英语中考作文常见类型(精彩20篇)

题目：你的好朋友某某沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

范文：

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：1.感谢他的关注。 2.简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。3.谈谈你的感想。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅;开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数; 词数：120左右Dear David，

Im glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear David,

Im glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. Im also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second, ____. What makes things worse is that______.

4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ Because ______. Besides，______.

5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them, _____.

7.…已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中引发激烈的辩论。

…has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

8.…在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用, 它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题

…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious.

10、如今，人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。

Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...

11、“如同硬币的正反面，...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...

12、“近来，...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”

Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention

13、“随着...的快速增长，...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily 列举时可以用

First of all, 首先 secondly, 其次 beside, 另外 whats more, 另外last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的

First 首先 Second 第二 ,After that另外 ,Later还有 on last最后

如果让你创建一个节日，你会创建怎样一个节日，为什么要创建它，时间是什么时候，在那天要做些什么，在什么地方，哪些人......

If I am able to create a holiday, it would be the "Food and Fun Day". Think about it, with all the school homework and exams; it would be really nice to take a break from all the studies and just relax. Also I think everyone would enjoy the great food and lots of fun. Its just like a big party where everyone is invited. I would like the "Food and Fun Day" be set during the middle of the school year, where everyone can relax from their studies for a day. On that day, everyone will bring food and drinks to school and share what they brought with friends, students, and teachers. There will also be games and winners gets great prizes. Think about it, how great it would be to have a holiday like that!

1.偏题离题，背离主旨。

2.立意肤浅，选材陈旧。

3.拙于构思，叙事虚假。

4、表达平淡，毫无文采。

5、卷面潦草，不合规范。

这些“不应成为问题的问题”在阅卷中却普遍存在。

面对这些问题，解决它的策略是：

一、仔细审题 审明题意

审题一定要做到准确、全面，不偏不漏、不折不扣。首先明确提示中题眼是什么、关键词的含义、命题者基本意图。然后认真解析要求中的每一句话，每一个词，构思成熟后，最后再下笔。

二、立意要深 选材要新

立意要避浅俗、出新意、求深刻。选材要真实、新颖。这里着重强调的是真实，选择材料要真实、可信，写真人、叙真事、抒真情。另外如果写成记叙文叙述要具体、不空泛;如果写成议论文议论事理要结合。需要强调的是，中考作文坚决反对抄袭他人作品;反对简单模仿;反对宿构文章。

三、构思精巧 注重文采

构思是指文章思路，常言说：“车行有道路，文行有思路”，文章没思路等于车离轨而行，虽然可以前行，但随时有翻车的危险。“历览考文成与败，唯有思路才是真”，如果打不开文思，书读得再多也用不上，文章再多写也不能很好表达。尤其是话题作文，给了同学们更大的更宽的思维空间，文思将起很大的作用。注重文采是指用词贴切，句式灵活，善用对偶、排比、反问、设问等修辞手法，来提高文句的表现力。

四、卷面清爽 规范洁净

考场作文不同于平时作文，考试成绩必须通过卷面上体现。阅卷老师平均几十秒甚至十几秒阅读一份卷子，所以，卷面书写是影响得分的重要因素。往往有些内容表达不错的文章受卷面影响而容易打低分。具体体现在：字体不工整，标点不正确，修正不得法。卷面一定要清爽、规范、洁净。

中考满分作文：晒出我的梦想

时常有人问我，你的梦想是什么?今天我就晒出来与大家共享。

我的第一个梦想：考上理想的学校。

不要说我自私，从某种意义上讲，人都有点儿“自私”。我的短期目标就是考上我心仪已久的一中。平时，就是课间那比金子还难得的一点儿闲暇，我也常常闭上眼睛，想象自己在一中如画的校园里，度过我快乐而温馨的学生时代，这将为我考上理想的大学搭设一个很好的台阶。

我的第二个梦想：找一份儿好的工作。

大学毕业后的我步入社会，肩上的责任感倏地加重了。首先要照顾好我的家人，所以我需要一份儿好工作，让我有能力去做一个负责的好女儿、好姐姐。当然，这些工作必须是我喜爱的，能让我的人生过得更充实、更潇洒。

我的第三个梦想：买车买房给爸妈，让他们幸福。

每次逛街，妈妈常眯着眼睛，出神地看着路边那一幢幢漂亮的楼房，我知道，她真的很想尝尝住楼房的滋味儿;每次挤公共汽车，爸爸气喘吁吁，玩笑似地说：“要是自己有车就好喽!”但我很清楚，爸妈为了我们姐弟三人一直忙忙碌碌，我们姐弟三人使他们的梦想也只能是梦想。尽管他们从无怨言，但我要凭自己的努力给他们一个幸福愉快的晚年。

我的第四个梦想：我的村庄变成小康村。

村里人一年到头鼓捣那几亩地，很少有人出去闯一闯。所以，邻村都富起来了，我们村却依旧“光荣”。我要在不远的将来让自己有这样的实力，在村边建起自己的工厂，让我的村庄摇身变成金凤凰;我要让村里所有的人都飞到山外的大海上去搏击风浪。

我的最后一个梦想：我们的祖国成为世界第一强国。

我知道我的梦想还仅仅是“梦想”，但我会用自己的双手和大脑，去填充我梦想圆内的每一平方毫米的空间。

中考满分作文：小东西与大温暖

亲爱的“阿暖”，你还好吗

尤物虽小，却比天高。现实生活中，很多时候，有些看似平凡、极其普通的小东西，却能给我们带来温情和幸福。

很小的时候，爸爸妈妈外出打工，我成了个不折不扣的“留守儿童”。迫于无奈，我只好跟着姑妈一起生活。看着和我一般大的孩子每天都能在爸爸妈妈的身边快乐的玩耍、撒娇，我的心里就特别的难受。我不明白：同样的年龄，别人能享受的温暖和幸福，我为什么就不能呢?虽然每天我都特别地想念他们，可是他们始终没回来陪伴过我。按他们的话说，是为了挣钱养活我、培养我，使我今后生活得更幸福。话是说得好听，久而久之，我也信了他们，虽然我从来没责怪、也没怨恨过他们，但是总有一种不幸福、不快乐的感觉。

上了小学，星期天在家里，我除了看书和作业以外，没有一个人陪我说话和玩耍，总感觉到孤独和寂寞。每当这时，我只能让一个不会说话的“小伙伴”来陪伴我——那是爸爸妈妈在我刚出生时给我买的一个小洋娃。它就像我的妈妈，我每天都抱着它睡觉。也许他们当年外出打工时，心里曾经闪过一丝愧疚的念头，所以才留给我这么一个唯一的小东西。唉，管他们当时怎么想的呢!反正我后来视它如亲人，因为我把对爸爸妈妈无尽的思念乃至怨恨全部寄托在了它的身上。

由于我是个留守孩子，性格自然比较孤僻，因此在学校我几乎没有什么朋友。同学们不理睬我，我也懒得与他们交往，校园里经常可以看到我独来独往的身影。因为成绩不好，我常受有些同学的欺负，甚至还遭到过老师的白眼……总之，我的生活中充满着太多的不如意。每当不开心的时候，我就会抱着小洋娃静静地坐着，或者对它自言自语一番，把我要说的话全部告诉它。因为只有这样，我心中的郁闷和烦恼才会慢慢消融，顷刻间，我的心情依旧会灿烂如花。有时候，当我一个人在家时，那种孤独简直令我感到莫名的恐怖。这时，只要我的小洋娃在身边，我就不会害怕。我只要把它抱在怀里，向它倾诉我的所有小心思，它就会乖乖地充当我的忠实听众。说着说着，我俩就会相拥着进入甜美的梦乡。

俗话说：日久生情。在与小洋娃相处的日子里，我忘却了所有的孤独和寂寞，心存的只有快乐和幸福。每当生活闲暇时，我就会帮它梳妆打扮，给它涂上口红，戴上发夹，穿上我心爱的花外衣。它那奇特的装扮总是令我忍俊不禁，它使我变成了一个很阳光的“开心果”。有时，我还会帮它洗澡，梳头发，它总是默默地配合着，异常地乖顺。进初中时，我要到学校住宿了，我依依不舍地给它取了一个好听的名字——“阿暖”。因为它曾经给我带来了一段幸福的时光，让我的内心充满了温暖……

如今，我渐渐地长大了，也变得成熟了，再不需要小洋娃的陪伴了，但是我依旧留恋着它。虽然我每次回家时，看到小洋娃独自待在我小时候睡过的床头，孤单而憔悴，似乎没有以前漂亮了，但它在我心目中的地位没有丝毫的改变，它还是那个可以给我带来快乐、带来幸福、带来温暖的小阿暖。

进入初三后，我更少回家了，但我仍时时想起那个陪伴着我走过充满苦涩而又甜蜜童年的小伙伴。

哦，亲爱的“阿暖”，你还好吗?

2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月，因此现在是复习的关键时刻，在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题，以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“i think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, lin haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:being saved from the earthquake, two of linhao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

What is my dream job? I want to be a doctor. I think it’s great and interesting job. I can help many patient. It’s a hard job but I don’t mind it. I can find some happy in this job. Some people think doctors are work late. I don’t think so. If I feel happy, I can’t feel it’s very late.

If I am a doctor now, I like my job. I don’t regret it, I can say:” I found a good job!” I don’t think this job makes me tired, I think it makes me solidity and happy. I believe I am sure to succeed.

This is all of my dream job. I think I am sure to be a good doctor.

我的梦想工作是什么?我想成为一名医生。我认为这是伟大的和有趣的工作。我可以帮助很多病人。这是一份艰难的工作,但我不介意。我可以找到一些快乐的工作。有些人认为医生工作到很晚。我不这么认为。如果我感到快乐,我感觉不到很晚了。

如果我是医生,我喜欢我的工作。我不后悔,我能说:“我发现了一个很好的工作!“我不认为这项工作让我累了,我想这让我坚固和快乐。我相信我一定会成功。

这是我所有的梦想的工作。我想我肯定是一个好医生。

写作题目 Knowledge or Experience

Directions： You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.

1.some emphasize book knowledge

2.others stress practical experience

3.which one is more important? Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.

范文：

Which is more important in life， knowledge from the books you read， or personal experience you gain in reality? The answer may vary from person to person. The young， educated may emphasize the former， and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion， they are of the same importance.

Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary? How to prepare for your first child to come into the world? There is so much experience we need in careers， in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.

Experience， however， is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing， it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another， as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society， experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.

One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents， but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure， its secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world， or live long beyond one hundred years， but all of us can live many lives by reading books.

Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful， book knowledge makes one more learned.

[中考英语作文素材：知识和经验

08年浙江义乌中考英语作文范文：义乌作为一个国际商贸名城，吸引了越来越多的国内外游客来旅游购物。因此，建设一个绿色，文明的义乌显得尤为重要。请你以为题，写一篇短文。

参考词汇：environment duty,rubbish,plstic,pollution,plant

要求：（1）语句通顺，语意连贯，书写认真 （1）词数809左右。文章开头已给出，不计入词数

（3）可适当发挥（文中不能出现真实的人名和姓名）

As we know,Yiwu is an international city.________________________________________________________

参考中考英语作文范文：

How to build a greener city

As we know,Yiwu is an international city. It attracts more and more people to come and do business.So its our duty to build a beautiful green city. As students,we shouldnt throw rubbish anywhere on the ground or use too many plastic bags. Ask the factories not to put waste water into the river and wed better not go to school by car so that we can reduce the air pollution. Whats more, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city greener. Lets work hard for our city tohave a good environment.

如何建立一个更绿色的城市我们知道，义乌是一个国际城市。它吸引更多的人来这里做生意。所以建立一个美丽的绿色城市，我们的责任。作为学生，我们不应该把垃圾扔在地上的任何地方或使用太多的塑料袋。要求工厂不要把废水排入河中，我们最好不要坐汽车去学校，我们可以减少空气污染。更重要的是，我们应该种更多的树和花来绿化我们的城市。让我们努力工作，为我们的城市有一个良好的环境。

Recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.People accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.

最近，短信成为老少越来越流行了。人们接受沟通的便捷的方式甚至生活不能没有他们。

As to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,therere three points.First, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.By comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with them.Second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.Third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends.

至于为什么这么多人都在短消息的原因，在我看来，有三点。第一，它可以如果你想通知你的朋友通过发送短消息的一个或两个话节省时间。通过信件或电子邮件相比，短消息真是越快让别人接受你的手机总是与他们。第二，短信成本低于打电话。第三，人彼此都不太熟悉的可以聊天的短消息更容易，通过越来越多的人可以了解别人，成为朋友。

However,nothing that is perfect exists in the world.Short messages also have some disadvantages with them.Some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.Also,taking advantage of peoples ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.

然而，没有什么是完美的存在于这个世界上。短消息也有一些缺点的人。有些人欺骗或愚弄别人告诉他们，他们已经赢得了一些奖项，通过短信。同时，利用人们的无知，一些网站收取大量的费用，形成短消息。

Above all,short message is product of the hitech nowadays.It will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.

首先，短消息是如今的高科技产品。它将为我们很好，如果我们适当和充分利用它。

My birthday is on .i celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.every year,i hold a little birthday party and invite my friends over. we chat and play a lot of games together. the best part of it is that i love the birthday cake and the gifts i get from my parents and my friends. i also get some money on my birthday.i can buy what i want with the money. i have GREat fun on my birthdays. but on the other hand, i also understand that i am 1 year older after each birthday. and that means i should be more responsible for myself and i should also my self-aware. i should understand more things and be less ignorant!fianlly, i should be thankful for my parents,i know they have done their best in raising me up.

My birtiday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday. Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents, sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also, I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me. They do not go to buy one, but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

[中考英语作文:My birthday

Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I dont go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.

Dear parents，

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset，you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help，I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours，

Zhang hua

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

李白，字太白，号青莲居士，唐代伟大的浪漫主义诗人,后世尊为“诗仙”。其诗想象丰富，感情奔放，语言瑰丽活泼。《行路难》《闻王昌龄左迁龙标遥有此寄》《宣州谢朓楼饯别校书叔云》

杜甫，字子美，自称少陵野老，世称杜少陵，唐代伟大的现实主义诗人，后世尊为“诗圣”，曾任工部员外郎，后世称为"杜工部"。他忧国忧民，人格高尚，作品风格沉郁顿挫。代表作为“三吏”“三别”。《江南逢李龟年》《石壕吏》《茅屋为秋风所破歌》《春望》 《望岳》

白居易，字乐天，晚年又叫香山居士，唐代伟大的现实主义诗人。其诗反映人民疾苦，语言通俗易懂，作品收在《白氏长庆集》。《钱塘湖春行》《观刈麦》。

韩愈，字退之，世称韩昌黎，唐代文学家，唐宋八大家之首。积极提倡古文运动，恢复古代朴实文风。《马说》《左迁至蓝关示侄孙湘》《早春呈水部张十八员外》

柳宗元，字子厚，唐代文学家，唐宋八大家之一，和韩愈一起积极提倡古文运动。《小石潭记》

杜牧，字牧之，号樊川，晚唐诗人，与李商隐并称"小李杜"。《赤壁》《泊秦淮》

岑参，诗人，是写边塞诗的代表人物之一。《白雪歌送武判官归京》

李贺，字长吉。主要作品为《雁门太守行》等，其作品想象奇特，用词瑰丽，有浪漫主义色彩，风格独特。被称为李鬼才。

李煜，字重光，五代时南唐国主，世称李后主。《相见欢》

刘禹锡，字梦得，唐代文学家。《陋室铭》 《酬乐天扬州出逢席上见赠》《秋词》

范仲淹，字希文，北宋政治家、军事家、文学家，谥号“文正”，世称“范文正公”，著有《范文正公集》。《岳阳楼记》 《渔家傲》

欧阳修，字永叔，自号醉翁，晚年又号六一居士，北宋文学家，唐宋八大家之一。《醉翁亭记》

苏轼，字子瞻，号东坡居士，北宋文学家、书画家，唐宋八大家之一。一生屡遭贬谪，为人旷达乐观，在的作品中多有体现。《记承天寺夜游》《水调歌头》《江城子》等。

王安石，字介甫，晚号半山，北宋政治家、文学家，提倡变，著有《临川先生文集》等。《伤仲永》《登飞来峰》。

司马光，字君实，北宋政治家、史学家。政治上反对王安石变法。花了19年时间主持编写了编年体史书《资治通鉴》。

李清照，宋代女词人，号易安居士，在诗词方面均有成就。《武陵春》《如梦令》

陆游，字务观，号放翁，南宋著名爱国诗人，是我国诗人当中创作数量最多的一，。《十一月四日风雨大作》31.辛弃疾，字幼安，号稼轩，南宋著名爱国词人。《破阵子》《永遇乐•京口北固亭怀古》

唐宋八大家：唐代韩愈、柳宗元，宋代的欧阳修、苏洵、苏轼、苏辙、王安石和曾巩。

《水浒传》，又称《水浒》，是一部以北宋末年宋江起义为题材的长篇白话小说，是我国第一部歌颂农民起义的长篇章回体小说，表现了“官逼民反”的主题。作者施耐庵，元末明初人。《智取生辰纲》《鲁提辖拳打镇关西》

《三国演义》，是我国第一部长篇章回体小说，描写了三国时期魏、蜀、吴三个统治集团之间的斗争。作者罗贯中，元末明初小说家。《杨修之死》

蒲松龄，字留仙、剑臣，号柳泉居士，世称“聊斋先生”，清代文学家，代表作为文言短篇小说集《聊斋志异》。《山市》《狼》 。

《儒林外史》，是我国清代一部长篇讽刺小说，主要描写封建社会后期知识分子及官绅的活动和精神面貌。作者吴敬梓，清代小说家。《范进中举》

《红楼梦》，是我国古代小说的顶峰之作，小说以贾宝玉、林黛玉的爱情悲剧为线索，描写了以贾家为代表的四大家族的兴衰史，反映了封建社会晚期广阔的社会现实。曹雪芹，清代小说家 。《香菱学诗》

《西游记》，由明代小说家吴承恩编撰而成，是古典文学中最辉煌的神话作品，标志着浪漫主义文学的新高峰。此书描写的是孙悟空、猪八戒、沙和尚保护唐僧西天取经、历经九九八十一难的传奇历险故事。

《诗经》，是我国最早的一部诗歌总集，收录了从西周到春秋时期的诗歌305篇，也称“诗三百”，这些诗歌分为“风”“雅”“颂”三个部分。主要艺术手法是赋、比、兴。《关雎》《蒹葭》

《论语》，是记录孔子和他的弟子言行的一部书，共20篇，是儒家经典著作之一。由孔子的弟子及其再传弟子编撰而成。

《孟子》，此书是孟子及其门人弟子所作，儒家经典之一。孟子，名轲，字子舆，战国时人，我国古代伟大思想家、教育家，儒家代表人物，被尊为“亚圣”，和孔子合称“孔孟”。政治上主张“仁政”“王道”“民贵君轻”，社会思想上主张“性善论”。《得道多助，失道寡助》《生于忧患，死于安乐》《鱼我所欲也》

《墨子》，此书现在一般认为是墨子的弟子及其再传弟子对墨子言行的辑录。墨子，是春秋战国之际墨家学派的创始人。主张“兼爱”“非攻”“尚贤”“节用”。 《公输》

《庄子》，是庄周及其后学的著作集，为道家经典之一。庄周，战国时人，我国古代伟大的思想家、哲学家和文学家，道家代表人物，主张“天人合一”“清静无为”。

《左传》，我国第一部编年体史书，旧传为春秋时期左秋明所作，近人认为是战国时人所编，是一部史学名著和文学名著。《曹刿论战》

《战国策》，是一部国别体史书。主要记述了战国时期的纵横家的政治主张和策略，由西汉末年刘向根据战国史书整理而成。《唐雎不辱使命》《邹忌讽齐王纳谏》

《史记》，我国第一部纪传体通史，记载了从黄帝到汉武帝长达三千年的历史。被鲁迅称为“史家之绝唱，无韵之《离骚》”。

史书：①编年体：《左传》《资治通鉴》;②纪传体：《史记》及其他二十四史;③国别体：《战国策》《国语》。

曹操，字孟德，东汉末年政治家、军事家、诗人。他的诗以慷慨悲壮见称。《观沧海》《龟虽寿》。

陶渊明，又名潜，字元亮，别号五柳先生，东晋著名诗人，我国第一位田园诗人。《桃花源记》《归园田居》《饮酒》《五柳先生传》《》

《水经注》，作者郦道元，北魏地理学家、散文家。《水经》是古代一部记我国河流水道的书，郦道元为之作注。《三峡》

王维，字摩诘，曾官至尚书右丞，故世人称"王右丞"，晚年醉心佛学，被称为“诗佛”，作品多有空灵之感，擅长书画，苏轼赞之为“诗中有画，画中有诗”。《使至塞上》《《送元二使安西》《竹里馆》

初中生活马上就要结束了，你有什么感想呢?下面是语文迷为大家整理提供的毕业感想的作文，希望对你有帮助。

初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词语： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher。

正 my father and my mother are both teachers。

[中考英语作文写作常见的三个错误

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。

Dear Li Lei,

I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

★ 范文

Dear Tommy,

Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起，不熬夜;参加运动，强身健体。

要求：根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

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I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the following topic according to the given information.

题目：请根据下面的题目和提示信息写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Leaving School

1 Old school life

2 Teacher and schoolmate

3 Future plan

参考作文

I dont want to leave school, because my old school life was full of fun and I had many good friends in my old school.

我不想毕业，因为我的校园生活丰富多彩，我在学校有很多好朋友。

We used to share our lunch together. We used to play ball games together. We often did some surveys during the holiday. All of my teachers and schoolmates are very friendly and helpful. Now I have to leave school, I hope I will keep in touch with them and my new school life will be more enjoyable.

我们曾一起共享午餐，也曾一起做球类运动，我们还经常在假日里一起做调查。所有的老师和同学都很友善，并给予帮助。现在我即将毕业，我希望能和他们保持联系，也希望新的学校生活能更加有趣。

[有关中考英语作文范例:毕业离校