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1000梦想成就未来初三
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+ 加入清单这个暑假我读了一本名叫《天使男孩》的书,书中作者称美丽的小演员加百列是天使,所谓天使应该是指非常圣洁、漂亮、善良的人,我想加百列就是这样的一位天使。
在文中,加百列被他的师父马森欺负说他是一个绣花枕头,但是却没有去报复马森;被剧团团长欺骗后却没有怨他,还因他没有得瘟疫而感到高兴;剧团解散后,他还主动找修道院的修士,争取实现那些人的愿望。加百列真是一个心地善良的天使,他的梦想就是帮助身边有困难的人。
有一次,我去街上买东西吃,在路上,突然看见一个要饭的,只见他连腿都没了,只能靠手撑着小板凳行走,但是,经过的人都像没看见似的,只管往前走。他的碗里一分钱也没有,空空的。这时,我想起了加百列,他那么善良,如果遇到这种情况,会怎么做呢?于是,我给了他10元钱,他连忙说谢谢,我说:“不用谢。”
还有一次,我去公园里玩,只见一个环卫工人在公园里打扫卫生,她累得满头大汗,帽子都湿透了,泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,她拿着扫把,一点一点地把游客留下的垃圾和树叶扫到簸箕里去,可是地上很湿,垃圾就更加难扫了。有的时候,只能用手去捡起来,还有口香糖之类的,有时候弄了半天,也没用。这时,我把刚扔出去的垃圾捡了起来,放到垃圾箱里,这样,就能让环卫工人轻松一点了。
梦想总是那么美好,纯净的如同天使翅膀上不经意飘落的一片羽毛,它从来不曾离开我们的世界,能给我们的内心带来天翻地覆的改变,每一个人都要心怀梦想,心怀美好的事物,伸出双手温暖身边的人,成就精彩的未来。
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篇1:描写有一种幸福初二
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+ 加入清单幸福,满足快乐即为幸福。人生匆匆不过百年,每个人都在寻找幸福。从小,我就认为我是幸福的,而我的母亲就是给予我幸福的人。
小时候觉得幸福,是因为母亲从未对我严格要求,重话也没有说过几句。但是每当我说不想上学的时候,那是母亲罕见的严厉时刻。她会告诉我学习多么重要,会给我讲她小时候多么后悔不念书。小时候不明白只知道低头认错,怕她生气;长大后再去回想,才真正明白母亲的苦心。
刚上初中,我开始有了“独立的思考”。对,那是叛逆。我的脾气变得暴躁,但只是偶尔,那个“偶尔”是指我对母亲大发雷霆的时候。脾气总是发给肯定会原谅自己的人,这句话是没错的。那时的我把母亲对我的包容当做了我发脾气的理由。这时的母亲往往不作声,她还是如往常一般把我的书桌收拾好,给我做我爱吃的土豆丝,待我冷静下来看到这样的画面内心是羞愧的。母亲却没有多发一言,我就顺着母亲铺好的台阶下去,我也是在她的包容里明白自己的错误。
父亲去世后,我患上了抑郁症。
开始谁也没有发觉包括我自己,直到我控制不住情绪、吃不下饭时,母亲带着我就去了医院。确诊后母亲就一直攥着我的手不放,我知道她是害怕。
那段时间母亲一下消瘦了许多。我哭,她就搂着我,自己也抹眼泪,对我说:“没事儿,妈妈在呢,还有妈妈呢。”有一晚,她对我说:“妈妈现在所有的心都在你身上了,妈妈不能没有你……你好好的,妈妈就满足了,真的。”我木木地说:“好。”母亲就一直陪着我,直到病情稳定。我又变得活泼起来后,母亲脸上才没有了愁云密布。
现在,我依然认为我是幸福的,母亲依旧是给予我幸福的人。
我依然记得母亲对我说过的一句话:“我晚上多醒一次就能多陪你十分钟”。我能成为这句话中的第二人称,我就是幸福的。
人的一生短暂且美好,每个人追寻的幸福其实就在身边。
有这样一种幸福:被爱。
谨以此文献给爱我且我爱的母亲。
篇2:关于告别初二
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+ 加入清单城门前一片静寂,只听一片窃窃私语声。太子出现了,大家住口不言,给冬景增了几分落寞。太子严肃地望了望人群,用沉重的嗓音缓缓吐出字句:“今日,是重大的一天,不因为其他事,而是——”话音突落,太子皱紧眉头,心中翻动起了一缕迟疑。
终于,他放下迟疑。他抬起头,严肃地说……
今天,便是我的出征之日。我和舞阳站在一起。舞阳眉头紧皱,汗珠不停滴下。而我,却在四周观望——也许,这是最后一次看景了吧!可是,又为何放不下呢?
过了片刻,秦舞阳不禁问道:“荆卿既知此行有性命之忧,为何还能如此坦然?”我平淡地说道:“你可曾听说过秦国的士兵是怎样上阵打仗的?”不等他回答,又继续说下去:“他们从不披甲戴盔,上阵杀敌,却无人退缩,这也是秦军为何能够所向披靡,称霸天下。而今,燕国就要被秦军的铁蹄践踏,身为燕国子民的我们,怎能不像秦兵那样,为国家献出自己的生命呢?”
渐离,我的好友,双眼热泪不止,盯着我一直看,怎么也看不够。我用爽朗的笑声给众人缓解情绪,可他,渐离,却依然哭着。渐离,为什么叫渐离?难道已注定我要和我最重要的人渐渐离去?上天为何如此不公,让我陷入失友之痛?
“荆卿,你此行就算能够成功刺杀秦王,可秦王还有兄弟子嗣可以继位,这样秦国就会把燕国视为眼中钉肉中刺,而你此行又何谈是救燕国呢?”我轻笑了一声,说道:“如果我们成功刺杀秦王,秦国势必大乱,而燕国,就可以藉此得到发展,甚至强大起来,不求称霸天下,但求相安无事。所以,用我的命来换取燕国的复兴,岂不是很值得?”
冬日的雪花缓缓落下,落在人们的心里。我说,时候不早了,该走了。上了马车,却又迟迟不肯离去。我向大家挥手,泪水再也控制不住,流到地上,融化了积雪。众人泪流成河,悲切之意更加浓厚。这眼泪,是对朋友,还是家乡、亲人的思念呢?又或者,是对心中放不下的情感的诠释?
冬天的易水河是最美丽的,虽然水面已然成冰,不如春天的河水生动、活泼,却犹如一面镜子,倒影着远方重叠不断的山峦和带着点点丝绸的蓝天。只是这一切,都好像是在为离别的忧伤作铺垫罢了。
我的脸上出现了一抹笑容,此时,秦舞阳面上的寒色也荡然无存。渐离为我们击筑,虽泪流满面,筑声却铿锵有力。这应该是他最突破自己风格的演奏吧!雪依然在下着,越下越大……
音绝愁何在,风息人已没。泪见天涯路,拳拳壮士心!
篇3:参观花展初二英语作文
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+ 加入清单Last week Chang Feng Park held a flower show.
I went to visit it with my friends.I was very glad to see so many beautiful flowers in the park.I was really amazed to see a sea of colourful flowers.They told me that some rare flowers came from Taiwan.Thousands of people stopped and watched them carefully.
I took many pictures there.Taiwan has always been a part of our country.I am sure sooner or later we can go there to see many more beautiful flowers.What great fun it will be.
篇4:奋斗成就梦想学生励志作文
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+ 加入清单梦,人人都有。只是每个人所追求的目标不同而已。因为梦是永远走在现实的前面。我从小就有着梦想,就这样朝着前方迈进,向着梦想走去。
没有梦想的人成不了大器;没有梦想的国成不了大国。而我也正在为我的梦想而努力奋斗着。我的梦想就是能够将来成为一位杰出的工程设计师。设计出许多高楼大厦、涵洞桥梁。把自己的祖国建设的更美丽!
俗话说:“人无志而不立。”一个人假若不敢有梦想,是不可能有所作为的。从远古时代的盘古开天辟地到如今的知识爆炸、信息革命,多少年,多少代,多少仁人志士都有着他们的梦想。梦想是我们奋斗前进、勇于创新的动力;梦想是人生的指路灯;梦想是战胜困难的力量源泉……
在这漫长的学习过程中,我会努力学习,不断进取,让我的梦想成为现实。只要我们不断的努力,就是胜利的保证,如果过去的时间没有荒废,现在就可以看到相当的成绩。现在我有了自己的目标,从现在做起,从自身做起,从一点一滴做起,如果目前的成绩不令自己满意,那也并不是你未得到应得的收获,而是证明你又有了更高更远的目标。为自己的梦想而奋斗,并不是一朝一夕的事情,而是长久的,永恒的。
我们的中国梦需要我们敢想敢梦的勇气,需要我们克服现实的障碍,需要我们努力实现梦想的信心。我有梦,中国也有梦。因为有梦就有创新,有梦才有未来。我的梦,便是中国的梦;中国梦,便是我的梦!我要努力努力再努力,为了中国一步步实现自己的梦,那样,中国的梦才能实现。
篇5:高三英语作文梦想100词
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+ 加入清单Each people all have own dream, also have a dream in my heart, it deeply
buried a pregnant with my ideal seeds, in my heart to take root, sprout.
Each people all have own dream, some people want to be a writer, someone
wants to be a pilot, someone wants to be an astronaut, I want to be a human
engineer teachers. Someone may ask me: "when the teacher have a good, low wages,
work hard again, still not taken seriously by people", "the home has five grain,
improper king" but has it ever occurred to you, if there is no teacher to teach
knowledge, then we wouldnt it be a fool, because with the teacher teach us
knowledge, we human beings can become more and more intelligent, more and more
developed, it is because the teacher has given us a seam, we can swim in the sea
of knowledge. During the day, the teacher standing on three feet platform for us
to the lecture; Night, the moon has climbed up the tree, but the teacher in the
flickering light of hard exercise books for us on the road the bright red
tick... Maybe when one is surrounded by the joy of success, he would forget
their loved ones, but he will never forget my teacher, because he has a
teachers success is a credit.
I also is same, no matter how I look, how far, I will not forget my
respected teacher, because I am in the teachers care, love grow up under the
influence of bath, wherever I go to the end of the world will not forget their
own teacher, so I aspire to the teacher the profession. Now I was a pupil, I
must be hard, study hard, study hard, grow up to go in the dream three feet
platform.
篇6:奋斗英语作文初二80词
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+ 加入清单People will be the envy of the sky eagle, but never thought it a thousand
times to practice hard; people were envious of butterfly flowers, but do not
have to pay attention to it once as a caterpillar suffering; people are jealous
of those celebrities, those scientists, those successful people, but never
thought they have too much to pay behind the hardships and sweat, experienced
many setbacks.
So, in the face of the unexpected blow, who seem insurmountable
difficulties, the vast expanse of the thorns, I will not retreat. Because I
know, success is built on the basis of failure and sharpening.
篇7:初二年级英语作文:My best friend
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+ 加入清单My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.
I’m in Class 0506. Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.
She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.
She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.
We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.
My best friend is really great!
篇8:一年级英语作文:我的梦想
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+ 加入清单I have a wonderful dream in my heart。 Its to speak English very well。 Since English is everything for me。 English is my best friend。 English is my soul。 English is my power。 Without English, Im nothing at all。 Nothing。 Now, I can think in English, speak in English, and write in English。 Some people think Im an Indian。 Some people regard Im a Pakistan。 And some people even consider that Im an Egyptian。 But if I could speak English as good as an American, my future would be brilliant。 So I work very hard。
在我心中有一个美丽的梦想。那就是说一口流利的英语。因为对我来说英语就是我的一切。英语是我最好的朋友。英语是我的灵魂。英语给予我力量。没有英语,我什么都没有。什么都没有。此刻,我能够用英语的方式思考,用英语说话,用英语书写。有些人以为我是印第安人。有些人以为我是巴基斯坦人。有些人甚至认为我是埃及人。但如果我能说英语能像美国人说的那么好,我的未来会很完美。所以我很努力学习。
篇9:怎样实现梦想英语作文
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+ 加入清单How to make our dream come true
第一段:The well-known speech form Martin Luther King “I have a dream” continuously motivates a large group of young people to fearlessly fight for their own dreams with endless strong determination. 马丁路德金的著名演讲《我有个梦想》一直激励着年轻人无谓坚定地追求他们的梦想。As for me, a country girl, I have a strong aspiration of becoming a qualified translator.作为一名农村姑娘,我有着强烈的热望想成为一名合格的翻译。
第二段:How to make my dream come true is my eternal goal. 如何成就梦想是我永恒的追求。It is obvious that the journey will be full of hardship and difficulties. 显然,路途必定充满困难艰险。But everything begins with a single step. 但是万事由小做起。First of all, tremendous effort and considerable work should be needed, because I truly believe no pain, no harvest. 首先,大量的付出与勤奋的工作是必须的,因为我坚信吃苦才有回报。As long as we keep struggling, 只要我们坚持奋斗,definitely, 当然,it is a matter of time to realize our dream.实现梦想只是时间问题。Secondly, learning can pave a way for our dream. 第二,学习才能铺平我们的梦想之路。Only learning can help us to reach the highest potential.只有学习才能帮助我们实现最大的潜能。 Thus, we had better keep inputting new brilliant ideas and thoughts.所以,我们要不断吸收新想法新思想。 And last but not least, attitude means everything. 最后也是最重要的是,态度绝对一切。Facing up to our life, being active and positive will always empower and uplift our soul and spirit. 直面生活,积极向上的状态总能振奋和激励我们的灵魂与精神。
第三段:In a word, dream is our priceless treasure and blessing.总之,梦想是我们无价的珍宝与福音。It is courage, perseverance and hope that help us reach our dream eventually.只有依靠勇气、毅力和希望,我们才能最终实现梦想。
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篇10:中秋节初二的英语作文
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+ 加入清单mid-autumn day
mid-autumn day is a traditional festival in china. almost everyone likes to eat mooncakes on that day. most families have a dinner together to celebrate the festival. a saying goes, "the moon in your hometown is almost always the brightest and roundest". many people who live far away from homes want to go back to have a family reunion. how happy it is to enjoy the moon cakes while watching the full moon with your family members.
篇11:描写保护环境的初二英语作文
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+ 加入清单A sunny Sunday, usually every day and sleep until the sun father-drying bottoms climb to get up early and get up in red, wake up my mother. Drowsily mother slowly said: "Today what the section, from Why so early?" Little Red said excitedly: "Mom, do not install confused, you said that today took me to the park!"
Came to park, mother and son were two beautiful scenery attract: kids, some kite-flying, and some shooting while playing ball ...... red bumper cars, while also playing slippery slides, played with enjoying themselves, was sweating profusely.
Little Red hobbled down to holding mothers hand while walking while singing. Suddenly, a banana peel, a red block of the avenue, little red slip banana skin reminded once again to see if the banana peel to her protest, then do not fight a gas, the foot kicked the banana peel. Mom saw, as if aware of her mind like, and did not criticize her, she just pulled the banana skin side next to her while saying with great earnestness: "I know you have been slipping on banana peel, very angry, but you should From the perspective of others think that if you somehow accidentally stepped on a banana peel how to do? red listened to, very ashamed, the banana peel thrown into the bin.
Little Red looked at the move, my mother smiled.
Yes ah! Would it not everyone should be protected?
篇12:八年级下册英语作文_初二年级英语作文900字
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+ 加入清单Great changes have taken place in peoples life in the past 20 years .In the past ,people kept in touch with relatives or friends mainly by sending. Letters ,they would listen to the radio for news and other information.Children used to go to school by bicycle .Big families had to share small rooms .
Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the Internet at home .When they are free ,they watch the news and other programmes on Tv .Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars . More and more people lives in big and bright apear ments with several rooms .
In a word ,people clveletter than before.
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在人们的生活发生了巨大的变化在过去的20年。在过去,人们与亲戚朋友保持联系主要是通过发送。信,他们会听广播新闻和其他信息。孩子们过去骑自行车去上学。大家庭有分享小房间。
现在人们可以在互联网上和他人交谈通过电话或在家里。当他们是免费的,他们在电视上看新闻和其他节目。一些家庭足够富裕,在自己的车送他们的孩子去学校。越来越多的人住在大而明亮的闪光的天际和几个房间。
总之,人们比以前好。
篇13:触动心灵初二作文600字
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+ 加入清单“一蓑一笠一扁舟”是无拘无束的美;“鸟宿池边树,僧敲月下门”是悠闲自得的美;漫步于垄上,捧一抔泥土,感受它的馨香,是洒脱的美。
记得有一年,一连下了好几天的雨。早晨,我睡眼惺忪地望向窗外,天灰蒙蒙的,被窝里暖和极了,我不由继续做起美梦来。“快起床,迟到了。”听到这话,我连忙起身,以最快的速度穿衣、起床、出家门。来到上学的必经之路,我顿时傻了眼:这,该怎么过去呀!前面简直是“大海”!由于雨下的时间长,雨势又大,雨水都漫到马路上,都快及大人的膝盖了。大人过去尚且困难,更别提孩子了。
只见有的家长背着孩子艰难地前行;有的家长卷起裤脚,抱着孩子踉踉跄跄地向学校走去;有的家长和孩子脱鞋挽裤,相互扶持着过。我该怎们办呢?奶奶抱不动,也背不动我,奶奶看着我,欲言又止。该怎么办呢,正当我发愁时,奶奶欣喜地说:“来,宝宝,站在这儿过去。”我小心翼翼地站在三中围墙突出的部分,奶奶扶着我,我用手攀着围墙,就像一只壁虎,走得比蜗牛还慢,我心急如焚,都快要哭了,还抱怨着要迟到了
这时,一双孔武有力的双手抱住我,接过奶奶手里的书包,大步流星地往前冲,还没等我反应过来,我人已经到学校门口了。叔叔放下我,说:“去上学吧,别迟到了!”我开心地走进学校,听到保安嘀咕,好像是说送我来学校的那位叔叔,在送我之前,已经送了好几名学生来学校了。我突然感觉这位“无名叔叔”好有爱,好伟大,好美!
触动心灵的,往往是平凡生活中的美。这美,就是爱、就是温暖,就是不经意间的一刹那,给你带来的感动!
篇14:初二英语作文:Is School Education Enough?
全文共 565 字
+ 加入清单We go to school for education. We learn Maths, English,Chinese, Physics and other subjects. School education is necessary and important. However, no one can learn everything from school. Even a very good teacher can not tell his students everything they want to know.
Edison didnt have much schooling, but he became a famous scientist. It doesnt mean that school education is not important.He knew how to learn new things by himself. As a matter of fact, many things can be learned outside school by the students themselves.
So we should learn how to learn at school.
篇15:我的梦想英语作文
全文共 1604 字
+ 加入清单Have you thought about your dream? I have, I have a dream that three, for example: gorgeous singer, everyones favorite actor and tasty dessert. When I want most is a singer, because I love to sing, and I also think I sing well, ms wang yu also think so.
Since my dream is to be a magnificent singer, I try to practice every day to sing, sing, class bored singing, taking a bath, also singing... And so on. Why I have this dream? Because I think my voice can bring you warm and happy feeling, let you angry and sad mood all behind to complex.
As the saying goes: "god helps whoever helps them," I really believe that this sentence, because I also believe that as long as there are serious efforts to pay, there must be a good result. When the singer is very hard, because you want to memorize all of the songs, also want to hide paparazzi, there are a lot of hard work, but I believe that success as a singer, after all the hard work was worth it.
Because most people dream and great, so if you dont have a dream now, think about it: what are your strengths? Go near you strengths and go ahead! Come on! One day you you will be successful. Because as the saying goes: "failure is the mother of success."
你有想过你的梦想吗?我有,我的梦想有三个,例如:华丽的歌手、人见人爱的演员和美味的甜点高手。我最想要当的是歌手,因为我很喜欢唱歌,而且我也觉得我唱得不错听,王千瑜也这么觉得。
自从我的梦想是要当一位华丽的歌手后,我每一天都在努力的练习唱歌着,下课唱、无聊的时候也唱、洗澡也在唱歌......等等。为什么我会有这个梦想呢?因为我觉得我的歌声可以带给大家温暖及开心的感觉,让大家把生气及悲伤的心情都抛到复杂的脑后。
俗话说:“皇天不负苦心人”,我很相信这一句话,因为我也相信,只要有认真努力付出,一定有个美好的结果。当歌星很辛苦,因为你要背好所有的歌曲,也要躲狗仔们,还有很多辛苦的地方,不过我相信,成功当上歌星后,这些辛苦都是值得的了。
大部分的人都是因为梦想而伟大,所以如果现在的你没有梦想的话,想想看你的强项是什么?再往接近你强项的目标往前走下去吧!加油!总有一天你你一定会成功的。因为俗话说:“失败为成功之母。”
篇16:中考英语作文:我的梦想
全文共 750 字
+ 加入清单导语:每个人都有梦想,这能让我们更加的努力,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的my dream英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
I have many dreams, such as I am rich in the future. Therefore, I can buy all what I want. But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut. Our country develops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades. It has great achievements. All of our country are proud of it. Therefore, I want to be one of this amazing area. In order to make my dream come true, I must work hard now. So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge. I hope my dream can come true one day.
【参考译文】
我有很多梦想,比如我希望将来变得富有,这样我就可以买我想买的一切。但是我最大的梦想是成为一名宇航员。我们国家发展得很快,而且在过去几十年中太空取得了巨大进步,有很多大成就,所有人都为之骄傲。因此,我想成为这一神奇领域中的一员。为了使我的梦想成真,我必须从现在开始努力。这样我就能够去一所好的大学学习更多的知识了。我希望有一天能够梦想成真。
篇17:初二英语作文:我的朋友
全文共 576 字
+ 加入清单I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He comes from Beijing.
Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.
We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made GREat proGREss in our studies.
We have made up our minds to study harder and win still GREater success in our studies.
篇18:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
全文共 1044 字
+ 加入清单要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
篇19:我的梦想英语
全文共 538 字
+ 加入清单I like reading books so much, rencently, I fall in love with the travel
books. When I open these books, I am attracted by the colorful pictures. Reading
these books can broaden my vision, I know there are so many places that I have
never heard of before. I also learn the different culture. I am so eager to go
to these places and have a look at them. So I have made up my mind, I will
travel to the places that are around me first, and then when I grow up, I will
travel further. This is my little dream, it is also my motivation to study
well.
篇20:有关爱让我成长初二
全文共 829 字
+ 加入清单成长,对你来说,是什么?是一天天长高,一年年的年龄增长吗?不,这只是表面上的成长,有一种成长,叫心理上的成长。
四年级期中考试数学原本应该考的很好的我却荒天破地只考了73分,这鲜红的73分,似乎显得格外狰狞,它不止写在了试卷上,而且还刻在了我的心上。那鲜红的大巴叉,似乎又有了魔力,它似乎嘲笑般的对我说:“你看看,你才考了这么一点分,丢死人了!”想着,我不争气的眼泪就一滴一滴落了下来,滴在试卷上,立刻晕染了一片鲜红。
我想起了老师的谆谆教诲,妈妈的千叮咛万嘱咐,可一切都晚了,晚了。我沮丧地收拾书包,准备回家。在回家的路上,我看到花儿都耷拉下来,天空阴沉沉的,似乎在预兆着什么。到家了,我反复在门前踱步着,自己要不要进去,向妈妈坦白自己考得不好,再一顿竹笋炒肉。不进去的话,老师会把成绩发到妈妈手机上的,我一咬牙,推了门进去。
“回来了,知道你这次考的不好,下次努力啊!”我一惊,妈妈今天怎么这么反常?我一想到妈妈那“河东狮吼”,就吓的一身冷汗。
“妈……我……”我支支吾吾,半天说不出话来,妈妈又说:“这次就不批评你了,我知道现在你心里一定也非常难受。”妈妈,这话一出口我就热泪盈眶。妈妈继续温柔的说道:“一次考不好并不能代表什么,失败并不可怕,可怕的是你不进步,重要的是我们要严肃的对待自己的问题出在哪里,认认真真地改正。在以后的学习上,踏踏实实的做好每一次作业,学好每一个知识。孩子,从哪里跌倒,就从哪里爬起来!继续前进,加油!”说完她轻轻的拍了拍我的肩膀。
望着妈妈那平和的眉眼,我心中倍感温暖,一时不该说什么好,只是默默的点了点头。是啊,人从哪里跌倒,就从哪里爬起,妈妈说的没错。想着,一股暖流涌上心头。
于是,我努力学习,上课认真听讲,积极发言,老师边讲我边做笔记,暗下决心,一定不辜负老师的希望,不辜负妈妈的期望。功夫不负有心人,我在期末考试中,我的数学取得了96分的好成绩。
成长,是妈妈给了我宽容,给了我温暖和战胜失败的力量,我才能重拾信心,得以前进。