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Dear Lucy,

I am sorry to hear that you are feeling upset because of some problems met during studying Chinese. You said that you would feel nervous when facing this language and you did bad in listening. You couldnt improve your oral Chinese and you found it difficult to communicate with your classmates in Chinese.Well, dont worry. I will give you some suggestions. Firstly, like English, Chinese is a language,which we learn to communicate. So you need to practice speaking in Chinese as often as possible,which will help to improve your oran Chinese and improve your sense of the language. Secondly, you can listen to Chinese radio program,for this is a very useful way to improve your listening ability. Thirdly, be brave enough to make some Chinese friends.Close friendship will help you learn this language well. And doing some reading will help you learn more. I hope these can help you.

Best wishes!

yours,

Wang Xia

1、With the old wish that is ever new, may the greeting do its share toward making your Christmas a pleasant one.

老的祝福，却又常新，原此祝福，使你的圣诞更加愉快圆满。

2、May the bright and festive glow of Christmas candle warm the days all the year through. Hoping you will have a wonderful time enjoying Christmas Day and wishing you a New Year that is happy in every way.

愿明亮喜庆的圣诞烛光温暖一年中的每个日日夜夜，祝你欢欢喜喜度圣诞，高高兴兴过新年！

3、May the Christmas be a time of laughter and real enjoyment for you.Bestwishes.

愿圣诞不仅是你欢笑的时刻，更是你欣喜的日子。祝福你。

4、Christmastimeishere.IhopeyouhaveawonderfulNewYear.Mayeverydayholdhappyhoursforyou.

圣诞来临，祝新年快乐，愿你时时刻刻幸福欢乐！

5、Christmas is the most human and kindly of season，as the month of June with sunshine and the balmy breath of roses.

圣诞最有人情味，充满仁爱的时节，它如同阳光明媚、玫瑰吐露芬芳的六月。

6、A wish for a truly merry Christmas and may the joy of Christmas linger in your hear tall the year!

圣诞快乐！愿圣诞的喜悦整年萦绕你心间。

7、Thinking of you at Christmas with a wish that is warm and sincere.

Have a wonderful Christmas and joyous New Year!

以真挚热诚的祝福，在圣诞之际思念你。祝圣诞快乐，新年快乐！

8、May the beauty and joy of Christmas remain with you throughout the new year!

愿圣诞美景与欢乐常伴随你！

9、Christmas greetings and best wishes!

致圣诞贺忱与最美好的祝福！

10、Hope all your Christmas dreams come true!

愿你所有的圣诞梦想都成真！

Although every day we ate hamburgers, French fries, drink a chocolate drink, one family reunion round together, I think this is a happy life.

Mom and dad always said joy of peace, but I am very strange, it is made up of those world war?

Some time ago, a sensation in the world of the war in Iraq, I saw the Iraqi refugee camp residents on TV, where they eat, can hear the child crying every day. Look at the battlefield, many corpses lying spread all across in confusion, these soldiers land was stained with blood, and artillery bombardment of the aircraft shot down the bomb, can whenever and wherever possible sounded, oh, this is a time of peace and happiness of life?

Now TV stations are playing Taiwan every day to be independent. China is negotiating with Taiwan. I am a Chinese and have the responsibility to pay attention to national events. I think Taiwan is an inseparable part of China, even if it has not returned to the mothers embrace of the motherland, but it is the "son" of the mother of the motherland.

Television is a popular theme of Japanese television drama, I saw Chinese workers in Japan at the scene, Chinese Japanese in order to complete the project after go home, what have suffered, and hateful to Japanese after they finish the project all day I kill them, how hateful ah, I feel sad Chineses death, and pride is more Chinese firm and inflexible spirit!

I hope the world is full of peace and never have war!

女生节是一个只属于女孩子的专属节日，在这天女生们互相送上祝福十分温馨。下面是小编带来的是英文女生节明信片寄语，希望对您有帮助。

★ wind is transparent, the rain is ticking, the cloud is flowing, the song is free, love is the heart, love is crazy, it is eternity, you are unforgettable.

★初遇你的心情是温馨的，和你交友的时候是真心的，与你在一起的时候是开心的，认识你这个朋友是无怨无悔的。

★ met your mood is warm, you and your friends are true, and you together is happy, you know this friend is going.

★风雨的街头，招牌能挂多久，爱过的老歌，你能记得几首，别忘了有像我这样的一位朋友!永远祝福你!

★ rain street, signs can hang long, loved the music, you can remember the first few, dont forget to have a friend like me! bless you forever!

★恭喜发财财运到，财神对你哈哈笑，自摸杠点随你挑，抓到手里都是宝，收钱收到手酸掉，牌友气得哇哇叫。

★ may you be happy and prosperous! wealth, wealth of you laugh, masturbation bar with you, hands is a treasure, money received hand acid, poker gas loudly.

★花是牡丹最美，人为朋友最亲，交友不交金和银，只交朋友一颗心。水流千里归大海，人走千里友谊在，大树之间根连根，朋友之间心连心。

★ peony flower is the most beautiful, the most pro - human friends, friends do not cross gold and silver, only one heart and make friends. the flow of thousands of miles into the sea, one thousand miles away in tree roots of friendship, between, between friends heart to heart.

★家是避风的港湾，朋友是鼓风的海岸。家遮挡了苦雨风霜，朋友送来艳阳里一瓣心香。无家透心凉，有友透心亮。

★ home is the harbor of refuge, a friend is blowing the coast. a block on the wind and frost, a friend sent sincere wish the sun. no home cool, have friends very bright.

★见到你很开心，星空里万颗星，有一颗是我心，想我时看星星，失眠时数星星，许愿时等流星，好朋友天天要开心。

★ good seeing you, sky rws star, one is my heart, want me to look at the stars, when the number of stars such as insomnia, when a meteor, good friend be happy every day.

★茫茫人海，你是我惟一不能放弃的牵挂，也是我最无法释怀的无奈，无论你走到天涯海角，我都会祝福你!

★ the vast sea of humanity, you are my only worry is not to give up, i cant let go of the helpless, whether you go to the remotest corners of the globe, i will bless you!

★没有你的日子里，我会更加去珍惜;没有钱的日子里，你要保重你自己;没有爱的日子里，请你和我在一起!

★ the days without you, i will be more to cherish; no money of the day, you have to take care of yourself; no love life, you and i together!

★弄不清思绪万千，望不穿心湖微澜，看不透咫尺牵绊，数不尽月夜更换，舍不去情深缘浅，放不下无尽挂牵。

★ unclear thinking, do not look through the lake ripples, cannot see through close ties, countless moonlight replacement, not to love margin of shallow, not endless thoughts.

Victor Hugo was good at combatting the characteristics and he did pay attention to the struggle between classes. In The Miserable World, the famous book in the world, he describes the changges of the main character, Jean Valjean, from a common human being to devil and then to a lovely angel. He expects that the human has good characters in the society. In the book, he also tells the readers the various aspects in the really world. He hopes that people have good manners and noble moral.

The Miserable World is a novel which reflects the miserable life and the misfortunate of the poor guys in France when it is the middle of nineteen century. The name of the book indicates the suffering from the great difficulities. The book put emphsis on the tradegy and the position of the low classes and this is the most exciting and important aspect, which makes the readers have deep thinking about the life.

In the details of the book, we know the men are upset because they were in the low class and were having a poor life, women’ behavior deviates from what is acceptable especially in sexual behavior because of starving and children are so weak that they can grow strong and keep healthy in the old days of the world. So the author, Victor Hugo, hoped that all the people could have a bright future and have a good life, and the the famous work came into being. We know that the autho, Victor Hugo, had a boarder sense. He thought because if the world continued to stay as it was, the world could come to an end. The great artist were very brave to fight against the old displines. This novel is of great value because it describes history and reality in the past. We, people in modern society, should learn something from it and try to make the world perfect and harmony.

The Cobbler and the Banker

By La Fontaine

A cobbler passed his time in singing from morning till night;it was wonderful to see,wonderful to hear him;he was more contented in shoes,than was any of the seven sages.His neighbor,on the contrary,who was rolling in wealth,sung but little and slept less.He was a banker;when by chance he fell into a doze at day-break,the cobbler 12 awoke him with his song.The banker complained sadly that Providence had not made sleep a saleable commodity,like edibles or drinkables.

Having at length sent for the songster,he said to him,

"How much a year do you earn,Master Gregory?"

"How much a year,sir?"said the merry cobbler laughing,"I have reckon in that way,living as I do from one day to another;somehow I manage to reach the end of the year;each day brings its meal."

"Well then!How much a day do you earn,my friend?"

"Sometimes more,sometimes less;but the worst of it is,-and,without that our earnings would be very tolerable, a number of days occur in the year on which we are forbidden to work;and the curate,moreover,is constantly adding some new saint to the list.

The banker,laughing at his simplicity,said,"In the future I shall place you above want.Take this hundred crowns,preserve them carefully,and make use of them in time of need."

The cobbler fancied he beheld all the wealth which the earth had produced in the past century for the use of mankind.Returning home,he buried his money and his happiness at the same time,No more singin;he lost his voice,the moment he acquired that which is the source of so much grief.Sleep quitted his dwelling; and cares,suspicions,and false alarms took its place,All day,his eye wandered in the direction of his treasure;and at night,if some stray cat made a noise,the cat was robbing him.

At length the poor man ran to the house of his rich neighbor;"Give my back." said he,"sleep and my voice,and take your hundred crowns."

参考翻译

皮匠和银行家

拉.封丹

一个皮匠从早到晚在唱歌中度过。无论见到他本人或听见他的歌声都使人觉得很愉快。他对于制鞋工作比当上了希腊七圣还要满足。

于工作把他吵醒了。银行家郁郁寡欢地抱怨上帝没有睡眠也制成一种像食品或饮料那样可以买卖的商品。后来，银行家就叫人把这位 歌手请来，问道：“格列戈里师傅，你一年赚多少钱?”

“先生，你问我一年赚多少钱吗?”快乐的皮匠笑道：“我从来不算这笔帐，我是一天一天地过日子，总而言之坚持到年底，每天挣足三餐。”

“啊，朋友，那么你一天赚多少钱呢?”

“有时多一点，有时少一点;不过最糟糕的是一年中总有些日子不准我们做买卖，牧师又常常在圣徒名单上添新名字，否则我们的收入也还算不错的。”

银行家被皮匠的直率逗笑了，他说：“我要你从今以后不愁没钱用。这一百枚钱你拿去，小心放好，需要时拿来用吧。” 皮匠觉自己好像看到了过去几百年来大地为人类所需而制造出来的全部财富。他回到家中，埋藏好硬币，同时也埋葬了他的快乐。他不再唱歌了;从他得到这种痛苦的根源那一刻起，他的嗓子就哑了。睡眠与他分手;取而代之的却是担心、怀疑、虚惊。白天，他的 目光尽朝埋藏硬币的方向望;夜间，如果有只迷途的猫弄出一点声响，他就以为是有人来抢他的钱。最后，这个可怜的皮匠跑到他那富有的邻居家里说：“把你的一百枚钱拿回去，还我的睡眠和歌声来。”

[皮匠和银行家英文作文欣赏

当我们呱呱坠地时就以经开始有责任感了。对父母，对社会上的所有，只有你负了责任，别人一定也在为你负责。下面是小编带来的是关于责任的英文作文，希望对您有帮助。

The moonlight shines in through the window, clean the floor, the floor if hydroscope, reflecting the gentle, pure as jade october. The shelves of books, at the moment, become a small soldier, a sentry in order to stand strict in demands. Is it because of the magic of moonlight that makes everything clean and tidy?

Who can think of, this clean room was messy "dog"?

"The room is so messy, it takes a lot of time to do it for you every time." The mother with her brows locked, sweeping and sweeping, and even a little confused.

"My big lady, usually you also clean up the room, OK?"."

"Oh, I see." I was waving impatiently.

In a flash, mom suddenly exploded: "every time its" I know ", but which one did you do? Just a slob!"

Im not happy when I listen to my mother. Its natural revolt. Family wars broke out.

The end of the war, both sides, mother angrily left. I am also the nose, reddish eyes. Silence for a while, I turned off the lights, ready to sleep. Outside the window, the bright moonlight flows into the room, infiltrates in my body, moist like water, gives the human feeling of comfort, resembles comforts, also appears in the instruction. Yes, it might be a good thing to tidy up the room as if it were moonlight or clean water.

Second days after the completion of the operation, I diligently will manageably desk have all a hideous mess of information. At the beginning, it was not suitable, and gradually, it was not so confused. Soon, the table was cleaned. Extracurricular books are extracurricular books, textbooks are textbooks, and learning materials and entertainment products have their respective fixed positions. Then fold the clothes scattered on the bed, put them into the wardrobe, and tidy up the schoolbag well. All pick up after, I wiped the sweat on the head carefully wiping the amount of fine, a surprise to see the finishing room, everything is so neat.

When my mother came in and gave me the apple, her eyes were pleasantly surprised, and she praised me with her thumbs up. I have some awkward to head off the past, the mouth of the slightly rising radian, but overflowing the pride and joy of my heart.

Night, moonlight, like songs, if in the language: perhaps responsible for the process will shed hard sweat, but the results are always sweet responsibility.

月光透过窗，照在干净的地板上，地板若水镜,倒映出温柔的、皎洁如白玉的月辉。书架上的一本本书，在此刻，化身成为了一个个放哨的小士兵，井然有序地，一丝不苟的站着。是否是因为月光的魔力才让一切变得整洁干净?

谁又能想到，这干净的房间曾是凌乱的“狗窝”？

“房间这么乱，每次帮你整理都要要花费很多时间。”眉头紧锁着的妈妈,边扫地边整理着,甚至有点手忙脚乱。

“我的大小姐,平时你也清理一下房间好不好。”

“哦,我知道了”我有些不耐烦的挥挥手。

一瞬间，老妈突“爆炸”了：“每次都是‘我知道了’,可是你又有哪次做到了呢？简直就是一个大懒鬼!”

听着老妈的话，我也不太高兴，自然是反抗，家庭大战爆发了。

战争结束了，两败俱伤，老妈气呼呼的走了。我也是鼻子发酸，眼眶微红。静默了好一会，我关了灯，准备睡觉。窗户外，皎洁的月光流进房间,浸润在我的身上，湿润如水，给人舒适之感，似在安抚，又似在教导。是啊，如果将房间整理得如月光、如流水般干净,说不定也是件好事。

第二天，完成作业后，我勤快地将书桌上摆得七零八落的资料收拾好。一开始还有些不适应，渐渐地，也不是那么手忙脚乱了。很快，桌子清理好了。课外书是课外书，教科书是教科书，学习用品和娱乐用品都有了它们各自固定的位置。再将散落在床上的衣服叠好，放进衣柜，将书包好好整理好。一切收捡好后，我抹了抹额头上细细细细的汗珠，惊喜地看着整理后的房间，一切都是如此整洁。

老妈进屋给我送苹果的时候，眼底也染上了惊喜，竖起大拇指表扬我。我有些别扭地将头别了过去，嘴角那微微上扬的弧度却溢出了我心底的自豪与喜悦。

夜晚，月色悠悠，似在歌，若在语：或许负责的过程会洒下辛苦的汗水，但是尽责的结果，总是甜的。

中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日，在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天，家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子，把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的，灯笼挂在屋前。以下是小编整理的写中秋节的英文作文，欢迎阅读。 写中秋节的英文作文（一）

Mid-Autumn Day,all the country is celebrating. The streets are full of people, the loves are holding each other tightily.Everyone has his day.However,I am lonely.No one to hold,no one to kiss,no one to talk!

I was walking around the street without purpose,seeing the lovers kissing,watching the fireworkes alone,walking backe room whist.

Suddenly,i think i must be good to myself.So i decied to bue a present to myself.I know I will be good soon,and will find my Mr.Right.So tonight, a little teddy bear will sleep with me.And i know:i will have another teddy bear as a present that not bought from myself! 写中秋节的英文作文（二）

In China, Mid-autumn Day is considered to be a symbol of family reunion. On this day, all the family members gather together at home to celebrate this special occasion. Last year, I could not celebrate the festival with my family because I was in university. However, this special day left a deep impression on me.

I still remember the atmosphere of that evening. All the students who could not go back home assembled in our classroom, having a party to celebrate this traditional festival. We tried our best to show our own enthusiasm. As an ethnic minority, I performed a peacock dance, which received warm applause. After the two-hour party, we went out to the playground and sat together to appreciate the moon because it is a tradition on Mid-autumn Day. We ate moon cakes, played cards, and listened to romantic poems recited by one of our classmates. In that harmonious atmosphere, nobody felt lonely or homesick even though we were far away from our homes.

Thanks to our classmates, I experienced such a colorful and interesting Mid-autumn Day at my university. Thus, I learned to value all the festivals I spent during my university life. 写中秋节的英文作文（三）

Mid-autumn Festival is a popular and important lunar harvest festival celebrated by Chinese people. The festival is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese calendar. There are some traditions in this holiday. For example, people would have a big dinner with there families. After dinner, they often enjoy the full moon which is round and bright. The other tradition of mid-autumn festival is eating moon cake. Moon cake is the essential of that day, which means reunion. As time goes by, there are various kinds of moon cakes, but they are much more expensive than before.

I like mid-autumn festival because my families will get together and have a big dinner on that day.

[写中秋节的英文作文3篇

Our English Teacher Our English teacher， Ms Huang， came to our school in 1970.

She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years.

She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class， but She is rather strict with us in class.

She always encourages us to speak and read more English.

She often says，"Practice makes perfect." She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting.

She often gives us slide shows， teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English playS. She is not only our teacher but also our friend.

We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting， at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.

Fathers Day is a holiday to celebrate fatherhood and parenting by males,

just as Mothers Day celebrates motherhood. Typically giving gifts to fathers

and celebrating as a family is the main event of the day. Fathers Day is

celebrated on different days in different countries.

Fathers Day exists almost all over the world to honor and commemorate

fathers or forefathers. In the Roman Catholic tradition, Fathers Day is

celebrated on Saint Josephs Day, March 19, though in most countries Fathers

Day is a secular celebration.

In recent years, retailers have adapted to the holiday by selling

male-oriented gifts such as electronics and tools. Schools and other childrens

programs commonly have activities to make Fathers Day gifts.

In the United States, the driving force behind the establishment of the

celebration of Fathers Day was Mrs Sonora Smart Dodd, born in Creston,

Washington. Her father, the Civil War veteran William Jackson Smart, as a single

parent raised his six children in Spokane, Washington. She was inspired by Anna

Jarviss efforts to establish Mothers Day. Although she initially suggested

June 5, the anniversary of her fathers death, she did not provide the

organizers with enough time to make arrangements, and the celebration was

deferred to the third Sunday of June. The first Fathers Day was celebrated on

June 19, 1910, in Spokane.

Unofficial support from such figures as William Jennings Bryan was

immediate and widespread. President Woodrow Wilson was personally feted by his

family in 1916. President Calvin Coolidge recommended it as a national holiday

in 1924. In 1966, President Lyndon Johnson made Fathers Day a holiday to be

celebrated on the third Sunday of June. The holiday was not officially

recognized until 1972, during the presidency of Richard Nixon.

20XX this summer vacation in the past month,this month i and my parents went to Vancouver to visit my friends.

We lodged at a friendss house.

Arrived in Vancouver on the first day,is already in the afternoon, so good friends mother decided to let our two people together to do a dinner .His mother cook the pizza. Hanburger, my mother and i do . In addition, the father is responsible for to buy drinks.

My brother and sister are in charge of eating.

After dinner, i and my friends and his younger brother ang sister to the courtyard behind the big swimming pool, especially fun.

Well, Im waiting for my second days diary.

The spring festival is Chinese most traditional festival every 365 days. Each Chinesepay much attention on it. Every year about 15 days before spring festival， themigrate works and white-collars are beginning crowded home-returning.

But， in recent years， with the development of the world， many different attitudes between the young and the old towards the spring festival come forth. The old are still pay more attention to the spring festival， but the young gradually change the mode to spend their spring festival holiday， such as travel overseas.

When I am a childhood， I celebrated the spring festival with my family about amonth in my winter vacation in traditional way， such as helping cleaning our houses， putting red couplets on gates， setting off firecrackers， and wear new clothes. Now， I spend only 4 or 5 days at home with my parents in celebrating thespring festival， then I will hurry back to work. Maybe in the near future， I will have no time celebrating spring festival hometown， and my parents have to cometo stay with us in the city.

Whether or no， I like the spring festival. It is one of the most important part of our Chinese culture. However busy I am， I will try my best to celebrating it with thetraditional way to protect those our ancestor has leave behind.

Doctor’s Certificate

Oct. 18, 2000

This is to certify that the patient, Mr. Thomas, male, aged 41, was admitted into our hospital on Oct. 9, 2000, for suffering from acute appendicitis. After immediate operation and ten days of treatment, he has got complete recovery and will be discharged on Dec.19, 2000. It is suggested that he rest for one week at home before resuming his work.

Jack Hopkins

Surgeon?in?charge

Many people regard money as the most important thing in their life, but I

dont agree with them. There are so many things that money cant buy. The first,

money cant buy us knowledge, abilities and experience. The second, money cant

buy us a happy mood and a good health.

However, money plays a significant role in our daily life. We cant live

without it, because we have to use money to buy our daily necessities, like

food, drinks, clothes, books, and so on. And we also need money to pay for our

houses and education.

【范文】

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban resits travel regularly, and 28% rural resits also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tency, we can&’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people&’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What&’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

【译文】

中国旅游

最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。

面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

In order to celebrate the new years day, the school held a dumpling contest, which requires each class to make dumplings in the kindergarten within the prescribed time and share the dumplings together.

I just came to the classroom in the morning, and I saw all the students who were in high spirits and an eager look. At this time, teacher Gao started to give us a dough, and Mr. Liang gave us a dough.

Our team got the dough, we put together the dough into a small flat round, Sun Rui is responsible for all the dough roll into small round pieces like a cake, and then I beam with chopsticks a Yi Xin filling in “ &rdquo, small bread; then use chopsticks to prevent pressure stuffing, let it run out. I finally and she carefully put the dumplings on the mouth, but I still do not trust, and pinching, this will lay down their hearts. In this way, we group together the bag out of the gold ” “ &ldquo dumplings, dumplings, and the moon; ” Liang package dumplings dumplings “ ” … …. Time has arrived, although our group has only 60 dumplings, but our group of dumpling teachers said good-looking, even the Vice Chancellor and headmaster also praised our bags.

The boiled dumplings, our package dumplings into the boiling water, after a while, the chef opened the lid, like white goose dumplings floating surfaced, bubbling and “ ” to take a bubble. The dumplings will be cooked soon. When the teacher came into the classroom at the end of the dumpling, everyone was happy and yelling. The teacher gave us a good dumplings, I ignored the dumplings or very hot, can not wait to pick up a bite with chopsticks, chicken flavor mixed with onion fragrance, smell, good food oh! I think this is the most delicious dumpling I have ever eaten. I ate one after another until I ate my stomach and couldnt keep it.

I will never forget the dumpling contest.

Mariner magnificent life adrift in the sea, the vast expanse of the universe, the endless sky. Flying it! Colorful flying in the sky, let sights perfusion your head, let Mother Nature to make your mind blowing, so boring life can no longer imprison your soul.

An old saying: "read better than ten thousand books." Travel is more than two feet bookcase to wisdom; travel orders the soul to reach sublimation. It was a trip, no matter how many years of experience, makes me nostalgic. Various recall before graduation, that smile look forward to the completion of the trip, but also Shenluo in my mind, finally finally wait until the completion of brigade, sunny morning, like the sun for our farewell. After hearing the principal, teachers lecture, everyone is excited, chattering side edge of the car to talk.

Car, some people listen to music, some people in the chat joking, some people play slapstick, others kept pressing the shutter to capture a wide range of memories, some even too excited, has been absurd, prompting the whole car burst into laughter. After half an hours drive, we arrived at the first stop ── Youth Activity Center. Satiation local folk cuisine, we were lively mountain training, it turns away an hour before the event. Wow! Each facility is very exciting and interesting, it looked shocking, white hair have been scared, but there are several volunteers after the first experience, we gradually willing to go, but in the end the girls are crazy play. Among them, I most like to play the "single cable suspension bridge", it was a man on a three-story ropes, sliding down the facility, is really more play the more addictive.

The next day we spent in the Miao, first ranch experience farm style. Bought a lot of local gifts, enjoy rustic cuisine, we try to do some dairy products, such as: butter, chicken cakes. Among them, the chicken pie time-consuming and bother. But when I tasted it loosely soft palate, the entrance of the home-made cakes, wonderful taste echoed in my mouth, like ocean waves hitting my throat. Next stop ── West Lake Resortopia, quiet forests, green scenery, blue sky, dotted with bright stars, located in the beautiful scenery of the cabins, seems to be especially gorgeous, very fascinating. The end of the three-day event, those views, I forget, flows in my heart throbbing, deep wash my heart.

This journey, I realized that invisible but profound impact on my thoughts of "friendship." Friendship graceful and moving, bright flames, like much, but indispensable. It is clean, satisfactory moving mind, ignited the hearts of people, listening to compose a song.

Dear Robert,：

Im glad to receive your letter. Now I will tell you something about my plan for summer vacation after the final exam. Firstly, I will learn to drive. I think driving can be useful. Secondly, I will take some English courses. Thirdly, I will visit some tourist attractions. It must be very exciting. Last, I will do some reading in the vacation. What about you? I hope you can have a pretty vacation.

John

[给朋友的一封信英文作文

The Hero in My Heart

When people say the word "hero", what will you think? Do you have a hero in your heart? Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great-man. But my hero is around me, who gives me more love than others. She is my mother, the hero in my heart. My mother isnt great in the way of a famous singer or a movie star. She does nothing big, but what she does make others inferior. From her, I learn a lot.

When I was a baby, she taught me how to walk and how to speak. When I go to school, she helps me solve many problems. She also tells me be kind to others. When I do badly in study, she encourages me and tries to cheer me up. My mother is a teacher, and she is always busy with her work. When she corrects students homework, she is always very serious. My mother is responsible to all of her students. She cares much about students study and life, and she tries her best to help students in need.

My mother is a loving mother, a qualified teacher, and a real hero in my heart.

Its the third Sunday in June again, and its the holiday Ive been looking

forward to for a long time - Fathers Day.

"Mom, what do you want to give grandpa?" I asked my mother, resting my chin

on my hand. After thinking for a moment, Mom said, "Fruit basket!" "Mom, help me

think about what should I give Dad?" "Lets go to the boutique and have a

look."

So, we went to the boutique, and we picked left and right, carefully

selected, and we all felt that these gifts were not very good. "Ah, Dad is a

dog, so give him a puppy!" I suddenly had such an idea.

We walked over to the plastic and found a lifelike puppy which was very

interesting. Furry hair, piercing eyes, and a smiling face make people like him

more and more. I thought to myself: This puppy is cute, thats all.

I bought it, asked the waiter to pack it, and went home happily. When I got

home, I wrote a blessing on a piece of paper and put it by the bed with the

gift.

I discussed it with my mother and came up with a terrifying plan: We hid in

the place where Dad must pass when he entered the room, and when Dad came in, we

would scare him. So we quickly hid. "Dong dong dong..." "Dad is here!" Grandma

stepped forward to open the door, when Dad walked past us. "Wow," we jumped out.

"Ah, scared me to death!" Dad was shaking. A dignified man was frightened by

us, haha! "Mum sneered at Dad.

When Dad walked into the room and found the gift, his eyes were wide open,

and he couldnt help holding me around the living room a few times.

I will never forget this Fathers Day.