英语春节作文小学(20篇)
老师是辛勤的园丁,每天为我们的学业操劳,无微不至的呵护着每一个孩子的成长,下面是小编给大家带来的英语春节作文小学作文,希望能够帮到你哟!
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1000我的理想小学英语优秀作文
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+ 加入清单a dream
peter: oh, i can't believe it. i am now in london in england. i see the big ben. big ben is not the the name of a man. it is a very big clock…. oh, i am so happy.
happy: how are you?
peter: i'm fine, thank you.
happy: how was your holiday?
peter: it was fun.
happy: where did you go?
peter: i went to england.
happy: how did you go there?
peter: i went by plane.
happy: what did you do and what did you see?
peter: i saw the big ben. the hands are four meters long.and i bought presents for you!
happy: oh, thank you. did you take any pictures?
peter: yes. er…where did i put my pictures? ...
peter: oh, it's a dream!
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篇1:快乐的春节小学生作文300字
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+ 加入清单新年到!新年到!到处洋溢着春节喜气洋洋的气氛,街上挂上大红灯笼,家家贴上新的对联,我家也买了好多花跟桔子树装饰。
大年初一一早,我被鞭炮声吵醒了,我马上起床,穿上新的衣服和鞋子,就去跟长辈拜年了,长辈们都给了我红包。然后我们一家就去喝早茶,喝完早茶就回家了,回到家里村里面已经热闹起来了,炮竹声舞狮声,到处充满了喜庆的气氛,我跟着舞狮队转了一圈,妈妈说这是转运,祈求来年走好运,身体健康!
中午吃过饭,爸爸就带我们去桥头看油菜花,开了半个小时的车终于到了。那里的花开的很美,在微风中摇摆着身姿,像是跟我们在招手,也像是因为过年而欢快的跳舞。一大遍黄色的海洋中有很多蜜蜂在花中采蜜,我们在花中拍照,花不但美而且很香,置身花海中,人也像变成了花仙子跟蜜蜂一起飞舞,蜜蜂也像是感受到新年的气氛,所以特别的多,我有点怕,但妈妈说只要我们不伤害它们,它们也不会伤害我们的。看完油菜花,我们就回家吃晚饭了,晚上我们 还 放烟花庆祝春节。
春节真快乐!我喜欢春节!
篇2:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译
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+ 加入清单In a few days is the Dragon Boat Festival.
Do you have to know the Dragon Boat Festival? I know, in order to commemorate WuZiLian, his father was murdered by king chu, dig grave after he went to the kingdom of wu, chu got know sword he giveth him dead bodies into river, on May 5, the day the custom of Dragon Boat Festival is a family mo_a grass, pomegranate flowers, garlic, rowing.
Home is the holiday, we get up early in the morning, bath, wash a mo_a grass.
I most like the Dragon Boat Festival!
再过几天就是端午节了。
你知道端午节的有来吗?我知道,为了纪念伍子廉,他的父兄被楚王所杀,之后他去吴国挖墓,楚王知道了他赐剑死了他将尸体投入大江,这天5月5日端午节的习俗是个家插艾草,石榴花,蒜头,划龙舟。
我们家是这样过节的,一大早起床,洗一个艾草澡。
我最喜欢过端午节了!
篇3:小学生春节
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+ 加入清单春节有着吃团圆饭的习俗,而团圆饭里的菜式更是各种各样,十分美味。
每一年的春节我都十分期待吃团圆饭。因为吃的不仅仅是美味,还是一家人的关心和祝福。今年团圆饭的主角是大龙虾。奶奶亲自去买了三只龙虾回来。而我,就开启了观察龙虾之旅。龙虾十分可爱,又大又圆的眼珠,像两颗乌黑的宝石。龙虾的触角特别长,而且还很细。红白相间的触角配上一双机灵的眼睛,看起来十分神气。在触角的旁边还长着一对锋利的角尖,尖尖的和神话里的龙角有几分相似。我想:龙虾之所以叫作龙虾就是因为它的外表吧。头部的后面就是龙虾的上半身了,这里无疑是龙虾最危险的地方了。上面布满了密密麻麻的刺,那些刺在龙虾的身体上凸起来,所以十分明显。再往下就是龙虾的下半身了。它的下半身是一段一段的,上面还布满了白色的斑点。而龙虾身体的最后一部分就是尾巴了。它的尾巴就像扇子一样能往外伸展开,也能合起来。
当然,龙虾最诱人的地方不是它的外表,而是它的美味。奶奶才刚把龙虾买回来,妈妈就把龙虾给洗了。然后用刀切开从头到尾切开两半,放到锅里蒸,蒸到九分熟的时候开始炒蒜子油。蒸好后从锅里拿出来,淋上一层香喷喷的蒜子油,蒜子油淋到龙虾身上“滋滋”响,冒出一阵阵的白烟和香味。待龙虾不太烫的时候夹了一块肉试试味道,那肉质又白又嫩又结实,咬上一口,简直太美味了。
龙虾,春节美食中的佳选。
篇4:关于春节小学生作文600字集合
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+ 加入清单春节又称大年初一,是我国最隆重的节日。在那天,人们载歌载舞,尽情欢呼,什么耍龙灯。扭秧歌。放鞭炮等等等等,好不热闹——题记
节前
春节这股暖风即将吹来,这时家家户户都搞起了“装修运动”。所谓“装修运动”不过是把家里打扮一下,好迎接春节。啊!还听不懂?“装修运动”就是贴春联。福字。门神等。看着邻居家“装修”得花花绿绿,我们家不甘示弱,也开始了“装修”。老天帮我们,他派风来帮忙。一会儿他来“贴”对联;一会儿“拿”胶水帮助我们;一会儿她又来“捉”横披······几经周折,“装修运动”走算是结束了。走进我家一看,大脑里的词语都净化了,只剩下一个字:红。
节时
“噼哩啪啦,噼哩啪啦。”我被一阵阵莫名奇妙的声音惊醒了,开始我还以为是闹钟,心想:“今天怎么试这铃!”睁眼才反应过来,今天是春节,那声音是烟花爆竹声。吃完早饭,我和弟弟就迫不及待的起程了。去干什么?当然是去拜年了!说一句辞旧迎新的吉利话,还会有不小的“收获”呢!“我长大了,压岁钱不要了!”见一位阿姨要给我钱,我连忙表示不要了。哪知他却说:“长大啦?好呀!再来100元!”春节这天,家家户户披红挂绿;“噼哩啪啦,噼哩啪啦”烟花爆竹声不断;节目也开始啦!今天的空气中除了节味儿,就是年味儿!
节后
春节这股暖风来得快,走得也快。春节虽然已过,但余波仍然存在。节时
篇5:春节抗击疫情小学
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+ 加入清单每个事物,都有它的背影,就像自己的影子一样,有大有小,独一无二。让我最感动的是2020年这群最美逆行者的背影。
新的一年来了,以往的新年是缤纷的,是热闹的,更是喜悦的……大街小巷张灯结彩、喜气洋洋,每个角落都有人们的欢声笑语。然而,2020年的春节却迎来了来势汹汹的“肺炎疫情”,让这个年过得很不一样,大街上冷冷清清,昔日车水马龙的地方人烟稀少,大家被这该死的病毒弄得人心惶惶,就在大家都不敢出门时,有这群人义无反顾地离开家人,踏上病毒始发地武汉,他们明知很危险,但还是为人民
安全而战。冲到一线,不畏艰难,他们就是白衣天使,是抗病毒路上的最美逆行者,我和妈妈每天都会关注疫情的新闻,感染的人越来越多,看着心里很难过,每当看到白衣天使们穿着七层防护服,在密不透风的隔离衣中,持续工作,才完成了一次次的抢救,正是你们争分夺秒的抢救,才挽救了一个又一个的生命,他们没有休息时间,因为他们一分钟都不能怠慢,看到他们的背影,让我看到了爱的伟大,爱的无疆,不仅仅是对生命的尊重,更是对所有人的一颗大爱之心。我们虽然帮不了他们什么,但也决不给他们添乱,少出门,勤洗手,多喝水做好个人卫生防护,鼠年让我看到不一样的背景,最勇敢的战士,向你们致敬!
希望这次灾难早点结束,祝所有的医护人员凯旋归来,你们是最棒的。中国加油!武汉加油!
篇6:春节小学生作文300字
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+ 加入清单我喜欢过春节,每到春节家家户户都会团聚在一起,还可以开开心心的玩,不过我还是最喜欢吃饺子。
要想吃饺子,就得先包饺子。
三十下午,买了饺子皮,剁好饺子馅,便开始包了。先把饺子皮放到手上,大的一头向上,小的一头往下,放上一点馅,从下往上,慢慢的卷起来,两头一捏,一个“金元宝”就闪亮登场了。
在即将要包好时,来了一位不速之客——高天旭。他可是我在老家的一个死对头呀!只是不知他老人家光临贵府有何事?他笑眯眯的说:”舅妈让我来叫你们去她家吃饺子。“他口中的舅妈是我的小奶奶,论辈分我们俩也不知道谁大,便一直是直呼姓名的。
妈妈说,”知道了。我们待会就去。“于是收拾收拾东西,便和高天旭一起去了。来到小奶奶这,小爷在沙发上玩着手机,小奶奶在厨房忙来忙去,见我们来了,连忙让我们进屋坐。进了屋子,大人们都坐在沙发上聊着天,孩子们都围在电视上看动画。多开心呀!
不一会,菜上了上来,饺子也出锅啦,小奶奶家的饺子是素馅的,不过也很好吃。沾点酱,稍微辣辣的,特别好吃。
饺子真好吃!春节真开心!
篇7:小学生英语
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+ 加入清单Class, I went to the yard. Snow was still falling. Then poured out in my mind a question: "What flavor is it snow?" I decided to try it. So, I Yong Shounie a little snow on the mouth, feeling icy cold, no smell, no flowers, primary composition Mid-Autumn Festival, not as covered as roses have thorns. I want to: What little snow you cold? I warm them! I catch them and put hands warmed. Yeah! Not a second disappeared, leaving only a small drop of water beads. Where they go? Sure, and I hide and seek!
To school, everywhere is the white one, the snow is still one child to jump from the sky. First of the big brothers and sisters are braving the cold, braving heavy snow snow yet. Behind them there was a curved path, junior high school English composition, we walked convenient, small writing on the National Day is not smooth, but they must be tired, very hard.
Home school. Ive made several small partner, the 60th anniversary of the English composition, went to the yard of snowmen, snowball fights. Hand froze red, do not care. Until my father told me to go home for dinner, I was reluctant to leave.
After dinner, I learned a while. Go to bed at nine oclock, and soon fell asleep. In the dream I dreamed has had a heavy snowfall, the children again and I make a snowman, snowball fights, skiing ... & hellip, Mid-Autumn Festival for the text;, play can be happy!
篇8:上网做英语假期作业小学作文
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+ 加入清单今天我上网做英语假期作业,我下定决心一定要得个满分给妈妈和爸爸看。
首先点击假期作业,开始玩“疯狂游戏机”啦,它的图案是一个马蜂,我想要是写错了肯定有一些马蜂来顶我吧!再点击一下,哦!原来游戏规则是:我们要按照电脑报出来的句子来按顺序点击它给你的单词。我心想这玩意儿可真难玩:有好几个重复的,而且还不好点击。后来我发现重复的当中,原来还有字首大小写的区别。掌握了这一点就很好玩了。几分钟,我就将它们一举攻下!最后数据给我了一个出人意料的成绩:114分。满分耶!呵呵!其实英语也不是那么难学,这种玩中学的方法我喜欢。你看,上面还有全班大爆料游戏,不用学,我就玩会了,但是同学已经把我爆料了77下啦!
网上作业就是好,同学最近状态,还有在班上你的成绩排第几,都能知道。而且不像其他的英语作业,枯燥无味,一点儿新鲜感都没有,还难把单词给记住。
我喜欢做网上作业!
篇9:小学作文快乐的春节
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+ 加入清单一年一度的春节马上就要来到,大家都忙着贴春联,每家都是喜气洋洋的气氛,很开心。大年二十九,我刚起床,妈妈就喊着让我和姐姐贴春联,我们在大门中央贴一个大大的福字,大门两边贴春联,上联是“福中生喜年年乐”下联是“富上添财岁岁欢”横批是“新春大吉”我们很快就贴好,我看着自己的劳动成果非常开心。
除夕早晨,我们穿上新衣服,就和姐姐去放鞭炮。一阵“噼里啪啦”的声音从我们耳朵里穿过,好像要把祝福送到千家万户,我们开心极。除夕夜晚,我们吃过晚饭,我就和爸爸妈妈和姐姐一起观看春节联欢晚会。那精彩的表演让我心情豁然开朗,有相声,有小品还有歌舞……非常好看。但我最喜欢小沈阳丫蛋赵本山还有老毕演的《不差钱》太好玩。
大年初一我刚起床,就发现枕头底下有压岁钱,姐姐也有,我们开心的笑,然后我们吃完饺子,就去奶奶家拜年,拜完后,爷爷奶奶,就给我们压岁钱,还把好吃的都拿出来,给我们吃,我们都非常开心。
我喜欢过年,过年真好。
篇10:小学英语自由的
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+ 加入清单New York is the first big city in America. It is the world’s commercial
center and there are many sites that attract people from all over the world to
take a visit. One of the famous sites is the Statue of Liberty. Everybody knows
this great site and it has become the symbol of New York.
The Statue of Liberty stands on an island of the New York City harbor. It
is the tallest building ever built. When people get there, they will see a woman
holding a torch of fire. In her feet, people can see the chains that are broken,
which means she gets away from the restrictions and chases for freedom. There is
a book on her right hand, which is the Declaration of Independence.
The complete name of this statue is Liberty Enlightening the World. It is
the present from French people to American people. The meaning of friendship and
freedom are shared by both countries. Today, the meaning of the Statue of
Liberty is shared by the world. People can feel the peace when they see this
image.
篇11:关于春节趣事的小学作文200字
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+ 加入清单令人期待的元宵节来到了。早晨清脆的噼里啪啦声将我从梦中吵醒,新的一天又来到了,这也是春节的最后一天,所以我们要好好珍惜这一天。元宵节必须要吃汤圆哦!白白胖胖又香又甜。
白天不断地有鞭炮声,我想每一个小孩都渴望夜晚到来,因为有许多烟花即将诞生。大街上早已人山人海,大家都兴致勃勃。黑色的天空顿时明亮起来,烟花如天女散花般柔润的洒落下来。
“妈妈,你看!那些星星会动!”这是一个大概5,6岁的小孩发出的声音。
这位妈妈笑着说;“傻孩子,这哪是什么星星呀!这是孔明灯。”我默默地对着孔明灯许下心愿。
叔叔突然神不知鬼不觉的出现在我的身旁,微笑着对我说:“过正月十五,我们也要放炮!”过了一阵我们也该回去了。元宵节晚会开始了,我们一家幸福的坐在一起。不知不觉中12点到了我慢慢的睡着了。脑海里浮现着那开心的一幕幕,这个春节已到此结束了。“砰!吃我一球!哈哈哈!”
篇12:小学六年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单Dear Sue,
How are you doing?
I am writing this letter to say "thank you." First and foremost, it is clear that you, just like "our foreign mother", were very patient to us. Additionally, needless to say, you taught me a lot, not only English knowledge but also your life wisdom;consequently, all of us have fallen in love with English and study. Last but certainly not least, there is no doubt that we had a great time together, which we will keep in mind forever.
By the way, I cant wait to tell you something new about my class. After you left for the America, we had an English competition. We all did very well, using the knowledge you told us. No one can deny you helped us so much!
Sue, can you give me some information about your life in America? I miss you so much. I am looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
篇13:2024年小学生春节满分日记300字
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+ 加入清单春节到,家家户户都挂上红红的灯笼,贴上对联,还把“福”字倒贴在门上,迎接新的一年。
早上,我起床穿好新衣服,去奶奶家拜年。
爸爸开着车子,窗外的美景真是绚丽多彩呀!不一会儿,就到奶奶家,我们把送给奶奶的礼品拿下来,提到奶奶家去。我跟奶奶说:“奶奶,祝你新年快乐!”奶奶也说:“新年快乐,真乖。”奶奶给我发大红包,里面放着好多压岁钱。我拿压岁钱,心里美滋滋的。
晚上,我们一边吃年夜饭,一边聊天。当指针指向十二点的时候,顿时人们欢呼起来,鞭炮声此起彼伏,绚丽多彩的烟花把漂亮的夜空照亮,有的像漂亮的花朵;有的像燃烧的火焰;还有的像飞流直下的瀑布……五颜六色,漂亮无比!
春节真快乐呀,我真希望每天都是春节呀!
篇14:小学4年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单16 April 2006
Dear Sir,
I am working on a new project which is called A Survey of New Industry in the Maywood District. According to the design of our district, we need information about firms that have recently moved into this area. Your firm is one of the largest of these, so I shall be very grateful if you can spare the time to help me.
Three points are specially important to the project. The first one is the training schemes for school leavers. The second one is about the transport arrangements to overcome poor road and rail links in this district. The third is the plans for expansion.
Any other information will be useful, but those points are the ones with which I most need your help.
I am enclosing an information form for you to fill in. I hope you can post it to us as soon as possible. I apologize for adding to your work with this request, but I do hope that you will feel able to assist me.
I would be most grateful for your favorable consideration of this request.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Spencer
篇15:过春节的小学作文400字
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+ 加入清单如果你想问我这个春节过得怎么样,我会毫不犹豫地回答:“这个春节我过得很快乐。”
春节前,我见家里人要带小孩要工作很不容易,于是我便自觉地为家人減轻负担,每天早上,我会到表姐的店铺中做买卖,如果没有客人光临店铺,我就会放一些悦耳动听的歌曲吸引客人们的眼光,除此之外,我还会将一些过年的祝福语写在包装袋上,这样,客人们看到祝福语时,大多会多买一些。当客人们和我说再见时,我总不忘对客人们说上一句:“谢谢您的光临。”这句话伟到了客人耳旁时,大多的客人会有第二次的到来,就这样,金钱们源源不断地流进了我的口袋里。
正因为我挣到了这么多的钱,全家人在春节那天晚上感觉很快乐。春节那天晚上,我用我自已挣来的钱让全家人在大酒店里尝到了春节的美味。全家人在酒店里没有一个不是喜笑颜开的。大家个个嘴里也都发出了赞叹:“这真是美味的食物啊!”晚饭过后,我得到了家人的赞美:“哇!真是太出乎意料了。真没想到,你这小小年纪,居然挣了这不少的钱,来请全家人吃一顿饭啊!”话音刚落,他们不禁对我竖起了大姆指。此时,又有谁的心里没有感到一股温暖呢?
在这个春节,我挣到很多我,学到了做生意的本领,让全家人饱餐一顿,这样的春节怎能叫人不快乐呢?
篇16:我的假期小学三年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单i’m going to the sun on my holiday. i will go there by a spaceship. i will take a big blue spaceship。then i’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. so i put on the super-shirt. in the morning, i will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
at eight o’clock, i will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. super dog is white and black. super girl is very clever. super girl and super dog like to play with me. so i play with them for forty minutes. then i do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. after my home work, i will have my lunch. i will eat sun salad. i will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. i will have red juice, red fish and red rice. all the things are red. then i need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. so i will walk to the spaceship. i’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
this is a good holiday on the sun.
篇17:小学生春节
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+ 加入清单日复一日,年复一年,今天又是除夕夜。家家户户贴春联挂灯笼,吃团圆年夜饭,小孩子们换新装、看烟花,热闹非凡!今天终于把这个重要的节日给盼来了!
早晨一起床,爷爷就去菜场买菜,奶奶在厨房里忙得热火朝天。我也没闲着,在一边帮忙打下手:帮奶奶擦桌子,帮爸爸贴春联,像个陀螺转个不停……
到了晚上,亲朋好友们络绎不绝地来我家拜年。在妈妈的鼓励下,我纷纷给在场的亲人拜了年:“祝爷爷奶奶们健康长寿、万事顺心;祝叔叔阿姨们鸡年行大运、开心每一天!”长辈们一个接一个把红包放在我手上,顿时我心里乐开了花……
“开饭了!”随着老爸一声喊,一大桌丰盛的饭菜上桌了,一股股浓香沁人心脾。大伙们举起酒杯庆祝起来,我肚子早就咕咕地叫个不停,赶紧大吃特吃起来。各色各样的菜蕴含了大家的美好心愿:香甜的八宝粥象征着我们的日子甜甜美美,雪菜黄鱼象征着年年有余,鱼圆肉圆祝愿大家团团圆圆,黄金春卷预示着春天即将来临……
酒足饭饱后,大伙们聚在电视机前开始欣赏年度大片——春节联欢晚会。我们欢声笑语,谈天说地,天南海北地聊开了……
“爆竹声中一岁除,春风送暖入屠苏。千门万户曈曈日,总把新桃换旧符。”我们迎来了新的一年,祝愿祖国繁荣昌盛,人民幸福安康!
篇18:小学作文关于春节习俗
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+ 加入清单春节的习俗有很多,其中一个就是拜年了,在新的一年里道一声祝福,送上自己就真挚的祝福。
大家都为自己的亲戚拜年,我也到爸爸的家乡去给太太拜年。太太口齿不清地说我也要给他的邻居——汪爷爷拜个年。汪爷爷没有了老伴儿,也没有了孩子。他的老伴儿因为生了重病不在了人世,在一次车祸中,它的女儿逝世了,只有一条忠诚的狗一直陪伴着他。从此以后,他不是一个人呆在家里,就是和狗狗说说话,即使他总是微笑地对人,但他的孤独和悲伤是我们体会不到的。
我和太太走到汪爷爷的家门前,轻轻地敲了一下门,汪爷爷开了门,看到了我太太,又看了看我,然后他笑了。我不好意思地对他说:“汪爷爷新年好!”汪爷爷笑了,太太也笑了。他和蔼地摸了摸我的头,对我说:“真是个懂事的好孩子!”他看着我,就像看到了他的女儿一样快乐。我悄悄递给了汪爷爷一张新年贺卡,转身走了。“那再见了汪爷爷!”我向他说。
拜年是春节的习俗,也是一个有意义的事情。
篇19:春节英语
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+ 加入清单will christmas replace the spring festival?
christmas arouses increasing attention year by year in china. christmas cards become popular with students. people hold christmas parties and exchange christmas girts. a lot or tv and radio programs about christmas are on. meanwhile the spring festival is less appealing (有吸引力的)to youngsters. thus some people wonder whether christmas will replace the spring festival.
this worry is fairly unnecessary. why ? one reason lies that christmas only affects christians,college students and joint-venture (合资企业)workers. another reason is that christmas is mostly celebrated in cities. few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exotic(带有异国情调的) festival. by contrast,the spring festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family.
i think,it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the west,a lot of western holidays have been gradually introduced into china. for us chinese we should never neglect or even discard our own traditional festivals. for centuries chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year. and we will treasure the spring festival forever.
篇20:春节小学生作文400字
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+ 加入清单今年春节我过得很快乐! 我们一大早就起来了,中午吃完饭后,大家一起包饺子。我想:包饺子简单,只要拿一块饺子皮,用勺子挖一勺肉,再包起来捏成花边就成功了。我想着想着,突然被一种声音打断了,那正是妈妈的叫声,她见我发呆了,想叫醒我。我几乎是抢着包,这是奶奶发话了:“你在包饺子吗?”我二丈和尚——摸不着头脑,疑惑不解的问:“你没看见吗?”这时妈妈说:”谁包的饺子谁吃。”我才注意到我包的饺子挺着将军肚,有的吃饱了撑着,有的已经破开了肚皮。在悄悄奶奶和妈妈的,一个个严正端庄,像一位位绅士,守护着庄园,我不好意思的笑了笑,接下来我包的那才叫做标准,下饺子了,我请求她们,放在一起下,妈妈笑了,说:“你这个大头鬼,闹你玩呢!”我才知道被骗了,哼!晚上我们吃饺子了,我的饺子破开了肚子我们除了吃饺子还尝到了很美味的饺子汤呢,在此我祝大家虎年快乐虎虎生威!
名师点评:文章讲述了自己和家人春节包饺子的经过,写得十分有趣,把家人之间那种和睦相处的情景表达了出来。“我几乎是抢着包,这是奶奶发话了”句中“这是”应为“这时”,前文所述自己正在发呆,而句中的“我几乎是抢着包”与前文意思融合得不够好。“我的饺子破开了肚子我们除了吃饺子还尝到了很美味的饺子汤呢”句中显然漏了一个逗号。