自我简介英语作文带翻译高一(汇集20篇)

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, when the Spring Festival approaching, means a New Year begins. In the every day of the Spring Festival, people live very happy! My hometown is no exception.

My hometown is in xuwen, whenever the lunar New Year approaching, every family decorated, beaming, all kinds of Spring Festival activities emerge in endlessly, but one of the most interesting is the "lucky lion catch the color" and "swimming float.

Big at the beginning of a day just bright, lion dance teams began giving families happy New Year. At this time, people will think already prepared with red envelopes and candy Mosaic "heat", hanging in the roof or the railing on the second floor, let the lion "catch". When the lion worship to the head of the household, the awakening of the other disciples will take turns performing wu, broadsword, pike, etc all kinds of kung fu, then use oceans way, one layer at a time as a ladder to the lion "catch". Lion climbed on top of a ladder, first of all to all the present pedestrian proffering flaming, leaping and then the body with the mouth to catch the "heat". As long as you hear the cheers, "heat" must be caught by a lion.

Swimming float is the most busy celebrating the Spring Festival activities. Annual twelve every township, according to their own characteristics floats out having a unique style. Float design is different, some is harvest joy of melon and fruit garden, some firm is an economic boom, high-rise buildings, some is celebrate spring scenery garden of flowers, also have a plenty of wuzhou for space travel. Float colorful, lights flashing, colorful flags fluttering, beautiful! Every year when swimming float to smartened up people, from different villages and towns to the county, from the alley took to the streets, around the parade floats laugh ah, jump ah, this is our town, that is your town, tell each other, laughing, his face is permeated with the joy of harvest celebration.

This is the Spring Festival in my hometown, a full of happy, full of joy, full of joy, full of hope of the Spring Festival. It always make me happy, makes me excited, I yearn for.

春节是中国的传统节日，每当春节来临，就代表新的一年开始了。在春节的每一天里，人们都过得非常快乐!我的家乡也不例外。

我的家乡在徐闻，每当春节来临，家家户户张灯结彩，喜气洋洋，各种各样的迎新春活动层出不穷，但其中最有趣的是“金狮抓彩”和“游花车”。

大年初一天刚亮，醒狮队就开始给各家各户拜年了。这时，人们会把早已准备好的用红包和糖果拼成的“彩头”，高高挂在屋檐或二楼的栏杆上，让狮子“抓彩”。当狮子给户主拜完年，醒狮团的师兄弟们就会轮番表演南拳、大刀、长枪等各式各样的功夫，之后就用搭罗汉的方式，一层一层地搭成人梯给狮子“抓彩”。狮子爬在人梯的最高层，首先向所有在场的人行叩首礼，然后就跃起身子用嘴去抓 “彩头”。你只要听到欢呼声，“彩头”肯定被狮子抓到了。

游花车是最热闹的庆春节活动。大年十二，每个乡镇都会根据自己的特色扎出别具一格的花车。花车的款式各不相同，有的扎的是丰收喜悦的瓜果满园，有的扎的是经济腾飞的高楼大厦，有的扎的是喜迎春色的满园花香，还有的是五洲同庆的太空遨游。花车五颜六色，彩灯闪烁，彩旗飘飘，美丽极了!每年一到游花车的时候，人们打扮得漂漂亮亮的，从各个乡镇赶到县城，从各个小巷涌上街头，围着游行的花车笑呀、跳呀，这辆是我们镇的，那辆是你们镇的，互相转告着，欢笑着，脸上洋溢着欢庆丰收的喜悦。

这就是我家乡的春节，一个充满吉庆，充满欢乐，充满喜悦，充满希望的春节。它总是那么令我陶醉，令我激动，令我向往。

I was very busy this holiday is not only to write my homework, and review the content of the term, to prepare for next semester content, but also take notes, but also on the class, also...

Holiday homework at least two weeks to finish, much homework. Elementary school little homework can be finished in a week, but I dont think of elementary school holiday time, because of much homework can increase knowledge, enhance the content of the last semester, also is not very good?

Review content have to use two weeks last semester, though much more content than primary school, but I still learned the nature can a bit faster. Review when I dont feel bored, I feel very interesting, I can not only greet old friends and I can also like a detective to find out in the first semester, I didnt catch the bad guy. (the so-called bad is easily wrong was delayed)

And prepare for next semester content at least three weeks for next semester content point much more difficult, to note down the concept of light effect is not big, but also digest, understanding, etc. To solve the problem. But I dont bother me just regard the knowledge I wont be as I dont know, I want to make friends with him. And cant forget him, I hope my friends can be a little more.

In addition to the above content I have classes, see the name on the to increase my knowledge, but also in the study of buying new things. Learning time often in 10 hours a day or so. Anyhow I am very busy every day.

Ah! This is the most busy holiday, the holiday is the most tired! But the holiday was more fulfilling than my previous holiday! More satisfied! More happy!

这个假期我非常忙碌不仅要写作业，还要复习上学期内容，还要预习下学期内容，还要做笔记，还要上学习班，还要……

假期作业至少两个星期才能写完，作业很多。小学时作业很少一个星期就可写完，但我并不怀念小学假期的时光，因为作业多可以增加知识，加强上学期的内容，也不是很好吗?

复习上学期内容也得用两个星期，虽然内容比小学的多很多，可我还是学过了自然能快一点。复习的时候我并不觉得无聊，我觉得非常有趣，我不仅可以和我的老朋友打招呼还可以像一位侦探一样来揪出我上学期没有抓住的坏人。(所谓坏人就是易错易误点)

预习下学期内容起码也要三个星期因为下学期内容重点多难点多，光把概念记下来效果也不大，还要消化、理解、做题等。但我不烦我只是把我不会的知识看成我不认识的人，我要和他交朋友一样简单。并且不能忘记他，我希望我的朋友可以多一点。

除了以上内容我还要上学习班、看名着来增加我的知识，还要在学习之余买过年的东西。一天学习时间常常在10个小时左右。总之我每天都很忙碌。

啊!这是最忙的假期，这是最累的假期!可是这个假期是比我以前的假期更充实!更满足!更快乐!

It was sunny and hot today.I got up early at half past six.I read English

and then had breakfast.I helped my mother washed the dishes.Then I did my

homework and cleaned my room.I went shopping with my mother in the

afternoon.Then I played table tennis with my friends.In the evening I watched TV

and read a book.I really had a busy and interesting day.

今天阳光明媚，很热，六点半早起，读英文，然后吃早餐，帮妈妈洗碗，做功课，打扫房间，和妈妈一起去超市购物。下午。然后我和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视，看书。我真的度过了忙碌而有趣的一天。

Hello everyone！ My name is Chen Jiaobing. I have a pair of eyes, curved eyebrows, not tall nor short, every hair in a ponytail.

My favorite color is blue. My hobby is singing and dancing... My favorite people are my family, my friends and the people worthy of my respect.

My greatest dream is to have wings of angels or elves and fly freely in the blue sky. I am very outgoing, I like to make friends, to be good to friends.

the dragon boat festival ,also called the duanwu festival ,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according....

at the end of the zhou dynasty, the area we now know as china had fallen into a state of fragmentation and conflict. while the zhou dynasty....

the dragon boat festival.中国传统节日,农历五月初五日。相传古代爱国诗人屈原在这天投江自杀,后人为了纪念他,把这天当做节日,有吃粽子、划龙舟等风俗....

端午节（农历5月5日）是中国古老的传统节日，始于春秋战国时期，至今已有xx多年历史。“粽包分两髻，艾束著危冠。旧俗方储药，羸躯亦点丹”端午的时.....

there is a very famous traditional chinese story that has a close connection to the dragon boat festival. once upon a time on e-mei mountain there lived two snake spirits....

[端午节英语作文和翻译

导语：你有没有想过以后要做什么工作呢?每个人都有自己的理想工作，可能会随着年龄而改变，但是不变的是我们那份坚持努力的信心，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener， she lives plants， and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.

Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

【参考译文】

最近我们在班上做了一次调查，以了解学生的理想工作。这是一篇关于我组成员想法的报告。

玛丽想成为时装设计师，因为她喜欢漂亮的衣服，擅长绘画。凯特想成为一名园丁，她生活的植物，她想使城市更好。迈克想当作家。他愿意和别人分享他的精彩故事。汤姆想当厨师。他想为别人做可口的食物。我想成为一名警察。我要保护人民安全。

希望每个人都能在未来实现自己的梦想。

我阿姨有个小宝宝。他的名字叫单佳星。现在三岁。我常常照看他。

他看起来像个绅士，因为他常常把手背在后面走路。他的眼睛像星星一样亮。

他很可爱。他非常喜欢猜我会送给他什么东西。

我拿出一个大苹果和一个小苹果问他：“你要哪一个？”他举起手说：

“好姐姐，给我那个大的吧，那个更好吃。”他拿着苹果高兴得跳起来。

有一次，他突然看见我的鼻子上有个黑东西。他惊讶地喊：“姐姐，快看！为什么你鼻子上长头发？”

这就是我的弟弟。他非常可爱。我非常喜欢他。朋友们，你喜欢他吗？

My aunt has a baby. His name is Shan jiaxing. He is three years old. I often look after him.

He looks like a gentleman because he always puts his hands behind his back and walks along the road.His eyes are very bright and like stars.

He is very cute. He is very glad to guess what I will send him. I take out a big apple and a small apple and ask him, “Which one do you like better?”“Sister, you are so kind?please give me the big one,it will be nicer. ”When he gets it,he jumps up with joy.

Once,he suddenly saw a black thing in my nose. Then he shouted in surprise,“Sister,look! Why does your nose grow hair?”

This is my brother. He is very lovely. I like him very much.

[记叙作文我的弟弟英语翻译

The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy.

As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the

morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at

noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.

译文：终于放暑假了，应该好好歇歇了!可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了，帮妈妈洗碗，扫地，做饭等等，到了中午，我快累死了，往床上一躺，扇扇电风扇，舒服多了。

August 7,20__Friday

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to

grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.

Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文：今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

Topic one：Environment Protection（环境保护）

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

Forest Pretention保护森林

[精选高一上学期英语期末考试话题作文

People always complain time is limited, they want to have more time to do more things, but the time stops them. Actually, I once feel my time is less while others have a lot of time to do what they want. I start to think about myself, I realize that I always waste my time on playing computer games, so I decide to not to play computer games.

人们总是抱怨时间是有限的,他们想要有更多的时间做更多的事情,但时间阻碍了他们。实际上,我曾经觉得我的时间很少而其他人有很多时间去做他们想做的事情。我开始思量自己,我知道我总是把时间浪费在玩电脑游戏,所以我决定不玩电脑游戏。

How to learn English is a diffcult question .but now i have a good idea .

I think we have many ways to learn English .For example .

First of all ,we can listen to English miusc and watch English language movies .

Sencond, i think we can read english books it helps us to memorize words .

Next we can listen to english tapes i think it helps us to memorize words ,too .

Finally . we can talk with english penpal .it will help our spoken .

I hope every body will get good grides.

翻译：

怎样去学习英语是一个困难的事情。但是现在我有一个好主意。

我认为我们有许多的方法去学习英语。例如第一我们可以去听英语歌还有可以去看英语电视。

第2 ，我认为我们可以去读英语书它能帮助我们去记住英语单词。

然后我们可以去听英语录音 ，我认为它也能帮我们去记住英语单词。

最后，我们可以和英语笔友一起交流 。它将会帮助我们的语法。

我希望每个人都将获得一个好成绩。

[六年级英语日记带翻译如何学习英语

Instant Noodles

Two years ago, I like to eat instant noodles very much, the instant noodles smell so delicious, because there are tasty flavor in it. When my mother was not at home, I would buy the instant noodles, as the time went by, I found my skin became bad and I would not like to eat rice. I felt so bad, my mother told me that I should not eat so much instant noodles, they contained no vitamins and also frustrated my appetite. I realized my problem and started to stay away from instant noodles, then my appetite became good and I wanted to eat rice again. Instant noodles are junk food, we’d better eat it less.

两年以前，我很喜欢吃泡面，泡面闻起来很香，因为有美味的调料在里面。当我妈妈不在家的时候，我会买泡面吃，随着时间的流逝，我发现我的皮肤变得不好，我也不怎么喜欢吃米饭。我感到糟糕极了，我的妈妈告诉我我不应该吃那么多的泡面，这些没有营养，也让我胃口不好。我意识到了我的问题，开始不吃泡面，我的胃口变好了，也有食欲吃米饭。泡面是垃圾食品，我们最好少吃。

[优秀英语日记带翻译:泡面

I woke up at two oclock in the afternoon today. There was nothing to eat

in the house so I went outside.

I wanted to go to a cheap restaurant and find some food to eat. When I got

to the restaurant, I realized that I forgot to bring money, so I went back

home.

Then I realized that I forgot my keys also, so I waited outside for my mom

to come home and starved the rest of the day.

参考翻译

我今天下午二点醒来。屋子里没东西吃，所以我出去了。

我想去一家便宜的餐馆找些吃的。当我到餐厅的时候，我意识到我忘记带钱了，所以我就回家了。

然后我意识到我也忘了带钥匙，所以我在外面等我妈妈回家，并在之后的时间里一直饿着。

今天是 五月初五

——端午节，也就是人们常说的重五。我问爷爷：“端午节是怎么来的?”爷爷说：“端午节是为了纪念我国古代的爱国人士屈原而来的。当时屈原还是楚国的朝廷命官，但是小人当道，朝廷昏庸。屈原不愿亲眼见着国家的覆没，就怀抱石头，投进了汨罗江。楚国的百姓闻讯后，纷纷划船营救。从此，便有了端午节的说法。

Today is the fifth day of May -- the Dragon Boat Festival, it is often said

that the weight of five. I asked grandpa: "the Dragon Boat Festival is how

come?" Grandpa said: "the Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the ancient

Chinese patriot Qu Yuan. When Qu Yuan was in court officials, but the villains

in power, and the court. Qu Yuan did not want to see a country annihilated, arms

stone, cast into the Miluo river. The people in the state after hearing the

news, their boat rescue. From then on, there will be the festival of the Dragon

Boat Festival.

“世杰，过来。”这时，妈妈下令了。我走进厨房问：“妈妈，干什么?”“包粽子啊!”妈妈说。“这活儿，我哪行啊?”我难为情的说。妈妈说：“让你包，你就包，有妈妈这个老师在呢!”我答应着：“好吧!”我拿起竹叶，学着妈妈的样子，把竹叶卷成筒状，再用小勺挖米装进筒里，用竹叶把馅儿包好，用彩线捆起来。我和妈妈合伙把粽子包完了，然后就上锅蒸。不久粽子出锅了，吃着自己亲手包的粽子，心里比吃了蜜还甜。

"Shijie,." At this time, the mother ordered. I went to the kitchen and

asked, "Mom, what do you do?" "wrap the rice dumplings!" mom said.. "This work,

which I do?" I said. Mother said: let your bag, you pack, mother the teacher in!

"I promised:" OK! "I pick up the bamboo leaves, study like a mother, bamboo

rolled into a cylindrical shape, and then a small spoon dig meters installed in

the cylinder, wrap the dumplings with bamboo, tied with colored thread. My

mother and I have a partnership to wrap up the rice dumplings, and then we have

to steam it.. Soon the rice dumplings out of the pot, eating the dumplings

wrapped in their own hands, heart than eating honey sweet.

我喜欢过端午节，更喜欢包粽子、吃粽子。

I like the Dragon Boat Festival, but also like to wrap the rice dumplings,

eat rice dumplings.

The class teacher and we discussed the "food security". In todays society, human food safety has been a serious threat.

Now the children all like to eat snacks, and addicted to eat. Although parents tell them who is bad to the body, but they still continue to buy snacks, just have a fair into a "sneak". In the snack, the children to buy one of the most dangerous, is the spicy dry tofu.

Understanding on the Internet, I learned the spicy dry tofu is composed of metamorphic pork, plastic bags, such as some are unsafe, unhealthy materials again. Look at the pictures, some of the staff in the processing, should put the foot on the above, this is how not health! So I advise you not to eat spicy dry tofu also dont eat snacks again as far as possible.

There are a lot of people like to eat mutton string, and believe. It tastes very good taste, and there is a sheep shan wei, let people think this is the authentic lamb kebabs. Not actually, mutton string is called mutton string, but who can guarantee that the meat must be above mutton? Perhaps is pork, this is good. Some are made of rat meat, do you still eat like this? You might ask: "sheeps shan wei?" Shan wei is put "mutton string" sheep sheep urine bubble in some time, and then a wash, so the "delicious" clusters of mutton string was baked out. Here, dont I advised, I believe that you have not eat?

Now, can not eat meat, vegetables are dangerous, most of the vegetables are chemical pesticides, so you must be clean and wash the vegetables to eat, after all, it may do harm to your familys health.

Now, food safety not guaranteed, and peoples health is threatened, so making the uncles and aunts of food to ensure food safety, ensure peoples health.

这一节课老师与我们讨论了“食品安全”。在当今社会，人类的食品安全已受到了严重的威胁。

现在的孩子们都喜欢吃零食，而且吃上了瘾。尽管家长们告诉他们那些是对身体不好的，但他们还是一如既往的买零食，只不过有光明正大变成“偷偷摸摸”。在零食中，孩子们买的最危险的，就是辣条了。

在网上了解，我的得知辣条是由变质的猪肉，塑料袋等一些极不安全，又不健康的材料制作而成。看那些图片，有些工作人员在加工时，竟把脚放在了上面，这是多么不卫生啊!所以我劝大家不要再吃辣条了也尽量不要再吃零食了。

羊肉串，相信也有很多人喜欢吃。它吃起来口感很好，而且有一股羊膻味，让人们以为这就是正宗的羊肉串了。其实不是，羊肉串虽叫羊肉串，但是谁能保证上面的肉一定是羊肉呢?说不定是猪肉，这还算好的。有些竟是用老鼠肉做的，这样你还吃的下去吗?你可能会问：“羊膻味又是怎么来的呢?”羊膻味是把“羊肉串”放在羊尿里泡上一些时日，然后冲洗一下，这样一串串“香喷喷”的羊肉串就被烤出来了。说到这里，不用我劝，相信你就已经不会再吃了吧?

现在，肉不可以吃，蔬菜也有危险，大部分蔬菜都会打农药，所以大家洗蔬菜时一定要清洗干净再吃，毕竟它会危害家人的健康。

现在，食品安全得不到保证，人们的健康受到威胁，所以制作食品的叔叔阿姨们要保证食品的安全，保证人们的健康。

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone. Im Li Hua. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.

In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

Thank you for your listening!

我们能为环境做些什么

你好，每个人都。我是李华。很高兴谈论我们能为环境做些什么，我想我们每个人都可以做一点点来帮助解决这个问题。

我们能做的第一件事就是在用布袋代替塑料袋，当我们去购物。它有助于保护环境。我们能做的第二件事是尽可能重复使用旧课本可以。我们也应该永远不会忘记关灯，当我们离开教室时，为了节省能源。更重要的是，它会更好，如果我们步行或骑自行车上学。我们应该尽最大努力减少污染和浪费。

事实上，即使是最简单的日常活动也能对环境产生很大的差异。我相信我们可以让世界变得更美好的生活。

谢谢你的倾听!

Dear Wang Lin,

It’s really my pleasure to make friends with you. I’m Zhao Gang and I’m 17

years old. I like playing football and reading. I’m good at writing and playing

the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from

university. To get good marks, firstly, think listening carefully in class is

most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time.

Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the

advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the

chance. And I’ll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a

piece of piano music for you.

Looking forward to your letter.

Best wishes.

My secret

My mother’s birthday is coming soon, I want to give her a surprise, it is my secret. My mother takes care of me all the time, she is working so hard for the family, as I grow up, I know it is not easy for her to be a housewife. I have saved some money, I plan to buy her a scarf, which she will like.

我的秘密

我妈妈的生日就快到了，我想要给她一个惊喜，这是我的秘密。妈妈一直照顾着我，她为这个家庭付出了很多，随着我长大，我知道对她来说成为一名家庭主妇是很不容易的。我已经存下了一些钱，我打算给她买一条围巾，她会喜欢的。

[我的秘密英语作文及翻译

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered

last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone

abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I

think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We

all will prepare the new term’s new subject.I know, it is the most important for

us now.

昨天，我们高兴地发挥，但只有10人。我记得去年有22人在所有。我听到一些我的朋友已经出国。他们去国外学习。也许我没有看到他们的未来。我想明年我们将不作党。明年是一个非常重要的一年。我们都将编制新的任期的新课程.我知道，这是最重要的是，我们现在。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。