以our city为题写一篇英文作文（汇总20篇）

见到你的那一瞬间，我就爱上你了。

I fell in love with you the moment I saw you.

伴着想你，醒来!

I woke up with you on my mind.

愿我俩的爱情永远不变!

May our love will last forever.

一如既往的我，愿情人节快乐!

As always ，I hope the sweetheart festival to be joyful!

无论发生了什么，我都会永远爱你。

Ill always love you, no matter what happens between us.

我想在情人节紧握你的手。亲爱的，情人节快乐。

I want to hold your hand on Valentine’s Day. Happy Valentine’s Day,  sweetie.

突然就爱上你，完全不知道为什么也不确定如何发生的。

I fell in love with you... not sure why or even how.

但愿在情人节，我俩的美梦成真。

May all of our wishes come true this Valentine’s Day.

我俩的爱，一年比一年更坚定。亲爱的，情人节快乐。

Our love grows stronger with every passing year. Happy Valentine’s Day,  sweetie.

送你一个吻，悄悄的说我很高兴你是我的。情人节快乐!

Sending you a kiss to say I’m glad that you are mine. Happy the day!

你是我生命的全部。请说你愿意。情人节快乐，我亲爱的。

You mean everything to me. Please say yes.Happy Valentine’s Day, Honey!

愿情人节带给我们丘比特之爱和暖融融的浪漫。情人节快乐!

May this Valentine bless us with the cupid of love and warmth of romance.  Happy Valentine’s Day Honey!

你走出了我的梦，投入我的怀里。我不能让你走。情人节快乐。

You stepped out of my dreams andsintosmy arms. I can’t let you go. Happy  Valentine’s Day.

我一直不相信有真正的“幸福”，直到不久以后，我邂逅了你。亲爱的，情人节快乐。

I didn’t think that I could ever trust happiness. Then I met you.Happy  Valenti ne’s Day, Dear.

真诚，不必隐藏，把所有的话语，都写在那小小的贺卡上。祝我新爱的人，情人节快乐。

Be genuine and conceal noting.I write every wiod I wand to say on this  small card.I wish my honey a happy Valentine’s day.

想你，是一种美丽的忧伤的甜蜜的惆怅，心里面，却是一种用任何语言也无法表达的温馨。

It is graceful grief and sweet sadness to think of you, but in my heart,  there is a kind of soft warmth that can’t be expressed with any choice of  words.

常常想起曾和你在一起的那些日子。开心、快乐、幸福、失落、伤心、痛苦的所有日子。很想你，很想你……

Those days when we were together appear in my mind time after time, because  they were so joyful, happy, blest, disappointing, sad and painful. I miss you  ,and miss you so much……

你知道么，有个人时时想念着你，惦记你，你含笑的眼睛，象星光闪闪，缀在我的心幕上，夜夜亮晶晶。

Do you know there is someone thinking of you and caring you all the time ?  Your smiling eyes are just like the sparkling stars hanging on the curtain of my  heart.

你知道思念一个人的滋味吗，就像喝了一大杯冰水，然后用很长很长的时间流成热泪。

Do you understand the feeling of missing someone? It is just like that you  will spend a long hard time to turn the ice-cold water you h**e drunk into  tears.

你在时你是一切，你不在时一切是你!

You are everything when you are with me, and everything is you when you are  not.

我不知道我是否真的爱，但是我知道我不能没有你，如果地球将要毁灭，那么我要告诉你“你是我唯一想见的人”。

I don’t know whether I really love you, but I know I cannot lose you. If  the earth is going to be destroyed I want to tell you that you are the only one  I want to see.

遇上一个人要一分钟的时间，喜欢一个人只需一小时的时间，爱上一个人要一天的时间，可要我忘记你却要用上一生的时间。

I can meet a person in a minute, like a person in an hour and love a person  in a day, but it will take me a whole life to forget you

I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine

because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you

can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel

happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play

with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

You don’t like crying, right? So you must prefer smiling, because you know

smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. Every day, we see teachers or

students and say, “Hi/Hello! How are you?” At the same time, you are smiling,

right?

Smiling can let you have more friends. With a smile, people will know

you’re a kind person. They will talk with you, so you will have more and more

friends.

So I say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. It will give you

happiness.

It was fine today, Lily and I went to visit the Science Museum. It is about

two kilometers away from our homes, so we decided to go there by bike. We set

off at 8 oclock. At the museum we saw a lot of interesting things. We could

operate some equipment. There we met many classmates and friends. We thought we

had learned a lot and were more interested in science.

At half past eleven we left the museum for home. We enjoyed ourselves in

the museum today.

My dear:

This is the first time Ive ever sat at my computer and written to you so

late. I must have a reason for doing this.

Now I will tell you my feelings humbly, because I dont want to

misunderstand you easily. Today, I made our photo in my dorm room and set it as

a screensaver. I miss you, I want to tell you my happiness. But the answer you

gave me was truly astonishing.

Text messages dont come back, you can do that. I cant believe it. I dare

not connect you who are indifferent to me with you who are committed to me.

Who was the man lying beside me who came to see me the day before

yesterday?

Who left me yesterday and kissed me at the station?

Can you tell me?

I am angry. Why should I be angry? I am so happy. Waiting for your text

message, waiting for your call. I wait for you.

However, I came to a deep silence and your indifference.

Now the sisters in the bedroom are all asleep. But Im writing a letter.

Even if I hadnt written, I couldnt sleep. Because Im crying.

Am I sad? I dont know.

You know what? I think you lied to me.

Maybe you dont love me as much as you say.

To you, my existence is just the icing on the cake. You are more successful

and satisfied with me. Without me, your life will still be so wonderful. So, you

can be so cool, so cool.

When Im with you, treat me well. When Im not, treat me as if I dont

exist.

Maybe you should say youre busy. Busyness is relative. Youre busy during

the day. Youre busy at night, too. May I ask what you are doing? !

Can be busy to a message also reluctant to send it?

Look in your inbox and your outbox for yourself. You get the idea.

Darling, I want to love you well. Because I think you love me.

However, I am a selfish person.

If your love for me continues like this. Thats what youre going to end up

with.

Then you will know how I feel. Since ancient times is lost just know how to

cherish.

Im not gonna send you a text back. Im not taking a call from you. I

disappeared. Youll never find me again.

Please dont make me sad any more. My feelings for you are limited, and so

are my tears. I promised you I wouldnt break up with you again. So I wont

say.

Two days ago, I was very sad, but you came, I was dizzy with happiness, I

am happy, I am blindly happy.

But I didnt think this was just the beginning.

Im so tired!

I clearly feel your speechless and indifferent to me.

Do you love me? Do you love me? Do you spoil me?

I dont know.

If you love me, please prove it with your actions.

If you love me, please dont think once and for all.

If you spoil me, please dont keep your high profile.

Finally, Ill tell you. I am fragile, but I beg for your love. Although,

you say firmly, I leave you, I cant find, you love me so much.

But Ill tell you something. Even if later no one loves me, I do not want

to love you so humble.

Is love so cheap to you as entertainment in your spare time? Do you talk

with you when you are lonely?

I also have my business, however, I would like to separate out to miss you.

While youre busy. You a student so busy, I dare to expect you to work in the

future, will give me a phone call, a text message?

Are you looking for a wife? What do you think your wife does? Is it the toy

in your hand? In a good mood to tease! Busy just throw aside, do not ask.

What you have done and what you have promised is entwined in my heart,

making my heart ache. I began to ask myself, "Does he love me?"

If this is love, if this is love, if this is his model of love.

So, what do I do?

In my heart of hearts, I clearly know that people can not change for

someone, change is not this person.

So, I dont have any requirements, from then on, you can do whatever you

want, you can talk to me whenever you want.

Write here, you send me a message to say, we normal point love it!

I think its normal. But is our relationship normal?

What boyfriend can have you so arrogant, so high profile! Did you give me

the cold shoulder? Youre thinking, just leave it here and youll be fine.

Youll be your wife.

I love you?

Now I want to say, I hate you.

I hate your promises to me. I hate your love for me.

Honey, I tell you, Im angry, disappointed, sad, upset, and hate you.

You drive me crazy. Madness is followed by long apathy.

The opposite of love is indifference, not ruthlessness.

Youre gone, youre in your own city, youre completely different.

If there is any grievance in your heart, you say! If you think you dont

want to talk to me, go ahead! If you want to leave me, you say!

If you dont love me, you are brave to tell me. You have to trust in my

resilience. You say you do not love me, say a few more times I believe. Just

like you say you love me, say it more times and Ill believe it. I believe

you.

Ha ha...

I dont know why, Im heartbroken. This doesnt feel good. Because Im

afraid of heartache. In order not to heartache, I will run. Will choose habits

without you. Why, you make my heart ache? Im afraid of pain. What shall I do?

Is it true that only do not fall in love will not hurt?

Dont I have any other choice?

Your tone of voice to me, is I good for nothing, and then you pain, you

speechless. Is that hard for you when youre with me? My dear? ! Do you find it

so hard?

Do you feel so tired? Is it so hard to cheer me up? Is that whats

bothering you? Or am I too tough? Ha ha...

This is my letter to you. What shall I do in the future? I dont know.

But, I know, It hurts. I dont want to do anything. Dont give me any more

lessons. Too many people in the world are too self-righteous. Too many people

are poor teachers. I want a husband who loves me, not a university professor or

a government worker!

Even if you are Song Shiming, I am Seaweed. Song Shiming is not going to

talk about the financial crisis to Seaweed! And youre not really successful

yet!

Finally, I want to ask you, who am I to you, are you in the right

place?

Where do you go from here? !

Also: Happy Christmas Eve to you!

I went skiing with my friends on Sunday. It was my very first time to try this super interesting sport. I really enjoyed skiing A LOT, and I think that I have potential!!! For the entire afternoon, I only fell down twice before our coach actually came and taught us the correct postures. After some basic and advanced practices, I did try to ski down the hill, and it was AWESOME ! I think Ill try to go skiing as often as possible. However, wearing all the equipment to walk with is GOD DAMN exhausted!

我跟朋友去滑雪了星期天的比赛。这是我头一次的时间尝试这只超级有趣的活动。我真的很喜欢滑雪很多,而且我觉得我有潜在的!整个下午,我只俯伏三思而后行实际上我们的教练来教我们正确的姿势。经过一些基本的和先进的做法,我曾试滑雪下山,这实在太棒了! 我想我会试著去滑雪,次数越多越好。然而,戴着所有的设备散步是上帝诅咒累啊！

Dear Dad：

Today is father’s day, for so many years I’ve been seekig a way to express

my heartfelt thanks for all you have done for me. Here comes it!

Thank you for always being there sharing my life when I need you most.

Whenever I encounter difficulties, I never feel alone and vulnerable, because

you will keep me on the right path. I’m blessed to have you.

Thank you for offering me education and teaching me how to be a man. You

always inspire me not by words, but by what you have done! Your efforts in the

work, your loyalty to your friends, your responsibility for the family and your

persistence in the life have already set me good examples in my own life.

Thank you for always appreciating my work, no matter how tiny it is! You

have made me realize that it’s capacity not scores that really counts.

Dad, I love you and I will love you forever!

Yours beloved,

On this day in twenty-first Century, the new century is a widely used technology, the "no wonder Wurenbuxiao," is the "computer", with a "computer" is brought about by the Internet -- known to every family!

The computer is a great invention in the recent ten years before coming out of the network, it is a great progress, as the acme of perfection, as food and clothing, housing and transportation, education and entertainment, the network can help you. The network not only can satisfy you in life, even entertainment are you satisfied with the package, such as good housekeeping, whenever and wherever possible convenience, everyone yearned, also had its "universal" show the white feather, admire.

Nothing is perfect in every respect, is the so-called "extreme" network, although it is very popular among the public, but because it is in everyones life, so by the unscrupulous covet: manufacturing of computer viruses, Trojan horses, and even set up fishing and pornographic sites, is threatened by growing crises. If you accidentally enter the website not fit to be seen should be shut down immediately, otherwise, like yangruhukou, fall into the lions den as difficult to get away.

The first three feet gods, and reward those who want to take advice, network instruments of crime criminals, must not hold fluky mentality, doing something illegal, so as not to violate the law, then it is too late. Although the website can satisfy human needs and desires, but if you use it as a tool for crime, is tantamount to stoop, harm.

"Water can carry a boat, can also capsize, the network is the same, I hope everyone can remember using the rules of network, as long as the use of computer to comply with safety rules, so you can be a happy E generation.

I went to visit my grandparents last August. They lived in a small village far from Shenyang. I was born there ten years ago. I remembered it had been a poor place before.

去年八月份我去看爷爷奶奶。他们住在离沈阳很远的一个小村庄。十年前我就出生在那里。我记得以前那是一个穷地方。

But when I got to the village, I found that great changes had taken place there. The villagers became richer. They looked happy and healthy. A lot of new buildings were built.

可是当我到达村子之后，我发现那里发生了巨变。乡亲们变富了，他们看起来又快乐又健康。许多新楼兴建起来。

My home village took on a new look.

家乡呈现了新貌。

From a first grade to now, I most respected teacher is teaching us Chinese teacher David, David teacher long is very beautiful, she is a tall, thin, curved eyebrows under have a pair of intense big eyes, her smile will show two sweet dimples, appear very cordial. She is not only lively and interesting in class, but also strict in our study. I like her very much.

Teacher Davids lectures are lively and interesting, and each class is immersed in a happy atmosphere. Sometimes David teacher give us face turned red when content is excited, the students all listened with relish, sometimes, the teacher let us arranging, play according to the content of the text will make her rich expression, funny action, yinde classmates laughed, each lesson we all spent in happy learning.

Teacher David is very strict with us. Once, my homework was almost finished, and there were only a few words left. I managed to cope with the past. The next day, the homework was sent down, and I looked at it and said, "is this like a word written by a serious student?" I was so sorry to see other students who got full marks. In the evening, I read a word in a word and actually wrote the homework. When the homework was sent back, it was 100 plus star! I am very happy, deeply realized that it is the teachers little drops of my request to me to make continuous progress!

Not only did miss David strictly request us, but she also cared for and loved us, and sometimes played with us like friends. I was very happy to have such a teacher. When I grow up, I will be a good teacher like David.

dear chen lin and li hua,

i’ve just been out of hospital for a couple of days. right now ，i am really fine, but without your support, i wouldn’t have got better so soon.

you know, the traffic accident gave me a very hard blow, both physically and mentally. in the first two weeks after my injury, i almost lost my confidence in my future life. it is the doctors’and your encouragement that rendered me much strength and determination。

anyway, i learned a lot from this unfortunate accident. i’d neverrealize how important your friendship was to me. i can’t say anymore to show my gratitude for your taking turns keeping me company,and getting me through the blue time.

next saturday, my mother would give a recovery party to thank myfriends. i really want to see you there. so, 7 o’clock at my place,ok?

your truly,

li ming

旅游

上课流程：常考话题；话题词汇；活动示范； 思路，句型; 改进，实践，作业

一、常考的话题和可能的图片：

第一环节：休假、闲暇时光

A. 喜欢去风景区旅游

I prefer natural sceneries. Mountain and lake is my favorite. they are very beautiful and very nice, and everything is quiet. I enjoy it.

If we have unhappy thing ,I will go there, because it is quieter .I can concentrate on thinking for working out these difficult problem.

B. 喜欢去名胜古迹旅游

We like to go historical sites. China has a history of 5000 years. There are many historical sites in my country. I can visit them. Visiting them can help me to learn china history. 第二环节：如果该题出现在第二环节， 以下交际话题可以从旅游角度谈 十一黄金周、城市生活的弊端、城市和乡村的差异、向往的旅游地、自驾游 然后让学生做一个对话练习点评，讲解对话技巧——参考活页

第三环节：如果该题出现在第三环节，则需要深入分析和评论：

旅游地的不文明现象、乱刻乱画、到此一游等、随地吐痰, 黄金周出行带来的拥堵。

二、实战演练

第一环节：对话示范见117

技巧：谈个人旅游经历（比较容易准备，见参考词汇部分）

问题：Are you interested in travelingWhy

Where have you been

What was your first impression of …

Can you say something about the place you travelled

第二环节：谈交通出行方式，见对话p119

第三环节：谈旅行中的不文明现象

热门话题分析评论思路

1.先描述图片：旅行途中，一成年人在柱子上用笔写下“到此一游”，一儿童模仿大人 2. 表达观点：旅行中的不文明现象 3.危害：损坏文物等；父母或成年人对子女或青少年言传身教的影响；4. 原因：缺乏公德心；损人不利己；5. 措施 当事人：父母应以身作则 相关部门：制定法律法规保护文物、景点设施我们：提高自身修养，从我做起

讲解词汇和思路串联范例：

图片描述句式：

According to the pictures we can see/conclude that...

The picture shows/tells/reveals us that...

As is shown/can be seen in the picture/chate...

The picture/table is (gives information) about...

It can be seen from the pictures that...

阐述观点句式：

1) Introducing Your First Point 阐述你的第一个观点

To start with，Id like to consider... 我想先考虑／我想先谈谈 First of all，Id like to look at... 首先，我要谈谈

2) Finishing a Point 结束一个观点

Those are the main points on... 这些是有关的主要看法。

Thats all I h

ave to say about... 这就是在方面我所要的说的。

So that，then，is... 仅此，接着是

Now weve looked at／dealt with... 到此我们已考虑／讨论了

3) Starting a New Point 接着阐述另一个观点：

turn to... 转向现在让Now lets move on... 我们 接着考虑/谈谈

Id like now to 接着，我想examine... 仔细考查

Next we come to... 下面我们来看看

Turning now to... 接着转向

Lets move on now to.. 让我们接下去考虑

The next point id like to make is... 我想阐述的下一个观点

4) Referring to What You Have Said 提及你已说过的

As I said at the beginning.. 正如起初我所说的。

I told you a few moments age that... 刚才，我已告诉你

In the first part of my talk，I said... 在我讲话的第一部分，我曾说过 As Ive already said,... 就像我已说过的

As I mentioned earlier,... 正如先初已提及的

5) Referring to What You Will Say 提述你将要说的

Ill come to that later．过会儿我将提及这点。

Ill return to this point in a few minutes．我将回头谈及这一点。

... and Ill talk about this in the next part of my presentation.并且我将在讲话的下一部分涉及这一点。

...Ill comment on this in my conclusion．我将在结论中对此加以评述。

6) Summarising 综述

So now Id just like to summarise the main Points．那么，现在我仅对要点作一概括。

In brief，we have looked at... 简言之，我们已考虑了／已谈到了

7) Concluding 结论

Thats all I have to say for now．这就是现在我所要说的。

(I think)that cover most of the points．（我想）这已概述了多数要点。

三、范文储备

1、It have been discussed for a long time that how to deal with the uncivilized behaviors during the travel, such as write on the place of historic interests, or claim to old trees. This kind of things happened in China more often than any other countries. What can we do to prevent those actionsThough we have advocate education of the tourists for years, the situation was not better than be imagined. In my opinion, we still have to encourage the education of our tourists, but with some change. For example, we should not only disseminate “Don’t Do Sth.”, but also with the reason and an explanation that it is not cool to sign names or words everywhere, in the contrary, we have to ashamed of that. Make a comparison between foreigners and us can also increase our consciousness.

consider... 考虑

2、7天长假好吗 （旅游途中人满为患的拥堵等）？

Some people can use the seven days reading books or studying, and you know when they are working, they dont have time to do it.

Since most people dont have other vacation time, everybody is travelling during the week-long holidays, so at the beginning and the end of the holidays, place such like airports, train station, long-distance bus station are often over-crowd, for example, in last labor day holiday i went to beach. I want to enjoy the beauty of the seashores and was planning to swim, but when I reached the long-distance bus station, I found that people were everywhere. I swore I would never go travelling in a week-long holiday again.

3、自助游还是报团游

With peoples living standard raised more and more in the recent years, they tend to choose travelling in their spare time. Some people like to choose package tour, while others prefer independent tour.

Actually, both package tour and independent tour have their own advantages and disadvantages, which is largely dependent on peoples time, money, and the number of people who plan to be on a tour.

As for me, I am in favor of package tour, because the travel agency will help me arrange for anything about the tour, including the tickets for the train or airplane, for hotels, and for sightseeing. And what I should do is just enjoy the whole journey without worrying about the details.

四、作业

背诵词汇，背熟一篇 文章

参考词汇：

peak/busy/low season for tourism 旺季/淡季

rural excursion/ city tour 乡村/城市观光

a place rich in historic relics 历史古迹

a sacred place for pilgrims 圣地

tourist attraction/sightseeing spots 景点 famous spots and historic sites

feast one’s eye/ feed one’s eyes

independent tour/group tour/individual travel 自助游/组团游

return to naturea must for visitors必到之处a paradise for sb./sth. shopping tour/ souvenir 购物游

take a scenic drive/ travel afoot 驾车游览/徒步旅行

aquarium水族馆pavilion 亭子，楼阁 amusement park

botanical garden植物园 tomb garden

famous mountains and great rivers 名山大川

well-equipped/old-fashioned

densely-wooded hill/rolling hills

a pool of water/ a torrent of water/flow of water

lash against the bank/water vapor/wander eastward

reflect in the calm water

skip stone on the water

fascinating sight/fantastic sight奇景

an atmosphere of peace and seclusion

an island of calm amidst the hustle and bustle of the city

garden architecture

get a bird’s eye view of

keep…intact

sheer cliffs and steep mountains

snow-capped/ a vast plain

villa-type holiday village/ folk custom village

广袤无垠的中华大地 the boundless expanse of the Chinese territory 绚丽多姿的自然景观gorgeous and varied natural scenery 如诗如画poetic and picturesque

名胜古迹places of historic interest and scenic beauty

兵马俑 terra-cotta soldiers and horses

故宫the Imperial Palace

五岳之首 the most famous of Chinas 5 great mountains

北京主要景点口译词汇

故宫：

the Imperial Palace

紫禁城：

the Forbidden City

兵马俑：

Terra Cotta Warriors/soldiers and horses

长城：

the Great Wall

居庸关：

Juyongguan Pass

不到长城非好汉：

He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man.

My Christmas Day

Chritmas is the day that Jesus Christ was born. people in the world celebrate and worship this day in his honor. The santa claus will come out and send presents for children. Christmas cards and decorated trees are all over the place. The carolling of Christmas songs echo through the air. I am not a Chirstian, but I also enjoy the atmosphere of Chrismas. I wish everybody have a merry Chirismas.

Peace is a life many people aspire to.But some people want to make war and destroy peace.

"Boom!How many happy families have been destroyed by the bomb?How many children have lost their father;How many wives lost their husbands, how many mothers lost their sons...

The smoke-filled battlefield has claimed the lives of many, especially the recent war in Iraq.That day, I turn on the TV, elegantly heart-pounding meat jumped picture immediately reflected in the screen: in a hospital, a child lying on the bed and cried, can be seen from their big eyes in despair;There was a big explosion at a station, killing a lot of people.There was a pile of dead bodies, some blown up;Some of them broke their feet, they blew their heads off...At the time, I thought: if there was no war, there would be no accident.

The bullet of sin.You dont have to show up!Youre gone forever!You make people all over the world hate, because you are so ruthless, you let a young life disappear in this world!

Peace!Come down to earth!People on earth are eager to get your moisture.If every day of the earth is filled with peace and love;How wonderful the world will be, look!Friends on the grass happily frolic;The old man was chatting under the shade.The blind man could not cross the road, and the pupil came to help him across the road.The teacher imparted the seeds of knowledge to the students in the spacious classroom.And... and...People understand love, understand each other, and understand a lot.A lot of...

Peace, how long will it last?Im dying for peace!

[关于和平的英文作文

I have a very happy family.There are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and I.My fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.As a famous saying goes :" There is always an able woman behind a successful man .",my mother is a housewife.She can cook very dilicious food and she is often busy with some houseworks.Sometimes,brother and I help her tidy the house,but of course,we couldnt tidy as clean as her.

I love my parents as well as my family.I hope we can be happy forever!

Chinese New Year is coming and my family is very busy。 Its because Chinese New Year is very special and important。 We must prepare many special things to get ready for this festival。

First， will make a big New Year meal。 Second， we will make Good—luck wishes。 Third， we will set off firecrackers。 New Year meal is delicious and we think that eating some will bring us good luck。 A long time ago， Chinese people believed red color could bring our good luck too。 And we set off firecrackers could frighten ghosts away。

Chinese New Year is very popular between students。 Because we can have a long happy holiday。

Dear Santa Claus,

I am writing to you only in order to fulfil the task assigned by the

school.

I know that your list of naughty children is empty, your list of good

children is empty, your life is a capital emptiness, you dont understand my

trouble.

See you later.

Im not telling you my real name.

My father is 33 years old this year, Mao inch head, thin hair bare below the scalp, curved eyebrows with a pair of gold rimmed glasses, the sharp nose with a thin dark face on both sides of the small mouth, long a pair of big ears.

My father is fat and likes to eat all kinds of food. Yesterday, my mother bought a bag of snacks for my dad, when I wasnt looking, pick up a snack with relish to eat it, when I found the snacks were eaten, I looked at the table and a bunch of eat snack bags, I get gas.

This is my dad, a dad who loves snacks.

I love my dad!

Today， I came to the breakfast。 See the lads with chopsticks busy busy。 So

I took a seat， a young man walked to nete over and ask me to eat something， so I

had a bowl of beef noodles peppers。 Soon， a noodles。 I take chopsticks， soon

finished eating。 On the way to school， I also think that bowl noodles

【中文翻译】

这天，我去吃早餐。只见店里的伙计们端着碗筷忙来忙去。于是我找了一个位子坐下了，一位年轻的伙计走了过来，问我要吃点什么，于是我点了一碗青椒牛肉面。很快，一碗面就出来了。我拿起筷子很快地吃完了。在去学校的路上，我还想着那碗好吃的面。

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

Yesterday, the weather was good, cloudless. My father and I went to the military are playing Ski Resort. We wear gloves, hats, armed to come to the ski slopes. Ski resort built on a hillside, looking ahead, the white snow everywhere. Built on the hillside like a long white carpet. I help my father in the next, put on ski boots, foot on skis, I looked at the sloping slopes, she did not hesitate to slip down. I seem to fly up, ears only hear the sound of the wind. Soon he went to the lower slope. Time always flies in the joy of particularly fast. Seeing red is gone, we reluctantly left this lovely world of ice.

I went to my new house to my room. It is very big and beatiful. I will use a

blue wardrobe and a blue bookcase. I saw a big bed and there was a blue sheet on

it, I really liked them, because my favorite color is blue. But my desk was

brown. In fact, I like brown, too. And there were many pet dogs and pet bears.

They were cute, really eute. I loved them very much.

我去了我的新房子,我的房间。这是非常大的和美丽。我将用一个蓝色的衣柜和一条蓝色的书架。我看见一张大床上有一个蓝色的纸上,我真的很喜欢它们,因为我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色的。但是我的桌子是棕色的。事实上,我喜欢棕色,真是太好了。有许多宠物狗和宠物的熊。他们是可爱的,真的eute。我非常爱他们。