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398中考英语作文预测:周围的环境
全文共 1216 字
+ 加入清单目前南通市正在积极创建全国文明城市,中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张通,请根据下列图表所示内容,给笔友John写一封电子邮件,介绍有关情况。
注意:1.邮件内容应包含所有要点,不要简单翻译,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数90左右(邮件中已经写好了的部分,不计入总词数)。
4.参考词汇:civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬
Dear John,
Im glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing something for it.
Zhang Tong
参考答案:
Dear John,
Im glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing some things for it. We are all polite to our teachers. (In class, we listen careful to them./When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…)We also respect the old. For example, we help them cross the streets.
We are always ready to help each other.(When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble. Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.
Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.
Nantong is my hometown. I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.
Zhang Tong
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篇1:2024中考英语作文素材:家乡的清晨
全文共 859 字
+ 加入清单导语:每个人都来自不一样的地方,而这个地方就是家乡,你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.
我的家乡是个美丽的地方,它在乡村,由于它远离城市,因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈,我几乎能看到鱼,山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候,因为空气很清新,还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫,我喜欢听到他们的声音,听起来像在为我歌唱。而且,雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样,我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我,我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。
篇2:种方式写好中考英语
全文共 1604 字
+ 加入清单一篇文章通常由开头、正文内容和结尾三个部分构成。的名师表示,这三个部分的比例安排要合理,只有合理的文章构成,才能拿到令人满意的分数。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:
1、直叙主题开门见山
文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代文章背景开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 以回忆来开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、以概括的方式来开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、铺垫环境来开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、表述目的来开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
以上就是中考英语作文满分、高分分段的同学常使用的几种开头方式,您也可以依据自身的习惯来挑选适合自己的开头方式。不论用什么开头,目的都只有一个,那就是取得高分。
篇3:节约用水中考英语作文
全文共 732 字
+ 加入清单题目:请以“saving water”为题,并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
saving water
1 what do we use water for?
2 why water is very important in our daily life?
3 how do we save water?
参考范文
as we all know, water is essential in our daily life. we drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. people cant live without water.
我们都知道水对于日常生活的重要性。我们每天喝水,用水洗东西和烹制食物,我们还用水来制造机器。离开水,人类就无法存活。
though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. so we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. we can save water by fixing dripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running tap.
虽然地球75%都被水覆盖,但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我们应该用淋浴代替泡澡来节约水,同时及时修好滴水的水龙头,并且不要开着水龙头洗东西。
篇4:2024年中考英语作文预测:光盘行动
全文共 1089 字
+ 加入清单近日,多家饭店启动"光盘行动,从我做起"活动,鼓励顾客"减少舌尖上的浪费"。同时,餐后晒空盘在网络上也悄然流行,不少人以身为"光盘族"骄傲。作为一名中学生,请你以"How to build an economized society"为题向《2l世纪报》投稿,号召大家在日常生活中勤俭节约,共同建设"节约型社会"。
要点包括: 1。不浪费粮食 2。日常生活中的节水、节电等 3。呼吁和号召
注意:1。词数:100左右。短文标题、开头已为你写好,但不计入总数; 2。内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
参考词汇:光盘行动 "clear your plate" campaign
Our government is aiming to build an "economized society"。 I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal。
Firstly, we know that many restaurants have joined the "clear your plate" campaign against wasting food。 We students should do the same in our daily life especially when having dinner with our friends and relatives。 It is a good virtue for us to do so。 Secondly, make sure that the lights and all the other electric facilities are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room。 Also it is important to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used。 Saving energy isalso saving ourselves。
In a word,if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to reduce waste, we can make contributions to an economized society.Lets work together from now on!
篇5:中考英语作文:关于环境保护问题
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+ 加入清单环境保护问题是中考热门话题,出现频率高,难度较大,必须掌握。
1 、6月5日(June 5)是世界环境保护日,我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.,你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛,要求:(1)、举例说明环境存在的问题1-3方面;(2)、如何保护好我们的环境,采取怎样的措施,举例1-3方面进行说明,字数80左右。
As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places,we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
2、保护环境
( 四川乐山) 从2008年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋,掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含:
(1)。在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;(2)。尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;(3)。离开教室应关灯;(4)。最好走路或骑自行车上学;(5)。简述理由:保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等。
参考词汇:布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect 能源energy
污染pollution 课本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
our environment is becoming worse and worse,what can we do for the environment?I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more,it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
3.为了保护地球有限的资源,我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文,短文开头已经给出。提示词;1.save water,the source of life,protect drinking water,stop polluting,make full use of it;2.save electricity,crucial,turn off,other electric machines;3. save forests,useful,stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish,save resources
参考作文:
Although the world develops much faster and better,the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.
Save water. Water is the source of life. No water,no life. So its very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it,but also make full use of it.
Save electricity. It is crucial. We cant imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.
Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.
Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper,bottles,and so on.
We can save resources in this way. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
篇6:中考英语作文:MyWeekend我的星期天
全文共 416 字
+ 加入清单On the weekend, I don’t have class, I feel so happy. I always wake up in the morning at about eight o’clock, my mother ask me to have breakfast. After breakfast, I go to shopping with my mother, I buy a lot of the things I like, then I go to play with my friends, we play the game hind and seek. I am so happy in the weekend.
在星期天,我没有课,我觉得很开心。我总是在早上大概八点钟起床,我的妈妈叫我吃早餐。吃完早餐,我和妈妈去购物,我买了很多我喜欢的东西,然后我和朋友去玩,我们玩抓迷藏。周末我玩得很开心。
篇7:2024中考关于友谊的英语作文
全文共 1191 字
+ 加入清单I still remember the Titanic, though its a big ship but it still sunk, so, in my opinion, the best ship is the friendship. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyones life.
我还记得泰坦尼克号,但它是一个大的船,但它仍然沉没,所以,在我看来,最好的船是友谊。友谊是每个人生活中最重要的东西。
When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on
当你失落时,朋友会让你振作起来。当你迷失方向时,朋友会引导你,鼓励你
everyone need friends because there are a lot of things that you cant deal with yourself, and the friend’s just make up for it.
每个人都需要朋友,因为有很多事情你不能处理自己的问题,和朋友只是弥补。
When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on
当你失落时,朋友会让你振作起来。当你迷失方向时,朋友会引导你,鼓励你
Friendship just likes the sun, it can make you fell warm though in the cold winter, friendship just likes the water in the desert, it can make you fell that in the world, there still has hope .in a word, the friendship is the same meaning as the greatness, selfness and devotion.
友谊就像太阳,它可以让你在寒冷的冬天温暖,友谊就像沙漠里的水,它可以让你爱上这个世界,还是有希望的。总之,友谊是伟大意义相同,无私和奉献。
To make friends ,adding a friend equals adding a way ,open your heart ,devote yourself ,let friendship make your world colorful 。
交朋友,增加一个朋友等于增加一个方法,打开你的心扉,奉献自己,让友谊使你的世界丰富多彩。
篇8:中考英语作文万能格式佳句
全文共 876 字
+ 加入清单1. We re often told that ......But is this really the case ?
我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?
2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today .
过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that ......
一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......
4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .
认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face .
这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。
6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place .
简而言之,为了把世界变成更美好的地方,我们必须勤奋工作。
7.Lost time is never found again.
岁月既往,一去不回。
8.Everybody should have a dream.
每个人都该有个梦想.
9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.
抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
10.Failure is the mother of success.
失败乃成功之母。
11.Lets look on the bright side.
让我们往好处想吧。
篇9:上学是否应该带手机中考英语作文
全文共 689 字
+ 加入清单now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. i think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their school. as a result, they have to stay at home to make money to keep their families.
another reason is that many parents think it useless for the girls to study and they would not like them to go to school. a third reason is that some children are not interested in their lessons, and would not like to go to school.
in my opinion all the children including the girls should have the chance to receive education. all the people should pay attention to the education of the children who will play a very important part in the future of our country.
篇10:2024年中考英语作文模板:减肥问题
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+ 加入清单假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So Idon’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating lateat night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are goodfor you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running isgreat. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends?Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will bewilling to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losingweight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’sreally important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sureyou will succeed one day.
Good luck.
Editor
篇11:2024年中考英语作文万能句子
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+ 加入清单一、开头句型选择
1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____。
2、俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3、现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____。 What makes things worse is that______。
4、现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______。 Many people like ______because ______。 Besides,______。
5、任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6、关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them,_____。
7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.
8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______while. Obviously,______,but why?
11、Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注。
12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题。
13、Nowadays,(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。
14、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
二、中间过渡篇
引出不同观点:
1、People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… 。 However, others believe that…。
人们对…的观点因人而异。有些人认为…。。 然而其他人却认为...
2、People may have different opinions on…
人们对…可能会有不同的见解。
3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
4、There are different opinions among people as to…
关于…。 人们的观点大不相同。
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure)。
对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
6、A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
7、It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
8、Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…( 励
9. 宾语从句:我认为,…… / 我认为……不 I think / I dont think that …
我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …
例:He doesnt think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10. Since + 主语+ 过去式, 主语 + 现在完成式。
例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。
11. how 引导的感叹句
例:那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are. 8. 状语从句
A)如果你不……,你就会…… If you dont …, youll …
例:If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。
B) 如此 ……,以至于…… so … that …
例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。
三、结尾句型
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
8、不用说…… It goes without saying that = It is obvious that …
例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
9、……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……
是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……
是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……
是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …
例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.
It is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
篇12:中考写出英语高分作文有哪些技巧
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+ 加入清单英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点,缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思,老师的工作量大,造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象,因此学生学得也不具体、不深入,忽略写作技能的提高,甚至误认为只要句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文,而在中考中获取高分呢?
一、写作决窍
总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;
关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;
组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;
字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿,后抄写。
篇13:中考英语作文素材:知识和经验
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+ 加入清单写作题目 Knowledge or Experience
Directions: You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.
1.some emphasize book knowledge
2.others stress practical experience
3.which one is more important? Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.
范文:
Which is more important in life, knowledge from the books you read, or personal experience you gain in reality? The answer may vary from person to person. The young, educated may emphasize the former, and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion, they are of the same importance.
Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary? How to prepare for your first child to come into the world? There is so much experience we need in careers, in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.
Experience, however, is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing, it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another, as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society, experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.
One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents, but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure, its secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world, or live long beyond one hundred years, but all of us can live many lives by reading books.
Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful, book knowledge makes one more learned.
篇14:中考满分英语作文MyFavoriteTeacher
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+ 加入清单Seeing my whole education history, I have many teachers. But my favorite teacher is only one. He is Mr Lu. He is my middle Chinese teacher and head teacher. He is about fifty years old. Maybe he works too hard, so his back is a little bent. He always wears a black glasses. He looks amiable but serious in study. He always thinks us before everything. His class is very interesting and full of different kinds of encouraging stories. He is very strict to us in study. But whoever has difficulties, he would help us without hesitation. Sometimes he plays the role of a strict teacher, sometimes he takes the place of a kind father.
纵观我整个受教育史,我有过很多老师。但我最喜欢的老师只有一个。他是陆老师。他是我的初中语文老师兼班主任。他大约五十岁。也许是因为工作辛苦,所以他的背有点弯了。他总是戴一副黑色的眼镜。他看上去很和蔼可亲,对学习却是很严格的。他总是把我们放在第一位。他的课是非常有趣的,也经常讲各种不同励志故事。他对我们学习很严格。但无论谁有困难,他都会毫不犹豫地帮助我们。有时他是一个严格的老师,有时候他是一个慈祥的父亲。
篇15:中考英语作文指导:应用文写作——日记
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+ 加入清单根据中英文提示,与一篇日记,记叙一次(西塞山)郊游。(短文的开头已经给出。)
要求:
1.短文应包括汉语和英语提示内容。
2.语句通顺,意思连贯。
3.书写工整,卷面整洁,标点符号正确。
4.字数不少于80个英语单词。
Sunday, May 1st
I got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got to the foot of the mount at 8:30.We began climbing the mount soon. On our way the air was so fresh and the scenery was so beautiful. Everybody was talking and laughing.We reached the top at about 10:00. The Yangtze River appeared in the north, and over the river there was a great bridge. We felt very relaxed. Seeing some birds flying in the sky, I suddenly remembered a popular poem of Tang dynasty. " Birds are flying in front of Xisai Mount ,…". I kept feeling proud of our city.
篇16:关于中考英语作文的评分标准明细
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:
2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)
2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)
2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少15个词扣0.5分,610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
篇17:中考英语作文:语言学习
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+ 加入清单English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice,such as listening to tapes,watching English TV programs. And I found it really helpful. In fact,there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example,I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
篇18:中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准
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+ 加入清单1)结构2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档,看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。 三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏 知己知彼,方能百战不殆,既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化,相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享,笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。
1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点,让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文,无论是那种文体,都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试,(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试,故被叫过美国的高考)。 我们管这样的文章叫做HamburgerWriting(汉堡写作)
顾名思义,就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章,都可以通用。简单解释如下:
篇19:中考英语作文:关于环境保护问题
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+ 加入清单As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places,we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
篇20:2024中考英语作文常用句型汇总
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+ 加入清单一、…the + -est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen( known/heard/had/read, etc)
…the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句:helen is the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
mr. chang is the kindest teacher that i have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
*二、nothing is + -er than to + v ;nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + v
例句:nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
*三、…cannot emphasize the importance of …too much. (再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)例句:we cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
*四、there is no denying that + s + v ...(不可否认的……) 例句:there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
*五、it is universally acknowledged that + 句子…… (全世界都知道……)例句:it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
*六、there is no doubt that + 句子……(毫无疑问的……)
例句:there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、an advantage of …is that + 句子 (……的优点是……)
例句:an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、the reason why + 句子…… is that + 句子 (……的原因是……)
例句:the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
*九、so + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子…… (如此……以致于……) 例句:so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
十、adj + as + subject(主词)+ be, s + v~ (虽然……)
例句:rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. (by no means = in no way = on no account =at no time = in no case = in no sense = under no circumstances = not ...in the least 一点也不)
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、the + -er + s + v, …the + -er + s + v…
the + more + adj + s + v, …the + more + adj + s + v …(愈……愈……)例句:the harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈进步。
the more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
十二、by +ving, …can…(借着...,..能够..) 例句:by taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
*十三、…enable + object(受词)+ to + v (……使……能够……) 例句:listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
*十四、on no account can we + v…(我们绝对不能……) 例句:on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、it is time + s + 过去式 (该是……的时候了) 例句:it is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、those who…(……的人……) 例句:those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
*十七、there is no one but…(没有人不……) 例句:there is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
*十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + v (不得不……) 例句:since the examination is around the corner, i am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
*十九、it is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的) it is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
it is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) 例句: it is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、that is the reason why…(那就是……的原因) 例句:summer is sultry. that is the reason why i dont like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。