的 “金话筒主持人”兴趣班,我将在这里上我的暑假第一课。进去后,只见一个个小人坐在小板凳上,我不禁心想:这是托儿所吗?怎么这群孩子都没我大。我想了想,随即找了个小板凳坐了下来,可板凳太小了承重力不足,加上我偏胖,板凳几乎要被压垮。“叮铃铃”终于上课了,老师给我们讲了主持人的站姿,如何生动地进行自我介绍,此时,我才对这个补习班产生了一丝丝好感。但是与其他同学年龄的差异还是令我尴尬。第一节课快结束时,老师又让家长们进来旁听同学们的自我介绍。唉,我要与这群小不点轮流表演,我不禁感到十分排拆。当我认真表演完了,台下一群家长可能看到我与其他小孩的年龄差异,禁不住大笑,顿时,一股浓浓的恨意在我心头产生,我讨厌这个兴趣班,讨厌和这群小孩一起,也讨厌这些家长们的笑声。妈妈听我抗议后,怕同班小孩太小我不能适应,和老师协调退出了这个兴趣班。
离开了“金话筒主持人”兴趣班后,我又马不停蹄的来到了第二个兴趣班——国际音标班。进去之后我十分惊喜,因为这个班里都是和我年龄差不多大的孩子。我找了个位子坐下,再看看老师,“哇,太好了,是朱老师”,我以前英语辅导班就是在她那上的,我心中窃喜。一个又高又瘦的男孩成了我的同桌,我同桌也和我聊了聊,我们聊游戏,聊打球,共同语言很多,因此成了好朋友。我每天很喜欢去上课,对英标产生了浓厚的兴趣,培训结束后对我们进行了测试,我还考出了优异的成绩。
我觉得暑假兴趣班就要这样,大家年龄差不多,有许多可以聊的同学,才能既有兴趣,又学到知识。
篇7:暑假计划初三英语作文
全文共 707 字
+ 加入清单Summer holiday plan
Summer holiday is coming. How excited! I havemade a plan for my summer holiday. First of all, I will go to Hong Kong tovisit my aunt. And then I will stay with her for a while. As Hong Kong is the shoppingparadise, of course, I will ask my aunt to go shopping with me . I will also eatthe delicious food there. And then I will go home. I know that study comesfirst. So I will finish my homework first. After that I will go out play withmy friends. And then I will take a good rest to prepare for my coming back toschool.
暑假即将来临。多么的兴奋啊!我已经为我的暑假制定了计划。首先,我会去香港拜访我的婶婶。之后我会和她呆一段时间。因为香港是购物天堂,当然我会叫我婶婶陪我一起去购物。我还要吃那里美味的食物。然后我就会回家。我知道学习是最重要的。所以回去之后我会先完成我的暑假作业。之后我就会和我的朋友出去玩。再之后我就会好好的休息来为回校做好准备。
篇8:初三英语作文OurHouse
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+ 加入清单I have a beautiful house. my parents and i live in our house now. it is near the lake. we all like our house. we are very happy.
our house is not very big, but i think it is very good. look! here is the door. it is open. let us go and visit our house.
welcome to our house. there are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a large sitting room in our house. let us look at my small room first. there is a bookcase in my room. there are many books in the bookcase. on the right of the bookcase, there is a bed. there is a doll and some clothes on the bed. there are a lot of posters on the wall. near the bookcase, there is a desk. i study at it every day. on the desk, there is a computer. i often play computer games on it. there are two lamps and a clock in my small room, too.
look at our parents’ room, there is a tv and a sofa. there is a big bed in it, too. there are lots of pictures and two lamps on the wall.
then look at our sitting room, there is a tv and two sofas in it. there are two tables and chairs in the sitting room, too.
we like our house very much. do you like it?
篇9:写长城的英语作文初三80词
全文共 800 字
+ 加入清单What impresses me most in Beijing is the Great Wall which is one of the
greatest projects in the world.
Its not only the cultural heritage, but also a symbol of China. "Its
glorious." I think. It looks like a big dragon running across the mountainous
area. It starts Shanhaiguan in the east to Jiayuguan in the west.Its so long that nobody can walk from the beginning to the end.It was firstly built in Qin Dynasty and prolonged in Ming and Qing
dynasties.It was used to protect the enemies from invading in the past, but now it
has become the place of interest which attracts so many tourists both at home
and abroad.
When I was standing on the top of the Great Wall, I felt as if I were in
ancient days.
I could see many laborers working very hard. How could they finish this
extremely difficult task by hand?
篇10:初三英语作文:IntroductiontoHillaryClinton
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+ 加入清单Hillary Clinton comes from America. She was bon on October 26th ,1947 in Chicago. She is very beautiful , she has blonde hair and blue eyes. Hillary Clinton studied law at Yale Law School from 1969 to 1973 . She worked very hard and got good grades. Then she worked as a lawyer , but now she works for the American government . Some people think that she is wise and helpul.
Hillary Clinton’s husband is Bill Clinton . She has a daughter called Chelsea Clinton . They love Hillary Clinton very much .
篇11:2024初三寒假英语复习计划作文
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+ 加入清单紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说,距中考还有短短的几个月,寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里,怎样制定复习计划,怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?
通过这学期的几次月考,发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题,针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。
1、单词掌握得不错,却不会在填单词的句子中运用,失分很多。
2、能记住重点句型,但不会灵活变换句式。
3、了解语法,却不会做时态填空。
4、能读懂短文,却做不对选项。
5、知道如何写作文,却在写作时漏洞百出。
6、选择填空马马虎虎。
7、听力很差,失分很高,尤其是分析题。
所以,针对存在的问题,为避免以后重现类似错误,为复习考试奠定一个好的基础,特做计划如下:
1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍,锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期,肯定有收获。
2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文,写上一篇类似的作文,用上里边的好词好句,对于连词成句部分,不妨每天写上5个连词成句,摸索里边的规律,在做这个题的时候,先看看里边有什么词组,什么句型,这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了,集中练上一段时间会有提高的。
3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大,所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案,对做错的题分析原因,对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来,有必要的要背过,以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外,要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。
4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况,同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍,把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书,把书吃透了,里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上,经常看看巩固巩固。
5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少,在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章,短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会,可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆,每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题,学会灵活运用。
6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题,在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题,做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定,风格相对一致,做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”,明确复习方向,最后找出自己的不足之处,作为下一次的努力目标。
篇12:游长城初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.
We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how’ we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed.
It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.
篇13:2024初三英语作文:友情Friendship
全文共 1221 字
+ 加入清单There are various emotions in the world.People need valuable emotions which can support them both in mind and in life.Friendshipis one of the most vital emotions.世上有很多不同的情感。人们需要宝贵的、在思想和生活上支持他们的感情。友情是其中一种很重要的情感。
It is not easy to deal with friendship.As for friendship, sometimes you and your friend may meet difficulties.Trust is the most remarkable trait of forever friendship.Trust plays a very important role in daily communication.As the saying goes, “Between friends all is common.” Furthermore, tolerance is also a considerable factor in remaining good friendship.If your friend makes a mistake accidentally, you should have largeness of mind.Friendship is too precious.When we face some misunderstandings, we need to make joint efforts to protect our friendship.We should not give up friendship at random.We should treat our friends as treasures.维持友谊并不容易。在友谊方面,有时候你和你的朋友都可能会遇到一些困难。信任是友谊地久天长最显著的一个特点。信任在日常交流中起着非常重要的作用。俗话说,“朋友之间不分彼此。”此外,宽容也是维持良好友谊的重要因素。如果你的朋友不小心犯了错误,你应该要有博大的胸怀。友谊是很珍贵的。当我们面对一些误会的时候,我们需要共同努力来保护我们的友谊。我们不应该轻易地放弃友谊。我们应该珍惜我们的朋友。
Friendship is so pure, clear and beautiful.We cannot be lack of friendship in our life.Try our best to insist our trust in making friends.友谊是纯洁、美丽。我们的生活中不能缺少友谊。在交朋友的时候要尽量坚持信任。
篇14:初三关于春节的英语作文带翻译
全文共 1997 字
+ 加入清单The Spring Festival is a Chinese festival. It has a long history and splendid culture. And the Spring Festival many small rules superstition is that the man.
Everyone should know the Spring Festival is one of important thing is - is available. You dont look down upon this thing it is to have cultured. Able to use fruit cannot careless, for example, not all fruits are fit to worship ancestors and gods. To choose a good fruit. Such as: apple, go in peace, oranges, kumquat oh, oranges - horse. Like a pear, can not as a tribute because there are some who think the pear and "from" are homophones ghost word. So is not popular. There is a banana -. So some fruit can not be available.
Fruit is only part of the tribute and dumplings as a tribute must put cant alone in pairs. Put the sugar when it as a tribute for hard candy cant fudge. Because such sweet hard enough will not spread.
Able to have the red candle, touch paper, incense, and so on, but the most important thing is that touch paper, touch paper had been pressed to be real money to burn, and the head of the press, which may be felt more sincere.
Whether these are real or fake, but at least be ancestors had relished the reason why there must be it. The little common sense in the hope that the Spring Festival can let more after 80, 90 after they know the Spring Festival in our Chinese mind how important. If no taboo Spring Festival also means there is no so many people pay attention to it. Rules more can reflect the significance of the Spring Festival.
春节是中国人的重大节日。它有着悠久的历史和灿烂的文化底蕴。而春节的许多小规矩小迷信也那么那人探寻。
大家都应该知道春节很重要的一件事情就是——上供。大家可别小看了这件事情这可是有讲究的。例如,上供用的水果不能马虎,不是所有的水果都适合去供奉祖先和神灵的。要选着寓意好的水果。例如:苹果——平平安安,桔子——金桔满堂,橙子——心想事成。像梨,就不可以作为贡品因为有一部分人认为梨和“离”是同音别字。所以不受大家欢迎。还有就是香蕉——焦头烂额。所以有些水果不能上供。
水果只是一部分贡品还有就是饺子作为贡品一定要成双成对的放不能落单。把糖作为贡品上供的时候要放硬糖不能放软糖。因为这样的甜蜜够硬不会散。
上供还要有红烛,火纸,佛香等等,不过最重要的是火纸,火纸要被真钱压过才可以烧,而且要一家之主压,这可能是觉得更加真诚吧。
不管这些是真是假,但至少被老祖宗们津津乐道就一定有它的原因。希望这些春节中的小常识可以让更多的80后,90后们知道春节在我们中国人心目中有多么的举足轻重。如果春节没有任何禁忌那么也就代表没有那么多人关注它。规矩越多越能体现春节的重大意义。
篇15:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选
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+ 加入清单导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
写作技巧:
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
篇16:初三英语日记中英版:我的功课
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+ 加入清单July 14 2014
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
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2014年7月14日
这是我们的暑季假期的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我自由了。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在北京。所以,我独自生活,但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦!我写了一份英文报章组成。这是我的功课。今天,我睡了14个小时。我以为我很疲惫。这是吃晚饭的时间。我必须去!我饿极了。
篇17:初三关于五一劳动节英语作文LaborsDay
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+ 加入清单This years "51" holiday, I am in Singapore and Malaysia. The view of the Singapore and Malaysia are very good-looking, but the most memorable to my one night in Singapore. In the evening, I in st tauscha park, watched a wonderful music fountain performance.
Everyone knows the merlion in Singapore? The merlion is the sign of Singapore, a total of three the merlion sculpture; This a few the merlion is made up of the head and body. They have one in the center of Singapore; One of the highest mountain in Singapore, There is a holy tauscha in Singapore. One of the most beautiful, the most memorable to me or st tauscha the merlion.
On May 5, in the evening, we came to the st tauscha park early, viewing the merlion, here also here waiting for the beginning of the music fountain performance. Waiting for a period of time, the performance finally started. First appeared as a "clown", baton in his hand, like a conductor. Ah, really right, he is the conductor of the music fountain performance. He shook her hand, water fountain followed his hand type; If his two hands are moving, all the fountains of water together, color of light on the fountains, colorful water column, is really fantastic!
Music in the music fountain performance when high low, fast when slow; Sometimes is the rhythm of the pop songs, sometimes is a classic old songs tone, its good to listen! Fountain with this beautiful dance music.
"Wow," at this time, there was a surprise, the original is the water curtain movie started. Since I was young until now I have never seen the water curtain movie, this is my first time to see! Water curtain movie is sprayed water imaging a screen, and then put the animation projection, this is called the water curtain movie. The water curtain movie the main character is a naughty again, lovely little monkey, called "keykey", it would invite the conductor "clown" to play with it, that is, water curtain is appeared in the movie "clown" conductor, is really amazing! I know its projection, but why really was splashing water? Hey, dont understand...
Time so unknowingly passed, and the wonderful performances in a wonderful, wonderful music has come to an end. Although the music fountain performance time is very short, only 25 minutes, but it left a deep impression on me.
The evening let me very unforgettable, it is very memorable for me, because this is my first time to travel abroad, and in the new horse tourism, one of the most happy night was my first time in this beautiful night watching the water curtain movie Ive never seen since birth!
今年的“五一”假期,我是在新加坡和马来西亚度过的。新加坡和马来西亚的景色虽然都非常的好看,但令我最难忘的还是在新加坡的一个晚上。在这个晚上,我在圣陶沙公园,观看了一场精彩的音乐喷泉表演。
大家是不是都知道新加坡的鱼尾狮?鱼尾狮是新加坡的标志,一共有三座鱼尾狮雕塑;这几座鱼尾狮都是由狮头和鱼身组成的。它们有一个在新加坡的市中心;有一个在新加坡最高的山上;还有一个在新加坡的圣陶沙。其中最好看、最令我难忘的还是圣陶沙的那座鱼尾狮。
5月5日的晚上,我们早早地就来到了圣陶沙公园,观赏这里的鱼尾狮,也在这里等候着音乐喷泉演出的开始。等了一段时间,演出终于开始了。首先出场的是一位“小丑”,他手拿指挥棒,很像一位指挥家。哎,还真没说错,他就是这场音乐喷泉演出的指挥家。他的手一摇,喷泉就跟着他的手型喷水;要是他两只手都在动,所有的喷泉都一起喷水,彩色的灯光照在喷泉上,五颜六色的水柱,真是好看极了!
在这场音乐喷泉演出里,音乐时高时低,时快时慢;有时是流行歌曲的节奏,有时是经典的古老歌曲的声调,真是好听极了!喷泉也随着这动听的音乐翩翩起舞了。
“哇”,此时,全场传来一阵惊讶声,原来是水幕电影开始了。我从小一直到现在从来没有看过水幕电影,这还是我第一次看呢!水幕电影就是把水喷成像一块屏幕,然后再把动画投影上去,这就叫水幕电影了。这场水幕电影里的主要人物是一只又淘气,又可爱的小猴子,叫“keykey”,它欢蹦乱跳的邀请了“小丑指挥家”去跟它一起玩,没想到的是,水幕电影里还真出现了“小丑指挥家”的样子,真是太神奇了!我知道是投影的,但是水为什么真的被溅起了呢?哎,搞不懂……
时间就这样不知不觉的过去了,这场精彩的演出在美妙、动听的音乐声中结束了。虽然这场音乐喷泉的表演时间很短,只有25分钟,但却给我留下了深刻的印象。
这个晚上让我非常难忘,它对我来说是非常的具有纪念意义,因为这是我第一次出国旅游,也是在这次新马旅游中过得最开心的一个晚上,还是我第一次在这美好的夜晚观看我出生以来从来没看过的水幕电影!
篇18:初三关于朋友的英语作文精编
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+ 加入清单The computer and I are good friends, I know its character, understand the language, and often "talk" with it.
"Faithfulness" computer it is my most friends. My brain to it into a program, it will do as my instruction.
Computer it on my small teacher. Mother let me learn English, I let it to teach me, I sometimes do wrong topic, regardless of the friends of love, it made a "X", let me redo, I helplessly obey its orders.
Computer is my happy fruit. Once, I let the computer to help me to find a small game, look! Game started, is life do eggs Fried rice in the game, I Fried Fried, somehow, is over, had guest holding your nose to eat, pay only 1 yuan money, is really piss me off, make persistent efforts... The computer gave me endless fun!
Computer is my bosom friend, it will accompany my whole life! It is also my best friend forever, I not only on the computer in many friends, also let my grades have improved a lot.
Computer ah, my good friend!
我和电脑是好朋友,我知道它的性格,懂得它的语言,而且常常和它“交谈”。
电脑它是我最“忠实”的朋友。我给它的大脑里输进一个程序,它就会按照我的指令去做。
电脑它上我的小老师。妈妈让我学英语,我就让它来教我,我有时做错了题目,它不顾朋友之情,打了个“X”,再让我重做,我无可奈何地服从了它的命令。
电脑也是我的开心果。有一次,我让电脑帮我找一些小游戏,瞧!游戏开始了,是生活篇里的做蛋炒饭的游戏,我炒啊炒,不知怎的,就炒糊了,害得客人捏着鼻子才吃完,工钱只有1元钱,真是气死我了,再接再厉啊……电脑给了我无穷的乐趣!
电脑真是我的知心朋友,它将陪伴我的一生一世!它也是我永远的最好的朋友,我不仅在电脑上交了许多朋友,还让我的学习成绩提高了许多。
电脑啊电脑,我的好朋友!
篇19:志愿者的初三英语
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+ 加入清单假如你是张亚,参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括:张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右,注意书信格式。
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.
Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.
I think it’s fantastic to be a volunteer.
What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!
篇20:初三英语作文:绿色食品GreenFood
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+ 加入清单As more and more people focus on health diet,green food has begun to draw more and more attention by the public.In recent years,the market demand for green food has increased dramatically,and all kinds of green food have emerged in an endless stream.Why does green food become so popular in China?Above all,compared with ordinary food,green food is healthier,safer and more nutritious.Moreover,nowadays,many vegetables are polluted because of the usage of agricultural chemicals,while green food is free of pollution.Besides,with the improvement of the living standards,more people can afford a healthier but more expensive lifestyle.So green food,despite its higher price,still becomes peoples favorite food.
However,nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food,making many consumers confused.Therefore,the government must strengthen the supervision and administration of green food market.Besides,consumers should increase the knowledge of green food.Only in this way can green food play a more positive role in peoples life.
随着越来越多的人关注健康饮食,绿色食品已经开始吸引越来越多的公众关注。近年来,市场对绿色食品的需求急剧增加,并出现了各种各样的绿色食品在无穷无尽。为什么在中国绿色食品变得如此受欢迎?最重要的是,与普通食品相比,绿色食品更健康、更安全、更有营养。此外,如今,许多蔬菜污染由于农用化学品的使用,而绿色食品没有污染。此外,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的人能买得起一个更健康更昂贵的生活方式。所以绿色食品,尽管其更高的价格,还成为人们最喜欢的食物。
然而,如今的市场充满真实和假的绿色食品,使许多消费者感到困惑。因此,政府必须加强绿色食品市场的监督管理。此外,消费者应该提高绿色食品的知识。只有这样才能绿色食品在人们的生活中发挥更积极的作用。