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初中英语说明文思维导图(精彩20篇)

为什么要创新?古人说得好:“流水不腐,户枢不蠹。”只有求新求变,事物才会有生命力,太阳每天都是新的,于是我们不能抱死昨天的眼光来看待今天和明天。在日新月异的社会中,抱残守缺就意味着失败。只有不断采用新方法、新技术,不断地有新发明、新创造,不断地产生新成果,我们的事业才能兴旺发达。这里给大家分享一些关于创新的话题作文初中,供大家学习。

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初中英语作文大全

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I was born on March 15, 2002. So March 15 is my birthday. I began to give a

birthday party in . Later on I have my birthday party every year.Last Saturday I

had my birthday party at home. A few of my friends came to my party. Everyone

bought me a birthday present, and they all said, "Happy birthday to you." Then I

said "Thank you very much for giving me the birthday presents."On my birthday,

my mother made my birthday cake and cooked some delicious food. My friends

helped me to put the candles on the big cake. Then we began the party.I had a

good time that day. We sang and played games, and ate delicious food. How happy

I was!

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篇1:初中英语作文:我的梦想

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Have you ever had a dream about your splendid future or imagined something ueal but interesting or meaningfulTell your closet friend about it now. My Dream I have a dream that I am always young. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover, I dont have to worry about the old age during which I even cant take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However, I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time, enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.

我有一个梦想就是我永远年轻,然后我就会有足够的精力去做我想做的事情,而且,我就不会因年老无法照顾自己而忧虑。我深知我的梦想不会实现。然而,我很幸运,现在我很年轻。 因此,我一定要珍惜青春好时光,享受生活,并且尽最大努力把每件事情做好。

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篇2:初中描写秋天景色的英语作文

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到了秋天,桂花树上的桂花都开了,让老远的人们都能闻到那醉人的香味。下面语文迷网为大家整理了秋景的英语作文,欢迎参考选择。

描写秋天景色的英语作文1

When the trees start to fall, the grass begins to wear clothes. Mysterious, changeful autumn. It permeates every place in the school as an invisible air, which makes people look like a magic magician. Let the tree brother and the younger brother of the grass are put on a comfortable autumn outfit. The autumn sky, as blue as the sea, like rain washed. The fall of earth, like golden cotton, white clouds like a sailing canoe, slowly floating, campus of chrysanthemum fragrance accents full autumn mood. Autumn has come, it seems that with a chill, people began to put on a slightly thicker autumn, although autumn brings great changes to us, but the faces of the people ocean any overflow the eternal, lingering smile. Into the campus, came to our playground, the playground is a row of the south side of the old willow, they are so tall and straight, strong. As the soldiers like to defend territory. A breeze blowing, with the aroma of chrysanthemum to gladdening the heart and refreshing the mind, refreshed, so that the campus do not have a charm. Into the teaching building, and through the doors and windows of the classroom can see hard learning and strenuous efforts of the students some homework, some in reading, the intoxicating reading sound echoed over the campus. It is often said that autumn is the harvest season, farmers uncle busy for the rice harvest, and we also not to be outdone, harvest every day the teacher to teach us knowledge. The golden autumn, will our campus decorated so beautiful.

当树开始掉头发,草开始穿衣服的时候。神秘莫测、变幻多端的秋来了。它像无形的空气一样渗透在学校的每一个地方、让人看的见,摸不着就好比一位神奇的魔术师一样。让树哥哥和草弟弟都穿上了舒适的秋装。

秋天的天空,像大海一样湛蓝,好像用秋雨洗刷过。秋天的大地,宛如金色的棉田,朵朵白云犹如扬帆起航的轻舟,慢悠悠地漂浮,校园里的菊花争香斗艳充满了秋高气爽的情调。 秋天来了,似乎带有阵阵寒意,人们开始穿上微厚的秋装,虽然秋天给我们带来巨大的变化,但是人们的脸上任洋溢着那永恒的、挥之不去的一笑。

进入校园,来到我们的操场,操场南面是一排经历沧桑的老柳树,它们是那么挺拔,强壮。好像保卫疆土的士兵一样。一阵微风吹来,带着菊花的香气沁人心脾,使人神清气爽,使校园别有一番风韵。走进教学楼,透过教室门窗可以看见勤奋学习、发奋努力的同学们,有的在写作业、有的在读书,那令人陶醉的读书声回荡在校园上空。

人们常说秋天是丰收的季节,农民伯伯忙着收稻谷,而我们也不甘示弱,收获着每天老师传授给我们的知识。

金色的秋天,将我们的校园点缀的如此美丽。

描写秋天景色的英语作文2

Do not know how long the effect, as if the fight was a nervous gradually revealing the known, the field from its broad chest in long plume from the atmosphere on the slopes and there is water ongenerally spread at the Qingming, round trees and crops have begun to sway in the breeze, the leaves become calm and. Dew back in the early morning and evening wetting the ridge, quietly put up the field. Lu Lan also came upquietly afloat, no longer go back to the valley. Although the sun is still bright, but the pain is no longer the backbone of Sunburn people become, Kiyosumi, as if it was weak, and can not be distilled into a field, it is the field of reconciliation and the like; ... ... Autumn is here!

不知道从多久起,仿佛一场紧张的拼搏终于渐渐地透出了分晓,田野从它宽阔的胸膛里透过来一缕悠悠的气息,斜坡上和坝子上有如水一般的清明在散开,四下里的树木和庄稼也开始在微风里摇曳,树叶变得从容而宽余。露水回来了,在清晨和傍晚润湿了田埂,悄悄地挂上田间。露岚也来到了坝子上,静静地浮着,不再回到山谷里去。阳光虽然依旧明亮,却不再痛炙人的脊梁,变得宽怀、清澄,仿佛它终于乏力了,不能蒸融田野了,也就和田野和解了似的;……秋天来了!

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篇3:面食之乡——山西_初中生说明文600字

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中国山西省是我的家乡,这个地方的饮食,名居,节日与其他省有一些相同之处,但他有自己独特的民风民俗。我热爱这片土地。所以,我要从生活中发现我们山西人独特的民风民俗。而山西的面食在山西人的生活中必不可少。 山西最有特色的饮食就是面食。我们一天三餐都能看到面食的影子。山西省这块土地上生活了第一批中国人。他们是农耕文明的创造者,所以这里盛产面食。人们也就习惯了天天吃面食。面食对山西人来说很重要。

面食是指什么呢?面食可不仅仅是只各式各样的面条,山西的面食都比较稀奇古怪。我天天吃的有“猫耳朵”“揪片”“擦疙斗”“蘸片子”。还有好多我也叫不上来却常吃的面食呢!“猫耳朵”是双手配合用特殊方法做成的,长得像猫的耳朵。吃的方法很多,可以蘸调料吃,也可以倒上各种汤,当面条吃。“揪片”是扁正方形的,做这个也需要技巧,是用一大块面揪成小块煮着吃的。“擦疙斗”是用一种特殊工具组成的,妈妈管他叫“擦子”,“擦子”像一个布满小洞的铁板。“蘸片子”倒不那么神秘,就是包着茄子的面皮。 其实,面食中最重要的,还是面条,面条的种类有很多,其中,最具有山西特色的是刀削面,刀削面的味道在我心中最香。不论什么汤和什么调料,只要和刀削面配在一起,都是那么好吃。我最爱吃的是西红柿鸡蛋刀削面,很容易做,刀削面吃在嘴里都是那么香,还要用力咬,因为刀削面在嘴里会滑动,一碗面下肚,身上冒着热汗,在夏天更是畅快淋漓。所以,我特别喜欢刀削面。

山西的面食还有很多很多,面食,已经成为了山西人生活中必不可少的一部分,这就是山西的一个特色,吃面食,就是山西的民风民俗。

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篇4:英语句型改写初中英语改写句子练习

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1.IgaveTomthebook.//

2.Heboughthismothersomeflowers.//

3.Thebridgewasbuiltbyworkerslastyear.//

4.Wehavetofinishtheworktoday.//5.Hewilldohishomeworktomorrow.//

6.Wecleantheroomseveryday.//7.Thewriterspent3yearsonthebook.//

8.Itisabookwithalotofbeautifulpictures.//

9.Thebooksoldverywellduringthefirstweek.//firstweek.

10.Marywastheonlyoneintheoffice.//

11.Shefinishedherworkat10o’clock.//Shedidn’12.Shehadtotakeataxihomebecauseitwastoolate.

13.LizaandMikearrivedattheGreatWallintwohours.

14.Theywerehappytogettothetop.//

15.TheyenjoyedthemselvesontheGreatWall.//

16.ThepostmansentSusanandTommyapaperbox.

17.Theyopeneditandfoundapresentfromtheirfriend.

18.Theybothlikedthepresentandfeltveryhappy.

19.Alicedidn’tfeelwelltoday,soshewenttothehospital.

20.Thedoctoraskedhersomequestions.//

21.Thedoctordidn’tgiveheranymedicineintheend.

(全真1)

1.ThecapitalAirporthasbeeninusefor20years.//

2.ThecapitalAirportisthelargestoneinChina.//

3.Ihavenevertakenaplane.MyfriendLiPing,either.//

(全真2)

1.Fathergave$20formetobuysomebooks.//

2.IwasexcitedwhenIsawsomanygoodbooksinthebookstore.

3.ButsomebookswouldcostmorethanIhave.//

ButIdidn’//(全真3)

1.ManyChinesefriendswenttotheparty.2.Tonywasgivenalotofpresentsbyhisfriends.//Tony’

3.SeeinghisChineseteacheratthepartymadeTonyveryhappy.//(全真4)

1.Iwanttoeatsomething.//2.Therefrigeratorisempty.//3.Bobspentfifteenyuanonthehamburger.///(全真5)

1.Mr.Wangdoesn’tworkinthatfactoryanylonger.//

2.Mr.Wanglefthomeearlierinordertocatchthebus.3.Mr.Wangfindsitnoteasytogetalongwiththatyoungguy.//(专家1)

1.Manypeoplewentshoppingyesterday.

2.Janespent4hourstobuyNewyeargifts.//

3.Shewassotiredthatshecouldn’twalkanylonger.//

(专家2)

1.Myfriendssaidtome,“Areyoufree?”

2.Shewantedmetogoshoppingwithher.

3.Shethinksitapleasuretogoshoppingwithafriend.

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篇5:关于初中说明文作文400字:西瓜

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“看起来是绿色,吃进去是红色,吐出来是黑色。”你知道它是什么吗?让我来告诉你吧!它就是人见人爱的小西瓜

西瓜对绿有独衷,所以它总是披着一件绿色的外衣,那纵横交错的墨绿色的花纹,像是一位了不起的丹青能手绘上去的,美丽极了。

西瓜圆圆的,像一个足球,但你千万不要踢它,否则它就会皮开肉绽,粉身碎骨的。买来一个西瓜,用手指弹一弹,如果发出“砰砰”的响声,就知道西瓜已经熟了切开西瓜,那丰满的果肉足以让你垂涎三尺,轻轻咬上一口,你的嘴唇上,舌头上同时染满了鲜红的汁水,那甜甜的滋味,沁人心脾,叫人越吃越想吃。有时候,我不知不觉的就吃多了,妈妈指着我圆圆的肚子说:“哎呀,西瓜跑进你的肚子里去了!”

你可别小看了这小小的西瓜,它的作用可多了。夏天,西瓜可以解暑,吃完西瓜,你千万不要将它的皮扔了,它还是餐桌上的一碗好菜呢!每次吃完西瓜,妈妈总是将残留的薄薄一层红瓤去,然后将它切成丝,将其盛在碟内,撒上细糖,放在冰箱里冰上三到五分钟,看上去,就像一块块晶莹的翡翠。那小小的黑色瓜籽,你也不要忽视了它,把它洗干净,在阳光下晒干了炒着吃,那个滋味呀,香喷喷,好吃看得见!

这皮薄如纸,汁多如泉,味甜如蜜的西瓜呀,真是人见人爱!

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篇6:初中英语位好朋友附中文

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迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时,他就来到我身边。一天放学了,我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩,他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是优秀作文 ,患难朋友才是真正的朋友。

Mike is my good friend. Any time I need help, he will come to me. One day after school, I had to stay and clean the classroom with Group Three. But they were still playing outside without any sign to go back. So Mike came and helped me clean the floor. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

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篇7:初中英语作文:分数并不等于知识

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“Score is not equal to knowledge,” my head teacher always keeps telling me this, because he wants us to master all the knowledge we need to understand. I do not put his word in mind, because in my heart, score comes the first.

One day, chemistry teacher taught us some knowledge and then asked us to finish a paper test.

Whoever passed the text can do the experiment. I got a high mark by guessing.

I was very happy, but tragedy happened. I made a small explosion by not mastering the knowledge. I was scared and finally understood the sentence,” Score is not Equal to Knowledge.”

分数并不等于知识,”班主任对我说,因为他希望我们能够掌握所有需要了解的知识。我并没有把他的话放心上,因为我觉得分数是最重要的。有一天,老师教了我们一些知识,然后就让我们考试。只要通过了考试才能去做实验。我瞎猜猜得了很高分。我很高兴,但是悲剧也就发生了。因为知识不牢固而导致了一个小爆炸。我被吓到了,也终于明白了那句话,“分数并不等于知识。”

[初中英语作文:分数并不等于知识

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篇8:初中英语作文有翻译

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According to the report that most children in the family don’t have to the housework, because their parents have done all the work for them. When students go to middle school, it means they are not the little girls and little boys anymore, they have grown up and it is time for them to learn to be independent. Doing the housework and reducing the parents’ burden help the children to be mature, what’s more, the parents should not overprotect their kids all the time, they can give some jobs to the children and lead them to be independent. Doing the housework is not a big deal, but it is the attitude to life.

据报道,大多数孩子在家里不用做家务,因为他们的父母为他们做了所有的工作。当学生进入中学,这意味着他们不是小女孩和小男孩,他们已经长大了,是时候让他们学会独立。做家务和减少父母的负担帮助孩子成熟,更重要的是,父母不应该过度保护他们的孩子,他们可以给孩子们一些工作,让他们独立。做家务不是一个大问题,但它是一种对生活的态度。

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篇9:干净的水TheCleanWater初中英语作文

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When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we don’t take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。

[干净的水 The Clean Water初中英语作文

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篇10:描写鲸鱼的初中英语作文

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Nowadays,the whales is in danger.Because many countries kill them for different use,they are dying out.To protect our earth and ocean,especially the diversity of creatures.we must realize that we should take effective measures to protect them.If the whales died out,it would have an important influence on other animals in the sea.Also,the environment will be changed.I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!

如今,鲸鱼是处于危险之中。因为许多国家杀死他们不同的使用,它们灭绝。为了保护我们的地球和海洋,特别是生物的多样性。我们必须意识到我们应该采取有效措施去保护他们。如果鲸鱼灭绝了,它会对其他动物产生重要的影响。此外,环境将被改变。我真诚地希望我们可以使我们的努力拯救他们!

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篇11:初中英语作文:最佳的目标

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I remember once upon a time, when I was running 800meters, I felt there seemed to be the impossible mission for me, I wanted to give up, then my teacher told me that I should not think about the 800meters, I should set up 100meters for myself, then I wouldn’t be so tired.

I did as he told me, indeed, every time when I finished the small goal, I was happy, in the end, I finished the running. I learn the lesson that we need to set up the best goal, it means we can make the small goals, which are so easy for us to realize.

Then every time we finish the small goal, we will close to our final destination.

我记得有一次,当我跑800米的时候,我觉得这对于我来说是不可能的任务,我想要放弃,然后我的老师告诉我不应该想着800米,我应该为自己定下100米的目标,这样才不会那么累。我按他说的去做,每次我完成了小目标,我就很开心,最后,我完成了跑步。我学到了东西,我们需要定下最佳的目标,这意味着我们可以定下小目标,对我们来说容易实现。每次我完成了小目标,就会离最终的目的地近了一步。

[初中英语作文:最佳的目标

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篇12:初分享中英语作文:MyNewHome

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初中英语作文:My New Home

My New Home

My family used to live in an old house. I.uckily, we moved into a new high-rise building in Pudong last month. the house is much larger and brighter than the old one. It has three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a sitting room, a kitchen and a big balcony. I'm so happy that I have my own bedroom now. In front of the building, there's a big garden. there're many tall trees and beautiful flowers in it. In the afternoon, many children like to play games there. In the morning, you can see many old

people doing exercise.

I like my new home.

[初分享中英语作文:My New Home

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篇13:儿童节初中英语作文

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Childrens day is coming. I decided to do many things on that day.

First of all. That day we will get up early, came to the school, because we now is a junior high school student, so the school wont for us as the primary that give us after 61, although just top junior high school of time, but a little habits, half year after will probably already accustomed to junior middle school life. 61 will be here soon, and now we are facing tests sports add try. Also is in the June 1 day, I hope we can take an examination of teenager years is a good grades.

[儿童节初中英语作文

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篇14:我最好的朋友初中英语作文及翻译

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请以 My Best Friend 为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。 My Best Friend 我最好的朋友My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home toget

请以“My Best Friend为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

My Best Friend

我最好的朋友

My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study.

我最好的朋友是我的一个同班同学,她的名字叫玛丽。我们每天一起上学,一起回家。我们经常互相帮助,并向对方学习。

We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very good girl. We will be good friends forever.

我们有着相同的爱好——集邮。她有很多漂亮的邮票,并为此十分自豪。有时,她会把其中的一些邮票给我。我认为她是个非常好的女孩。我们会成为永远的朋友。

点评:这是一篇记人的叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁,接着通过事例交代了为什么“我们是最好的朋友”。最后阐述了主题。

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篇15:2024年英语说明文写作技巧

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英语说明文写作技巧说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的,如:自然环境,仪表设备等;也可以是抽象的,如概念定律等。

说明文的写作相对于论说文来说,有一定的套路可循,因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然,随着对象的不同,具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。

说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点:

1.语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,避免夸张华丽的辞藻,要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。

2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多,但不能喧宾夺主。

3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚,脉络明晰。因此,练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作,找出最合理的一种。

4.由于说明文写实性较强,有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此,可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段,来增加文章的色彩。

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篇16:我的暑假初中英语

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I had a joyful summer vacation。 During the holidays, I traveled with my families。 We went to Beijing and stayed there for four days。 We lived in the hotel。 It is very beautiful。 We visited to the Tiananmen Square, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace and the Old Summer Palace。 We also went to the Great Wall。 The weather was very hot, but we were exciting。 I like Beijing very much。 I hope I can go there again。

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篇17:初中英语满分

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Computer has been part of our life. We use it to work or to keep in touch

with our friends. Computer provides people a way to recognize the world and

share resources. For teenagers, they are so crazy about computer games. There

always news reports teenagers playing computer games for a long time. Some

people blame the company to create online games, while others criticize the

school for not educating children well. Actually, parents have much

responsibility to teach their children the danger of playing online game too

much. Whats more, not every child overuses computer, so it depends on their

behavior.

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篇18:初中英语作文:初中生活

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Before I entered the middle school, I felt so worried about the life in middle school, because my cousin told me that I would have to compete with so many excellent students.

Now I get used to the life, I learn many subjects from Monday to Friday.

Though I always meet the difficulties in learning the new knowledge, I get help from my teachers and classmates.

I am not afraid of the middle school life again, I am so excited to learn new things every day.

In the future days, I will meet many challenges, I believe I can get over them. Life in middle school has happiness and sorrow, they fulfill my life.

在我进入初中以前,我很担忧初中的生活,因为我的表姐告诉我我将要和很多优秀的学生进行竞争。如今我适应了初中生活,我从周一到周五学习很多科目。虽然我总是在学习新知识时遇到困难,但是我得到了老师和同学的帮助。我不再害怕初中生活了,我对于每天学到新知识感到兴奋。在将来的日子里,我将会遇到很多困难,我相信我能克服他们。初中的生活有快乐也有忧伤,它们充实了我的生活。

[初中英语作文:初中生活

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篇19:初中说明文的写作方法及作用

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一、抓住事物特征,把握说明中心

任何事物都有其自身的特征,它是区别于其他事物的标志。写说明文时只有抓住事物的特征,才能把被说明事物准确清晰地介绍给读者,让人们对事物有确切的了解。抓住事物的特征进行写作,也就是抓住了说明的中心。当然,事物往往有多方面的特征,想在一篇说明文里面面俱到地加以介绍是不可能的,只能根据需要一次谈一两个特征。例如:鸭与鸡都是家禽,都会走路,都有两翼,都可以做肉食。但要写一篇关于鸭的说明文,就要抓住鸭区别于鸡和其它家禽的特征。与鸡相比,它喜欢在水上生活,尾部能分泌油脂;有一双掌状的蹼,会划水;嘴又长又扁,等等。抓住鸭的这些特征进行说明,就可以使人对鸭的生活习性和外形有了一个清楚的认识。不同的事物固然有各自不同的特点,同类事物也往往有着差异,这些差异也就是它们的特征,写说明文时要紧紧抓住这些特征。如《中国石拱桥》一文写的是赵州桥和卢沟桥,两桥都是石砌的拱桥,相同的地方很多,但也各有特色。茅以升先生就抓住了它们各自特色,进行对比说明,使读者认识了两座桥的不同形状、结构和艺术风格。

抓住事物特征,把握说明中心,这是写好说明文的一个基本要求。要做到这一点,关键是要对事物进行深入细致的观察、分析、比较、研究,做到真正熟悉被说明的事物,并且掌握这一事物本身的特点和规律。只有这样,才能很好地说明事物。

二、针对具体情况,选好说明角度

写文章都是具有针对性的,比如说写给什么样的人看;写文章也是有目的性的,比如通过文章要解决一个什么样的问题。例如,写关于落花生的说明文,如果读者对象是农民,目的又是为了向农民传授栽培落花生的技术,那么,就要根据落花生的生长规律,从如何栽培才能夺高产的角度去说明,重点说明怎样选种、选地、播种、施肥、管理等。如果对象是厨师或食品加工厂的工人,目的又是为了介绍如何加工食用落花生,那么就应侧重说明花生仁的营养价值以及如何加工、配料才能使花生仁更加可口等等。我们中学生在写说明文的时候,可先设想为谁而写,这样就能针对具体情况进行说明,不至于把文章写得散乱无章,目的不明确。

三、讲究结构安排,做到条理分明

文章的条理性是客观事物、事理本身特点、规律在文章结构上的反映。说明文解说事物、阐述事理就要按这些关系来安排说明次序,使之层次清楚、主次分明。例如,四川大邑县“地主庄园陈列馆”中的“收租院”里,有若干泥塑人物像,……。这些画面相对独立,是并列关系。地主收租时设有四道关口,依次是验谷关、风谷关、过斗关、算帐关。每个交租农民都要过四关。从第一关到第四关,是先后关系,这些个别的实例共同揭露地主对农民进行残酷剥削和压迫的罪恶,这就是“收租院”的总体概貌。这个总体概貌与各体实例成为总分关系。《收租院解说词》一文就把握了这些关系。采取先总后分的写法,开头扼要地介绍了地主刘文彩残酷剥削和压迫农民的罪恶,接着按照泥塑画面排列顺序,分别介绍,突出了有压迫和剥削就必然有革命和反抗的基本思想。

并列关系的事物,还要注意方位顺序,或从上到下,或从前到后,从左到右,从外到内,从近到远,等等,只有按照这些顺序去写才能条理清楚。例如《故宫博物院》全文是介绍一座古建筑群,作者按照先总后分的办法,条理明了地介绍了这座雄伟的建筑群。写建筑物局部时,层次也十分清楚。如写太和殿的一段,先从外后到内,介绍大殿外面时又按照从上到下的顺序,由天空到殿顶直到台基。介绍其内部时又按从中间到两旁,从前到后,由上到下,由远及近的顺序依次说明,给人以清晰的印象。

介绍生产过程的说明文,应按生产的时间顺序说明;介绍植物生长的说明文应考虑其生长顺序,依次说明,当然不管哪类说明文都应注意主次分明。

四、注意语言艺术,提高说明效果

说明文语言的特点是朴素平实,且常使用专门术语,容易给人枯燥乏味的感觉。为了提高说明的效果,必须在语言上下一番功夫。说明文的语言不在于堆砌华丽的词藻,而在于用语确切、精当、通俗、风趣。

怎样才能做到这一点呢?

首先,在仔细观察事物,透彻了解事物特征的基础上选用最能确切地反映客观事物的词语加以说明,尤其要注意恰当选用限制范围大小、表明条件关系之类的词语。如《中国石拱桥》中说到卢沟桥:“桥宽约八米,路面平坦,几乎与河面平行”。一个“约”字说明桥面并不恰好是八米,这里只取约数;一个“几乎”说明路面平坦的程度基本上与河面平行,但还不是完全平行。《看云识天气》中“天空的薄云,往往是天气晴朗的象征;而那些低而厚密的云层,常常是阴雨风雪的预兆”。这里形容云的形态特征的词语和表明时间性的词语配合用,十分确切,十分精当。

其次,要注意掌握和运用好必要的专门术语,防止说“外行话”,例如“航天”和“航空”是两个不同的概念,飞机在大气层内飞行,称为航空;卫星、飞船在大气层外飞行称为航天。它们是采用不同的飞行器在不同的空间来完成飞行任务的。写文章时必须注意诸如此类的区别。

再次,适当运用比喻、拟人、拟物等修辞手法。例如《中国石拱桥》一文开头:石拱桥的桥洞成拱形,像天上虹。用“虹”来比喻石拱桥,很形象生动,使读者清楚地了解了石拱桥的外形特征。再如《大自然的语言》中,作者用比喻、拟人的手法说明“花香鸟语,草长莺飞”都是大自然的语言,劳动人民根据这些现象掌握季节规律,安排农事。这段文字由于运用了比喻、拟人等修辞手法,不仅通俗易懂,而且生动有趣,饶有兴味。

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篇20:兵马俑初中满分说明文

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秦始皇是第一个统一中国的皇帝,他的随葬品有很多,其中一个就是兵马俑,(也是我老家附近)

这个陵墓西安城30公里处。以发掘的兵马俑有3个坑,呈“品”字排列,其中一号最大,一号坑为长方形坑,长230米,宽62米,深约5米,总面积竟有14260平方米。有长廊,门道和过洞,供排列士兵,一排排,一列列,兵马俑有惊人的6000个,整个挖掘现场,可以容纳足足30个篮球场,由此可见一号兵马俑的规模庞大,兵马俑不仅数量多,种类也不少,有的兵马俑身着战袍;有的身披铠甲;中间有的配战车,车上有密密麻麻的零件。

在1974年2月,当地农民秦皇陵东侧1。5公里处打井时偶然发现了真认真马一样大小的兵马俑。据统计:展出的陪葬陶俑共8000个,陶俑这么多,是怎么造的呢?下面有一个传说。

秦始皇在22岁便开始大规模修建陵墓。因为马丽山风光秀丽,所以他把墓地选在马丽山北麓。从全国调来惊人的七十万人的刑徒,要知道在当时全国才2000万人。在修建期间,秦始皇还下令征集数千对童男童女陪他殉葬。李斯知道了,吓得目瞪口呆,他想:这么多人陪葬,百姓一定造反,但如果不照办,自己必死无疑,便对秦始皇说:“众多童男女殉葬,天下大乱,江山不保,不如陶殉,以保天下太平。”秦始皇改变原意,让李斯征集众国能工巧匠,烧制规模大的军队,而且要和真人般大小。可是大家只会烧瓦,许多人因此被砍了头。只有一个老工匠想出办法,在临死前再三嘱咐儿子:单窑,单俑,分段烧,烧成后再组装。终于,他们如期造成。秦始皇驾崩后,胡亥继承王位,怕工匠泄露墓中秘密,便把工人叫入墓中,骗说领赏,可惜了那些工匠,被活埋。

这就是我喜爱的景点——秦兵马俑。

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