初一关于春节的英语作文60词(精品20篇)
秋天是收获的季节,也是最美的季节。它就像一幅精美的水彩画,永远印在我们的脑海里。下面是小编收集整理的初一关于春节的英语作文60词,希望对您有所帮助!
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10002024春节英语作文SpringFestival
全文共 1837 字
+ 加入清单The Spring Festival is a traditional festival of the Chinese people, every family decorated, posted red couplets and streets are put up red lanterns, and present a bright, cheery festival scene.
Early New Years eve, each of us children put on new clothes, look refreshed, grandma kua I really handsome, my mother prepared a delicious dinner table, there are my favorite braise in soy sauce meat, lobster, saute fish... The family sat around the big round table, all drink a toast to each other, bless each other, I end up glass I wish grandpas grandmother health, long life. I wish mom and dad work victory, all the best. Mom and dad grandpas grandmother also wish me good good study, day day up. They gave me a lot of money, I made a merry heart, thank they gave me a happy family.
After dinner, our family together into the yard with fireworks, I lighted joss stick in each hand, and father lit fireworks, suddenly heard a loud "sou -" only fireworks fly on the sky exploded, some out of colorful flowers, some spelling into a variety of beautiful patterns, there are beautiful like a parachute, colorful fireworks lit up the sky, we cheerfully Shouting and laughing...
After the fireworks, we returned to the house, sitting on the sofa watching CCTV broadcast of the Spring Festival gala a good laugh at wonderful programs.
A year spent in laughter. Tomorrow, we grew one year again.
春节是中国人民的传统节日,家家户户张灯结彩,贴红对联,大街小巷都挂起了红灯笼,到处呈现出热热闹闹,喜气洋洋的节日景象.
除夕那天,我们每个小朋友早早穿上了新衣服,显得精神焕发,奶奶夸我真帅气,妈妈准备了一桌美味可口的年夜饭,有我最爱吃的红烧肉,大龙虾,小炒鱼……我们一家人坐在大圆桌四周,大家互相敬酒,互相祝福,我端起酒杯祝爷爷奶奶身体健康,长命百岁。祝爸爸妈妈工作胜利,万事如意。爸爸妈妈爷爷奶奶也祝我好好学习,天天向上。他们还给了我好多压岁钱,我的心乐开了花,感谢他们给了我一个幸福的家。
吃完晚饭,我们一家人一起到院子里放烟花,我一手拿点燃的线香,和爸爸一起点燃着烟花的导火线,顿时只听到一声“嗖——”烟花飞上天空炸开了,有的绽放出五彩缤纷的花朵,有的拼写成各式各样的美丽的图案,还有的像一个个漂亮的降落伞,绚丽多彩的烟花照亮了天空,我们兴高采烈地喊着,欢笑着……
放完烟花,我们回到屋里,坐在沙发上收看中央电视台播放的《春节联欢晚会》精彩的节目逗得哈哈大笑。
一年就在欢声笑语中度过了。明天,我们又长大一岁了。
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篇1:难忘春节英语作文
全文共 862 字
+ 加入清单The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, the most exciting festival is once a year in. Its to celebrate the Lunar New Year holiday.
Every year on the evening before the Spring Festival, we are one family will get together and have a big meal. In many places people like to set off firecrackers. Dumplings are the most traditional foods. Children like the festival very much, because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes. They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck. People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good luck.
The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long. People visit relatives and friends said " I wish you good luck ". People enjoy the Spring Festival, during this time they can have a good rest.
This is Chinas traditional Spring Festival holiday, you know?
篇2:初一英语作文MyHappiestDay
全文共 571 字
+ 加入清单I am 13 years old now. Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party. I invited some friends to the party.
In the morning my mother got up early and began to cook. My father helped her with cooking. They were so busy that they had no time io talk with me.
When all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake. My father gave me new clothes and some books as presents. I was moved to tears. My friends sang birthday songs for me and gave me some presents. I had a wonderful birthday.
[初一英语作文 My Happiest Day
篇3:春节的风俗作文用英语
全文共 520 字
+ 加入清单The Spring Festival in China is an ancient festival, is also the most important throughout the year a festival to celebrate this holiday, over one thousand years of history in the development, formed some relatively fixed customs and habits, and there are many also it today.
Happy New Year Spring Festival, the elders will prepared New Years money to the younger generation, it is said that the New Years money can be pinned XieSui, because "old" and "are" harmonics, junior get lucky money can be spent a year in peace.
篇4:初一春节日记150字
全文共 253 字
+ 加入清单春节是中国传统的节日,春节是非常热闹的。
春节可以放鞭炮、看烟花、点爆竹、吃饺子,吃团圆饭是非常重要的,春节也以叫做新年,因为春节是一家子团圆的日子,所以非常的重要。
那时候肯定很热闹,大街小巷都是爆竹声“噼里啪啦”的响。每一户人家都非常热闹,大家围成一桌吃年夜饭。我记得有一次过年,我奶奶烧了一大桌子的菜,大鱼大肉,样样俱全。吃完饭后,我们又出去看烟花,绿的烟花、红的烟花、紫色的烟花,小的大的都有。天空上五彩缤纷,非常美!
我们又开始吃饺子,有肉馅的、豆腐馅的、芹菜馅的,我吃了每一种。
我最喜欢的就是新年了!
篇5:初一关于运动的英语作文
全文共 1729 字
+ 加入清单Our school sports activities are rich and colorful, students can according to their own interest and hobby.
Look! Side of the students in playing table tennis, play is really fierce. If you were a little to disturb him, he will definitely not ignore you, if he lose the best chance to beat the opponent, he would have called you. Their meets table tennis table tennis racquet "lit up" sound, like playing music. Rival, always grasp the opportunity, look, the chance came, rival buckle the board, too handsome, this plate highlighted his personality.
Play basketball in the fashion now. Students of a class is a race against time to play basketball, especially the game the most interesting, can exercise the body, and can cultivate the spirit of teamwork, he is of great benefit to people. The school team after concentrated training, has the extraordinary skill, saw this scene I really envy for them. I also want to be a player when he grows up.
On physical education teacher ordered us to do a minute sit-ups and make record, the result of our class Huang Xu classmate, broke the record in four grade: 51 sit-ups. He once in Tian Ji games, after arduous efforts to create a miracle, won the first place.
Sports can strengthen peoples physique, as a celebrity said: "life is movement, and knowledge is gained by accumulation.
我们学校的体育活动真是丰富多彩,同学们可以根据自己的兴趣、爱好参加。
瞧!这边的同学在打乒乓球呢,打得真激烈。你要是稍微打扰他一下,他绝对会不会理睬你,如果他失去打败对手的机会,他准会骂你。他们的乒乓拍碰到乒乓的时候发出“蹦蹦蹦”响声,像奏乐似的。对手一直把握机会,看,机会终于来了,对手反扣一板,动作实在太帅了,这一板突出了他的个性。
现在流行打蓝球了。同学们一下课就争分夺秒的去打篮球,特别是比赛最有趣,既能锻炼身体,又能培养团队合作精神,他对人们大有好处。那些校队经过集中训练,有着非同一般的球技,看见这一幕我真是对他们羡慕不已。长大后我也要当一名球员。
上体育课的时候老师命令我们做一分钟的仰卧起坐并做好记录,结果我们班的黄旭同学,打破了小学四年级的最高记录:51个仰卧起坐。他曾经在田际运动会中,经过艰辛的努力创造了奇迹,获得了第一名的好成绩。
运动能增强人的体质,正如名人所说:“生命在于运动,知识在于积累。
篇6:写春节的起源英语作文
全文共 805 字
+ 加入清单春节是中国民间最隆重的传统节日。在夏历正月初一,又叫阴历年,俗称“过年”、“新年”。春节的历史很悠久,它起源于殷商时期年头岁尾的祭神祭祖活动。按照我国农历,正月 初一古称元日、元辰、元正、元朔、元旦等,俗称年初一,到了民国时期,改用公历,公历的一月一日称为元旦,把农历的一月一日叫春节。
Lunar New Year , the most solemn of traditional Chinese folk festivals. First day of the first lunar month in the traditional Chinese lunar calendar, known as the Moon, commonly known as "New Year" and "New Year." The long history of the Spring Festival, which originated in the Shang period the year draws to a close servicemen and the memorial activities. According to Chinas Lunar, the first day of the first lunar month yen ancient name, Yuan-chen, a copy, is Emperor, the New Year Day, which is commonly known as Day of the Republic. switch to the Gregorian calendar, the calendar on January 1 as New Years Day, January 1st called the Lunar Spring Festival.
篇7:初一英语作文:Mysweethome
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+ 加入清单Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.
I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didn't want me leave until I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I can't take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!
That's why I love my sweet home,Don't you think so ?
篇8:3正月初一春节作文
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+ 加入清单去年,我们一家去了在竹峪的小姨家过春节。那是一个乡村小镇,那里山清水秀、依山傍水、空气清新。真是一个如诗如画的好地方。
大年三十这天,我们先进行了大扫除。我负责擦门窗,妈妈负责拖地,爸爸负责贴窗花和对联,外婆负责买祭祖要用的东西,大姨和小姨负责做年夜饭。大家忙得不亦乐乎,每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐、幸福的笑容。
接着我们在外婆的带领下,一群人浩浩荡荡的上山去祭祖。
来到坟墓前,大人们又是敬香,又是烧纸钱,每个人都排着队上前磕头。外婆嘴里还不停地念叨着一些让祖先保佑我们的吉祥话。虽然不知道祖先是不是真的能保佑我们,但我还是认真的敬着香、磕着头。感受着过年的每一个仪式,觉得这个年特别的有意思。
到了吃团年饭的时候。桌子上摆满了丰盛的饭菜:有鸡、有鸭、还有中国的传统美食:腊肉、香肠……桌子中间还摆着一条大大的红烧鱼,我知道那是每年必不可少的菜,因为它寓意着年年有余,一年更比一年好。
晚饭后,小姨买了很多的烟花。有擦炮、甩炮、金箍棒……这可是我梦寐以求的东西啊!今天终于如愿以偿了。我赶紧选了一个大礼炮要求爸爸把它点燃。随着一声巨响“咻——砰。”一朵朵绚丽多彩、璀璨夺目的烟花绽放在夜空中,把黑夜照得跟白天一样明亮。放完这个,我又迫不及待的放起了各式各样的烟花,一个接一个,我太开心了。因为我以前过春节都在城市里过的不能放烟花,今天我一定要痛痛快快的放个够。
就这样,我度过了一个难忘的春节。
篇9:中秋节初一英语
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+ 加入清单Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival. It usually es in September or October .On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes. It is said "Hou Yi" missed his wife,so he made mooncakes. It looks like the moon.
There are many kinds of mooncakes. They are small round cakes with meat,nuts or something sweet inside . eating mooncakes has been our custom. Families stay outside in the open air eat a big dinner and mooncakes. The most important thing is looking at the moon,On that day,the moon kooks brighter and rounder. We call this moon the full moon.
On that day,families get together,so we call this day getting together. This is Mid-autumn Day. I love it very much. Because on that day I can eat mooncakes. And my brother es back home. He works outside all year. Only that day and the Spring Festival. He es back. So that day I am especially happy. On that day my family gets together.
中秋节是一个中国节日,通常是九月或十月。当天我们经常吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。据说“后羿”想念他的妻子,所以他做了月饼。它看起来像月亮。
有各种各样的月饼。它们是小圆饼,里面有肉,坚果或者里面的甜点。吃月饼是我们的习惯。家人在户外露天吃大餐和月饼。最重要的是看着月亮,在那一天,月亮变得越来越明亮。我们称这个月亮为满月。
在那一天,家庭聚在一起,所以我们称这一天聚在一起。这是中秋节。我非常喜欢。因为那天我可以吃月饼。而且我的兄弟回家了。他全年都在外面工作只有那一天和春节。他回来了。所以那天我特别开心。那天我的家人聚在一起。
篇10:春节相关的英语作文
全文共 857 字
+ 加入清单Dear Simon,
I’m glad to tell you something about Spring Festival. Spring Festival is very important in China. It happens every year, but not on the same day. It usually comes in February, but sometimes it comes in January. A few days before Spring Festival we clean our house and sweep away all the bad luck. We always buy new clothes for Spring Festival. We buy lots of food, too. On the evening before Spring Festival, we have a big family dinner. We eat lots of traditional food, such as jiaozi— a kind of dumping. We usually watch a special programme on television. Parents usually give thEir children a hongbao. It means good money. We visit our friends and relatives the day before Spring Festival. Spring Festival finishes at Lantern Festival, and we often eat yuanxiao on that day.
Tell me about a festival in your country.
Love from,
Lingling
篇11:春节英语作文-SpringFestival
全文共 760 字
+ 加入清单Chinese Lunar New Year,or Spring Festival falls on January 1st according to the lunar calendar,usually around the late January or early February.As the start of spring as well as a new year,it is the most important celebration of the year.Each family get reunited during the New Year.On the Eve,there is a big dinner for the family when each member return to get together.
The biggest New Years party is held on CCTV.Hundreds of people gather there,meanwhile millions of others all over the country were sitting in front of the screen to watch excellent performances for more than four hours continuously.The bell strike twelve at midnight to welcome the coming of the New Year or Spring.People start to set off firecraks and say "Happy New Year" to each other.
篇12:2春节英语作文100字
全文共 390 字
+ 加入清单The happy spring festival spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month。chinese people most like the spring festival。during spring festival,Chinese people like having meals with their families,playing fireworks in the open air。my sisters and iplayed fireworks on that day。We had many fireworks。
they were very beautiful。they were running into the sky and breaking into pieces。
篇13:初一作文春节趣事
全文共 496 字
+ 加入清单我的家乡在漳浦一个美丽的小山村,每到春节的时候,那里都会放鞭炮、烟花、贴春联……等等。我最喜欢放烟花爆竹了。
我喜欢放炮。炮的种类很多:有普通的鞭炮,有吓人的飞天炮,有耀眼的闪光炮,还有好玩的沙炮……我最喜欢的要数闪光炮了,看它一闪一闪的,多么像夜空中那无数颗星星啊!我最害怕的要数飞天炮了,表哥知道我怕飞天炮,我春节回去他就故意买飞天炮吓唬我,趁我不注意偷偷点燃,“啾------啪”地一声把我给吓到了,我就再也不敢放飞天炮了。
舅舅在除夕时总喜欢在下午就买鞭炮和烟花,我和表哥都跟着去买一些小炮和一些小玩意儿。
9点、10点、11点、12点!时间到了,开始放鞭炮和烟花了,我和表哥急忙提前拆开鞭炮的包装袋,拆了几个小鞭炮藏在口袋,留着明天放。
开始放鞭炮了,舅舅用香点燃了引线,我随即捂上了耳朵,“啪啪啪……”鞭炮响了起来,我虽然捂着耳朵,但我还是觉得我的耳朵快要被鞭炮声震聋了。放烟花时我以为会比鞭炮好一些,没想到烟花来势更猛,我得边捂耳朵边躲浓烟,免得被呛到。不知不觉时间很快就过去了。
春节的快乐时光很快过了,我不得不跟爸爸妈妈回厦门。但老家那种快乐的春节气氛还回想在耳边,深深地刻在我心中!
篇14:春节英语作文带翻译
全文共 986 字
+ 加入清单There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to have some fun.
On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.
在我国,一年有很多节日,在这些节日中,我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日,更因为它是新一年的开始,给人们带来新的希望,也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方,人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。
通常,我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,之后家人团座一起,分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一,人们通常会早起,会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里,人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之,春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。
篇15:春节的好处英语作文
全文共 906 字
+ 加入清单Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China for Spring Festival. In China, there are many people could not often have meat,rice or other delicious food. They could only eat these during the Spring festival. So every year they hoped that the Spring Festival would come soon. Now, although people‘s life is much better,and we can eat the delicious foods everyday. People still like the festival. Because most people can have a long holiday,and we are free to go on a trip or visit our friends or have parties with our family. In the evenings,we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the TV programmes.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
谢谢你的来信。我很高兴听说你要来中国过春节。在中国,有很多人不能经常吃肉类,大米或其他美味的食物。他们只能在春节期间吃这些东西。所以每年他们都希望春节快到了。现在,虽然人们的生活是更好的,我们可以吃美味的食物,每天。人们仍然喜欢这个节日。因为大多数人可以有一个长长的假期,我们可以自由地去旅行或拜访我们的朋友或与我们的家庭聚会。在晚上,我们可以在餐厅大吃一顿饭,或在家里待在家里看电视节目。
我非常喜欢春节。
篇16:关于初一春节日记150字
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+ 加入清单我们一家四口去东阳影视城旅游。路上的风景很美。到了那里人非常的多,我们排了很长的队伍才买到了票。
我们先到明清宫参观,那里有很多模仿明清时代的建筑物,非常壮观。我们还玩了骑马。我又怕又开心,真刺激。我们又去了秦王宫,看了兵马俑,我知道了古代的士兵是什么样子的。我去取了清明上河图,听爸爸说,清明上河图这地方,是根据古代一个人画的画建造出来的,我被那美丽的风景给迷住了。
最后我们又去了梦幻谷,我玩了转啊转的小车和秋千,还玩了一个像游乐园的地方。我们玩好了,一到车上,我又累又开心,我就睡着了,等我醒了,爸爸已经开车到家了。
篇17:喜迎春节的英语
全文共 727 字
+ 加入清单Spring Festival is the traditional holiday of China.Its one of the most grand festival of the whole year.
People will get a half a month off,its longer than the Yuandan holiday. It falls on the first day of the lular year.During Spring Festival,people in China will get together, mop the windows to make them bright,sweep the ceil,the walls,the floor,decorate their home with Chinese knot and Fus on the first day of the lular year.The long period before this Spring Festival of 2018 and prepare and have a big feast together.
For the tradition,people will make a lot of dumplings, perpare some red envelopes, cook some traditional foods as well,for example, frieing tofus,eatting noodles to calculate good luck for the New Year.
篇18:初一春节活动主题的
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+ 加入清单在过大年的前一天,妈妈带着我和从北京刚回来的甜甜去澡堂洗澡,可是没想到
到了澡堂,我心里暗想:这么多天都没有洗澡,一定要美美的冲一个热水澡来缓解疲乏。于是,我便很快地脱了衣服,拉起妹妹的手冲进澡堂。
可是,扑面而来的不是凉爽的湿气,而是闷热闷热的空气,其中还夹杂着一股汗味。这可把我害惨了,我被呛得扭头猛咳,仿佛胸部压了一块重金属,呼吸不上来,浑身燥热。再扭头放眼一看,天啊,这哪是澡堂,简直和赶集的差不多!
只见到处是人,每个淋浴头下站了三四个人;再看那儿,搓澡的阿姨更是辛苦,搓完这个又搓那个,招待不好又让顾客骂,搓疼了又不乐意;池子里几个小孩在玩,大人在一旁聊天,只听吆喝声、叫骂声、嬉戏声此起彼伏,响成一片,我都看呆了。
赶快洗澡吧,可在哪儿洗又是个问题。把整个淋浴区走了不下四五个来回,就是找不着地方,我们只好先泡木桶浴。可这样的环境谁有心情泡啊,于是我们匆匆出来继续找位。
看吧,淋浴区也是乱成一片,不要说洗了,走几步都困难。一个淋浴头犹如一片救命的面包,四五个人同时争夺,抢到的沾沾自喜,没抢到的虎视眈眈;碰着素质高点的,四五个人轮流冲冲,心里倒也舒服;如果素质不高从头霸占到尾,你就一边晾着去吧!要是个年轻人,动作利索,还有点盼头;要是上了年纪,嘿,你就媳妇变公婆慢慢熬吧!
我们可是做了个英明的决定:先搓后洗。这也是没办法,幸亏搓澡排得早,要不然可惨了。搓完后,我们充分发挥见缝插针的特点,总算抢到一个淋浴头,可没冲两下,就有人来问津,总不能不让吧,于是,就这样,两个半小时不知不觉地溜了过去
这囫囵澡一洗完,我便胡乱套上衣服,之前积蓄的一点点耐心也没了,留下一句老妈快点便带着妹妹逃命去也。这件事多么有趣啊!
篇19:我的朋友初一英语
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+ 加入清单In this chapter of the novel,Jane met her new friend-Helen.What Helen said really impressed me a lot,driving me think deeply.
“Life is too short to hate other people.We all have faults,but when we die,only the pure flame of the spirt will be left.Thats why I never think of revenge,I never consider life unfair.I live in calm,looking forward to the end."
Honesly speaking,I complained about my life or people around me now and again,wodering why it was always unfair to me.However,think it over,I shouldt have been so mean.Time flies.We need to expand the width of life instead of wasting time to think about something meaningless.
篇20:初一英语作文教学
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+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。