中考英语大常见错误解析(推荐20篇)

panda―the national treasure

panda is one of the scarcest animals. people in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in china long ago.

as the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. but at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in china is in sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

2015杭州中考作文题目：一个小学毕业的大学图书管理员，看到大学者的书单，于是也按着这个大学者的书单来读书，最后成为了一个翻译家和作家，这个人就是金克木。

2015杭州作文解析(仅供参考)：2015杭州中考作文是材料作文，写作这样的材料作文，首先要理解材料。材料主要提及的人是金克木，他的第一身份是一个小学毕业的大学图书管理员;他的最终身份是翻译家和作家;在他的从第一身份到最终身份，有一个过程，“按照大学者的书单来读书”。从而我们可以提炼出材料的主旨，一个人可以通过后天的努力来改变自己的生活环境;也可以选择“按照大学者的书单读书”的角度来进行立意，得出读书改变命运，知识改变命运等发散性思维的作文创作主旨。

相关阅读：金克木(1912～2000)字止默，笔名辛竹，安徽人，1912年8月14日生于江西。著名文学家，翻译家，学者，和季羡林、张中行、邓广铭一起被称为“未名四老”。20世纪三十年代后到北京求学，曾在北京大学图书馆任职员，同时还掌握了英语、法语、德语、世界语等多种语言。1941年金克木经缅甸到印度，任一家中文报纸编辑，同时学习印地语和梵语，后到印度佛教圣地鹿野苑钻研佛学，同时跟随印度著名学者学习梵文和巴利文，走上梵学研究之路。1946年金克木回国，应聘任武汉大学哲学系教授，1948年后任北京大学东语系教授。曾任中华全国世界语协会理事，中国世界语之友会会员，第三至七届全国政协委员，九三学社第五届至七届常委，宣传部部长。2000年8月5日，因病在北京逝世，临终遗言：“我是哭着来，笑着走。”

自然的声音，是一卷绮丽的画轴。或清新如幽兰，或浓郁如油画，或明媚如阳光。

声音一：溪声潺潺，小提琴般明快

在宁静的山谷里漫步，入目全是一片苍翠疏密的叶子，清风一来，飘忽得眼前所有的绿都在轻轻晃动。在这极富韵律感的绿色的雀跃中，我毫无目的地闲散地走着。分花拂柳的心情也没有，只静静地在一片耀目的绿色中开出一条小路。

忽地，淙淙的流水声悄然传来，混合着眼前深深浅浅的极富生命力的绿，组成一曲绝妙的乐章。我循着溪声，来到这清澈的小溪边。

溪水一汪如明镜，晶莹清澈无杂质。仿佛是一块浑然天成的璞玉般，溪水静静地流淌着，流着流着，仿佛流进了我的心里，冲刷走了心里所有的忧愁烦闷。

倒映在泛着细小涟漪的溪水上的，是我眉头紧蹙的脸。因为考试没考好而心情不佳的我，在这个中秋三天小假期里心情堵塞郁闷，无奈之下才到森林里踏青游玩，想像柳宗元一样寄情于山水中排遣心中的愁烦苦闷。然而却如一块大石压在心头般沉甸甸地，令人喘不过气来。

我郁闷至极地蹲在溪水边，伸出双手掬起一捧清澈甘甜的溪流，触手时只感觉一片温润。我微微一怔，好奇地把双手托得高高的，在高处把水流倒进溪中。溅起一串玉珠般的水纹，伴随着清脆无比的“滴滴答答”的声音。小提琴般音质清丽，让人顿觉悠扬。烦闷心事一扫而光。

我弯了弯唇角，忽然感觉舒服了许多。

声音二：风声沙沙，低音贝司般浑厚

林子里静静地刮着风，我百无聊赖地沿着小溪散步。初秋的天气有些凉意，微风轻轻摇曳着树梢，带起一阵簌簌的轻响。沙沙地，却奇异地好听。仿佛带了丝迷人的醉意。

微风轻轻地吹拂着，撩动树上的绿叶，相互间碰撞摩擦所产生沙沙的声响，有些沙哑，有些浑厚。宛如管弦乐队里的低音贝司所发出的声音，厚重却不失好听。许多奇异的声线交织在一起，融汇成了现在我所听见的似乎还散发着浓郁气息的沙沙声。

林子里出奇地安静，因而这不知疲倦的乐音便成了的亮点。仿佛模糊了时间般，我就一直倚在树干边，聆听着平日里淹没在喧嚣浮华的都市里的最自然的声音。几天前的考试似乎已经被我抛却在脑后——至少，此刻的我，是宁静而放松的;至少，我现在并没有在为那一摞尚未完成的假期作业而焦头烂额，烦恼重重。

声音三：鸟鸣啾啾，长笛般清丽

走出树林时，已经是晌午。我长长地吁了口气，准备拔腿回家好好犒劳一下一上午什么都没吃的自己。

此刻的环境不同于林子里万籁俱寂的安静，隐约可以听到远处马路上汽车鸣笛声、小贩叫卖声，以及都市里特有的喧闹声。

As it is known to us, Ping An was chosen to perform on the CCTV Spring

Festival Gala with his melodious and strong voice. Also, he had a great

achievement on this dream stage. Although he hadnt gain the popularity among

the audience at the beginning, he always kept his dream in mind and never gave

it up. It is his success that brings home to me the power of dream.

A life without a dream is a life without a sun. Therefore, in no

circumstances can we give up our dream. Unquestionably, dreams are of great

importance. For one thing, a person having a dream will be considered to be more

responsible and unswerving. For another, in pursuit of our dream, there is a

chance that good habits and positive attitudes can be formed, contributing to

our success.

As for our students, what we should do is to choose a healthy seed and

plant it on fertilized soil. Firstly, knowledge is the foundation of dream

realization, so we should spend much time in study to enrich ourselves.

Secondly, it also takes perseverance and confidence if we want to realize our

dreams. Last but not least, we should not be craven and timorous but brave when

we meeting obstacles.

When you were born, you need to face the ups and downs in our life. For

example, you need to learn to speak, learn to walk, learn to write, learn to

read, and so on. Whenever you learn a new thing, you will be always full of joy.

But the hardness only you know. Perhaps, you have thought about giving up, but

in the end you insist on. In this world, there is no difficult, only those who

do not adhere to. As long as you can hold on, thats not a thing. Perseverance

prevails! This is the eternal law! Come on.

中考英语作文1：my friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

中考英语作文2：my friend

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

中考英语作文3：my friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

Sharing bike can be seen in every corner of the street, which is very

popular by the public. The foreigners speak highly of sharing bike, because they

can ride the bikes to look around the city and the expense is very cheap. As

people enjoy the convenience of these bikes, the problem comes. We can see that

many bikes have been broken and some are even put in the main road, which brings

trouble to the public. Of course when the media reported the phenomenon,

everybody condemned the negative behavior. Sharing bikes are public property,

all the people have the responsibility to protect them, so after using them, we

should just find a right place to lock them. The small act can present a

person’s nature, so dont let yourself be the rude one.

Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.

I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.

First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.

At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score

Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.

And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.

I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.

长这么大，无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活，好多人认为我们很快乐，其实我们也有一些烦恼，比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。

我今年13岁了，个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几，但我不是不张，只是长得慢，一年只长几厘米，害得我妈着急死了，我也很着急，希望我快点长高，因为长不高太麻烦了。

第一：让我很没面子，同学们经常那我开玩笑，比如有一次，我和林启哲上厕所，旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友，他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他：“小朋友，你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”，然后他嘲笑我说：“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。

还有一次，我和林启哲去超市shopping，本来是很开心的一件事，可当我来到收银台时，那个阿姨笑着问林启哲：“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了，林企鹅笑着解释完，走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我，我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新，我想找个机会报复一下

第二，让我体育总是比不过别人，个子不高肯定体育不好，尤其是什么跑步不行啊。

还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个，已经六年了，从来没变过，又一次，国旗下表演，前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题，刚好我是最近的，他问我，我没想到，她在哪里提醒我才明白，让我一下很难堪，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。

我恨不得快点长高，但事与愿违，我只好自嘲：“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮，只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。

Dear friend,

Welcome to our school. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like is to study by ourselves. We can make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most important thing is that we we can be the master of our own study Thanks for listening!

[中考英语话题作文

卧冰求鲤

晋朝时期，有个叫王祥的人，心地善良。他幼年时失去了母亲。后来继母朱氏对他不慈爱，时常在他父亲面前说三道四，搬弄是非。他父亲对他也逐渐冷淡。王祥的继母喜欢吃鲤鱼。有一年冬天，天气很冷，冰冻三尺，王祥为了能得到鲤鱼，赤身卧在冰上。他浑身冻得通红，仍在冰上祷告求鲤鱼。正在他祷告之时，他右边的冰突然开裂。王祥喜出望外，正准备跳入河中捉鱼时，忽从冰缝中跳出两条活蹦乱跳的鲤鱼。王祥高兴极了，就把两条鲤鱼带回家供奉给继母。他的举动，在十里乡村传为佳话。人们都称赞王祥是人间少有的孝子。

有诗颂曰：

继母人间有，王祥天下无；

至今河水上，留得卧冰模。

Dear friends,

May I have your attention,please? I have an announcement to make.A student touring group from Australia is coming to visit our school on Friday afternoon,April 12.Our guests will arrive at 2:00 p.m.and leave at 6:00 p.m. We are going to hold a meeting to welcome them on the playground at 2:10 p.m..Everybody is required to attend it on time.After that,they will be shown around our classroom building,lab building,library,school-run factory and swimming-pool.Last of all,a get-together will be given in the auditorium.There will be singing,dancing,music,games and exchange of gifts.Please take an active part in it.

Thats all.Thank you.

最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

(三)例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;

2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;

3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;

4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。

【考题回放】

1.因为有爱，所以感动；因为感动，懂得了感恩。亲爱的同学，你在生活中曾有过这样的感动吗？如果你曾感动于一个微笑、一个眼神、一声祝福，一 句劝勉，如果你曾感动于一抹曙光、一片绿叶、一颗露珠、一泓清泉，如果你曾感动于羔羊跪乳、乌鸦反哺、落红护花、落叶归根，那么请拿起你的笔，去记录你的 情感历程，用你的智慧，去品味多彩的生活，用一颗感恩的心，去感谢生活中的美。

请以“感恩"为话题写一篇不少于600字的作文。要求：①我手写我心，言之有物，有真情实感。②文体不限(诗歌除外)，题目自拟。③文中不得出现自己学校、老稀和本人的真实名字。 (2005年湖北武汉市中考试题)

2.面对纷繁的生活，我们常常有许多感悟：当我们看见一轮红日冉冉升起时，我们也许会感悟剖青年人的朝气蓬勃与旺盛的生命力，当我们看见叶子从树上落下时，我们也许会感悟到生命的短暂，而应该珍惜时光发奋进取……

朋友，你对生活有什么感悟呢？请以“感悟——”为题写一篇文章。

要求：①在“感悟”后面的空白处填一个词或短语。②除诗歌外，文体不限。③书写清楚，600字左右。 (2005年浙江衢州市中考试题)

各地中考作文的评分标准，绝大多数都把“切题”“扣题”摆在了最前头。有许多省市如北京、黑龙 江、河北、四川等地，分别将“切合题意”、“符合题意”列为一类文、二类文的首要标准；也有许多省市如天津、上海、安徽等地，将“切题”作为一、二类的首 要标准。切合题意，你的文章才是合格的，才有可能跻身优秀之列。

1.得分点策略

一是扣住话题拟新题。话题作文需要我们自己拟题，如果我们将独词式话题扩展成短语并以此作为写作题目，就能将题目限定在命题者设定的范围内。比 如，以“感恩”为话题作文，有同学拟题为“提醒感恩”、“感恩的心”、“相互感恩，始得和谐”等，突出了话题的重要地位，让后面的构思选材等工作自然地围 绕题目展开。

二是下笔扣题打一枪。起笔开门见山，直击题目，引得下文围绕这个方向展开。比如，有一满分作文《清晰的面孔》就是这样开头的：“人海茫茫，许多 人在你的生命中成为匆匆过客，如天空中划过的流星--只留下美丽的一瞬。然而在我的脑海中却保留着一张张清晰的面孔，久久不能飘散。”开头强调“清晰的面 孔”“久久不能飘散”，很自然地就此展开话题，引出了下文合乎题意的描述。

三是穿插文中巧切题。可以围绕题目拟出一组小标题，穿插在文章之中；可以根据题目拟定中心句子，穿插在文章中间。比如，满分作文《“和谐”画 展》一文，以参加“和谐”为主题的画展为内容，描述了“我”精心准备的三幅画：“婴儿哺乳图”、“泪眼蒙胧图”、“夕阳搀扶图”。作者分别以三幅图为小标 题，着力描述了各图的内容。这样，保证文章始终运行在题目的轨道里。

四是锁定题目作结尾。文章的结尾一定要扣回题目，这一点至关重要。比如，2005年上海市有篇中考满分作文《充满活力的岁月》，在展示了自己沉 醉在乐曲境界中与音乐为伴的生活之后，结尾写道：“我就和音乐一起同喜同悲着，她让我的心不曾单调，把我年少的心填满了缤纷的旋律。有音乐在，我生命的每 一分每一秒都会是充满活力的岁月。”这样一来，很自然地点明题意，也留给读者很大的品味空间。

2.失分会诊

一是因误解而离题。或者对题目的含义理解不准；或者对题目的感情色彩把握不当；或者将题目中的局部当作整体，只扣其中的一部分。这些做法都是偏题离题。比如，对话题“借口--弱者的托辞”，一些同学大谈有时候借口也能寻求心理平衡，降低心理压力。这样一来，将“借口--弱者的托辞”这个话题变成了话题“借口”，只顾及了话题中的一部分，造成了整体偏离话题。

二是因随意而脱轨。作者没有紧扣题目和中心的写作意识，写到哪里就顺势说下去，也不管是否符合主旨的需要，这样很容易出现行文离题的问题。比 如，对半命题“窗外的”，有篇作文填题目为“窗外的美景”。文章描述生动，文采飞扬，结构清晰，材料丰富。但是，作者只是在文章前半部分写“窗外”，中间 提出：“那么窗内又是怎样的呢？”然后过渡到写“窗内”。整篇文章的重点就是写“窗内”。很明显，由于作者写作的随意性，导致文章偏离了题意。结果，文章 被评为三类下。

三是因忽视而偏向。只重视狭义的“题目”(不包括导语等)或者“话题”，而无视导语的限制，这也是造成离题的一个原因。比如，2005年北京市 中考作文“开端”一题，导语中有“请结合自己的亲身经历或感受”的要求。如果你的文章既不是叙述你的经历，又没有用你自己的生活经历作为事例，也没有写出 你个人的见解，那么，你就离了题。

3.提升要诀

第一，认真审题。这一步中，有几点要特别注意：一是要认真解读题目“导语”和“要求”部分，决不能轻易放过其中的若干限制。二是要读懂题目或者话题的真正含义。三要读懂题目包含的感情色彩。

第二，提前规划。在动笔之前，先要将文章的构思想清楚，表达什么样的主题，选取哪些材料，材料呈现的先后顺序及详略处理，开头、结尾怎样写等等，尽量想细一些。然后拟写出写作提纲。这样，以有效地避免思维和写作的随意性。

第三，及时补救。写一段话后，要注意回头审视本段或本部分的中心话题是否合乎主旨、合乎题意，是否遵循了提纲所预设的写作思路。如果发现了离题的内容，要迅速截住上面的话，并转到中心话题上来。

2014成都中考作文题：“端午节，中国人有吃鸭蛋的习俗。一个鸭蛋，或许有人会认为它太小，也有人认为它很大。有人舍小求大，有人安于现状。”以汪曾祺的《小小的鸭蛋》里面的这段话，以《小小的……》为题，依据材料写一篇作文，字数要求600字左右。

2014年成都中考的大幕已经拉开，相比高考而言，气氛要轻松得多。13日，成都12.4万余名考生冒雨参加中考。上午，从成都石室联中走出来的考生们，在父母或老师的簇拥下离开。汉字听写大会成都选拔赛、成都本地作家的散文阅读……今年成都中考的语文题目比较“本土化”。树德中学光华校区初三语文老师赵斌说，中考更多的还是考查学生的基本功，只要在初中阶段打好了基础的学生，是可以在中考中取得不错的成绩的。而对于即将升入初三的学生来说，需要做好三件事：积累、感悟和观察，这既是学习态度，又是生活态度。

“小小的”发挥空间大

树德联合中学的考生周焜卓说，她写的是《小小的45°微笑》：在一次运动会的短跑赛道上，她特别紧张。这时，她瞥见人群中一位同学向她送来了一个“45度”的美丽微笑。这让她突然充满了力量，顺利跑到终点。从此，她和那位有着“45度”微笑的同学成为了最好的朋友。初中三年的点点滴滴，她和那位朋友的情谊成为她文章的主线。“我对作文还是比较满意的，我想出题老师的初衷，应该是让我们从细节中发现‘小’的价值。”

树德中学光华校区初三语文老师赵斌说：“这个作文题出得不错，考生入手比较容易。跟去年的作文题‘再也没有’相比，考生发挥空间更大。”记者将周焜卓的作文内容转述给赵斌听。赵斌说，文章的选材和立意都很有特色，如果文中能够有“别人关心我，我把这种温暖传递给其他人”的思想，整个文章还可以再上升一个层次。

“小小的”又亲切又萌

“小小的”这个题目让不少学生喜闻乐见，“好萌”、“好逗比(网络词语)”等点评话语不时从考生嘴里飞出。

“今年的中考作文以十分亲切的面容出现在了考生眼前。‘小小的’这个叠词，给人轻松欢愉的感觉，而半命题的作文形式也给了考生更大自由度。这样的命题形式既继承了传统，又表现出了一定的灵活性，便于考生写出自己的真情实感。”成都树德中学光华校区语文教师白德惠说，补题是这种作文形式的关键，考生最好以写“我”为中心，以内容“熟”为重点，以立意“新”为前提，以“口子小”为上策，就能闪亮登场，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。白德惠表示，随着新课标的颁布实施，中考改革的进一步深化，今年这种作文形式恰好体现了命题趋势：自由度更大、普遍性更强，与学生生活联系更紧密，有利于考生尽情写出自己感受到的最有意义的人生体验和对生活的思考。

语言运用题：以中国汉字听写大会成都选拔赛为背景，结合成都学校如何踊跃参与汉字听写大会的材料，让考生反驳“汉字听写大会对学习中华民族传统文化无用”的言论。

语文考题体现“本土化”

除了作文，给考生们留下深刻印象的还有一道语言运用题。这道题以中国汉字听写大会成都选拔赛为背景，给了一段成都学校如何踊跃参与汉字听写大会的材料，让考生反驳“汉字听写大会对学习中华民族传统文化无用”的言论。赵斌说，这道题考查的是学生的思维能力，说得简单一点，就是如何通过对方的讲述抓住漏洞并进行有效反击。“这道题的答题思路应该是这样的：语言文字是承载中华民族文化的载体，汉字本身具有文化意义，如果连文字都不能掌握，你如何去读懂别人的文章，去抒发自己的情感?”

赵斌说，很多人会有这样的疑虑：似乎语文课本上学的知识跟考试的内容相差甚远。其实，对语言的拿捏是考查学生文化的积淀。积累、感悟和观察，是学生学好语文所必须具备的涵养。所谓观察，是对生活的细致入微的体察，只有当学生情感丰富起来的时候，他才能做到思维敏捷;所谓积累，只有多学习其他人的东西，他的表达才有范本，否则表达会显得苍白无力;所谓感悟，如果说积累有模仿的成分，那感悟的过程就有可能创新。“这是送给即将升入初三学生的礼物。”赵老师说。

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Now, the new semester has begun for more than one week. I gradually adapt

to my new life in senior school. In senior school, my biggest feeling is busy,

for I have classes all the day and teachers leave us a lot of homework. In the

morning, I have two periods for morning reading, Chinese and English, beginning

from 7:00. After that, I have four periods in the morning and four other in the

afternoon. There are many more subjects than in middle school, Chinese, math,

English, physics, chemistry, history and so on. Sometimes, I am afraid of seeing

so many textbooks in my desk. In addition, the contents are much more difficult

than before. Math and physics are the most difficult ones for me. No matter how

hard I work, I still can’t do well in them, which makes me frustrated.

Therefore, in the new beginning, I must change my learning strategies to make my

work more effective. All in all, my new life in new school is good and rich,

though it’s busy.

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.

当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么?我将毫不犹豫地回答:是一个好医生。我想成为一名医生的原因是,我想要尽可能的挽救人们的生命。当我年轻的时候,我有一个可怕的车祸。多亏了医生,他们把我带回生活。从那时起,成为一个好医生一直是我的灵感。我将努力学习,以确保在未来我的梦想成真。

中国梦是由每一个普通人的梦想。我们应该尽力使我们的梦想成真。

Today is womens day, and also the day I get the scholarship. Look! I made a chocolate bar for my mother with a scholarship. Although I have paid a lot for myself, I am very happy in my heart: I can also give my mother a gift, instead of wrapping around my mother for presents!

But mom is sick and cant eat sweet food. I had to put the chocolate in the fridge, but after a few days my mother was very ill, and she took a big bite, and I eagerly asked, "is it good?" She said it was a little sandy. I took a bite, too. I was a little depressed. But my mother encouraged me, "but its sweet, its great!" My heart is sweet and happy! I wrote a few words specifically for my mother, although it was not very good.

On the weekend I like to spend time in library. I like reading books. There

are many people in the library, but it is very quiet. Nobody talks in the room,

only the sound of page turning. I’m very interested in the space, so I read a

lot of books about space. Recently, I read the book Martian. It is about an

astronaut Mark left on the Mars alone, he did many things to keep himself alive.

After 549 solar days his crew mates came back to take him home. Mark is very

tough to survive in Mars, he is a big hero. In the library I can read so many

story and see the bigger world. I like library.

Each year, people burn or cut down 143,000 square kilometers (55,000 square

miles) of the forest. People who burn or cut down trees do it for different

reasons: farmers cut down trees in order to get more fertilize lands to grow

rice or vegetables, and use the woods as fuel. Timber companies cut down trees

and turn them into furniture or paper productions. As to goal miners, they

remove the forests to find out whether there are goal underground.

However, many of us fail to realize that forests are the lungs of the

earth. When we cut down trees, we also push ourselves in to a dangerous

situation. That is the global warming. When you come to think about it, there

are only few ways to solve these negative effects: stop cutting down trees

blindly; try to find some clear energy that can replace oil and coal. But these

solutions can be impractical to some degreed.

Why trees can be so important to the whole nature? First of all, trees are

the habitat of many animals. When we cut down trees, we not only destroy

animals’ habitats but also ourselves. We just gradually destroy natural links.

The result is that many spices of animals and plants are dying out. Secondly,

cutting down trees cause global warming, to some degree. Naturalists compare

forest to human’s lungs. The forests absorb the carbon dioxide and other gas

that cause global warming, and then give off the oxygen that good for the human

beings and other living creatures. It’s refreshed the air as well as reduced the

noise. If the air quality is bad, people may die from cancers, or the new

diseases for which they have no immunity. Forests also play an important role in

the prevention of natural disasters. Warmer temperatures cause water to expand

and also create more water by melting polar ice caps. That’s to say, the nations

which near the ocean may have been flooded by the water. But the forests can

prevent water loss and soil erosion, and cool off the global temperatures. It’s

the key to keep the balance of the nature.

Sometimes people only care about money making; they don’t care about the

price we pay for the pollution. When the disaster is around the corner, we may

be afraid and frustrated. The earth, on which our economies have always been

based, is suddenly threatening our existence. All we hope that is this

overpopulated, over industrialized planet can carry on for a longer time. And

maybe, it’s time for us to realize that we should protect the earth, stop

cutting down trees blindly and madly.

Spring Festival is my favourite festival. This years Spring Festival is in

February 8th. On New Years Eve, everyone will wear new clothes. My parents and

I will go to the Grandpa and grandmas home to eat Nian Yefan. This is the

tradition of our family. At the dinner table, my grandmother will prepare a lot

of dishes for us to cook hot pot. These dishes are very delicious. Everyone ate

very happy. We have forgotten the troubles of the past year, happy to greet the

new year. After dinner, I will go back home with my parents. In eight, I will be

fireworks at the threshold of our home. They are very beautiful. Doing this will

make me feel very happy. After I put the fireworks, I will watch the Spring

Festival Gala. The Gala adds a mood of celebration in the house as people laugh,

discuss and enjoy the performance. At eleven, my parents gave me 200 yuan. This

is my years new years money. 0 ocolck, the new years bell sounded, we have

ushered in the new year. I made a wish. I hoped that that we could have a happy

and healthy life ne--t year and everyone in my family could be happy.

The first day of the new year, my father and I had the red antithetical

Spring Festival couplets on our doors. Every Spring Festival, both urban and

rural areas, each household must select a red couplets affi--ed to the door in

order to increase the festive atmosphere. I also cleaned the room with my mom.

After the event, I will visit friends and relatives with my parents. This is the

custom of the Chinese people to celebrate the Spring Festival.

This is my Spring Festival holiday, I had a very happy. What about you?

Why to find suitable for you at the center of the target, you must ask

yourself these questions: where I know I to go and why? I why want to do is do?

What I want to stand and believe what? I get up every morning is for the sake of

what? The things I do every day is for the sake of what? In my life the most

important value? In fact, the reason why you set a goal is far more important

than the goal itself.

Dedicated to the pursuit of their goals and life value is clear why I have

these dreams. They spent a lot of time to think before every important aspect of

his life, they will think about who you are, what they want to do and want to

make what kind of contribution. If you do not have clear goals, also could not

find support for the urgent reason, finish your dream, you cant like

myself.

No dream, no hope, you cant do any meaningful things. If your whole life

just go with the flow, there is no goal that you cannot really love or respect

yourself.

If you just mix one day for a day, every day after work and weekend

holiday, are made with TV and boring dinner party to pass the time, then you

cant get any sense of achievement, there will be no satisfaction, let alone

happiness.

We all need to have a goal to release the full potential. The target is

larger, the greater the can inspire the potential of the. Studies show that many

people are not happy, feel pressure big, like the debate and argumentative,

because cant find meaning in life, goals and direction. They think life is too

boring!