关于建议信的英语作文高二上学期（汇编20篇）

亲爱的英语老师：

您还好吗?您还记得我吗?我是婷婷啊，呵呵，我想您了，告诉你一个好消息，我考上大学了，是二本，许昌学院。本来该早点告诉你的，但我现在才想起来怎么让你收到这封信。真要谢谢您了，如果不是您对我英语的鼓励和指导，我绝对不会学好英语的，谢谢您。

其实在五中我英语一直还差不多，一直用您的方法，把完形填空填好，再通读再思考。书面表达也是全部收集在一个本子上早读就背，几乎每个早读都看英语。

现在还能想起您在初中时每天在三三和四班之间的阳台上来回穿梭，一句一句的给我们领读，一遍一遍的背诵。想起您可爱的面庞，胖胖的笑脸，戴着一副大眼镜，是那么和蔼可亲。想起在初中的日子，每天上您的课，就是一种享受，我老是先把英语作业统统做好，上课认真听讲，偶尔会得到您粉笔头的亲睐，呵呵。还记得当初我不忍心离开好朋友们去县里上学，现在想起来，我还真是可笑，竟然不想去县里最好的初中，幸亏我来了，要不然我就无缘当您的学生，不能见您了。还记得你自我介绍时让我们才您叫啥?您说您是常香什么?我们都说你是常香玉，呵呵。

刚上学没几天我就办了一件丑事，现在想起来都脸红，羞愧。您还记得吗?我上课看鲁滨孙漂流记被你发现了，你狠狠的批评了我，而且连我名字也不叫，直接叫我鲁滨孙漂流记，哎呀，呵呵，没脸见人了。您没收了我借的书，而且说让我考试考上办理前十名就还给我，对于从来没上过补习班的我，没接触过英语的我，老是生病回家里的我，真是太难了。

但是我在老妈的帮助下完成了艰巨的任务，之后您并没有给我书，还记得我老是找您要，你是在半年之后给我的，那时我早就有不太喜欢您到十分喜欢英语进而喜欢上你了。后来您老是鼓励我学习，我生病了您还送我到校外的门诊输液，中招前还握着我的手嘱咐我认真。老师。谢谢您。要不是您，我是不会坚持好好学英语的。因为我一点也不适应高中老师的方法，特别是高三一位老师，甚至是十分十分讨厌她，我暗地里教她小老婆儿，她比你年轻，但是，哎呀，没法形容，上她的课我从来就是睡觉睡觉再睡觉，讲题我也很少听，回答他的问题站起来就当没那回事，等她再提别人。

在她眼里我肯定不是个好学生，但我并没有因而不学英语，我老是在课堂上做我想做的英语题，不听她说，我会把资料上的题全部做做，不会的再问她。我老是在想着：“小老婆儿，你给我等着，别看我不想搭理你，你也不想搭理我，我一定要考个英语高分让你大吃一惊，让你知道我的厉害”我就是这么想的。没想到啊，在高考中，我英语一下子考了123分，创记录了。

更吃惊的是，从在九中到五中，我从来没上过前十名，在九中也就是最高二十名左右，五中也是吧。高中最后一次考试竟然考了前十名，老师，你说我是不是很幸运啊，平时在前十名的同学都不如愿，没考上。我现在还是很自豪呢，呵呵。虽然没有到我喜欢的天津上学，但我还是会继续好好学习的。我会加油的。我家现在搬到县里来了，离您家也不太远吧，呵呵，以后有机会我去学校找你啊。您有我们的大头贴，可我们有您的照片，不过我是不会忘了你的。

永远不会如果您见了这封信，我会很高兴的。我很想念我的老师们，漂亮的用芳老师和兰芳老师，还有文雅的增强老师。您要替我向他们问好啊，谢谢喽。最后我再次的谢谢您，谢谢诸位老师，感谢你们，你们的培育，我永远不会忘记你们的。您的学生：常婷。我把它放在九中的贴吧里，那位小弟弟后小妹妹看见了，希望你们让我的老师知道，谢谢你们喽。

On the top of the mountain hill lived a little boy called Marlin. He was a

jolly fellow that helped people when they were in need.

The only problem was, whenever there was somebody in need, he would give

them something to eat so as to solve their problems. The people in his country

soon became sick of this, and so wanted him to stop. But Marlin just won’t; and

went on helping and helping and helping… nobody knew when he was going to stop,

or when they were going to let him know that they didn’t want him to bother all

day. Ugh, but Marlin wouldn’t stop; all day long he helped this and that, the

problem was that people don’t want to mordacity him, and they said that he was

very kind.

One day, Marlin saw a boy crying, and said, “Hey there little one; don’t

cry, I, the super Marlin is here! And I am going to solve your problem!” “I want

a music box,” at these words, Marlin was astonished, “A-a music b-box?” “Yes,”

replied the boy jumping happily, “But my parents won’t buy me one. It is at the

shop near Sunshine school. I hope to get me one! Wahoo!” Marlin said, “I

couldn’t afford a music box! It is worth $100!”

Marlin was very sad, but also wanted to try, for he was the king of

everything, and helps save the day. He ran to his house, and counted his money,

but found out that he only had $10. He was now very, very angry. He had decided

to earn more and more money, and so to help that poor little boy. As he had

promised, he worked very hard to earn money. Although he was just a little boy,

he ought to do what he had said; for those are the rules. And when he had enough

money, he would buy the music box, and hand it to that poor boy.

Marlin did anything he could to earn money: Sweep the floor, clean his

room; grow plants, water them, and cut flowers for the house. When he had

already $90, he had decided to help other people. When it was already winter, he

took a shovel and helped his neighbors, friends to shovel snow; and they paid

him a great deal of money.

At last, Marlin had got enough money; he was so excited that he hopped here

and there ten times! Finally, he went to the store near Sunshine school, and

bought the music box, and then handed it to the same boy at his home. Marlin

soon became famous, and he was called, ‘Marlin Blavatsky.’

Dear Susan，

Im very sorry that I was out when you came to see me yesterday evening。 Im afraid Id gone to the pub with some friends and didnt get back until 12 oclock。 I wish I had known you were in Luoyang as you could have e with us。 It would have been a good introduction to the night life!

Anyway， I will call on you at 10 oclock on Saturday morning at your hotel。 We can have the day together， if you have nothing else planned Ill show you some of the places of interest that you may not have seen。

Please let me know if you will be available on Saturday morning。

Best wishes

Chen Cheng

We often hear people say, “Never give up.” These can be encouraging words

and words of determination. A person who believes in them will keep trying to

reach his goal no matter how many times he fails. Benjamin Franklin once

said,”Great works are performed not by strength,but by perseverance.”From the

remark,we can infer that,of all the advantageous characteristics,perseverance

plays a crucial role in one’s success.

Remember that year, I bought a bike,but I cant ride a bike! Mom seems to

understand my thoughts, gently to me: "tomorrow Ill show you to your square,

teach you to ride a bicycle." "Good!" Im happy to reply.

The next morning, my mother and I went to the square. Mother let me push

this bike, and look for the feeling, I have to not boring to walk cycles.

Fifteen minutes passed, and my feet really acid! I want to back down. Well,

learn the bike how so difficult, it is better not learn! At this time, my mother

said to me ": well, quite good!" Listened to mothers words, my heart is light

suddenly full of confidence. Mother then began to lecture, "learning bicycle,

the most important thing is to keep the car balance, otherwise the car like a no

head of flies, left, right. Didnt walk a few steps, I already fell off. My

knees hurt, out of the red blood, looking at this bright red blood, I cant help

but shed a hot tears, his mouth still keeps saying: "I dont learn, I dont

learn! After listening to his mother, to longly say to me: "do what matter as

long as perseverance, perseverance, perseverance will be successful. Like what

you do is always fall by the wayside, how can success?" Listen to the mothers

teachings I have the confidence again, two days before, I had learned to ride a

bicycle, but most importantly, I learned to insist on.Now I see them as my

motto, adhere to is victory let it remind me to do anything as long as

perseverance, perseverance, perseverance will be successful.

Nothing can be more exciting than success to a man.But you must face many

difficulties before you can succeed. No one can make it easily.And its harder

for those who are in adverse conditions to succeed.However,everything has two

sides.Just as someone said, in every adversity there lies the seed of an

advantage and in every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the

victory next time.The most important focus is to establish a brief, that is

perseverance.The British ex-prime minister Winston Churchill had a motto of

"Never, never, never, never give up .Nothing can substitute for hard work. Life

is a process of struggle for success.

Halloween is on the last day of October, it is very popular in the western country. On that day, people will dress in the horrible style, especially for the kids, they will knock from door to door. If people dont give them the candy, the children will play tricks on them. But in China, more and more young people like to follow this trend, they will play the roles and find some fun. As for me, Id like to join some activities on the Halloween. My friends always have some funny costumes, so I will borrow one from them. Then we dress together, when night comes, we will come to join the party. We sing and dance. It is such a fun night. Before the midnight, we will get together and take some drinks. We talk about the happy hour. I like these activities.

万圣节在10月的最后一天,它在西方国家很受欢迎。在那一天,人们会穿着恐怖风格的服装,尤其是孩子们,他们会挨家挨户敲门。如果人们不给他们糖果,孩子们就会捉弄他们。但在中国,越来越多的年轻人喜欢追随这个潮流,他们会扮演角色，找到乐趣。至于我,我喜欢在万圣节参加一些活动。我的朋友总是有一些有趣的服装,所以我会借一件。然后我们一起打扮,夜幕降临时,我们将会来参加聚会。我们唱歌跳舞。这是一个有趣的夜晚。在午夜之前,我们会聚在一起,喝饮料。我们谈论快乐的时光。我喜欢这些活动。

My idol in my heart is liu xiang. He is the world famous athlete. In all

kinds of game， he has won 50 gold MEDALS， 13 silver and 6 bronze MEDALS.

In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games， he won the mens 110 m hurdles hurdles

world champions at a stroke， become the pride of Chinese people， but also the

pride of Asia.

Because of hard training and competition， liu xiang has left a lot of

injuries， especially tendon injury is serious. In 2008 the Olympic Games， liu

xiang as pain failed to enter the finals， I regret to quit.

He to the United States after treatment， and participated in many

international and domestic competition， repeatedly won the champion， second，

third， also broke the records.

This years London Olympic Games， liu xiang took part in the game again，

sadly he injured in the preliminaries and fell， but he stubbornly stood up， with

one leg hard to jump to the end， he occasionally to stop pain， take a deep

breath.

Although many people have criticized him， because liu xiang out of the race

but I think hes achievements and fight for the honor is the vast majority of

people cant do it. His spirit is worthy of my study.

We both in learning， and doing other things， not to need the indefatigable

spirit?

I am in real life， whenever encounter difficulties to retreat， the thought

of liu xiang， the tenacious spirit， will inspire me to go to overcome. So， he is

my idol in my heart.

Dear David:

I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having

answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the

reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable. When your

letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong. As my family could not forward it to me

during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment

when I took it up. Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you

these few lines to express my deep regret.

I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip. I shall be pleased to give

you an account to of them when I see you next.

Sincerely yours,

12 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I am a December 2003 graduate from the University of San Francisco (USF) with a bachelors degree in International Business. As part of my career planning, I am very interested in supplementing my international business education with a basic knowledge of the Chinese language. This I hope will help me enter into business commerce with business organizations partnering with Chinas economic development.

I already have information from BLCU and hope to study there for at least one full year starting with this summers program continuing through the fall and spring semester 2006. Can your office advise me if such scholarships might be available to me?

I have been studying Chinese for one year now. I am not sure what level I belong to. I was told that there will be an HSK test in our university in September. I am planning to attend the test. But I dont know if the result of the test is recognized by your university. If so, can it be a help for me to apply for the scholarship?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Jolly

One story about Jack,an Irishman,who was not allowed into Heaven because he was stingy with his money.So he was sent to hell.But down there he played tricks on the Devil (Satan),so he was kicked out of Hell and made to walk the earth forever carrying a lantern.

Well,Irish children made Jacks lanterns on October 31st from a large potato or turnip,hollowed out with the sides having holes and lit by little candles inside.And Irish children would carry them as they went from house to house begging for food for the village Halloween festival that honored the Druid god Muck Olla.The Irish name for these lanterns was "Jack with the lantern" or "Jack of the lantern," abbreviated as " Jack-o-lantern" and now spelled "jack-o-lantern."

The traditional Halloween you can read about in most books was just childrens fun night.Halloween celebrations would start in October in every elementary school.

关于万圣节有这样一个故事.是说有一个叫杰克的爱尔兰人,因为他对钱特别的吝啬,就不允许他进入天堂,而被打入地狱.但是在那里他老是捉弄魔鬼撒旦,所以被踢出地狱,罚他提着灯笼永远在人世里行走.

在十月三十一日爱尔兰的孩子们用土豆和萝卜制作“杰克的灯笼”,他们把中间挖掉、表面上打洞并在里边点上蜡烛.为村里庆祝督伊德神的万圣节,孩子们提着这种灯笼挨家挨户乞讨食物.这种灯笼的爱尔兰名字是“拿灯笼的杰克”或者“杰克的灯笼”,缩写为Jack-o-lantern .

现在你在大多数书里读到的万圣节只是孩子们开心的夜晚.

Today, I saw the notice on the blackboard under the school, this week

Saturday for the mid-term examination. Mother wants me to Chinese more than 90

points in the mid-term exam, math more than 95 points, I was very nervous.

Because only three days, so I want to read quickly review unit of one to four in

the morning. Because I must surpass mother request!

亲爱的英语老师：

一个学期的课程很快就结束了。

幸运的是，我认识了你。每次在路上遇见你，都看你兴奋，健康的，发自内心的微笑。

有一件事情，我想和你说说。就是关于班长的事情。第一次在你的课上，是我五年以来没有张开口说英语的日子。

那天在课上，我竟然连monitor一次都听不明白，是我的愚笨浇灭了你的热情。第二次课上，我们换了班长，你当时问，是不是选举产生的。当时我心情实在不是很好，在以后的日子里，

我也体会到班长在你心里的重要性。在这里，我想向你解释，班长是我主动辞掉的，我希望自己有更多的时间来学习，因为我已经工作三年了，觉得这两年的学习时间是生命中最后一段学生时光了。

面对期末考试，我很紧张，担心自己不及格，整个学期我都在努力学习。下个学期我想把学生工作处的工作辞掉了，让自己专心学习。

在你的课堂上，你教会了我勇敢，让我一个从来都不敢张口说英语的男孩，在你的课上开始试着学习英语口语了。

也是你，让我觉得讲英语并没有想象的那么难。尽管，其实每次课前我都准备好pretenshion的材料，才敢张口说的。

也从中体会到了，凡事预则立，不预则废。

我很喜欢听你讲你在国外看到的或者听到的一些事情，可是时间过得很快。下学期，我准备去旁听英语本科的课程，继续提高自己的英语听说能力。

也希望我们像朋友一样常联系，更希望我有能用英语和你交流关于国外的一些见闻。

最后，祝福你健康，快乐。

日期：

It is Friday afternoon. School is over. The students are talking about

their weekends.

Hi, I am Yu Yan. Im going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, Im going

to the park by bus .Im going to catch butterflies and catch dragonflies .

Then , I m going to climb on Saturday.On Sunday, Im going to plant

flowers after lunch. Im going to clean the rooms and wash the clothes. Then ,

in the evening ,Im going to watch cartoons. That will be fun.

dear teacher,

it has been a long time since i wrote the last letter. nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a sms. however, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter

its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

you always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. to be honest, i was surprised in the first class when i learned a teacher at your age could speak english insuch a fluent way.(i didnt mean you are old, youre young at heart.) moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. i always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. in your class, i learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. thanks for your excellent teaching.

ive got some suggestions for you. it seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. most of the time, we are listening. seldom did we express our own ideas. i suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. besides, id like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

happy new year.

with every good wish.

yours sincerely dali wang

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back， I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school， I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class， and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later， with the help of the teacher and my classmates， I listened to the teacher carefully in class， kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word， only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

Dear Mr. Cao

Hello!

This new year, I have read a lot of books about the new year, and the book

that impresses me most is Spring Festival.

The author of Spring Festival is an Chengna. A long time ago, there was a

monster named "Nian". It had two sharp horns and covered with plum red scales.

Bigger than an elephant, fiercer than a tiger. It looks terrible. Every new

years Eve, "Nian" will come to the village to eat people. One year "Nian" came

again, and a young man said, "its better to fight with it than to let it eat!"

The young people nearby picked up the weapons on the ground and attacked Nian

one after another. Unfortunately, they were not the opponents of Nian, so they

were all eaten by Nian.

Since then, "Nian" has become more fierce, so every new years Eve people

will hide in caves. Another year, new years Eve arrived, just as people were

packing up, there was an old man begging. The old man asked people for food, but

people were very busy and had no time to pay attention to him. Suddenly, an old

woman gave him some food and advised him to go up the mountain to hide. But he

did not hurry to eat the food his wife gave him. The old woman advised him to

run for his life, but he said, "I have a way to get rid of Nian. She thought he

was talking crazy, so I had to leave him. In the middle of the night, Nian broke

into the village. She found a big red paper on her door, lit a candle in the

room, and burned a torch in the yard. "Year" carefully came to the door, and

suddenly came the "crackling" sound in the courtyard. Then an old man in red

came out laughing. "Nian" was so scared that he ran out of the village. The

original "year" most afraid of red, fire and explosion sound!

The next day, the people who took refuge were very surprised to see that

the village was safe and sound! The old woman suddenly realized that the

villagers talked about the old mans promise. People flocked to their wives and

in laws house. They saw red paper pasted in front of the door, and a pile of

unburned bamboo in the courtyard was still "popping" and several red candles in

the room were still flashing. In fact, the old man is to help people mirror out

"Nian" immortals.

Since then, every new years Eve, every family pastes couplets to set off

firecrackers, and every household has bright lights to keep the new year. People

call this traditional festival the Spring Festival.

After reading this book, I realized that the old beggar turned out to be a

fairy. I was so moved that the "year" was formed in this way. Now we also call

it "Spring Festival". I think this book is very popular. I have learned a lot

from it. I really want more foreigners to know and understand the true meaning

of the traditional Chinese festival "Spring Festival". thank you!

wish

The work went well

Your student: Huang Ziming

Dear President

I’m a second year student of your university writing to tell you about my

humble opinions of the learning environment in our school.

Although we’re enjoying the modernized buildings equipped with advanced

computers sufficient lights and well-installed desks and chairs we do find it

hard for us to concentrate on study when we’re in the classrooms. For one thing

the annoying noise made by the vans and cars disturbs our studies. For another

the classrooms which are supposed to be used for self-study are unavailable for

they are usually occupied for meetings by various kinds of associations.

Faced with such a hard nut we should find ways to crack it. I suggest that

our school should construct some special lanes for the traffic and provide

associations with specific rooms to have their meetings in order to provide a

better learning environment for us.

I appreciate your sincere consideration of my suggestions and hope that our

school will be ideal for academic studies.

Yours sincerely

It was the final day that I got to spend time with my friends; because

tomorrow I would have to move where my aunt lived. My friends were very sad, and

I myself was also too. We huddled there for a long time, until our parents

called us home. The next day we woke up early and packed everything up; then we

took the train and started out for my aunt’s home. That day was so very hot, and

we had to climb a mountain before we arrive. Actually, I got to say that that

was quite amazing.

Not to mention hat during the climbing, I heard something that had shocked

me very much. Which also meant that I didn’t get to care as much as I was

supposed to; and it also gave me a very good idea that depends on my braveness,

actually not that idea sort of.

Here is how the story went on: When we arrived at the station, I got off

and said that I had missed my friends very, very much; but my mother said that I

could see them in the future.

I was very angry about hose words, and ran off as quickly as I could; but

my dad caught me since that he was in the first. I was very angry about that; my

dad said that we were going to climb a mountain.

When we arrived, dad showed me the map, and that we were going to have a

climbing race. My dad won of course, and I was the last. I was very sad; but my

mom said that was matter. Then I said, “Because first I got to lose my friends;

then I became angry because you said that I could see them in the future; then

everything went wrong.” “Like what?” asked my mom and dad together, “Like losing

the climbing game;” “So, it was just for fun like playing video games in the

house. Or trying to blow up your body in the lab, and besides tomorrow you can

see your friends again; we are only staying here for one whole night,” at these

words I was very astonished; even surprised of my wits.

That was when the next morning, I went back, and could play with my friends

once more. It was a very funny story since it was a real one, and I thought that

we were going move there. My friends questioned me about it, and yes I only had

one answer, I was playing with you and didn’t listen carefully.

Dear MrYang,

亲爱的杨老师，

How iseverything going! Tomorrw is Teachers’ Day.I would like to express my sincerely wishes to you. You taught me English inthe primary school. That is the time to lay our foundation. And you help me laymy interest on English, which make me feel learn English easily in middleschool. I’m very appreciated that. Thank you very much. If it is convenient foryou, I would like to visit you this National Day. Happy Teachers’ Day again.

一切可好!明天就是教师节了。 我相向你表达我衷心的祝福。你在我小学的时候教我英语。那是打基础的时候。 是你让我对英语感兴趣。这让我在初中学习英语变得容易多了。我很感激。非常感谢你。如果方便的话，我想在今年国庆节去拜访你。再次祝你教师节快乐。

Best wishes,

Lucy

露西

亲爱的老师：

您好!首先对于您甘愿不辞辛苦的热情的教授我们英语，我们深表感激并致以最诚挚的问候。

现在我要切入正题了，只是如实地把自己的想法说出来罢了，如果有冒犯的地方，请见谅。

老师，您可能没有意识到自己的课有多么的物料，一上午的时间学完一篇大约200字左右的课文，并且先从跟读单词、短语开始，课文中的每一句话都要翻译。我不知道您是平常过于的细心还是认为我们基础太差，不管是什么原因，总之，这样的教学方法我难以接受，其实，这也不光是我自己的想法，您看看上课出勤率就明白了，不到一半吧。我想说的是，我们已经不是小孩子了，直到一件事情怎样做对自己最好、最有效率，所以请不要把您的意志强加给我们，我们不喜欢这样总被人牵着鼻子走。

就说这些吧，好像有点过分的样子，希望您不要介意，更希望您的教学方法能有所改观，也不要因为我给您提意见，就让我的英语不及格，您应该不是这样的人吧?

最后祝身体健康!

此致

敬礼!

您的学生：加菲猫

These days, inNanjingcity, taking a taxi to school is getting more and more fashionable among middle-school students. Some of them are children of businessmen who are relatively well-off. The parents of these children claim they can earn much money easily and the yearly taxi fees spent by children mean nothing to them.

But most parents must work very hard---some even have to find a second job to afford their children’s high consumption.

Once upon a time in a kingdom far away, there was an India princess called

Lily; she lived with her father in a desert, where the camel was always good and

healthy… One day Lily went off through the woods to find some food to eat up.

One or two times she would stop to admire the beautiful views, and try to aim at

those who bother her; when she returned, she dragged a big deer for supper… it

was also Dum for her to hit a very poor deer… Sometimes her father would say,

“Well done!”

After supper, Lily begged her father to let her go and have an adventure in

the woods. Her father agreed, and Lily got her bow and arrow, ready to have an

adventure. Along the way, she met a very lovely prince, and fell in love with

him at once, but how could she express her love to him?

She thought and thought about it along the way home. Until she figured out

that she had lost her way. She had decided to move along and try to find her way

back home, at last she found a big and tall tree that had branches that form a

room; just like a platform… She cut off some branches that made a small floor;

then she made the furniture, of sticks and wood and mud. In the evening, she

rested on the platform, and waited until the sun rise… At sun rise, Lily woke

up, she got her bow and arrow, ready to find home. But just as she was about to

get down from her platform, a crocodile blocked her way, she sat there looking

frightened.

At last some back men rode horses came to this place, they quietly without

any word, kicked the crocodile down; and then killed him. Lily finally got down

from the tree or platform, and went with the black men.

At last they arrived at the black men hiding place, and they fed her with

some delicious meals; during the great time that Lily was having some men with

white horses galloped toward Lily; she was still having delicious meals when

bomb! Lily was captured in a cage.

Lily was very worried, she yelled out for help! Finally the black men came,

and found the cage where Lily was in.

They hurried up, and used their stick and opened the cage. The white men

came, and were ready to battle; the black men made a signal to let Lily get out

of here. Lily got out and scrambled. When the black men returned, they found

Lily clasped on the ground… They carried Lily on their horses to their hiding

spots, and fed her some water and some meals.

At last Lily woke up, and saw the black men; she went to hug them and say

thanks for saving her. The next day the black men took Lily to find her parents.

Lily asked for a bowl of porridge as a meal, and set off on their black horse.

Along the way, they found a camp place; it was where Lily’s father lived! Lily

jumped off the black horse, and ran to her father and hugged him; they were all

very, very happy.

When the king saw the black men, he was very angry. But Lily said to him;

“Father, these are the men that saved me from the white men that had captured

me, they are amazing!” the king thought about this for a moment, and so decided

to let the black men go in peace.

At last Lily was at home, his father was so very glad to see her. During

their happiness together, the black men came back and prepared a special feast

for everyone to enjoy. The music began to blow, and they started to dance up and

down and twirling about in the air…

They ate their meals, and drank some porridge, and lived pretty happy. One

day when the black men were about to leave, the king asked; “Is there something

that you would like me to give to you?” “Dear king,” replied one of the black

men, “I would love you to grant me a very happy wish your honor, and that is to

let all the poor people survive from the dangerous stuff…” the black men wish

was at once granted, and all that was left was the action and the build.

Before the only time the king knew, that the black men was killed, he

killed himself, with always a smile on his face…

Lily on the other hand, was very sad about the wish; but she too, had

always a smile…