英语作文范文10篇初三(通用20篇)

Maybe many people know the universe is very big. Some scientists thought the universe seems to be rapidly expanding its component galaxies moving ever farther apart. So it’s very big. There are many heavenly bodies in the universe. If you stand in space, you will see many beautiful stars, like sun and other planets.

And then, let’s recognize our solar system. There are eight planets in our solar system. They’re Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. The Sun is very hot. Its surface has 5600℃. Its gravitation is very strong. So the Earth goes around Sun. And the Earth is our home. We’re living on the Earth, and it is the most beautiful in the solar system. It has lots of water and plants. And the moon is the Earth’s partner. It goes around the Earth. And other planets are very far from the Earth. So the people can’t reach them and none of them has an environment with air. The people also can’t live in them.

Finally, let’s see in the sky in the night. There is much beautiful and magic view in the universe.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：AbouttheUniverse

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving， we have Thanksgiving life， family Thanksgiving， Thanksgiving life， the community Thanksgiving ... ...

If， like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me come to this colorful world， and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success， I am pleased to join with me， and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration， I am encouraged by， I am inspired; loud voice exhort， and look forward to a report， the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.

If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful， then your life will be happier! Life is fair， she will not deceive you， as long as you pay， there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth， sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing， even though at times laughing， even though at times sad depression. This is the life， gave us hot Suanku salt， gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live， or where colorful? !

But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you， because he brought you to power; grateful for your help， because he told us what to give; spur thank you， because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you， because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you， because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you， because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip， because he strengthens your ability to ... ...

Thanksgiving did not know how a person， not like a fish breathe， can not survive a moment;

Thanksgiving know a person， just like the flowers bees encounter， as encountered in the desert oasis， just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!

Lets hearts with gratitude， singing aloud in front of the world， "the heart of Thanksgiving， thank you， with my life ... ..."

每个人都应该对感情生活——感恩节,我们感恩生活,家庭的感恩节,感恩节感恩生活,社区……

如果像我一样选择我父母的第一个感恩节。他们让我来到这个多彩的世界,他们竭尽全力支持我成长在他们的收获成功,我很高兴和我一起,播下了喜悦的泪水;他们在我的挫折,我深受鼓舞,我启发,大声劝,和期待的一份报告,父母的心脏和血液流动不时在我的整个身体。

如果你只有感恩的父母可能太窄。我们还想活感恩节。只要心存感激,那么你的人生将会更幸福!生活是公平的,她不会欺骗你,只要你付出,就会有回报。尽管有时顺利,有时尽管大量珊瑚礁;唱歌,虽然有时笑,有时即使悲伤抑郁。这是生命,给了我们热Suanku盐,给我们留下鲜花和阳光。无论什么样的情况是,感恩节应该活着,或者彩色的? !

而且周围的感恩节。感谢那些鼓励你的人,因为他把你带到权力;感谢你的帮助,因为他告诉我们给什么;刺激谢谢你,因为他消除了你的业力,感激那些伤害过你的人,因为他的脾气你的思想;感谢欺骗你的人,因为他增进了你的知识,感谢遗弃你的人,因为你必须教他自力更生,感激你的旅行,因为他强化你的能力……

感恩节不知道怎么一个人,不像鱼呼吸,不能生存的时刻;

感恩节的了解一个人,就像花儿蜜蜂遇到,遇到了沙漠中的绿洲,就像马脸出现在世界如此美丽!

让我们带着感恩的心,在世界面前大声歌唱,“感恩的心,谢谢你,我的生活……”

whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

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[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

Thanks for your letter. I’m very funny to receive your letter.

I started to learn chinese when I was a baby. I think it’s very difficult at that time. But I speak chinese well when I grow up. I will give you some advice. You could study chinese by reading aloud. And you could listen to music to learn chinese. You can watch chinese movies to improve your chinese.

I hope you will improve your chinese soon.

[How to learn Chinese初三英语作文

这位老师是我初三时的英语老师，至今，我几乎每天都会不由自主地想起他的话，虽已过了两年，但每次回想，似乎前一天还是他的学生，还在上他那个性化的课堂。

我们班是学校历史上最乱的班，初一、初二的英语课就像一张大大白纸上的斑斑点点，零碎得近乎空白。初三伊始，学校大扫除，我们班只有几个人在打扫，大多都溜去玩了。我和同桌在走廊上游荡着，突然被一位老师叫住：“喂，你们两个来，你来倒茶水，你来倒垃圾桶。”“不要，不干。”我说。他喊道：“Go，I’myourEnglishteacher。”这就是我们所等待的英语老师？那天下午我们班里议论纷纷：这个英语老师能管住我们吗？我们初三的英语课还会是空白吗？

答案是我们初三的英语课是满满的五彩斑斓，没有斑点的空白。我们全级有9个班，我们班的英语成绩一直稳居第9名。而这位英语老师一接手，第一次考试时我们就考了个中等，第一次脱掉了第9名的帽子。

我们英语每天总是穿得整整齐齐的，头发丝毫不乱，着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。他总是最后到校，最早离开，戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车匆匆来、匆匆去。走路时也是忽忽匆匆的，昂头直腰，大步直迈。

开学不久，我跟同桌想请他帮我们补习。第一次英语考试我们考了八、九名，我们连连说这个成绩好――若是考差了，他会不补；若是了，又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后，他竟说：“不要，我从来都不帮人补习，我最讨厌补习这玩意了，不要！”我和同桌纳闷了好久：这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知，更纳闷的还在后头，他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了，有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布：“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题，我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生，我最讨厌这些，上课有听就够了，不要再来问我。”话音未落，我们面面相觑，半张着嘴巴，都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的，他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实，这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人，一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前，我们英语站在讲台上，仰头望着风扇，皱着眉头，手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿，他把朝向他的窗都打开了，但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声，他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会，只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇，一手抓着一把大交椅，身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼，不时地听到有人在说：“这……这是老师吗？怎么会有这么个性的老师？”然后呢，我们英语就坐在大交椅上，吹着大风扇，喝着柠檬茶，心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处，他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟，好，”他说，“你们6班就是鬼灵精，一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来，那7班，我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这不补；若是了，又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后，他竟说：“不要，我从来都不帮人补习，我最讨厌补习这玩意了，不要！”我和同桌纳闷了好久：这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知，更纳闷的还在后头，他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了，有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布：“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题，我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生，我最讨厌这些，上课有听就够了，不要再来问我。”话音未落，我们面面相觑，半张着嘴巴，都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的，他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实，这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人，一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前，我们英语站在讲台上，仰头望着风扇，皱着眉头，手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿，他把朝向他的窗都打开了，但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声，他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会，只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇，一手抓着一把大交椅，身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼，不时地听到有人在说：“这……这是老师吗？怎么会有这么个性的老师？”然后呢，我们英语就坐在大交椅上，吹着大风扇，喝着柠檬茶，心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处，他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟，好，”他说，“你们6班就是鬼灵精，一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来，那7班，我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这好，不用考汕头卷。汕头那些家伙出卷呢，就是四个人关在一间房子里，整天坐着椅子转啊转啊，就转出一张试卷来，专考些难题怪题，正经的又不考。汕头的试卷啊，哎哟哟，那真是害死万万生灵哦。”

学生自然是很尊重他的，其他的老师也是，他说什么就是什么，就连我们那让人不寒而栗的杨校也得让他三分。他跟好的学生没啥话谈，倒是跟那些调皮捣蛋的很谈得来。哪一班谁谁谁捣蛋了，他就找谁谁谁去喝茶聊天。他总是站在理字上，也不得不尊重他。有一次录音机坏了，他气得半死，说公物怎能破坏，东西怎能不打紧，越说越气，最后竟然把书一摔，说：“不上课了，学什么书，学做人好了。”后来有一次他看见粉笔头乱七八糟地散在地上，也气得摔书不上课。

我们英语人有个性，课也有个性。课前唱歌的时候，他竟点起歌来，说：“停停停，别唱这个，唱刘欢的什么‘心不在’，什么‘重头再来’那首来我听。”我们不会唱，他皱了眉说：“哎哟，那么好听的歌怎么不会呢？”接着指着指挥员说：“你，下课去7班学唱这首歌，以后我来了你们就唱给我听。”过后有的老师听说了这事，禁不住大笑起来说：“哈……王老师就是这样，真性情！”

到了复习期间，他大步迈上讲台，把手在半空中一挥，喊道：“来，我们的口号是……”全班一起大喊：“用声音唤起记忆！”感觉，就像在上幸运52一样。

初三即将结束时，他不经意间说起：“老师扮小丑，拼命逗笑，只为了让你们记得更深。”我当时低着头，红了眼圈。在每一次笑声的背后，我们学到了很多，而老师付出了很多很多。他说：“我自认对得起我的教学，你们想想，老师什么时候在课堂上讲错一个字。”真的没有，他从来没有口误，从没说错过一个字，那，精神该多么集中啊。

上学期，有一次我早早地回家，遇见了他，没变，我们英语还是穿得整整齐齐，头发丝毫不乱，着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车。我惊喜地大叫：“啊，老师！”他一忽而过，也来不及听见。

后来，我梦到了他，也没变，还是在上那么个性的课堂，我还是他的学生，幸福地听着“哎哟哟，这是个黑面鬼，得注意咯……学英语呢，就得这样，我们不但要有激情，还要有表情……来，我们的口号是……”

[关于我的初三英语老师的作文

Ah! Christmas morning! Children like to wake up early while its still dark and sneak(蹑手蹑脚) into the living room to check the presentsfind any with their names on it, shake them to guess whats inside, and then maybe theyll go back to bed and pretend they are still asleep when their parents come to wake them with a Merry Christmas!

But almost no one I know gets completely dressed or eats a regular breakfast on Christmas morning. They just put on robes(长袍) or wear their pajamas(睡衣) and go to see whats under the Christmas tree. Some Christian families have a tradition of reading the Bible story of Jesus birth. Maybe its to remind(提醒) the children that Christmas is Jesus birthday.

Someone will begin to take the presents out from under the tree, see whose name is on the package, and then pass them around. Some families wait until all the presents have been given out before opening any of them, while others open each one as it comes to them. There are many thank you to the ones who gave the gifts. New clothes are tried on to see if they are fit, and of course the most interesting toys will immediately be played with.

Usually among the Christmas gifts will be some especially delicious candy or cake or cookies which everyone tastes. These sweet things may be the only breakfast many people eat on Christmas morning. After the gifts have been opened, the room will be tidied up except where the children are playing with their toys. Everyone will wash and get dressed for the day.

[精选初三英语作文：Christmas Day

Many people will be unforgettable, memorable things, unforgettable person, memorable day, a class to remember... I was the most memorable of my childhood. Childhood like a cup of milk, contains the fun of childhood. Childhood is like a stream, flowing childhood friendship; Childhood is like a song, the song with our happy childhood. How is not memorable to me?

My childhood was spent in liao home for transshipment. The scenery there is beautiful, green grass, green flowers, fresh air, we all immersed in the village in the mountains, compose a colorful picture. We have a few friend, three group, two group of son, play in the process of that sweet voice, echoed across the sky, wandering the midterm, for a long time cant stop!

During my childhood, I often pick wild flowers on the hill, looking for the bamboo shoots with friends, play games, back childhood that a few interesting childrens song...

很多人都会有难忘，难忘的事，难忘的人，难忘的日子，难忘的一节课……我最难忘的是我的童年。童年像一杯牛奶，蕴含着童年的乐趣;童年像小溪，流淌着童年的友谊;童年像一首歌，歌里有着童年我们的幸福。怎能不令我难忘?

我的童年是在廖家畈度过的。那里的风景格外的美，青的草、绿的花，新鲜的空气，我们整个村庄都沉浸在这青山绿水中，构成了一幅多姿多彩的画卷。我们几个小伙伴，三个一群，两个一伙儿，玩耍的过程中那甜美的声音，回响在整个上空，徘徊期中，久久不能停歇!

童年时，我经常和小伙伴们一起山上采野花、找竹笋、做游戏、背童年那几首生动有趣的儿歌……

First cut up two tomates.Next put two teaspoons of oil into the pan.When the oil is hot,put the tomatoes into the pan and fry for a few minutes.Then add a bowl of water and boil.When the water boils,put the noodles into the pan and boil for 5 minutes.Break two eggs and put them into the pan.Finally ,add two teaspoons of salt.It’s very easy.

You can try to make it.

[最新初三英语作文：How to make tomato and egg noodles.

As we can know,health is very important,but how to keep fit?

First,you should have a balancet diet.For example,you can eat less junk food and more vegetables.Next,doing sports is good for our health.If you like playing basketball,you can play it with your classmates after school.If you like riding bikes,please ride a bike to school every morning.Then,many students are stressed out all the day.So they should learn to relax themselves.Last,learning to communicate with qther people is very important,so you must learn it.

These are the easiest way to keep fit. I hope every student can have a good health。

[How to keep fit初三优秀英语作文

Hi，boys and girls. I’m a Chinese girl. My Chinese name is Chen Jinrun. Chen

is my first name. Jinrun is my last name. My English name is Helen. I’m 12 years

old. My favorite color is black white and red. I like sports、computer game and

go shopping. And I like French fries、ice cream and bananas. My QQ number is

1047850027.

I have a friend. Her name is Song Yihan. Song is her first name. Yihan is

her last name. She is 12 years old. She is very pretty. Her favorite color is

blue. She is my good friend.

My mother is 36 years old, long longhair, intermediate mixed with a few gray hair, a pair of gentle eyes, high nose, big eyes, in my opinion, mother as a whole is very beautiful.

Since I started in elementary school, my mother said to me: "you must good good study, as a child to go to school to listen to the teacher, finish the homework carefully". Mother after school every day the first thing to do is ask me: "what the teacher tell you today, my homework is what?" Although very nag, but I know it is the mothers care to me, so every time I am very serious answer. When you do your homework, I encounter a difficult problem ask mom, mom said: "go to their own brain to think about first." Each make a problem, mom will let me remember this way, also let me next time wont go wrong.

Mother not only care about me, in the study on the life and meticulous care me, mom often teaches me to be, just like a lamp that rev beacon to guide my direction, my mother taught me to be honest, to credit. In the daily life of my mother has always been very generous, every day after school, I entered the house, you can taste delicious food.

Mother, you comforted me in my sad; You encourage me when I encounter a failure, you guide me when I walk in the wrong direction. Strict with me in your learning; You to me in life takes good care of me.

Ah! Your mother for the sake of my life, learning to pay a lot, I will not live up to your expectations, study hard and make a good filial piety you in the future, contribute to the country!

我的妈妈今年36岁，长长的披肩发，中间掺有几根白发，一双温柔的眼睛，高挺的鼻子，大大的眼睛，在我看来妈妈整体是很漂亮的。

从我开始上小学时，妈妈就对我说：“你一定要从小好好学习，上学要听老师的话，认真完成作业” 。每天放学妈妈第一件事就是问我：“今天老师给你讲的什么，家庭作业是什么?”尽管很唠叨，但我知道这是妈妈对我的关心，所以每次我都很认真的回答。做作业时，我一遇到难题就去问妈妈，妈妈便说：“先去自己动脑想想” 。每做对一道题，妈妈便让我记住这种方法，还保证让我下次不再出错。

妈妈不但在学习上关心我，在生活上也是无微不至的关爱我，妈妈经常教我做人，就像一盏启明灯一样引导我的方向，妈妈教我要诚实、要拾金不昧。在我的衣食住行方面，妈妈一向是十分慷慨的，每天放学，我一进家门，就能尝到可口饭菜。

妈妈，您在我伤心时安慰我;在我遇支失败时你鼓励我，在我走错方向时你引导我;你在学习上严格要求我;您在生活上对我无微不至的关怀我。

啊!妈妈您为了我的生活，学习付出了很多，我一定不会辜负你的期望，好好学习，将来好好孝敬您，为国家做出贡献!

How to get happyness 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

Now a lot of people pay attention to a piece of new on the Internet. A teacher calledZhang Lili was hurt by a car, because she wanted to save her students. People call her “Hemost beartiful teacher”. She is only 29 years old , but she can do so great thing. I think it isdifficult for other people to do this. It’s the love for the students , she is one of the bestteachers in China.As a student, I think the most beautiful teacher must be good to students. And she alwayshelps her stduents with all kinds of problems. The teacher must have many ideas to keep thestudents healthy and happy. I think if a teacher do these, she must be a good teacher, and herstudents will be good too. And if all teachers can do these, the world will be more beautifulbecause of them .

I am a middle school student. I am active. I like going out to play.

Recently, I am fond of skating. I want a pair of skating shoes, but my mother doesn’t allow, because she worries about me to be hurt in playing. So, I want to find a part-time job to earn money to buy a pair of skating shoes. I am always free at weekends. During the weekday, I think I can’t have spare to work. I am tough and I am willing to do everything I can do.

Anyone has the information about part-time job, please recommend to me.

我是一名中学生。我很活泼开朗。我喜欢出去玩。

最近，我迷上了溜冰。我想要一双溜冰鞋，可是我妈妈不允许，因为她担心我会受伤。所以，我想找份兼职来挣钱买一双滑冰鞋。周末我一般都是有空的。星期一到星期五，我觉得我没有多余的时间工作。我很能吃苦耐劳的，而且我愿意做我能做的任何工作。

谁有关于兼职的信息，请向我推荐一下。

文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。

文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：

1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛

在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如I Cannot Forget Her (我忘不了她)的结尾：

After her death，I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away，but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.

2、重复主题句

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如I Love My Home Town(我爱家乡)的结尾：

I love my home town，and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.

3、自然结尾

随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如Fishing(钓鱼)的结尾：

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours，but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing，we lay down on the river bank，bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.

The farewell day would the least expected day in my life, but it has come eventually.

At this momnet, I have to say that it is such a priviliage and honor to have worked with you guys shoulder on shouldr over the last four years.

We went through a lot and achieved a lot.

When I look back and think about the past, I feel so pround and accomplished not only because of the knowledge I have learnt and the progress I have made in my study, but also because the geniue friendship I have obtained with you guys.

And My FlatI live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen.

We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes.

Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family.

I like the sofa in my sitting room.

It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror.

It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place.

My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district. You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. It s made of wood. Maybe that will come true.

初中英语作文:初三英语作文Sports

Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.

My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。

Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it?

A poem:

Water has no taste at all.

Water has no color.

Water’s in the waterfall.

The pump.

The tap.

The well.

Water is everywhere around us.

Water is in the rain.

In the stream.

In the pond.

And in the river.

And in the sea again.

There isn’t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.

It is very valuable.