初中英语说明文思维导图（合集20篇）

Growing up is like running water,unconsciously from summer to

autumn.Years,whether happy or worry,is my growing experience,all is my stepping

stone on the road to success.

Happiness and worry is always two abandoned partner,they take care of each

other,everyone dont want trouble stay.Some people feel that there is no

happiness but feel that fate in torment them,in the world of light and dark,good

and evil.they are all separated lived,but only happiness and troubles is

"neighbors",because only with the happiness and worry,our childhood will be rich

and colorful.

Childhood,not only have like candy generally sweet and happy,like medicine

bitter troubles,and obstinate stubborn,I naughty smile.I alight to chase the

pace of growth,hold on to me that a good age.

The pace of growth continues,it does not return,cant go back.

I am a shy girl, when my teachers ask me the questions, I will always low

down my head and answer them with small voice. Because of my character, I miss

the chances to make myself stand out and I also don’t have many friends. I

really want to change my situation, I don’t want to be a stand by anymore, I

want to be part of the group. So I force myself to join the class activities, I

find I enjoy them and I talk to my classmate a lot. I become active and start to

try more things, I take part in the debate competition and show my ability, I

find my stage.

Middle school students winter vacation diary (a)

Today is the second day of winter vacation release, in order to quickly make winter vacation work, playing with pain quickly, I just finished the "winter vacation corner", the big stone in my heart also fell down, and finally can easily another! I urge a tone, excitedly to mom and dad "good news", this think mom and dad will be happy for me, didnt expect father is cool and strictly speaking: "to do so quickly whats the use? The teacher the assignment is to let you in a day or two will be implemented? How can the good control of common sense, brush up on the summer vacation term knowledge?" Upon hearing this, I think father speaks very reasonable. Ah! If I had known, I would not do so, but now are there any measures? All in all, I never like this "stupid"!

Middle school students winter vacation diary (2)

Its snowing the day before yesterday.

Snow fly ah fly ah, I look at the scenery out of the window, suddenly feel so happy, "I can play with snow again!" I think this kind of mood and idea is bound to happen in every childs heart. But I think again and again in another sigh...

Rain and snow is water into, but why most people are always more like snow? Symbol 2 things I want to snow and water, and although their type is similar, but their attitude and Angle is different, so cause people to only different feelings and emotions. Hope for rain and snow is a people grow, the rain, but a critique of word, snow, but a word of praise. These two words can make people progress, but people are willing to receive praise, not too fond of criticism. This is the difference between. Below we will own to clarify with the rain and snow. ? Most people hate the rain, because it can make a warm soaking wet, although the snow can also, but in another way: snow into a solid. This is the wonders of snow, of course, this is also the cause of the differences between them.

Middle school students winter vacation diary (3)

Mangwan a semester, just beginning point to stop and there are not used to it. The study at ordinary times, every day to get along with everybody together, we will also nifty, but separate them for too long, the in the mind is still thinking how many days they have been home for good, in these days, I also wonder how will this winter holiday I spent, is looking forward to years of stay at home watching TV, or to the old house, so doors or do the rest. But the thought of these, the headmaster gave us just remembered the holidays in the winter vacation homework, may be very strange to others, how will also arrange the principal winter vacation homework, is the principal is let us read much in the winter vacation, study more, for to do preparation period. So actually also quite good, lets current work for the purpose, in order to do better next year. At the beginning at home reading books every day, practice, also feel my winter holiday life is quite empty.

中学生寒假日记(一)

今天是放寒假的第二天，为了赶快做好寒假作业，痛畅快快地玩，我一下子就把《寒假园地》做完了，我心中的大石头也总算落了下来，终于可以轻松喽!我兴奋地吁了一口吻，去向爸爸妈妈“报喜”，本认为爸爸妈妈会替我愉快，可没料到爸爸却冷淡而严格地说：“做这么快有什么用呢?老师布置的这些作业都是让你们一两天就实现的吗?那怎能好好地控制暑假常识、好好温习上学期的知识呢?”我听后，认为爸爸讲得很有情理。哎!要是早知如斯，我就不会这样做了，但现在还有什么措施呢?总而言之，我以后再也不会像这次一样“犯傻”了!

中学生寒假日记(二)

前天下雪了。

鹅毛大雪飞啊飞啊，我看着窗外的风景，顿时觉得好高兴――“我又可以玩雪了!”我想这种心境与主意必定会在每个小孩的心中发生。可是我又想想，又发出了另一种感叹……

雨和雪都是水变成的，可是为什么大多数人们老是更爱好雪呢?我想雪与水象征2个事物，虽然它们的类型雷同，然而它们的态度与角度不同，所以导致人对只不同的感触与情感。比方雨和雪都是一句盼望别人长进的话，雨呢，而是一句批驳的话，雪呢，而是一句赞扬的话。这2句话都可以使人上进，但是人们乐意接收赞赏的话，不太喜欢批评的话。这就是之间的差别。下面我们就用雨和雪自身来阐明。雨呢大多人都厌恶，由于它可以使热烈浑身湿透，虽然雪也能够，但是雪用了另一中方式：变成的固体。这就是雪的奇妙之处，当然，这也是它们之间存在差异的起因。

中学生寒假日记(三)

忙完了一个学期，刚开端停下来还有点不太适应。在平时学习时，每天都跟大家相处在一起，固然我们也会俏皮，但分开他们太久，心里仍是惦记着他们 回家已经有好多少天了，在这几天里，我也在想这个寒假我将如何渡过了，是憧憬年那样呆在家里看电视，或是到同窗家里串串门子还是做点其余的。但一想起这些，就想起了刚放假时校长给咱们布置的寒假功课，可能在别人看来很奇异吧，校长怎么还会安排寒假作业，实在校长是让我们在寒假里多看书，多学习，为来期做好筹备。其实这样也挺好的，让我们当前的工作制订目的，为了将明年的工作做得更好。当初天天在家里看看书，练练字，也感到本人的寒假生涯挺空虚的。

"As" this sentence is confirmed by the wonderful nature, yesterday the

wisper under light rain, my heart is heavy like a rock, because want to master

and old milk grave, before, I dont understand the real meaning of the qing Ming

day, until today after sweeping the tomb, I understand the true meaning of

tomb-sweeping day!

At seven o clock in the morning, we prepare to master and old milk grave,

grave is a fresh thing for me, we take tools and set off.

Walking the winding mountain road, I cant wait, after about an hour, we

came to the master and old grandmas grave, a year didnt come, graves are

covered with wild grass, you well after the division of labor, began to busy,

everything is in place, we started to burn money, along with the smoke, I seem

to see their shadow, they told me: study hard and cherish life.

Yes, life is short, happy every day to live, to continuously surpass

ourselves, surpass ourselves, dream will come true; The superego, the dream into

power; Beyond the self, to create beautiful life! I think life is constantly

transcend self, beyond the dream!!!!! Panoramic view of the city house on the

mountain, the mountain was full of golden golden in the rape, deep breath, deep

and remote light fragrance, fresh air, the flowers with irresistible power

explanation of the meaning of life!

Xiamen is a major city on the southeast coast of the Peoples Republic of

China.It is administered as a sub-provincial city of Fujian province .

The local vernacular is Amoy,a dialect of Southern Min,also called

Hokkien.Amoy is widely used and understood across the southern region of Fujian

province as well as overseas.While it is widely spoken in and around Xiamen,the

Amoy dialect has no official status,and the official language of all government

business is Mandarin.

Xiamen and its surrounding countryside is known for its scenery and

tree-lined beaches.Gulangyu,also known as Piano Island,is a popular weekend

getaway with views of the city and features many Victorian-era style European

edifices.Xiamens Botanical Garden is a nature lovers paradise.The Buddhist

Nanputuo Temple,dating back to the Tang Dynasty,is a national treasure.Xiamen is

also famous for its history as a frontline in the Chinese Civil War with Taiwan

over Jinmen (also known as Jinmen or Quemoy) 50 years ago.One attraction for

tourists is to view Kinmen,a group of islands a few kilometres away and under

Taiwanese control,from Xiamen island.

Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind

others. As a good/close friend of his， I must do something to help him.

First， I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should

spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.

Secondly， I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for

his health， especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more

sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports

than computer games. And then I‘ll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of

course， I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do

it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time，

I’ll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him， too. If I try these， Im

sure he will make great progress soon.

Good morning, my dear fellows. I am happy to see all of our classmates come back to school. I would like to share my life in holiday with you. This summer holiday, I spent most of my time in playing, like watching TV, playing games, outing with friends and so on. But I also pay attention to my study. For example, I like watching the educational TV programs, so that I can both have fun and learn something new at the same time. Besides, I get up early to do some morning reading to practice my English. Of course, I finish my summer exercises on time. In short, my summer holiday is colorful and meaningful. How about your life in summer holiday? I am eager to know.

Cartoon is my favorite thing. every day when i get home, the first thing i do is to open the tv and watch the cartoons. maybe someone would think that watching cartoons is a so naive thing, but i dont think so.

Cartoons refer to many things, containing some profound thought, which often makes me think about it a lot.

To conclude, i love watching cartoons. cartoons give me happiness and cause me to think deeply.

With the rapid development of the internet, shopping on the Internet has

become a fashion in our daily life. According to the latest data, over two

hundred million people used to buy commodities on the Internet. Some of the

students also join the group.

There are many advantages about shopping on the Internet. Just by a click

of the mouse, you can buy whatever you like without going outdoors. You don’t

need to worry about being trapped in the crowed people and cars, or wasting too

much time on walking. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties

of goods, whose price are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand,

it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the

internet，which is quite disappointed. On the other hand, shopping on the

Internet may cause people to buy commodities that are not badly needed. It’s a

waste of money.

After all, I really enjoy shopping on the Internet.

I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my

study.I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano,

surfing the Internet.

One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many

years,since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time but also,

more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can

learn a lot.Reading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading

Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I

come back to the old time of China.

Reading really affect my life.

Today, I returned to the maternal family. The road is very far, my twohours only then. The grandmother warmly comes out greets me, I is veryhappy. In maternal family courtyard flower very many, has the rose,the peony, the orchid and so on, is very attractive. I have enteredthe room, sits watches the television on the soft sofa, chats with thegrandmother. The grandmother some has been old, on the corner of theeye reveals several wrinkles. But in my heart the grandmother is mostbeautiful. Evening, I went to sleep. I dreamed of the grandmother into beckon to me, I rested sweetly...... I love me the grandmother!

今天，我回外婆家了。路很远，我两个小时才到。外婆热情地出来迎接我，我很开心。外婆家院子里的花很多，有玫瑰、牡丹、兰花等，很漂亮。我进了屋，坐在软软的沙发上看电视，和外婆聊天。外婆有些老了，眼角上露出几条皱纹。但是在我心里外婆是最美丽的。晚上，我入睡了。我梦见了外婆在向我招手，我睡得甜甜的......

我爱我的外婆!

你愿意被复制吗??

随着生物技术的飞速发展，世界上已经有了很多例将生物进行无性繁殖的科学实验，如克隆鲫鱼，克隆羊多利的诞生更是为后代克隆技术的发展做了先驱。可是，这些动物的克隆成果和影响能在克隆人身上展现出来吗?

从一方面来说，克隆人是对社会经济发展有好处的。比如，在我们工作繁忙时，可以让机器人替我们工作一会儿，自己就有了与家人相处的时间;社会生产力的提高，促进劳动力的增多，而克隆人的诞生可为社会提供劳动力;如果一对夫妇的小孩死了，他们一定会很伤心，但如果用那个小孩的体细胞克隆出来一个一模一样的，不是皆大欢喜吗?从世界社会经济发展的趋势和人情世故的表面上看，克隆技术似乎造福于人类。

从社会的法律，道德和伦理上来思考的话，我倾向于反对克隆人。原因是多方面的。

1.克隆技术现在还不成熟克隆人可能有很多先天性生理缺陷。在克隆羊多利的实验中，277个卵细胞中只有29个发育成胚胎，而在29个胚胎中只有多利存活了下来。由此可见，克隆人研究是不安全的。

2.克隆人的身份难以认定，他们与被克隆者之间的关系无法纳入现有的伦理体系。

3.人类繁殖后代的过程，不再需要两性共同参与，将对现有的社会关系和家庭结构造成难以承受的巨大冲击。更重要的是，克隆人违背了生命伦理原则。科学技术应当有利于社会进步，而不能违背人类的根本利益。

4克隆技术可能被滥用，成为恐怖分子的工具。

5.从生物多样性上来说，大量基因结构完全相同的克隆人，可能诱发新型疾病，对人类的生存不利。

6.克隆人可能因自己的特殊身份产生心理缺陷，形成新的社会问题。

克隆人到底是东西还是人?

克隆人的诞生——由于科研人员的好奇心——“小白鼠”实验——违背伦理——造成社会混乱。

世界上没有完全相同的两片叶子，我们都渴望独特的自己。

Today we stay at home and not go to class. Do you know why? By the way, it is just because of the fog.

Haze? Nanjing and other places of dust is overmuch, combined with the dust and fog, becomes the haze, inhaled into people get lung disease, asthma and other respiratory diseases.

Recently, pm2.5 is close to the extraordinary, in nanjing today at 3 o clock in the morning, pm2.5 has reached 466 micrograms of a cubic meters, entered the serious pollution, pm2.5 is one of the "culprit" haze weather. Not just the pm2.5 exceeds bid badly, pm10 has recently started to crazy, 3 a.m. yesterday, pm10 has reached 579 micrograms of a cubic meters, the nanjing the worst pollution index was about to break! In addition, the sky appeared a "mock sun"! Is too much because floats in the sky. If nanjing on October 1, the sky is blue, so today in nanjing will be gray and a piece of the sky.

Fog not only have an effect on the human body, many planes, ships, cars and so on all cant normal travel. Nanjing lukou airport has 53 flights affected by haze on time boot. Many highways have been closed, the highest visibility on the streets of only 10 meters the following, the car travel is very inconvenient. Hundreds of ships to stay in the Yangtze river in zhenjiang. The influence of the fogs really big ah!

We air pollution index of the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze river has been more than the north, like tianjin, Beijing, hebei and other provinces, cities have been we left behind. The factory in the north is more, to produce a lot of dust, according to the reason for the northern cities should air pollution is the most "powerful", can be in November to December Chinas worst air index, almost all is our "occupy" in jiangsu province.

Now that the fog is so terrible, we should also consider what to do! 1, when faced with heavy fog, the first thing to hide the fog haze. Haze days dont go out as far as possible, dont get up early to exercise more. 2, mask is fog out of necessity. Will always wearing surgical masks, but not always wearing a mask, only on the road, a lot of bacteria such as hospital, pm2.5 wear a lot of place, at other times, try to put in my pocket.

This is the fog haze, a great influence on our body, we must learn to prevent it! That is why our school classes.

今天我们同学都留在家里不去上课。你们知道为什么吗?对了，就是因为雾霾。

雾霾是什么呢?南京等地的灰尘过多，而雾跟这些灰尘相结合，就变成了霾，人大量吸入会得肺病、哮喘等呼吸道疾病。

最近，南京的pm2.5接近爆表，到了今天凌晨3点，pm2.5已经达到了466微克一立方米，进入了严重污染，pm2.5是雾霾天气的“罪魁祸首”之一。不仅仅是pm2.5超标严重，pm10最近也开始疯狂起来，昨天凌晨3点，pm10已经达到了579微克一立方米，这项指标就快要破南京最差污染了!而且，天上还出现了一个“幻日”!就是因为天空中的漂浮物过多而形成的。如果说10月1日的南京的天空是湛蓝的，那么今天南京的天空将是灰蒙蒙地一片。

不仅雾霾对人体有影响，许多飞机、船只、汽车等都不能正常出行。南京禄口机场已有53个航班受雾霾影响不能准点开机。许多条高速公路都已经关闭，街头的最高能见度才仅仅10米即以下，这让汽车出行非常不方便。数百只船只停留在长江镇江段。雾霾的影响可真大呀!

我们长江中下游的空气污染指数已经超过了北方，像天津、北京、河北等省、市都已经被我们落在后面。北方的工厂较多，会排出很多的灰尘，按道理来讲北方城市应该空气污染是最“强”的，可11月到12月中国的空气最差指数，几乎全部是我们江苏“占领”的。

既然雾霾这么可怕，我们也应该想想该怎么办吧!1、当遇到浓雾天气，首先要躲雾霾。雾霾天尽量不要出门，更不要早起锻炼。2、口罩是雾天外出的必需品。要常带口罩，但不能常戴口罩，只有在马路上、医院里等病菌很多，pm2.5很多的地方戴，其他时候，尽量放在口袋里。

这就是雾霾，对我们人体影响很大，我们要学会预防它哦!这也就是我们学校为什么停课的原因了。

童丹阳： Love may not be great, but we can find love everywhere, even in some small things, if we use our heart to feel it.

丁清之：Even though we can’t see each other, but we can feel each other. That’s love.

Jimmy: Love is more like friendship taken to a further level. It is a companionship that can last through hardships, joys, and even dull and boring times, with passion and comradeship.

林鹏： Love is the most valuable thing in the world that nothing else can surpass.

方驰：Love is when you miss somebody, like your mother or father and when you return the indescribable feeling that flls your heart you feel happy, you feel this thing is the most important in your life.

王潜：love is when you are ill, someone will look after you. Love is when you fall down, someone will lift you.

Nowadays it is common to encounter a scene when people want to see things

happen but can‘t make things happen for various reasons. The most important

reason is that they just refuse to create and innovate. With the accelerated

pace of our society,more and more people recognize the importance of creation

that is bound to make a difference in social productivity.

As far as I am concerned,we should all have the notion of being the

participants of supporting creation. First of all,creation is the most vital

factor to improve the inner competitiveness of our nation. For another,it is

certain that creation is so essential that enables many people to find their

positions in the company and careers in their lives.

Measures are also needed to encourage creation . First and foremost,the

government should establish certain rules to sweep up the obstacles of

invention. Some people have already complained much about complicated procedure

of patent applications or high fees to do experiments of inventions.

Additionally,high schools and universities can provide students with

scholarships or overseas learning opportunities,which will stimulate more

youngsters to join the group of invention and innovation.

Christmas as a grand festival of the west, in addition to the Christmas

tree, also cannot little taste delicious food. Before Christmas Turkey dinner is

a case card main course, people might do in a microwave oven, the holidays a lot

of people now is in outside restaurant to have dinner, merchants can also use

the opportunity to make money out of customers, of course, there are many

Christmas food, ginger bread, candy, and so on.

In addition, people also give gifts to each other, this is the childrens

favorite, often can get lots of presents.

Dear Headmaster,

I am the minister of students‘ life in the Student Union. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.

Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well.Some students have no seats when eating.

Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.

Yours,

XXX

尊敬的校长：

我是学生会生活部部长。我代表所有学生给您写信反映一下我们对食堂的意见。

食堂有令人满意的一面也有令人不满意的一面；令我们满意的是，食堂给我们提供了很多种类的食物。另外，饭菜价格便宜，味道可口，我们很喜欢。而且食堂环境也已经改善了。但是他们给的食物的分量不足。食堂的座位也不够，一些学生吃饭时没有座位。我们希望学校会考虑增添些座位。

最后我们建议他们改进饭菜的质量，改善服务。如果这些问题能被解决我们会感到非常高兴。

尊敬您的 XXX

[初中英语作文：给校长的一封信

Wonderful life in winter holiday

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.

I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!

But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

[初中英语作文：winter holiday（寒假）

Marine biological environment is a complex system including sea water, sea

water, soluble matter and suspended matter, seabed sediments and marine

organisms. The rich biological resources, mineral resources, chemical resources

and power resources in the sea are indispensable human resources treasure

houses, which are closely related to the survival and development of

mankind.

At present, the main objective of marine conservation is to protect marine

biological resources so that they can not be exhausted for sustainable use by

mankind. In particular, priority should be given to the conservation of marine

animals that are valuable and endangered. According to the UN investigation, due

to overfishing, mangrove accidental killing of non target to allow the killing

of marine organisms, the coastal engineering construction, deforestation,

pollution of the marine environment in general, at least 25 of the worlds most

valuable fisheries resources consumed, whales, sea turtles, manatees and many

other marine animal faces the danger of extinction. It is expected that with the

expansion of marine development, it is possible to cause more damage to marine

biological resources.

Marine protection task should first stop on the marine biological resources

excessive use, secondly to protect the marine biological habitat or habitat,

especially their migration, spawning, feeding, avoid Huahai coastline, beaches,

estuaries, coral reefs, to prevent heavy metals, pesticides, oil, organic

produce and eutrophication. Nutrients such as marine pollution. Maintain the

ability of regeneration of marine biological resources and the natural

purification ability of the sea water, maintain the marine ecological balance,

and ensure the sustainable development and utilization of the marine.

in this holiday l was very happy.why? because my famliy go to beijing.we saw tiananmen.the sky was blue ,tiananmen was red and yello.it is very nice.then i played with my mother and father in xiangshan.in the afteroon we went to yuanmingyuan.

look at yuangmingyuan, i was very sad.in the evering we ate some litto food.

beijing was very big.i love it very much.

不少同学在问了，英语作文怎么写?如何写好英语作文，下面是小编为大家收集的初中英语作文的写作方法，欢迎阅读。

初一英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident ”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，” “to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but ”“not only...but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

注意事项

最后将英语写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。

4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程，只要同学们在平时多加训练，多读文章，做一个有心人，就能在英语作文中取得理想的成绩