四年级英语满分作文【合集20篇】

Dear Amy,

亲爱的艾米，

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

我是李华从中国新华中学。我很抱歉听到你有给你带来了巨大的痛苦，肺癌。但你应该意识到你是年轻的，有一个光明的前途。所以，站起来对抗疾病!我相信你会赢的。据悉，美国抗癌协会将捐出三美分每安慰信你收到。所以我要告诉你的情况，我所有的朋友，请他们给你写信。这样，你将为你被治愈，有足够的钱。希望你能很快好起来。

Yours,

你的，

Li Hua

李华

今日，我一觉睡醒，发现家里的气氛和平时不一样，原先，我家中有客人，我忙说：“欢迎;欢迎来我家，孙悟空。”

早上，我和孙悟空坐在沙发上看电视，我打开电视，可是孙悟空去哪了?原先他爬到电视里去了，点来点去，不时还;现实生活中技术太发达了，这点都点不动，技术发到达死机了吗!”我笑了笑，对孙悟空说“孙悟空”点了，再点快出来，我家电视都要被你点坏了!”

吃午饭了，桌子上有很多桃子，我和孙悟空大三下五除二就吃完了，然后出去玩。到了院子，孙悟空变出了一朵云，我坐在云朵上，飞到了房顶上，他又变出一匹马，我骑在了上头，冲出房顶，我吓了一大跳，天啊，没想到立刻变成了会飞的马，真是天马行空的自由啊!

午时，我忽然想到作业还没写完，赶紧要回家。孙悟空在我身边说：“作业根本不是什么大事，忙什么呢?”但我还是紧张，做不完要挨打了。孙悟空跟着我回家，我一边做作业，一边听他给我讲花果山上的事。

第二天清晨醒来，我发现孙悟空不见了，估计他回天宫了。哎，好可惜呀!

With the development of science and technology, more and more rich, along with the people on the street also slowly up more private cars, people gradually away from the low carbon life. Continue like this, will also affect other creatures, the earth will disappear from the universe.

That will not save the earth? No, as long as from now on, our action, and save the planet, save yourself - low carbon life!

Speaking of low-carbon life, since I can remember, my grandfather would help me to develop a good habit - which would be some waste paper and the cartons are collected, and then get a junkyard to sell. I still dont understand what then, is to save, now think about, if everybody can do so, the less we human beings will be able to cut down many trees! Every time I went to the supermarket shopping with my family, I will remind adults take environmental protection bag, normally we buy drinks will try to buy carton, it can reduce the "white pollution". Remember once in the supermarket, I saw a mother can toothpaste, get down, can say something like that to squeeze toothpaste is very clean, that can save a point. I said, "you see, it is made of plastic". Mother dont understand what that means. I say again: "in order to save a little toothpaste and make the earth a few more white trash, have what good"? Mom suddenly enlighted, even said: "yeah, yeah! This invention is really not worth ah"!

Low carbon living there are a lot of tips! Such as water washing a face can be used to flush the toilet, watering the flowers. Washing machine wash clothes of water can be rigged up with small basin, which can be used to clean the floor, wipe furniture... These are all we can do some things at ordinary times.

You see, low carbon life is so simple! Let us act together: everyone is to do with me!

随着科技的发展，随着人们越来越富裕，大街上的私家车也慢慢地多了起来，大家渐渐地远离了低碳生活。再这样下去，还会影响到其它生物，地球将从宇宙中消失。

那地球会不会没有救了呢?不，只要从现在开始，我们行动起来，拯救地球，拯救自己——过低碳生活!

说起低碳生活，从我记事起，外公就帮我养成了一个很好的习惯——将一些废纸和纸箱都收集起来，然后拿到废品收购站去卖。那时我还不懂什么，只当是节约，现在想想，要是每个人都能这样做的话，那我们人类将可以少砍多少树呀!每次我和家人去超市购物，我都会提醒大人带上环保袋，平时我们买饮料会尽量买纸盒装的，那样可以减少“白色污染”。 记得有一回在超市，我妈妈看见一个可以挤牙膏的东西，就要买下来，说那样的话可以把牙膏挤的很干净，那可以节省点。我却说：“你看，这是用是塑料做的”。妈妈不明白是什么意思。我又说：“为了节省点一点牙膏而使地球上又多了一些白色垃圾，有什么好的”?妈妈恍然大悟，连说：“是呀，是呀!看来这个发明的确是得不偿失呀”!

低碳生活其实还有很多小窍门呢!比如洗脸过的水可以用来冲马桶，浇花;洗衣机里洗衣物的水可以用一个个盆子装起来，可以用来擦地板，擦家具……这些都是我们平时力所能及的一些小事。

你看，低碳生活其实就是这么简单!让我们一起行动起来：人人做到我做起吧!

敬爱英语老师：

您好。

今天，是我们的不对，上课您来了许久，我们还在说话玩耍，我也反思到是我们的不对，请您原谅我们吧!

我们是因为爱上副科的诱惑之心，才使我们这么大胆的说话，我们也不是故意的，老师您原谅我们吧!小小的粉笔就是你的双手，上课的铃声就是你征程上的冲锋号角。为了我们您废寝忘食，为了我们您鞠躬尽瘁，您无怨无悔，心甘情愿!多少个日日夜夜你无眠，多少回风风雨雨你闯过。一路的酸甜苦辣，一路的欢声笑语，您与我们一起渡过，我们的一声感激会让你甜蜜永久。您像蜡烛一样，燃烧自己，照亮别人。

老师，您尽职尽责，铁面无私，作为组长也应该这样，我要向你学习。

老师，请原谅我们，我向您再次致敬!

写信人：

说起我家，很多朋友说我的家就像一个小小的动物园，住着“大老虎”“大熊”“老黄牛”“老树懒”“小绵羊”。我们是幸福的一家人，现在让我给大家一一介绍我的家庭成员。

我的妈妈像凶猛的“老虎”，她能干又“凶猛”。比如，我写作业不认真，她就会像凶猛的老虎一样“扑”过来。或者有时我贪玩儿不写作业，她也会像凶猛的老虎一样“扑”过来，平时，都是妈妈做家务，每天上班回来非常累，但她还一直坚持着。

我的爸爸胖胖的，像一只“大熊”。记得有一次，我肚子疼，但是外面很冷，可爸爸什么也没说，用他的衣服裹起我就赶往诊所，走着走着，我就看到爸爸额头流下的汗珠。终于到了诊所，医生为我检查，我的肚子不那么疼了，可是爸爸却因为着凉感冒了。

我姥爷最勤劳，像一只“老黄牛”。每天早上五点就起床，你看，做饭买菜、开车……他干得井井有条，他很喜欢帮助别人，所以也很受人尊敬。

我姥姥很懒，像一只树懒。她每天都睡到九十点钟，走路时也很慢，记得有一次，我和姥姥比赛走路，可我都已经到终点了，姥姥刚走到一半，过了好一会，她才慢悠悠到达终点。

最后就是我了，我就像一只“小绵羊”。不仅可爱还非常懂事，记得我五岁那年，妈妈上班回来非常累，于是我赶快跑进厨房，为妈妈烧水泡脚，妈妈边泡脚边说：“我的宝贝长大了，真懂事!”

我的一家是幸福的，它充满了阳光，充满了温暖，我无时无刻不在为我是这个家的一员而感到自豪!

I really had a wonderful summer holiday. I finished doing my homework on time and prepared for the new lessons. I visited my grandparents and spent a week with them. There I helped my parents with the housework and climbed the mountain with them. I do sports with my friends nearly every afternoon. Besides, my parents and I went to visit Shanghai and we enjoyed ourselves very much. Whats more, I also read some interesting books and went to movies with my friends. What a happy and meaningful summer holiday.

My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall, plunge into a ponytail. Her little mouth, the nose is not high not low, eyes in the dark, dark, bright, seems to be god.

My mothers temper very urgent. If I have the wrong, my mother got angry. On one occasion, my math oral one fault, mother was severely criticized me. Another time, I play with my brother, dont be careful the younger brother cry, mother also criticized me, also let me apologize to him.

Mom is very concerned about me. The last time I was ill that day, while I was sleeping in the evening, mother also get up to me to take medicine, temperature. I want to use my good grades to repay my mother.

Mother is a hard life, work all day and night. At home doing the housework, kindergarten to teach children, goes to school themselves. Its busy and busy not to come. But learning is not for me to relax, to give every day I check my homework and signature.

Mother doesnt like pets, also do not watching TV. Whenever you have a second reading, every other week, will take me to the library once.

Mother likes to eat fish, I said she is a little cat; Mother likes to chew bones, I said she is a little black dog; Mother likes to eat pork, I said she is a little tiger. Mother not picky about food, I want to learn from her.

I think mom is very good. I like it very much, mom.

我的妈妈在我眼里是最漂亮的。她的个子不高，扎了一个马尾辨。她的嘴巴小小的，鼻子不高不低，眼睛黑黑的、亮亮的，看上去有神。

妈妈的脾气很急。如果我有错，妈妈就发火。有一次，我数学口算错一题，妈妈就严厉批评我。还有一次，我跟弟弟玩，不小心把弟弟弄哭了，妈妈也批评我，还让我向他道歉。

妈妈很关心我。上次我生病的那天，在晚上我睡觉的时候，妈妈还起床给我吃药，量体温。我要用我的好成绩来报答妈妈。

妈妈是个劳碌命，一天到晚都做事。家里做家务，幼儿园里教小孩，自己还要去读书。真是忙也忙不来。但对我的学习一点也不放松，每天要给我检查作业和签名。

妈妈不爱养宠物，也不爱看电视。一有空就看书，每隔一个星期，就要带我去一次图书馆。

妈妈喜欢吃鱼类，我说她属小猫咪;妈妈喜欢啃骨头，我说她是小黑狗;妈妈喜欢吃猪肉，我说她是小老虎。妈妈不挑食，我要向她学习。

我觉得妈妈很不错，我很喜欢妈妈。

As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.

When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.

After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.

我们都知道，我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功，并得到别人的尊重。在我看来，成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。

当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢用手做东西。有一次，我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子，我通常做的，但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况，我真的很想放弃。然而，经过一次思考，我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分，最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴，因为我的创造力，我得到了第一个奖。

之后，我明白每当我们面对麻烦，抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。

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导语：小编为你整理，每年全国各地的高考英语满分作文，说不定其中就有你不知如何下笔的类型。拿起你的笔记来记录吧，为你的英语作文添亮点，让英语成绩更出色。

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【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫苏琳和她的母亲白云。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、 自我介绍; 2、祝贺苏琳生日; 3、感谢工作人员; 4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

高考英语满分作文 Beijing Olympic Games and Me

The year of 2008 is getting closer and closer to us. We need to take actions from now on to prepare for the game. What we need to do most is to work on our disadvantages and shortcomings. As a student of Senior high, I can do my own part. Although I can’t transform our city into more a beautiful place on my own, I can help Beijing in small ways and encourage our classmates and people around me to follow my lead.

Let me take the environment for example, the atmosphere around Beijing is quite disappointing, factories and cars keep giving off exhausts into the air, we can hardly see the blue sky with our naked eyes, because the sky is covered with a thick layer of harmful substances. The sky is gray instead of blue. To our delight, the government has passed some laws of protecting the air, and we can do something useful, too. For example, whenever we go out for a long distance, ride the bike or take the buses and subways instead of taxis. You may not have a clue how it works. Of course doing that only by one person is far from enough, but we can let more people do that together. In that case the result may be more than we bargained for.

Another thing we need to work on is our English skills. Teachers and parents often put great emphasis on our English skills especially listening and speaking. I want to be a volunteer in 2008, to be an interpreter. For now, I must do something helpful to improve my spoken English. Rome isn’t build in a day, so is English. It can’t be improved in a day or two. It takes time and energy. There are no shortcuts to improve your spoken English; the most productive way is to grab all opportunities around you to open your mouth. For instance, taking part in all kinds of English contests is a good way, you can meet some excellent contestants, and you can share the experience of learning and some good method of learning. I will keep participating in all English activities to polish up my English. I’m sure by the year of 2008, I will be able to master English well just as my mother tongue.

All in all, I’m sure that Beijing Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Games in history. I believe our long-cherished dream will be fulfilled in a perfect way!

2008年离我们越来越近了，我们必须从现在开始采取行动，来为奥运会做准备。我们最需要做的，是克服缺点和改进不足之处。作为一名高中生，我们可以做我们力所能及的事情。虽然我不能光靠我自身的力量把这座城市妆点得更美丽，但我可以用自己的方式，来改变北京并且鼓励我的同学们和我周围的人和我一起做。

让我以环境为例，北京周围的大气环境比较令人失望，工厂和汽车不断地向空中排放废气，我们几乎用肉眼看不到蓝色的天空了。因为天空被一层厚厚的有害物质所覆盖， 天空成了灰色，而不是蓝色。令我们高兴的是，政府已经出台一些保护大气环境的相关法规。我们呢，也可以做一些有用的事情。比如说，每当我们要出远门的时候，骑自行车或乘坐公交车和地铁来代替出租车。你可能不知道这会有什么用。当然，只靠一个人的力量是远远不够的，但是我们可以让更多的人一起去做。 这样的话，结果才有可能收效显著。

我们需要做的另一件事，是提高我们的英语水平。老师和家长总是着重强调要提高我们的英语能力，尤其是听力和口语方面，在2008年，我想成为一名志愿者，做一名口语翻译。现在我必须做一些有助于提高我口语的事情。“罗马非一日建成”，英语也不可以在一、两天内得到提高。它需要花费很多的时间和精力，在提高口语方面，没有捷径可走，最有效的方式就是抓住身边的机会开口讲英语。比如：参加各种英语竞赛是一种很好的方式。你会遇到些非常优秀的选手，与他们交流学习体会，借鉴好的学习方法。我将继续参加各类英语活动，来提高我的口语能力。我相信在2008年，我将会像掌握母语一样熟练掌握英语。

总之，我相信，2008北京奥运会将是有史以来最出色的奥运会之一，我坚信，我们长时间以来的梦想会以完美的方式得以实现。

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is ZhangJian.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫章健。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

An old woman has a cat. The cat is now very old. She can not run fast, and she can not bite. One day the old cat sees a mouse. she jumps and catches the mouse. But she cannot bite it. So the mouse gets out of her mouth and runs away.Then the old woman is very angry because the cat cannot kill the mouse. She begins to beat the cat. The cat says to her, "Dont beat me. Be friendly to me. When I was young, I did good work for you."

一位老妇有一只猫，现在已经很老了，她不能跑得很快，也不能咬人。一天，老猫看到一只老鼠，她跳起来捉住了老鼠，但她咬不住他，所以，老鼠从她的嘴里逃跑了。老妇非常生气因为猫不能杀了那只老鼠，她开始打猫，猫对她说：“不要打我，友好地对待我。我年轻的时候，我为你做了很多工作。”

下午，我手捧《西游记》坐在沙发上津津有味地看着。渐渐地，我的眼睛朦胧了……

“咦?黄子汉，你怎么在这儿呢?”突然，孙悟空出现在我的眼前。“你怎么认识我?”“是你把我从五指山下救出来的，难道你忘了?”“你和唐僧现在在干什么呢?”“我们在三打白骨精呢。我带你去看看吧!”

我和孙悟空一起来到一座高山下，来时，惊动了白骨精。它想吃唐僧肉让自己长生不老。狡猾的白骨精变成了，悟空用火眼金睛看了看，发现是白骨精变的，一棒打了过去。唐僧见了，觉得孙悟空故意伤人，念起了紧箍咒。可白骨精用解尸法逃脱了，又变成了个老婆婆。悟空发现老婆婆又是白骨精变的，又打了起来。唐僧生气地认为悟空又故意伤人，再一次念起了紧箍咒。这一次，悟空头疼地不行，直呼救命，我劝说：“不要再念啦，不然，悟空会受不了的。”这回，白骨精又逃走了。它最后又变成了个老爷爷，可最后还是被孙悟空打死了。唐僧是肉眼凡胎，他哪能认出这3个人都是妖怪变的呢!他认为悟空打死了3个普通人，再一次念起了紧箍咒，悟空在地上一个劲的打滚……

“醒醒——!”我被妈妈的叫喊声吵醒，原来那是一个梦啊!我懂得了孙悟空机智勇敢，为了正义，不惧紧箍咒，打死了白骨精，为民除害，这种精神值得我们学习。

Are parents, gave me precious life; Are parents, let me come to this beautiful planet; Is the parents, with love in my hold up over a rain umbrella...

At home, good, have left us; In the middle of the night, we all go to bed, there are two familiar figure in the busy, father for our future thinking, mother is knitting a sweater for us. Mother knitted sweaters warm my body not only, more the warmth of my heart.

I want to thank my parents, I want to sincerely say to parents: "you hard."

What kind of parents to return? With what to show filial obedience parents? There is only one answer: with excellent grades in return for them, cant let parents work in vain.

Thank you very much, my respected parents!

是父母，给了我宝贵的生命;是父母，让我来到这美丽的星球;是父母，用爱在我的上空撑起了一把遮风挡雨的伞……

在家中，好的都要留给我们;在夜里，我们都睡觉了，还有两个熟悉的身影在忙碌着，父亲在为我们的未来思考着，母亲在为我们编织毛衣。母亲亲手编织的毛衣不仅暖和了我的全身，更温暖了我的心。

我要感谢父母，我要真心地对父母说一声：“你们辛苦了。”

用什么来回报父母?用什么来孝敬父母?只有一个答案：用优异的成绩来回报他们，不能让父母的心血白费。

感谢你们，我尊敬的父母!

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Time flies. In the past six years, primary like by the breeze. May the joy of my school to make my unforgettable. It is recorded in the process of growing I recorded my dribs and drabs, after the success of joy, also with my hard sweat...

Remember the sports meeting, our class in the class, and sports scores and back to the moral FengShangJiang two awards. This news, as a member of the class is glad I. "Because," the relay a key for my class won the honour.

Until now, I even never chu remember classmates in the preparation of the determination and the spirit of striving, when there is a classmate off, they quickly grabbed the baton toward the opposite end, every student rushed the look in the eyes are filled with firmness: it is certain to win. In the game of "red-hot", in the first player to finish in the "go" by NaHanSheng neutralization of cheering, we won!

When the footprints on the school playground strings, when the sunset dyed red in the face, we when we heartily cheers and flip the moment, are deeply in my memory album frames. The red in the face and smile and smile and even the waist. I know, that is the joy of success to my school.

我的英语老师姓沈林，大家都叫她ms林，她又是我们班的班主任。她长着一双明亮的眼睛，亮得像一汪清水，山着亮光。一头乌黑的长头发，端庄美丽的脸庞给人和蔼的感觉。

上英语课的时候，英语老师轻盈地走到讲台上，用英语说：“上课，同学们好！”我们说：“老师好！”

她讲课时，眼睛不时地扫视大家，使大家感到害怕，不敢做小动作。她讲课声音清脆，讲得生动，使我们听得津津有味，连我们班的“淘气大王”也专心地听课了。我平常爱和同桌讲话，可是现在竟然也全身心地投到了ms林绘声绘色的讲课中去了。

从她的讲课中，我们可以看出，ms林是一位好老师。

我真幸运，现在有了这样一位好老师教我。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories， schools， hospitals， cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[My Home Town初三英语满分作文

我的英语老师中等个子，不胖也不瘦，她长着一双明亮的大眼睛，好像会说话似的。当你做了不应该做的事时，她就会用责备的眼神盯你好一会，知道你低下头来承认错误为止；当你做了令她高兴的好 事时，她便用含笑的眼睛足足看你两分钟，好像是在欣赏一件什么宝贝似的。

她对我们的学习，要求很严厉：课文要背熟，句子要会写，单词要记牢。有一次，有位同学单词不过关，老师让他练会，可是他直到放学也没练。于是放学后老师就陪着他练，知道练会为止。就这样 不是我们班的每一个同学成绩落后。

一次，英语老师布置了一个非常非常多的作业：M1—M10的单词一词8个，放学前必交！而当时已是第六节课！同学们赶紧奋笔疾书，写啊——为了节省时间，同学们看了一眼单词后，默记下来，然后快 速地写八遍。终于，大家都交上了作业。这时大家发现：默写的单词都记下来了！原来这是老师让我们背住单词的方法！

可有时，他还会闹出一些小笑话。有一次，老师给我们讲练习册，本来是要讲第一单元和第二单元的，可是她刚讲完第一单元就把练习册给收了。同学们七嘴八舌地说：“老师，第二单元还没讲呢！ ”“对呀！”“对呀！”老师这才恍然大悟：“快！快把练习册传下去！”我们都笑个不停。

这就是我们的英语老师，有可亲又可敬。

dear dick,

how time flies! i’m very glad to hear from you again. you want to know what is going on in schools in china? in a word, everything has changed. every school takes part in the campaign of reducing learning load. in the past, i used to study until 11:30 on weekends. but now i can arrange things on my own, such as reading books, visiting museums, or taking computer lessons in my weekend days. in the evening i can watch news on tv or read newspapers. what’s more, my parents support me. they said although i was a student, i didn’t have to work all day long. i think the idea of reducing learning load is well accepted by everyone.

best wishes,

yours,

li hua

你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：

1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法;

2. 举例说明理由。

注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。

满分作文2

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”

在英语阅读周，我的一个同学推荐了一个报价给我们，这是这样的：“你的未来取决于许多事情，但主要是在你。”

As far as I’m concerned, I completely agree with the view. Of course, our future depends on many things such as our living environment, opportunities, luck, others’ help and etc. But it is we ourselves that determine our future. Our positive attitude, our determination, our confidence and our sense of discipline are the keys to our future.

就我而言，我完全同意这一观点。当然，我们的未来取决于我们的生活环境、机会、运气、别人的帮助等，但我们自己决定了我们的未来。我们积极的态度、决心、信心和纪律是我们未来的关键。

Madame Curie was a good example to us. In her times, women were not admitted to university in her motherland, Poland, so she was forced to leave her homeland and studied in France. She often said: we should believe every one of us can do something and above all we should believe in ourselves. It was her confidence that made her discover radium and later win the Nobel Prize. So I firmly hold the belief that our future is in our hands.

居里夫人是我们的好榜样。在她的时代，妇女在她的祖国，波兰不承认，所以她被迫离开她的祖国，在法国学习。她常说：“我们应该相信我们每个人都能做些什么，首先我们应该相信自己。是她的信心，使她发现镭，后来赢得了诺贝尔奖。所以我坚信我们的未来是在我们手中。