四年级英语满分作文（汇集20篇）

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

To Jeff

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信

My favorite cartoon film is "Kung Fu Panda".Because its very funny and

interesting.The story was great and the background was beautiful, it really felt

like an ancient Chinese city.So many people like it.In this cartoon movie the

character who I most like is the panda Arab League valuable.Because it not only

unusual lovable and annoys the human to like, moreover is this cartoon movies

lead .But I did not deny that other roles also very much annoy the affection,

for example tigress (Angelina Jolie), viper (Lucy Liu), praying mantis (Seth

Rogen), hoist crane (David cross) and monkey (Jackie Chan).I from this cartoon

movie middle school: Each people have the merit and the shortcoming, perhaps you

only know your shortcoming, so long as but you look diligently, also will

discover that oneself will have the merit.

【试题回放】

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

【例文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【译文】

亲爱的先生/女士,

来自中国的问候!

我是李华,四川的一个学生。我被一只熊猫的爱人因为我还是个孩子的时候。大约三年前,我很高兴得知白云产下女儿Sulin和我一直看着她成长在你的网站上,。现在,她将是三个。我想祝她生日快乐,来表达我的感谢你的辛勤工作,因为Sulin和她的父母在美国生活愉快、健康的生活。

顺便问一下,我可以要一Sulin了她三岁生日的照片吗?非常感谢你提前。

敬启

李华

一天晚上，我一个人在小区散步。我在看喷泉的时候，灯灭了，周围一片漆黑，看不到手指。啊，怎么回去?突然吓到我了。我看不到前面的路，所以我不得不在黑暗中回家。

看到不远处有人开着灯，我赶紧过去。我看见商店里的人开动机器，“嗡嗡”——尖锐的噪音不停地响着。这家伙太吵了，太吵了，我受不了。如果爆炸了怎么办?我的心像十五个水桶——急于离开。

走着走着，前面的路没有光。风吹得树叶沙沙作响，听起来像是狼的兄弟情谊。路上吱吱嘎嘎的声音吓了我一跳。我会踩到恶心的东西吗?突然，有什么东西从路边冲了出来，好像有个小球出来了，“咻”的一声就到了对面。我以为是老鼠，怕被冲过来的老鼠咬，赶紧抬脚。等到连“鼠影”都消失了，再放下脚，心跳只在耳边回响。

下一步该怎么走?我最好抬头看看星空。慢慢的，我越来越觉得星星月亮在跟着我。我不再害怕了。当我想到自己的经历，世界上应该没有怪物。如果有，那是我自己的心。只要克服恐惧，就没有办法阻止我!

从此，我不再害怕晚上走路，只是注意安全。我的心仍在怦怦直跳，但我的心不再害怕。

A Letter of Application

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary. I would like you to consider me for the position.

My name is Li Min. I am twenty-three years old. I am studying business management in Xiamen University. I will graduate this summer. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well. And I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department. My grades come out top in my department. Whats more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Li Min

亲爱的先生或女士：

我从一则广告上得知你们公司需要秘书。我希望您考虑一下我。

我叫李敏，23岁，现在在厦门大学学习经济管理，今年夏季即将毕业。我精通计算机操作及办公软件的使用，这可以帮助我做好办公室工作。我学了十年英语。在过去的两年里我一直担任本系英语报的一名编辑。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。另外，我非常喜欢办公室工作并且我也认为我能胜任这个工作。如果我能有机会得到这份工作，我会非常感激。

谢谢您的考虑。我盼望着您的回信。

您忠实的朋友

李敏

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories， schools， hospitals， cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[My Home Town初三英语满分作文

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

In the biology class, my teacher likes to assign tasks to us. As a result,

we always need a partner to finish homework. It is hard to find a suitable

partner. I have changed many partners until I met Lucy. Lucy was a new student

here. She just came to this class this semester because her parents changed

their jobs. She asked me to be a team with her and I said yes. I found Lucy and

I had a lot of things in common, like both of us liked to examine books many

times and we were very carefully about experiments. I enjoyed doing homework

with her. She was the best partner.

Learning English, you should develop on the English reading interest. Learning English, you should establish learning goals, in listening speaking reading writing and lots of practice, this will not only make you English is improved greatly, but also make their own shows great interest in English, let you fall in love with english. The method of learning English, will learn the English knowledge into practice, let the life of all English knowledge of the existence of. Cultivate interest in learning English, English debate, or take part in various activities related to english. I think the effect will be good, if you have English improved, you can also communicate with foreigners.

学习英语，你应该发展对英语阅读的兴趣。学习英语，你应该确立学习目标，在听、说、读、写和大量的练习，这不仅会使你的英语有了很大的提高，也会使自己对英语很感兴趣，让你爱上英语。学习英语的方法，将所学的英语知识运用到实践中去，让所有的英语知识的生命存在。培养学习英语的兴趣，英语辩论，或者参加各种有关英语的活动。我认为效果会好的，如果你的英语提高了，你也可以与外国人交流。

Computer has been part of our life. We use it to work or to keep in touch

with our friends. Computer provides people a way to recognize the world and

share resources. For teenagers, they are so crazy about computer games. There

always news reports teenagers playing computer games for a long time. Some

people blame the company to create online games, while others criticize the

school for not educating children well. Actually, parents have much

responsibility to teach their children the danger of playing online game too

much. Whats more, not every child overuses computer, so it depends on their

behavior.

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to travel quite often. Bytraveling, we not only can relax ourselves but also broaden our knowledge circles. From my aspect, I think we can make many friends and travel with them.

现在，越来越多的人会经常去旅游。通过旅游，我们不仅能够放松自己，并且也能开阔我们的视野。在我看来，我们可以在旅游中结识到新朋友和他们结伴同行。

Firstly, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery and relax ourselves. For modern life, we are busy with our work with high pressure. However, when we travel, we will be attracted by great landscape and forget pressure from both work and life.

第一，我们能在欣赏风景之余放松自己。现代生活中，我们整天忙于工作，压力很大。但是，当我们旅游的时候，我们会被美景吸引，暂时忘记工作和生活的压力。

Secondly, we can make friends by traveling. For most travelers, they tend to find many companions to travel with. If you check the internet, you will find that some people will call others to join them for travel. Through this kind of travel, we can meet many different people and make friends with them to broaden our social circle.

第二，在旅游中能够交朋友。对于许多旅游的人来说，喜欢与人结伴同游。如果你到网上搜一搜，你会发现有很多人都会叫其他人加入他们去旅游。通过这种方式的出游，我们能见到各种各样的人，与他们交朋友，扩大我们的交际圈。

Thirdly, we can learn much knowledge form travel. Before you go to somewhere to travel, generally, you need to make plans for your travel. You can find lots of things you don’t know when you make a plan, such as, the origin of a certain area, the customs of different areas, local food and so on.

第三，在旅游中，我们能学到很多的知识。在你想去某个地方旅游之前，通常你需要制定一个计划。制定计划的过程中，你会发现许多你不知道的事情，例如，某个地区的由来，不同地方的人的风俗习惯，当地的美食等等。

In conclusion, we can not only relax ourselves and make new friends but at the same time we can learn much from travel.

总之，通过旅游，我们不仅能放松自己，结识新朋友，同时也能学到新知识。

My father is a humorous person.My father short stature,fine fine thin,white skin,black hair,a head of the “big wave” self-invited roll hair,who would think that he is met at the barbers hot. His colleagues said he is narrowed down fei xiang,I think so too. He is a fine art,is famous in the central south five provinces binding artist,his one-man show has a favorable review in the many famous people. After another wall,he is a funny people,special love kidding,I dont know if all of the art is very humor,I think my dads body is full of humor cells. No matter how tired he how busy work,as long as take a door,exactly,he said,as long as a see me,and immediately he smile,I followed delightful sounds.

我的爸爸是一个幽默的人。我的父亲身材矮小，细瘦，白皮肤，黑头发，一头“大波浪”自来卷的头发，谁会想到他会在理发店烫。他的同事说他是缩小了，费翔，我也这么认为。他是一个很好的艺术，在中南五省的结合是著名艺术家，他的独角戏中有许多著名的人好评。在另一面墙上，他是一个风趣的人，特别爱开玩笑，我不知道如果所有的艺术是很幽默，我想我爸爸的身体充满幽默细胞。无论多累，他工作多么忙碌，只要一进家门，确切地说，他说，只要一见到我，他立刻笑了，我跟着愉快的声音。

I am always shy and afraid of standing in front of a lot of people, so I

dont have many friends. In my heart, I desire to make a lot of friends and hang

out with them. I know my problem. I am not confident and if I show my humor,

surely other students will notice me. So I decide to join activities. I take

part in a drama group. It can not only enhance my confidence, but also helps me

to make friends. Soon I become confident and more students know me. Whats more,

many students ask me to join their group. I conquer my fear and grow up.

我一直没有属于自己的宠物狗，因为妈妈不给我养。但奶奶家的那条小黑狗——阿黑，每当我回老家时，它就会陪伴着我。我真希望，有一天阿黑能到城市里来，跟我一起玩耍。

阿黑的毛色是黑黄相间的，奇怪吧?两颗钻石般的眼睛闪闪发光。阿黑的毛十分光滑，像一匹明洁的丝绸。几颗锋利的牙齿像是镶嵌在嘴巴里似的，使它看起来十分生猛。

阿黑不挑食，馍皮、排骨、蛋糕……它都吃。但它吃不惯狗粮，因为它是农村的狗。

阿黑也很贪吃，有一次我吃着从城市带回去的蛋糕，从它身边路过。阿黑立刻跳了起来“汪汪”直叫。我想，它这是饿了吗?于是，我撕下来一块蛋糕，扔给阿黑，它直接咽下了肚。吃完了，它好像并没吃饱，也没有离开。我就把我手里那块也给了阿黑。它大口大口地吃着，很快便吃完了。然后，它就一动不动地躺在地上，眯着眼，仿佛说：“我吃饱了，别打扰我午休。”

记得还有一次，阿黑被两三只猫咪抓得死去活来，在那嗷嗷直叫。我看不下去了，就想办法把那几只猫咪赶走了。阿黑冲我摇了摇尾巴，然后抱着我的脚，眼里好像充满了泪花，汪汪”直叫，原来狗也会知恩图报啊!

这就是阿黑，真希望它能早日来到我们身边，跟我一起玩呀!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I

was ten years old.

But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I

have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes,

watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there

are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing

English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from

English-speaking countries.

I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

今天我正在睡觉，而且睡得很香，忽然有一个红衣男子把我叫了起来，我一看居然是哪吒，我高兴地叫了起来，真的太开心了!

我和哪吒去了北京天安门，我们直接从天上飞了过去，真的太好了，我们先去故宫玩了一会儿，还发现了一个走丢的小男孩儿，我们帮他找到了家人，游玩了北京天安门广场之后，哪吒又带我去了九寨沟玩了，到了那里我们看见了两丈高的瀑布，好高啊!哪吒还带我爬了大山，山顶上有一个小庙，我进去看到了一尊佛像，我们还在那里烧了香，真的太好玩了!

然后又飞去了洛阳，到了洛阳的一座商场里收了垃圾，帮清洁工打扫了卫生，帮他倒了垃圾，清洁工爷爷送到了家!最后我们当了志愿者，帮老奶奶过了马路，帮走失的小孩子送到了家长身边，帮警察叔叔执勤，这一天真的是太快乐了!我非常喜欢这一天!

叮铃铃闹钟响了，我一看怎么从志愿者变到了床上，我想了一想!哦，原来是一场梦啊!如果是真的就太好了……

It’s a brea f Mnda’s afternn. All friends left the classr. I felt s bring. I thught It’s tie t d se hewr. At the sae tie, a classate said t e: “Can u pla a gae with e?” “Of curse!” I answered with a happ vice.

Then we went t the center f the plagrund. “It’s a gd place.” M classate said.

“What can we d?” I ased.

“I thin we can pla a gae naed ‘Red Ht Pepper’.” She siled and tld e, “It’s a sipping rpe.”

“I guess it will be an interesting gae. u d the first.” I said.

“N prble.” She said. She sipped and sang a sng:“Vinegar, ustard, Pepper, salt. Chili sauce and picles, nins ixed with alt. Catsup, etchup, Red Ht Pepper···”

When she cae t “Catsup, etchup”, she sipped ver ver fast.

“Oh, Lrd! I can’t pla the gae s fast.” I thught.

Suddenl, the ring rang. “We’ll be late!” I shuted. We ran t the classr as fast as we culd. Befre the ring stpped, we had ust arrived the classr. I culd hear her wea vice: “Dear e. ”

I thin “Red Ht Pepper” is a real interesting gae, althugh I can’t pla it ver well.

诚信就是诚实守信，是做人的根本，是中华民族的传统美德。诚实指忠诚老实，言行一致;守信指说话和做事讲信用，说到做到。

Honesty is, life is the fundamental, is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Honest honest, match words with deeds; and to speak and act in good faith, said to do.

古人曰：“君子一言，驷马难追。”记得在《品德与社会》书上多次出现的“曾子杀猪”吗?曾子的妻子要上街买东西，为了摆开儿子的纠缠，唬他说：“娘回来杀猪给你吃。”当曾子的妻子回来看见曾子手举大刀，正准备宰猪时，连忙走上去，说道：“我唬唬儿子，你倒来真的了，快放下刀。”曾子说：“唉!父母乃是孩子的第一任老师，孩子还小，我们大人说话做事，孩子会跟着学的。你骗儿子，就相当于教他骗人呀!因此我们就要履行诺言，给孩子做个好榜样。”话刚说完就将猪给杀了。如果曾子听他妻子的话，家中的猪是保住了，但对他的儿子来说，也许以后再也不会相信他母亲的话，不明白做人需要诚实守信的道理。

The ancients said: "a mans word, can never be withdrawn." Remember that in the book of "morality and society" repeated "Zengzi slaughters a pig"? Whos wife to Shangjie to buy things for my son, entanglement,. He said: "the mother back to you to eat pig." When he saw Zengzis wife came back holding machetes, preparing to kill pig, hurriedly walked up and said: "I frighten son, you come true, quickly put down the knife." Ceng Zi said: "Alas! The parents are the first teachers of the children, the child is still small, we adults do, children will follow. You lied to her son, is equivalent to teach him to lie! So we must carry it out, set a good example for the children." It has just finished killing pigs. If he had listened to his wife, the home of the pigs is saved, but to his son, perhaps in the future will not believe his mothers words, do not understand how to be honest.

《狼来了!》的故事，你们再熟悉不过了吧!故事中的小牧童向山下农民撒了两次谎。当狼群真的来时，他的话再也没人相信了，正因为他的谎言，导致羊群被吃的后果。这个故事难道不是更能告诉我们不诚实守信的严重性吗?

"The wolf is coming!" the story, you are familiar with the story of the little boy! And two times to the mountain farmers. When the wolf really came, his words are not believed, because of his lies, resulting in the sheep were the consequences of eating. This story is not to tell the seriousness we are not honest?

所以，大家要诚实守信!从我做起，从我们身边做起。我们在学校要做一个诚信的好学生，在家中做一个诚信的好孩子。

Therefore, we should be honest and trustworthy! I start from, start from our side. Good students we should make a good faith in school, do a sincere good children at home.

Everyone knows thatFailurealways accompanies us in our life. No matter what we do, none of us can say we will surely succeed, because there is no such thing as plain sailing.

大家都知道,失败总是伴随着我们的生活。无论我们做什么,没有人能说我们肯定会成功,因为没有所谓的一帆风顺。

About failure, different people have different opinions. Generally speaking, on one hand, people think "failure is the mother of success". They think we wont understand the profound meaning of success until we go through failure. On the other hand, for some people, failure is frustration. They think if a person goes through too much failure, he will collapse and lose confidence in his life.

对失败,不同的人有不同的观点。一般来说,一方面,人们认为“失败是成功之母”。他们认为我们不会理解的深刻含义成功直到我们经历失败。另一方面,对于一些人来说,失败是失望。他们认为如果一个人经历太多的失败,他将会崩溃,在他的生活中失去信心。

In my opinion, failure is the footstone and catalyst of the edifice of success. "You dont know what you have until its gone." If you have never lost it, and always get it easily, you will not cherish what you get and own.

在我看来,失败是成功的基石和催化剂的大厦。“你不知道你所拥有的,直到它消失了。“如果你没有失去它,总是很容易,你不会珍惜你所得到的,自己的。

With the development of the Internet， many people are used to shopping

online。 It has become a fashion in our daily life。 Some of us students also join

the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse， you can

buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors。 You can avoid getting

tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time。 When

shopping online， you can choose from more varieties of goods， whose prices are

generally lower.

Every coin has two sides。 Its disadvantages are obvious， too.On the one

hand， it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on

the Internet。 On the other hand， shopping online may cause people to buy goods

that are not badly needed.That’s a waste of money.

All in all， I love shopping online.

《我和天女过一天》

中午写完作业后，我就躺在沙发上看我最喜欢的动画片《舞法天女》。

突然，一阵奇怪的声音传来：“雅薇，雅薇，拉提天女被混舞抓走了!”这是谁在叫我?我东张西望，却发现自己到了一处奇怪的地方。这时，旁边又传来焦急的声音：“我们快去救她呀!”我连忙转头看身后，咦，她们不是《舞法天女》里的法苏天女和朵蜜天女吗?我还没反应过来，她们就把芮闪包塞给了我，并且教我使用舞法，还有变身咒语。我也顾不得多想到底发生了什么事，赶紧跟着她们学会很多看电视时一直羡慕的技能，比如三步跳加圆弧就可以启动芮闪天女的雪晶融雪轰。三滑步加闪星就可以启动芮闪天女的雪晶闪冰雹，而防守舞法只用手挡在胸前，然后说雪晶踏水阵就可以了。

学会之后，我们使用神飞翔到达了混舞徒的底盘，门口有一个粗壮的大胖子看守着，我们必须打败他。"爱炫猫喵轰、月磁兔宝轰、雪晶融雪轰。”我们轮流说出咒语，谁也没想到这一招就把他打得爬不起来了，我们趁他起不来的时间进了大门。刚好其他的混舞徒都在睡觉，我们偷偷地去把提拉救了出来。作为感谢，提拉送了我一把蓝色的小扇子，我高兴得跳了起来。

“哎哟……”原来是我掉到沙发下面去了，才发现原来这是一个梦，真是一个美梦呀，也是我最开心的一个梦。