中考英语作文介绍家乡（优秀20篇）

dear eric,

it’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. now i’d like to tell you something about my hometown quanzhou.

the city stands on the west bank of the taiwan straight. it is a beautiful place for people to live in. its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built. more schools and hospitals are available for its people. however, there are still some problems, such as water, air and noise pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. in my opinion, quanzhou should develop its economy scientifically. i would also think that the growth of its housing construction should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

yours,

lihua

my secret dream

Everyone has his or her own secret dream. I wonder why I am gonna tell you my secret dream. No way! Heheh... I am gonna make up one secret dream for you. Any way, you will not copy everything I have written down. I am sure that you will get good ideas about writing it up.

When I was much younger, I had some secret dreams. One of mine was about becoming a super hero to save the world. Hehe. I hope it doesnt sound funny to you. Another secret dream of mine was about being the most handsome and intelligent man in the world.

Yeh, I know that sounds unrealistic. After all, that was a bubble dream only. I had a lot more secret dreams when I was a little boy. Some of them came true!

[中考英语优秀作文：我的秘密梦想

I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong

University, P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I

am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.

Education background

In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology

(NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During

the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among

the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester,In 1999, I

got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission

test.

At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5%

in the department. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is

given to talented and matured students only. This year, I won the Acer

Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the

ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university.

Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of

Excellent Graduation Thesis.

Research experience and academic activity

When a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to

narrow down my interest for my future research. With the tool of OpenGL and

Matlab, I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It

is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. I assumed and fulfilled

a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This

was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.

In retrospect, I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and

experience, which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research

interests include: Network Scheduling Problem, Heuristic Algorithm research

(especially in GA and Neural network), Supply chain network research, Hybrid

system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.

Hello,My name is Amy.Im 9 years old.I am a student in Yu Cai school.I am tall and thin.I have short hair and big eyes.I am good at singing and danging.I like reading books.I like my classmate,I like my teacher.

My Dream

I’m longing for a weekend. It’s happy and it’s free. This is my dream.

At this weekend, I don’t have to play the violin; I don’t have to draw pictures; Olympic Maths is far away from me; Handwriting doesn’t bother me.

I can play and I can sing; I can do everything interesting. No one can stop me.

Oh, what a happy weekend! But, it’s only my dream. I hope it will come true.

[初中英语我得梦想介绍作文

我的家乡在仙河镇，是一个美丽又快活的一个小镇。别看仙河镇很小，在地图上都看不见，但是它美丽极了。我们一起来看看仙河镇的美丽景色吧。

仙河镇的黄河入海口风光秀丽，十分迷人。而且，还有许许多多的小亭子呢。黄河入海口有二个观星台，很高很高，十分陡峭。

靖海园也十分美丽。进了门以后，你会看到路边的花坛里有许多又香又好看的牵牛花芬芳扑鼻。还有一个大大的鱼池，里面有好多好看的鱼儿呢，有红的，白的，花的，彩的等等等等。

仙河镇还有好多风景优美的地方呢！大家自己去发现吧！

My family has a rabbit, it is very cute.

It is fat, full of ten pounds heavy. It is snow and white body, far from look, like a large group of cotton lost to the ground. Its ears are long, longer than I use the ruler. It is compared with other rabbits, the most special place is the eyes, the other rabbit eyes are red, and it is black. Its body feels soft and slippery. Its tail is short, small, plush, like sticking a small pomp in the buttocks.

Put it in a cage, it sometimes dangling his sticks with a stick tossed, as if playing acrobatics; sometimes dangling sticks hit the cage, as if in a strange cage off it, to break the cage; Sometimes it will be lying motionless, as if to think about what mathematical problems like. Once it was released, the first thing it did was run around and then smell it here, as if it were looking for something delicious. If there is any sound, it will immediately erect ears, look around, as if to see if there is no danger.

Once, I came home from school to see it lying in the yard, four feet overturned, motionless. How did the little bunny? I hurried to the past, press it by his belly, did not respond, touched its front legs, still motionless, I dialed its hind legs, or no response. Well, the rabbit is dead, just when I want to be sad, it suddenly touched the nose, haha, it is installed in the original die!

You see, my familys little rabbit cute?

[介绍小兔子的英语作文

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表哥就要去美国留学了，这一去也许就是两三年，也许就是数十年。大姨说，不少中国孩子出国留学，学成后就留在那边工作，好多年都不回来。

望着大姨哭得红肿的眼睛，我们也跟着抹眼泪。表哥却一脸嘲讽之意。我知道他心里一定在笑我们儿女情长、婆婆妈妈。他心里满怀对未来的憧憬，恨不得立即飞到那所心仪的大学，哪里懂得家里人的担忧呀。

可是再担心，再依依不舍，表哥出国求学已是铁定之事。随着分别的日子越来越近，我的心越来越难过。我想起了许多表哥带我一起玩耍的往事，钓鱼、放风筝、游泳更想起表哥利用假期帮我补习功课的镜头，泪水禁不住直往下流。我得给表哥送份礼物，让他记住家乡，记住亲人。

送什么呢？钢笔、书、小钥匙扣这些都太俗气了。苦思冥想中，我突然想起曾经读过的一篇文章，说一个年轻人出国，他的母亲送了一捧家乡的泥土给他，希望他永远不要忘记故土。我茅塞顿开，立即行动

二

飞机终于升空，舷窗外的蓝天真美，那洁白的云朵好像就在身边游走似的，真想伸手去和它们握握手。

对了，刚才在机场，表弟送我一个精致的信封，说是送给我的礼物，并要我登机后才能看。这个小精灵，一脸的泪花，仿佛生离死别似的，他到底送的啥呀？

打开信封，一个小红布袋映入眼帘，这里面装着什么呢？对，还有一张信纸，只见上面写道：

亲爱的表哥：你就要出国了，我想送你一份礼物，思来想去，我决定送你家乡的一小捧黑土，希望你要永远记住故土，记住我们，早点学成回来。我还请班上的女同学在小布袋上绣了一只雄鸡，那是中国地图，地图上画圈的地方，就是我们的家乡了

解开小布袋，黑油油的泥土呈现在眼前，一股熟悉的味道钻入鼻孔，直入心扉。我不禁想起了故乡那片广袤的田野，想起了在那片土地上辛苦劳作的人们。我还想起了钱学森、钱三强、钱伟长等许多科学家的名字，当年，他们都曾胸怀理想出国，然后又怀着报效祖国的赤子之心回来的

泪水夺眶而出，故乡、亲人，可不就是培育我长大的一片沃土。我下定决心，不管飞得多远、多高，也要心系这片土地，回到她的怀抱。

[一捧家乡的泥土中考满分作文

一说到天津，人们很容易就联想到历史遗留给它的诸多西洋式建筑，联想到高耸入云的天津电视塔，联想到香喷喷的狗不理包子。和中国其他三个直辖市相比，天津虽然辖区有限，但自然和人文景观毫不逊色，特别是天津的民间艺术，具有浓郁的地方特色。

天津的民间工艺种类很多，年画、泥塑、风筝、篆刻、木雕、地毯、剪纸、编织等。其中以杨柳青年画、“泥人张”彩塑、“风筝魏”风筝及篆刻和木雕最负盛名。

杨柳青年画是人们过年时用来装饰环境，增加新春气氛，并从中得到精神安慰和寄托的民间年画。他的历史可以住追溯至明末崇祯到清代雍正年间。

杨柳青年画采用的是木板刻印和人工彩绘相结合的方法，所以杨柳青年画既有木刻独特的刀锋板味，又不失民族绘画的传统风格。一张年画的出世，要经过起稿、印刷、填色等。六、七道工序才能完成。杨柳青年画所表现的题材主要以人民群众所熟悉和喜闻乐见的戏曲、神话故事为内容的故事戏曲画，或以谐音取名以示吉祥。如《连年有余》、《金鱼满堂》等；或以社会生活和习俗为题材的“时事风俗画”如《渔归图》《同庆丰收年》《门神》等。其中《同庆丰收图》描写的农村麦收时节，打谷场上的一片繁忙景象，反映了终年辛勤的农民对丰收的期望。此外杨柳青年画中还有一类“风景画”，如《天津图》《北京风景图》等。《天津图》描写的是天津海口，全图气势磅礴，万顷洪波之中有两艘张帆海船破浪而行，有着无限的美感。

人们常说，没到过杨柳青就不能说到过天津，没见到杨柳青年画就等于没来过中国。由此可见，天津的民间工艺不仅丰富和美化了天津人民的生活，而且还为祖国争光。

This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating abanana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No sooner had I done thisthan I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone wouldstep on it and tumbleover. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumpedoffthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeingthis, father praised me and I felt very happy.

In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.

上学路上

今天早晨，爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上，吃着香蕉。吃完后，我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境，或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒，我必须把它拾起来。想到这些，我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车，跑回去拾起香蕉皮，并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些，爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境，更多地为他人着想。

Today, I see a super cute little rabbit, I heard just full moon!

Its ears are gray, high erected on the forehead. Its hair is gray and white, the back of a cluster of brown hair, it is particularly personality. Its mouth is three mouth, eat something to not sloppy. The most characteristic of the number of its eyes: the other rabbits have had "pink eye", and this rabbit is inlaid with two "black gem" it! This rabbit seems to have no sleep last night, long dark circles like , And it seems like a beautiful lady dressed in eye shadow looks very funny!

The rabbit is very gentle, and some shy, it put it out, it hides in a corner shy to graze; we put it around, it is panic, scared everywhere scurry; it grazing when the mouth fast To chew the leaves, "rabbit expert" item to Lin also learn the story of the rabbit to eat it!

We put some grass on the ground, it has been put in the rabbit nest, but it does not eat, was "rabbit expert" care into the.

The rabbit has been quietly watching us, and then in the nest in the spin, and finally the ass toward us!

This rabbit where the mother to go? Rabbit who even put it and bunny apart, the bunny really poor!

我的家乡石浦渔港景色美，夜间的景色更美。

夜暮降临了，天上布满了一闪一闪的小星星。月亮姑娘跑过来了，她给小星星讲嫦娥奔月的故事。小星星们静静地站着，眨着机灵的眼睛，听得多认真啊!

天空美，渔港更美。瞧，渔港周围都是一盏盏渔灯。红的、绿的、黄的、紫的，多种多样，叫人看得眼花缭乱。这些灯形状各异，千姿百态。有的像火红的五角星，有的像无瑕的翡翠，有的像开得正盛的鲜花……金碧辉煌。灯与灯手拉手，连成了一片。

海面上，一切都在大海妈妈的怀抱里静静地躺着，随着凉爽的海风，偶尔溅起一朵朵浪花，像龙王喷出的宝珠，晶莹透亮，奇异万分。渔港里，停泊着机帆船、货船、大轮船……每只船上都亮着灯，无数的灯光倒映在水中，把海水染得五颜六色，美丽异常。“嘟嘟—”船开了，像离弦的箭一般，飞驰在海面上。倒映在海面上的灯影，随波荡漾，有的像一条条飘动的红绸带，有的像一条条游动的小金龙。周围的灯，船上的灯，灯的倒影，再加上五颜六色的海面，形成一座奇丽的“水晶宫”。我仿佛看到了龙王在饮酒，和蚌姑一起唱歌跳舞，共享欢乐。

地上的灯光，天上的星光，天地之间好像连成一片，整个渔港好像成了金碧辉煌的世界。啊，渔港的夜景真美丽!

i am xxx. i was born in xx. i graduate from senior high school and major inenglish. i started learning english since i was XX years old. my parents have alot of american friends. that’s why i have no problem communicating withamericans or others by speaking english.

in my spare time, i like to do anything relating to english such aslistening to english songs, watching english movies or tv programs, or evenattending the activities held by some english clubs or institutes. i used to goapoad for a short- term english study. during that time, i learned a lot ofdaily life english and saw a lot of different things.

i think language is very interesting. i could express one substance byusing different sounds. so i wish i could study and read more englishliteratures and enlarge my knowledge.

to introduce myself(介绍我自己)

hello,every one!(大家好)

my name is **** . (我叫****)

im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改)

i live in the beautiful city of rizhao.(我住在美丽的rizhao城)(你可以把rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)

im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)

in the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在学校，我最喜欢数学)

perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

but i like it.(但我喜欢他)

i belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)

i also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)

such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)

im kind-hearted.(我很热心)

if you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助，就来找我)

i hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友)

ok.this is me .a sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩)

水乡乌镇可真热闹，满街都是老老少少，还有许多外国人。人们一个个挨着挤着，跟着人流往前走。一声声欢声笑语，把古老的乌镇变得热闹非凡。

从大门往里走，我看到了许多古色古香的木房子，门是木头的，窗户是木头的，柱子是木头的，连屋里的楼梯、楼板也是木头的。而街道很窄，全是用青石条铺成的，人走在上面会发出清脆的响声。

最热闹的要数看船拳表演了。河中间停着一条船，船上竖起一根高高的竹竿，有许多叔叔在为大家表演，他们一个个在竹竿上爬高、翻腾、倒立，还能拿起各种兵器表演，真是有趣极了。

小朋友们最喜欢的是走进街边的店铺买东西了。一家家店铺里有各种各样的东西，吃的有姑嫂饼、麦芽糖、龙须酥……玩的有小木枪、小火车，还有新奇的万花筒，让每个看了的小朋友都舍不得放手。而我最喜欢的是乌镇的特产——蓝印花布，有好多人也是因为喜欢蓝印花布才来的乌镇，也让这里更热闹了。蓝印花布不但光滑而且漂亮，深蓝色的底纹上，有着各种各样的白色花纹。你瞧，古老的作坊中，高高的竹竿上挂着的蓝印花布，随风舞动，就像一个个下凡来的仙女似的。

到了晚上，乌镇的街头更是热闹。老老少少、男男女女都互相聊着天，交谈着一天的美好回忆。儿童更是人多，叫着跑着，把古老的乌镇装扮得更加热闹，更加诱人！

我的家乡在哪美丽的山脚下，那里有无数的山花和野果，把我的家乡点缀的更加绚丽多姿！山里空气清新，树木散发出来的空气使人感到神清气爽，山上的嫩绿把松柏映照的更加发黑了，山上因为这些绿色连接着、交错着。一直绿到天边、绿到山脚。

春天，树枝上长满了嫩绿的叶子，一片片姿态万千的繁荣景象就像一个个虔诚的人们在祈祷着、盼望着。山上成千上万的花朵竞相开放，成片的油菜花金灿灿的，简直是一个花的海洋，美极了！

夏天，炎热的太阳照射着河塘，绿绿的荷花池里冒出一大片荷花，一朵朵荷花好象一位位美丽的仙女在翩翩起舞。

秋天，是一个好季节，美丽的菊花开了，远处飘来一阵清香，果园里，沉甸甸的果子把树枝压倒了，好象促着人们快去摘呢！

冬天，腊梅开了，鹅毛般的大雪纷纷扬扬地飘落下来，地上铺的是雪，厚厚的，软软的；房上落的是雪，白皑皑的，又软又松；树上盖的是雪，积雪把树枝压弯了腰，远远望去像一片白茫茫的大棉被。整个山村都被笼罩在这白色里，宛如一座雪山。

家乡的四季美极了，我爱家乡的美景，爱她的柔美，冰冷。所有的一切。

我的家乡——方山，是一个很小的山村，就是在比例为十万分之一的江苏省地图上，也没有它的踪影。听到这个名字，许多人会说：“只听说过黄山、泰山、峨嵋山，却不知道哪儿有什么方山。”是的，方山的确名不见经传，然而，对于我们方山人来说，它却是我们祖祖辈辈赖以生存、得以发展的生命之山。

可是，不知怎的，我以前竟有点憎恶它。每当有人叫我是“山里人”时，我总认为这是它给我带来的耻辱。可是现在，当我远离了它，不再与它朝夕相伴时，才发现，它是我真正梦牵魂绕的地方。每次梦中看到它，回味不尽的是它的美丽、它的雄伟，以前的那些憎恶在脑海中却半点也浮现不出来。是的，它的确是美的，有儿童的欢笑作证，有青年人的健壮作证，更有老年人的鹤发作证!

木苍翠、百花喷香的春天，沉默了一冬的方山抖擞出了精神，那些小生命也活跃起来：野菊花、蝴蝶花、杜鹃花……争奇斗艳，开遍山野。在周围巨大“绿毯”的衬托下，越发迷人。一群群花枝招展的小女孩儿蹦蹦跳跳，拎着花篮，唱着歌，沿着小径上了山。顿时，寂静的山谷热闹起来，歌声、笑声、欢叫声交织在一起，在山间旋转萦绕。

野果飘香、山泉清澈的夏天，更是孩童的乐园：山脚的桑葚红得发紫，令人垂涎欲滴。摘下一粒放进嘴里，只轻轻一咬，汁水便染红你的整个舌头，那酸甜味儿让你回味无穷。若要问这方山上的土特产，杨梅可谓是当之无愧了：从山脚到山顶，这儿一群，那儿一簇，几乎到处都是。于是，我们这帮“馋猫儿”几乎天天往山里跑，直吃得肚皮发胀，再装上满满一口袋，才心满意足地下山。夏天的方山，除了吃的乐趣外，便是那许许多多的山泉。一汪清澈的泉水从拳头粗的泉眼中流出，似乎只有它耐不住这山间的寂寞，“丁丁冬冬”，一路歌唱，缓缓流去。看着看着，索性脱掉鞋袜，踩在泉底的鹅卵石上，一阵清凉从脚底一直延伸到心头，暑意立刻荡然无存。

云雾缭绕、茶香满山的金秋，是方山最忙碌的季节。满山茶叶，绿油油的，一个个伸着脑袋，随风有节奏地跳动着。家乡人用一双双灵巧的手摘去小小的叶芯，制成香味浓郁的“云雾茶”。因为方山顶终年云雾萦绕，空气洁净，便形成了“云雾茶”独特的香味和效用。这种茶不仅茶香浓郁，醒脑提神，更能延年益寿。这也是方山老人鹤发童颜的秘诀所在。（初中作文）

寒风凛冽、雪花纷飞的严冬，虽无景致可言，却是打猎的好季节。每当雪后，野兔、山鸡便会出来觅食，特别是素有“短跑健将”之称的野兔，雪稍厚点，便会陷在雪里，这是捕捉它的好时机。春节前下场大雪，集市上野味的数量就会陡增。买回去腌制好，便成了招待客人的上品。

啊，美丽的家乡，我是山中的一只小鸟，虽然现在为了求学暂居别人的巢，但我一定会回到你的怀抱。因为你是我的根、我的魂，是永远能给我力量的生命之山!

both work and play are necessary to us; the former gives us knowledge while the latter (gives) rest. an english proverb is well said: “work while you work play while you play.” it makes our life pleasant, efficient and successful.

work is one thing and play is another. it is of course not good to work all day long. however, it is also not good to play all day long. while you work, you should work in earnest. then while you play, you will feel more relaxed and pleasant. that goes without saying.

"该工作时工作"英语作文译文:

工作和游玩两者对我们都是必须的，前者给我们知识，后者给我们休息。英谚说得好“工作时工作，游玩时游玩”。它使我们的生活愉快，有效率以及成功。

工作是一回事，游玩又是另一回事。整日工作自然不好。然而，整天游玩也是不好。当你工作时，你应认真工作。那末当你游玩时，你会觉得比较轻松愉快。那是不需说的。

Do you want to live in the city or the country?

I like to live in the country that the sun rises in the morning with the first golden light & the first sound from the cock.. All the animals & plants begin their life from this moment on and some of the animals begin their sleeping the new day. This is a very beautiful beginning in the world that you just can see all these in the country not in the city.

And for people , the people in the country are kind although they are ungrace-ful .that is not important that you will feel what is the realest in the friendship of people.

Are people kinder in the city or the country?

The people live in the country is kinder than the people live in the city . this is so sure that I just feel all this from my grandparents . My grandpatents both are country people. Their family is poor that they even do not have more money after they finish all their meals.but my mother was so so interested in studying. My grandparents got five children & gave the choice to study to allof them .

一提起石榴，大家肯定都禁不住口水直流了吧！那就随我一起看看吧！

春天，石一棵棵榴树贪婪地吮吸着春天的甘露，舒展着嫩绿的枝条，为春天增添了一抹抹亮丽的色彩。

初夏，石榴树开出了火红的花，远远望去，像是燃烧的小火把，又像绚丽多彩的晚霞；近看，又像一个个精致的小铃铛。

盛夏，高大的树上挂满了个个粉嘟嘟的小石榴。小石榴圆圆的，挂满细长的枝条，把每根枝条都压得弯弯的，低低的，就像一个个小娃娃咧嘴向我们笑呢。到了中秋，它们便在绿叶底下偷笑，有的笑裂了嘴，有的笑破肚皮，露出了鲜红、多汁的果肉。

大的石榴有一斤多重，比红富士苹果还大，小的苹果才二三两重，和小孩的拳头差不多。石榴顶部有一个花朵调谢后形成的空壳，壳里面还有一些灰褐色的花蕊，它们的生命力可真顽强啊！石榴的颜色不是很鲜艳，青黄色，略微带着一抹红，上面布满了小黑点，像饱经风霜、长着老年斑的脸；表皮也不太光滑，用手摸一摸，凹凸不平、可别小看这石榴皮，它可是清热解毒的良药呢！摘下一个石榴，拨开它那苍老的皮，里面却截然不同：一颗颗石榴肉如珍珠，似玛瑙般晶莹剔透；仔细品尝，酸中带着一丝丝淡淡的甜味，让人回味无穷。如果放一把进嘴里，轻轻一咬，满嘴酸甜的汁水，味道妙不可言，叫人越吃越爱吃。

嘿！妈妈正把石榴给我拿来了，我要先下手为强，不然又会被妹妹抢了！

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。