初三英语期末考试作文范文（热门20篇）

小编收集了2017年六年级上册期末考试作文题目，欢迎阅读。

1、阅读下面的材料，按照要求作文。

爱默生说：虽然我们走遍世界去寻找美，但是美这东西要不是存在于我们内心，就无从寻

找。

请以“美在心中”为题，写一篇不少于800字的文章。

要求：①立意自定;②角度自选;③除诗歌外，文体自选。

2、阅读下列材料，材料引起你什么感悟或思考?围绕材料按照要求拟写作文。 一群麻雀站在枝头上，看见天空飞过的大雁，排成整整齐齐的长队，羡慕极了。一只麻雀提议：“让我们也来排队飞行好吗?” “好!好!”大家一致同意。 说干就干，他们都飞起来了。可是有的飞得高，有的飞得低;有的飞得快，有的飞得慢。排来排去，总排不成队。乱了一阵以后，他们纷纷歇落在枝头上，叽叽喳喳地讨论起来：“我们为什么排不好队?”[来源:学科网] 一只麻雀说：“排队得有一个队长来指挥才行。” 大家说：“对，对!要有一个队长来指挥。” 于是你要做队长，他也要做队长，又乱哄哄地吵了起来，争执不下。结果，大家商定，由一只年纪最大的麻雀来做队长。 队长发令了：“一二三，起飞!”大家都争先恐后地飞向天空。仍旧乱糟糟的，有的飞得快，有的飞得慢;有的飞得高，有的飞得低，排不成队。队长急了，批评那只飞得太快的麻雀：“听指挥，飞得慢一点!”那只被批评的麻雀不服气，大家朝东飞，他故意往西飞。队长批评那只飞得太低的麻雀：“跟上，飞得高一点!”那只被批评的麻雀不高兴，掉转头飞回家去了。有的麻雀嚷太吃力，有的麻雀嚷肚子饿了??结果一哄而散，各自飞走了。 只剩下那只当队长的麻雀，愣头愣脑地在想：“为什么麻雀排不好队?” 要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体(诗歌除外)，自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文;不要套作，不得抄袭;书写规范，正确使用标点符号.

3、阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)

“‘亲要相见’、‘爱要有心’，学汉字就给孩子心中种下美好的种子。”全国政协委员冯小刚在4日上午的小组会上说，文化传承需要繁体字，我希望学校教育能教孩子们一些有生活含义、反映祖先智慧的字。

他说，比如，亲爱两个字。亲的繁体字(编辑注：親)，左边是亲，右边是见。爱字的繁体字(编辑注：愛)是简体字中有一个“心”字，也就是说“亲要相见”、“爱要有心”，这样教给孩子，会给孩子种下美好的种子。否则，“亲不见”、“爱无心”，场空空。“能不能选择50至200个最有含义的繁体字，回到课本里来，这样也不会给孩子增加负担，也能让孩子感觉到中华文化最重要的部分，别失传了!”冯小刚说。

你如何看待“繁体字能否重回课堂”这件事?请你给冯小刚写封信，发表一下你的看法。

要求：1.综合材料内容及含意，选好角度，确定立意，完成写作任务。2.统一以“小唐”为写信人。3.文章中不得出现班级、姓名等真实信息。

4、阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。

苏格兰北部设得兰群岛有一条一日游路线，一位退休的远洋老船长负责运送游客。

油轮每次起航前，老船长都会面对风平浪静的大海祈祷;很多时候，游客看到这种情况，都会禁不住笑出了声。有一次，油轮起航不久，平静的海面狂风大作，船疯狂的颠簸;这时，很多游客开始向老船长一样祈祷，也有人要求老船长跟着他们一起祈祷。但老船长说：“在风平浪静时我要祈祷，但在波涛翻滚时我要照顾好我的船。”

这则材料，引发了你怎样的思考与感悟?请选择一个角度构思作文，立意自定，文体自选(除诗歌外)，题目自拟;不要脱离材料的内容及含意的范围作文，不得套作，不得抄袭。

立意参考：(1)从老船长在风平浪静时祈祷的角度立意，人在追求美好生活的过程中要学会居安思危。(2)从老船长在波涛翻滚时只照顾船的角度立意，危险时刻要靠自己、不惧怕困难、求人不如求己。(3)从老船长祈祷和照顾好自己的船的角度立意，期待美好、不怕困难，事事认真才能成功。(4)从游客的角度立意，正视现实、正确理解别人的做法。

具体写作时，还应避免抽象的描写，大而无边的空泛议论。选择议论文，应小切口，深分析。写散文或记叙文，应情感饱满，写得形象、具体、生动，有灵性。

5、阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

现实生活中，有许多人信奉实用主义，一片山林可以变为山间别墅;一处古迹可以成为新的旅游景点;一只珍禽可以成为一盘山珍;甚至一条隐私也可以成为娱乐头条……似乎一切都意味着财富、价值和利益。

而有人则不同，他们觉得一片山林就是一片山林，常常让人在那里休憩;古迹就是古迹，它的存在只是让自己浮想联翩;珍禽就是真琴，隐私就是隐私，不能侵犯……一切以自然规律、文明的法则去面对，同时让自己内心充盈必要的浪漫情怀。

请根据你对材料的理解和感悟，自选一个角度，写一篇不少于800字的文章，文体自选(诗歌除外)，标题自拟。要求：立意明确，不要套作，不得抄袭。

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2008年的6月，结束了，初中生活就这样结束了。好像只有一眨眼的时间。无论天是不是很蓝，日子过得是不是很慢。在那个即定的时刻，我们终究还是要毕业了。

一下子感受到了悲伤的气氛，大家都在忙着抱头痛哭，都是动人的故事和未了的情缘。人走得越来越多，宿舍也越来越空…全宿舍，我是最后一个走的。她们都纷纷的走了，淡淡的忧伤和苍凉。剩下我，静静在好好看看这空空的宿舍。这里的每个角落每一物，那时我们的微笑是那样快乐。也许在也没有机会大家一起再回到这个宿舍了。那些美丽的记忆都悄悄的埋藏在我们的心底。大家，我真的很舍不得分开，千万个不要分开。那时侯大家的笑，是我心灵最深处的感动。

毕业照那天，太阳很大，炎热的夏天，但大家都带着最开心的心情和微笑一起喊“茄子”。好好的想想。以前刚刚上初一，一切都是那么的陌生。什么都不愁，只看着天空，只想着大家应该怎么玩，怎么笑。那时，大家都是单纯的孩子，都是些没有成长烦恼的孩子。到了初二，早读上课讲话，作业抄写，资料在课桌里睡觉，周末时就在宿舍和亲爱的她们大吃，大喝。聊着那些有趣的事情，大家说说笑笑。

初三，大家都有所成熟，玩闹也渐渐少了，但是我们在初三这紧张的时刻还是一样的开心玩起来，像是都没有烦恼的孩子。有了初三该有的紧张。大家对于每个同学都有了自己的看法。毕竟人是不可能完美的，自己所做的事情有益于别人，但可能也会伤害到其他人。不过不管如何，大家都毕业了，那些事情也过去了。或许当大家以后再回到这个学校，看见自己所熟悉的一草一木时，会回想起我们那时的快乐时光往事吧。

初中，玩着上完，闹着过完。哭过，笑过，天真，幼稚，感伤。这一切都不会再一次重新上演了。那些老师，曾经对我的教育，也许会记得一些，但只是一时的记忆罢了。那熟悉的环境，熟悉的教室，熟悉的同桌，熟悉的、熟悉的…我的衣服已被泪湿透了。再一次道别，珍重。我最爱最爱的宝贝们。希望在多年以后，能再次相逢。那时侯的我们也许都变了。但我们的心底还是有当年我们最最珍贵的感情。

今天，老师让我看了我的期末考试的试卷，我觉得最让我失分的地方总共有三处，三处的详情如下。

第一处是看拼音写词语，那里是开卷的第一题的第二个。那个上面的词语是崎岖，我竟然把它写成了歧途，真是的。我想错的原因是我当时刚开始写，有些心奋，所以误写成了歧途。

第二处是排句子的顺序，这个比较容易。但由于我粗心大意，把顺序多写了一个，导致在此失去了五分。

第三处是我写的作文。这一处老师说是我的选材不好。题中给出了两个题目，分别是我想让教是更干净和我想让小鸟有个幸福的家。我选择了第一个，老师说这个题 目虽然易写但想得高分却并不容易，选择第二个题目更容易表达自己的真情实感，更容易得高分。

我这回的语文成绩虽然不理想，但我会记住语文老师的一句话：阳光总在风雨后。

In the present society, with the exploration of human needs, pursuit and desire, human beings have pushed the life together. But most people can not follow the evolution of the joint, will feel the pressure of life, to the life of the roll!

Dont always want to finish much more work than you can do, because one day, you will feel depressed because of less work done than planned. Only to increase your own pressure. You should try to improve this situation now. Relying on your own ability to complete the workload, so that you will not be disappointed by the completion of the work that is less than the plan. People should hold this kind of mentality: do one thing no matter what, because of difficult to achieve perfection, in the work, to show their talent, to play their own potential, not because of the existence of self humble causal work.

In the final analysis, in the final analysis is to survive, in order to meet the needs of life! That is to meet the desires of the individual!

I think all the origin is a place of "common human heart"! It can dilute the evolution and sublimation of all of you! What do you think of it, what is it! Oh, can make you a lifetime of pain, also can let the happy life! As long as we do it, how to live through share it, how to drive it, only you can clear direction, you need to test your life infiltration surrounding environment to identify and travel!

If you have to accept the truth, what has happened cant be changed. No matter what you do wrong, you turn it into a small thing, hehe, relative to life is just a small thing. Let it be the story of the past, it can also be a lesson to remember! But you must remember that the unfortunate story must not be allowed to play again. Do not weigh anything to life, everything is a thing of life, life is not brought, death does not go. Its not worth doing that, only you know the best. For things to take it up and put it down, can take temporary setbacks. Looking for a best balance point to carry to scratch your heart, with the "lost" to do the balance! You will lose, lose win, gain and loss, loss is too lazy to human survival interlocking protocol is! You can never keep off the saturation state, is a new idea, the pursuit of!

You cant be too greedy, everything is just a passing traveller. A flower world, you have to take its process, use it to dilute your life for a period of time, it can not be two days in the world is the same. You have to know that everything will have the precious and unreflux time of your life, and dont have too much demand, and you cant overdo yourself too much. All things have a moderate, more than moderate you will be troubled by the outside world, natural will become a load! To learn "know Stop" "contentment". How to release pressure, relieve pressure, and more importantly, how to relieve pressure, alleviate the need for a certain process, everything is how you do it, so as to ease the pressure in your heart. Other people are only the role of guidance, so you do what you like, what you should do!

Saturday Nov. 15, 2003 Cloudy

My teacher gave me an assignment experience life last week. I had been thinking how to finish it because I had never done any thing by myself before.

Mother was out today. It was a good chance to complete the assignment. Seeing the barrel was empty, I decided to fetch water from the well.

I took the empty barrel and went towards the well outside the yard. It snowed yesterday, so the alley was very slippery. A layer of thickice was frozen on the platform of the well. I was frightened by the sight, but I gathered my courage to walk towards it.

The alley was so slippery that I walked with difficultly. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down, water in the barrel totally poured down on the ground. I stepped on the platform carefully. After standing steadily and squatting down slowly, I hooked the barrel at the end of the rope and put the rope down slowly. I made an effort to drag the barrel up after it was filled with water. I was very careful because it was easy to slip and fall. Then, I carried the barrel of water and returned to my house. My figners were frozen stiff. I realized my effort was in vain. I hated myself.

I failed to finish the assignment but I did experience life through a trifle which seemed easy but difficult to do well. Such was my first experience of life.

[关于初三英语作文：To Experience the Life

These years, Internet is becoming more and more important for people. Many students like making friends on the Internet.

However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, you may meet a good person and he or she can talk and play with you. And he or she may even help you deal with some problems in your life. But on the other hand, our students are really too young, we can not protect ourselves at all!

So I think you’d better make friends in the real world.

[初三英语400字作文

马上就要期末考试了，同学们正埋头争分夺秒地苦读呢!平时刻苦练习就为这份试卷啊！

发卷子啦！同学们奋笔疾书，纸与笔摩擦的大调不愧为一首不错的奏鸣曲。我拿到试卷就把试卷从头到尾看了一遍，开始细细地做起来。呵！这些基础题太简单了，对我来说就是“小菜一碟，小事一桩”嘛！

到了作文难关，我把注意力全部转到这些语句上来了，恨不得把每一句话都嚼出水来。作文要求是些我学会了什么，我马上想到了向妈妈学习的本领—炒饭。于是把这件事情写了下来，把人物语言、动作刻画得生动有趣。停奏！要交卷了，我把试卷交了上去，心里的一块石头总是落地了。

可是，一波未平，又起一波。马上面临的就是困难的数学考试了，我告诉自己：不要紧张，相信自己一定能行的！

我的笔在试卷上“沙沙”作响。时间过得飞快，等我检查好试卷，只剩下最后三分钟了。我环顾四周，同学们有的长长地叹了口气，如释重负；有的眉头紧锁，显得无可奈何；有的将试卷翻了一遍，检查是否落题忘做……

紧张的考试终于结束了，我们都长长地舒了口气。至于结果如何，那并不重要，尽力了就好了。

This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.

In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.

We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!

We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.

Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.

要给母亲买辆好车，等我成为富翁以后；要好好学习，等我小学毕业以后；要写一本书，等我长大以后......

我们小时候都会有这样那样的想法，可最后仍然像套用数学公式一样加上两个字“以后”。那时我们都坚信理想一定会实现，可因为“以后”这些都成了梦。

我儿时也说过很多这样的话，最夸张的一次竟想成为鲁迅一样的伟大作家，留芳百世。可我现在还因为不认真学习语文而发愁作文写什么才好。真的，我现在特别想坐上时光穿梭机回到从前，大声告诉还在梦中的自己：“没有以后，要从现在开始努力。”可惜已经完了，不过还有补救的机会，我要从现在开始努力，一步一步踏踏实实地向着梦想前进。

古今中外有很多的人在混日子，迷茫地行驶在人生之路。他们难道没有梦想吗？不，他们有。只因他们太相信“以后”。以为什么梦想都会在未来某一天实现，因此他们不思进取，每天只是做着一个又一个荒唐的梦。最终他们自食恶果，不但梦想没有实现，连生活都无法继续。不过他们当中不少的一部分已经醒悟，正朝着自己的梦想努力前进。可仍有相当的一部分还每天做着甜美的梦。

你看世界上的伟人，哪个是因为做“以后”的梦而成功的呢？如中国小提琴大师李传韵，从小刻苦学琴，八岁就以能独立完整地拉完“帕格尼尼”这样难的曲子了。再如波兰化学家，数十年如一日地炼着废矿渣，就是为了得到那0.1克的镭，并获得了诺贝尔化学和物理奖。最终因长期接触放射性元素患绝症，不治身亡，对化学事业奉献了自己的一生。

同学们，记住——没有以后，有什么梦想要从现在开始努力，也许将来就会成功。如果有“以后”那么你将来老年的时候还会怨恨当时为什么不努力。

同学们，为了老年不留下遗憾，请铭记——没有以后。

蓝色的苍穹下，一个男孩子背着羽毛球拍在校园里闲晃，长长的荡在眼睛前面，周围流动着MP3的音乐。在这个绿水青山绕的校园里，飞鸟划破的蓝色苍穹下，有我羽毛球拍划过的痕迹。我喜欢看到球在空中一闪即逝，如那些美好的破碎的时光。

高二，学习的氛围开始变的越来越紧张了，学校的月考也被改为周考，然而每次发卷后的点滴分数却总让人看了心痛。不过，我很佩服我们的选修老师，他可以第三节考试，第四节就把试卷改好。速度很快，不是吗？前几天06高考结束。老班说：“我们现在是学校里的老大哥老大姐了，必须磨好笔锋上战场了。”但她哪知道我们早就在战场上了，只是还不到我们舞刀弄枪的时候。似乎有悲难言，或许只有刻在我手臂上的羽毛球拍才知道吧？

忙忙碌碌，高二结束：萋萋惨惨戚戚，高三来临。

十年寒窗，梅花香自苦寒来；数载沙场，冷雪白梅未可知。

今夜，徘徊在高二的边缘，我多想用我的羽毛球拍击出流星般的一球，让它与我的梦想一同拖着长长的尾巴消失在天际。

假如你叫李华，你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息，用英语总结出讨论情况。

提示：

70%的学生

30%的学生

应该每天进行体育锻炼，但不要时间过长

锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳

锻炼能增强体质，保持健康

锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能投入学习

锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好

锻炼中可能会受伤

要求：语句通顺，句意连贯；词数为80词左右；发言稿的开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear classmates:

I’m Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.

On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.

[初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼英语作文

the large number of our population has become one of the most serious problems of our society. According to a recent survey of the National Bureau of Statistics, there are more than 1.3 billion people in our country, which account for about 1/5 of all the people in the world. the same survey also predicts that our population will grow quickly in the years to come.

Overpopulation has brought about a series of negative effects to our economic development and social security. In the first place, too many people impose a heavy burden on our environment. As a result, we suffer from a shortage of fresh water and natural resources. In the second place, as the supply of labor GREatly exceeds the demand of the society, many people become employed. This is a source of social unrest. Last but not least, we have to manufacture all kinds of products to meet the needs of the people, which causes environment pollution to our lakes and land.

Serious though the problem seems, we have to take some measures to tackle it. On the one hand, the government should carry out more strictly the policy of family planning, thus reducing the total number of population. On the other hand, all the people should realize the harms of overpopulation. With the concerted efforts of all the parties concerned, were sure to solve the problem in the future.

[关于初三英语作文：Overpopulation

There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examinations. Some people think that examinations can help them review the lessons regularly, while others maintain that too many examinations have frustrated them.

To me, I think an examination is a good thing for both teachers and students. Teachers can find out how much the students have grasped and then improve their teaching; students, on the other hand, will learn what their weak points are and then study even harder.

All in all, we should not waste time arguing whether examinations are good or not. What we should do is to try to improve the exam system and try to adjust it to our different requirements.

也许是沉浸在联考前的恶魔般的训练时的片片短篇之中，得不偿失，回忆起从半年前开始的努力，挥洒的汗水只因为浇灌这一天的圆满。

在刚开始上学五年级下册时，虽已知纵使天苍苍野茫茫，期末终会来临。且凡视其不然，故想远在天边，不适其可，也就一转角，懵然一惊中的接受。回到现实，遇到了期末考试，心不惊，色不慌，我自己换度思考，都觉得自己有些过于失常了。但，也许就是对自己努力的一种认可吧。

试卷一下发，心在抖，说好的自信呢？一遇到期末考试就被吓了吗？我手虽发软，仍拾起笔，擒略惊吓缓缓而写。这期末可不是能经常遇到哇，要吓死人的，反则兴奋死人的。光说语文也够吓人了，就谈作文，死坑，总掉坑，失高分的阴影啊！遇到期末考试哪得愚人敢胆不写，不努力，不自信，不上进，再作的人也还得一点一滴写上去。手在抖，身在颤，头脑在发昏。天啊，折磨呀！

写时，我换角度一想，把语文给坚持下去，其余科目，一个词——轻松，考完后两个字——放假，想起来还有点儿小兴奋呢！我又热血沸腾了呢，手紧握笔，身似杆；字如雨不停下：努力会有好结果，奋笔疾书搬妙文，横来竖去，写作文。

经过我视为战斗的坚持的努力之下，解决了，就一晃眼，咬咬牙过去，心中漫浮着兴奋，我隐约看到了假期，嗯，再加油一把，和期末考试“拼了”。

第十次转角遇到了它——“期末考试”，我在此与它告别，我去假期了，再见！

1.有的时候你会感到绝望，但不放弃是对付困难的最好办法!

☞ 就算打退堂鼓，也要勇敢往前走。

2.千万不要有侥幸心理，认为自己的强项一定能弥补弱项，考试什么都能发生，有弱项会使你未战先败。

☞ 优秀和平庸的差距，往往只在于一件事

3.坚信你的对手一样会感到疲惫。

☞当全世界都说在放弃时，告诉自己再试一次。 4.不管作业有多少，都要按时完成，而且要有质量的完成，切记，认真且有思考的完成一套卷，比走马观花的完成十套卷要有用得多。

☞ 现在偷的懒，都是给未来挖的坑。

5.就是到了最疲惫的时候都不要放弃，否则前功尽弃。

☞ 不要轻易放过自己。

时光飞逝，不知不觉中一个学期又结束了，我的记忆似乎还停留在那个新开学的时候，转眼间同学们都渐渐融入了这迎接期末考试的紧张复习中了。为了一个开心的寒假，我也要为期末考试做好准备了!

机会只垂青有准备的人，所以这次我们一定要做好充分的准备。比如说把平时的复习时间增加十分钟左右，当然，时间越多，效果越好，关键还要靠自己自觉。不要只是今天复习半个小时，明天就只复习二十分钟，贵在坚持。

要学会抓住一分一秒，时间就是生命，不要让时间在你[]的走神中溜走，也不要让它在毫无意义的话题中流逝。对我们中学生说，有一个合理的学习计划，就可以为一天争分夺秒，更可以为好的学习成绩奠定基础。所以，我们需要好好把握一分一秒。

天道酬勤，只有勤奋刻苦的人才会得到成功。努力学习，这几个字相信同学们听过不止一遍了，可是这个学期，你到底努力过多少，到底付出过多少?如果连付出都没有，那你就更别说自己有一个好的前途了。

不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹?成功是要付出汗水的，如果从现在开始努力，也许你还会有百分之五十的机会成功，如果你选择放弃，你将注定成功不了。让我们从现在开始付出努力，去勇敢地迎接新的挑战吧!

期末考试，你快点来吧，我们已经做好了准备，迎接你的到来。

Dear Jean，

I am sorry to argue with you several days ago。 We haven t talked with each

other these days。 You are my best friend， aren t you?

Few days ago when I heard you lost my lovely book， I was really mad， so I

argued with you， and said that I could not be your friend from then on。 Later， I

didn t sleep well those days。 I always remembered a lot of fun we had。 So I

decided to write a letter to say sorry to you。 I also think you should be

careful and take good care of your things。 Let s be best friends again， OK?

Yours ever，

Julia

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

时间过得真快！转眼一个单元就上完了。我们迎来了本学期的第一次单元考试，那就是英语考。

“铃铃铃”上课铃声响了。英语老师拿着一叠试卷进来了。等英语老师一发下试卷，我就开始看听力题目。不一会儿，英语老师说：“现在，我们开始做听力，请大家准备好，第一题是听录音，选出你所听到的单词或词语。NO.1 name……”英语老师，就这样一题一题的报下去。不一会儿，英语的听力就做好了。接下来是做笔试部分。我一题一题的做下去，似乎都没有什么问题，做得也比较顺利。我想这次考试我应该十拿九稳的拿到满分了吧。可是，到了下午，英语老师拿着试卷进来的时候，我一开始还是满怀期待着，谁知，发到试卷的那一刹那，我惊呆了，我竟然失去了五分，并不是，我想象中的满分。我一看，其实这两题我都不应错的呀！我怎么可能会犯这种错误呢？哎！事已至此，也没有办法了。我只好把它订正好，争取下次考好点。

通过这次考试，我觉得还是要认真吸取教训，一定要认真答题。

I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted

by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens

come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight

against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these

stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain

a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another

galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we

can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the

universe.

Though we are told that alcohol is dangerous, especially driving a car

after drinking alcohol, we can see the news about car accidents because of the

driver drinking alcohol everyday, still people ignore the danger of drinking

alcohol. Life is precious, no one will take responsibility of our lives except

ourselves. Drinking too much will do harm to our body, even if you don’t cherish

your life, while when you drive the car after drinking, you will take away other

people’s lives. That is unforgivable, people have a happy family, they die

because of your careless driving, and you will never have a chance to make up.

Our government is very strict to the driver, the law clearly claims that

drinking driver will be heavily punished. In order to make sure other people’s

safety, we should not drive the car after drinking alcohol, or we ask friends to

take us home.