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小学四年级英语作文:OurMonitor

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This is Lin. She is from Beijing. She studies very hard.In class she can answer theteachers questions very quickly. Lin loves her classmates and often helps them with their lessons. Everybody says she is a very good monitor.

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篇1:关于时间的四年级英语作文

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Time is the most valuable for people, because you can never own it again after it goes. When I was little child, my parents always told me that I should treasure my time. However, I seldom trusted in them because I thought that I just a little kid and I have plenty of time. But after I went to middle school, I changed my view. I spend all the day in school, having classes, and after class, I have to spend some time in study. That is to say, I do not have much time to play. Therefore, I realize that time is valuable and I should make a good plan for my life, so that I can live a rich life.

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篇2:初中英语满分

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I like drawing. It does bring me happiness. As a kid I was keen on those

lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes.

It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings. And then I

took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well.

But at that time I just did it for fun. Years went by I got into a long

period of time filled with pressure in study. And I found it so good a way to

relax.

It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living but bacame my

friend. Since that time I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who

can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life.

This is my hobby not just a hobby but also a true friend.

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篇3:初中英语满分

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Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first,

I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keep

studying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did my

homework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over other

subjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But it

did not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me to

relax and had a good rest, I needed to be patient and made progress step by

step. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.

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篇4:四年级关于端午节英语作文

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五月初五,是端午节。说起端午节,我还知道它另外的名字呢!如端阳节、诗人节、女儿节等。

The fifth day of May, is the Dragon Boat festival. When talking about the Dragon Boat Festival, I know that it is another name! As the Dragon Boat Festival, poet Festival, daughter festival.

端午节吃粽子是为了纪念古代诗人屈原的。屈原一生写了许许多多的着名诗篇,提出过许许多多爱国政治主张,但是楚王不采纳。最后,楚国国土被侵占,屈原满怀忧愤,跳江自尽。人们为了纪念他,祭奠他,在每年的这一天,就把粽子和许多的好吃的投到江里,目的是不让鱼儿吃屈原的尸体。

People eat Zongzi on Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan. Qu Yuan wrote many famous poems, put forward many patriotic political views, but he does not accept. Finally, the land was occupied, Qu Yuan was indignant, jump into the river. In order to commemorate him, for he, on this day of the year, put the dumplings and a lot of good to Jiang Li, the purpose is not to let the fish eat Qus body.

端午节那天,我问妈妈粽子是怎么做的,妈妈说:“粽子是用翠绿、鲜嫩的芦苇叶包着雪白的糯米和蜜枣包的,如果没有蜜枣的话,可以用豆子等代替。熟它,需要煮一个晚上。煮熟以后,剥开变成墨绿色的芦苇叶,就可以看见洁白的糯米和枣团在里面,既好吃又甜,并且吃不腻。它既是开胃的美食,又是营养丰富的滋补品。

The day of the Dragon Boat Festival, I asked my mother how to do dumplings, mother said: "the dumplings are made of green, fresh white glutinous rice wrapped in reed leaves and prune packets, if not with words, can be replaced with beans. Well, it takes all night to cook. After cooked, peeled reed leaves into green, you can see the white glutinous rice and jujube group inside, both delicious and sweet, and do not eat greasy. It is not only an Food, is nutritious tonic.

端午节真快乐,真有趣!我又学到了知识,增长了见识。过端午节真好!

Happy Dragon Boat Festival really, really interesting! I learned knowledge, growth of knowledge. Dragon Boat Festival is really good!

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篇5:我的英语老师四年级学生作文400字

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老师您是辛勤的园丁,我们就是一棵棵小树苗,您不断修剪我们的枝叶,让我们健康茁壮成长。

我们的英语老师,有一头乌黑乌黑的头发,特别的开朗,活泼,记得在我上三年级下学期的时候,老师眼看着快要到学期末了,为了让大家考好成绩,就不断的出卷子,让我们做卷子,多见见题型,这样我们就可以考好成绩,可每次我都考不好,我打算放弃不在练老师发的卷子了,老师这个时候走过来,说:“不要灰心,不要放弃,要时时刻刻的提醒着自己,我一定行。”在老师的话中我有所感悟,并知道了老师对我的希望,老师鼓励我每做一份卷子,她检查一份,当我做了数不清的卷子时,我终于考了一个100分,期末考试到来了,我怀着一颗紧张的心来到了考场,考试开始了,当时卷发的我说了的时候,我大吃一惊,心惊胆战,这么难的题,我能考100分么?就在这个时候,我的心里突然想起了老师的那句话,就是,加油、加油一定是100分,啊!老师谢谢你对我的鼓励,当考试结束后,我果然是100分。

老师谢谢你,我爱你张老师。

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篇6:英语满分作文夏天

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八月盛夏,晴空万里,天上没有云彩,太阳把地面烤得滚烫滚烫的。那么关于夏天英语作文怎么写?接下来小编为大家搜索整理了英语满分作文夏天,希望对大家有所帮助。

Summer is the second season in a year. It is between spring and autumn. The sun of summer is the hottest; the water of summer is the warmest; the places of interests in summer are the most crowded throughout the world.

Firstly, summer is students the most favourite season because their longest vacations of the year are in summer. Many of them try to enrich their social and healthy life by participating in a number of interesting outdoor activities, include of camping with friends and family members, going to the beach or swimming at public pools, traveling and sightseeing locally and nationally. However, some of them try to make good use of their vacations in gaining their working experiences in summer. Other students may try to improve their academic performance by going to their summer schools.

Secondly, summer is a pleasant season for all kinds of cold foods and juicy fruits. Ice cream is our all time favourite dessert. Yeh, I love ice cream so much. I have to eat some ice cream almost everyday in summer. There are a lot of fresh fruits selling everywhere. Watermelon is proudly rated to be the most demanding fruit in the season. All kinds of iced drinks are greatly demanded in summer.

Thirdly, summer is a hot season for trendy fashion. You will see many se-xy and curvy babes in your neighbourhood, on the beach, shopping malls, everywhere in your eyes. Hehe. ^_^ All of my girlfriends and I like to wear as leas we wish in the summer. I like to wear shorts and t-shirts all the time. Dont forget to carrry your sunglasses and put on sun tan lotions before going outdoor.

All in all, I love summer very much! You should start practicing your English from now on. As a 15 years old boy, I am more than willing to practice my English with every opportunity which I have come across. Last and certainly not least, I am very happy to help you with this work. I have learnt a lot!

It is very hot in the summer.people dont like going out on summer afternoon because the temperature is high.sometimes it is raining after sun,that is cool!maybe on a summer night.it is thunder and lightning.it is make people scary,and dangerous!so please dont go out when it is thunder.Though the weather in summer is hot,but I think summer is interesting,because we can swim in the poor!that is great!

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篇7:有关英语作文school四年级

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I study in the No.1 PrimarySchool. Its one of the best primary schools in

my city. There are four buildings in campus.Two of them are teaching buildings.

The other two are library and gym. The teaching buildings are huge and the

classroom is large and bright. There are plenty of books in the library. I like

reading books in the library. After class, students like playing in the gym.

It’s a popular place after class. Besides, our teachers are great. They care

much about students. I am happy to study in my school.

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篇8:记一次游戏四年级满分作文

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一节语文课,别的班的课堂上都能听到同学们发言的声音,只有我们班里鸦雀无声,你猜,我们在干什么?答对了!我们在玩“一二三木头人”呢。

一二三木头人的玩法十分简单:首先,抓的人发布命令,发布命令前,所有同学可以随便动。但命令发布玩毕后,所有同学就不许动了,(眨一下眼睛都不行)。

游戏开始了,卢老师开始发布命令:“一不许动,二不许笑,三不许露出小白牙。”刚才炸了锅的班级马上安静了下来。只见,程美琪双手在上,摆出了“耶!”的姿势。朱若萱则两手握拳,摆出了像买萌似的动作。肖韵竹双眼紧闭,双手把眼睛蒙住,一副见不得人的样子;而她的同桌关懿航则举起拳头向他的同桌轮去。作为游戏的一员,我也不敢示弱:我双手重叠放在桌面,把头埋了进去。哈哈!我聪明吧!这样,就算我动了也不会有人发现。“三。二。一。”卢老师喊道,“停!”哦耶!太棒了!我竟然做了一个我自己都不敢相信的事:我竟然坚持到了最后!看看其他同学呢?不是眨眼了就是笑了,这是我玩过最好玩的一次游戏!

一二三木头人这个游戏同学们都十分喜欢玩,喜欢玩这个游戏的主要原因是:它能够锻炼我们的自我控制能力。就像我,已经能坚持那么久了!要是已后有机会的话,我还要玩一次!对了!差点忘了对大家说,如果你们想玩的话,欢迎来到四年一班。

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篇9:小学四年级英语作文:myteacher

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My teacher has a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, rosy lips and a head of black hair. Talk very friendly, I love her.

My teacher is very love us, once I was ill, burning violently, I felt very dizzy, fell to the ground, my mother sent me to the hospital immediately, when I woke up, found a teacher and her mother are in my side, I asked my mother, the teacher come mother said: "you faint after the teacher came," from then on, the teacher came to see me every day, back to me with my homework, I listen carefully, the teacher is good, she gave me a few questions, Im all right, the teacher said: "you must study harder, recover at an early date, the students are waiting for you back."

After the doctor and his mothers care and hard care, my disease good, finally, my mother sent me to school, is to catch up with our class quizzes, I finished all the questions, dont know the right, after a day, the teacher hair, the mood of the students were all very nervous, I also included, when the teacher shouted my name, I was thinking that, delayed so long, I certainly didnt test good, but the teacher said that my score is 100 points, I cant believe, I took the papers, the teacher said: "must continue to work hard. Im not going to let the teacher down.

Thank you my teacher, I will study hard and with good grades in return for you.

我的老师有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛,红润的嘴唇和一头乌黑的头发。说话十分亲切,我特别喜欢她。

我的老师很关爱我们,有一次我生病了,烧的很厉害,我觉的很头晕,倒在了地上,妈妈立即把我送到了医院,等我醒来后,发现老师和妈妈都在我的身边,我问妈妈老师怎么来得,妈妈说:“你晕倒后老师就来了”,从那以后,老师天天来看我,还给我补习功课,我认真的听,老师讲的可好了,她还给我出了几个题,我全都作对了,老师说:“一定要加紧学习,早日康复,同学们都等着你回去呢。”

经过医生和妈妈的细心和辛苦的照顾,我的病终于好了,妈妈把我送到学校,,正赶上我们班小考,我把题都做完了,不知道对不对,过了一天,老师发卷了,同学们的心情都很紧张,我也包括在内,老师喊到我的名字时,我正在想,耽误了这么长的时间,我肯定没有考好,而老师说我的分数是100分,我都不敢相信了,我拿卷子的时候,老师说:“一定要继续努力”。我不会让老师失望的。

谢谢你我的老师,我一定会好好学习,用好成绩来回报您。

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篇10:充满欢乐的英语课四年级作文

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英语课上,经常能听到我们教室里欢声笑语,这归功于我们的英语老师――余老师。究竟是怎么回事呢?还是让我举个例子说明吧!

那天英语课,我们正好学到“学校”那一课,余老师就在黑板上画了一个学校的简图,一边画,一边教我们怎么读:hall(礼堂),classroom(教室),读到canteen(餐厅)的时候,因为跟中文发音非常相似,所以大家都哄堂大笑了起来,不过记得也牢。

过了一会儿,余老师让我们造“我们在要安静”的句式,我填的是hall,但我把它读成了hell,-,余老师捧腹大笑着对我们翻译:“hell是地狱的意思”,我一脸尴尬地坐下,同学们笑的更欢了。

不知怎么回事儿,赵轩突然喊了一声:“萨拉咪好吃听得见”,被余老师听见了,他立刻对赵轩说:“去外面说十遍‘萨拉咪好吃听得见’”,有几个人不禁捂着嘴偷笑。“给萨拉咪做广告去”,余老师又说。这次我们忍不住了,一起开怀大笑,赵轩也认识到了错误,以后犯这种错误的时候也少了。

下课了,余老师莫名其妙地最后来了一句:“我觉得自己画的画比以前好了耶”,我们先是丈二和尚摸不着头脑,然后就争先恐后地开起了玩笑:“什么呀,还不是一样难看”,“比以前还难看呢!”。。。。。。

我们班上可能有人不喜欢英语,但肯定没有人不喜欢英语课,或许有些不喜欢英语的同学被余老师也弄得喜欢英语了呢!

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篇11:高二期末英语满分

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As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and

more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during

the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes

is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and

mentally. During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness.

What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing

nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. My ten-minute break is

always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free

chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins,

I feel fresh again.

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篇12:The bird and cat_500字四年级英语作文

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once upon a time. there was a house. beside the house there was a bird cage. one day a cat went to eat the bird, so the cat jumped and hit the bird cage.

the bird cage fell down to the ground knocking the bird cages door open. the bird then flew away. so the cat started to chase the bird and the dog chased the cat. however the bird flew on top of the tree. so the cat started to climb the tree and the dog barked at the cat. before the cat could reach the bird, the bird flew away. this caused the cat to fall out of the tree.

the dog then ran away, the bird quickly flew back into his cage and the man from the house carried him safely home.

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篇13:四年级我的乐园满分作文500字

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如果一提到“我的乐园”,那必定是我家堆着一群玩具的一角。这个玩具区就在我屋子的一个墙角旁边,里面摆着各种各样的玩具。有我最喜欢的各种各样的模型,比如:多组奥特曼模型,多架飞机模型,多辆汽车模型,各种枪支模型,恐龙模型等。还有各种积木,魔方,小迷宫,望远镜等玩具。

平时休息的时候,我就来到我的玩具乐园。那里有一个我最喜欢的奥特曼模型,他看起来非常威武,让人感觉他非常有正义感,能消灭一切魔兽。他的旁边还有我那喜欢的两个魔方,我经常拿他们来跟爸爸PK一下,偶尔还能嬴过爸爸,让我对转魔方的速度更加的有自信。剩余的其他各种各样的玩具想玩的时候就随便拿来玩一下了。

我常常在那玩具区玩,有时候仿佛进入了另一个世界。不知道是有关奥特曼的动画片看的多了还是奥特曼玩具玩的多了,总感觉奥特曼就在我的眼前打怪物,首先,奥特曼和那怪物对打一会儿,战斗技巧花样百出,打的差不多了,奥特曼最后来一个绝招,一个激光炮直接把怪物给消灭掉了。

当更多的怪物出现的时候,我就再放上更多的奥特曼,不到一会儿就把这些怪物给消灭了,正义始终会战胜邪恶。让我陶醉其中,忘记了时间,通常在爸爸妈妈的叫唤下,我才回到了现实的世界。

在玩具堆里,看着那些各种各样的玩具,可以让我天马行空的想像各种各样的画面,进入到各种不同的世界,让我非常享受。

这就是我的乐园。我爱我的乐园。

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篇14:四年级我的乐园满分作文500字

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乐园,就是给人带来快乐的地方,有的人的乐园是一个公园,或是一个满是玩具的房间,而我的乐园却是我家的阳台。

我家的阳台面朝南,是长方形的,大约有十二平方米大小。阳台的一角有个书架,里面有很多我喜欢的书。旁边还有一个躺椅,闲暇的时候我会抽出一本书,坐在躺椅上细细品读,经常沉醉其中,忘了时间悄然流逝。

清晨醒来,我拉开阳台上的窗帘,顿时阳光洒满整个阳台。我打开窗户,一边呼吸着新鲜空气,一边眺望远方。隔壁叔叔家养的鸽子也在“咕、咕”叫,似乎也在和我打招呼。多么美好的早晨啊!

中午,阳台里暖洋洋的,我拿出心爱的乐高积木拼出一个机器人,让它和霸王龙大战,有时是机器人赢,有时则是霸王龙赢……而我,则是它们的国王。

晚上,我会在阳台上和爸爸妈妈一起做运动。“一二三四,二二三四……”我和妈妈随着节拍一起做高抬腿。爸爸老是跟不上节奏,他的大肚子让他快不起来,那重心不稳的样子特别滑稽,惹得我和妈妈捧腹大笑,爸爸自己也笑起来,嘴里还说:“老了老了,好汉不提当年勇,跳不动了。”“那为什么妈妈和你一样大,妈妈跳得动,你却跳不动呢?”我反问爸爸。“因为她比我年轻20天!”说完,他笑了起来,我和妈妈也笑起来……

我的乐园虽然不华丽,但是它却承载着我很多美好回忆。

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篇15:我和谁过一天四年级满分作文300字

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今日,我一觉睡醒,发现家里的气氛和平时不一样,原先,我家中有客人,我忙说:“欢迎;欢迎来我家,孙悟空。”

早上,我和孙悟空坐在沙发上看电视,我打开电视,可是孙悟空去哪了?原先他爬到电视里去了,点来点去,不时还;现实生活中技术太发达了,这点都点不动,技术发到达死机了吗!”我笑了笑,对孙悟空说“孙悟空”点了,再点快出来,我家电视都要被你点坏了!”

吃午饭了,桌子上有很多桃子,我和孙悟空大三下五除二就吃完了,然后出去玩。到了院子,孙悟空变出了一朵云,我坐在云朵上,飞到了房顶上,他又变出一匹马,我骑在了上头,冲出房顶,我吓了一大跳,天啊,没想到立刻变成了会飞的马,真是天马行空的自由啊!

午时,我忽然想到作业还没写完,赶紧要回家。孙悟空在我身边说:“作业根本不是什么大事,忙什么呢?”但我还是紧张,做不完要挨打了。孙悟空跟着我回家,我一边做作业,一边听他给我讲花果山上的事。

第二天清晨醒来,我发现孙悟空不见了,估计他回天宫了。哎,好可惜呀!

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篇16:四年级描述母亲节的满分优秀日记

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今天一放学,我就急匆匆地跑到在车里等候的爸爸身边,对他说:”星期六是母亲节,我要给妈妈惊喜,我准备搞一个活动,你和我两个人当主持人,活动有游戏,有唱歌,最后还要给妈妈礼物。“老爸听了非常赞同,高兴地夸我想得周到。

回到家后,我马上钻进房间,偷偷地做给妈妈的礼物。

我先拿超轻彩泥,专心致志地捏了起来,我这副模样被妈妈看见了,妈妈问我为什么不先写作业,我理直气壮地说:”这就是作业。“她说:”还有这作业,真奇怪!“我神秘兮兮地说:”对呀。“很快一朵五彩缤纷的”海洋花“就做好了。

我还要做另一样呢,我打算做美术课上的笔筒,为了与课堂上做的有所区别,我在杯子里放了一个爱心,上面写上”妈妈我爱你“。做完了,我去写活动的主持稿,写完了,心想:”一定让妈妈过一个非常快乐的节日。“

星期六到了,我学完毛笔,王老师说:”后天是什么节?“

我们异口同声地说:”母亲节!“

”对,“王老师又说:”所以每人发一张小贺卡,送给妈妈。“

我听了,兴奋极了,哈哈,又有了一样礼物送给妈妈了。

回到家,我大声宣布庆祝母亲节大会现在开始,妈妈恍然大悟,眼睛睁得大大的,十分惊喜和期待的样子。我和爸爸当主持,先说了一段开场白,然后放了一首《鲁冰花》,还一起跟唱。妈妈最后收到了我的礼物有:海洋花、纸杯爱心、还有小贺卡。妈妈拿到贺卡时看外面还有个红包,就以为是钱,打开一看原来是可爱的小熊贺卡。

我觉得这次母亲节是很有创意的,是的母亲节。

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篇17:四年级英语作文参考:HappyMid-autumnDay

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Today is Mid-autumn Day. I have a big meal at home with my parents and relatives. This is an important festival, so my mother was busy with preparing the dinner from morning. She bought a lot of foods for the dinner. We ate the dinner at 5:30 p.m.. The dinner was very delicious. I was so full. After dinner, we went to theHongTingParkto enjoy the glorious full moon. There were many people in the park. We talked to each other and strangers. Of course, the moon cake was essential. We had a great night there.

今天是中秋节,我同父母和亲戚一起吃了一顿大餐。这是一个重要的节日,所以我妈妈从早到晚都在忙着准备晚饭。她买了很多的食物做晚餐。我们傍晚五点半吃晚饭,晚饭很好吃,我吃得很饱。晚饭过后,我么去红亭公园赏满月。公园里有很多人,不管认识与否,我们互相交谈。当然,月饼是必不可少的。我们在那度过了愉快的夜晚。

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篇18:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇19:四年级关于梦想的英语作文

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人类因梦想而永生,失去理想,生与死无异。人,是为了梦想而活,一个人若是没有梦想,那要为何而活呢?

The dream of eternal life for mankind, lost ideals, life and death is. People, in order to live, if a person does not want to live that dream, why?

我有一个梦,一个简单,却又难以实现的梦。那是一个在远离都市,与自己的家人过着与世无争的日子的梦;而这个梦想与现实的差距,需要用奋斗来拉近。梦想点燃希望,有希望,人才会去奋斗,来达成愿望,进而完成梦想。因此,我有了这个梦想,接着,我要点燃这个希望,进而藉由奋斗来完成愿望与梦想。这就是我这个梦想形成的原因。

I have a dream, a simple, but difficult to achieve the dream. It is a far away from the city, a stand aloof from worldly success days with his familys dream; and this difference between dream and reality, to strive to narrow. Dream of hope, there is hope, will to strive, to desire, and then complete the dream. Therefore, I have this dream, then, I want to ignite the hope, and strive to complete the wishes and dreams. This is my dreams are made of.

要我完成这个梦想,我得先用功读书,才能赚更多一点钱,再找个地方、房子住下来,完成梦想。梦想如一座灯塔,指引着在茫茫人生大海航行的生命之舟,鼓舞你在行程中和波涛对抗、勇往直前,才不会在大学毕业了,却又不知何去何从。活着不能没有抱负,不然就会感到空虚;人要勇敢地去生活,不要逃避那些不愉快的、可怕的东西。不愉快和可怕都是因为不理解,当你理解以后,你就变得不再畏惧、不再恐慌。

I want to finish this dream, I must study hard, to make a little more money, and then find a place to live, the house, to complete the dream. Dream like a lighthouse guides in the vast sea of life, sailing the boat of life, inspire you, and in the march forward courageously against stroke, never graduated from University, but I do not know decide on what path to follow. I cant live without ambition, or you will feel empty; people want to live, dont avoid the unpleasant, terrible things. Unpleasant and frightening is because they do not understand, when you understand, you will no longer fear, not to panic.

我有一个梦,一个美好的梦,一个与世无争又悠闲的梦。

I have a dream, a dream, a dream of stand aloof from worldly success and laid back.

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篇20:关于小学四年级寒假英语日记400字

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【摘要】时间飞逝,2014年的寒假如约而至。新的一年,新的希冀。对于广大小学生朋友来说怎样才能度过一个既快乐又充实的寒假呢?为此小学频道为大家搜集整理了四年级寒假英语日记400字,让大家在享受假期的同时,轻松愉快的安排好自己的学习生活!

February9201Ihavelosttwocomputers,butIhadanotherone.Iboughtitaboutfiveyearsago.Itcanbecalledcurio.Thoughitwasold.Butitcanstillwork.Althoughitworksslowly,Iwaspleased.Icangooninternetagain.Chattingwithmyfriendsisagoodrelaxing.Intheinternet,oneofmyoldfriendsinvitedmetotomorrow’sparty.Hetoldmethatsomefriendswouldgo,too.SoIpromisedtogo.A-ha!Icanseemyoldfriends.Iwasveryhappyandhopeful.

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