中考英语大常见错误解析推荐20篇

The Spring Festival is our Chinese nation from ancient to modern times, the

most cautious Chinese traditional festival, during the Spring Festival time,

always waiting for the one family reunion together, talking about the years

harvest, for the New Year filled the bright vision. The children enjoy the

tightened and joyful holidays.

Watch the Spring Festival is coming, this years mother had said but

antithetical couplet, let me down, a few family, it is not a "project" ah, ha

ha. Two days before the Spring Festival, I began to get busy, small

"calligrapher" to start the project, through my huihaopomo, less than half of

the martial arts, home with the red antithetical couplet, "by mountains and

rivers show signs, ushered in the" spring "; drop thousands of monforts million

flowers, Huan, script the script, a piece of art was born, watching the house

full of Spring Festival couplets, mom repeatedly praise not shut up.

Thirty in the morning, I and mom posted antithetical couplet window

Ronaldo, look at my work on the door, red, a new sub population; we took the

mother to the hometown of antithetical couplet posted on my hung Wen, see the

two father, repeatedly said good, a grandfather of the past grace. At that time

I grandfather calligraphy is quite a New Year couplets, all relatives, the house

is filled with grandpa wrote. The subsequent to the lady home, home to the lady

on the wall, see my work has been useless, I really felt flattered.

This year the Spring Festival, two aunt aunt, our three family members

accompany lady together; of the Spring Festival last year, we raised the glass,

not a firecracker loud, not a fireworks shine, but in the beautiful blessing of

new years day, the night is so calm and peaceful. 20---- I had a special spring

festival.

We often hear that different methods to teach children will have different result. And different children adapt different methods. Luckily, I think my parents’ teaching method fits me very much and I am glad to have such parents. They are my friends. We often talk and play together. They often tell me to be a kind-hearted person by words and they also act in that way. If they find that I have any wrong thought, they will try to correct it in a gentle way. If they find me do the same wrong thing again and again, they will criticize me badly, which makes me do not dare to do it next time. And nobody will speak for me.

我们常常听说教育孩子不同的方法会有不一样的结果。不同的孩子适合不一样的方法。幸运的是，我觉得我父母的教学方法非常适合我，我很高兴有这样的父母。他们是我的朋友。我们经常一起聊天一起玩。他们经常告诉我要做一个善良的人，他们也用行动证明了。如果他们发现我有任何不良的思想，他们会温和地纠正。如果他们发现我多次还犯同样的错误，他们就会重重地批评我，让我不敢再做第二次。也没有人会为我说话。

[中考英语作文：Teaching Children

The way people hold the belief that a fun-filled， pain-free lifestyle

equals happiness actually reduces their chances of ever obtaining real

happiness. If fun and pleasure are equal to happiness，then pain must be equal to

unhappiness. But in fact，the opposite is true： more often than not things that

lead to happiness contain some pain.

As a result，many people avoid the very attempts that are the source of true

happiness.They fear the pain inevitably (不可避免地) brought by such things as

marriage，raising children，professional achievement， religious commitment，

self-improvement.

Ask a bachelor why he resists marriage even though he finds dating to be

less and less satisfying. If he is honest，he will tell you that he is afraid of

making a commitment，for commitment is in fact quite painful. The single life is

filled with fun， adventure and excitement.Marriage has such moments，but they are

not its most distinguishing features.

Couples，with infant children， are lucky to get a whole nights sleep of a

three-day vacation. We dont know any parent who would choose the word fun to

describe raising children. But couples that decide not to have children ever

know the joys of watching a child grow up or playing with a grandchild.

Understanding and accepting that true happiness has nothing to do with fun

is one of the most liberating realizations. It liberates time： now we can devote

more hours to activities that can really increase our happiness. It liberates

money：buying that new car or those fancy clothes to increase our happiness now

seems pointless. And it liberates us from envy：we now understand that all those

who always have so much fun actually may not be happy at all.

It is widely accepted that to work independently has the obvious advantage

that it can prove one’s ability. However, I believe that teamwork is more

important in the modern society and teamwork sprit has become a required quality

by more and more companies.

In the first place, we are situated in a complicated society and we often

encounter tough problems that are beyond our ability. It is especially at this

moment that teamwork proves to be exceedingly important. With the help of the

team, these problems can be solved easily and quickly, which could improve work

efficiency.

In the second place, teamwork provides a chance to cooperate with workmate,

it will make a friendly and enjoyable work environment, which is an important

factor influencing employees’ belief in the company as a good workplace.

Finally, teamwork contributes to the prosperity of the companies. With all

workmates’ knowledge combined, the companies possess high work efficiency and an

ability to deal with whatever problems. As a result, the companies can make more

profits and develop more quickly.

In sum, teamwork is very important, no one could live individually, they

must rely on others in some way. Hence, work together could make life

easier.

科场上，看到作文标题，我的思路又回到了那节让我影象深刻的语文课上。

上课铃刚打，讲堂里就嘈杂起来。同窗们求助地默背昨天学的《我爱这土地》。我一边背一边求助地看着门口，祷告着先生晚点来到。

这时，语文先生踏进讲堂，我内心求助到顶点：“完了，本日早上背的全忘光了……要是一会提问就惨了……”

先生清了清嗓子，各人背诵的声音停了下来。果不其然，先生说：“下面搜查课文背诵。”他锐利的眼神混合着些许勉励扫视全班，讲堂里阒寂无声，比上自习时还要静。我偷偷瞅了瞅周围，各人的头都快低到桌子上了，求助地看着册本。先生又溘然来了句：“本日背诵，由同窗们提问我。”

我们的头在一刹时都抬了起来，眼睛齐刷刷地投向先生，都丈二僧人——摸不着脑子。我把疑问的眼神投向同位，她小声说：“先生葫芦里卖的什么药呀?”

先生接着说：“背诵一向是同窗们的一个难关，本日晨读时有个同窗问我，先生老是要求同窗们背诵，本身会不会背?我溘然意识到，要让同窗们背会，起首先生要做出榜样，以是，我抉择这节课由我背诵。”

我们即刻兴焕发来，当真看着讲义，搜查先生背诵时有没有错误。

“若是我是一只鸟/我也应该用沙哑的喉咙称赞……”先生富于韵味的声音回荡于讲堂，我们被带入一个极新的诗歌天下中。这个天下里有墨客对故国深沉的爱，有对侵犯者切齿的恨，有对处于日本铁蹄践踏下故国深沉的爱，有为国献身的热情……

先生背完，我们都还陶醉在声情并茂的背诵中，稍后，讲堂响起了雷鸣般的掌声。先生脸上绽铺开恬静的微笑。此时，室外，风儿沙沙，鸟儿啾啾。

这就是我最喜好的一堂语文课。

Recently， a popularserioushot topic es into the eyes of our universal

bodies as the cartoon depicts。 From the picture， we can see that a middle-age

housewife， perplexed and terrified， is picking out her daily diet from a pile of

undesirable things， such as illegal-cooking oil， fruits with excessive pesticide

and the like.

It seems that there are many factors can be mentioned and accounted for

this kind of case， and in my perspective， the followings are the obvious and

have a far-fetching influence. On the one hand， the merchants in an increasing

number are aiming at maximizing their profits with the minimal principal in the

wider ranges of petitive and more open social background。 On the other hand， it

is the inplete system of law that has less supervision of the producing and

processing of modities.

Considering all the points discussed， it is highly sensible that we should

take prompt measures to resolve this problem. In the first place， more bettering

policies should be brought forward.In the second，more moral schooling should be

applied in all munities。 Only by enforcing these measures， can we effectively，

efficiently， and eventually solve the problem.

导语：随着环境污染问题日益加剧，我们每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important elent of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.

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人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等 于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。

Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been

disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button

across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public

health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online

edition of the People Daily. ?

There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this

undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we

ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More

importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal

producers enforces the trend. ?

As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict

measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should

launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws

to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from

entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our

combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days

ahead.?

命题作文是依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：

一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是跑题作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发

展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。

三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。

Mid Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of China。 It used to be as

important as Spring Festival 。It is usually celebrated in September or October。

This festival is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moon

light。

To some extent， it is like Thanks Giving day in western countries。 On this

day， people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal。 After

that， people always eat delicious moon cakes， and watch the moon。 The moon is

always very round on that day， and makes people think of their relatives and

friends。 It is a day of pleasure and happiness。 Hope you have a wonderful Mid

Autumn festival!

在人生的旅途中，我们会遇见许许多多的人。你不太关心的人，像一颗流星，一下就过去了;而你关心的人，像太阳一样，一直萦绕在你的心中。

在一个鸟语花香的早晨，我独自一人来骑着自行车来到了公园。我踏上了脚踏板，坐在“坐骑”上一脚踩了下去，自行车就缓缓移动了。微风像妈妈的手轻轻拂过我的脸庞，公园的景色逐一闯入我的眼帘。如果此刻下起蒙蒙细雨，整个公园就犹如仙境一般。

我的注意力都停留在那波光粼粼的小湖上，忽然，自行车一抖，我和自行车都倒在了地上。原来，是我没有注意到路上的一块石头，疼痛感使我的眼泪情不自禁地掉了下来。就在这时，一位陌生的哥哥走了过来，焦急地问：“小朋友，你怎么了?”我忍着疼痛，告诉他：“我骑自行车摔倒了，现在手好疼。”他轻轻地抬起了我的手，拿出了一瓶水，往我的伤口上倒。我的手疼极了，犹如有人拿着火往我手上烤。接着，他又拿出了口袋里的创口贴，还不断安慰我说：“小朋友，再忍一下，很快就好了。”哥哥站了起来，扶着我的背，把我扶起来，轻声说：“小朋友，我还要上班，以后要小心一点，我先走了。”说完，他就走了。我往他走去的那个方向望去，呆呆地看着他那伟大的背影。这时，我想起了老师曾对我说的一句话“人间处处有真情”。

这一位哥哥，就是我心中的那一个太阳，永远在我的心中发光。

导语：每个人都来自不一样的地方，而这个地方就是家乡，你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.

我的家乡是个美丽的地方，它在乡村，由于它远离城市，因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈，我几乎能看到鱼，山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候，因为空气很清新，还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫，我喜欢听到他们的声音，听起来像在为我歌唱。而且，雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样，我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我，我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。

The Culture of China is home to one of the worlds oldest and most complex

civilizations. China boasts a history rich in over 5,000 years of artistic,

philosophical, political, and scientific advancement. Though regional

differences provide a sense of diversity, commonalities in language and religion

connect a culture distinguished by such significant contributions such as

Confucianism and Taoism. Confucianism was the official philosophy throughout

most of Imperial Chinas history and strongly influenced other countries in East

Asia. Mastery of Confucian texts provided the primary criterion for entry into

the imperial bureaucracy.

With the rise of Western economic and military power beginning in the

mid-19th century, Western systems of social and political organization gained

adherents in China. Some of these would-be reformers rejected Chinas cultural

legacy, while others sought to combine the strengths of Chinese and Western

cultures.

China is a unified nation consisting of many different ethnic groups.

Fifty-six different ethnic groups make up the great Chinese national family.

Because the Han people accounts for more than ninety percent of Chinas

population, the remaining fifty-five groups are generally referred to as "ethnic

minorities." Next to the majority Han, the Mongolian, Hui, Tibetan, and Uygur

peoples comprise the largest ethnic groups. Although Chinas ethnic minorities

do not account for a large portion of the population, they are distributed over

a vast area, residing in every corner of China.

Particularly since the implementation of Chinas opening and reform policy,

the central government has increased investment in minority areas and

accelerated their opening to the outside world. This has resulted in an upsurge

of economic development in these areas. Each of Chinas ethnic minority groups

possesses a distinctive culture. The Chinese government respects minority

customs, and works to preserve, study, and collate the cultural artifacts of

Chinas ethnic minority groups. The government vigorously supports the

development of minority culture and the training of minority cultural workers,

and fosters the development of traditional minority medicine.

The relation among Chinas ethnic groups can be described as "overall

integration, local concentration, mutual interaction." Concentrations of ethnic

minorities reside within predominantly Han areas, and the Han people also reside

in minority areas, indicating that there has been extensive exchanges among

Chinas ethnic groups since ancient times. With the development of the market

economy, interaction among ethnic groups has become even more active in the

areas of government, economics, culture, daily life, and marriage. Linked by

interdependence, mutual assistance, and joint development, their common goals

and interests creating a deep sense of solidarity, Chinas ethnic groups

resemble a great national family, together building Chinese civilization.

雕塑家最近在专心雕刻自己的作品——一件半身的人像，经过许多天废寝忘食的工作，现在这件作品已经展现在雕塑家眼前，线条柔滑流畅，身体每个部分都是那么逼真，栩栩如生。在别人看来这是一件完美的作品，但他仍然皱着眉头看看自己的作品，它还没有达到他心目中的效果，总觉得这件作品缺点什么。

“唉，算了，出去放松一下，清醒一下脑子!”然后他打开门投入到春光灿烂的大自然中。

这是一个阳光明媚的好天气，蓝蓝的天空中点缀着几朵可爱的白云，连空气都是甜甜的，大地上冒出嫩绿的草芽。久呆在屋中的雕塑家陶醉在这大自然的美景中，不禁仰起头，伸起胳膊，他仿佛是在抒发感情，又仿佛是要拥抱这美丽的春天。然而一幅不和谐的景象映入他的眼帘，在那绿油油的草地旁边有一个衣衫褴褛的人正弯着腰在一个蘑菇形的垃圾桶中寻找什么，雕塑家对他破坏这种美景而感到深深的不满。

于是他背手踱步走向别的地方，周围的一切都显示出一派欣欣向荣、生机勃勃的景象，悠闲的人们在散步。这时他注意到一对在湖边游玩的母子，年轻的母亲在长椅上坐着，脸上挂着幸福、慈祥、迷人的微笑，注视着那个大约两岁大小、正在玩耍的孩子，他心中感觉“太美了”!完全沉浸在这份温馨之中。突然孩子掉入水中，母亲挣扎着去救自己的孩子，曾有人说一个再胆小懦弱的女人，当她的孩子面临危险时，她也会像一匹不怕一切的母狼。现在雕塑家终于体会了这句话的.含义。孩子在母亲的奋斗拼搏下救了上来，而母亲却因无力挣扎在水中。

围观的人议论纷纷没有一个人下去救人。雕塑家刚要跳水，只听见“扑通”一下，有人去救了。不一会儿，母亲被救了上来，面无血色，当他抬头去看那位英勇救人者时，不禁大吃一惊，此人正是那个衣衫褴褛、令他讨厌的人，他正浑身湿漉漉地提着一袋垃圾离去。

伟大的母亲和英勇救人的精神使他震撼。一刹那，他发现了真正的美丽。那如花般绽放的美丽，正是他的作品所缺少的。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher。

正 my father and my mother are both teachers。

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired。

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

误 the apples cheap. ill take some。

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some。

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave。

正 when i got to the station the train had left。

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

The main function of public libraries is to provide books for people to

read.In a library,there are books on different subjects,such as Chinese

history,fine art,science,English literature,and so on.There are also works fo

fiction.

The public libraries are crowded with people on weekdays as well as Sundays

because many people,especially students who want to consult reference books for

their school work,know that they could at least learn something there.

Besides reading in the library,we can also borrow books with library

cards.But books on loan had to be returned within a couple of weeks.As far as I

know the number of people who borrow books from public libraries is increasing

year after year.

I go to the City Hall library twice a month to read.

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1.打算做....../计划做......

intend /plan to do 打算做......

be going to do 打算做......

decide to do决定做......

determine to do决定做......

be determine to do 决定做......

make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......

2.想/希望......

want to do= would like to do想做......

hope to do希望做......

expect to do期待做......

wish to do 希望做......

consider doing 考虑做......

looking forward to doing盼望做......

dream of doing 梦想做......

cant help doing 情不自禁地做......

3.表示喜欢和感兴趣

like /love doing 喜欢做......

enjoy doing 喜欢做.......

be fond of doing 喜欢做......

be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......

prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣

show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣

4.其他短语

keep on doing 坚持做......

keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......

be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......

spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......

have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难

满分句型

1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...

2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...

...too...to do 太...而不能...

such...that...如此...以至于...

3.not...until...直到...才...

4. The reason why+句子is that +句子...的原因是...

5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因

6. That is because+句子 那是因为...

7.It is said that+句子 据报道...

It is reported that+句子 据报道...

8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...

9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...

10. There is no need to do 没必要做...

11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做

13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?

14. I think you should do我认为你应该...

15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...

16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话，我会做...

Panda is our country’s treasure, we should protect it. nowadays, we see

from the TV that panda is less than before, it is not only because of the damage

of the environment, but also the weakness of the panda. Everybody loves panda,

it is so lovely, a panda has two black eyes, it is very lazy, it likes sleeping

all the time. When we see its round body shape, we can’t help loving them. In

order to see the lovely animal, we need to protect them. We must protect the

environment, like not to throw the rubbish away, not to cut down the trees. We

condemn such behavior that killing the animals. Protecting the animals is

everybody’s job.

All the people want to stay in good health. Health is better than wealth.

It is true that health is the first step to success. Imagine this, if you’re

sick, all you can do is to stay in bed and do nothing at all, how can you chase

after your dreams?But if you’re in good health, you can overcome the adversities

you ever encounter and make your dreams come true. Since health is so important

for everybody, how can we maintain and enhance our health? There are some useful

suggestions:

First of all, we should lead to a regular life. Early to bed and early to

rise makes a healthy man. Do not stay up late. Some people love to play cell

phones games or reading electronic-books before sleep, this can be bad for the

health. We should remember to turn off the phones before sleep. Second, don’t be

too particular about food. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables and less sugars

and soft drinks. If you want to eat a bar of chocolate, eat an apple instead. If

you want to drink milk tea or coffee, drink water instead. Don’t eat too much

meat in one week. Last but not least, we should do exercise everyday. There are

many exercises for us to choose. Such as, swimming, jogging, square dancing,

playing badminton and so on. Doing exercise can increase the circulation of

blood and enhance our immune system. The one who in better immune system, the

less disease he will have.

In conclusion, if we pay close attention to our health, we can avoid

getting sick. Try to sleep earlier, eat more fruit and vegetable, drink more

water, and do exercise everyday. You will realize that it’s not that hard to

stay in good health.

Every year in October, our school will have the tradition to hold a sports

meeting. It is the biggest event of the year, so all the students will practise

very hard to win the biggest honor. Relay race is the most important match,

because it involves so many students to take part in, showing the unity of a

team. Last year, our class won the second place. We lagged behind the champion

just a little distance, so we hoped to defeated them this time and won the first

prize. We have practised very hard, and every student in the team wanted to make

the breakthrough. When the match finally began, we ran very fast and kept our

space. Even though other team tried to disturbed us, we focused our attention.

The moment when our team first crossed the line, we cheer and cried. We made

it.

2015杭州中考作文题目：一个小学毕业的大学图书管理员，看到大学者的书单，于是也按着这个大学者的书单来读书，最后成为了一个翻译家和作家，这个人就是金克木。

2015杭州作文解析(仅供参考)：2015杭州中考作文是材料作文，写作这样的材料作文，首先要理解材料。材料主要提及的人是金克木，他的第一身份是一个小学毕业的大学图书管理员;他的最终身份是翻译家和作家;在他的从第一身份到最终身份，有一个过程，“按照大学者的书单来读书”。从而我们可以提炼出材料的主旨，一个人可以通过后天的努力来改变自己的生活环境;也可以选择“按照大学者的书单读书”的角度来进行立意，得出读书改变命运，知识改变命运等发散性思维的作文创作主旨。

相关阅读：金克木(1912～2000)字止默，笔名辛竹，安徽人，1912年8月14日生于江西。著名文学家，翻译家，学者，和季羡林、张中行、邓广铭一起被称为“未名四老”。20世纪三十年代后到北京求学，曾在北京大学图书馆任职员，同时还掌握了英语、法语、德语、世界语等多种语言。1941年金克木经缅甸到印度，任一家中文报纸编辑，同时学习印地语和梵语，后到印度佛教圣地鹿野苑钻研佛学，同时跟随印度著名学者学习梵文和巴利文，走上梵学研究之路。1946年金克木回国，应聘任武汉大学哲学系教授，1948年后任北京大学东语系教授。曾任中华全国世界语协会理事，中国世界语之友会会员，第三至七届全国政协委员，九三学社第五届至七届常委，宣传部部长。2000年8月5日，因病在北京逝世，临终遗言：“我是哭着来，笑着走。”