四年级英语满分作文优秀20篇

Push open the door, you will feel the room is full of tong qu. On the wall all round, plastered with various and colorful stickers, with winnie the pooh and tigger, there are flowers and butterflies. At the sight of them, my mood immediately become happy. In the middle of the room, is my little bed, bed respectively with three my beloved toy: bear, "black" bear "doudou" and the elephant "beep". No matter spring, summer, autumn and winter, only to hold them tasting, ability falls asleep. Put a row of ambry, the wall is in the middle of the TV cabinet, both sides is my snack cabinets, all kinds of snacks.

In the side, is my mother and I will come in the morning of the dresser, there is a mirror on the wall, desk full of beautiful things in eyes with all kinds of cosmetics, every day, my mother and I to enjoy dressing up. Put on the window is my desk. Lying on the desk in the winter can join the bedplate of glass, glass down with my photos. Desk a few belong to use large box. Door on the left side of the wall, put on my chest, one season clothes have to be packed in a wooden cabinet, sometimes. This is my room, do you like it?

一推开门，你就会感到这房间充满了童趣。四周的墙壁上，贴满了各式各样、五彩缤纷的贴画，有小熊维尼的，有跳跳虎的，还有小花和蝴蝶的。一看见它们，我的心情立刻就变得开心起来。在房间中央，是我的小床，床上分别摆着三个我心爱的毛绒玩具：大熊“黑皮”，小熊“豆豆”和小象“嘟嘟”。无论春夏秋冬，唯品都要抱着它们才能入睡。贴着墙放了一排橱柜，中间的是电视机柜，两边是我的零食柜，各种各样的零食应有尽有。

在最里侧，是我和妈妈每天早上必来的梳妆台，贴着墙壁有一面镜子，桌上琳琅满目地摆放着各式各样的化妆品，每天我和妈妈都要美美地打扮一番。靠着窗户摆放的是我的书桌。书桌上放着冬天可以加入的玻璃台板，玻璃下压着我的照片。书桌旁有几个放属用的大箱子。门左边的墙，放着我的衣柜，一个季节的衣服就得装一格柜子，有时还装不下。这就是我的房间，你喜欢吗?

为迎接奥运会在中国举行，请写一篇关于讲究文明礼仪的倡议书，具体内容包括：

1、讲究文明礼貌是中华民族的传统;

2、面对外国友人应热情大方、彬彬有礼;

3、要坚决杜绝公共场所大声喧哗、拥挤打闹、随地吐痰等不文明行为;

4、奥运即将召开，我们将代表中国形象。

参考词汇：喧哗 uproar

[范文]

My dear fellow students,

The Olympics are just around the corner. Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy.

We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people. In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics. Before foreign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly. In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden. In a sense, each of us will not simply stand for ourselves but stand for China. Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

[高考英语满分作文一篇讲究文明礼仪的倡议书

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the

time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.

Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days

become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is

singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some

birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the

nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful

flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

I am always shy and afraid of standing in front of a lot of people, so I

dont have many friends. In my heart, I desire to make a lot of friends and hang

out with them. I know my problem. I am not confident and if I show my humor,

surely other students will notice me. So I decide to join activities. I take

part in a drama group. It can not only enhance my confidence, but also helps me

to make friends. Soon I become confident and more students know me. Whats more,

many students ask me to join their group. I conquer my fear and grow up.

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is ZhangJian.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫章健。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

童年是什么?童年是快乐。童年在哪? What is childhood? Childhood is happy.Where is childhood?

记得有一次，我在我的家乡里，一起跟伙伴们玩耍，我和我的小妹玩捉迷藏，她捉我藏，我藏在了一座房子后面，突然发现，我的水瓶漏水了，我心想，小妹会不会沿着水印找过来?不会的不会的，小妹刚上幼儿园，可谁想到了小小的小妹居然那么聪明，我被她捉到了，我不甘心，我也要捉她一次，我数了50个数，她跑了很远，我就故意对她说，藏了吗?

她说藏了，我边找边笑，让我笑的原因是，只要小妹说一句话，我就能顺着她的声音找到她，找到她以后，她好像还不知道我是怎么找到她的，我就跟她解释，谁知她说了这样一句话：“原来姐姐也这么聪明啊!比我聪明。”我又顶上一句：“你才上幼儿园，姐姐都上三年级了，你说咱俩谁聪明?当然是我聪明了。”小妹又在耍能耐了。

就这样，一天就这样过去了，我们一起睡觉，在梦里，我梦到了自己又梦到了这件事情。

这是童年中的快乐，童年的快乐还有很多很多。每个人只有一次童年。说说你的童年吧!这就是我的童年我希望你们的童年能像我一样快乐!

每个人都想成功，可是成功就必须付出一定的努力，要成功就必须不怕失败，而我终于做到了，我克服了困难，体会到了成功的喜悦。

在我八岁时，妈妈给我报了一个二胡班。那天，一进教室就听见了许多吱吱呀呀的声音，我问妈妈：“妈妈，这就是二胡的声音吗？”妈妈摸着我的头说：“是啊，你听，这声音多美妙呀！妈妈期待着你站上领奖台的时刻。”就在这时老师出来了，了解了我的情况后，老师给我拿来了一把二胡，一张像“蝌蚪”的谱子，而我却什么也看不懂。我的二胡生活正式开始了。每天放了学我就来练习，一拉就是两个小时，有时手指都给划破了，一想到妈妈那期待的眼神，我一定要好好练习，决不放弃。一年过去了，我在老师的指导下进步很快，水平也提高了，老师推荐我去参加二胡比赛。

来到比赛现场，看到黑压压的人群，我紧张极了就怕我拉不好。该我上台了，场下一片欢呼，我的心里像一只小兔子砰砰砰地跳个不停。我深吸一口气，拉起了我的曲目。渐渐的，我的心情平静了下来，观众们也在我的演奏声中陶醉了……

主持人宣布：“秦谱涵获得了本次大赛的第一名”。“我成功了，我得第一了”。我高兴的跳上领奖台，手捧着金灿灿的奖杯，流下了激动的泪，是啊，我的努力没有白费。

经过这次比赛，我深刻理解了：失败是成功之母。对，不经历风雨怎能见彩虹呢？

[我成功了四年级满分作文

I like to make friends a lot, because I like to share opinions with them.

But I find it is hard to find an ideal friend. Most people just like to hang out

with you. If you want to share profound information, they will stay quiet. I am

so eager to find an ideal friend. Firstly, he can share the same interest with

me. I like to read books and watch movies. I always want someone who can discuss

about the detail, which will be so amazing. Secondly, he must be considerate.

Sometimes I will forget about the time and place because I have something urgent

to do, if he is considerate, our friendship can last forever.

The Spring Festival is a traditional festival of our country. Every year, every household will eat dinner, paste couplets, fireworks, but busy!

"Get up, get up..." On February 17th, early in the morning, mother urged me to get up, said to take me to buy necessities. I am a listen to immediately get out of bed, dressed quickly, in a hurry after breakfast, and mother go to the market. We came to a couplet of the stall. A: wow! There were so many styles, our eyes are spent. Suddenly I saw a pair of couplets, top allied: happiness chardonnay thousand music, bottom allied write: offer the old plum Singapore flavours. I feel very good, then show it to the mother, mother also feel good, bought it. Today, we went to the vegetable market to buy vegetables much more special, my mother and I managed to squeeze in. Mom bought a roast duck, sausage, vegetables, meatballs, etc. A lot of delicious, we cant carry it all. Back home, the home has come a lot of relatives, sister, brother, uncle, aunt... Good lively! They gave me money, I was really big harvest!

In the afternoon, my brother and I together stick couplets, paste, my brother and I ran upstairs together, waiting for a big family reunion dinner on the table, by the way, I also help make dumplings, ha ha. The fireworks in the evening, my in the mind very happy! "Chip, pa" "dong, dong," came the voice of fireworks exploded outside the window, a chain of moments of fireworks fly in the sky, colorful, beautiful! Look at the others fireworks, there isnt much to take, I also went downstairs fireworks! When we have a good time, father shouted upstairs "come on, the Spring Festival evening party started! We have a listen to, and scrambled upstairs.

This year the Spring Festival is fun! More and more, I like the Spring Festival.

春节是我国的传统节日。每到大年三十，家家户户都会吃年夜饭、贴对联、放烟花，可热闹了!

“起床了，起床了……”，大年三十一大早，妈妈就催促我起床，说要带我去购买年货。我一听立刻从床上爬起来，急忙穿好衣服，匆匆吃完早饭，和妈妈一起去市场。我们来到一个卖对联的小摊上。哇!样式可真多啊，挑的我们眼睛都花了。忽然我看到了一副对联，上联写着：岁岁瑞霞千家乐，下联写着：献岁梅花万里香。我觉得挺好的，便拿给妈妈看，妈妈也觉得不错，就买下了。我们又去了菜市场，今天来买菜的人特别多，我和妈妈好不容易才挤了进去。妈妈买了烤鸭、香肠、青菜、肉丸等好多好吃的，我们都拿不动了。回到家里，家里已经来了好多亲人，有大姨、哥哥、舅舅、舅妈……好热闹啊!他们还给了我压岁钱呢，我可真是大丰收啊!

下午，我和哥哥一起贴对联，贴好后，我和哥哥一起跑上楼，等着丰盛的年夜饭上桌，对了，我还帮忙包饺子了呢，呵呵。到了晚上，该放烟花了，我心里好开心呀!“噼、啪”“咚、咚”，窗外传来烟花爆炸的声音，一串串的烟花飞上了天空，五彩缤纷的，漂亮极了!看别人放烟花，没有自己放好玩，我也下楼放烟花喽!正当我们玩的开心时，爸爸在楼上喊道：“快上来啦，春节晚会开始了”!我们一听，又争先恐后的拥上楼去。

今年过春节真好玩啊!我越来越喜欢春节了。

My grandfather is an eighty-year-old man. He always complains about how fast things have changed, and he often says that life used to be better.

Families aren’t families the way they used to be. A lot of families have broken down. If husband and wife have problems with their marriage, they no longer stay together. And mothers used to stay at home and take care of their children, but now not anymore. Everyone’s working. No one has time to look after children at home.

And the cars! No one walks anymore. Everyone drives. We used to walk five miles to school every day, even in winter. But now we don’t. And in school, the children don’t have to think anymore. In math class, for example, we used to add, subtract(减), multiply(乘) and divide(除) in our heads. Kids don’t use their heads anymore. Instead, they use calculators(计算器).

Most families have computers now. In the past, we didn’t have computers. We didn’t even have lights. My mother used to spend all day cooking in the kitchen. But now nobody eats home-cooked food any more.

And people don’t talk to each other anymore. They are too busy to talk, too busy to eat, too busy to think...

Life used to be simple, but it isn’t anymore.

Wonderful and clear. You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences an idioms. Im expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on. If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.

俗话说得好：“天下没有不散的筵席。”因为爸爸工作的调动，我们全家要搬去别的城市了。可是爸爸说家里养的小狗不能一起带去，请问有没有哪位好心的叔叔或阿姨收养我们家可怜的小狗——“棉花糖”呢?

“棉花糖”非常可爱，身子小巧玲珑;它的头又大又圆，像西瓜一样。它有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，像两颗黑珍珠镶在上面;它的鼻子小小的，像在葡萄上打了两个孔。“棉花糖”有一身雪白的毛，卷卷的、软软的，和它的名字一样，给人一种甜甜的感觉。

虽然名字叫“棉花糖”，但它特别爱吃肉。有一次，妈妈烧了鸡腿，它闻着香味就迫不及待地跑过去，一口咬住鸡腿，再用牙把肉扯下来。它十分聪明，先用一只脚压住鸡腿，再用牙齿拼命往外扯，肉就被咬下来了。然后，它便心满意足地吃着肉，口水顺着骨头往下滴，滴了一地。它一边吃，一边发出“呜呜”地声音，好像在说“真是太好吃了!”

注意注意，前方高能!“棉花糖”虽然可爱，但也很霸道。如果你抢了它的吃的，它就会“汪汪”直叫，还要把“敌人”赶走;它睡觉时也不许有人打扰，如果有人吵醒它，它又要“汪汪”了。

各位好心的叔叔阿姨，“棉花糖”这么可爱，我相信，你们和它相处一段时间后，一定会爱上它的!

June 8th

Dear Haiqing,

I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.

To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?

Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?

Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.

Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?

Keep in touch.

Yours

Huangping

6月8日

亲爱的海青,

我听说你现在很不高兴因为你的父母买不起你一些名牌鞋和你非常喜欢的衣服。我给你写这封信与你分享我的想法。

首先,美丽只是表面的。你不觉得这么多关注你的外表很愚蠢吗?他一个肤浅的人通过他们的外表来判断他人;在同样的意义上,他是一个肤浅的人认为名牌衣服可以添加到他的魅力。所以,请忘记那些名牌的东西。真正重要的不在于你穿名牌鞋子或衣服但你的衣服是否适合你。作为一名学生,你必须穿校服在工作日,老实说,你看起来非常聪明。然后你为什么要费心去买昂贵的名牌的东西?

其次,我知道你的父母都是普通工人。他们努力工作,也挣不了多少钱。尽管如此,他们尽自己最大的努力给你很多东西。看看愈伤组织手上和脸上的皱纹,你怎么能忍心要求超出他们的承受能力,这肯定会打破他们的心?记住,父母不欠我们昂贵的夏令营,他们不欠我们索尼随身听;他们也不欠我们耐克的鞋子,如果你真正想要的那些花哨的东西,你应该采取兼职工作有助于他们的购买,而不是向你的父母要钱增加了沉重的负担。难道你不这样认为吗?

第三,我们有各种各样的东西可用这些天既好又便宜的。有什么意义的付出更多的那些名牌的东西不是更好吗?我的朋友,听我的劝告,你会是一个明智的消费者,以及一个更体贴的孩子你的父母。

贫困,有时候,是一件好事。它可以测试一个人的性格,速度比什么都快。继续努力,你一定会在不久的将来能够买得起这些东西。现在你可以专注于你的学习。无论如何,一个潜在成功者，整天专注于名牌的东西不是很有趣的呢

保持联系。

你的

黄平

[高考英语满分作文:一封意见信

Yesterday, I broke a vase. This vase has been in myhome for several years.

昨天，我打碎了一个花瓶。那个花瓶在我们家很多年了。

I was afraid of being criticized. I didnt dare to tellmy parents. So I pretended nothing happened.

我怕被骂所以不敢告诉我父母。所以我就假装什么都没发生。

But they discovered at last. It was strange that myfather didnt blame me, but teach me a lesson.

但是最后他们还是发现了。很奇怪我爸爸不仅没有责怪我，反而给我上了一课。

He made me know that responsibility was necessary for everyone in the world.

他让我知道责任感对我这个世界上的每一个人都是必须的。

If a person was not responsible, he couldnt do anything successful and may not be popularamong the people around you.

如果一个人没有责任感，他很难取得成功，也可能会让你在你周围不怎么受欢迎。

A responsible person would have the courage to undertake everything. This was what a boyshould have.

一个有责任感的人会有勇气承担一切。这也是一个男孩所必须的。

If I have done something wrong, I should take the responsibility.

如果我做错了，我就该负起这个责任。

[责任感高考满分英语作文

People always say that life cant goes on well all the time, because we

will meet all kinds of difficulties. When we are students, we want to get

improved and do well in the exams. When we graduate and find a job, we need to

finish the task that boss has assigned. Even the time comes to retire, we still

need to find something to do. Setback is part of life, and we should get used to

it. When we face the difficult time, we should consider it as a test for us and

when we get through it, we will gain valuable experience. The pleasure we get

makes us proud.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

我的家乡在千年古镇——锦江镇，那里有我太多的回忆。

从鹰潭出发，沿着206国道往前走，就看到我们的微型原件厂，里面有许多工厂，他是锦江的特色，也是锦江镇的支柱产业。不知不觉就来到了十字路口，左转，向前走，可以感到一股商业气息迎面扑来，有卖炒粉的，卖泡粉的，还有水果店、衣服店、理发店……

不一会儿就来到天主教堂，你如果在大门口前，向上望一定可以看见十字架，外面显得有些破旧，里面保存得完整，有许许多多的座位，小朋友是不能进去的。

看完了教堂，就来到了我们的余江二中，你可以看见雄伟的大门，里面的一排大树，到了夏天，它可以让你在下面乘凉，继续往前走，你就会看到孔子的雕像，二中的里面有一颗千年槐树，它经历过什么，也是很少有人知道的。

看完余江二中来到我们的锦江小学。周一升国旗的时候，旗台前人山人海，大家唱着国歌，望着国旗，敬礼。同时，还会发每周的明星班级奖，如果念到你们班上，又激动又高兴，就会大声说“耶。到了大课间的时候，大家玩得可开心啦，笑声不断;到了静享阅读的时候，安静得有点可怕。

从锦江小学出来，右转，就来到了老街，那可是以前的锦江镇最繁华的地方，可是现在那地方变得萧条，房子也有点破旧不堪。沿着老街一直走，就来到了老衙门，衙门里面经过维修，焕然一新。在它的前面就是古城墙，那个古城墙是用来防止洪水的，古城墙旁边就是我们的母亲——信江河，那是洲和通锦江的一条路，到了端午节的那天，这里人山人海，人声鼎沸，大家争先恐后地来这里看划龙舟的情景。

这就是我的家乡千年古镇——锦江镇，如果你有机会的话，一定要过来看一看哦。

2009年北京卷高考英语满分作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

我家可是一个小小动物园，有爸爸妈妈，爷爷奶奶，我和二宝组成。

妹妹是一个不折不扣的小猴子，一看见桃子双眼就发光，于是忍不住咬一口，咬两口……直到吃的桃子只剩核了才主口，而且还是一个“猴子财迷”，听见钱硬币碰击的声音就会说：“我要币!我要币!”

爸爸是一头老黄牛，整天奔波在外，不是出差就是加班，每天都要晚上十、十一点才能回来，爸爸自己连一分钱都不花，而对我是万分照顾，要什么就买什么，真像一头任劳任怨的老黄牛。

妈妈虽然不爱吃肉，但是很严厉，凶猛十分像一只母老虎，有一次记得英语单词考了十个，而我错了八个，我没当回事，一回家，我就玩了起来，妈妈一看到英语单词卷，便吼道：“宿筱瑜，你赶快去改英语单词!”我一看妈妈的眼里要冒出火来，赶紧去改英语单词，生怕妈妈伸出锋利的“爪子”。

爷爷像一个巨型麻雀，从早上买完菜到进家门，嘴里的话根本没有停下来的时候，而且每天都会搞砸一件事，不是饭糊了就是汤洒了，没有一天不消停的。

奶奶就像是一位驯兽师，训练完爸爸训练我，训练完我后再训练妹妹。而且家里的财政大权也归奶奶管，买什么东西，多少?都要归奶奶管。奶奶十分爱花，买花的时候又砍到最低价才买，而且买回来也会精心照顾花，她总是像一匹骏马飞奔，让人想到“老马伏枥，志在千里”。

这就是我们家的小小“动物园”。

小编导语：小升初英语满分作文:我的美好的假期是小编为你准备的小升初英语满分作文:我的美好的假期。想要写好英语作文同学们就一定要多看看优秀范文。供你学习参考。

I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

高考英语满分作文 Air

Air

Air is all around us. Its around us as we walk and play. From the time we were born, air was around us on every side. When we sit down, it is around us. We live in air.

All living things need air. Living things cant live without air. We can go without food or water for a few days but we cant live for more than a few minutes without air. We take in air. When we are working or running, we need more air. When we are asleep, we need less air.

We live in air, but we can not see it.

We can only feel it. We can feel it when it is moving. Moving air is called wind. How can you make air move? Here is one way. Hold an open book in your hands in front of you. Close it quickly. What can you feel? What you feel is the air.

空气

空气包围着我们，当我们走路和玩耍的时候，它在我们周围。从我们诞生之日起，空气就在我们周围了。当我们坐下时，它在我们身边。我们生活在空气中。

所有生物都需要空气，没有空气生物就不能生存。没有水和食物，我们可以生存几天，但是没有空气几分钟我们都无法生存。我们吸进空气。当我们工作或跑步时，需要较多空气。当我们睡着时，需要的空气会少一些。

我们生活在空气中，但我们看不见它。

我们只能感觉到。当空气运行时，我们可以感觉到它。运动的空气形成风。你怎样使空气运动呢?有一种办法，手中拿一本展开的书放在面前，快速合上书，你能感觉到什么?你感觉到的就是空气。

Good to Enhance Our Social Experience 增长社会经验

Nowadays,social experience has increasingly been put into a significant position in jobhunting. As the result, some people advocate that college students should enhance their social experience instead of putting emphasis on academic studyonly. And I am in favor of the above view that it is good to enhance our social experience.

如今，社会经验在找工作中已被放在一个越来越重要位置。因此，有些人认为大学生应该加强他们的社会经验而不是只注重学术研究。我同意上述观点，提高我们的社会经验是好的。

There are a few reasons accounting for my opinion. First of all, there is no denying that social experience makes a great contribution to our job hunting because we are usually asked to tell these experiences or information when seeking jobs.In addition, enhancing social experience is a good way to increase our knowledge and broaden our horizon. The more social experience we collect, the easier for us to understand various people and things. What is more, it is also beneficial for seeking our interest and choosing our occupation. These experiences we have collected will offer information and direction for our choice in occupation and friendship establishment.

我的观点的几个原因。首先，不可否认的是，社会经验为我们找工作做出了很大贡献因为在我们找工作的时候经常要求讲述这些经验或信息。此外，增加社会经验是增加我们的知识，开阔我们视野的好方法。我们获得更多的社会经验，我们就更容易了解不同的人和事物。更重要的是，它也有利于我们寻找兴趣和选择自己的职业。我们获得的这些经验在择业和建立友谊中会为我们提供信息和方向。

Therefore,it is good and wise to enhance our social experience. As college students, we should grasp each chance to exercise ourselves and experience various things aswell as try some new things so that we can understand various people and the society better.

因此，提高我们的社会经验是好的，明智的。作为大学生，我们应该抓住每个机会来锻炼自己并经历各种各样的事情，以及尝试一些新的东西，这样我们可以更好的了解不同的人和社会。

高考英语满分作文 学校要不要组织学生春游 The school should organize students outing

春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他.

假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况.

注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽 broaden

70%的学生赞成春游

30%的学生反对春游

1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景;

2. 拓宽视野,增长知识;

3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康.

1. 时间紧,耽误学习;

2. 增加父母经济负担;

3. 担心安全.

Dear Headmaster,

Im writing to tell you the discussion weve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.

范文

Dear Headmaster,

Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.

Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the natures beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. Whats more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.

On the other hand,30% dont like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.

Yours truly

Li Hua

English is the necessary subject to learn. Since I went to school, I have

to learn it. But I am not interested in it because I cant find how useful it

is. Two months ago, there was a new English teacher taught us, I realized that

her teaching method was very different. Before the lesson, she would let us to

listen to the English songs, or sometimes we needed to do role play. It was so

funny for us. We were very interested in the songs. Sometimes we could enjoy the

movie, which just opened my eyes. I saw a different world. I wanted to learn

English well and then search the world.