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万里长城是新七大奇迹之一,长城东西南北交错,绵延起伏于我们伟大祖国辽阔的土地上。那关于长城的英语作文要怎么写呢?下面是由小编整理的小学英语作文范文100篇,供大家参考。

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小学六年级英语作文:我的梦想

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Believe in everyones heart have a dream, although they each are not identical, but are great, some people want to be a teacher, for example, use knowledge to nurture the students; Some want to be a police, maintain social stability and peace; Some want to be a doctor, to heal the wounded and rescue the dying; Some want to be a fireman, help people out of the woods yet... My dream is to be a doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying.

Doctor, is a great career. They are superb skill of the patient back from death, let them have a complete family, make more and more people can happy life, long life. At the same time, it is also a kind of to society for the reward of the motherland, in this way to give back to society, I feel very proud.

At the same time, I know a doctor is not so good when, want to be a good doctor, should not only have rich cultural knowledge, to studies in medicine, and treat the patient should be concerned about, peaceful attitude, because they are patient. Sick is a bad thing, we should not indifference to them, should be abiding by for them.

Dream, not lip service, so now, I want to study well, struggling, in order to be able to become a good doctor to help others, efforts to fight it, come on!

相信每个人的心中都有一个梦想,它们虽然各不相同,但却都是伟大的,比如有的人想当一名教师,用知识来哺育学生们;有的想当一名警察,维护社会的安定与和平;有的想当一名医生,救死扶伤;有的想当一名消防员,帮助人们脱离险境……我的梦想就是当一名救死扶伤的医生。

医生,是一个伟大的职业。他们以高超的医术把病人从死神手中夺回来,让他们拥有一个完整的家,使越来越多的人们能够幸福安康、长命百岁。同时,这也是一种对社会对祖国的报答,用这种方式来回馈社会,我感到很骄傲。

同时,我知道医生也不是那么好当的,要想当一名优秀的医生,不仅要有丰富的文化知识,要在医学方面刻苦钻研,而且对待病人要关心,态度要祥和,因为他们是病人。得了病是一件难受的事,我们不应该对他们冷漠无情,应该要为他们分忧解难。

梦想,不是嘴上说说就能实现的,所以现在,我要好好学习,努力上进,为了能够当上一名优秀的医生来帮助别人,努力地奋斗吧,加油!

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篇1:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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Our country has an ancient patriotic poet named Qu Yuan, he was e_iled by

the calumny, the inability to save the peril of the country, e_cessive anger, so

Jiang himself voted to Health martyred. It is for him not to eat the bodies of

fish and shrimp, one after another to the various pancake into the river, the

water used to feed animals, and some ship off the water at the water beast. This

has become now the Dragon Boat Festival, eating dumplings, fried cake, the

origin of the dragon-boat race.

Having said that, I think of my family have been the scene of the Dragon

Boat Festival. Grandmother pinch a different type of pancake, has florets,

small, small starfish, is really different form. hurry to go shopping Kok,

calmly took my father to buy tzu. A long row of teams, like a long queue, we

managed to buy a tzu. We can see that every household have attached great

importance to this holiday, people in this way to e_press their thoughts and

reverence Yuan.

我国古代有一位爱国诗人叫屈原,他遭谗言被放逐后,无力拯救危亡的国家,悲愤过度,于是投江自尽,以生殉国。人们为了不使鱼虾吃掉他的尸体,纷纷将捏成的各种各样的饼子投入江中,用来喂饱水中的动物,有的划着船在水上敲锣打鼓驱赶水兽。这便成为现在端午节,吃粽子、炸糕点、赛龙舟的由来。

说到这里,我又想起了我家过端午节的情景。奶奶捏了种类不同的饼子,有小花,小人,小海星,真是形态各异。妈妈急着去买菜角,爸爸不慌不忙地拉着我去买粽子。排着长长的队,好似一条长龙,我们好不容易才买到了粽子。可以看出,家家户户都很重视这个节日,人们用这种方式来表达对屈原的思念和崇敬。

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篇2:小学二年级食品安全英语作文

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The so-called food safety, is the food does not contain any harmful substances to human body. If food spoilage or containing toxic substances, will bring harm to our body and even life-threatening. Food safety is about peoples life and health. Inferior food greatly endanger peoples health, light diarrhea diarrhea, or poisoning coma, moreover may cause death. Indeed, food safety is directly related with the health and quality of life of the masses. Schools around there are many small shops, the inviting "gourmet" from the fragrance, the classmates to withstand the snack temptation, you, me one yuan to buy a lot of snacks, the results some buy snacks classmates because bought not health food and have loose bowels.

Remember once I saw a news on TV: a famous yogurt brand for some reason, the expired yogurt repackage again, also good food quality supervision administration found in time, otherwise the consequence is unimaginable. Look at these factories, how hard, in order to market competition, regardless of the health of consumers.

The above examples are enough to prove that the importance of food safety, food unsafe events caused great influence to peoples life, food regulators have also been attaches great importance to this problem. Believe that relevant departments can seriously, strict management, give you a rest assured food environment. We, as a primary school student, as a member of a society, we should also be constantly improve the self-protection ability and the ego to protect consciousness, render and do our work with regulators.

所谓食品安全,就是食品里不含任何对人体有害物质。如果食品变质或者含有毒物质,就会给我们身体带来危害甚至危及生命。食品安全关乎人的生命健康。劣质食品极大得危害了人的健康,轻则拉肚子腹泻,重则中毒昏迷,更有甚者可能会引起死亡。的确,食品安全直接关系着群众的身体健康和生活质量。学校周边有许多小店,那诱人的“美食“发出阵阵香味,同学们抵挡不住零食的诱惑,你五角,我一元地买了许多零食,结果有些买零食的同学都因为买了不卫生的食品而拉肚子。

记得有一次我在电视里看到了一个新闻:某一知名酸奶品牌因为某种原因,把过期的酸奶重新包装了一遍,还好食品质量监督管理局及时发现,不然后果不堪设想。看看这些厂家,多么毒辣,为了市场上的竞争,竟不顾消费者的健康。

以上事例都足以证明食品安全的重要性,食品不安全的事件给人们的生活造成了很大的影响,食品监管部门也一直很重视这个问题。相信有关部门能够严肃处理,严格管理,给大家一个放心的食品食用环境。而我们作为一名小学生,作为社会的一份子,我们也应该要不断提高自我保护能力和自我保护意识,以及尽自己的绵薄之力配合监管部门工作。

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篇3:小学六年级关于暑假英语作文

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Is great and for the summer, but the color in the summer, but always so single, finally I found today, that a piece of blue summer, blue sky.

Walking on the road today, first have to look up at the sky, ah! Really good blue, blue is very clean, have a holiday since the first time I see, so beautiful sky, I like the color of the sky, and sky today just gives me more of such frames on the road, that kind of feeling really very comfortable, good light, all the troubles at that instant.

I like this summer vacation, if every day how wonderful it is the sky is so blue! but it doesnt realize that the sky will appear only in the second day after the rain, I hate rain, because I dont like the sky is cloudy, that day is difficult, will be very boring, but if it doesnt rain, the sky will not have so good-looking color, maybe just like rainbow will appear after the rain!

Blue summer, let a person some lazy, after school, there will be a so beautiful memories stay in summer vacation, but not in time to relax, on the second day, of course not to have time, alas! School is really tired, perhaps every student youth time is spent in the classroom!

Blue summer vacation in my life the most gorgeous color!

真好又到暑假了,但暑假里的色彩,却总是那么单一,终于我今天发现,那一片蓝蓝的暑假,蓝蓝的天。

今天漫步在路上,头不由的仰望了一下天空,啊!真的好蓝,蓝的很干净,放假以来我第一次看到,这么美的天空,我喜欢天空的颜色,而今天的天空刚更让我不由自主的就这样定格在路上,那种感觉真的好舒服,好轻松,所有的烦恼在那一瞬间烟消云散。

我喜欢这样暑假,如果每一天的天空都如此蓝那多好啊!但那不会实现的,这样的天空也是在雨后的第二天才会出现,我最讨厌下雨,因为我不喜欢天是阴的,那样的一天是难熬的,会很闷,但如果不下雨,天空就不会有那么好看颜色,也许就和雨后才会出现彩虹一样吧!

蓝蓝的暑假,让人有些懒懒得,开学后,还会有一段这么美好的回忆留在暑假,但不会在有放松的时间了了,上初二了,当然不会在有时间了,唉!上学真累,也许每一个学生的花季时代都是在教室里度过!

蓝蓝的暑假成为我生命中最绚丽的色彩!

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篇4:ChristmasAroundtheWorld小学生英语作文

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In the U.S., we hang a christmas wreath and put lights on our house. We give presents to our friends.

In Australia,we have a picnic on the beach. At night, we sing carols by candlelight.

In theU.K., we pull Christmas crackers. We eat mince pies and Christmas pudding.

In Mexico, we have nine Posada parades at Christmas. Then we have a pinata party and get fruit and candy.

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篇5:关于我最喜欢的动物小学生英语作文

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i have two turtles, they are cute. i′ve had them for two years.

they carry heavy shells,just like carrying a school bag. they have eyes which shines just like black beans. they are funny.

they are like to eat the watermelon in the summer. mother always buy more for the turtles,so i think that they like to cool down as well, but they are shy when eating, they don′t want to be watched, as they inhaling the food . the ofter day , i bried to observe how they eat their food.

the way they eat is really funny.no wondey why they are so shy.

grauing up, fradually. i want to stay with him as long as he lives.

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篇6:有关圣诞节英语作文小学

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Christmas is annual festival in western world that is one of the most

important festivals for them. Previously, only westerners or Christians

celebrate it. But in recent years, more and more Chinese people celebrate it,

especially among young people. There are many activities in that day. I think

there are the following reasons that make Christmas popular in China. First,

it’s a western holiday and it’s new to Chinese. Second, with the development of

the world, the mutual influence between China and the west makes it work. Last,

the merchants make great contribution to its popularity.

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篇7:小学四年级感谢父母的英语作文

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当我们生病卧床不起时,是父母在无微不至地照顾着我们;当我们考试考差了,是父母的鼓励着我们;当我们犯了错误,是父母的教育着我们改正错误......

When we are ill be completely bedridden, parents care in every possible way to us; when we poor exams, parents encourage us; when we make a mistake, parents teach us to correct our mistakes......

感谢父母在我受到挫折时,鼓励我、安慰我、给我勇气,让我树立自信勇敢地去面对困难。记得一次数学测验,我只考了八十多分。我垂头丧气地回到家,作业也做不好,饭吃不香。妈妈看见我的反常,坐在我的身边和蔼地问我原因。我一五一十把考试的实情告诉了妈妈,令我没想到的是妈妈不但没有批评我,反而安慰我说:“好孩子,一次失败不等于自己就不优秀了,你要好好地分析原因,知道错误到哪里,这就是进步。”听了妈妈的话,我的心情一下子轻松多了。

Thank the parents in my frustration, encourage me, comfort me, give me courage, let me brave to face the difficulties to establish confidence. I remember a math test, I only got more than 80%. I become dejected and despondent home, homework is not done well, eat not sweet. My mother saw me freak, sit beside me kindly ask me why. I had to tell the truth to the examination of the mother, so I did not expect is the mother not only did not criticize me, but comfort me to say: "good boy, a failure does not mean that he is not good, you have to analyze the reasons, know where this is progress." After listening to my mother, my mood suddenly relaxed.

有一句话说得好“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖”。因此,为了报答辛苦养育我的父母,我现在一定要好好学习,长大后,找一个好的工作,让父母安享晚年。父母为我付出的,我将十倍、百倍的感谢、回报他们,让他们的付出有价值。

There is a saying that goes "who grass inch heart, reported in the apartments". Therefore, in order to hard rearing repay my parents, I must now learn, grow up, find a good job, let parents live. My parents gave me, I will be ten times, a hundred times thanks, return them, let them give valuable.

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篇8:小学五年级英语精选

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One of my classmates was knocked down by car last term. He was badly hurt. He had to stay in the hospital for several months. We were very sad.

One night, he felt very hungry. He wanted to buy some easy noodles to eat. He ran very fast. He didn’t stop when the traffic lights were red. He couldn’t escape. His legs were injured. He said that was a terrible(可怕的) memory. He said he would obey the traffic rules forever.

Please always remember the traffic rules. It is very important for us. Life is wonderful. Let’s obey the rules at any time.

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篇9:小学生关于我的外祖英语作文

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com Great-grandfather Yee is my mother’s grand-Father。 He was the third son of the family。 His Father was a railroad worker in the United States In the 1580’s。Famine, poverty, and political Unrest in Mainland China spurred many Chinese To California。 And stories of jobs, gold, and rich Fertile farming land spread fast at home in China。 Consequently, many people wanted to come to The United States。 At the age of 17 my great-Grandfather and his tzuowen.zk168.com.cnhree brothers and friends Sailed across the Pacific Ocean in one small Chinese boat。 He returned to China only three Times and only for a brief interval。 He had Kung-Fu and often told us of his life。 He had Great pride in being independent his eyes Weakened as he got older。 One day he fell down From stairs, and he died in the hospital at the age Of 88。 He loved to laugh and play in small Children’s games。 This is how I remember him with warmth。

com曾祖父绮是我母亲的暗门。他是家里的第三个儿子。他的父亲是一个铁路工人在美国1580年s.Famine,贫困,和中国大陆的政治动荡促使许多中国加利福尼亚。乔布斯的故事,黄金,和丰富的肥沃的农田在中国迅速传播。因此,许多人想来到美国。17岁的我的曾祖父和他tzuowen.zk168.com.cnhree兄弟和朋友在一个小型中国船横渡太平洋。他回到中国只有三次,只有一个短暂的时间间隔。他功夫,常常告诉我们,他的生活。他很自豪独立眼睛削弱他长大。有一天他从楼梯摔倒了,他在医院去世,享年88岁。他喜欢笑和玩小孩子的游戏。这就是我记得他与温暖。

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篇10:小学三年级关于友谊的英语作文

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y best friend is my classmate Jack. We have been good frieds since we entered the same class. Jack is a very interedting boy and also very kind hearted. He studies very hard and always gets the top score in my class. When we have difficulties in learning English or maths, he is always happy to help us.

He is very handsome and tall. So his hobby is playing basketball. He is the best basketball player of our school.

I like him so much and hope our friendship will last for ever.

我最好的朋友是我的同学Jack.自从我们入了同一个班级我们就成为好朋友了。Jack是个非常有趣的男孩,而且总是很热心。他学习很努力,总在我们班上得第一。当我们遇到英语或数学学习上的问题时,他总是很乐意帮助我们解答。

他非常英俊,并且个子很高。因为个子高,他很喜欢打篮球。他是我们学校的最佳球员。

我很喜欢他,希望我们友谊长存。

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篇11:小学英语日记

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第一次做家务

he summer vacation began. I decided to work to make money for the next

term. But I didnt know what work I could do.

At that time, my mother was writing a book. I decided to type for her for

pay. She agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

I began to work. I typed so slowly that I could type only several hundred

words a day. It was a hard job for me. I kept typing all day long.

I finished the work two weeks later. I came to know how hard it was to make

money.

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篇12:小学英语的

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I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a businessman. He is always busy with his work and he often goes to business trips. But when he is free, he stays with us. My mother is a worker. She works hard, too. She works hard to take care of our home. I love my parents.

我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有三口人,我爸爸,妈妈和我。我的父亲是一个商人。他总是忙于他的工作,他经常去出差。但当他是免费的,他和我们在一起。我妈妈是一个工人。她也努力工作。她努力工作照顾我们的家。我爱我的父母。

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篇13:关于我的小学生活英语作文

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My school life

My school life in primary school is wonderful! I have a lot of friends. They are friendly to me.We study together play together and talk together.My teachers are very patient .They teach me a lot and help me with many problems. The school life is unforgettable.

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篇14:动物园里小学英语作文

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Today is sunday may 25 20xx.i go to the zoo whit my friends.the weather is sunny and cool!look!the elephants are drinking water.the birds are flying,the tiger is walking with lion.look at the river !

the fish are swimming in the water . the mokeys are swinging .oh no!the weather is terrible.it’s rainy. we are go home watch tv and play the game!i very not happy!

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篇15:小学英语日记:一个好人AGoodMan

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导语:日记能够帮助我们记录每天的生活,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语日记,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Today, when I go home after school, I go to a shop to buy a pencil. But, when I leave home in the morning, I forget to bring my wallet. I feel sad because I really need this pencil to finish my homework. Then a man behind me sees my worry, he takes out the money and pays for my bill. I am so thankful to this good man.

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今天,我放学后,我去了商店想买一支铅笔。可是,我早上出门的时候,我忘记带钱包了。我好难过,因为我真的需要这只铅笔来完成我的作业。然后我身后的一个男人看到我的担忧,他拿出钱,支付了我的账单。我很感谢这个好人。

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篇16:关于理想英语作文小学

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As is known to us all, teachers play an important role in our process of

growing up. As far as I am concerned, an ideal teacher should be responsible,

impartial and wise.

First of all, a qualified teacher should be responsible. For one thing, he

should try his best to make his class interesting and try to understand what his

students need. For another, he needs to keep enthusiastic with his job of spread

knowledge all the time and act as an example for others everywhere he goes

to.

Second, be impartial is another requirement. As a teacher, he should not

divide students into good ones and bad ones since each student has unique

characteristic and value. Therefore, no matter what kind of students he

encounters, he should treat them impartially, without any bias.

Finally, my ideal teacher is one who does not only teach students his

specialized knowledge but also can give students some guidance about life and

about how to act as human beings. This guidance has a great effect on students’

outlook on life and sense of worth.

To sum up, an ideal teacher should not only pay attention to the

achievements his students get, but also put emphasis on developing students’

correct views on life and sense of worth.

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篇17:小学生写人英语作文:我的爸爸

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My daddy is a medium-sized man with a big and dark eyes, a black and bright short hair, a slender figure that looks very strong and strong, and the strong arm is strong and everyone is praising him.

My dad is very strict with me, often Saturday, Sunday do not let me go out to play, let me do exercises at home, so my math test test 92 points plus stars. My dad usually likes to swim, summer as long as he rest to take me to Taihu Lake swimming, he said that this is a learning ability to survive.

His temper is very bad, angry will use force to educate me, I said my father is "the best martial arts master". But sometimes he is still very kind, often give up nap time taught me to learn Mathematical Olympiad, often self-taught, and then taught me. I also often teach my father some English, such as koala is a koala and so on.

My father himself is also very love to learn, he is a school graduate school students, graduation certificate, and now in the undergraduate, often learn very late. My dad is an example of my study. Although my father is very strict with me, but I still love him.

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篇18:关于幽默英语作文小学

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Last week, my parents told me the good news that my family would go camping

with my uncle’s family. I felt so excited about it, because I could spend the

whole night outside, which never happened before. When the day came, we brought

the equipment and bought some food. In the afternoon, the two families settled

down, then we started to walked around. My cousins and I rushed to the forest

and went to the highest point, where we can appreciate the whole sight. Standing

on the highest place, I felt so great. The world was in front of my eyes and I

thought of the old poets’ description. At night, we set the the fire and talked

happily. The parents were talking about the family chores and the kids were

playing games. It was such a happy moment for me.

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篇19:关于野餐的六年级英语作文_小学英语作文2500字

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关于野餐六年级英语作文篇1

It is a nice Sunday.The air is fresh and the sky is blue.The classmates of Class one Grade seven is having a pinic on Nan Shan.Look,some students are looking at how to cook the food.Jane is washing vegetabels .Tom is catching fish in the river.And other classmates are laying the table.They are all busy,but they are very happy.What a nice picnic it is!

关于野餐的六年级英语作文篇2

Last Sundy I went to the park with my friend.It took us an hour to get there by bike.It was sunny and warm that day.There were lots of people in the park.We climbed the mountain and went boating.And we had a picnic in the park,too.When we finished the picnic,we picked up the rubbish and threw it into the dusbin.We thought it was our duty to make the environment clean.We had a good time that day.

关于野餐的六年级英语作文篇3

Yesterday,I went to have a picnic with my old classmates.We dated with each other several days ago.And we were all expecting the day#39;s come. At last, the excited day came. We went to the part where we have decided to have the picnic. During the picnic ,we talked with each other,played games,and so on. On balance, I had a nice day and I will never forget it.Because it is so happy in the picnic and we remaided so many pleasures things in our childhood.

关于野餐的六年级英语作文篇4

We had a picnic in fall last year. first we climbed to the top of the hill. we saw many pupils there. we talked ,laughed and played together. then at picnic time, we shared our food .we saw a beautiful stream near by. but there was much rubbish in it. that#39;s a pity .we thought we should tell the people to protect our living environment. so after our picnic, we put up several signs near the stream. we wrote "please keep the stream clean and beautiful" on the signs. time to go home, we said goodbye each other and we made an appointment of next year.. on our way home, we all thought that#39;s a very interesting picnic.

关于野餐的六年级英语作文篇5

It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. there were GREen trees, orange leaves,red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place, we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on.But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry.

What an unforgettable picnic it was!

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篇20:小学英语写作方法和技巧

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要写好英语作文,具体要做到以下几点:

注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持

坚持英语阅读的习惯,不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度,更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维,从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。

(1)平时多读,积累句型:读的越多,语感欲强烈,写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了,另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。

(2)选出一些代表性范文精读:选出不同题材的优秀作文范文,读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文,并做到学以致用。

注重平时的写作训练

英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记,保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练,正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。

五步写出一篇好作文

什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单,同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外,我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。

(1)认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式

时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago,last…过去时;next,in…将来时等

人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如:

Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

(2)找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

(3)成文时表述正确,文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

(4)文章结构清晰,重点句型画龙点睛,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次,考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词:

1.表文章结构顺序:

First of all, Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…

And then, Finally, In the end,At last

2.表并列补充关系的:

What is more, Besides,Moreover,

3.表转折对比关系的:

However, On the contrary, but

On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…, while others…

4.表因果关系的:

Because, As、So, Therefore, As a result

5.表换一种方式表达:

In other words

6.表进行举例说明:

For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实:In fact

8.表达自己观点:

As far as I know, In myopinion

9.表总结:

In short, In a word.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例:

I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.

感叹句举例:

How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!

动名词做主语举例:

Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.

常用状语从句句型:

1)时间:

when, not…until(直到…才…), as soon as(一…就…)

2)目的:

so that + clause; (为了)

3)结果:

so…that…(如此…以至于…), too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件:

if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)

5)比较:

as…as…(与…一样), not so…as…, than

(5)认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:

We livemore and more comfortable.

改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.

改正:much information (不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.

改正:There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)

4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.

改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

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