我的英语老师英语作文初三（汇编20篇）

Dear Mr. Shan

Hello! The Spring Festival is coming. I sincerely wish you a happy new year

and smooth work!

I have been getting along with you for four years. When I first came into

this campus, I was still a little girl. You taught me how to learn and how to be

a person. I remember that I got the first full mark in the Chinese test in grade

one. Your encouraging words and affirmative eyes have made me unforgettable.

Since then, I have determined to be a good student with both good character and

learning.

Mr. Shan, I know that my handwriting is not good. Every time I see you

annotate "write carefully" at the end of your homework, I feel very ashamed.

This winter vacation, I set a goal for myself to practice calligraphy for an

hour every day. Do you know what? I have written the words in the fourth grade

Chinese textbook three times and practiced each word 12 times, so as not to let

you worry about my words any more.

Single teacher, I quietly tell you that I like you very much. It is you who

have taught me rich knowledge, you have taught me the truth of being a man, it

is you who have cultivated my positive and enterprising character, and you have

given me a pair of powerful wings to let me roam in the world of knowledge!

Single teacher, you have worked hard for us. You should pay more attention

to your body and drink more water, which is good for your voice. Id like to

express my highest respect to you! I can only repay you with excellent results -

teacher, you have worked hard!

I wish you a happy New Year!

Your students

Dear Mr Fu,

This is my first letter to you. Its a thank-you letter!

Thank you for what? Thank you for teaching me and helping me.

When I am in trouble, is your warm hand to help me, not when I want to give

up when you use your words to support me, I sincerely thank you! Thank you very

much!

In the coming Christmas, I would like to express my deep thanks to you

again!

I wish you good health and good luck in everything!

Your students

亲爱的复老师

这是我给你写的第一制封信，是一封感谢信!

感谢什么呢?感谢你对我的教导，对我的帮助。

在我困难的时候，是你伸出温暖的手帮助我了我，没当我想放弃的时候是您用您的话语支持了我，我衷心的谢谢您!谢谢!

在圣诞节到来之际，我再次向你表达我深深的谢意!

祝您是身体健康，万事如意!

您的学生

Dear Mrs. / Mr. XX,

I am just writing to say “thank you”.Thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love youve shown to us.

I am lucky to have a teacher like you. And no matter what kind of person I will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and evenhow to be a man. From you, I learned what kind of person I want to be and what I should get from life. This means everything to me.

My dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and I will remember what I have learned from you and carry the knowledge through my life!

Best wishes!

Sincerely,

X X X

[感谢老师初中英语作文例文

Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.

In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.

I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.

A long time ago, and has a small drop of water in the East China Sea listening to the story of the East China Sea Grandpa stresses. It is aware of the East China Sea using miles apart, can not be described in a vast sea, with 1000 960 high enough to describe the depth of the sea. It is very envious of the East China Sea. Therefore, it asked the East China Sea grandfather : Grandpa East. Why then has the vast East China Sea so deep? East grandfather told it : I also another little drop of water, I and many partners around the clock to muddy pool together a small partnership, it becomes a small stream. But we do not stop pace, the United States is continuing to pour forward, and then became rivers. Finally many rivers come together, it becomes a sea, the formation of the East China Sea. small drop asked : We really have so much power? can be turned into a stream, into a river into the sea? East Grandpa replied : Of course not! can not become small rivers flow, so you can become the sea. Also, into the sea, Do not forget the existence of small water droplets, not to overlook the power of small water droplets, but it is the source of our life! Without it, We would not. small drop in the East China Sea remember his grandfather, finally became the famous South China Sea.

很久以前，有一粒小水滴听东海爷爷讲有关东海的故事。它知道东海用千里之遥，不能形容海的辽阔，用千仞之高，不足以形容海的深度。它非常羡慕东海。

于是，它问东海爷爷：东海爷爷，为什么东海那么辽阔还那么深呢?东海爷爷告诉它：我以前也是一粒小水滴，我和许多伙伴们日夜不停地奔流，小伙伴汇集融合在一起，就成了一条小溪，但我们没有停止脚步，继续日夜不停的地向前奔流，然后又成了江河，最后许多江河汇集在一起，就成了大海，形成了现在的东海。小水滴又问：我们真的有那么大的力量吗?可以变成小溪，变成江河，变成大海吗?东海爷爷回答道：当然可以啦!不积小流无以成江河，所以你们都可以成为大海的。还有，成海以后，不要忘记小水滴的存在，更不要轻视小水滴的力量，它可是我们生命的源泉啊!没有它，就没有我们。

小水滴记住了东海爷爷的话，最后终于成为了著名的南海。

我的英语老师唯一的爱好就是跳江南styl，他喜欢笑，讲起课来很随意，讲着课随便都可以插入5分钟的笑话，或者不经意间就和同学们聊起天来，所以他整个人看起来很随和，同学们都喜欢他的课，因为在他的课堂上总是乱七八糟的。

我也不例外，我特别喜欢上英语课，当然喜欢英语课的另外一个原因是我的英语成绩还不错。有一天上英语晚自习的时候，英语老师组织同学们考试，先交完试卷的同学们可以自己干自己的事情，他要求同学们不要说话就行，于是我拿出一张纸，在上边画上两只小猪，用英语在旁边标注着英文两只小猪的对话，写完后我居然大胆的在纸上边用铅笔标注着英语老师的名字。当我拿着自己的杰作开心的给同桌看时，居然被我那小气的同桌给告发了。

我知道自己闯了祸，像一个犯了错的罪人一样顿时立在自己的座位旁边不敢出声。还好老师给我面子，没当着全班同学的面数落我，让我和同桌跟着他去办公室谈，他让我写份检讨拿给他，可当我第二他拿给他检讨的时候他看也没看一眼，告诉我说下不为例，果真是宰相肚里能撑船，多么随和的一个人，他大人不记，我这个小人自然就好过了。

Time came slowly to the Qingming time.

The afternoon of April 3rd, our school organized a class five and class together to worship the martyrs cemetery. Walking into the cemetery, looking around, surrounded by mountains, quiet and silent. Occasionally, there are several birds singing, but they also disperse quickly. Most of the students were lowering their heads, wondering what they were thinking in silence. I sighed with a sigh and thought: it was a long time away from the time of the war, and the soldiers who died for the country were fading away. How many people could remember them? Everyone left with a strain of white flowers, looked up at the distance. Looking at the tall marble statue of the martyr, there was a feeling of admiration in mind, and my thoughts went to that distant age. Those young girls who are still in flower season have sacrificed their lives in the cruel war. Did they ever regret when they died? At that moment, they thought of their parents at home, or the security of their country, or just such a departure?

The worship of the process is very simple, but the atmosphere is dignified. No matter what, what is on your mind at this moment, everyone is silent and soundless. Finally, we put the paper flowers in front of the stone tablets and leave them together. The whole process is somewhat solemn and heavy. Returning to school, my mind is always relaxed and depressed. Whenever I think of that stone tablet and think of the soldier who is sleeping underground, there will be a lot of sadness and weakness. Todays life is because of them, we can live so happily.

Qingming Festival is the traditional festival of our nation. At this time, everyone will pay homage to their loved ones or martyrs. In this Qingming Festival, we can do too little or too little. Only hope that we can use a sincere heart to face our elders and martyrs.

In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular.Many people express themselves,exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.

近年来，微信是越来越受欢迎。许多人表达自己，交流思想，传递信息，通过微信。

There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known.To begin with,Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication,which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people.Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly.Furthermore,convenience also accounts for its popularity.It is available everywhere and at any time.

有大量的微信是众所周知的原因。首先，微信是一个相对便宜的沟通方式，节省了大量的打电话的成本。其次，微信是大多数人的口味。它吸引人的界面和各种功能是爱的疯狂。此外，方便也占其受欢迎的程度。它是无处不在的，在任何时间。

However,problems exist meanwhile.Firstly,our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat.As a result,we can be in trouble.Moreover,it may make communicating with others face to face less.To make the matter worse,relationship could break down.Last but not the least,our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

然而，问题的存在，同时。首先，我们的身份可以发现，当我们使用微信。作为一个结果，我们就麻烦了。而且，它可以与他人沟通面对面少。更糟糕的是，关系破裂。最后但并非最不重要的，我们的注意力可能画得太要重点研究。

That’s all.There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

这一切。毫无疑问，微信将随着时间的推移提高。

"the teacher like a candle, burn yourself out to give light to others." This sentence to describe our teacher in charge teacher liu fitting. Dont forget the original seed ya-nan liu teacher for me.

Although my grades in the class is counting backwards, but liu never gave up on me.

Due to my personal reason, fourth grade last semester language final grade is not ideal, back to school that day, I came to the classroom with uneasy heart, waiting for the teachers criticism, I think liu will certainly be swept over me scold a meal, but to my surprise, the teacher did not criticize me, still a prize for the former hair in my hands. I think: the teacher is in with the special form of silent she encouraged me, wanted to cling to the teacher cry a, but I still bear the heart excited, quivering accepted the prize.

Parents in the afternoon after the meeting, the teacher and her mother to discuss how to improve my winter vacation in language, after coming home, mom told me she and the plans of the teacher, is let me every other day using the Internet to the teacher read an article, this is liu would have considered good plan. Mother said: "never seen so a responsible teacher, she can sacrifice blessedly to some vacation time to help me to learn." The most to my surprise, the teacher gave me a book. I am a poor, the teacher also still like me? Cant let the teacher disappointment, I want to try to overcome their own shortcomings, to learn the language!

Today, my parents took me to my grandfather’s home.I talked with my grandfather for a little while and then I played with my brothers and sisters.

After a while, my elderly brother suggested going to the park and having a rest.“That’s a good idea. ” I said.Then we prepared for the outing.However, after lunch, the sky turned dark and rained heavily.Therefore, our plan was an impossible due to the bad weather.How pity it was!All the afternoon, we could only have fun in house.

We played cards, watched TV and played computer games.We were happy, but we still hoped that we can go out next time.

今天，我父母带我到爷爷家。我和爷爷聊了一会天然后我就和兄弟姐妹们玩。

过了一会，我的哥哥提议去公园然后休息。“好主意”我说。接着我们就为外出做准备。但是，吃过午饭，天空变得黑暗还下起了大雨。因此，我们的计划因为坏天气泡汤了。太可惜了!整个下午我们只能在家里玩。

我们打牌，看电视，玩游戏。我们和开心，但是还是希望下次能够出去玩。

The Great Wall of China is called the "Ten thousand Ii Great Wall" in

Chinese. In fact, it s more than 6 000 kilometres long. It winds its way from

west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it

reaches the sea.It is one of the wonders of the world.The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries. The first part of it

was built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

During the Warring States Period, more walls were put up to defend the

borders of the different kingdoms.It was during the Qin Dynasty that the kingdom of Qin united the dif ferent

parts into one empire.

To keep the enemy out of his empire, Emperor Qin Shi Huang had all the

walls joined up. Thus, the Great Wall came into being.The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk

side by side.Along the wall are watchtowers, where soldiers used to keep watch.Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came.It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any

modern machines.

All the work was done by hand. Thousands of men died and were buried under

the wall they built. The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of

the flesh and blood of millions of men.

Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese

but to people from all over the world. Many of them have come to know the famous

Chinese saying: "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."

Came into the classroom this morning, he heard a lecture is going to have a new teacher, we are pleased to have made a crazy: some people stand on the table shout; Some people leave the seat to run; Some people knock the table. Until the bell rang, we sat on the seat in safe.

A female teacher came in, she has a pair of small eyes, wearing a green dress, plait comb very neat, like a butterfly, dance. She looks very beautiful, with shiny things, very good-looking. We talked about pop up: "slice, wish!" "The most beautiful, the teacher should be very well!" This is envy and jealousy at work.

On the first day in class, she introduced herself first, "my name is what, later call I how teacher!" What the teacher is quite a pretty waist, and then solemnly said: "I got you a IQ tests, if right, award 50 stars, if wrong, ha ha, but to copy words!" Then said: "two months what is close to a word?" I thought for a moment and said aloud: "is a" with "word!" The teacher said in surprise: "congratulations, right! Wait for a while give you prize 50 stars, remaining students, such as copy the text 5 times in a minute." " take mud!" The class (besides me) let out a cry, began to hate the teacher.

In class, the teacher said loudly, "It stimeforclass." We respond to "Goodmorning, the teacher." And then began to lecture. Quickly to the next class, the teacher said: "give you a problem, as long as the right, the whole class to remove just copy, also award 5 stars!" The students happy cheer, the teacher said: "how tall are you? Answer in English." A few good students "sou" once held up his hand, the teacher looked at the seating chart, said: "MuQingHe classmate, you to answer." I think: if is onepointsixmeters. I whispered: "onepointsixmeters." The teacher replied in surprise: "okay, well, I promise, you should thank MuQingHe." Classmates all came running, cheering, running and I laughed, too.

The teachers queer character, in a short while lets copy the text, then dont let us copy the text, but I still like them. At the end of primary school career, the can stay in my mind the image of teachers never wipe not to go!

I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.

That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.

When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.

[初三英语作文：That Day

To My English Teacher

I am a new student here.I havent met you yet.I dont know if you teaches

well.But I can imagine that you are a kind person.I am sure that you will not

make us disappointed.My English is not very excellent.I always make stupid

mistakes.I cant do well in English examination.There are a lot of reasons in

it.Maybe I spent too little time on English.Maybe I was not interested in it.I

hope that you will change that.Maybe you can help me to get interest on

English.Many people,especially many boys thinks that English is a boring

subject.Some people even thinks that boys couldnt do well in it forever.I will

prove that is wrong.Being a boy,I will make great progress in English.

Thankyou!

I have a Chinses Teacher。 Her name is Lui Xiaohong。 She is from Lanchang。 She’s very active and strict。 She has two big eyes。 She’s very nice。But she is short。 She like to smile。 I don’t know what season she like。 Because I don’t know her very well。 Her class is very funny， I like it。

In a word， I love my Chinese Teacher。

“咻——”命中目标！

“哎哟，我的脑袋！”洪凯青大声喊道。

这不，咱班的瞌睡大王洪凯青瞌睡虫又犯了，上课没两分钟就趴在桌子上睡着了。你以为他能进入美美的梦乡吗？这一点儿小举动可逃不过MssLin那双法眼。只见MssLin眼睛直冒火花，纤纤细手从粉笔盒迅速拿出一根粉笔，用扔垒球的姿势直接向洪凯青投去。那速度简直惊人，“子弹”从我耳边一掠而过，不偏不倚地命中目标——洪凯青的脑袋，接着便是一阵惨叫。你们说，MssLin投粉笔的技术是不是“快准狠”？

洪凯青从桌上缓缓爬起，深深打了一口哈欠，他抹一抹眼睛，一看见MssLin正目不转睛地狠狠地盯着他，洪凯青吓得浑身发抖，赶紧坐正。全班同学也都不敢动，只能听见“扑通扑通”的心跳声，没错，MssLin的眼睛把全班都给kill了。

如果看到这你觉得MssLin很凶，那你就错了，她可是veryinteresting的哦！

MissLin上课很有趣！告诉你们呀，MssLin从来都没给我们上过课，她都是在与我们玩游戏，玩什么呢？玩英语！

“Drdrinkdrink！动起手！”她教我们一边做手部动作，一边和她学发音技巧拼单词。我们左手做一个杯子的形状，右手也做一个杯子的形状，再做一个要喝水的样子，有趣极了！同学们的学习兴趣都被调动起来了，在这样轻松有趣的学习氛围下，我们班大部分同学们考试都能得到优秀。

看，我们的MssLin是不是很interesting呢？羡慕我们拥有一个幽默风趣的老师吗？不过要是你也想来我们班级体验一下，可千万别像洪凯青那样爱睡觉，不然MssLin可不会饶了你的！

彭昕怡

在新的学期中，我们班换了一位新的英语老师。她个子不高，有着一头乌黑亮丽的秀发。一双黑溜溜的眼睛，好像会说话一样。我们班的英语课也因为她的到来而变得积极向上了一些。

记得她给我们上第一节课时，在黑板上写下了A，B，C，D四个字母时，我们都一脸蒙圈的看着她。她也没卖关子，而是直按告诉我们这每一个字母向映代表着你们每一个大组，往后的每一节课中每大组之间都是有竞争的。你们可以通过回答问题，领读，默写单词来获得分数，而分数最高的大组可以在英语家业中获取减半的权力。随着老师的话落，同学们都摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试。在老师的提问下，每组之间可以说是“八仙过海，各显神通"，个个都使出了自已的看家本领，生怕自己的大组落后。

"叮铃铃，叮铃铃"下课铃声响起了，这有趣而又积极的一节课结束了。最后老师帮我们统筹了每个大组的积分成绩，获胜的大组获取了奖励，然而没有获胜的大组老师也叫他们不要气馁，争取在下一堂课取得好成绩

这就是我的英语老师——徐老师。

我的英语老师姓陈，因为教的是英语，而且又是女生，所以我们都叫她MISS陈。她有着大大的眼睛、卷卷的头发，平时爱穿花衣服、穿黑色的皮鞋，这样使得她年轻又靓丽。并且她还被我们冠上一个外号“幽默大师”，在她的课堂上经常会爆出震耳欲聋的笑声，想知道她怎么幽默吗？听我细细道来。

同学们应该知道上英语课都有报听写的环节，即枯燥又乏味，而我们陈老师有一次在报听写的时候，竟然把单词用戏曲的声调报出来，起初同学们感到莫名其妙，静了一会儿后，就发出阵阵笑声，呆板的报听写也立马变的有趣起来，从这以后，每次同学们的听写成绩都很好呢！

最精彩的一次我记得是陈老师布置了一篇周记，要求50个单词以上，这时有几个“懒鬼”抱怨开了：“作文怎么要写这么多单词？”还有几个装着一副可怜兮兮的样子乞求说：“伟大的陈老师呀，减少一点吧！”我心想：这怎么可能呢？别做白日梦啦。结果出乎我的意料，陈老师竟然说：“可以。”话未说完，那几个“懒鬼”就欢呼雀跃起来，正当高兴之时，陈老师接着说：“我尊重你们的意见，你们说减少一点，我就减少一点，减到49个单词。”顿时教室里爆出一阵哄笑声，那几个“懒鬼”也惭愧地低下了头......这时，李智同学开始卖乖了：“老师，我很爱学习的，给我加点单词吧！”“好！51个单词”哈哈哈，教室里传出了阵阵笑声。

怎么样？我们的陈老师幽默吧！就因为她独特的教学方式，我们班的英语成绩在全年级可是位列前矛哟！我们喜欢她的人，更喜欢她的陈氏幽默。

严肃下的慈祥，幽默下的认真，构成了一个传奇般的人物——张明清老师。在漫长的学习生涯中，英语老师的几件事令我难以忘怀。

时光追溯到去年寒冬，老师的身体在一节节课的劳累下，她的嗓子不堪重负，哑了起来。至今，我还记得英语老师用那沙哑的嗓子伴着清咳艰苦的讲完的那堂课，那么辛苦！那么劳累！老师用行动证明了自身的付出胜过一切繁琐的话语！那堂课，我虽然忘记了老师为了讲课揉了多少次嗓子，但我不能忘记同学们在那堂课的认真听讲，在那堂课努力学习！

付出就会有收获，在这位一丝不苟的老师身上体现的淋漓尽致。对此，请让我代表全班同学向张老师致以真诚的谢意。

在老师那严肃的面容下，深深地藏着一颗有责任的心。那是一个凄凉的深夜，老师为了不耽误明日的学习进程，从凌晨三点帮我们打英语《快乐阅读》翻译，我可以想象出老师那认真工作的辛勤，那么无私！那么伟大！

老师，您用无声的行为来体谅学生的劳苦，用辛勤的汗水来灌溉未来的花朵，用工作的一丝不苟来升起祖国的太阳！虽然岁月洗刷了您的脸，但渊博的知识令您的心灵如此美丽，虽然生活摧残了您的意志，但一丝不苟的责任感成就了您辉煌的一生。

在我们眼中，张老师永远是美丽的，无论外表，还是内心。

1.Time is flying away，and years are passing by.Only our friendship is always in my heart.Farewell，my friend!Take care，my friend!流水匆匆，岁月匆匆，唯有友情永存心中。朋友，再见!朋友，珍重!

2.Oh，my friend，do you like stars?If you feel lonely far away from home，look up at the stars in the sky， where there is a star for luck that Ive send you.朋友，你喜欢星空吗?如果有一天你在远方流浪时感到孤独、忧郁，请抬头看看星空，那儿有我送给你的幸运星。

3.Life is a profound book.Others notes cannot replace your own understanding.May you find and create something new in it.生活是一本精深的书，别人的注释代替不了自己的理解。愿你有所发现，有所创造。

4.Dont be disappointed on the journey of life.There are friends in the world.Seize your chance and value your opportunities.May our friendship be everlasting.人生路上何须惆怅，天涯海角总有知音。把握机会珍惜缘分，祝愿我们友谊长存。

5.Time does not water down the wine of friendship;distance does not separate our hands of longing.Wishing you happiness forever!时间冲不淡友情的酒，距离拉不开思念的手，祝福你，永远永远!

6.I have three wishes：May our friendship warm our hearts!May joy be always with you and me!May we often meet each other!我有三愿：一愿友情温暖我们心田，二愿欢乐永驻你我心间，三愿我们常常相见!

7.Thinking of each other is just like a thread connecting both you on the one end and m e on the other end.思念是一条细长的线，一端系着你，一端系着我，时刻连接着两颗跳动不息的心。

8.If life cheats you，dont be disappointed and worried.Calmness is needed in melancholy days.Believe that pleasantness is coming.Long for the bright future though you are unhappy. All will pass by and everything will be over.Past things will be pleasant memories. —〔Russia〕Alesander Pushkin

假如生活欺骗了你，不要悲伤，不要心急。阴郁的日子需要镇静。相信吧，那愉快的日子即将来临。心永远憧憬着未来，尽管你现在常常是阴沉的。一切都是瞬息，一切都会过去，而过去了的，将会变成亲切的怀念。

9.If I should meet thee，

After long years，

How should I greet thee?

With silence and tears.

—〔Britain〕George Gordon Byron

多年离别后，抑或再相逢，相逢何所语?泪流默无声。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。