中考英语作文介绍家乡【最新20篇】

Good morning, my dear teachers, my dear professors. I am very glad to be here for your interview. My name is song yonghao, I am 22 years old .I come from luoyang, a very beautiful ancient city. my undergraduate period will be accomplished in changan university in July ,2004;and now, I am trying my best for obtaining a key to tongji university.

Generally speaking, I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. when I was sophomore, I found web design very interesting, so I learned it very hard . to weaver a homepage for myself, I stayed with my personal computer for half a month, and I am the first one in my class who own his homepage. Furthermore, I am a person with great perseverance. During the days preparing for the first examination, I insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like. And just owning to this, I could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.

Well, in my spare time, I like basketball, tennis and Chinese chess. Also English is my favorite. I often go to English corner to practice my oral English on every Thursday, and write compositions to improve my witting ability .but I know my English is not good enough, I will continue studying.

Ok, that is all, thank you for your attention.

Father, how great words; The father love, how beautiful melody. Dear dad, when busy, can you find such a festival of fathers day?

Today, is my dads first holiday, I carefully prepared a card, then tape posted a petal in the upper left corner. It with the aromatic, with my feelings, as the wind blows gently, the beautiful kind hearts float into dad.

The father loves the warmth in June and Thanksgiving. When I was in elaborate greeting card, write the handwriting which asm, I hand in trembling, my heart in the jump, the sincere words from time to time pull at my heart!

In fact, fathers love is gentle, father use it rough hands stroked my head; Dad with his warm words of comfort me; When he humorous language make me laugh... At that time, I really realized the father loves the also gentle.

Dad is the pillar of the family, when his broad shoulders to assume the burden of the family; When I found a piece of white silk on his head; When I find the wrinkles on his face. My heart is with sour.

Generation of letters, mostly because their children mother selfless and moved, so for the selfless love left countless love. And for the whole family outside the hustle and bustle of the father? Nothing left.

Here, I want to sing loudly fathers love is great!

我的家乡——可门，它坐落在海西的腹地——连江，是一个有山有海的乡村。

刚走进家乡的村口，就看见碧绿碧绿的山和平静的海面上飘着一座座的渔排，还有一大片一大片的海带区，我们的家座落在山和海之间。

夏天的时候妈妈带我去海边，海边的石头有三角形、有圆形、还有正方形，各种各样又大又小的石头，真奇特！我翻开了一个石头，一个小东西“呼”一下的跑到了另一块石头里，妈妈告诉我这是小螃蟹，我觉的小螃蟹很有趣，我想抓几只小螃蟹玩，可是狡猾的小螃蟹总是从我眼皮低下跑走。小螃蟹抓不到，但是我又看见了许多海螺和寄居蟹。

我们又来到了渔排，人们正在忙碌的喂鲍鱼，有时候水面上浮上了许多小鱼。

静静的夜晚，我听见了轻轻的风声，听见了海浪拍打在石头上，还听见了狗的叫声。

我的家乡真美丽，我爱我的家乡。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：

2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)

2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)

2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词，少15个词扣0.5分，610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

我的家乡——安徽省从古到今出过不少家喻户晓的名人，从古代的包公、朱元璋到现代的陶行知、hjt主席等，但其中我最了解的就是包公。

包公，真名叫包拯，字希仁。是北宋庐州合肥（现在的安徽省合肥市）人。他和范仲淹一样，一生做过许多官，小到县令大到枢密副使。不管是做什么官，他都认真处理政事，执法如山,铁面无私。所以在戏剧里，专门给他画了一个大黑脸。

在众多故事中唯有历史记载的有关包拯断案的只有一个，那就是包拯在天长县任任知县时遇到的一件事：有一个人，将一名农民告上了县衙，说那名农民杀了一头耕牛，并且把熟牛肉只留下了一点点给自己吃，其它的全部卖了。在当时宋朝的法律规定，民间私杀耕牛是犯法的，但是那个人没有想到这状一告就泄露了自己。原来在前一天那名农民就到县衙向包拯告状了，说有人把他家的牛的舌头割了，当时包拯就意识到这一定是某个仇家有意陷害这个，便让那名农民把牛杀了，来“引蛇出洞”。这件事形象的反映出了包拯的机智。

包拯不仅机智而且大公无私。包拯做官以后对家里人的要求也很严。他曾写过一则“家训”，刻在家中壁上：“后世子孙任，有犯脏滥者，不得放归本家;以殁之后，北吾子孙。”意思是说：谁要是做官犯了贪脏，不许回老家，死后不得葬进包家坟墓。不听者，不是我的子孙。

正因为包拯的机智勇敢和两袖清风这些优秀的品质，所以从古到今包拯一直被人们视为清官。

一锅浓香四溢的小鸡炖蘑菇，渗透着一股热情开放的东北气息。 我在饭桌前盯着今天佳肴的主角——小鸡炖蘑菇。越看越馋，就迫不及待地揭开了锅盖，一股浓香扑鼻而来，我情不自禁地闭上双眼，浓浓的鸡肉香加上蘑菇特有的清香，如同在大草原上驰骋般自由舒畅的感觉，也如同在农家玩耍，开心淳朴的感觉。

闻着、闻着不禁想看看这美味长什么样。我睁开双眼，擦亮瞳仁，端详着这碗小鸡炖蘑菇，汤黄澄澄的，上面漂着一层黄油，一块块黄得让人垂涎欲滴的鸡肉，深黄色的鸡肉与淡黄色的鸡汤结合成了一道人间美味！对了，还有清香四溢的蘑菇，蘑菇呈咖啡色，用小刀在顶部划了两个口子，这样美味、营养就更容易进去了。

说了这么多该尝尝了，我夹了一块蘑菇刚放进嘴里，顿时鲜得我舌头都差点掉了下来，咀嚼一下，就有很多汁流出来，那营养价值可高了，紧接着我又来了一块肉，那滋味更香、更鲜。

鸡汤把鸡肉的营养、鲜味以及蘑菇的爽滑、鲜露都综合了起来，另外还有小葱的醇香和生姜的辣味，让我胃口大增，喝了整整三大碗，我觉得这世界上只有小鸡炖蘑菇最合我的胃口了！

一锅小鸡炖蘑菇下肚，嘴里却还有鸡肉与蘑菇的余香。

I`m happy to share my opinion about hometown，shijiazhuang. Today,shijiazhuang is quite different from ten years ago.In the past,there was a little road in the city,and the road was very narrow . As there is the capital city of Hebei Province,the traffic was very heavy.But there have built a lot of roads in these years,and all of these are broad.

我`很高兴分享关于我的家乡我的意见，石家庄。今天，石家庄与十年前大不相同。在过去，在这座城市里有一点路，而路非常窄。这是河北省的省会城市，交通很拥挤。但也建立了很多在这些年的道路，这些都是广阔的。

There were only 3 parks in the city at ten years ago,and the air pollution was very serious.However,there are a great many of new parks were built.People often go to the nearest park do morning excise,and children also enjoy there.Of course,the air also improved a lot.

只有3的城市公园在十年前，和空气污染是非常严重的。然而，有许多新的公园修建。人们常去最近的公园做早操，孩子也喜欢那里。当然，空气也提高了很多。

Today`s shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city ,welcome to my hometown with your family.

今天的石家庄是一个美丽的`、现代化的城市，欢迎来到我的家乡和家人。

导语：微信可以说开启了给人与人之间的新时代，二维码扫描，视屏沟通，语音交流，微信上爆料，微信上公布最新的政策，最准的路况。这些方面可以说极大的方便了人们的生活。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Wechat is a new app that almost all the people use on their phone. you can video chat when every you want and its for free. also you can talk through that app. its very convience. You can sreach for people who live around you who are using the same app. but at the same time, people are addict to it. they can not live without it. and people are having less and less conversation face to face. even worse, some people got tricked in this app, and lost lots of money. so this app can be good or bad, depend which way you using it.

【参考译文】

微信是一个新的应用程序，几乎所有的人都使用他们的电话。你可以视频聊天时，你想要的，这是免费的。也可以通过该应用程序交谈。这是很方便的。你可以搜索生活在你身边的人谁使用相同的应用程序。但同时，人们也沉溺于此。他们不能没有它。人们面对面的交谈越来越少。更糟糕的是，有些人被骗了这个应用程序，并失去了很多钱。所以这个应用程序可以是好是坏，取决于你使用它的方式。

掌握好的学习方法非常重要，下面内容2019中考英语作文命题预测如何拿高分?，希望能给您带来一定帮助。

2019中考英语作文命题预测 如何拿高分?

随着中考逼近，考生都进入了紧张的备考状态，初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里，如何让考生更有针对性的复习，如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。

中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实，一般拿分没多大问题。如今，令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心，老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目，并作出预测，为同学们指点迷津。

首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。

2006年作文题目：

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。

2007年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。

2008年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)&rdquo,周记;。

2009年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”

2010年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m proud of myself”

2011年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m a member of… ”

我们可以发现，中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关，为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分，到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出，中考作文的写作思路通常为：what—why—how.评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时，最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分，另外，注意连接词的使用以得结构分，同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文，让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。

If you ask me what I want to do for my school， my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard， so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there， maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover， students can read under the trees. Of course， I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.

此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出为什么这么做，最后写出我会怎么做。

全文立意好，贴近实际，可行性强。从语法来看，没犯语法错误;从结构来看，用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看，文章多处用了从句，用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。

this is not only the city where I was born, but also the only place Ive never been able to leave. 5 years ago, I moved from here to another city to begin my college life. The day I left ## I felt as a fish out of water.

this is the only place where Ive walked past a schoolyard and pictured a future son or daughter of mine playing balls.

I love this city. She’s small and quiet. Every day I live here, I could have the safety feeling which I got when my mother held me in her arms.

I love this city. She is very beautiful and lovely. Everywhere you can see the flowers, grass and trees. The shops are full of all kinds of goods. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air.

I love this city. The climate here is very warm which is very suitable for people to do some outdoors activities.

I love this city. She is where I have lived for ____ years with my parents, my good friends, and my teachers who have supported me. She has almost all my memories.

I love the night of ##. People sit in the gardens of their houses or in the small restaurants, chatting, drinking and enjoying the delicious seafood which is abundant in our city.

I love the sunrise of ##. When I was still a little girl, my parents and I used to climb up the hill in the morning to see the sunrise. When the beautiful sun went up, the gentle breeze brought us the fragrance of the flowers, the golden sunshine made our hair shimmer, and my heart would be filled with hope and happiness!

Maybe someday I will have to leave this city, but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, its people, its trees and its sunrise. Yes, everything that it gave me could be given by other places, but my love won’t be changed, because it is my home town.

不但是我出生的城市，也是我无法离开的唯一地方，我的家乡。5年以前，我离开这里到另外一个城市开始我的大学生活。离开##的那天，我感觉自己像是一条离开了水的鱼儿。

当我走过一座校园，想象我未来的儿子或女儿能在这里玩耍。##，就是唯一一个让我有这种想法的地方。

[大学英语作文：我的家乡

My name is Liu Xianyang, a small student of Baiyun, reading class six in grade three.

I have a round face, big eyes, red mouth. I have a pair of big ears, and I hear it very clearly. My hands are long, my feet are big, and I run fast.

I like to blow the gourd, it is a national musical instrument, the sound of blowing out sounds good. I will blow the music of the happy water splashing Festival, the catch swing, the reed Shaw love.

I love to laugh, love sports, like to make friends with others, and everyone comes to make friends with me.

My hometown is a country known as "jujube township" town -- linze county. All say "landscape jiatianxia guilin, my home is not in guilin the wonderland is beautiful, but also has a small city of beauty. Town, the beauty of the static Shi green beauty, charming beauty, make each town residents of the mind is also beautiful.

To say small core of beauty, that they belong to the h and rokuen. There are more than thousand trees, trees, is a good place for summer!

Spring, the city is green, the leaves cui lust drops, h and rokuen, grass swinging with the breeze, the green grass, green leaves, all kinds of bright flowers together. Forsythia flower park blows the golden horn, square, various kite and baiyun mountain, everything is so quiet Shi.

People wear sandals in summer, h and rokuen step in waterways, music fountain, the children got into drill and adults were standing to the side, a smile the night in the square thick fragrance, barbecue flavor, mutton changing, town in summer is really hot!

Golden autumn, a town full of jujube aroma, h and rokuen jujube branches full of big, red jujube, it could make tea and can be used as a traditional Chinese medicine, passing pedestrians can resist the urge to take one. People in the street, selling red jujube mine, be happy.

Winter, although winter is so cold, but people is such a warm heart, a nice snow world, the groups of childrens play, added a few for city landscape for brilliance.

Not to have such a song? "Small story, full of joy and joy, if you come to town, much harvest", the beauty of the static Shi, charming beauty, unique beauty.

I love you -- -- hometown linze!

我的家乡是一个被祖国誉为“枣乡”的小城—临泽。都说“桂林山水甲天下”，我的家乡虽没有桂林那仙境般的美，但也别有一番小城美景。小城那静谥的美，绿色的美，迷人的美，使每个小城的居民心灵也美。

要说小城美的核心，那便属颐和绿苑了。那儿有千多棵树，绿树成荫，是避暑的好地方呢!

春天，小城是翠绿色的，树叶翠色欲滴，颐和绿苑里，小草随微风摆动，青的草，绿的叶，各色鲜艳的花聚拢而来。街心公园连翘花吹起金黄的小喇叭，广场里，千姿百态的风筝与白云戏耍，一切都是那么静谥。

盛夏，颐和绿苑里人们穿着凉鞋踏在水道里，音乐喷泉中，孩子们钻进钻出，站在一旁的大人个个露出笑容，广场上的夜市香味浓浓，烧烤味、羊肉串味，小城的夏天真是火辣辣啊!

金秋，小城充满了枣香味，颐和绿苑的枣树枝上挂满了又大又红的红枣，它可以泡茶，可以作中药，过路的行人都忍不住要尝一个。大街上，卖红枣的人们各各喜笑颜开。

隆冬，虽然冬天是那么的冷，可人们心中是那么暖和，雪的世界真好看，那一群群孩子的嬉戏，为小城景色增添了几争光彩。

不是有这样一首歌吗?“小城故事多，充满喜和乐，若是你到小城来，收获特别多”，静谥的美，迷人的美，独特的美。

我爱你——家乡临泽!

My Hometown

My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low GREen hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere.

But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.

Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.

I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.

我的家乡

我的家乡是个美丽的地方。它座落在一座不高的绿色山脚下，一条宽阔的河流边。有许多高耸的大楼和宽阔的街道。树木和花草随处可见。

但是它并不是一直如此。在旧社会，它是一个凄凉、肮脏的小镇。地主和商人住在几栋漂亮的房子里。劳动人民只能住在破旧、黑暗、不卫生的房子里或是狭窄、泥泞街道旁的茅屋里。几乎所有人都贫困，许多人没有工作。

[我的家乡中考英语作文

My name is __________ . I am from ______________ . There are _______________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He is a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She is also a busy woman. I have a older sister and a younger brother. My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in English. My brother is an elementary school student. He is 8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wish I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that is why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

Today I want to tell you something about my classmate. He is a boy of l7 years old. He is tall and strong. He likes reading books very much. He likes sports, such as skating and playing basketball. Sometimes when he if free, he enjoys listening to music. He is kind. I am not good at math and he often helps me with my math. I want to say :"Thank you so much ." I am quite happy that I have such a good friend.

我的家乡住在开封，那是闻名中外的七朝古都。有许多名胜古迹，禹王台、繁塔、象铁塔、延庆观等，最有名的古建筑还数龙亭。

今天我就给大家讲一下龙亭，传说龙亭是大宋朝皇帝赵匡胤登基的地方。已经经历了一千多年的风风雨雨，名扬天下，是开封的城市标志。每天都有很多人从世界各地来这里参观游览。龙亭大殿坐北朝南，坐落在高高的深红色基台上，雄伟高大。有许多台阶，上去一次要费很大劲，所以皇帝是骑马上去的，现在还有当年的马蹄印呢。站在龙亭大殿向前看，能看到开封市的全貌。

龙亭大门前有两个大湖，一个是杨家湖，一个是潘家湖。连接两个湖的是一座美丽的玉带桥，玉带桥上有雕刻精美的汉白玉栏杆，象彩虹横卧在波光潋滟的湖面上。

到了深秋季节，龙亭要举办一年一度的菊花花会，整个公园都成了菊花的海洋，只要你一进门就会陶醉在花香之中。

宋朝大画家张择端画的《清明上河图》，就是宋朝时龙亭大门口的这一条长长的大街，著名的开封市二师附小就在这条街上。

我爱龙亭，这个古老、美丽的龙亭。

美丽的抚顺我的家，我热爱我的家乡，更爱生我养我的这片土地。抚顺不之山清水秀旅游资源异常丰富，而且还是一座历史悠久的古城。一条浑河穿城而过，给抚顺增添了些许气势与灵动。

抚顺还是雷锋的第二故乡，雷锋纪念馆坐落抚顺西部，也是爱国主义教育基地之一。前来参观悼念的人是人山人海，雷锋高大的朔像前是人潮涌动，它是全国人民的骄傲，我作为抚顺人也感到骄傲和自豪。抚顺大伙房水库，它依山磅水，群山环抱，山峦起伏，郁郁葱葱。到处是一片美丽的自然景色。湖面碧波荡漾，游艇穿梭。就像一副美丽风景画展现在我的面前，我想，抚顺的明天会更美好。

一转眼，几年过去了，我的家乡变化可大了！瞧，整个城市就像一个大森林，街道上干干净净，没有一点灰尘，绿树成荫，鲜花盛开，空气中弥漫着清新的味道，我们生活在绿色的世界里。

除了环境美，现代的科学技术也先进，各种机器人会处理各种垃圾、污水、废气，变废为宝。

我看见家乡这么美，脑海里出现了十年前家乡的情景：虽然高楼林立，马路宽敞，但绿化很差，道路两旁树木很少，刮风时，尘土飞扬，五颜六色的塑料袋到处可见，唉，空气糟透了。

那时人们不重视环保，不爱护身边的环境。就说我们小区的小花园吧，小花园中心有一个小水池，刚修完时，池水清澈见底，里面养了许多金鱼，可人们观赏时总把塑料袋，瓜果皮，树枝扔在水里，时间一长，小水池的水浑浊不堪，人们路过都是捂着鼻子，鱼儿也都死了，这都是人们不爱护环境造成的。

人们终于认识到保护环境的重要。一点点地开始爱护环境，用行动建设家园，保护家园……

你看，如今我们在这么美好的环境里生活，多么幸福啊！我们要把保护环境进行到底，让家乡永远这么美丽。

我的家乡在天津，天津的海河边上有一个巨大的“摩天轮”也叫“天眼”，我去姥姥家时总是会看到它。

摩天轮很高，高的有几十层楼一样，如果你去坐那个摩天轮，转到最高处时，几乎能看到整个天津市市区；摩天轮很大，大的好像所有的楼都比不过一样，看海河时，第一眼看见的就是它，是海河上最引人注目的景物了。摩天轮很美观，清晨，摩天轮好像被披上了一层青纱，一眼看去，好像一耳光白色的大盘子，夜晚，摩天轮在灯光的照射下，显得更加美丽，更加动人。

在夏天，有许多船只从水上划过，摩天轮也伴随着水流转动着，我坐在车上，汽车驶过横跨海河的桥，无论车开的多快，摩天轮一向清晰可见，都好像车走的很慢。

在冬天，有许多人在海河上滑冰，我坐在摩天轮上，看着桥上驶过的汽车，看着正在滑冰的人，看着远处的高楼，真是快乐无比。

当我坐在摩天轮上时，会感觉天津一下子变小了。海河好像一条细细的、银色的丝带，闪着光，马路上的人们好像是小小的蚂蚁，那些高楼大厦都都好像是小房子，我的家乡天津真是太美丽了。

我最喜欢家乡的摩天轮了，我想等我长大后一定要建一个比摩天轮更大、更高的景物，让我们的家更加美丽、更加美好。

My hometown Nanchang is the Peoples Republic of China Jiangxi Provinces provincial capital, Chinese one of 35 super cities, has the essence or quintessence of things tianbao, the human outstanding earth deities since the ancient times fine reputation.It has more than 2200 years history and the deep cultural inside story, is the Peoples Republic of China State Council names the historical city.Not only Nanchang is the ecological environment exquisite the Chiangnan region of rivers and lakes, Communist Party of China it the colors raise place.Has the honor to receive many times the Peoples Republic of China"the nation cultured and civilized city", "the national health cityadvanced city", "the Chinese outstanding traveling city", "thenational two supports model city" the title.

Nanchang is situated at middle and lower reaches Yangtze River, westPoyang Lake the Nanan, is only 11 the provincial capital city whichwith southeast the Yangtze River delta, the Zhujiang Delta and Fujianthe economic zone adjoin west, receives opens, north-south north andsouth. Beijing nine, Zhejiang and Jiangxi provinces, the Anhui Jianxithree bar iron routes connect to this, is Beijing nine on-line theonly provincial capital city; 105th, 320, 316 federal highways gothrough vertically Nanchang; The Changbei international airport mayreach national each big city; The water transportation enters YangtzeRiver after Ganjiang River to leave East China Sea. Looked from theeconomic significance that, Nanchang has become international andeastern part the coastal developed area industry gradient shift idealarea.

爷爷：

您好！

收到您的来信我真高兴，看到您所述的城市真是美丽极了！有时间我真想去游玩一番。

爷爷您知道吗——盐城现在的变化也很大哦！让我为您介绍介绍吧！盐城城南新区新建了一座内港湖，那里白天人来人往，柳树挥动，鱼儿在水中嬉戏，仿佛人间天堂。夜间华灯四射，人们或三五成群，或两人结伴，或一人独步于内港湖边游戏散步，呼吸着清新的空气，欣赏着美丽的风景。

距内港湖东北方向还有一个风景如画的地方——盐渎公园。它是天然的氧吧，这里常年青枝绿叶，花团锦簇。这里有温馨的小桥流水，还有惊险刺激的石门踩浪；这里有神秘的湖中小岛，还有惊心动魄的喷泉瀑布，这里有充满童趣的游乐场，还有神奇惊险的五环桥、钢绳桥、石柱桥......这些游乐项目可以锻炼我们的平衡性、灵活度，培养我们遇到困难不退缩的精神。真的好好的感谢设计的叔叔阿姨，为我们提供了这们好的游乐场所。每天清晨还有许多爷爷奶奶、叔叔阿姨来这里跑步、跳舞、打太极，晨光下好一幅美丽的画卷！

爷爷等您这次回来，我一定带您好好游览美丽的盐城——我的家乡！

祝您身体健康！

孙子：夏伟杰