中考英语大常见错误解析通用19篇

海子曾说过：“从明天开始，做一个幸福的人，喂马，劈柴，周游世界。”

幸福是奋斗者的乐章，不奋斗，就没有幸福感，当然也不会有幸福。做一个幸福的人就要奋斗。每天有事可做，内心丰盈能感到很幸福，每次成功地完成一件事能感到幸福，每天点点滴滴奋进能感到幸福。

马克思说：“奋斗就是幸福。”我们学生解答了一道数学难题，完成了作业，便会心花怒放；做好了应该完成的事，心里踏实，心满意足；圆满完成了想做的事，便会怡然自得。这都是奋斗的幸福。“居庙堂之高则忧其民，处江湖之远则忧其君。”这是范仲淹的幸福，他替别人着想，为别人奋斗，他的幸福有了色彩，有了高度。

幸福是乐观者的乐章，在奋斗过程中遇到困难，遇到别人不理解或误解时，笑对一切。刘心武说过：“地球上的生灵中，唯有人会微笑，群体的微笑构建和平，他人的微笑带来理解，自我的微笑则是净化剂。”面对别人的误解，给他一个微笑，他会对你微笑，和谐的人际关系，是幸福。“竹杖芒鞋轻胜马，谁怕？一蓑烟雨任平生。”苏东坡面对人生的波折，没有陷入抑郁苦闷的沼泽，而是以豁达豪放之心笑对生活。这是苏东坡的幸福，因此他的人生也有了大境界。我们面对困难，要有“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”的信念，笑对困难，幸福生活。

幸福是善于休息者的乐章，要善于奋斗，善于休息，放松心情，增加幸福的体验。“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。”陶渊明在奋斗中感受到的自然之美，怡然自得，是幸福；“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆。”王维在边疆奋斗感受到的边疆之美，是幸福；完成了学习任务，听听小鸟在树上优美地歌唱，是幸福；完成一天的工作，漫步湖边小树林的惬意生活，是幸福。“人生的旅途不在于终点，而在于沿途的美景。”幸福在旅途中。春暖花开，桃花满梢，油菜花黄时，畅游春景，休息调整，倍感幸福。奋斗中处处有幸福，只要你善于生活，随时都能感受到幸福。

幸福的人生是奋斗出来的。一次次付出凝结的收获，一次次目标达成的喜悦，属于奋斗者的，奋斗创造幸福。新时代是奋斗者的时代，踏踏实实地学习工作，吃苦向前，不怕困难，不忘初心，努力奋斗，收获点点滴滴，幸福的花儿便会朵朵绽放，幸福之花将会开满树，幸福之树将会结满硕果。

幸福的密码掌握在善于奋斗者的手中。

Once man did not have to think about the protection of his environment。

There were few people on the earth， and natural resources seemed to be

unlimited。

Today things are different。 The world has bee too crowded。 We are using up

our natural resources，and polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals。 If

we continue to do this， human life on earth will not survive。

We realize that if too many fish are taken from the sea， there will soon be

none left。 Yet，with modern fishing methods， more and more fish are caught。We

know that if too many trees are cut down， forests will disappear。 Yet， we

continue to use powerful machines to cut down more and more trees。 We see that

if rivers are polluted with waste products， we will die。 Yet， waste products

are

still put into rivers。

We know that if the population continues to rise at the present rate， in a

few years， there wont be enough food。What can we do to solve these

problems?

If we eat more vegetables and less meat， there will be more food available。

Land for crops feeds five times more people than land where animals are

kept。

Our natural resources will last longer if we learn to recycie them。

The world population will not rise so quickly if people use modern methods

of birth control。

Finally， if we educate people to think about the problems we shall have a

better and cleaner planet in the future。

成长是什么?这是一个很深奥的问题，没有绝对的答案，有人为它思考一生却得不到答案，有人一生活得平凡却感悟了成长!

我一路走走停停，磕磕绊绊，朦朦胧胧间，终于将“成长”这两个字领悟……

成长就是为家里分担力所能及的家务!

总在教科书上，课外书籍上看到一句话：“为家人做力所能及的事!”但大家都只是“语言的巨人，行动的矮子!”我也一样。当我逐渐长大，才真正履行了这个人人都会说的承诺!夏日炎炎，我系上了围裙，和妈妈一起，在闷热得令人窒息的小厨房里洗碗，擦盘子。我白嫩的双手浸泡在水里，一滴滴的洗洁精滴在我的手上，我很仔细地擦着每一只油腻的碗，很认真很认真，像迎接远道而来的主席一样。我的手搭在柜台上，双腿弯曲着，才洗了几个碗便腰背发酸，一抬头，看见妈妈还是像往常一样毫无怨言地擦着脏兮兮的盘子，脸上挂着淡然的微笑，我真真切切地看到她的手起了一层厚厚的老茧，像刀尖深深刺疼了我的眼。我紧抿嘴唇，仍旧擦着那一个个碗盘，那一刻，我的心中泛起了一股不知名的责任感，那感觉应该就是成长吧!

成长是为困难的人送上一米阳光!

在我们有着八十个人的班集体大家庭中，有一个可怜的同学!他的母亲双目失明，他从四岁起便承担起了家里所有的责任!他瘦骨如柴，面容憔悴，天资也并不聪颖。我对这个同学充满了同情，更多的是敬佩!因为他比任何人都有资格堕落，颓废，可是他没有，他的脸上至始至终洋溢着明亮的笑容!我试着有目的的地“接近”他，帮他做一些功课，只要他需要，我会二话不说地帮助他!我将自己视作生命的珍藏着的图书借给他，他蜡黄的脸上泛出惊喜的神情，那一刻，我明白了自己又一次成长了!

月光如水的夜晚，妈妈抱着我说：“我的女儿，你长大了!”

是的，我长大了，从此刻开始，我所走过的每一步，都是一个成长的脚印!是的，我，长大了，不再是口中说说而已。

一个夏天的双休日，我独自走在大街上，一边踢着脚下的树叶，一边哼着小曲。

突然，我听见有人大声喊：“快来套圈啊，大圈一元3个!小圈的一元8个!套着什么给什么。天上掉陷饼!天大的便宜!。”顺着声音望过去，我看见一个中年男子正摆弄着地上的物品：有烟，玩具……还有一瓶诱人的可乐。这时正是炎热难熬的夏日，在加上我十分口渴，这会儿，别说一瓶可乐，就是两瓶、三瓶我也能马上喝完。可商店里的饮料太贵，这儿只要一元说不准就能套中好几瓶，于是我便向围满人的地摊走去。

有一个青年禁不住香烟的诱惑，一下子买了30个大圈。他满怀希望的去投，结果一个也没投中。我想：这人真笨!大圈不好投中，我就用小圈吧，投中了可乐我就赚了。那个生意人似乎看穿了我的心思，笑咪咪的对我说：“小朋友，套一个吧!”我考虑了一会儿，从口袋里掏出平时节约的一元钱给了他，换了8个圈儿。我拿着圈，向着我的目标——可乐抛了出去，谁知那圈儿像着了魔似的不听我的使唤，轻飘飘地总是落在空地上。1个、2个……总是重复着相同的命运。最后，我两手空空的回家了，不仅可乐没得到还损失了一元钱，真是偷鸡不成倒失一把米呀!

回家后，我没有心思做作业，套圈的事又浮现在我的眼前，我前思后想，终于明白了：世上哪有免费的午餐呀!都是我一时贪便宜才中了圈套，真是糊涂呀!

唉!原来套圈其实就是圈套啊!

从我们”惊天动地”来到这个世界，我们就开始犯错误，在一个又一个错误中，我们逐渐让这个陌生的世界，成为我们熟悉而又温馨的家园。错误中，我们会跌跌撞撞走路;错误中我们会伊伊呀呀说话;错误中，我们会用稚嫩的双手，写字画画;错误中，我们会用我们浅薄的智慧去赢得老师家长的夸耀。我们是在错误中成长，在错误中改正，在错误中变得更完美。

今日上午11点，2015年北京中考语文科目考试结束。

据了解，50分的作文题目包括大小作文各一篇。大小作文均为“二选一”。小作文可介绍阅读名著的经验，也可写参观博物馆的收获。大作文可以以“对话”为题目写一篇文章，也可以选择续写科幻小说《超级智能住宅》。

链接：2015北京中考语文作文题目

(一)根据情境，按照要求写作。(10分)

从下面两个题目中任选一题，按要求写作。

题目一：班上准备召开名著阅读经验交流会，分享同学们阅读名著的经验。请以你读过的一部名著为例，写一段话，简要介绍你阅读名著的经验。

题目二：学校校刊准备开辟“走进博物馆”栏目，分享同学们参观博物馆(或纪念馆)的收获。校刊主编向同学们征稿。请你写一篇稿件，简要写出参观某座博物馆(或纪念馆)后，你最大的收获是什么，是怎样获得的。

要求：(1)内容真实具体，语言准确得体。

(2)字数在150-200之间。

(3)不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

(二)根据题目，按照要求写作。(40分)

从下面两个题目中任选一题，写一篇文章。

题目一：对话是现实生活中人与人之间沟通的一种方式。对话可以增进彼此的了解，可以倾诉各自的心声，可以碰撞出智慧的火花……请你以“对话”为题目，写一篇文章，可以记录精彩的对话过程，可以描述对话产生的美好结果，可以阐述你对对话的认识……

题目二：《超级智能住宅》这篇科幻小说的结尾充满悬念。男主人与房子之间的矛盾冲突会怎样收场，超级智能住宅里又会发生怎样的故事呢?请你发挥想象，自拟题目，写一篇文章。

要求：(1)请将作文题目抄写在答题卡上。

(2)不限文体(诗歌除外)。

(3)字数在600-800之间。

(4)不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

中考英语作文范文 我梦想的工作my dream job

Since i was an innocent child, i had the idea to be a doctor in the future. I always see the people died in the TV, i feels

frustrated about it. therefore, a dream to be a doctor came into my mind. I want to be the person who can save people＇s life just like God Jesus

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：

1. 衣着整洁;

2. 保持环境卫生;

3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;

4. 遵守交通规则;

5. ……

要求：

1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

3. 词数：80词左右。

范文

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

[中考英语作文热门欣赏

老师们、同学们：大家中午好!

今天，我们满怀着美好的憧憬，在这里隆重举行大保当初级中学20__年中考百日冲刺誓师大会。这足以证明学校抓质量的决心和对大家的殷切期盼。在此，我谨代表学校向前来参加会议的家长代表表示衷心的感谢，向废寝忘食、辛勤耕耘的全体毕业班老师表示崇高的敬意!向锐意进取、奋发苦读的同学们致以美好的祝愿!一百天，很短，在人的一生中，犹如沧海一粟，也不过弹指一挥间;一百天，又很长，对于有心人来说，它长得足够改变一个人的命运。如果把初中三年的学习生活比作一次万米长跑，那么你们现在已经冲过了最后一个弯道，距离终点仅有百米之遥。这一百米征程，最艰苦。刚才，老师们的表态、同学们的铮铮誓言，让我看到了师生们卧薪尝胆的毅力，破釜沉舟的勇气，奋力拼搏的斗志和誓创我校校今年中考新辉煌的坚定信心!我们大保当中学近几年的中考成绩逐步提高，赢得了社会各界的认可，家长、社会和各级领导对我们的期望也越来越高。今天的誓师大会，既是我们九年级全体师生中考前的一次精神展示，也是我们攻打20__年中考大战的战前总动员。借此机会，向你们提出五点希望和要求：

一、张开嘴问一问对手是谁，我是谁，知己知彼。全县3590名考生同台竞技，你的实力怎样。以普高招收一半算，1800名之后的学生将无缘上高中。英语数学模考虽然两科也可以参考出自己的位置。全县前五名为220.5、220、220、218.5、217;我们的前五牛楠、田静、任悦、方婷婷、张斌是204.5、204、203.5、197、195;名次为59、64、68、116、195.。记住：当你停下来喘气时别人还在奔跑。(猎狗与野兔，尽力而为与竭尽全力)

二、抬起眼看一看方向在哪儿，目标明晰。制订时从大到小，由远及近，实施时反过来。神中、四中、七中、职中由高到低给自己准确定位，然后制定详细可行的措施，把目标具体到每周每天每节课。并且时刻检查自己的目标达成情况，已达标的打个钩，没达标的想办法挤时间尽量完成，同学们一定要咬定目标不放松，不达目标不放手。在不断的设定目标完成目标的过程中提升自我，成就自我!

三、拍拍胸掂量一番自己信心足不足。拿破仑说过：“在我的词典里没有‘不可能’这三个字。这是强者的风范，是自信而不自负、自豪而不自大的气度。“行百里者半九十”。此时此刻，我们最重要的信念就是要坚持，坚持，坚持，再坚持。请大家牢记：海到无边天作岸，山登绝顶我为峰，春风吹，战鼓擂，冲刺中考谁怕谁?初三苦，初三累，百日冲刺不后退!我们坚信，我努力，我就行;我坚持，能行。做的自己，让激情天天燃烧，让热情天天高涨!

四、弯下腰瞧一瞧脚是否踏在了地上。奋力拼搏，勤奋惜时。勤奋认真是成就梦想的基石。付出就会有回报，有耕耘才会有收获。不仅上课要认真听，练习要认真做，考试要认真考，而且卫生也要认真打扫，内务也要认真整理。处处认真，认真就会内化为一种习惯，一种素质，从而有助于同学们获得中考的成功。因此，剩下的100天里，也许老师们会对你们有更苛刻的要求，更艰苦的训练，更严厉的批评，同学们要认真正确的理解。

五、挠挠头想一想有没有科学的学习方法。中考备考既是一项艰巨的个人脑力劳动，更是一场智慧的竞争。在这100天里，同学们要讲究科学的复习方法，要虚心听取各科老师的意见，构建知识体系;增强规范意识;强化训练解题能力。突破知识的盲区，合理地安排时间，既要争分夺秒，又要科学有效，就一定能取得理想的成绩。

家长代表同志、老师、同学们：竭尽全力备战中考是我们初三工作的当务之急。今天会议的目的就是要唤起我们初三的教师行动起来全身心的投入到中考备考复习中;唤起我们初三的全体学生行动起来以正确的方法，饱满的激情，全身心的投入到中考复习中来，也唤起全体家长同志肩负起家教职责，全力支持备考工作。让我们一起共同努力，奋战百日，变压力为动力，变决心为信心，变誓词为行动，去创造属于你自己的奇迹。让成功的鲜花，绽放在六月的校园!在这一百天里，我会注视大家的奋力拼搏，会给你们加油鼓劲!

谢谢大家!

我沿着那条唯一的通道走向远方，回望过去，路上布满许多并排的、歪歪扭扭的脚印，展望未来，前路漫漫，我将一人向前方坚定不移地走去。

我是一个容易受他人影响的人，期中考试成绩发挥失常，看着难堪的成绩，老师和同学对我感到失望。曾经，我被人们一直赞扬，如今他们失望的神色和言语影响到我，让我陷入了自我怀疑，幸亏那次秋游让我释怀。

我跟着规划好路线的同学玩了一个高空项目。我们穿好安全服，带上安全帽，一起上楼，扣好绳索，拉着绳索往前走。正当我准备踏上独木桥时，同行的同学转身就回到了安全平台上。我被吓了一跳，不由地害怕起来，走上去一步看到脚下湍急的水流又退了回来。那位同学在工作人员的帮助下解开绳索放弃了这次挑战。虽然她被工作人员说成了懦夫，但这丝毫没有激发她的斗志。我鼓起勇气，大跨一步，但她却在后面嘲笑我说：“你的腿抖得厉害，放弃算了。”我受到她言语的影响，退了回来，想同她一起回去不玩了。

那刻，我内心饱受煎熬，想到考试失利后老师和同学对我的失望，想到自己因此被称为懦夫，我该怎么办?心中的不甘和好强之心成为我前进与不放弃的动力。“我不想再让别人说懦夫，我要用自己的力量证明自己。”我心中怒吼着。我挣扎了5分钟后大步向前走出去，我眼中冒着火花，我已听不到同伴的叫声和脚下湍息的水流声，我一路向前，没有停下来。

终于到达终点，望着那被绳索勒红的手掌，我向着远处的山峰大笑起来，眼角有些湿润，但我知道那是喜悦的泪水。那勒红的手掌象征我的胜利和成长。回头瞥了一眼那个同学白皙的手掌，我心想：她估计这辈子也无法体会到我今天这种快乐吧!

我战胜了曾经的自己。现在，我已经不再惧怕他人的流言蜚语了，我选择相信自己，我成长了。

今后的漫漫人生路，我将坚定不移地走下去。

一青年老是埋怨自己时运不济发不了财，终日愁眉不展。

这天来了一个须发皆白的老人，问：“年轻人你干吗不高兴？”

“我不明白，为什么我总是那么穷。”“穷？你很富有嘛。”老人由衷地说。

“这从何说起？”年轻人问，

老人不正面回答，反问道：“假如今天斩掉你一个手指头，给你一千元，你干不干？”

“不干。”

“斩掉你一只手，给你一万元，你干不干？”

“不干。”

“让你马上变成八十岁的老人，给你一百万，干不干？”

“不干。”

“让你马上死掉，给你一千万，干不干？”

“不干。”

“这就对了！你已经有了超过一千万的财富了，为什么还哀叹自己贫穷呢？”老人笑吟吟地问。青年愕然无语，但看出他心有所悟的样子。

青春和健康就是的财富，这比什么都珍贵。

每个人心中都有难忘的人，可能是远方的亲戚，可能是离开母校后的老师，也可能是你只见过一面的陌生人。当然，我心中也有这么一个难忘的人。

那个星期天的早晨，妈妈要出去买菜，我问妈妈：”这么早出去买菜干嘛?“妈妈笑着说：”早晨的菜新鲜呀!“”哦，那你要买什么菜呢?“我问道。”买点胡萝卜吧。“妈妈边想边说，”我和你一起去。“”好啊。“

刚出门，就听到远处一声声叫卖声，正好是卖萝卜的，我和妈妈走过去，是一个十二三岁的小姑娘，长着一双水灵灵的大眼睛，个子挺高有点黑，可能是经常在太阳下奔波的缘故吧!

妈妈对她说：”小姑娘，多少钱一斤?“小姑娘回答道：”一块钱一斤。“妈妈指着几个大萝卜说：”给我称一斤半吧。“小姑娘熟练地拿起三个大萝卜称了一下，说：”正好一斤半，一块五。“小姑娘把萝卜装到袋子里递给了妈妈。回到家后，细心的妈妈又称了一遍，剑正好两斤!

于是我和妈妈急冲冲地下了楼，还好，那位小姑娘并没有走远，妈妈追了上去。小姑娘看见妈妈追了上来有点惊讶：”怎么了，是不是少了?“妈妈边喘气边说：”没少，没少，多了!足有两斤呢!“小姑娘解释道：”哦，阿姨，这萝卜今天早晨刚拔出来，没来得及洗，泥巴太多了，就多称你半斤了。“说完，就去别的地方卖萝卜了，望着她的身影，我想：多么好的一位小姑娘啊!

这就是我难忘的一个人，愿你与我分享你最难忘的人。

There is an old Chinese saying: Top students come from strict teachers.

Perhaps affected by this saying for a long time, we believe it right. However,

as time flies, lots of things have changed. Therefore, I am eager to discuss

what relation is the best between teachers and students.A teacher can treat a

student in two ways .One is strict, and the other is friendly. Most teachers

prefer the first way.To start with, we certainly have to admit that strictness

is very effective, especially to the naughty pupils.

As pupils we aren’t able to control ourselves well or fix our attention on

one thing for a long time. We do most things because they are interesting or we

feel like doing. We are always looking out of the window in class. Sometimes, we

get to play games and forget our homework. On this occasion, strictness is a

must. It not only forces us to do the right thing, but also helps us develop a

good learning habit, which is of great importance during our whole life .In

other words, it is the first step to success.Still, everything has two sides.

Its weak points are very obvious. You see, there’re top students in a class,

where average students make up the majority. Then teachers’ orders or

suggestions are for the majority, not for top students. However, top students

always have their own study plans and prefer special homework, so orders usually

won’t take great effect on them.

Maybe you have thought out that teachers can give orders only to the

majority and set some freedom to top students. However, it’s impossible .For a

whole class, teachers couldn’t give order to part of the class, for the majority

would question why they needn’t do such work, but we need? It would be probable

that they think teachers treat them not equally, and will not obey teachers’

orders any more. This is a difficulty for teachers.It also has another

disadvantage——the communication problem .Since teachers are strict, we never

tell teachers our personal affairs or secrets. Mostly we just tell them to our

friends, but as students too, they couldn’t help to solve our problem, such as

puppy love, communication problems or study problems .Not being solved

completely, they always disturb us, influencing our daily life and study. I’m

sure that you think that making friends with teachers can solve the problem, and

you are eager to do so as well. But if we do so, new problems will come out .You

see, an adult couldnt control himself well at times, let alone us students.

However if teachers are our friends, I doubt whether their orders will take

effect any more .You see, have we ever treated our friends’ orders as orders? We

think they’re only jokes. This is another difficulty for teachers.Additionally,

our parents have the same problem. Yes, we need to be friends, but not complete

friends. We need to keep a certain distance, making us communicate well and

willing to take your orders. I remember a story.One day, a lady had her rest

room decorated. And a skilled worker was bricking up the wall. Seeing large

cracks between the bricks, she questioned why. The worker told her after this

summer, the bricks would become bigger, and those cracks would disappear.That is

not only decoration, but also communication. The principle is the same.

Its Sunday today. I got up early and did my homework on the table. All of a

sudden I remembered the mothers day, a picture of my mind, remembering a past

thing that moved me.

Thats the case. After coming home from school that afternoon, my mother came

back. I found that my mother was very tired, his eyes were squinting, and I

yawned. So she sent me to do my homework at home. But I felt very sad to see my

mother working so hard, so I decided to share the housework for my mother. I

began to pick up the stuff in my home, first fold the newspaper, and then the

glass was cleaned.

I put the glass on the pot filled with water, and then picked up the cloth, a

brush up. I found a little dirty in a cup, and I took some detergent to wash it.

Suddenly, the cup from the hand slipped, piercing sound startled me. I hastened

to pick up the pieces of glass on the floor. At this time, I found that my

mother was standing in front of me, and she said, "dont pick up the pieces with

your hands. Let me come." I stood up and bowed my head embarrassed and said,

"Im sorry, mom, Im too careless." I thought: this must be closed. Mother

walked over and touched my head and said, "kid, dont frighten you?" Let mommy

pack up, you go out and watch TV. " Mothers words are very gentle, but make me

more difficult, unwittingly I cry.

Looking back on this, I felt very warm. It told me that maternal love is

selfless and great, and I want to repay my mother on Mothers day.

英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。

提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧，两者缺一不可。

正确无误的造句能力

这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。

如：如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”？我们就可以写出许多：say some thing gladly（merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently）

还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。

扩词有：play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano…等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。

又如：a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.

这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良习惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。

在平时的学习中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。

在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如：

1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了，他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)

2.你与其他同学不同，你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)

3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)

4.我有个建议，把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角，这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)

5.在暴风雨中，我们最好不放风筝，因为它可能让我们触电。(because,get a electric shock)

6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)

7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)

8.我们赢了这场比赛，他们看上去很失望。(win，look)

9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何？(get on with…)

10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力，要写好一篇中考作文，就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料，如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式，一般行文规律能了解掌握，那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。

There is a saying that man proposes, god disposes, which means man plan the

things and the rest of the outcome lies in the luck. This saying reflects the

connection between hard-work and luck, which is though sometimes we have worked

so hard, luck occupies great position, the unexpected things happen and refrain

us from succeeding. In order to be successful, people work so hard, they believe

they can achieve their goals, but lacking luck stops them achieving their goals.

So working hard doesn’t mean bringing people success directly, they just need to

try more times, without luck, they still can make their goals. Luck can help

people close to success, without hard-work, they can’t be successful. Hard-work

and luck make people realize their goals, but without luck, people still can

make it by trying more times.

Everyone will have some unforgettable memories. These big and small

memories are like the shining stars in my memory, and one of them is the first

time I read science books.

It was the second day of the summer vacation for Daban. It was sunny and a

little sultry in the morning. My father said to me happily, "son, today my

father will take you to climb the mountain and enjoy the beautiful scenery on

the top of the mountain." I readily agreed. So we came to the famous Dayang

mountain in Dongzhu.

My father and I went to the foot of the mountain, looked up, and could not

see the top of Dayang mountain. My father said, "climb to the top of the

mountain and you can enjoy the most beautiful scenery in the world." I look

forward to my father.

At the beginning of climbing, I was full of energy and very relaxed. But

when I climbed to the middle of the mountain, my body became heavier and heavier

like lead. Dad saw me like this, so we rested for a while, and continued to

climb up. After a long time, I saw that I was exhausted when I was near the top

of the mountain. I begged dad to take me down the mountain. Dad encouraged me:

"hold on a little longer, and soon I will be at the top of the mountain Well,

the ancients said, "you will be at the top of the mountain and see all the small

mountains." dont you want to experience this feeling? " I gasped and said, "Dad,

I really cant climb. I cant move my legs anymore. I want to go back..." Dad

helplessly took me down the mountain.

At that time, I didnt stick to it. Unfortunately, I missed the beautiful

scenery at the top of the mountain. Ive learned that if I do anything, work hard

and stick to it to the end, there will be gains. Study is also, persist in the

end will achieve good results.

I love to read. When I was three years old, my parents had taught me to

read. They bought me some books with funny and colorful pictures. Soon I was

attracted by these stories and fell in love with reading. Since I went to

school, I often went to the library and it was my favorite place. Studying in

the library provided me a silent environment. The most important thing was that

as so many excellent students sat around me. I felt the great motivation to move

on. I could find the data any time and read the books I liked. I have gained a

lot of knowledge and find the great hour there.

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程当中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程当中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

1。句子成分残缺不全

we always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)

we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)

we should read books may be useful to us。 (误)

we should read books which may be useful to us。 (正)

2。句子成分多余

this test is end， but there is another test is waiting for you。 (误)

one test ends， but another is waiting for you。 (正)

the driver of the red car was died on the spot。 (误)

the driver of the red car died on the spot。 (正)

3。主谓不一致

someone/somebody think that reading should be selective。 (误)

some think that reading should be selective。 (正)

my sister go to the cinema at least once a week。 (误)

my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week。 (正)

4。动词时态、语态的误用

i was walking along the road， and there are not so many cars on the street。 (误)

i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street。 (正)

we have little time to read some books which we interest。 (误)

we have little time to read some books in which we are interested。 (正)

i am a student who has studying in the college for two years。 (误)

i have been studying in the college for two years(正)

5。词类混淆

it is my point that reading must be selectively。 (误)

in my opinion， reading must be selective。 (正)

honest is so important for everyperson。 (误)

honesty is so important for everyone。 (正)

the old man was hit by a car when he across the street。 (误)

the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street。 (正)

[英语作文中常见的典型语法错误分析

Dear parents，

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset，you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help，I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours，

Zhang hua

满天飞舞的雪花，像一只只雪白的小蝴蝶从天而降。你们知道这是什么季节吗?相信你们都猜到了。没错，这就是冬天。你喜欢它吗?

当生机勃勃的春天过去时，当炎热的夏天飞走时，当凉爽的秋天不知去向是，就表示冬天已经到来了。寒冷的北风呼呼地吹着，冬姑娘就是乘着它，带着一片白茫茫的世界来到了人间。

山上，落在草地上的雪花铺满了整座山，不留一点儿空隙，仿佛有一大张白花花的地毯铺在地面上;树林里，多得数不清的大树本来是绿油油的一片，现在却变成了雪白的，隐隐约约能看到一丁点儿绿色，似乎是树上长满了雪花，又像是冬姑娘乘着北风经过这里时，顺便把无数件披肩披在了每一棵树上;水面，偶尔有一点泡泡鼓到清澈见底而又平静的“镜子”上，把“镜子”打碎了，并漾起一圈圈波纹。是谁在作怪呢?哦，原来是调皮爱捣蛋的小鱼儿呀!

走进热闹的溜冰馆，就可以看到许许多多的孩子在跟教练学溜冰，也可以看见大人们正熟练地在冰上滑来滑去，还可以见到一些小朋友不小心滑倒摔跤。穿上溜冰鞋，滑到冰块上去，滑到这边，滑到那边……呵呵，要是你会的话，也会觉得很好玩的。