高考英语作文山东卷（精选20篇）

【例文】

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860. Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.

Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.

Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.

【译文】

应该重建圆明园?

圆明园，“所有园林花园”，被烧毁成废墟1860年下降。最近我的同学们进行了关于是否应该重建与否的讨论。

重建的花园支持者说，只有这样，我们才能看到花园的，它反映了中国文明的原始景象。这将是一个供游客感兴趣的地方。如果部分重建，它将提供一个比较和帮助我们记住历史。

谁不同意那些认为较合理的保持这样的花园。该遗址将提醒过我们。我们决不能忘记历史。如故宫博物院，颐和园等其他建筑物也可以是中华文化的象征，所以没有必要重建此园。有些人还担心会破坏环境建设的推移，当在此区。

个人而言，这是明智的重建圆明园，这将增加美丽的城市。更重要的是，新的景区，无疑会促进地方经济发展。

高考英语作文 My Friend（我的朋友）

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得特别快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生，他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想，就是将来当个律师。 这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。 Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time.

Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.

张东是我最要好的朋友，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外，我们两人都喜欢足球，爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力，他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累，他都坚持完成他的功课，所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。

As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently.

On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do evthing for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t communicate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.

[人际关系和情感态度高考英语作文

阅读下面的材料，根据自己的感悟和联想，写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)

乡间有谚语：“丝瓜藤，肉豆须，分不清。”意思是丝瓜的藤蔓与肉豆的茎须一旦纠缠在一起，是很难分辨的。有个小孩想分辨两者的不同，结果把自家院里丝瓜和肉豆的那些纠缠错综的茎叶都扯断了。父亲看了好笑，就说：“种它们是用来吃的，不是用来分辨的呀!你只要照顾它们长大，摘下瓜和豆来吃就好了。” 要求：①选准角度，自定立意;②自拟题目;③除诗歌外，文体不限;④文体特征鲜明。

June 8th

Dear Haiqing,

I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.

To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?

Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?

Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.

Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?

Keep in touch.

Yours

Huangping

6月8日

亲爱的海青,

我听说你现在很不高兴因为你的父母买不起你一些名牌鞋和你非常喜欢的衣服。我给你写这封信与你分享我的想法。

首先,美丽只是表面的。你不觉得这么多关注你的外表很愚蠢吗?他一个肤浅的人通过他们的外表来判断他人;在同样的意义上,他是一个肤浅的人认为名牌衣服可以添加到他的魅力。所以,请忘记那些名牌的东西。真正重要的不在于你穿名牌鞋子或衣服但你的衣服是否适合你。作为一名学生,你必须穿校服在工作日,老实说,你看起来非常聪明。然后你为什么要费心去买昂贵的名牌的东西?

其次,我知道你的父母都是普通工人。他们努力工作,也挣不了多少钱。尽管如此,他们尽自己最大的努力给你很多东西。看看愈伤组织手上和脸上的皱纹,你怎么能忍心要求超出他们的承受能力,这肯定会打破他们的心?记住,父母不欠我们昂贵的夏令营,他们不欠我们索尼随身听;他们也不欠我们耐克的鞋子,如果你真正想要的那些花哨的东西,你应该采取兼职工作有助于他们的购买,而不是向你的父母要钱增加了沉重的负担。难道你不这样认为吗?

第三,我们有各种各样的东西可用这些天既好又便宜的。有什么意义的付出更多的那些名牌的东西不是更好吗?我的朋友,听我的劝告,你会是一个明智的消费者,以及一个更体贴的孩子你的父母。

贫困,有时候,是一件好事。它可以测试一个人的性格,速度比什么都快。继续努力,你一定会在不久的将来能够买得起这些东西。现在你可以专注于你的学习。无论如何,一个潜在成功者，整天专注于名牌的东西不是很有趣的呢

保持联系。

你的

黄平

[高考英语满分作文:一封意见信

Mobile phones are the main invention of modern technology.They are completely part of our daily lives If we look at our society,we can see that all kinds of people are using mobile phones.Maybe they have many advantages,but they also experience drawbacks.

The main advantage of mobile phones is that people can use them anytime and anywhere,so they can use one for an emergency.in addition,people can access the internet whenever they use the mobile phones,so business people can use tem at work to get information from internet more convenietly Moreover,it is very easy to send messages to your friends.Mobile phones can make people keep intimacy in spite of long distance.Mobile phones are turning the world into a small vilage where we can commmunicate with each other easily and simply.Finally,another point in favour of mobile phonesis that you can avoid disturbing anyone when he is sleeping orworking because in that case people often turn off their mobile phones.

On the other hand,there are some drawbacks,too.Firstly,the most important disadvantage is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use.Scientists found that mobile phones can cause brain cancer.if you talk for so many hours,you are going to have headacheand ear problems.Secondly,the mobile phone stimulate home for the high cost of communication.If you are in 3 membered family,you would spend a lot of money on mobile phone.Because tow to three of family have it, it cost about 150-200D in a month.Furthermore,the inappropriate use of mobile phones could be bothersome.for example,it is very imppropriate to here a mobile phone ringing during a formal conversation,during a lesson,in a libraryor in a cinema.Finally,mobile phones waste people too much time.An Amerian survey show that the teen-ager will spend average 2 hours to send messagesevery day.

In conclusion, there are some benefits and drawbacks to mobile phones.personally,i dont like mobile phonesvery much,but i need use them.In my opion, mobile phones are good only if you use them correctly and politely,as in this case,all technology is beneficial!

手机是现代技术的主要发明。如果我们看看我们的社会，他们完全是我们日常生活的一部分，我们可以看到各种各样的人使用手机。也许他们有许多优点，但是它们也有不好之处。

移动电话的主要优点是，人们可以随时随地使用他们，所以在紧急情况下可以使用。此外，当人们使用手机访问互联网时，那么业务使用系统在工作中更实惠，而且能从互联网中获取信息，它也很容易将消息发送给你的朋友。手机可以使人们保持亲密关系，即时长期。手机是把世界变成一个小村庄里我们可以互相沟通更容易和简单。最后，另一个点有利于移动电话，当他睡觉或者工作时，你可以避免任何人打扰，因为在这种情况下，人们常常关掉手机。

另一方面，也有一些缺点。首先，最重要的缺点是过度使用手机，会对健康有一定的影响。科学家发现，手机会引发脑癌。如果你讲这么多小时，你将会有耳疾。其次，手机费用成本高。如果你是3个人的家庭，你会在手机上花很多钱。因为两到三个人的家庭拥有它，在一个月的费用约150 - 200兆。此外，手机的使用不当可能会麻烦一些。例如，在正式谈话，在上课中，在图书馆或者在一家电影院，手机铃声响不适当的。最后，移动电话的人浪费太多时间。经美国调查表明，青少年将花费平均一天2小时在使用手机上。

总之，移动电话有一些好处和缺点。就我个人而言，我不喜欢移动电话品种不多，但我需要使用它们。在我看来，如果你正确地、有礼貌地使用他们的手机是好的，在这种情况下，所有的技术都是有益的！

[手机的好处与坏处高考英语满分作文

假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。

所谓的生态游：

欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气

有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾

真正的生态游

享受自然，同时也是一种责任

要保护自然，保护野生动物

带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.

I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

六：假设你是李明，最近你校的一份英语报纸正在校园出现的“涂鸦”现象开展讨论。请你根据以下要点写一封信给报纸编辑，发表你的看法。

(1)“涂鸦”丑陋难看。

(2)公共建筑物不是表达观点、感情的地方。

(3)禁止“涂鸦”。

参考词汇：graffiti 涂鸦，(在墙上的)乱涂乱写

vandalism 对公共财物的有意破坏

Dear Editor,

Recently graffiti has become more noticeable in my college. I feel quite annoyed at them, especially when some of my classmates praise them as a kind of so-called art. Confronted with this impolite phenomenon, I can’t help asking myself: what is wrong with today’s teenagers?

In my opinion, graffiti is a form of vandalism. They are a mess and are ugly to look at. Meanwhile, walls are public places, and they should not be used to express personal views and feelings.

I really think vandalism should be stopped, and those who refuse to stop this bad practice should be punished. We should clear away these ugly expressions and drawings so that our college may return to its true self--a clean, quiet place for study, teaching and research.

Yours,

Li Ming

英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动，请你 以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：

1. 采访的对象;

2. 采访的原因;

3. 想提的问题。

注意：

1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4. 短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。

范文：

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

Good afternoon, everyone,

大家下午好，

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

全国学生体育项目，进行了由教育部，旨在提高学生的健康，从上午10点举行。~ 11:通行292007四月在中国各地的许多小学和中学。江苏省近11000000名学生参加了这一计划。

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。我们的整个生活会很愉快的。

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

在我看来，我们的高中学生应该每天即使我们的业余时间是有限的一小时做练习。健康是我们研究的一个基本条件。如果我们不进行运动，我们不能够得到很好的研究记录。所以你们每一个人，加入该计划现在!

Thank you!

谢谢!

​导语：道歉信不难写，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

范文：

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考译文】

很抱歉，我不能和你一起去书店星期五下午。我刚刚发现我要参加一个下午的重要的课堂。我希望这个变化不会给你带来太大的麻烦。

我们星期六上午去好吗?我们可以早出发，以便我们有更多的时间来阅读和选择书。如果方便的话，我们8:30在校门口见面。如果没有，让我知道什么时候最适合你。我应该在放学后的任何时间都在学校。

"… 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go! "On October 15, 2003, China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.

Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.

As the worlds largest developing country, China is more than proud of making its own contribution to human beings outer space exploration. Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and social development. The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.

“5，4，3，2，1。点火!发射!”2003年10月15日，中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船，进入了轨道。

喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后， 巨大白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。

作为世界上最大的发展中国家，中国为其对人类的空间探索作出自己的贡献感到非常骄傲。同时，这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。

We will never forget the day when China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit on October 15, 2003 from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.

Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.

Our dream becomes reality. Though the Shenzhou-V circled the Earth 14 times within 22 hours and 18 minutes, it has clearly displayed Chinas spirts of devotion, co-operation and pursuit of the unknown. Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and social development. The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.

我们永远也不会忘记2003年10月15日。中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船，进入了轨道。

喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。

尽管神州5号在22小时18分钟内仅仅绕地球转14圈，但它清楚的体现了中国的奉献、合作和探索未知的精神。同时这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。

人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water. But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.

As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. Whats more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. So its high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.

With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.

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假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1.出发及返回时间;

2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.结语已为你写好。

Dear Lucy,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to you reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

昨天，我们有一个讨论。的主题是。我的梦想是什么?每个人都有自己的梦想。一些人想成为教师，其他人想成为科学家。我的梦想是成为一名医生。

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there. I was saved.

我的朋友问我为什么。我告诉他们我的故事。当我还是个小男孩的时候，我很弱。我曾经非常发高烧。我的父母送我去医院，但医生可以为我做什么。然后我的父母听说有个很好的医生在另一个城镇。他们把我带到那里。我得救了。

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

一个好医生可以挽救人的生命。从那时起我就决定要成为一名医生。我知道要成为一名医生是不容易的。但我决心努力学习。我相信我的梦想会成真。

今天是四月五日，妈妈告诉我今天是清明节，今天一家人要去扫墓。

Today is April 5th, my mother told me that today is the Ching Ming Festival, one family to sweep the tombs today.

我兴高采烈的在墓胖跳来跳去，爷爷叫我不要在墓旁乱跑，这是不好的行为。我见爷爷他们在墓前建拉一个不知名的东西。大惑不解的我问：“这是啥东东?”爸爸说：“这是食台，专门供祖先品尝这些我们给祖先的食物”。

I be jubilant at the tomb of the fat to jump, grandpa told me not to run around in the tomb, which is not good behavior. I see my grandfather they pull an unknown things in front of the grave. Be not a little bewildered I asked: "what is this?" Dad said: "this is food, specifically for these to our ancestors ancestors taste food".

到家后我问：“爸爸为啥我们一定要供奉祖先那?”爸爸说：“因为古代的习俗，我们也要这样做。”我想我长大后一定要比古代人更孝顺。正所谓：红出于蓝更胜于蓝。

After arriving home, I asked: "Dad, why do we have to worship the ancestors?" Dad said: "because of the ancient customs, we have to do." I think I must be more filial piety than ancient people grow up. As the saying goes: out of the blue red it.

一、写作要求

1. 要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯，符合交际要求。

2. 能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确。

3. 书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误。

4. 基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。

5. 恰当使用复杂结构、新颖词汇和顺畅连接。

二、 评分标准

第一档：(18分~20分)。完全完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了所有内容要点;运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇;语法或用词方面有个别错误;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。

第二档：(15分~17分)。完全完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了所有内容要点;运用的句式和词汇能满足要求;语法和用词基本准确;使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。

第三档：(12分~14分)。基本完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了内容要点;运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求;语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。

第四档：(6分~11分)。未恰当完成试题规定的任务：漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容;所用句式和词汇有限;语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。

第五档：(1分~5分)。未完成试题规定的任务：明显遗漏主要内容;句式单调、词汇贫乏;语法错误较多 。

第六档：0分。未能传达任何信息;所写内容与要求无关。

三、书面表达应试要领

1. 第一步是仔细审题。重点注意内容要点，写作对象和交际目的。

2. 要写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个提纲。

3. 确定好时态。转述别人观点常用现在时。记叙经常发生的事用一般现在时，描写过去发生的事用过去时。

4. 不出现中文，不用汉语拼音。不生造中国式的英语。要用你听过的话来说，用你读过的句子来写。

5. 第一句很重要，不要轻易下笔。尾句部分容易出错，要留意。

6. 为防止遗漏内容要点，可在原题上标出记号。

7. 几个必要的连词一定要用，或顺接、或转折、或让步、或比较。

8. 写记叙文，注意六个要素：who, where, when, why, how and the result.

9. 议论文，注意论点与论据一致。还要注意是让你写一方观点还是介绍对立的两种观点。

四、高考范文例句

(1)写人

1. Im Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School.

2. Im ready to give help whenever it is needed.

3. He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.

4. I think Im fit for the job.

(2)写地点

1. Its a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.

2. Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.

3. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building - our library.

(3)写事

1.Last night I was preparing for the coming examination when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me.

2.Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.

3.The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.

(4)表达理由观点或讨论结果

1. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well known at home and abroad.

2. Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise.

3. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well.

(5)数据与图表说明

1. As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.

2. Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities.

3. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods.

(6)写信和写通知

1.I am writing to you about the mobile phone I bought on April 20th.

2. If there is anything I can do for you, I will be more than glad to help.

3. Thank you very much in advance.

4. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into

our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not

comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are

checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble .

They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we

might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing

it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as

we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a

letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .

Thank you!

The bicycle is the most popular means of transportation in China. China is a country “on bicycle wheels”。 People ride them for various purposes such as going to and from school and work. Bicycles are very cheap and easy to buy in China.

There are many advantages to riding a bicycle. First， using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big cities. Second， people can improve their health by riding a bicycle.

The future of bicycle will be bright. In some European countries， city governments have arranged pedestrians to use “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge.

[满分高考英语作文The Bicycle in China

假如你是诸暨二中高三(1)的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力学习，实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。 注意：(1)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯;(2)词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。 High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior 3 student, it wont take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________

【参考范文】

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my

fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

​导语：要想写好英语作文，我们平时就得多练习，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1)现象法：引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。

Recently the rise in theproblem/phenomenon of ... has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwideconcern. 近来(...)的问题/现象已经引起了广泛的关注。

2)比较法：通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较，引出文章要讨论的观点。

For years, ...had been viewedas .... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ..., people....

多年来(...)被认为(...)但是现在人们又有了新的看法，随着(...)增长，人们(...)

3)对立法：先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。

When asked about..., thevast/overwhelming majority of people say that …. But I think/view a bitdifferently. 当被问及(...)大多数人们会说(...)但是我却不这么认为。

4)观点法：开门见山，直截了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。

Now people ingrowing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept / (be aware)that... 现在越来越多的人们开始认识到/接受(...)

5)引用法：先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

"Knowledge ispower." This is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared bymore and more people. “知识就是力量”这是培根的名言，这句名言开始被越来越多的人们分享。

6)故事法：先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题。(少用)

I have a friend who ...Should he ...? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life. 我有一个朋友(喜欢赌钱等)，他应该(...)吗?在这种进退两难的境地下，我们要面对应付日常生活。

australia, the largest country in oceania, lies on the south coast of the pacific. it covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. it has a population of over 10 million. most of its people live in the east of the country by the sea. canberra,the capital of australia,is a beautiful city. sydney is the biggest city in australia, which has many places of interest. the opera house is well known all over the world.the olympic games were held in sydney.

澳大利亚是大洋洲最大的国家，位于太平洋南海岸，国土面积760万平方公里，人口超过1 000万，大多数居民居住在东部地区，濒临海洋。首都堪培拉是一座美丽的城市。悉尼是全国最大的城市，有许多名胜，悉尼歌剧院闻名于世。奥运会就是在这里举行的。