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初三英语满分英语作文(优秀20篇)

秋天虽不像春天那样娇嫩;不像夏天那样迷人;不像冬天那样冷峻。但它却有着自己一番别样的精彩。下面是小编分享的写秋天的英语作文,欢迎大家阅读!

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初三描述食品安全英语作文

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"XX school student collective food poisoning", "XX place bleak look-out collapse", "XX place again there was a traffic accident"... Life, always hear or see some strange, let person sigh of accident, one after another tragedy always constantly in front of us.

Danger is in our each persons side, sometimes is so near to us. "Lucky" I experienced this once. That, I come home from school, saw this scene: a child was playing in the road, no attention paid to the coming danger, a large truck coming toward her. Others shouted, looking back, the childrens truck, immediately panic, his face pale, legs a soft, straight down to the ground, big trucks the emergency brake, but it was too late, the boy has been under pressure in the car. People suddenly gave a shout, some with burying his face in his hands, did not dare to look down, some by the sudden scene scared silly, just stand in situ. "Another child forever left the world", is really sad. However, when people return to absolute being, has found that children had miraculously stood up, not a little damage.

Many risks ah, had a narrow escape. Thanks to the girl in the middle of front, thanks to the cars chassis is high, if a little partial, if the body again a little bit low, the consequence is unimaginable.

Security, is inseparable from a topic, we will never pay attention to safety, is we all know the truth. But safety accidents happen every day, and constantly increasing, every day in the heartbreaking tragedy. Safety first, with safety, we floral life to blossom. With safety, we can happily spend the youth, life for everyone only once, lost, will not come back. Whenever we up and down the stairs, a little light, quiet a little. Whenever we cross the road, look around first, then walked briskly, whenever we school, want to go home as soon as possible, dont play on the side of the road.

Life is great, but it is fragile. We should cherish life, safety first!

“XX学校学生集体食物中毒”,“XX地方煤井塌陷”,“XX地方又发生了交通事故”……生活中,总会听到或看到这样一些令人惊心,让人叹息的事故发生,一个又一个地悲剧总会在我们面前不断地上演。

危险就在我们每个人的身边,有时离我们是那么近。我“有幸”经历了这么一次。那次,我放学回家,看到了这样一幕:一个孩子正在马路中央玩耍,丝毫没有注意到即将到来的危险,一辆大卡车朝她驶来。旁人高喊一声,那个孩子回头一看,是卡车,顿时惊恐万分,脸色发白,腿一软,人直直地倒在地上,大卡车紧急刹车,可是,已经迟了,那个孩子已被压在车下。人群顿时发出一阵惊呼,有的用双手捂住脸,不敢往下看,有的被突如其来的场面吓傻了,呆呆地立在原地。“又一个孩子永远地离开了这个世界”,真是悲哀。可是,当人们回过神来后,却发现小孩奇迹般地站了起来,没有受到一点伤害。

多险呀,真是死里逃生。幸亏了那女孩倒在了车前的正中间,幸亏了那车的底盘高,如果再偏一点,如果车身再低一点,那后果不堪设想。

安全,是我们永远离不开的一个话题,注意安全,是我们每个人都懂的道理。但是安全事故还是每天都在发生,而且不断地增多,天天都在上演那令人心碎的悲剧。安全第一呀,有了安全,我们如花般的生命才能绽放。有了安全,我们才能开开心心地度过青春年华,生命对每个人来说只有一次,失去了,就永远回不来了。每当我们上下楼梯,轻一点儿,静一点儿。每当我们横穿马路,先左右看一下,再轻快地走过,每当我们放学时,要尽快回家,不要在路边玩耍。

生命是伟大的,但又是脆弱的。我们要珍惜生命,安全第一!

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篇1:英语满分优秀作文

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dear bob,

i have found a place for you to live in. the room is on fangcao street, which is only one stop distant from jianxin chinese school. you can take no.11 bus there.

it’s a small fiat with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. and it is only 25 square meters. the rent is 500 yuan every month. in the bedroom, there is a sofa, a

bed, a chair and a desk. do you like it? if not, please tell me and i will find another room for you.

yours,

li hua

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篇2:LittleAvan初三英语作文

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Evan is only 6 years old, but he has to travel 20 miles a day to school by bike with his father. The family moved to a new house in March .But no local schools have a place for him , so he has to study at his old school, which is near his old home. Every day ,Evan has to cross the busy roads with his father. The daily trip is so tiring for him that he often falls asleep in school. It seems harder when the weather is bad. The family doesn’t have a car Though there is a bus that could take Evan from the new house to school, the family is too poor to buy bus tickets. Most people have read his story in the newspaper. Now, Evan has been offered a place at Kendall School to start in September. It’s the nearest one to his new house.

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篇3:关于我的初三英语老师的作文

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这位老师是我初三时的英语老师,至今,我几乎每天都会不由自主地想起他的话,虽已过了两年,但每次回想,似乎前一天还是他的学生,还在上他那个性化的课堂。

我们班是学校历史上最乱的班,初一、初二的英语课就像一张大大白纸上的斑斑点点,零碎得近乎空白。初三伊始,学校大扫除,我们班只有几个人在打扫,大多都溜去玩了。我和同桌在走廊上游荡着,突然被一位老师叫住:“喂,你们两个来,你来倒茶水,你来倒垃圾桶。”“不要,不干。”我说。他喊道:“Go,I’myourEnglishteacher。”这就是我们所等待的英语老师?那天下午我们班里议论纷纷:这个英语老师能管住我们吗?我们初三的英语课还会是空白吗?

答案是我们初三的英语课是满满的五彩斑斓,没有斑点的空白。我们全级有9个班,我们班的英语成绩一直稳居第9名。而这位英语老师一接手,第一次考试时我们就考了个中等,第一次脱掉了第9名的帽子。

我们英语每天总是穿得整整齐齐的,头发丝毫不乱,着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。他总是最后到校,最早离开,戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车匆匆来、匆匆去。走路时也是忽忽匆匆的,昂头直腰,大步直迈。

开学不久,我跟同桌想请他帮我们补习。第一次英语考试我们考了八、九名,我们连连说这个成绩好――若是考差了,他会不补;若是了,又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后,他竟说:“不要,我从来都不帮人补习,我最讨厌补习这玩意了,不要!”我和同桌纳闷了好久:这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知,更纳闷的还在后头,他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了,有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布:“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题,我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生,我最讨厌这些,上课有听就够了,不要再来问我。”话音未落,我们面面相觑,半张着嘴巴,都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的,他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实,这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人,一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前,我们英语站在讲台上,仰头望着风扇,皱着眉头,手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿,他把朝向他的窗都打开了,但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声,他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会,只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇,一手抓着一把大交椅,身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼,不时地听到有人在说:“这……这是老师吗?怎么会有这么个性的老师?”然后呢,我们英语就坐在大交椅上,吹着大风扇,喝着柠檬茶,心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处,他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟,好,”他说,“你们6班就是鬼灵精,一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来,那7班,我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这不补;若是了,又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后,他竟说:“不要,我从来都不帮人补习,我最讨厌补习这玩意了,不要!”我和同桌纳闷了好久:这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知,更纳闷的还在后头,他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了,有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布:“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题,我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生,我最讨厌这些,上课有听就够了,不要再来问我。”话音未落,我们面面相觑,半张着嘴巴,都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的,他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实,这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人,一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前,我们英语站在讲台上,仰头望着风扇,皱着眉头,手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿,他把朝向他的窗都打开了,但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声,他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会,只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇,一手抓着一把大交椅,身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼,不时地听到有人在说:“这……这是老师吗?怎么会有这么个性的老师?”然后呢,我们英语就坐在大交椅上,吹着大风扇,喝着柠檬茶,心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处,他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟,好,”他说,“你们6班就是鬼灵精,一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来,那7班,我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这好,不用考汕头卷。汕头那些家伙出卷呢,就是四个人关在一间房子里,整天坐着椅子转啊转啊,就转出一张试卷来,专考些难题怪题,正经的又不考。汕头的试卷啊,哎哟哟,那真是害死万万生灵哦。”

学生自然是很尊重他的,其他的老师也是,他说什么就是什么,就连我们那让人不寒而栗的杨校也得让他三分。他跟好的学生没啥话谈,倒是跟那些调皮捣蛋的很谈得来。哪一班谁谁谁捣蛋了,他就找谁谁谁去喝茶聊天。他总是站在理字上,也不得不尊重他。有一次录音机坏了,他气得半死,说公物怎能破坏,东西怎能不打紧,越说越气,最后竟然把书一摔,说:“不上课了,学什么书,学做人好了。”后来有一次他看见粉笔头乱七八糟地散在地上,也气得摔书不上课。

我们英语人有个性,课也有个性。课前唱歌的时候,他竟点起歌来,说:“停停停,别唱这个,唱刘欢的什么‘心不在’,什么‘重头再来’那首来我听。”我们不会唱,他皱了眉说:“哎哟,那么好听的歌怎么不会呢?”接着指着指挥员说:“你,下课去7班学唱这首歌,以后我来了你们就唱给我听。”过后有的老师听说了这事,禁不住大笑起来说:“哈……王老师就是这样,真性情!”

到了复习期间,他大步迈上讲台,把手在半空中一挥,喊道:“来,我们的口号是……”全班一起大喊:“用声音唤起记忆!”感觉,就像在上幸运52一样。

初三即将结束时,他不经意间说起:“老师扮小丑,拼命逗笑,只为了让你们记得更深。”我当时低着头,红了眼圈。在每一次笑声的背后,我们学到了很多,而老师付出了很多很多。他说:“我自认对得起我的教学,你们想想,老师什么时候在课堂上讲错一个字。”真的没有,他从来没有口误,从没说错过一个字,那,精神该多么集中啊。

上学期,有一次我早早地回家,遇见了他,没变,我们英语还是穿得整整齐齐,头发丝毫不乱,着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车。我惊喜地大叫:“啊,老师!”他一忽而过,也来不及听见。

后来,我梦到了他,也没变,还是在上那么个性的课堂,我还是他的学生,幸福地听着“哎哟哟,这是个黑面鬼,得注意咯……学英语呢,就得这样,我们不但要有激情,还要有表情……来,我们的口号是……”

[关于我的初三英语老师的作文

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篇4:中考英语满分

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1 the best season 最好的季节

Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little leagues.

During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the village. I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the city. I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the villagers.

夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节,通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。

在夏天,我喜欢经常去海滩,因为它离我家很近。我通常在暑假去城市放松。我觉得熟悉的村民的平静让我很舒服。

2 Summer Camp 夏令营

July 20,20xx

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天,我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天,所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的,我们玩得很开心。然后第二天,我们去了山区。有许多树木,我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天,我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。

3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假

I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new movement.

今年暑假过得非常有意义

我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义,每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA,我非常热爱这项运动,它让我学会了乐观的面对生活,还纠正了我的不良体形,对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助,我爱YOGA,希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假

4 visitng 参观

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

女士们,先生们,

欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。

在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei,万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。

我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。

谢谢你们!

5 My Summer Vacation 我的暑假

This is my summer vacation. I intend to finish the operation. Then, take a look at Chinas famous novel. Look at some day. Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch TV. Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other sports. But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be forgotten. must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?

这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后,看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然,也要玩电脑,看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步,做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体!但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务!我的假期安排呢?好的东西?给点建议?

6 I enjoy the rain 我喜欢下雨

That was a morning in the early of June. I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and ponds. The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern horizon. "There must be a heavy rain soon." I spoke to myself.

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without wind. I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something tohappen. Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders following. Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind blew. soon the grass flattened under the wind and the rain. With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became bright. I took several deep breathes. I felt comfortable.

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was over. The air was so fresh and the sky was so clear. I felt like a new man myself.

那是6月初的一天早上,我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课,学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的,在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想:“要下大雨了。”

当我匆忙走进教室时,原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩,像黄昏。我感到气闷,而周围一切都很静,没有任何声音,没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动,像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后,我看到闪电撕开云层,听到随之而来的雷声。突然,大雨倾盆,风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状,天空开始放亮,我深吸了几口气,舒服多了。

大雨下了三个小时,下课的时间停了,空气那么新鲜,天气那么晴朗,我感觉像换了一个人似的。

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篇5:高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信

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Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

To Jeff

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封

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篇6:初三英语作文Fathersmodel

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A winebibber,when he has wine addiction,that he is going to the bar and drink some cups of wine.

He will goes to the bar every day before he going to work.Its a snowy morning.He goes to bar before he going to work again.He fells there is somebody follows him on his way to his office.He turns his head and he see his son is treading his footmark.His son is following him.

His son is excited and says:"Dad! Look,I am treading your footmark!"The man is very surprise that his son shocks to him. He thinks:"I will go to the bar, but my son is following me!"

After that day,the man gives up the wine.He doesnt go the bar any more.

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篇7:初三年级关于世界环境日的英语作文

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On June 5, 1972, the United Nations was held in Stockholm the United Nations conference on the human environment, the meeting adopted the declaration of the human environment, and puts forward 5 June every year would be a "world environment day". In October the same year, the 27th United Nations general assembly adopted a resolution to accept the proposal. World environment day, is the United Nations to promote global environmental awareness, improve government attention to environmental problems and take action to one of the major media.

The United Nations system and governments, every year on June 5 this day to carry out various activities to promote and stress the importance of protect and improve the human environment.

The United Nations environment programme (unep) announced at the beginning of each year the world environment day theme, and published in the annual world environment day annual report on environmental conditions. During this period of Chinas state environmental protection administration issued the environment bulletin.

From June 5, 1985, China began to commemorate the world environment day activities, with "youth population, environment" as the theme. Since then, every year on June 5, the country hold commemorative activities. 1993 Beijing was elected to the celebration of the city, its theme is "to break the cycle of poverty and environment". Released in April 2014 revision of the environmental protection law of the Peoples Republic of China, article 12: for environment day on 5 June every year.

1972年6月5日联合国在瑞典首都斯德哥尔摩召开了联合国人类环境会议,会议通过了《人类环境宣言》,并提出将每年的6月5日定为“世界环境日”。同年10月,第27届联合国大会通过决议接受了该建议。世界环境日,是联合国促进全球环境意识、提高政府对环境问题的注意并采取行动的主要媒介之一。

联合国系统和各国政府,每年都在6月5日的这一天开展各项活动来宣传与强调保护和改善人类环境的重要性。

联合国环境规划署在每年的年初公布当年的世界环境日主题,并在每年的世界环境日发表环境状况的年度报告书。中国国家环保总局在这期间发布中国环境状况公报。

中国从1985年6月5日开始举办纪念世界环境日的活动,以“青年人口,环境”为主题 。自此之后,每年的6月5日全国各地都要举办纪念活动。1993年北京被选为举办庆祝活动的城市,其主题是“打破贫穷与环境的怪圈”。2014年4月修订公布的《中华人民共和国环境保护法》第十二条:每年6月5日为环境日。

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篇8:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇9:初中英语满分

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Dear Ling Feng,

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You

have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I

caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about

the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.

With your help, I didnt fall behind others. Since then, we have become very

close friends. I think Ill try to help others just like you.

Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, Ill always

stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.

Yours,

Liu Yan

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篇10:历年高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass

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April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

4月12日是难忘的,因为我们班有一个有意义的经验。早上,我们骑自行车到郊区植树,一路说笑着。货到后,我们立即开始工作。一些人挖洞。一些人携带和种植小树。另一些人浇水。完成工作后,我们把董事会提醒人们保护树木。离开前我们拍了一些照片来记录我们的绿色行动。看到的树,我们都有成就感。我们觉得这是我们的责任保护和美化我们的环境。

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篇11:初中英语满分

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I am always shy and afraid of standing in front of a lot of people, so I

dont have many friends. In my heart, I desire to make a lot of friends and hang

out with them. I know my problem. I am not confident and if I show my humor,

surely other students will notice me. So I decide to join activities. I take

part in a drama group. It can not only enhance my confidence, but also helps me

to make friends. Soon I become confident and more students know me. Whats more,

many students ask me to join their group. I conquer my fear and grow up.

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篇12:初三年级英语作文:新学期计划

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Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.

firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didnt know it clearly.

secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.

Finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.

Thats what i plant to do in a new term.

新的学期马上就要到来了,因此,我应该给自己制定一个学习计划来提升自己.

首先,我决定做好的家庭作业比以前更仔细点,和关注那些我不是很了解的知识,其次,我应该扩大阅读面并,并把理论和实践联合在一起.最后,我应该学会适应,变得更积极更乐于助人.

这就是我新的学期计划.

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篇13:历年高考满分英语

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Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,

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篇14:关于初三英语满分作文:voluntarylabour

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你于五一前夕 4 月 28 日上午九点钟,与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加一次公益劳动( voluntary labour ),全班分成了三组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。

劳动任务安排

参考词汇: litter 果皮纸屑等废弃物

注意:

1. 短文必须写出提示及表格所列出的全部内容。

2. 词数 100 左右。

3. 日记的格式已为你写好。

参考范文:

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday, just before May Day. My classmates and I went to the park nearby, we didnt go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.

We got there at 9:00. We were divided into three groups and then began working. The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the Childrens Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. We worked very hard. At 11:00, when all the work was finished up, all my classmates met again. Although everyone was in a sweat, yet we felt happy because we had done good job.

[关于初三英语满分作文:voluntary labour

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篇15:高考满分英语作文:是否该重建圆明园

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【例文】

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860. Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.

Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.

Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.

【译文】

应该重建圆明园?

圆明园,“所有园林花园”,被烧毁成废墟1860年下降。最近我的同学们进行了关于是否应该重建与否的讨论。

重建的花园支持者说,只有这样,我们才能看到花园的,它反映了中国文明的原始景象。这将是一个供游客感兴趣的地方。如果部分重建,它将提供一个比较和帮助我们记住历史。

谁不同意那些认为较合理的保持这样的花园。该遗址将提醒过我们。我们决不能忘记历史。如故宫博物院,颐和园等其他建筑物也可以是中华文化的象征,所以没有必要重建此园。有些人还担心会破坏环境建设的推移,当在此区。

个人而言,这是明智的重建圆明园,这将增加美丽的城市。更重要的是,新的景区,无疑会促进地方经济发展。

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篇16:初三中考满分作文600字

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昨天中午吃过午饭,爸爸妈妈在客厅看电视,我觉得天气很热所以就想洗个澡,我打开太阳能放了一些水然后和妈妈说了一声就自己走到洗手间去洗澡。我脱掉衣服坐进了浴缸,水不冷不热刚刚好,啊真的好舒服。我正在享受着忽然觉得鼻子里像有东西留下来,滴答,掉到了水里。

我低头一看原来是血,我急忙喊妈妈;妈妈我流鼻血了。‘妈妈听到我的喊声飞快地跑到我身边,妈妈一边用药棉塞住我的鼻孔一边安慰我说;宝贝别怕没事。爸爸把我抱到床上给我擦干身上的水,然后给我穿好衣服,妈妈和我说;紫鉴流鼻血虽然不是大问题,但是最近你流了很多次,还是带你到医院去验个血,如果没问题就放心了,我一听验血两个字立刻吓得脸都白了,

我想想用针扎手都害怕。我说;妈妈爸爸我可以不去吗,妈妈说你学过扁鹊见蔡桓公这篇课文难道你要学蔡桓公吗,听了妈妈的话我恍然大悟,我想妈妈说的有道理,想到这里我和妈妈说; 好吧妈妈我去医院验血,‘说完我和爸爸妈妈就来到了市二院,这里看病的人很多,爸爸让医生开了验血的单子然后交了钱,随后妈妈就带我到了化验室门口,

我的心七上八下的,马上要给我抽学了,妈妈在我身边,我咬紧牙关勇敢的伸出手,妈妈鼓励我说;孩子我们是男子汉一定要勇敢。‘妈妈的话给了我力量,医生用针扎了我的手指一下,虽然很疼但是我没有哭,医生捏着我的手指大概挤了四滴血。医生说;好了,小朋友真勇敢。‘爸爸妈妈也给我竖起大拇指说;真棒。‘我的心里美滋滋的。

我和爸爸妈妈等待着化验结果,过了半小时结果出来了,什么问题也没有,医生说因为秋天天气干燥,让我回家多吃些水果就好了。总算是有惊无险,通过这件事我变得勇敢了。

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篇17:初中生活中考满分我的初三生活

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"总是等到睡觉前,才知道功课只做了一点点,总是等到考试以后,才知道该念的书还没有念,老师说过一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴"一句熟悉的歌词,一首轻快的语调,唱出了我们模模糊糊的童年。

阳 春三月春燕衔泥,炎夏六月荷花满塘,金秋九月蟋蟀歌唱,严冬十月腊梅飘香。步入初三的我,风风雨雨的走过了十五个春秋,回头望望,那一直期盼的成功早已消 失的不见踪影,忙忙碌碌的学习生涯,始终望不到尽头,一天到晚嘴上念叨的"减负,减负"让我们

学会了成长,有多少学生仰天长叹道:减负,减负,越减越 "富"!

初三,青春朝气蓬勃的起点。初三,那"色香味俱全"的生活,忙碌而又充实。现在的我们,学会承受了吧!面对一堆一堆的试卷与习 题,面对老师念念叨叨的中考,痛苦后的我们仍然埋头苦学。青春年少的天空,一半深沉一半绚丽。阳光从树叶的缝隙中倾斜下来,燥热而又冰冷的空气,让我怀疑 现在是什么季节?周围那些似曾相识的人们,来,匆匆;去,匆匆。

百足之虫,死而不僵。

初三的清晨,刺耳的闹钟划破了天 际,心不甘情不愿的睁开朦胧的睡眼,和周公相约在下一个梦里。走进忙碌的生活模式里,初三的生活,忙碌却收获着意外的果实。初三,奏起紧张的乐曲,深呼 气,一二,绽放一个灿烂如晨曦般的微笑,鸟儿靠翅膀飞翔,我们靠自己成长。90后的孩子,伪装得太深,掩盖得太强,我们要用行动去诠释90后,那不是伪装 得不受伤,而是真正发自内心的坚强!

初三的青春,似一首诗,微笑地读它,拾取着片片诗情,积攒着点点诗意。初三,忙碌而充实,用心读头顶的那片蓝天,将涌动的情感放飞蓝天。前方的路还很长,别让脚步停留在现在,做挥翅膀的女孩,告别悲伤。

初三的青春,已跃跃欲试,怀揣梦想,幸福一定等在我们必经的路口。

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篇18:初三年级英语作文:My Dream School

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I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn. We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our good friends. The students are polite and friendly. We all know how to keep our school clean and tidy. There is no litter around the campus.

I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.

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篇19:初三缓解压力英语作文

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Now, the students learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life.

The biggest pleasure in my spare time is to collect rubber. Those strange and eccentric, imitate characters, animal images and daily necessities like rubber to collect a small jar, every time I look up will be an endless enjoyment. Those lively and lovely animals, such as rubber, lifelike daily necessities, erasers, and some funny and funny rubber, can relieve the pressure and annoyance of my learning and life. Whenever I collect the eraser, their lovely and genuine smile intoxicated me, as if I felt that I was one of them. I could play with them freely.

Im the only child at home. My mom and dad are busy, and I dont have time to play with me, so my best partner is the rubber. There are no secrets and lies between us. We take care and comfort each other. We are the best friends.

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篇20:高考满分英语作文春节

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The Spring Festival comes after New Years Day.Its usually in January or February.Its the Chinese New Years Day.The Spring Festival is the biggest festival in China.All of the Chinese like this festival.When it comes,people are busy.They usually do some cleaning,go to the stores to buy some new clothes and a lot of meat,vegetables and fruit.On the eve of the festival,everyone in the family comes back home from other places.They get together and have a big supper .They eat dumplings,New Years cake and some other delicious food in their houses.Some people like New Years cake,but more people think dumplings are the most delicious food of all.Some families have a party.They sing,dance and have a good time.I like this festival very much because I can play with my friends and I can get "red envelopes".

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春节是在新年的第一天.通常是在一月或二月.这是中国新年的日子.春节是中国最大的节日.所有的中国人喜欢这个节日当它来了,人正忙着他们通常通过清洁、去商店去买些新的衣服和大量的肉类、蔬菜、水果节日的前夕,家里人是从其他地方回来的他们聚在一起吃一顿丰富的晚餐,他们吃饺子,新年的蛋糕和一些其它美味的食物自己的房屋有些人喜欢新年的蛋糕,但更多的人认为水饺是最好吃的食物.一些家庭举行一个聚会他们唱歌,跳舞,玩得很开心的我喜欢这个节日得并不多,因为我可以玩我的朋友和我还能得到“红包”.

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