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盘点初三英语作文:MyChineseTeacher

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Hello, everyone! Today Ill tell you about my Chinese teacher.

Zhu Jingyan is my Chinese teacher. She is tall and beautiful. She has big eyes and long hair. Look, she is wearing a red dress today. The dress fits her very well. She is reading a book now. She is reading very carefully.

All of us love her very much. Why? Because she is very friendly and lovely. We are good friends. We often chat and play games with her. We often have a great time. Sometimes we dislike her, because she is angry. We are very afraid, so we dont make any noise.

My Chinese teacher is a good teacher. She works hard and she knows many things. When we answer her questions, she always listens to me carefully with a smile on her face. In her class, we often learn many things, so we like the Chinese lessons very much.

[盘点初三英语作文:My Chinese Teacher

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篇1:初三优秀英语作文:ASadStory

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A Sad Story

Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldnt accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.

Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher. He was full of sense of humour. We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching. His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class. He was an experienced teacher.

Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!

[初三优秀英语作文:A Sad Story

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篇2:初三年级英语作文:Save water

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Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it?

A poem:

Water has no taste at all.

Water has no color.

Water’s in the waterfall.

The pump.

The tap.

The well.

Water is everywhere around us.

Water is in the rain.

In the stream.

In the pond.

And in the river.

And in the sea again.

There isn’t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.

It is very valuable.

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篇3:低碳生活初三英语作文

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It’s our duty to save the environment.

On June 5th, I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they go shopping. And I will turn off the lights before leaving the room.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

译文

拯救环境是我们的责任。

在6月5日,我将骑自行车或步行去上学,而不是乘公共汽车。我也会要求我的父母骑自行车上班的那一天。在家里,我们将使用节能灯,花更少的时间,当我们洗澡。不要把旧课本扔掉,交给低年级的学生。在同一时间,我会告诉我的父母采取袋时,他们去购物。离开房间前我会关灯。

低碳生活。让我们采取行动。

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篇4:初三年级英语作文:兼职工作

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I am a middle school student. I am active. I like going out to play.

Recently, I am fond of skating. I want a pair of skating shoes, but my mother doesn’t allow, because she worries about me to be hurt in playing. So, I want to find a part-time job to earn money to buy a pair of skating shoes. I am always free at weekends. During the weekday, I think I can’t have spare to work. I am tough and I am willing to do everything I can do.

Anyone has the information about part-time job, please recommend to me.

我是一名中学生。我很活泼开朗。我喜欢出去玩。

最近,我迷上了溜冰。我想要一双溜冰鞋,可是我妈妈不允许,因为她担心我会受伤。所以,我想找份兼职来挣钱买一双滑冰鞋。周末我一般都是有空的。星期一到星期五,我觉得我没有多余的时间工作。我很能吃苦耐劳的,而且我愿意做我能做的任何工作。

谁有关于兼职的信息,请向我推荐一下。

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篇5:节约用水的初三英语作文

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As we all know water plays an important part in peoples daily lives. More and more water is needed in the modern society. So we should try to save it.

Now many places are short of water. For example, a big drought hit the Southwest of China at the beginning of this year. especially Yunnan province, milions of people has not got enough water for common life. A lot of rivers and lakes are polluted. Whats worse, many people are wasting water seriously.

In order to protect water, lets do something to fight against all kinds of pollution and waste of water.

我们都知道,在人们日常生活中,扮演重要的角色。现代生活中,我们需要越来越多的水,所以我们应该保护它。

现在很多地方缺水,今年年初在中国西南部就发生严重的干旱,特别是云南地区,数以万计的人们没有充足的水资源供日常使用。很多河流湖泊被污染,更严重的是,人们对水浪费严重。

为了保护水资源,让我们付出行动抵制水污染和浪费的行为吧。

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篇6:初三英语作文:美丽的心灵

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导语:也许我们不可以改变自己的容貌,但我们的心灵可以提升,我们的心灵在受到一次次洗礼当中醒悟、净化……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Today, I saw an very interesting movie. The story was about a boy met a girl who lived next to him since he was very small. The girl was so active and the boy was very shy. The boy was scared by the girl’s passion. When they were middle school students, the boy tried to get rid of the girl, but the boy started to realize the girl was very special. Though she was not as beautiful as the girl he once liked at school, he was attracted by her feature. The girl had a beautiful soul. She was not skin-deep and she has her own thinking. The boy realized that she was the best.

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今天,我看了一部非常有趣的电影。这个故事是关于一个男孩在他很小的时候就遇到一个住在他隔壁的女孩。女孩非常活跃活泼,而男孩却很害羞。男孩被女孩的热情给吓着了。当他们上初中时,男孩试图摆脱这个女孩,不过他也开始慢慢意识到这个女孩是非常特别的。虽然她没有他在学校曾经喜欢过的那个女孩子那么漂亮,但是他被她的性格所吸引。这个女孩有着美丽的心灵,一点都不肤浅。她有自己的想法。男孩发现这个女孩才是最好的。

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篇7:初三关于学习的英语作文

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Most Chinese students have difficulties in learning English. The difficulties vary so much from person to person that it is difficult to cite here in a few words. Some may have problems in reading. Others may have trouble in writing. I also had problems in English learning, but my difficulty seemed to lie in listening. For example, when tested for listening comprehension, I couldnt understand a single sentence, let alone a passage of medium level.

In order to overcome the difficulty in my English learning, I made great efforts to find the key to the problem. I consulted my teacher and found out that I merely didnt have enough time to practice listening. So I bought a tape recorder and listened to it at least two hours a day. In addition, I listened to "Special English" on VOA. I also went out of my way to speak to foreigners on the campus whenever we meet so that I could have the chance to listen to the native speakers. After half a years hard work, I could get 70% of the questions correct in listening comprehension tests.

I own my success to my English teacher. It is him who tells me the correct way to learn English. It is him who always encourages me when I encounter difficulties and feel disappointed.

大多数中国学生在学习英语方面有困难。人与人之间的困难出现如此大的差异,很难在这里引用几句话。可能有一些问题在阅读。其他人可能有困难。我学习英语也有问题,但我的困难似乎躺在听。例如,当听力测试,我无法理解一个句子,更不用说一段中等水平。

为了克服困难在我的英语学习,我努力找到问题的关键。我咨询我的老师发现我只是没有足够的时间来练习听力。所以我买了一个录音机,听了一天至少两个小时。另外,我听美国之音特别英语”。我也出去和外国人说话校园时我们见面,这样我就可以有机会听母语。经过半年的努力,我可以得到70%的问题正确的听力测试。

我拥有我的成功归功于我的英语老师。这是他告诉我学英语的正确方法。他总是鼓励我当我遇到困难,感到失望。

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篇8:写长城的英语作文初三80词

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What impresses me most in Beijing is the Great Wall which is one of the

greatest projects in the world.

Its not only the cultural heritage, but also a symbol of China. "Its

glorious." I think. It looks like a big dragon running across the mountainous

area. It starts Shanhaiguan in the east to Jiayuguan in the west.Its so long that nobody can walk from the beginning to the end.It was firstly built in Qin Dynasty and prolonged in Ming and Qing

dynasties.It was used to protect the enemies from invading in the past, but now it

has become the place of interest which attracts so many tourists both at home

and abroad.

When I was standing on the top of the Great Wall, I felt as if I were in

ancient days.

I could see many laborers working very hard. How could they finish this

extremely difficult task by hand?

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篇9:初三的英语作文:TheMoonFestival

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The Moon Festival is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It is one of the traditional Chinese Festivals.

On that day, the Chinese usually have a special family dinner. Each member of the family, even from far away, will go back home to have the dinner. During the dinner, they eat a lot of delicious food, watch TV programmes and chat about everything happily. They also eat moon cakes.an important kind of food of the Moon Festival. Moon cakes are always round like the moon. There is bean paste, egg-yolk, ice cream or some other nice fruits or food in them.

After the dinner, all the family members go out and enjoy the moon and the moonlight. They talk about the stories about the moon and laugh a lot.

They say there is a fairy maiden named Chang E with her rabbit and a sweet osmanthus tree on the moon. Is that true? It is just a legend. But the legend is so wonderful that we would rather believe it, right?

[初三英语作文:The Moon Festival

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篇10:光盘行动初三英语Clearupourplates

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Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about "clear up our plates". In our sholl, we have lunch in the dinning hall every day. We usually can see that some students dont eat up their food in the plates. Why? Because they take much more food than they need or the food isnt delicious. I think its very bad because that is a very big of waste food. In this month, our school asks us to clear up our plates. Everyone should eat up our food and say no to wasting. If we all follow the rules, the school will be better and better.

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篇11:以AFriendofMine为题目的初三英语作文

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A Friend of Mine

I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He comes from Beijing.

Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.

We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made GREat proGREss in our studies.

We have made up our minds to study harder and win still GREater success in our studies.

[以A Friend of Mine为题目初三英语作文

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篇12:初三英语作文范文-我的朋友myfriend

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3-18岁纯英式素质教育领航者:纯英式资深外教,纯英式国际领先教材,纯英式学习环境!

优尼全能英语初三英语作文范文-我的朋友my

friend

my friend

每个人都有自己的朋友,请把你最要好或最特殊的朋友介绍给大家。词汇:

1. n. friends, parents, teachers, classmates, family, school, relatives , happiness, sadness, generation gap, feelings, friendship, communication, teamwork

2. v. make friends, understand encourage take good care of,expect, get on well with, play together, smile, trouble, talk with, quarrel with, help each other, discuss, argue, do well in enjoy oneself

3. adj. happy, sad, important, lonely , helpful, necessary

句式

1. i hope we can understand each other.

2. it’s necessary to understand each other.

3. no one can be successful only by himself.

4. there are some sayings, “friendship is sunlight in the dark.” “if there were no friendships in a city, it would become a desert.”

5. although we sometimes quarrel with each other, yet we get on well later.6. we should get on well with everyone around us.

7. the more friends you get, the happier you will be.

8. a friend can not only help you, but also bring you happiness.

9. everybody needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

10. don’t argue, but discuss.

11. people who refuse to consider others have few friends.

12. we need to learn how to take care of other people.

13. “a friend in need is a friend indeed.”

范文

my best friend

i have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. he is my father. my father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. he usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. at weekends he plays chess, cards with me. when i am in trouble. he always help me in time. i prefer my father to any other friend. i think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. i love my father very much.

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篇13:初三英语作文带翻译:我的朋友

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A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生,有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友,将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了,和我俩个好友的交往也会少了,所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧:一晃俩年过去了,我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初,你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清,你时常问我,我也耐心的告诉你,就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过,一起哭过,吵过架生过气,还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴,我永远也不回忘记。

易媱:在我的印象中你的脾气很好,也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉,我就会跑过去捏你的脸,你总是温柔的一笑,这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴,没有朋友就没有今天的我,真的感谢朋友分支持,也许我们会分开,但是缘分。

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篇14:初三学生英语自我介绍

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Hello, Everybody! I am very glad to stand here to give you my introduction. I am from Liangbing Middle School. I am studying in Class 1,Grade 7. I love my hometown Liangbing because it’s a very beautiful town.

I have many hobbies, such as reading books, listening to music, surfing the Internet and traveling. But listening to music is my favorite. I like pop music best. My idol are Jay. I am a lively girl. I like making friends and chatting with them. I can play the Chinese Kungfu. I passed all ten levels when I was in Grade 5.However, because of the busy study, I don’t have any free time to practise it. What a pity!I am good at Math and English and I like English better. In my opinion, it’s very easy and fun to learn and use English and this contest is a great chance for me to learn English from others. My saying is god help those who help themselves and I will never give up during my course of learning.

Now, after listening to my introduction, do you know me well?

That’s all. Thank you!

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篇15:关于OurDreamsOfLife的初三英语作文

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初三英语作文:Our Dreams Of Life

As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.

We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.

But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!

[关于Our Dreams Of Life的初三英语作文

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篇16:初三关于爱的英语作文带翻译

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Parents gave me life in this world,I love the most is them.

Expressing of loving parents do not need to pass a language that I love them.Whatever we can do some little things.In the Fathers Day or Mothers Day,we can prepare a delicious breakfast for them.We can remember their birthdays.In their birthdays,we dont need to buy gifts,but have to say happy birthday.

When parents come home from work,we can hand them a cup of hot water to make them relax.We can help parents to share some of the housework,so that they have more time to rest.As part of the family,we should take active to do housework.If we read out,we should always contact them,tell them recent things of our own.Let them not worry about us.

It is known to all our parents love is priceless,is not asking for anything.We should love them in return. But,parents can be very simple love.As long as the life of more concern to them,for them to have been very satisfied.Just do it.

父母给了我生命在这个世界上,我最喜欢他们。

表达爱的父母不需要通过语言,我爱他们。我们可以做一些小事。在父亲节或母亲节,我们可以为他们准备一份美味的早餐。我们可以记住他们的生日。在他们的生日,我们不需要买礼物,但不得不说生日快乐。

当父母下班回家时,我们可以把他们一杯热水让他们放松。我们可以帮助父母分担一些家务,这样他们有更多的时间休息。作为家庭的一部分,我们应该积极做家务。如果我们读了,我们应该联系他们,告诉他们最近自己的事情。让他们不要为我们担心。

众所周知我们的父母爱是无价的,不要求任何东西。我们应该爱他们的回报。但是,父母可以非常简单的爱。只要更多的关注他们的生活,他们非常满意。说做就做。

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篇17:2024年初三英语作文:假期计划

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The summer holiday is approaching. Our class have had a heat discussion about what to do during the vocation.

Some agree to staying at home. They think it’s convenient and comfortable. What’s better, they can save some money for some other purposes. But they will lose a chance to get to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for travelingbecause it can increase their knowledge and broaden their views. But it will take them more money and meet some more difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

暑假即将来临。我们班有一个讨论热放假期间该做什么。

一些同意待在家里。他们认为这是方便和舒适。更好的是,他们可以节省一些钱用于其他目的。但是他们可能会失去一个机会去了解外面的世界。然而,另一些人喜欢出去旅游,因为它可以增加他们的知识和拓宽自己的视野。但需要更多的钱,旅行时遇到一些困难。

在我看来,这将是更好的呆在家里,因为我可以做我想做的事,如读书、看电视,并帮助我的父母做家务。

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篇18:初三关于微博的英语作文

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The girl is not my hobbies, even rarely play games online. However, Im weibo, there have been a fan for nearly two hundred people, but a lot of people envy.

On Saturday night, as usual, I open the weibo, find incredibly direct messages was written to me! May be I take "I to help you" the net, people often ask me for help, but I was the first received the letter! I am open on see, what is this:

"I was in primary school grade three, three years has always been the same deskmate, recently he always affect me, because I should to do?"

See this letter, I cant help himself a slight quiver, so ah! Deskmate always affect me, even though my grades didnt drop, but listening to lectures efficiency obviously is not good enough.

I with a sincere heart, with their own feelings, reply to her:

"First of all thank you for your trust me, so I can see from your letter you must be a clever child, your deskmate may learn bad, and naughty, but would you please more inclusive. Also, do you know why the teacher always let him be your deskmate? Thats because the teacher trust you, we cant live up to the expectations of the teacher, are you? You can help your neighbor, let he also experience the fun of learning, let him fall in love with learning, you said right?"

Looked at her and sending a smiling face, I seem to have also been infected, involuntarily smiled. Yes, ready to help others, this is the real "weibos got talent"!

I looked out the window, thinking: that star tonight, must be sunny tomorrow.

我这个女孩没什么爱好,即使上网也很少玩游戏。不过,我可是微博达人,现在已经有粉丝将近两百人了,可是有不少人羡慕呢。

星期六晚上,我照例打开微博,发现居然有人给我写私信!也许是我取“我来帮助你”的网名的缘故,经常有人找我帮忙,但我还是第一次收到信!我打开一看,大致内容是这样的:

“我上小学三年级了,三年以来一直都是同一个同桌,最近他老是影响我,我因该怎么办呢?”

看到这封信,我不禁微微一颤——自己也是这样的呀!同桌总是影响我,虽然我的学习成绩没有下降,但听课效率明显不够好。

我怀着一颗真挚的心,带着自己的感情,回复给了她:

“首先感谢你如此信任我,从你的信中我可以看出你一定是个乖巧的孩子,你的同桌可能学习不好,而且调皮,但请你多多包容。还有,你知道老师为什么一直让他做你的同桌吗?那是因为老师信任你,我们不能辜负老师的期望,是吗?你可以多帮助同桌,让他也体会到学习的乐趣,让他爱上学习,你说对吗?”

看着她发过来的笑脸,我仿佛也被传染了,不由自主地笑了。是啊,乐于助人,这才是真正的“微博达人”!

我望着窗外,心想:今夜星光灿烂,想必明天阳光明媚。

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篇19:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选

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导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧:

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。

最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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篇20:初三英语作文:Unforgettableperson

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My Math Teacher Mr. Wu is my math teacher. He is tall and outgoing. He likes sports very much. Mr. Wu is a kind teacher. When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. He helped me with it and told me the good ways to learn math. He regarded me as his own child. Now my math is better and I often get good grades. I really thank him for his kind help. No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.

我的数学老师吴先生是我的数学老师。他又高又外向。他非常喜欢运动。吴先生是一位善良的老师。当我在一年级的时候,我的数学很差,我不能解决问题。他帮我学习,并告诉我学习数学的好方法。他把我当作他自己的孩子。现在我的数学成绩好了,我经常取得好成绩。我真的感谢他对我的帮助。无论我走到哪里,我都会记得我有一个优秀的老师。

[初三英语作文: Unforgettable person

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