四年级英语满分作文（精选20篇）

With the development of the Intemet, the net bar plays an important role in peoples life. More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars. They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with "Meimei" on the net in the bar. Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.

Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.

随着因特网的发展，网吧在人们生活中扮演了重要的角色。越来越多的人，特别是学生，愿意到网吧去，他们沉迷于在网吧玩电子游戏、结交坏朋友以及和荚眉聊天。一些学生常常在网吧玩到深夜，这些会导致学生的健康和学习问题。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧，但是，一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。

庆幸的是，越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到这点。最近，辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。学生摆脱掉这种坏习惯是非常必要的。

Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students. It has become quite commom to go there. They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.

Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies. It is a good thing.

最近，越采越多的人，特别是学生，愿意到网吧去，这已经成为一种普遍的现象。他们花费了大量的宝贵时间泡在网吧里玩电予游戏，结果不仅损害了他们的身体，也对他们的学习产生了不良影响。他们的身体变坏了，学习被忽视了。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧，但是一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。

庆幸的是，越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到了这一点。最近，辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。大多数的学生充分利用时间，全身心投入到学习中去。这是一件大好事。

对微博的看法 View of the micro Bo

We are always told that time is precious so that we shall cherish it. Even

though most of us know the necessity of making use of time, when we start our

plans, we find that time is limited. Where has the time gone, we always feel

confused about it. Actually, it is the lack of efficiency that makes people feel

time is not enough. It is in need of improving efficiency. Most students cant

focus their mind on study because they think of all kinds of temptations, such

as delicious food and computer games. If they can finish task quickly, then they

can do other things. It is the motivation to improve efficiency.

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the

time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.

Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days

become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is

singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some

birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the

nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful

flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

人类因梦想而永生，失去理想，生与死无异。人，是为了梦想而活，一个人若是没有梦想，那要为何而活呢?

The dream of eternal life for mankind, lost ideals, life and death is. People, in order to live, if a person does not want to live that dream, why?

我有一个梦，一个简单，却又难以实现的梦。那是一个在远离都市，与自己的家人过着与世无争的日子的梦;而这个梦想与现实的差距，需要用奋斗来拉近。梦想点燃希望，有希望，人才会去奋斗，来达成愿望，进而完成梦想。因此，我有了这个梦想，接着，我要点燃这个希望，进而藉由奋斗来完成愿望与梦想。这就是我这个梦想形成的原因。

I have a dream, a simple, but difficult to achieve the dream. It is a far away from the city, a stand aloof from worldly success days with his familys dream; and this difference between dream and reality, to strive to narrow. Dream of hope, there is hope, will to strive, to desire, and then complete the dream. Therefore, I have this dream, then, I want to ignite the hope, and strive to complete the wishes and dreams. This is my dreams are made of.

要我完成这个梦想，我得先用功读书，才能赚更多一点钱，再找个地方、房子住下来，完成梦想。梦想如一座灯塔，指引着在茫茫人生大海航行的生命之舟，鼓舞你在行程中和波涛对抗、勇往直前，才不会在大学毕业了，却又不知何去何从。活着不能没有抱负，不然就会感到空虚;人要勇敢地去生活，不要逃避那些不愉快的、可怕的东西。不愉快和可怕都是因为不理解，当你理解以后，你就变得不再畏惧、不再恐慌。

I want to finish this dream, I must study hard, to make a little more money, and then find a place to live, the house, to complete the dream. Dream like a lighthouse guides in the vast sea of life, sailing the boat of life, inspire you, and in the march forward courageously against stroke, never graduated from University, but I do not know decide on what path to follow. I cant live without ambition, or you will feel empty; people want to live, dont avoid the unpleasant, terrible things. Unpleasant and frightening is because they do not understand, when you understand, you will no longer fear, not to panic.

我有一个梦，一个美好的梦，一个与世无争又悠闲的梦。

I have a dream, a dream, a dream of stand aloof from worldly success and laid back.

Do you agree that your parents have a second child? Different students have

different opinions about it.

Some students agree with the idea. They think, if so, they wont feel

lonely and there will always be someone to play with. Besides, if their parents

get older or ill, they can take turn to look after them. However, some students

disagree. They worry that they will get less love from their parents if another

child comes to the family. Whats worse, they may not get along well, or even

fight against each other.

As for me, Id love to have a brother or sister as company, so that we can

share our happiness and sorrow anytime.

某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括：

·你将拿出什么物品进行交换

·具体介绍该物品

·你希望换回什么物品

·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言

注意：

(1)词数100左右;

(2)格式不限;

(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。

满分作文1

Title: Want a second-hand bicycle? Here it is!

Content:

内容：

Since I am going to graduate, the bicycle that I have ridden for three years is of no use any more. So I want to exchange it with whoever needs it.

自从我毕业后，我已经骑了三年的自行车不再使用了。所以我想和任何需要的人交换它。

The bike is in plain black and easy to ride. Though it’s designed for racing, you can use it for everyday life as well. With a lock behind the seat, it can be locked anywhere you like, removing the trouble of parking. Old as it, the bike functions well. And I’m sure you will love it at the first sight.

这辆自行车很黑，很容易骑。虽然它的设计，赛车，你可以使用它的日常生活，以及。有了一个锁在座位后面，它可以被锁在任何你喜欢的地方，消除了停车的麻烦。老了，自行车功能很好。我敢肯定你会爱上它的第一眼。

If you have a MP4 player and don’t want to keep it, you can exchange it with me. Anyone who has the intention please leave a message here, and I will contact you later.

如果你有一个MP4播放器，不想要它，你可以和我交换。有意者请在这里留言，稍后我会联系你的。

Thanks.

谢谢

大家都说蒙娜丽莎的微笑是世界上最美丽的微笑，但是我在一次坐公交车时否定了这一个答案。

那是一次炎热的夏天，我去做公交车，我选了一个座位。在车子快启动的时候，突然有人说了一声“等等”，汽车停了下来，大家都在埋怨司机。一位抱着孩子的妇女跌了一跤，才急匆匆的跑上来。她身上都是灰尘，但她只是拍了拍孩子裹着的被子，而对自己身上的脏污视而不见。她皮肤的颜色很黑，但那黑色的皮肤盖不住她那炯炯有神的眼睛，她手上长了很多茧子，一看就知道是一个勤劳的母亲。

这车子上似乎太热了，她用手擦了擦自己和孩子额头上的汗，忽然她好像发现了什么。血，一小滩血。她把孩子上翻下寻找着出血的地方，可是找了很久也没有找到，她安心了，露出了微笑。原来伤口在她自己身上，她置之不理。又过了一个站，她们下车了，可是这一次微笑，一直留在我心中。我想：这一刻，不管是什么样的冷血动物也会被感动，因为这唤醒了它们的最后的善良。

我们的母亲不仅像黑暗中的一缕阳光，更像一棵大树保护着我们，等我们茁壮成长，她们终会离去。

[四年级最满分的微笑作文

假若你是《21th century》报纸的编辑，有一学生向你写了如下的一封信，请你根据来

信的内容写一封回信，帮他出出主意。字数约为100左右。

Dear Editor,

My physics teacher is very strict with us. I often feel nervous in his classes because we are punished by being made to stand for a few minutes if we cant answer his questions. Its embarrassing (尴尬) to be made to stand in class, so I hate physics classes. However, I really want to do well in physics. What should I do?

Yours sincerely

Zhang Ying

Dear Zhang Ying,

I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. Teachers have many different ways of encouraging students to put in more effort — it seems as though your physics teacher thinks fear is the best way! He does it because he thinks it will produce results. If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best then you should tell him. You say you want to do well in physics and if your teacher knows this, he will be pleased. It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action. If he is aware of your worries, perhaps he will suggest other ways of helping you improve your work.

Editor

张颖

亲爱的张颖，

我很抱歉你在物理课上遇到了困难。老师们有许多不同的方式鼓励学生投入更多的精力，这似乎是你的物理老师认为恐惧是最好的方式！他这样做是因为他认为这会产生结果。如果你觉得这是阻止你做你最好的，那么你应该告诉他。你说你想在物理方面做得很好，如果你的老师知道这一点，他会很高兴的。只有当学生没有尽可能地努力，他们可以教师被迫采取行动。如果他知道你的担心，也许他会建议其他的方法来帮助你改善工作。

编辑

dear dick,

i’m very glad to hear from you again. from your letter i know you want to know more about reducing learning load for primary and middle school students in china. let me tell you. before learning load was reduced, i had had to do my homework, so i could not go to bed until half past eleven; but after learning load was reduced, i can visit museums, take computer and painting lessons. at night i can read books and newspapers or watch tv. now i usually go to bed at ten. we are all like it very much.

best wishes.

yours,

li hua

My mother always complains about my bad behavior, like I don’t eat up the food and sometimes I don’t have responsibility on what I do. I decide to behave myself, I want to help my mother to relieve her pressure. So I want to be a good child, I will eat up the food, no more pick up them and I also will keep on finishing the job I do.

我的妈妈总是抱怨我的坏习惯，比如我不吃完食物和有时候我对自己做的事情没有责任感。我决定自我自律，我想要帮助妈妈减轻她的压力。所以我想要成为一个好孩子，我会把饭吃饭，不再挑食，我也会坚持做完自己的工作。

[小学四年级英语带翻译作文

In the field of food safety in our country in recent years, the worrying problems. Kentucky Fried chicken "Sudan red", "sodium formaldehyde sulfoxylate in tofu, dumplings in the" poisonous green vegetables "... More dangerous is the "melamine", it is not only present in high amounts in milk, also exist in the eggs. These diverse food safety issues, like the global outbreak of the financial crisis, across the earth, to peoples life and health has brought serious influence, more affecting everyones heart.

The original food safety problem happened on our side, may be happening in our endangering our health. I think, our country should pay great attention to the food safety problems, only by strengthening legislation, strict law enforcement to stop the emergence of these problems. At the same time as a primary school student, we should also actively involved in the food safety propaganda, let more people know the dangers of food safety, resistance to pesticides food, chemical, food and food problems, in this way can we make food safety with our health.

近年来，在我国食品安全领域出现了令人忧虑的问题。肯德鸡的“苏丹红”、豆腐中的“吊白块”、水饺中的“毒青菜”……更危险的是“三聚氰胺”，它不仅在牛奶中大量出现，还在鸡蛋中存在。这些形形色色的食品安全问题，就像目前全球暴发的金融危机一样，席卷整个大地，给人们的生命健康带来了严重的影响，更牵动着大家的心。

原来食品安全问题就发生在我们的身边，也可能正在发生在我们的身上危害着我们的健康。我想，我们国家要高度重视食品安全这个问题，只有通过加强立法，严格执法才能制止这些问题的出现。同时做为一名小学生，我们也要积极地参与到食品安全的宣传中，让更多的人认识食品安全的危害，抵制农药食品、化学食品、问题食品，这样才能让食品安全与我们的健康同行。

Last summer holiday, our family went to the shangri-la la wood cuo national forest park to play, also picked some mushrooms!

We got there on the first day of the evening sleep a big in), but well be on the way. There are acres of forest on the mountain, in addition to tourists, trees, grass, and wild mushrooms.

We sat on the low fuel consumption of touring, began to travel, where clockwise is auspicious, so our itinerary is clockwise. Love saying that exaggerated metaphor on the car, so the car people always be amused laughter.

Im not really active in the car, so dont lack of oxygen, but one off activity, is a lack of oxygen to dizziness, vertigo, fortunately, next to a store, where I bought a bottle of oxygen, took a few mouth, is good for you to come over.

Later, to change the plan, we are going to go by boat, on his way to the place by boat, I saw the "little umbrella" of handfuls of white, I have a look, turned out to be a mushroom, I secretly picked some flowers. On the ship, I down the ladder to climb on the top of the ship took many beautiful landscapes.

A total of three days to make the trip, though very tired, but we are very happy.

去年暑假，我们一家去了香格里拉腊木措国家森林公园去玩，还采了一些蘑菇呢!

我们到那里的第一天晚上睡了一个大懒觉，不过我们马上就在路上了。到了那里，山上全是成片成片的森林，除了游客就是树木、青草，还有野生的蘑菇。

我们坐上了低油耗的游览车，开始了旅行，在那里，顺时针是吉利的，所以我们的旅行路线也是顺时针的。车上的解说员很爱说夸张的比喻，所以车上的人总被逗得大笑不止。

我在车上不怎么活动，所以不怎么缺氧，但是一下车活动，就缺氧得头晕眼花，晕头转向，幸好旁边有一个商店，我到那里买了一瓶氧气，吸了几口，才好过来。

后来，要改变方案了，我们打算去坐船，在去坐船的地方的路上，我看见了一把把白色的“小伞”，我仔细一看，原来是蘑菇，我偷偷地采了几朵。在船 上，我顺着梯子爬上了船顶，拍了许多漂亮的风景照。

这次旅行一共有三天时间，虽然十分疲倦，但是我们很高兴。

On Sunday, my parents and I went to visit zhouzhuang and tongli town. Early in the morning, we arrived at the tianning temple near changzhou tourism hub, sit on the bus. A total of 45 visitors. We sat for two hours in the bus finally arrived in zhouzhuang. Inside, the guide took us through FuAnQiao and build, also visited the moon, shen hall hall and south lake park etc. Finally, the tour guide said: "free." We will fully dissolved. I went to a strange house, mom and dad took all sorts of strange pictures. Backwards, birdy, virtual space, turns into a hut, transverse gallery, dog house, long legs, and auditory hallucination vision. I like the illusory space, because of just and true. With a mouth like sitting in python, mother beside me, just want to save me. Free after finished, we are all set again.

The tour guide took us to eat lunch. After lunch, we returned to the tour bus, go to tongli town. In tongli town, we went to the back garden jiayin hall, etc. I went to my father and mother took the little boat. Sitting on a boat, a flash, like a cradle. I found that the ship to ship ahead of the tool invented ruban OARS plate. Sitting in the boat, I saw the cormorants, I also know that its another name is yu eagle. All of one day make me very happy. I feel these two ancient attractions many, many rivers and Bridges, old town house is very old. This is small Bridges, jiangnan water!

星期天，我和爸爸妈妈去游玩周庄和同里古镇。 一大早，我们就赶到天宁寺附近的常州旅游集散中心，坐上了旅游车。车上一共有45位游客。 我们在车上坐了两个小时终于到达了周庄。一进去，导游带我们走过了富安桥和双桥，还参观了张厅、沈厅和南湖秋月园等景点。最后，导游说：“自由活动。”我们就全解散了。我和爸爸妈妈去了怪楼，拍了各种各样奇怪的照片。有倒着的人、鸟人、虚幻空间、变身小屋、横廊、小人屋、长腿人和幻听视觉。其中我最喜欢虚幻空间，因为拍出来的照片就和真的一样。其中有一张就像坐在蟒蛇的嘴巴里，妈妈在边上拉着我，就想把我救出来一样。 自由活动完了后，我们大家又集合了。

导游带着我们去吃午饭。吃完午饭，我们又回到了旅游车上，前往同里古镇。 到了同里古镇，我们去了退思园、嘉荫堂等景点。我和爸爸妈妈还去坐了小游船。坐在游船上，一晃一晃的，好像摇篮。我发现，船上让船前进的工具是鲁班发明的橹板。坐在船上，我看到了鸬鹚，我还知道它的另外一个名字叫渔鹰。 一天的游玩让我非常开心。我感觉这两个古镇景点很多，河流和小桥也很多，古镇上的房子很古老。这就是小桥流水、江南水乡吧!

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.

Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.

In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.

[酒驾高考英语满分作文

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班。他是一个男孩。我们俩都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得那么快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生。他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐和古典音乐。

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

他家有三口人，他是独生子。他父亲是医生，母亲是北京歌剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，他通常只穿。他有一个梦想，就是成为一名律师。

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。他是由教师和学生的高度赞扬。

我的好朋友英语作文(一)

One of my friend is a beautiful and clever girl whoes name is Li Hua.

with rosy cheeks,she has a pair of bright eyes,which shine below her

arch eyebrows. within her small mouth there are two lines of white teeth.

Her hair is straight and long. hanging down to her shoulders. she is healthy and attractive.

she is loved by her classmates.

我的好朋友英语作文(二)

Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend. We have already known each other for ten years. We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kindhearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help. I feel proud to have such a good friend.

dear bob,

i’m very glad to hear that you will come here to start your chinese lesson in september. i’ve found a flat, a 25-square-meter one, which includes a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen for you with the rent 500 yuan per month. it is on the third floor. in the bedroom there is a chair, a desk, a bed and a sofa. by the way, the flat is on fangcao street, not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no.11 can take you there. what the most convenient is that it’s only one block between the school and your flat. if you come here, you will find it a good place for you to live in. what do you think of it? and it’s essential for me to know your earliest reply.

sincerely yours,

li hua

My teacher has a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, rosy lips and a head of black hair. Talk very friendly, I love her.

My teacher is very love us, once I was ill, burning violently, I felt very dizzy, fell to the ground, my mother sent me to the hospital immediately, when I woke up, found a teacher and her mother are in my side, I asked my mother, the teacher come mother said: "you faint after the teacher came," from then on, the teacher came to see me every day, back to me with my homework, I listen carefully, the teacher is good, she gave me a few questions, Im all right, the teacher said: "you must study harder, recover at an early date, the students are waiting for you back."

After the doctor and his mothers care and hard care, my disease good, finally, my mother sent me to school, is to catch up with our class quizzes, I finished all the questions, dont know the right, after a day, the teacher hair, the mood of the students were all very nervous, I also included, when the teacher shouted my name, I was thinking that, delayed so long, I certainly didnt test good, but the teacher said that my score is 100 points, I cant believe, I took the papers, the teacher said: "must continue to work hard. Im not going to let the teacher down.

Thank you my teacher, I will study hard and with good grades in return for you.

我的老师有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，红润的嘴唇和一头乌黑的头发。说话十分亲切，我特别喜欢她。

我的老师很关爱我们，有一次我生病了，烧的很厉害，我觉的很头晕，倒在了地上，妈妈立即把我送到了医院，等我醒来后，发现老师和妈妈都在我的身边，我问妈妈老师怎么来得，妈妈说：“你晕倒后老师就来了”，从那以后，老师天天来看我，还给我补习功课，我认真的听，老师讲的可好了，她还给我出了几个题，我全都作对了，老师说：“一定要加紧学习，早日康复，同学们都等着你回去呢。”

经过医生和妈妈的细心和辛苦的照顾，我的病终于好了，妈妈把我送到学校，，正赶上我们班小考，我把题都做完了，不知道对不对，过了一天，老师发卷了，同学们的心情都很紧张，我也包括在内，老师喊到我的名字时，我正在想，耽误了这么长的时间，我肯定没有考好，而老师说我的分数是100分，我都不敢相信了，我拿卷子的时候，老师说：“一定要继续努力”。我不会让老师失望的。

谢谢你我的老师，我一定会好好学习，用好成绩来回报您。

下午，我手捧《西游记》坐在沙发上津津有味地看着。渐渐地，我的眼睛朦胧了……

“咦?黄子汉，你怎么在这儿呢?”突然，孙悟空出现在我的眼前。“你怎么认识我?”“是你把我从五指山下救出来的，难道你忘了?”“你和唐僧现在在干什么呢?”“我们在三打白骨精呢。我带你去看看吧!”

我和孙悟空一起来到一座高山下，来时，惊动了白骨精。它想吃唐僧肉让自己长生不老。狡猾的白骨精变成了，悟空用火眼金睛看了看，发现是白骨精变的，一棒打了过去。唐僧见了，觉得孙悟空故意伤人，念起了紧箍咒。可白骨精用解尸法逃脱了，又变成了个老婆婆。悟空发现老婆婆又是白骨精变的，又打了起来。唐僧生气地认为悟空又故意伤人，再一次念起了紧箍咒。这一次，悟空头疼地不行，直呼救命，我劝说：“不要再念啦，不然，悟空会受不了的。”这回，白骨精又逃走了。它最后又变成了个老爷爷，可最后还是被孙悟空打死了。唐僧是肉眼凡胎，他哪能认出这3个人都是妖怪变的呢!他认为悟空打死了3个普通人，再一次念起了紧箍咒，悟空在地上一个劲的打滚……

“醒醒——!”我被妈妈的叫喊声吵醒，原来那是一个梦啊!我懂得了孙悟空机智勇敢，为了正义，不惧紧箍咒，打死了白骨精，为民除害，这种精神值得我们学习。

June 8th

Dear Haiqing,

I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.

To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?

Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?

Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.

Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?

Keep in touch.

Yours

Huangping

6月8日

亲爱的海青,

我听说你现在很不高兴因为你的父母买不起你一些名牌鞋和你非常喜欢的衣服。我给你写这封信与你分享我的想法。

首先,美丽只是表面的。你不觉得这么多关注你的外表很愚蠢吗?他一个肤浅的人通过他们的外表来判断他人;在同样的意义上,他是一个肤浅的人认为名牌衣服可以添加到他的魅力。所以,请忘记那些名牌的东西。真正重要的不在于你穿名牌鞋子或衣服但你的衣服是否适合你。作为一名学生,你必须穿校服在工作日,老实说,你看起来非常聪明。然后你为什么要费心去买昂贵的名牌的东西?

其次,我知道你的父母都是普通工人。他们努力工作,也挣不了多少钱。尽管如此,他们尽自己最大的努力给你很多东西。看看愈伤组织手上和脸上的皱纹,你怎么能忍心要求超出他们的承受能力,这肯定会打破他们的心?记住,父母不欠我们昂贵的夏令营,他们不欠我们索尼随身听;他们也不欠我们耐克的鞋子,如果你真正想要的那些花哨的东西,你应该采取兼职工作有助于他们的购买,而不是向你的父母要钱增加了沉重的负担。难道你不这样认为吗?

第三,我们有各种各样的东西可用这些天既好又便宜的。有什么意义的付出更多的那些名牌的东西不是更好吗?我的朋友,听我的劝告,你会是一个明智的消费者,以及一个更体贴的孩子你的父母。

贫困,有时候,是一件好事。它可以测试一个人的性格,速度比什么都快。继续努力,你一定会在不久的将来能够买得起这些东西。现在你可以专注于你的学习。无论如何,一个潜在成功者，整天专注于名牌的东西不是很有趣的呢

保持联系。

你的

黄平

[高考英语满分作文:一封意见信

Li Hua is my good friend. We are classmates. He is tallest in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. We have many in common, so that we have many things to talk. For example, we both like playing basketball and we like the same basketball player Kobe. Besides, we both like cartoon very much. We always watch cartoon program together. At weekends, we oftenplay basketball. Whats more important, he studies hard. So do I. We can make progress together. He is a good friend.

李华是我的好朋友，我们是同学。他是我们班上最高的。他很善良，总是随时帮助其他人。我们有很多共同点，因此我们有很多事情可以交谈。比如说，我们都喜欢打篮球，我们都喜欢同一个球星——科比。除此之外，我们都很喜欢卡通。我们经常一起看卡通节目。周末的时候，我们经常一起打篮球。更重要的是，他学习很努力，我也一样。我们可以相互进步。他是一位好朋友。