刻画人物的英语作文汇总19篇

My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Class 3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.

我的小表弟亮亮今年4岁了。他那胖乎乎的脸上长着一对明亮的大眼睛，说起话来又脆又响，特别逗人喜欢。

一个星期天的晚上，我缠着妈妈到姥姥家去玩，妈妈终于同意了。妈妈骑着自行车带着我，一会儿就来到姥姥家。推开院门，就听见“没有花香，没有树高……”的歌声。我急忙跑进屋里，只见亮亮拿着支手电筒当“话筒”，红着脸大声地唱着：“春风呀，春风呀，你把我吹绿……”调都唱走了，还一本正经地向“观众”敬礼

我们都笑得前伏后仰，好子都笑出了泪。接着他又把鸡毛掸子斜挂在脖子上，弹起“吉他”，嘴里还不住地哼着，摇着头，扭着屁股，前倾后仰，左走右退，摇摇晃晃，一不小心，“扑通”一声掉到床下。拎子连忙跑过去扶起他，只见他哭丧着脸：“哎哟，哎哟……”地叫着。妙子关心地问：“摔着没有？”他爬起来，摸摸头，揉揉屁股，吐了下舌头做了个鬼脸。我们又是一阵大笑。

[刻画人物的作文

这是个二十岁出头的姑娘，圆脸蛋润润的，眉很赤，细长的双眼闪动着爽直的、热乎乎的目光；老是未言先笑，语言也带着笑，像唱歌似的。她走路时把身子的重心放在足尖上，总像要蹦跳、要飞。一眼就可以看出，她是个纯真而欢乐的女孩子，奇怪的是她那过分素净的打扮，与她的性格很不相称，也和那些爱漂亮的缫丝姑娘迥然不同：蓝布棉袄，黑粗呢短大衣，草绿色长裤，脖子上的纱巾是白的，扎小辫的头绳是根黑毛线。你们猜这是谁？哈哈，这是我姐姐!

姐姐刚来的时候，身穿一件方格衬衣，补了几块补丁，脚穿一双沾着泥土的白凉鞋，走路说话都不敢大声，我们都说她土里土气。可是现在，我们不敢说表姐了。你看她穿一件漂亮的上衣，一条紧身牛仓裤，一双锃亮的高跟鞋，脖子上戴着闪光的金项链，肩上披着长长的黑发，显得神气大方。回到家里又说又笑，像生活在蜜糖中一样。

这就是我姐姐！我喜欢我姐姐！

Father looks really handsome: a meter of eight height, the kingdom of white face, eyes, nose straight, is a bit, I dont like his lips, chin, cheeks and always full of hard ChaCha beard, cover your mouth. Because he work busy, always have no time to shave. Mother always scolded him only know work, do not pay attention to life section, dad, "hey hey smile, continue to do his thing.

One day, my father was watching the wool spinning learn home attentively, from time to time, pen drawing something on the paper. Mother walked softly, a "EHuPuShi" have taken away the book and a pen in the past. Dad busy turned face reckon with my mother said: "have words to say, dont start work." Mother take the mirror and the razor to his presence, said angrily: "beard shaved, or dont want to take a book and a pen!" Dad, helpless and have to obediently took the razor, with cavity as the ground to say: "lady, I can do is." Who knows Hu Zicai shaved half, just someone to shout: "the factory director zhou, engineering department someone looking for you." Go daddy left the razor, mother call also called dont live, gas straight stamp...

Come back soon, my dad with a big smile. When he comes in at the door loudly rang rang: "success! Success! My invention patents!" Said, and picked up me, on my face and kissed a bite. "Oh!" I cant help but cry, dad Hu Zizhen bristly. Mother heard came and intentionally sank the face: "look of Yin and Yang hu, dont you..." Father before my mother say that finish, make a grimace, then continue to clean up his half a piece of black baby beard, return in mouth singing "from the mouth in the grass, a few days a withered flourish, razor, born again when the spring breeze blows." He put the bai juyis "farewell to assign GuYuan grass" tampering with this poem. I couldnt help laugh out "straight" 1...

Before long, however, dads lips and cheeks and gives birth to a dark beard, I know, dads work busy again...

爸爸长得真帅：一米八的个子，白净的国字脸，眼睛明亮，鼻梁挺直，就是有点我不喜欢，他的唇上、颔下腮边总是密密麻麻地长满了硬茬茬的胡子，把嘴也掩盖了。因为他工作忙，老是没时间刮脸。妈妈总是数落他只知道工作，不注意生活小节，爸爸则“嘿嘿一笑，继续忙他的事。

有一天，爸爸正在家聚精会神地看《毛纺学》，不时地用笔在纸上画着什么。妈妈轻手轻脚地走过去，一个“饿虎扑食”把书和钢笔夺了过去。爸爸忙扭过脸跟妈妈赔笑说：“有话好说，不要动手嘛。”妈妈把镜子和剃刀拿到他面前，气冲冲地说：“把胡子刮了，不然别想拿书和笔!”爸爸无可奈何，只好顺从地接过剃刀，拿腔作调地说：“夫人息怒，我遵命就是。”谁知胡子才刮了一半，就有人来喊：“周厂长，技术科有人找您。”爸爸便丢下剃刀就走，妈妈叫也叫不住，气得直跺脚……

不久，爸爸满脸笑容地回来了。他一进门就大声嚷嚷：“成功了!成功了!我的发明获专利了!”说着，抱起我，就在我脸上使劲亲了一口。“哎呀!”我不由大叫一声，爸爸的胡子真扎人。妈妈闻声走过来，故意把脸一沉：“瞧你的‘阴阳胡’，还不……”爸爸没等妈妈说完，做个鬼脸，便继续清除他那半片黑乎乎的宝贝胡子去了，嘴里还哼着“离里嘴上‘草’，几天一枯荣，剃刀刮不尽，春风吹又生。”他把白居易的《赋得古原草送别》这首诗篡改了。我不由得“扑哧”一声笑了出来……

可是，过了不久，爸爸的唇上、腮边又生出了黑漆漆的胡子，我知道，爸爸的工作又忙起来了……

范文一

My best friend is called Tom.He is 14 years old.He is a handsome boy.He is tall and has a medium build.His hair is short black and straight.We always play together.He is friendly and funny boy.He always helps others.When I get into a trouble he always helps me.That is my best friend Tom.

我最好的朋友叫汤姆。他是14岁。他是一个英俊的男孩。他个子高,中等身材。他的头发是短的黑色和直。我们总是一起玩。他是友好和有趣的男孩。他总是帮助别人。当我陷入麻烦时他总是帮助我。那是我最好的朋友汤姆。

范文二

Li Ming is my best friend, who grows up with me. We have been friends for six years since we were in primary school. We have many in commons. For example, we both like playing football and watching sport games. Besides, we like cartoons and we always watch cartoon programs together. We play football very often. After class, we do not go home but play football with classmates. We usually have great time. However, we still pay much attention on study, because it’s our priority. We help each other in study and make progress together. To some extend, we are families.

李明是我最好的朋友,他和我长大。我们做了六年的朋友是在小学。我们有许多在下议院。例如,我们都喜欢踢足球和看体育比赛。此外,我们喜欢漫画,我们总是一起看卡通节目。我们经常踢足球。下课后,我们不回家,但和同学们一起踢足球。我们通常有很大的时间。然而,我们仍然关注研究,因为它是我们的首要任务。我们在学习中互相帮助,共同进步。一些扩展,我们的家庭。

范文三

I have many friends, but Jim is one of my best friends. He is not handsome, but kind-hearted. We know each other at primary school. He was the tallest in our class at that time. He is good at study and playing basketball, while bad at playing table tennis. Everytime he has delicious food, he will give it to me. Moreover, whenever I feel sad, he will play with me and comfort me. However, he is not spoilt me. For example, everytime I meet difficulties in study, I would like to copy his, but no matter what I say, he never give his homework to me to copy. Instead he teaches how to do it. All in all, no matter what difficulties I meet, he will help me. It is him make me realize that a friend in need is a friend indeed.

我有很多朋友，不过吉姆是我最好的朋友之一。他长得不帅，但是很善良。我们在小学的时候就互相认识了。那时，他是我们班里最高的。他的学习成绩很好。他很擅长打篮球但是乒乓球却打得很烂。每次有好吃的他都让给我吃。而且每次我不开心的时候他都会陪我玩，安慰我。但是他并不宠溺我，比如说，在做作业的时候我遇到不懂的就总想抄他的，那个时候不管我怎么求他，他从来都没给我抄过作业，而是教我如何去写。总之不管我遇到什么困难，他都会帮助我。他让我明白了患难见真情。

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This semester, our school has come a new teacher. The bell thought in the morning, the new teacher came into the classroom we four (1) class. Quiet in the classroom, everyone is curious to see the new teacher. New teachers grow neither tall nor short, not fat or thin, black hair, wearing a pair of glasses. He wore a white shirt, shirt tucked in grey trousers, appear very spirit, wearing a pair of red shoes.

New teacher on the podium, smilingly see us a few eyes, then introduce myself said: "the classmates, my name is zhao, later call Ill teach you Chinese." Say that finish, zhao teacher wrote on the blackboard, "zhao", the word also wrote in pinyin. The students have read gently: zhao (zhao), miss zhao. Miss zhao said with a smile: "you know me, I also want to know immediately know the classmates, I think I must be the first know the most disciplined and use them, homework done best classmate." Suddenly to be quiet in the classroom, the students all sit straight.

The teachers voice is very loud, zhao eyes behind his glasses for a while, round, then narrowed into a crack. Looking at miss zhaos eyes, we answered one question, before you know it when the bell rang.

After class, I think while doing their homework, I must do my homework this time, let the first know me miss zhao.

本学期开学，我们学校来了一位新老师。上午上课铃想过，新老师走进了我们四(1)班教室。教室里安安静静，大家都好奇地看着这位新老师。新老师长得不高不矮，不胖不瘦，头发乌黑，戴着一副眼镜。他上身穿着一件洁白的衬衫，衬衫塞在灰色的西裤里，显得很精神，脚穿一双暗红色的皮鞋。

新老师走上讲台，笑眯眯的看我们几眼，然后自我介绍说：“同学们好，我姓赵，以后就叫由我来教你们语文。”说完，赵老师在黑板上写了一个“赵”字，还在上面写了拼音。同学们纷纷轻轻读出：zhào(赵)，赵老师。赵老师笑着说：“你们认识我了，我也想认识立刻认识同学们，我想我最先认识的肯定是最守纪律、最肯动脑筋、作业完成得最好的同学。”教室里一下子安静下来，同学们个个坐得端端正正。

赵老师讲课的声音很响亮，他眼镜后面的眼睛一会儿圆圆的，一会儿又眯成一条缝。看着赵老师的眼睛，我们回答了一个又一个的问题，不知不觉下课铃响了。

课后，我一边做着作业一边想：这次我一定要做好作业，让赵老师第一个认识我。

描述人物外形Describing a person

发型Hair Style

直发：straight hair 波浪式卷发：wavy hair 卷发、自然卷：curly hair

浓密的头发：tihck hair 短发：short hair 长发：long hair

齐肩发、披肩发：shoulder-length hair一个马尾辫：ponytail 辫子（小麻花辫子）：braids

长发辫子（雷鬼辫、脏辫）：dreadlocks 头髻：bun 两个马尾辫：bunches

中分：center parting 变秃：balding 秃头：bald

头发颜色 Hair color

金发：blond hair 棕发：brown hair黑发：black hair

红发：red hair 灰发（老年人的银发）：grey hair

姜黄色发：ginger hair(受歧视的发色)

眉毛 Eyebrow

浓眉：thick eyebrows 秀眉：thin eyebrows

眼睛 Eyes

大眼睛：big eyes小眼睛：small eyes

鼻子 Nose

高鼻子：high nose 塌鼻子：falt nose/button nose

宽鼻子：wide nose 窄鼻子：narrow nose

嘴巴Mouth /Lip

大嘴:big mouth小嘴：small mouth 厚嘴唇：thick lips

薄嘴唇：thin lips/slim lips樱桃小口：cherry lips/rosebud lips

脸型 Face

鸭蛋脸/瓜子脸：oval face 圆脸：round face

方脸：square face长脸：long face

体型、身材 Stature

肥胖的：fat 瘦的：thin苗条的：slim

丰满的：plump 不胖不瘦的：medium-built 不高不低：medium-height

高的：tall矮的：short性感的：sexy

优雅的（女性）：graceful/elegant 结实的、矮胖的：stout 苗条的、瘦长的：slender

粗壮的：stocky强壮的：robust

形容词顺序：限定词＋（大小、长短、形状）+（年龄、新旧）+颜色+（国籍、出处）+材料+（用途、类别）

Size+age+colour+nationality+material

例句：

1. 她有一头金色长卷发

2. Mark is 21 years old. He is about 5 feet ,9 inches tall . His face is long and narrow . His eyes are green. His hair is light brown. He doesnt look very Italian. He smiles a little and usually has a friendly look on his face . He isnt fat and he isnt thin. His build is average. 迈克21岁了，他身高大约5.9英尺，脸瘦瘦长长的，绿眼睛。浅棕色的头发，看起来不大像意大利人。他总是面带微笑，非常友好。他不胖也不瘦，中等身材。

[写人外貌的英语作文合集

1、My name is Li BaoLing . I have a good friend . Her name is Chen ZiQing . I am 13 years old . She is as old as me. I am 155cm tall. She is 150cm tall . She is 5cm shorter than me . I am 36kg . She is 37kg . She is heavier than me .She often does homework with me .We always help each other. I am happy to have a good firend .

2、I have a friend,he name is He Zichen.I and he like play ping-pong,Weer usually after school play ping-pong。He and I like playing basketball. Sometimes, we play basketball at P.E. lesson. He likes copying my homework. As soon as I finish my homework, he will steal it for copying.

Deng Yaping,28,from Henan Province,is a talented woman player f table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4,she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8,she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success,she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.

[英语作文怎么介绍人物

Mo Yan, is a famous contemporary Chinese writer. In 2012, He became the country’s first Nobel Literature Prize laureate。

Born Guan Moye, the author writes under the pen name Mo Yan, which means don’t speak in Chinese。

Mo Yan was granted an honorary PhD of Arts by OUHK and was appointed guest professor at the Qingdao University of Technology. Relying on a series of countryliterary works, Mo’s claim to fame came in the 1980s when he established a reputation for being a so-called root-seeking writer. His works were strongly influenced by magical realism and told the tales of numerous legends which took place in Gaomi, Shandong Province. Mo isrenowned for his unique perceptions of reality, imaginative descriptions, de-familiarizationprocessing, mysticism and a pioneering style。

1、Hello! My name is Feifei. My mother is very beautiful. My father is very handsome. So I’m very lovely. Look! My coat is white. My eyes are blue. I have a long tail. Fish is my favorite food. I like mice too. Guess! Who am I?

2、I am Li Ming. I am thirteen years old. I study at No. 2 Middle School. My mother, a doctor, works in a childrens hospital. My father, a teacher, works in a middle school. I work hard, and I am a good student.

I work hard on my lessons, and I also have many hobbies. I like playing football, and chatting with friends on the Intemet.

I love my family.

my favourite cartoon character is snow white.she is in snow white and the seven dwarfs.her mother died and her step-mother was very bad.she evebn tried to kill her.later she met the dwarfs in the forest.they helped her.at last a handsome prince married her and she lived a happy life.i likeher because she is brave and clever.i can learn a lot from her.

我最喜欢的卡通人物是白雪公主。她是白雪公主和七个小矮人中的任务。她的母亲去世了，她的后母非常坏。她甚至（even）试图杀死她。之后，她在森林里遇到了小矮人。他们帮助她。最后，一个帅气的王子娶了她，她过上了幸福的生活。我之所以喜欢她是因为她勇敢而聪明。我可以从她身上学到很多东西。

我们班的英语老师性郭。她高高的鼻梁上有一对闪闪发亮的眼睛。你可别被她的外貌所迷惑，她可是一只“魔鬼”。

一次上英语课，她对全班同学说;“今天抽察第36页对话，不会的同学抄词语表1--3单元词语10次。“话音刚落，引起了满堂同学的不满：有的说;“这下子完了。“有的说;“老师真狠。“还有的说;“又要抄到三更半夜了。“抽察开始了，第一个遭殃的是陈旭，他站起来嬉皮笑脸的说;“我不会背。“英语老师说;“不会背很光荣吗，你抄20遍。陈旭为此付出了代价。老师又请了余佩佩，她镇定的地站起来，流利地背了出来，受到了老师的表扬，同学们都投去了羡慕的目光。

抽察结束了，只有一个人会背，所以全班做双倍作业。唉呀，真倒霉。

作者运用简洁而多样的方法刻画人物的典型性格，每一个人物都是活生生的。

写鲁四老爷，是从他屡屡“皱眉”的细节，“可恶！然而……”的吞吞吐吐的对话来刻画他那副虚伪自私的道学先生的面孔的，表现出他对寡妇的厌恶和对封建礼教的维护，而且这样的动作和对话正恰合他的身份，是含而不露的、能保持他的尊严的。

对书房的描写一段，正是他做为一个“讲理学的老监生”的性格的说明。这段通过环境描写来刻画性格是极其成功的。其他如俨然的态度，临近祝福时的种种忌讳，对四婶的告诫，一年之中最重大的事情就是祭祀，不是祭祖，就是祭神等情节和对话，都丰富了做为一个封建势力的代表的人物性格。

对祥林嫂三次描写突出了眼神的细节，概括了祥林嫂一生的不幸，揭示了封建制度和封建礼教对以祥林嫂为代表的劳动妇女的迫害和摧残。三次同中有异、异中有同的外貌描写对反封建的主题起到了见微知著、画龙点睛的作用。

My grandfather is very kind to me. He loves me very much. I am the apple of his eye,but when it comes to my study he is very strict. Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework. With his help,I have been doing well in my studies.

My grandfather is also warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day,a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took the girl to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.

My grandfather is a kind and easy-going man,but now he is living in another city with my aunt. We all miss him very much and I hope that I can go to visit him soon.

写人的文章要会在叙事的过程中，对最能表现人物思想感情、性格特点的外貌、语言、动作、心理活动等方面进行描写，也就是学会刻画人物。

1。也叫肖像描写，是通过对人物的容貌、神情、衣着、姿态、语调、外貌特征的描写。来揭示人物性格的一种方法。人物的的外貌和人物内心世界密切的联系，具体说：通过外貌描写，使人物的形象更丰满，能给读者留下深刻印象；通过外貌描写，揭示人物的身份；通过外貌描写，展示人物在特定场合的内心世界；通过外貌描写，表现人物性格、精神面貌和思想品质。

总之，外貌描写要和表现人物特点、突出文章的中心思想紧密配合。外貌描写要传神，切忌脸谱化，反对那种部分主次，从头写到脚、千人一貌的写法。

2。语言描写有对话和独白两种。

对话是两个人或几个人的谈话；独白是人物的自言自语。语言是人物内心世界的直接表露，对表现人物的思想性格起重要作用。有个性特点的语言可以起到“闻其言，见其人”的作用。语言描写要注意以下两点：一是文章中人物的语言要精心筛选，把那些足以能表现人物的个性特点、最能表现中心思想的语言，写进文章中；二是好的语言描写，一定是符合当时的情景，符合人物的性格、身份、性别、年龄和文化修养等方面的特点。对话描写有四种形式：说的话写在后面，说话人后面用引号；说的话在前，说话人写在后，用引号、句号；前后各引一句或几句，中间交代谁说的，用逗号；只写人物语言，不写说话人。这四种形式要根据实际需要灵活事业，避免行文死板。

3。动作描写

是通过人物的行动、动作，来表现人物的思想性格的一种方法。一个人的行为、动作，往往是他的思想感情、性格特征的最真实的外化。看一个人，不仅要听他怎么说，更要卡他如何做，正所谓“听其言，观其行”，因此，动作描写是直接刻画人物形象，展示人物精神面貌，把人物写“活”的重要手段。那么，怎样描写人物的动作呢？

首先，要选择关键性的动作来写。一个人做事的时候，会有许多动作。但他们不可能、也没有必要把这些动作一个不少地都写出来。这就要求选择那些关键性的、最有意义的动作来写。

其次，要写准确。同一个动作可以用很多动词来表示，但只有那些有特色，最能反映人物气质的动词，才能把人写“活”。有一位作家说过，最难的不是写动作，而是写出有特点的动作，从动作中写出人来。

4。心理描写

心理的人物内心的活动，是无声的语言。人物内心世界，指人物内心的喜、哀、乐、忧伤、犹豫、嫉妒、向往等复杂的感情。在写人的文章中，恰当地描写人物心理，可以更有效地刻画人物，突出中心思想。心理描写的要求是：要真实，要有根据；人物的心理变化要自然，合情合理；心理描写要为文章的中心思想服务；在描写人物的心理活动时，要客观、谨慎，不能以己之心，度人之意。

小学生作文时，大多采用第一人称（“我”活“我们”），采用这种人称作文，就不能用“他想”的形式来写人物的心理活动，因为“我”不可能钻到别人的脑子里去看。此时，可以换一种方式——在描写人物的语言、神态、动作上下功夫，这样可能更合情理，使人感到真实可信。

心理描写除了用“我想”之外，还可以采用以下几种方法。

（1）提出问题，引入所想的内容。

（2）使用假设，流露心理活动。

（3）字里行间，流露着“想”。

（4）直接抒发心中所想。

写人的文章要会在叙事的过程中，对最能表现人物思想感情、性格特点的外貌、语言、动作、心理活动等方面进行描写，也就是学会刻画人物。

1.外貌描写

也叫肖像描写，是通过对人物的容貌、神情、衣着、姿态、语调、外貌特征的描写。来揭示人物性格的一种方法。人物的的外貌和人物内心世界密切的联系，具体说：通过外貌描写，使人物的形象更丰满，能给读者留下深刻印象；通过外貌描写，揭示人物的身份；通过外貌描写，展示人物在特定场合的内心世界；通过外貌描写，表现人物性格、精神面貌和思想品质。

总之，外貌描写要和表现人物特点、突出文章的中心思想紧密配合。外貌描写要传神，切忌脸谱化，反对那种部分主次，从头写到脚、千人一貌的写法。

2.语言描写

语言描写有对话和独白两种。

对话是两个人或几个人的谈话；独白是人物的自言自语。语言是人物内心世界的直接表露，对表现人物的思想性格起重要作用。有个性特点的语言可以起到“闻其言，见其人”的作用。语言描写要注意以下两点：一是文章中人物的语言要精心筛选，把那些足以能表现人物的个性特点、最能表现中心思想的语言，写进文章中；二是好的语言描写，一定是符合当时的情景，符合人物的性格、身份、性别、年龄和文化修养等方面的特点。

3.动作描写

动作描写是通过人物的行动、动作，来表现人物的思想性格的一种方法。一个人的行为、动作，往往是他的思想感情、性格特征的最真实的外化。看一个人，不仅要听他怎么说，更要看他如做，正所谓“听其言，观其行”，因此，动作描写是直接刻画人物形象，展示人物精神面貌，把人物写“活”的重要手段。那么，怎样描写人物的动作呢？

首先，要选择关键性的动作来写。一个人做事的时候，会有许多动作。但他们不可能、也没有必要把这些动作一个不少地都写出来。这就要求选择那些关键性的、最有意义的动作来写。其次，要写准确。同一个动作可以用很多动词来表示，但只有那些有特色，最能反映人物气质的动词，才能把人写“活”。有一位作家说过，最难的不是写动作，而是写出有特点的动作，从动作中写出人来。

4.心理描写

心理的人物内心的活动，是无声的语言。人物内心世界，指人物内心的喜、哀、乐、忧伤、犹豫、嫉妒、向往等复杂的感情。在写人的文章中，恰当地描写人物心理，可以更有效地刻画人物，突出中心思想。心理描写的要求是：要真实，要有根据；人物的心理变化要自然，合情合理；心理描写要为文章的中心思想服务；在描写人物的心理活动时，要客观、谨慎，不能以己之心，度人之意。

小学生作文时，大多采用第一人称（“我”活“我们”），采用这种人称作文，就不能用“他想”的形式来写人物的心理活动，因为“我”不可能钻到别人的脑子里去看。此时，可以换一种方式——在描写人物的语言、神态、动作上下功夫，这样可能更合情理，使人感到真实可信。

Deng Yaping,28,is a world-famous woman player of table tennis.She comes from Henan Province. At the age of 4,she began to play ping-pong under her fathers instructions. When she was 8 years old,she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she entered the National Training Team. After that she won medals one after another,including gold medals in the 1 l th Asian Games Table Tennis Competition and the 41st World Table Tennis Championship and two gold medals in the 25th Olympic Games. Is she born a table tennis player? No. She is only 1.5 meters in height,which is her disadvantage. However,she overcame it by hard work and perservance.Her success proves where there is a will,there is a way.

My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.

He used to live with my family. At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day. When I was ill, he took good care of me. He showed great concern.

Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.

Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt. My parents and I all miss him very much. And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.

Franklin’s life is full of charming stories which all young men should know —how he sold books in Boston, and became the guest of kings in Europe; how he was made Major General Franklin, only to quit1 because, as he said, he was no soldier, and yet helped to organize the army that stood before the trained troops of England and Germany.

富兰克林的一生充满了迷人的传奇故事, 年轻人都应该知道:他如何在波士顿大街上兜售图书,而后来又怎样成为了欧洲各国君主的座上客;他如何被授予少将军衔,但他却辞职不干,因为他说他没有军人气度,然而正是他帮助组建了同训练有素的英德联军相抗衡的联邦军队。

This poor Boston boy, without a day’s schooling, became master of six languages and never stopped studying; this neglected apprentice conquered the lightning, made his name famous, received degrees and diplomas from many colleges, duanwenw.com and became forever remembered as "Doctor Franklin", philosopher, scientist and political leader.

这个波士顿穷孩子几乎没有上过一天学,后来却掌握了六种语言,而且他终身都在锲而不舍地学习。这个不受人重视的学徒制服了闪电,扬名天下,获得了很多学位和证书,成为了流芳百世的"富兰克林博士"、哲学家、科学家和政治家。

Self-made, self-taught, the candle maker’s son gave light to all the world; the street bookseller set all men singing of liberty; the apprentice became the most sought after man across the world, and brought his native land to praise and honor him.

这个蜡烛制造商的儿子自我奋斗、自学成才,给全世界带来了光明;这个街头叫卖者让全人类唱起了自由之歌;这个学徒成了全世界的人们都仰慕的人物,使他的祖国对他赞美不绝、崇敬备至。

He built America, for what our nation is today is largely due to the management, the forethought, the wisdom, and the ability of Benjamin Franklin. duanwenw.com He belongs to the world, but especially he belongs to America. The people around the world honored him while he was living; he is still regarded as the loftiest man by the common people today after his death. And he will live in people’s hearts forever.

他缔造了美国,因为我们的国家能有今天,在很大程度上归功于本杰明·富兰克林的治国之术、英语短文远见卓识、大睿大智和精明能干。他属于全世界,但他更属于美国。他在世时,各国民众尊敬他;他去世后,仍然是普通百姓心中最高尚的人。他将永远活在人们的心中。