做自我介绍的作文英语（热门20篇）

October 1stis the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节，这是全国的共同节日。这一天是中华人民共和国开始的标志。在那天，全国到处都有很多庆祝活动，上至中央政府到普通老百姓。公共场所，包括大的广场和公园，都装饰成节日主题。近年，国庆节同样也是所有人都期待的短假黄金周。随着生活水平的提高，人们又更多的钱和渴望去旅游，黄金周对他们来说是一个很好的机会。除此之外，对于那些不想外出的人来说同样也是休息的好时机。因此，国庆节对中国人来说意味着很多。

[介绍国庆英语作文

Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend. We have already known each other for ten years. We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kindhearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help. I feel proud to have such a good friend.

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students.

As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her.

Miss Hou is a good teacher.

I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.

Education background

In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester, and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. In 1999, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test. I selected the Shanghai Jiao Tong University to continue my study for its best reputation on Combinatorial Optimization and Network Scheduling where my research interest lies.

At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year, I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.

Research experience and academic activity

When a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. In 1997, I participated in simulation tool development for the scheduling system in Prof. Wang’s lab. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab, I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. In 1998, I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.

In 1999, I joined the distinguished Professor Yu-Geng Xis research group aiming at Network flow problem solving and Heuristic algorithm research. Soon I was engaged in the FuDan Gene Database Design. My duty was to pick up the useful information among different kinds of gene matching format. Through the comparison and analysis for many heuristic algorithms, I introduced an improved evolutionary algorithm -- Multi-population Genetic Algorithm. By dividing a whole population into several sub-populations, this improved algorithm can effectively prevent GA from local convergence and promote various evolutionary orientations. It proved more efficiently than SGA in experiments, too. In the second semester, I joined the workshop-scheduling research in Shanghai Heavy Duty Tyre plant. The scheduling was designed for the rubber-making process that covered not only discrete but also continuous circumstances. To make a balance point between optimization quality and time cost, I proposed a Dynamic Layered Scheduling method based on hybrid Petri Nets. The practical application showed that the average makespan was shortened by a large scale. I also publicized two papers in core journals with this idea. Recently, I am doing research in the Composite Predict of the Electrical Power system assisted with the technology of Data Mining for Bao Steel. I try to combine the Decision Tree with Receding Optimization to provide a new solution for the Composite Predictive Problem. This project is now under construction.

[求职英语自我介绍

laba rice porridge contains glutinous rice (糯米), red beans, millet, chinese sorghum, peas, dried lotus seeds, red beans and some other ingredients, such as dried dates, chestnut meat, walnut meat, almond, peanut, etc. actually eight ingredients(配料、成分) are used, cooked with sugar to make the porridge tasty.

northerners prefer to use glutinous rice, red beans, dates, lotus seeds, dried pulp(果肉), walnuts (胡桃), pine nuts and other dried fruits in their porridge; southerners like a salty porridge prepared with rice, soybeans(大豆), peanuts, broad beans, taro, water chestnuts, walnuts, vegetables and diced meat. in the north, it is a dessert with sugar added; in the south, salt is put in. some people like to add cinnamon and other condiments to add flavor.

controlling the heat is of great importance in making laba porridge. at the start, the flame must be high, but the fire is then turned down to let the porridge simmer until it begins to emit a very delicious smell. the process is time-consuming but not complicated.

laba porridge is not only easy to prepare, but also a nutritious winter food because it contains amino acids, protein, vitamins and other nutrition people need. cooked nuts and dried fruit are good for soothing nerves, nourishing one

[介绍腊八节的英语作文

在过面试自我介绍这一关时，不管是中文版自我介绍还是英文自我介绍，在紧张的气氛中总会容易出现词语或语法错误的现象。以下有四篇面试英语自我介绍范文，可供参考。

面试英文自我介绍范文一：Im very glad to join in the interviw.First,let me introduce myself to you.My name is Lin YA Qian,Im 20 years old,I come from Zhe Jiang,and Im an outgoing girl,I like philosophy and sport.Oh yes,I hope that I can do something for the Beijing Olympics.If you give me the great chance,I wont let you disappoint.Ok,thats all.I hope that you are satisfied with me,thank you!

中文版：各位领导，给位招聘官，大家好！很高兴能参加这次面试，首先让我做个自我介绍，我叫林雅倩，今年21岁，来自浙江，曾经做过网管的工作，学到了很多东西。我是一个很活泼开朗的男孩，喜欢哲学和运动。这次北京举办奥运会，我很希望能做点什么，如果贵公司给我这个机会，我想我不会让你失望的。简单介绍到这，希望能我今天的表现能令您满意，谢谢！

面试英文自我介绍范文二：How are you, I call XX.This year is 22 years old.Graduate from XXXX college.The profession is a calculator multimedia.I am one is bright, optimism, there is the person of responsibility.A fondness for plays basketball, computer, listen to music, etc..Thankful your company gives me this the opportunity of the personal interview!

你好，我叫XX。今年22岁。毕业于XXXX学院。专业是计算机多媒体。我是一个开朗，乐观，有责任心的人。爱好打篮球，电脑，听音乐，等。感谢贵公司给我这次面试的机会！

面试英文自我介绍范文三：Dear Sir or Madame.

Hello ! I m XX ,I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company. I’m 22 years old and in good health. After graduation from XXXXa middle school, I have studied IT for many years. I am a better man.Do well in personal responsibility ,I am good at both operating a PC,I like palying basketball.computer and listening to the music.I’m interested in the position .

I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.

XXXX

面试英文自我介绍范文四：很高兴做自我介绍，我出生在辽宁，专业是国际贸易，毕业于南开大学，我的兴趣是音乐，读书，尤其是经济类的书。

很荣幸应聘贵公司，希望能在贵公司实现我的梦想，希望能给我一次机会，谢谢。

I am very happy to introduce myself here.I was born in Liaoning Province.I graduated from Nankai University and majored in International Trade. I like music and reaing books,especially economical books. It is my honor to apply this job. I hope I can realise my dream in our company.Please give me a chance.Thank you very much

it is my great pleasure to introduce myself.i was born in LIAONING. My major is international trade. I was graduated in Nankai University. My hobby lies in the music and reading, especially like economics.

i am glad that i can take part in this interview and i am sincerely hope that i can join this company to realize my dream. please give my a chance. Thank you.

[自我介绍英语小学生

Hello!My name is Liu Ya Min.I am a Chinese girl.I am fourteen.I am a middle

school student.Frankly speaking,Irene is not beautiful.I like autumn,the ground

is covered with fallen leaves.I like basketball,but I dislikes sports.I very

love sit in the sun.I like sduty,sing and shopping,too.I think I am a happy

girl.My family is not big.There are my parents,my two brother and I.Being the

eldest,I must look after my brothers.My desire was to become a writer.

导语：随着雾霾天气的增加，我们慢慢的开始关注环境保护话题了，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust, smoke and other dry particles ,and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment.

This kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources. Natural sources can include windblown dust, and soot from wildfires. Manmade sources can include motor vehicles, and industrial fuel burning, and manufacturing operations. The one of the main cause that touches off haze is manufacturing operations. Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution.

The components that make up haze may have negative effect on peoples health especially that of the children and the elderly. Also not excluded are those who have certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and lung disease. Workers working in the open air have a high risk in their health.

One of effective solutions to help eliminate haze is to make some chemistry changes during the manufacturing process,so it could reduce harmful emissions which are produced by manufacturing operations.

【参考译文】

霾是空气污染，它与灰尘、烟雾和其他干粒子混合在一起，使天空的清晰度模糊，与自然环境相互作用。

这种空气污染物来自各种自然和人为的来源。自然源包括风吹灰尘，煤烟，野火。人造资源可以包括汽车，工业燃料燃烧和制造业务。造成雾霾的主要原因之一是制造业经营。许多工厂过度测量产生的烟雾超过标准，烟雾严重影响空气成为空气污染。

构成雾霾的成分可能对人们的健康产生负面影响，尤其是儿童和老年人。也不排除那些有某些疾病，如哮喘，过敏，肺炎和肺部疾病。在户外工作的工人在健康方面有很高的风险。

帮助消除雾霾的有效方法之一是在制造过程中进行一些化学变化，从而减少制造过程中产生的有害排放物。

My name is xxxx yangang Yang west county from guangdong. This year, 20 years old, though, read the study in college, but not both outside and indignities! This year, learn the freshman year is architecture.

Half semester, I remember seem listen carefully to several classes, everything else is playing phone! Im kinda sick of my professional! I became more and more interested in economics, is one of the reasons it can let me soon. I have time to take the business model of study.

I now is guangzhou tianhe longdong fishing losartan guangdong engineering institute, just as its name implies, college. I dont imagine the school so beautiful, so the lifeless around! But here you also want to pack me back? Slowly accustomed to.

I this person is more like that is lively outgoing boy, but not very sunshine is eventually I not handsome. I like playing basketball, table tennis, running. In this special that basketball to say: I have one meter tall, thin eight, jumped up also can grab boards, so there are people that evening to play, but I dont technology is a problem, so I didnt win that brings pride! Each back always sweat! The sweat stream into his forehead, very afflictive. This is almost every time I play basketball.

I talk about my character. I was the stronger, can endure hardships. But my mind is that enough capacious, other mistakes. And I find myself light will say wont do, in many, but not always go out! I dont like the human who owe anybody, so I dont like others owe me one. QianZhaiHaiQian, help you help me back to you next time I wont help otherwise, I think so.

[自我介绍英语作文60词

Hello,everybody.大家好

My names(  ).我的名字叫（ ）

Im in Class( )Grade six of(  )school.我在（ ）学校6年级（）班级 Im tall(short).Im ( )centimeters.我很高（矮），我（）厘米。 I like English very much.我非常喜欢英语

Beacuse English is interesting.因为英语很有趣。

So my English is very good.所以，我的英语很好。

I acquire many award.我获得过很多奖项。

I hope that every of you will love me。希望大家能喜欢我。

As it is known to us all ,LuXun is a famous Chinese writer. He is not only a writer, thinker, but also the founder of Chinese Literature . He wrote many classic (经典的)novels and his stories, which are translated many languages, were made into film,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice,which deeply showed peoples suffering in the old days.

Because of his achievement to Chinese literature, Chairman Mao spoke highly of him. Besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high school and university. I think youll gain a lot from reading his works.

My name is Fang Yu, 11 years old this year, grade five.

I have long hair, thin eyebrows below the mosaic of a pair of glossy black eyes, slender figure. My hobbies are playing guzheng and painting. But my biggest hobby is reading and playing chess. Let me first talk about the book bar.

Books are an essential part of my life. I love reading, and sometimes Im crazy about it. Mom said I was a little bookworm. Once, I was reading a book, watching it, my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy sugar. I was seeing a joke and laughing. I later learned that my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy things, and I hurried to buy them. I bought a book again. Mother asked: How did you buy salt? I was so careless!

The next thing is to say chess. When I feel bored, I play chess with my brother. If a tie, I will come here again. If I win, I jump three feet high. If I lose, Ill go to the heart of my happy pet guzheng.

I should say my happy pet, I learned the guzheng for two and a half years, the play is good, the competition still won the two prize! Envy? Painting does not say.

Look at my self - introduction. Do you want to be a friend with me?

我叫方雨，今年11岁，上五年级。

我有长长的头发，细细的眉毛下面镶嵌着一双乌亮的眼睛，苗条的身材。我的爱好有弹古筝、画画。不过我最大的爱好是看书、下象棋。我先说说书吧。

书是我生活中必不可少的一部分。我爱看书，有时看的都着了迷。妈妈说我是个小书迷。有一次，我正在看书，看的津津有味，妈妈叫我下楼买糖，我正看到一段笑话，哈哈大笑。后来才知道妈妈叫我下楼买东西，我连忙去买。买回来我又去看书。妈妈问: 怎么买的是盐? 我真粗心呀!

下面该说象棋了，当我觉得无聊时，就和弟弟下棋。如果打成平局，我还要再来一次。要是我赢了，我一蹦三尺高。要是我输了，我就找我的快乐宠物古筝谈(弹)心去了。

该说我的快乐宠物了，我学古筝两年半，弹的还不错，比赛中还得了二等奖呢!羡慕吗?画画就不说了。

看了我的自我介绍，你想和我成为朋友吗?

Lei Feng was a model soldier， On December 1 8，1940， he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province. He didnt go to school till 1950. At the age of 18， he worked as a steel worker. He was often praised for his good job. On January 8， 1960， he joined the army. In the same year， he joined the Communist Party. He loved the Party and the people， and constantly did good for others. As a result， he became a model soldier. After his death， Chairman Mao called on the people to "Learn from Comrade Lei Feng". The whole nation were moved by his deeds. Lei Fengs spirit will live in our hearts forever.

雷锋雷锋是一名优秀士兵，1940年12月18日出生于湖南省一个小山村的贫困农民家庭里，他1950年才上学，18岁时做了一名炼钢工人，因工作好而经常受到嘉奖。1960年1月8日参军，同年加入中国共产党，他爱党爱民，经常做好事，所以他被评为优秀战士。

雷锋死后，毛主席号召。人民“向雷锋同志学习”，他的事迹感动了全国人民。雷锋精神将永远活在我们心中。

Every year on the fourth ThursDayof November is Thanksgiving Day. It’s a festival for American and Canadian with the purpose of thanks for harvest. While canadians celebrate on the second Monday of October. I have a penfriend in America. He wrote to me his Thanksgiving Day last year. He told me that it was a time for family reunion. Families would come back home to celebrate the festival together. Most of the time it was his mother who prepared the dinner. Turkey is must for the festival. It looks like huge chicken. His mother also made pumpkin pie and many other delicious food for them. After the dinner, they talked with each other with the old thing or the future plan. He said sometimes they would invite some friends to share the happiness of Thanksgiving Day. In a word, he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

每年十一月的第四个星期四是感恩节。这是美国和加拿大为了感谢丰收的节日。但是加拿大人却是在十月的第二个星期一庆祝。我在美国有一个笔友。他写信告诉我他去年感恩节的情况。他告诉我那是家庭团聚的时间。家人们都会回家庆祝节日。大多数时候，是他的母亲准备晚餐。火鸡是节日的必需品。它看起来像一只巨型鸡。他的母亲也做了南瓜派和许多其他美味的食物给他们。晚饭过后，他们会互相谈论过去的事或未来计划。他说有时候他们也会邀请一些朋友来一起分享感恩节快乐。总之，他在感恩节过得很开心。

Chengdu City Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan province in China, has been recognized as “the land of abundance” for a long time. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China. People who once step onto the land of Chengdu city will quickly fall in love with life there. It seems that Chengdu people are living a happy life with less pressure from their occupation, family or from the conflict social competition. Children, for example, can enjoy the child-only facilities in the parks. They can play with peers and make friends with each other. For teenagers and adults, the various entertainment places and snack streets are indispensable part of their life. The old in Chengdu can also sit in a teahouse with a cup of tea after dinner and gossip their family. The pace of life in Chengdu is slower than in other big cities. People tend to spend more time and efforts to create and experience happiness.

Chengdu is a city where one comes and doesn’t want to leave. There are many famous scenic spots such as Jingli, Kuanzai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. In Chengdu, one can not only enjoy shopping in Tianfu square, walking on the ancient streets and buy souvenirs in traditional houses or stores on Jingli and Kuangzai Street, but also play with cute pandas and help feed their cubs in the Panda Base. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide a newcomer with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture.

Presentation Hello! This is xxx! My English name is xxx. You can call me xxx! Training experience I am a student just graduated from xxx in early July. I was major in xxx which was mainly applied in Hardware. But i am interested in software programming! So I participated in the training of Mainframe in ITMS in May. Through the learning of the basic knowledge of mainframe, which contained TSO，JCL，VSAM，COBOL，Db2 and CICS, , I mainly mastered the basic theory of Mainframe. Through the training of programming and practicing on the computer, i can do the basic mainframe application development. I also took part in the soft skill classes which contained many topics about how to be a good team member , effective manner of presentation, communication and negotiation, how to finance your salary properly, how to set your life target and make plans to achieve effectively and so on. Project experience At the end of the training, I participated in the application development for the basic banking operation. The system contained the saving account and fixed deposit operation, transferring between two accounts, interest calculation, cheque operation and loan operation management. The project was done by three persons。

We mainly made use of the language COBOL, DB2, VSAM, JCL etc and programming technique skills. I took charge of the simulation, programming and testing of the interest calculation of fixed deposit, cheque operation management. The structure of the program was: the main part was structured by COBOL sentences embedded with SQL sentence, which dealed with the VSAM file and the table of database. Personal quality Firstly I am an easy-going person. Because I prefer sharing my opinions and feelings with my friends and partners. So I also like cooperating with others to accomplish a hard task. And I think team spirit can help you to succeed. Secondly I am a frank person. Because I think honesty is the most important quality every person in modern society. It will make you popular and trusted by partners. Thirdly I am a brilliant one. Because I am good at information collection, data analyzing and structure designing. I am eager to challenge new situation and learn new knowledge.

Teachers Day

The Teachers Day will come soon.At first,I want to extend my greeting and best wishes to my dear teachers.

I still remember the year when I failed the collage entrance exmination.Iwas feeling lost,and no idea about what my life is going to be.My teachet came to me,and she said she understand how I felt inside now.She also told me its very common that students who are like me will go though a hard time. She told me that failure was a part of life, which was not the end but a new beginning. And she encouraged me to go back to the school to start a new. I was convinced in the end and decided to give another try.

Now Ive graduated from collage and got a very good job.I know all my success owns to my kind teacher. Ill work harder and never give up again.

Autumn girl walked the silent footsteps, the beautiful autumn to the world.

She waved a magic wand, the green rice fields into a golden. Far from the field, the field like a golden carpet; field, the channel side, a small river, that tree green cypress, is embroidered on the carpet on the green side; ridge, grass, grow all kinds of Colorful flowers, is embedded in the carpet on the color of pearls. The cool autumn wind blowing, blowing on the rice, the rice thrown the golden waves; blowing in the trees, leaves fluttering leisurely fall, like butterflies dancing in the fields. I stand on the ridge, you listen, the wind blowing rice "rustling" sound, between the grass, the insects "tweeted" sound, the branches, the birds "grumble" sound, with our childrens laughter Sound, merged into a ensemble; like a symphony, played the harvest of the movement.

I love autumn, more love the field of autumn. Because she is full of joy, full of hope, full of vitality.

Good morning/afternoon teachers and classmates.Im XXX.I am a girl of 13.My family including my father,mother and me.I like basketball best.In addition,I also like table tennis.My favorite food is carrots.Im also very interested in snacks.What,Im good at computer.Using the computer E-mail,shopping and even solve my problems in the study and the life is so convenient.So I put my computer as my good helper.As for reading,Ive read about magic novel.Are these.Nice to meet you!I sincerely hope to make friends with you.

老师同学早上/下午好.我是XXX.我现年13岁.我的家庭包括我爸爸,妈妈和我.我最喜欢篮球.除此以外,我也喜欢乒乓球.我最喜欢的食物是胡萝卜.我也对小吃很感兴趣.还有什么,我很擅长电脑.用电脑发邮件、购物甚至是解决我学习和生活中的问题是如此的方便.所以我把我的电脑视为我的好帮手.至于阅读,我以前读过一些关于魔法的小说.就这些.很高兴认识你们!我真诚地希望与你们做朋友.

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

Hello, My name is Gu Siyao. My English name is Hellen. I am 12 years old. I form Xiouzhou Experimental Shool. I love my school. Because my school is very beautiful and big .The trees are green and the sky is blue. The classes are interesting and exciting. The teachers are not strict. And the students are very lovely. They always help each other.