高中英语作文：如何选择朋友HowtochooseFriends（合集20篇）

my  winter  holiday  pian

the winter holiday  ia  corning.  i’m  going  to  beijing  next  week.  i  will  go  there  by  piane.  my  perents  are  going  there  with  me.  we  are  going  to  take  a  trip  and  visit  my  aunt.  i  think  we  will  be  happy. 我的寒假计划

我下周要去北京。我将乘飞机去那里。我的父母和我去那里。我们打算去旅行，去看望我的姨妈。我想我们会幸福的。

In China, people treat the family as a very important union, families get

together now and then, even the kids get married, they still treat their parents

in the first place. So the family means so much to everyone, family has great

influence on them. When the family gets on well, people can focus their mind to

work, they don’t need to worry about other issues. It is reported that the

people live in a harmonious environment are more easy to get succeed, which

reflects the importance of the family. While people who live in a unharmonious

family are easily distracted from work, because besides the work issues, they

also have family annoyance. So the family is very important, we should keep in

touch with family members often, even though we are busy, we should go home

often, never let the work occupancies you.

Li Yan,my best friend,is my classmate. She has big eyes. Her long hair is often plained.Sweet smile is often on her face,which makes her more lively.

LiNan is very clever.She is good at her school subjects. She has won the school scholarship twice,I always take her as my model in study. She tells me that we should make good use of time.

Li Yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others,Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help. But she doesn’t like others to praise her, because she thinks what she did is ordinary.

I feel proud to have such a friend.

I have two good friends. Theyre Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. Hes 15.

Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. Hes 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. Hes 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton.

Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.

我在今夜失眠了，随着一只脚跨出高三，两条路摆在了我眼前，一条是选个热门的专业，将来成为腰缠万贯的大款；另一条是许多农村人都不愿走的路，一条在经济浪潮中快被淹没的路———农业。 我翻身下床，走到窗前，透过窗户可以看到许多星星正一闪一闪的。这么多的星星让我想起了大忙时田里那些烈日下收割稻子的乡邻们，想起了在稻田里时隐时现的爸爸、妈妈。土地看着我出生，伴着我成长，田埂上，菜地里都深深印下了我一串串的足迹。当邻人的小孩还在父母怀里哭闹时，我已蹒跚着跟母亲下地；当别人刚学会写“蔬菜”两字时，我已知道了怎样种青菜、萝卜和茄子。我和土地有着深厚的感情。可是，做了几十年农民的爸爸妈妈却不希望我的未来与土地、与农业有关。为什么？一句话“做农民苦，做个好农民更苦。”是呀，做为农民的儿子这我能不知道吗？烈日下，妈妈常为那几棵芝麻而不停地舞动锄头；暴雨中，爸爸要为那几块秧苗而带着铁锹不住地巡视。每次看到他们如此辛劳，终了还要为一年的生计而苦恼，我的心就痛。他们付出了那么多，回报却很少，我的心在悲。

爸爸妈妈多么希望我能找个好工作，轻轻松松地赚上大笔大笔的钱，能像地里的芝麻开花一样节节高升。我也曾这么想过，可每到这时，总有一股异潮在胸中翻滚，脑中总会浮现土地、庄稼和面朝黄土背朝天的叔叔、婶婶们。 我推开窗户，一阵凉风拂过脸颊，星星更加明亮了。也许消息闭塞的爸爸妈妈还不知道随着中国的入世，农业将向世界开放，外国的质优价廉的大米、小麦可能会将他们最后喘气的那点空隙堵死。我怎么能忍心看着疼我、爱我的乡邻牵着黄牛、扛着锄头提着锹去与外国人的卡车、联合收割机斗呢？

落后的生产工具、陈旧的思想都制约着中国的基础———农业的发展。它的提高和创新需要一批富有科学知识的青年投身进去，延续了千年的农业机体需要有新的血液，也许我正合适。星星仍然在闪，仿佛在向我招手。我已有了明确的选择，明天我将为之而奋斗，这是身为农民子弟的责任，夜深了，我终于可以安然入睡了。

[高中作文这是我的选择

Each of us has a best friend. My best friend, she cant talk. Of course, in school, my friends are inseparable from me. But, in my opinion, the best friend has something on his mind or a secret to tell him/her that maybe he/she will be annoyed and will reveal your secret to others.

My friend, she never will. Whether or not something unusual happens every day, Ill tell her what Ive learned all day. Talking to her is the happiest thing for me. She gave me an open mind. I can talk to her about the harvest, discontent and excitement of the day. I am convinced that she is the best listener in the world.

During the week, I had to write a lot of hand copies, only one night. I told her about it because I was afraid it was too late.

She makes me understand myself. Her heart was created by my joys and sorrows. Every drop of my growth she would remember.

Who is she? Not my classmate, not my mother. A silent friend - a diary.

Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match

is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens

of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only

can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking

part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that

it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs

that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we

must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as

we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking

forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

HOW TO KEEP HEALTHY

As a middle school student,keeping healthy is very important.If we dont

pay attention to keep healthy,we cant study well.But most of the students dont

know how to do it.Do you know the ways to keep healthy?Now,let me give you some

advice.

Firstly,we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruits instead of eating

the food with fats and sugar.By this we wont be fat.We should also drink less

alcohol and drinks.And we shouldnt smoke.Secondly,we ought to have a goog

living habit.Getting up early and going to bed early can help us keep

healthy.Besides this,we can take regular exercise to have a healthy

body.Thirdly,we shouldnt be too tired.Its bad for our health.

All in all,we should pay more attention to keep healthy.Dont wait any

more!Lets start now!

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如何保持健康

作为一名中学生，保持健康是非常重要的。如果我们不注意保持身体健康，我们不能好好学习。但是大多数的学生不知道如何来做它。你知道如何保持健康?现在，让我给你一些建议。

首先，我们应该吃更多的新鲜蔬菜和水果代替的食用脂肪和糖的食物。我们不会是肥胖的。我们应该也少喝酒和饮料。我们不应该吸烟。其次，我们应该有一个键康的生活习惯。早起早睡可以帮助我们保持健康。除此之外，我们可以采取定期锻炼有一个健康的身体。第三，我们应该不会太累。它对我们的健康有害。

总的来说，我们应该多注意保持身体健康，不要再等待了!让我们现在开始!

I have a friend.Her name is Nancy.She is from China.She is of medium biuld with long straight hair.She is very beautiful.My name is Tom.I also from China.China is a beautiful counthy with long history.I am tall,and I have short straight hair.My friend is friendly to me.And I also friendly to her.Sometimes,I play with her.We help each other.We are best friend!

[我和我的朋友英语作文

虽然九月是每年新学期的开始，但对今年新升入高中的年轻朋友来说，你们要迎接的不仅仅是新学期，而是新学习，和以往的高中学习有所不同的学习；相应地，你们的高中生活也将和以往有些不一样。

最明显的变化应当是高中课程的变化。从今年的高一新生开始，高中课程加入了选修课、研究性学习、社区服务和社会实践等内容，这些以往闻所未闻的课程不仅进入了高中三年的学习内容，而且要计入学分，只有修满相应学分，才能作为合格高中生毕业。

高考曾是教改的指挥棒，如今新教改意识到了高考的强势存在，已主动出击，要担当高考的指挥棒。所以，随着教改的推进，高考的内容与方式肯定会作相应的、力度相当大的变革。

教改的初衷是让教育尽可能回到教育的本质上去，尊重人的天性，发展人的天赋，培养人的素质，提高人的能力。往大里说，是希望我们的教育能回答“钱学森之问”，在不远的将来能重新出现大师级的杰出人才；往小里说，是希望每一个接受过教育的人，都能拥有更好的综合素养、更强的生存和发展能力，在为社会有所贡献的同时，拥有幸福美满的人生。

所以，同学们在分析未来的学习环境和教育形势时，不要简单地认为跟着课表走就万事大吉了。要从自己的内心出发，热情地设想、规划自己在高中，以至将来上大学的学习生涯。

在高中三年，你不仅要学习语数外理化生政史地等必修课，学习种类不同的选修课，你至少还要参加一次研究性学习活动，在这种活动中体验科学的魅力、学习研究的方法、享受创造的快乐；你至少要在社区活动或社会实践中扮演好一个自己的角色，持续地投入其中，看看辛勤的付出给自己和他人带来了什么价值和变化；你至少应当把自己在这些活动和实践中的收获真实地总结出来，无论是课题论文、调查报告还是心得体会，《大学指南》杂志都十分欢迎，我们不欢迎的是你们已习之有年的说空话、抒虚情的应试作文。

在学习方法上，你不必死抠课本，因为需要你涉猎的知识将远远大于课本的界限。要想学得更多，眼界更开阔，灵活运用知识的本领更强，最好的方法不外乎广泛阅读。有人说，补习增你几分，阅读惠你一生。事实不仅如此，有位高考时英语接近满分的同学介绍自己的学习经验，说老师讲解英语语法时，他总是看自己的英文小说，他答题从来只凭语感——英语对于他，就像第二母语一样，已经建立起语感，还怕考不好吗？

从这个九月开始，开始你愉快而又富有创意的高中生活吧！

By the light of the setting sun, without any word, Tom and I were sitting by the lake that shone like glass. Because our hearts filled with sadness, the birds seemed not to want to sing.

The last three years have seen the deep friendship between Tom and me. Thinking about the days when we studied and grew up together, we couldnt help hugging.

At first, I got to know Tom through playing basketball. He was fond of basketball, which left an impression on me. Unluckily, I got injured in one basketball match, which made me want to give up playing basketball. Tom encouraged me not to give up my dream of becoming a famous basketball player. He taught me how to protect myself in games, so I gradually rebuilt confidence. Finally, friendship was built in our hearts deeply.

However, the three-year life at junior middle school was going to be at an end. Now, we must be apart. By the light of setting sun, sadness spread in our hearts. The thing which we could do is what we would like to do. I still keep the friendship as a treasure in my mind.

[我的一位好朋友英语作文

Today is New Years Eve morning， firecrackers sounding snap snap away. As long as you take a look at the outside， red firecrackers everywhere， come together to form a Red Sea. The family have their own homes going up in the beautiful， it seems like in the match. My family is no exception， sweeping， glass， cabinets， such as rubbing. Prepare the arrival of the New Year. 今天是除夕，上午，鞭炮声劈啪劈啪的响个不停。只要你向外面看一看，到处都是红红的鞭炮，汇成了一条红海。各家人都把自己家打扮的漂漂亮亮的，好像在比美似的。我家也不例外，扫地、擦玻璃、擦柜子等。准备新年的到来。 Afternoon， we posted in accordance with the custom of the Chinese New Year couplets， father and a good paste， and then said to me： "I paste you posted， I looked at the high level you say rich， said that if the lower rising good you "， I asked my father why? Dad said： "The plan is a lucky，" "Oh， I understand，" We posted on the Alliance are： evil Hongfu family happy is： wang gas people to come into everything. 下午，我们就按过年的习俗贴春联，爸爸和好浆糊，然后对我说：“我贴你看着高低我贴高了你就说‘发财’，如果低了就说‘高升’好吗”，我问爸爸为什么呢?爸爸说：“就是图个吉祥”，“噢我懂了”我们贴的上联是：家有宏福千般喜，下联是：人来 旺气万事成。 End paste New Year， we began dumplings. Good luck to Tim， we are still a dumpling in a bag of coins. Dinner， my folder， a Dumpling， one to eat， "cough，" the voice of a coin吃出for my whole family applauded， and say that I am lucky this year. After dumplings， we saw the Chinese New Year Festival， my favorite essay nd "yellow soybeans." Liu Qian first a one-dollar coins into the cup， then into the host egg rings. "Bean yellow" in a person to "take off clouds" that they "Li Xiangyun" really funny. No wonder people say： "Spring Festival Evening Show" is a cultural feast. 贴完春联，我们就开始包饺子。为了添吉祥，我们还在一个饺子里包了一个硬币。吃晚饭时，我夹了一个饺子，一吃 “咯”的一声，吃出一个硬币全家人都为我鼓掌，说我今年有福气。吃完饺子，我们又

我有一个好朋友叫陈阿公。他比我大四十一岁。他个子很高，黄黑的脸上有一双炯炯有神的眼睛，走起路来有时稳重如石，有时快步如飞。他对人总是笑眯眯的。虽然我长到九岁了才见过他三次，但是他真叫我难忘。

为什么叫他阿公呢?因为他是外婆的同事。据说他身怀绝技，武艺超群。外婆说我们的第一次见面，还是在我一岁半的时候，他有事来深圳，特地来我家看我。我们一见如故，一点也不觉得陌生。外婆讲，奇怪的是，小时候别人一抱我我就哭，可和阿公在一起，我就被他逗得哈哈大笑。他对外婆说：“这孩子智商高。要好好培养。”

第二次和阿公见面，是外婆六十岁那年，我正好四岁。我们到仙湖植物园的“天上人间”去玩，阿公背着我走出“八卦迷宫”，还在那里的小商店买了一把双剑给我玩。当时我可神气了，居然手提双剑向阿公求教……在草坪上，他一招一式地教。我一招一式地学……从此，我幼小的心灵萌发了学武的兴趣。我学跆拳道就是从那以后开始的。后来我取得了跆拳道黑带一段证书。

第三次见面，是2013年的国庆节。趁着七天长假，我吵着要外公外婆带我去长沙旅游，其实我的心早就飞到阿公身边了。在长沙，阿公带我去岳麓山坐滑道。我们一前一后坐在滑板上从山顶滑到山坡……虽然山高坡陡，但我一点也不害怕。

我们还在池塘里钓鱼，那真是好玩呢!“阿公钓到大鱼了!”我高兴地叫了起来，又是拿网子给阿公网鱼，又是提桶装鱼，跑个不停……天快黑了，我还不想离开公园。我答应阿公，下次放假还会来这里玩。

七天假期结束了，当我坐上火车回深圳时，火车开动了，阿公还在站台上向我挥手。“阿公，你来呀!和我们一起坐火车呀!”我隔着玻璃窗喊着，直到火车飞快地行驶，无情地把我们分开……

虽然我和阿公只见过三次面，可我一闭上眼睛，阿公的形象就在我的脑海里浮现。有一次在梦里见到他，他还出题目考我呢——

一杯开水，正冒着热气，他递给我，我用小手扇扇凉，马上就喝，结果开水烫了舌头……

“不够智慧!”他批评我。

清晨我起来，哭着告诉外婆，阿公说我不够智慧……

“这是阿公开启你的智慧呢。只要你认真学习，你一定是个聪明的孩子。”外婆安慰我。我破涕为笑，原来是阿公在梦中教我，我高兴极了。

只要我一想起阿公，我们就会在梦中相见，听到他的声音，得到他对我的启迪。

[我的好朋友高中作文800字

I have a good friend,her name is Amy.She is an England girl.She is tall and she is twelve years old.She has brown hair.Her eyes are big and blue.Her face is round and her mouth is small,her nose is small,too.Her favourite color is blue.So she usually wears blue clothes.We are in the same grade,but in different classes.I m in Class Eleven and Amy is in Class One.

Many students in our class are good at English , but I am not.So my English is poor.But Amy English is vear good.She s Chinese very much,but her Chinese is not vear good.So we often help each other.

I love my friend!

I think Mid-Autumn Day is an old traditional festival in China。 Everybody likes it because its a family get-together。 You see it is called"Mid-Autumn Day"， so it often es in September or October。 It is on the 15th of the 8th of the lunar month。 Now， lets say something about this interesting festival。

Firstly， Id like to say something about the moon。 I like it very much because I want to be an astronaut in the future。 That day the moon is round， big， just like a beautiful plate hanging on the blue cloth。 When I see the moon， I will remember the ancient myths——the godess Chang Er and her little rabbit are playing under the tree which Wu Gang grows。 I will also think about Armstrongs first moonwalk。 I will also miss the friends in Tai-wan island， in Macao and Chinese people who are abroad。 I know they are missing us very much， too。

Secondly， I11 say something about the tradition on Mid-Autumn Day。 Look!Theres a big tree in a garden of a Chinese fami-ly。 All the family members are sitting around a big table under the tree in the open air。 They are eating the mooncakes and admiring the full moon in the sky。 That is a family reunion dinner。 The mooncakes and the moon represent the love from a family。 I think this is one of the most valuable things in the world。

Thirdly，it is a very good opportunity to make three wishes on Mid-Autumn Day。 My wishes are: the first， I， an astronaut in the future， would like to go to the moon one day， and stay with the sky and stars; the second， I hope every person in the world will stay with family， share love from the family forever; the third， I hope everybodys dream will e true。

That is the Mid-Autumn Day in my mind。 I will always re-member: East or West， home is best。

我认为中秋节是中国古老的传统节日。每个人都喜欢它，因为它是一个家庭聚会。你看它被称为“中秋节”，所以通常在九月或十月。这是在农历八月十五日。现在，让我们谈谈这个有趣的节日。

首先，我想谈谈月亮问题。我非常喜欢它，因为我希望将来成为一名宇航员。那天月亮是圆的，大的，就像一块美丽的盘子挂在蓝色的布上。我看到月亮，我会记得古老的神话 - 长女和她的小兔子正在吴刚生长的树下玩耍。我也会想到阿姆斯特朗的第一次月球漫步。我也会想念台湾的朋友们岛上，澳门和国外的中国人。我知道他们也非常想念我们。

其次，我要谈谈中秋节的传统。看!中国家庭的花园里有一棵大树。所有的家庭成员都坐在树下的一张大桌子旁边露天。他们正在吃月饼，欣赏天空中的满月。这是一个家庭聚会晚餐。月饼和月亮代表了一个家庭的爱。我认为这是世界上最有价值的东西之一。

第三，这是一个非常好的机会，在中秋节做出三个愿望。我的愿望是：第一，我，未来的宇航员，有一天想去月球，和天空和星星呆在一起; 第二，我希望世界上每个人都能和家人在一起，永远地与家人分享爱意; 第三，我希望每个人的梦想都是真的。

那是我心中的中秋节。我将永远重新成员：东方或西方，家是最好的。

抬头看着天上的星辰，在漆黑的夜空中，那些星星就像是一个个扑腾着亮色翅膀的小精灵，给这片天空描绘了一幅美丽的画卷。

一条条，一片片，零零散散的，拼凑出，一个不简单的世界。

远处的盏盏霓虹，显得格外耀眼，那绚烂的光线，闪烁在我金色的童年。

黑色泛滥的一片天，挑起了我的思线，追随着我的向往，在这个孤傲的夜间……

双眸直视星辰，远处奔来的秋风，吹散了我整齐的发帘，风中残带着花香，飘在了我的身旁……

冷清的残月光，落在了我的身上，有一阵秋风袭过，沙沙作响的叶，飘飘然的几缕发丝，轻抚着我的脸庞。

无助地依偎着大树，凝视的那巨大的黑色帷幕，黯然……神伤……

回想着刚才的一幕幕，突然有一种想哭的冲动，竭力制止着在眼眶打转的泪……

冰冷的泪已在手背绽开了朵朵晶花……

拂拭着泪痕，走在了这曾经与你漫步过的林间小道，脑海里追溯着和你有关的回忆……

偶然透过叶片，看见了两只相偎在一起的鸟儿，一种情感从心底油然而生，那……不就是我和你吗?不就是曾经形影不离，谈天论地的我们吗?

哦!不!我不愿相信这事实，你……怎么可以丢下我一人，自己跑了呢?不是说，生死与共的吗?

曾经如此孤傲的你，霎时间却了无声息……

你，真的丢下我了吗?

我想你，我无时无刻不在念着你……

你知道吗?我真的很想很想你……

我好牵挂你，朋友!你在天堂过的还好吗?你是否也有想起我，想起我们曾经的美好回忆!

People will make a lot of friends during their lifetime, the more friends

they make, the more capable they are. Some young people are proud of having many

friends, but only the true friends deserve us to care about. The person we make

must be positive to life. He will set the good example to you and help you to be

a better man. The bad friends will make you perverted, especially for the

teenagers, they can’t make the right judgement and are easy to follow others, so

the friends are very important part of their lives. Once they make the wrong

friends, they will do the bad thing. So we don’t need more friends, just the

right one.

Dear ___,

Christmas is coming,I think it is the largest festival in your

country,which just is as grand as chinas spring festival.At this nice

moment,let me say happy to you,and also say hello to all your family.hope you

and your family have the best festival.

yours,

sincerely ___

One day a young man was writing a letter to his girl friend who lived just a few miles away in a nearby town. Among other things, he was telling her how much he loved her and how wonderful he thought she was. The more he wrote the more poetic he became. Finally, he said that in order to be with her he would suffer the greatest difficulties, he would face the greatest dangers that anyone could imagine. In fact, to spend only one minute with her, he would climb the highest mountain in the world, he would swim across the widest river, he would enter the deepest forest and with his bare hands fight against the fiercest animals.

He finished the letter, signed his name, and then suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to mention something quite important. So, in a postscript below his name, he added: "By the way Ill be over to see you on Wednesday night -- if it doesnt rain."

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

In daily life we are often faced with choices.More often than not,we have

to make cardinal decisions indepentently.This moment is very important for

everyone to go through.

In order to make a decision that we will not regret,we should bear these

two principles in mind:thinking before acting,and never missing any

opportunities that arise.On one hand,we should have an apparent,objective

judgment about ourselves while maintaining a clear idea about the world around

us.On the other hand,we should also think about opportunity.Many people may not

quite agree with this and think that opportunity is so rare that only the

luckiest people come across it.However,opportunity is open to everyone and one

should make good use of it when confronted with it.One should take advantage of

it just like the proverb states:“Opportunities are only from the prepared

minds.”

So when one is faced with choices the next time,remember that using the

mind and taking advantage of good opportunities will pave the way to

success.