我喜欢狗初一英语作文通用20篇

我最喜欢的动物英语作文1：

my pet is a toy bear. his name is small white. he is white. he has blue eyes and blue ears. his hands and feet are blue too.he is naughty.

he likes to make fun of me. he likes reading.

when i am unhappy, he accompanies me.

he is my good friend.

我最喜欢的动物英语作文2：

maybe everyone has a kind of animal which he favourite,me too!

i like all the little animals,but my favourite animal is dog,maybe you will ask the reason,why do i like it ?very simple ,cause of his loyal heart,and they are so cute,they always make a friendly ship with people.they are friends to the human.they bring too much joy to us!do you agree with my view?

and whatyour opinion?

我最喜欢的动物英语作文3：

I like animals very much, such as horses, monkeys, cats, tigers and so on. But I like dogs best. Why? Because they are very cute and friendly.

我非常喜欢动物，比如马，猴子，猫，老虎等等。但是我最喜欢小狗。为什么呢?因为他们很可爱很友好。

I have a white dog. Its name is Bobo. She is a female dog. She comes from Beijing, China. She has two big eyes and a small month. She wears white clothes. She often walks around at home. It has nothing to do. She likes eating ice-cream so much, So do I. When I eat ice-cream, she will look at the ice-cream carefully. So I will give her some to eat.

我有一只白色的小狗。它的名字叫波波。她是一只小母狗。她来自中国北京。她有一双大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。她穿着白色的衣服。 她经常在家里到处走。但是没关系。她喜欢吃冰激凌，我也是。当我吃冰激凌的时候，她就会很认真的看着冰激凌。所以我会给她一些吃。

I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world.

我觉得波波是世界上最最可爱的狗狗。

The horses are strong, not like the tame cats or puppy dogs.

They look wild and hard to get close. Yet, they will be very timid and friendly after they get to know you. Horses remember the way home. They are also faithful to their masters.

They even understand what you are trying to tell them. Ive heard many stories about how a horse saved his masters life.

Thats also the reason why I love horses. They never betray you.

[我喜欢的动物的英语作文

Remember a Wednesday afternoon, Grandpa brought back a lovely puppy.

This little dog is very naughty, a gray hair, small eyes like black gem as bright, a pair of small ears cleverly erected on the head, the tail is always upturned, it is particularly cute. Because it is very naughty. So I gave it a name called "little skin."

He likes to eat bones. Eat two claws tightly put the bones on the ground. You look at it when eating bones, how delicious it! It is most like playing with other peoples puppies, it is happy, always love to shake its tail. Unhappy when you do not even look at me. When someone came, it would be barking, as if I said "someone came" I play with a small partner, it straight to my side Minato, but also straight behind me.

Later, the small skin missing, I am very sad, like a knife twist in general. I see someone elses dog to think of small skin, I believe that one day a small skin will come back.

Dogs

Nowadays many people like to have dogs as their pets. Dogs are friends of man not only because they are lovely but also because they are faithful to their masters.

Dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. But long ago, dogs all over the world were wild.

Dogs can date back to the Stone Age. All dogs have the same ancestor. It is believed that their ancestor was much like a wolf. Other animals, such as the fox, came from this ancestor, too. Hundreds of thousands of years ago, man began to tame wild dogs. After the dogs were tamed, they were trained. The strong dogs became working animals. They were trained to pull heavy loads. They learned to keep an eye on the sheep and other animals. Working dogs had other jobs, too.

Some dogs were not strong. But they could help man hunt for game. Other dogs were best as pets.

Today, there are more than 100 kinds of dogs in the world.

狗

现在许多人都把狗当作他们的宠物。狗是人类的朋友，不仅因为它们可爱，而且因为它们对主人忠诚。

狗能为人类做很多工作。它们可以和我们玩，它们可以跟我们一起打猎，它们可以给我们看家。但是以前世界上的狗都是野生的。

狗可以追溯到石器时代。所有的狗都是同一个祖先，人们相信狗的祖先很像狼。其他动物，如狐狸，也是来自这个祖先。几千年前人类就开始驯服野狗，狗被驯服后，人们就训练它们。强壮的狗成为人类工作的帮手，人们训练它们拉重的货物。它们学会了帮人们照看绵羊和其它的动物。

有些狗不够强壮，但它们能帮人们寻找猎物。还有些狗成了人们的宠物。

目前世界上狗的种类已经达到100多种。

[关于狗的英语中考作文

When I was picking up my stuff after school, I saw a dog staring at me at the school gate .I was kind of scary. I thought the dog would bite me when I was going out. But it was not. The dog started to follow me. I was very afraid. I started to run away, but the dog did it, either. Suddenly, the dog ran pass away me. I realized the man in front of me was the owner of the dog. I was relieved.

From then on, as long as a dog stares at me, I will look back to have a look whether there is another person near or not.

有的人喜欢喵喵叫的小猫，有的人喜欢“游泳健将”小鸭子，还有的人喜欢毛茸茸的小黄鸡，但是我却喜欢小狗。

我爷爷家有一只小黑狗，它的名字叫小黑灰，为什么会叫它小黑灰呢？因为它的毛发乌黑发亮，只有尾巴那一截是灰色，所以我们都这样叫它。

我们的小黑灰很贪吃。有一天早上，我正在吃奶奶做的鱼，那鱼可香啦！正当我吃得津津有味的时候，小黑灰就用它的身体蹭我的脚，我一开始不知道是什么意思，但是我看它口水都要流出来的样子，就给了这一个大鱼脑袋，它迫不及待地叼着鱼跑到它的用餐专区，开始吃起来，唉，别人家里只有猫才爱吃鱼呢。我们家不仅猫爱吃鱼，狗也爱吃鱼。真是个“贪吃鬼”！

除此之外，小黑灰还很贪玩，有一次我准备要去跟小伙伴玩，但是正当我要出门的时候，小黑灰来到我脚边，紧紧地跟着我。我还以为它又要吃鱼了呢。然后我摸了摸小黑灰的脑袋对它说：“没有鱼了”。它还是紧紧地跟着我，见它可怜的模样，于是我决定带它出去玩。小黑灰高兴坏了，尾巴一直摇个不停，而且正因为小黑灰的加入，那一天的我们才真的体会到愉悦无比，畅快至极。

这便是我家的小黑灰，贪吃又可爱，贪玩又活泼，我喜欢和它玩耍，逗趣，我喜欢这只充满着魅力的小狗。

Spring is coming. Birds are singing and flowers are blooming. I wanted to plant spring in my home, so I, together with my dad, went to the market and bought some flower seedlings. We prepared to plant them in the yard. When we were back home, we went into action in no time. Some time later, we finished. I will patiently wait for spring to come to the yard now.

Spring is the first season of a year.There are there months in spring :Morch ,April and May ,The weather is warm and windy.It rains a lot.The trees turn green and all the flowers are coming ont.In spring,I can wear my shirts .I often plant trees and go hiking .So I like spring very much .Of course ,I like the Spring Festival ,too.

参考翻译：

春天是四季中的第一个季节.春天有三个月,分别是：三月、四月、五月,天气则是温暖与微风,同同时多雨.树木茂盛、花草盛开.在春天,我们可以穿衬衫.我经常植树和远行,所以我十分喜欢春天.是的,我同时也喜欢春节。

Miss Hou is my English teacher, she is 28, we all like her. My English is really bad at first, I am afraid of having Miss Hou’s class, when she finds this, she doesn’t blame me, she tells me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English, she asks me to watch English movie, it works. Miss Hou is my favorite teacher.

候老师是我的英语老师，她28岁，我们都很喜欢她。我的英语一开始真的很不好，我怕上候老师的课，当她发现了，她并没有责备我，她告诉我唯一能学好英语的方法就是喜欢上英语，她叫我去看英语电影，这起作用了。候老师是我最喜欢的老师。

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students. As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her. Miss Hou is a good teacher.

如果你问我我最喜欢的老师是谁，我会毫无疑问回答你候老师是我最喜欢的老师。她是一位英语老师，对每个人都很好，她不想其他的老师那样对学生很严格。候老师很受学生的欢迎，学生怀着很高的热情学习英语，这是他们所能回报她的。候老师是一位好老师。

I remember the first time I see Miss Hou, she walks in class, and then talks with students about small things. She doesn’t talk about English in the first class, everyone feels Miss Hou is so amiable, we like her so much. Miss Hou is good at teaching us, she explain the question very patiently, when we understand, she will be move to the next topic, Miss Hou is a good teacher.

我记得我第一次见到候老师，她走进教室，然后和学生讨论一些小事情。她在第一次课上并不讲英语，大家都觉得候老师很和蔼，我们很喜欢她。候老师很擅长教我们，她很耐心地解释问题，当我们明白了，她才会讲下一个题目，候老师是一名好老师。

（一）我家的小狗My Little Dog

Last year，my friend gave me a little dog. I was fond of him very much. I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went. I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me. It seemed that he was calling me.

My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home. When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them. What a lovely dog he is！

去年我朋友送我一只狗，我非常喜欢它。我很喜欢和他一起玩，放学后他喜欢跟着我，无论我走到哪里。我很高兴我有一个“保镖”。

去年冬天我功课很忙，每天回家都很晚。但是，不管我到家多晚，我的狗狗经常站在一个角落里在我的学校等着我。当我经过那里，他厉声叫两到三次，然后跑向我。似乎它是在呼唤我。

我的狗，不仅把我照顾得很好，但在家也很负责任。当有陌生人来到我家，他对着他们叫但不会伤害他们。他是一个多么可爱的狗！

（二） 我家的小狗 My Little Dog

Nowadays many people like to have dogs as their pets. Dogs are friends of man not only because they are lovely but also because they are faithful to their masters.

Dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. But long ago, dogs all over the world were wild.

Dogs can date back to the Stone Age. All dogs have the same ancestor. It is believed that their ancestor was much like a wolf. Other animals, such as the fox, came from this ancestor, too. Hundreds of thousands of years ago, man began to tame wild dogs. After the dogs were tamed, they were trained. The strong dogs became working animals. They were trained to pull heavy loads. They learned to keep an eye on the sheep and other animals. Working dogs had other jobs, too.

Some dogs were not strong. But they could help man hunt for game. Other dogs were best as pets.

Today, there are more than 100 kinds of dogs in the world.

现在许多人都把狗作为他们的宠物。狗是人类的朋友，不仅因为它们可爱，而且因为它们对主人忠诚。

狗能为人类做很多工作。他们和我们一起玩。他们追捕我们。他们把我们的门。但很久以前，世界上的狗都是野生的。

狗可以追溯到石器时代。所有的狗有相同的祖先。据说他们的祖先很像狼。其他动物，如狐狸，来自祖先，太。几十万年前，人类就开始驯服野狗。狗被驯服后，他们被训练。强壮的狗成为人类工作的。人们训练它们拉重的货物。他们学会了照看羊和其他动物。工作犬有其他的工作，也。

有些狗不够强壮。但它们能帮人们寻找游戏。其他的狗是最好的宠物。

今天，世界上有超过100种的狗。

（三） 我家的小狗 My Little Dog

When I was picking up my stuff after school, I saw a dog staring at me at the school gate .I was kind of scary. I thought the dog would bite me when I was going out. But it was not. The dog started to follow me. I was very afraid. I started to run away, but the dog did it, either. Suddenly, the dog ran pass away me. I realized the man in front of me was the owner of the dog. I was relieved.

From then on, as long as a dog stares at me, I will look back to have a look whether there is another person near or not.

放学后在我收拾着东西的时候，我看见一只狗在学校门口盯着我看。我有点害怕。我以为狗会咬我，但是当我走出去时。它并没有。狗狗开始跟着我。我很害怕。我开始跑，但是狗狗也跟着。突然，那只狗从我旁边跑过去了。我才发现我前面那个人是狗的主人。我松了一口气。

从那时起，只要有狗狗盯着我，我都会往后看看是不是有人在旁边。

[英语作文三篇：My Little Dog 我家的小狗

As we know , English has become an internationallanguage. It is more

popular than any other language inChina. English is widely spoken inthe world

and it is the most useful language around the world . But how tolearn it well

?

The best way is to use it all the time . If we cantalk in English , think

in English we can learn it well . At school , we shouldlearn to hear , speak,

read and write carefully . We should spend enough timein practicing English . If

we keep on working hard at English , we will be ableto be good at it one day

.

Do you like animal？ What’s your favorite animal？ My favorite animal is monkey. It is lovely and clever. People always say that our human beings are evolved from monkeys. In the other word， monkey looks a little like human being， which close the distance between it and me. It has a long tail. It can make different shapes by it. It likes eating bananas. It will peel off the skin just like human being. It is funny！ I love it.

我的邻居家有一只可爱的小狗，名叫“卢比”。

它浑身上下长着金色的绒毛，在阳光的照耀下，一闪一闪地，像穿着一件黄色的皮大衣，可神气了！

每当我一放学，它都会跑过来和我亲热，它那么可爱，我情不自禁就会把它抱在怀里，它也温顺地躺在我的怀抱里，一声不吭。

卢比还是一个小小的“运动健将”呢！我使出浑身吃奶的劲都追不上它。

小狗有很多好处，比如：牧羊犬能帮助人们看护羊群，警犬能帮助警察抓坏人，猎犬能帮助猎人追捉猎物。狗类家族中有很多是宠物狗，给人类的生活带来了无穷的乐趣。

我非常喜欢邻居家这只叫“卢比”的小狗！

My favourite English teacher

There is a person that I thank for in my life, this is my English

teacher. She is my favourite teacher who helps me out. Now let me tell you why.

I had a bad score in English when I first met her one years ago. It made me more worry and nervous. From then on, our English

teacher started to spend her free time teaching me and I paid more attention to study. After several exams, the score of my English improved thanks to her.

As well as helping me with my English she always takes care of me. For example, once when I got a bad cold, It was her that look after me call my parents to pick me up and because of this I became lively again soon.

Anyway it’s my English teacher who not only gives me the care but also helps me improve my English. What’s your favourite teacher

[我最喜欢的老师英语优秀作文

我家养了一只顽皮可爱的小狗，它的名字叫毛毛。（开门见山开头，注意了词汇的运用。）

毛毛全身是白色的，略带斑点，（整体特征）一个圆溜溜的脑袋上嵌着一双珍珠般的大眼睛，下面是一个黑黑的鼻子和一张小小的嘴，（局部特征。）一条短尾巴向上卷起，像一团小绒球一样可爱极了!（典型特征）

毛毛有时候喜欢吃肉，有时候喜欢吃土豆片，还有的时候喜欢吃骨头，偶尔也会吃点香肠。它也是我的“小闹钟”，每天早上它都会跑到我床边叫醒我。（简单的介绍一下毛毛的生活习性，为下文做铺垫，最好再细致生动些！）

有一次，爸爸、妈妈都不在家，我在写作业。大概是毛毛太饿了，就自己去厨房找吃的，还好我们早上吃的是鱼，地上还有一些鱼骨头，它狼吞虎咽的吃着鱼 骨头，都没有发现我站在它身后。不一会，它填饱了肚子，刚一转身就发现了我，它在我身上蹭了几下，真是太可爱了!（缺少狗吃食物的一连串的动作描写，不够 生动形象，请你补上！）

都说狗是人类的朋友，我看这话一点也不假。自从毛毛到我家，不但给我带来了欢乐，也给家人带来很多乐趣。我喜欢它，我愿意永远和它是“好朋友”！（抒情式结尾。）

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写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

我喜欢的小狗李默莎 我最喜欢小狗了。我常想：要是允许我和一只小狗做朋友的话，我一定会细心地照顾它，不会冷落它。 记得有一次，爸爸从小区花园里抱回来一只流浪的小狗，它非常小，它的毛是黑色的，上面有一块一块白色的斑点。它用它那双大大的、水汪汪的眼睛惊慌地看着我们。我很想留下这只可怜的小狗，可是爸爸说，它是别人家的，走丢了，丢了狗的人家一定很着急，要把它送到物业办去。妈妈也说：“默默，这只小狗才差不多 二十厘米 高，还这么小，离开了它所熟悉的环境和养它的主人，你看它多害怕呀！你难道不想让它回家吗？”看到我的情绪低落的样子，爸爸笑着说：“等你再长大一点，我们就买一只小狗来养吧！”听了爸爸的话，我才高兴地笑了。

小狗狗，你还好吗？这件事已经过去了，那只小狗的样子一直在我的脑海里挥之不去。记住了吗？^_^

Dogs belong to the canine。

When a dog follows its nose， its actually being led by thee key senses。 Sight：a glimpse of the enemy saves them barking up the wrong tree。 Sound： a bark can be a fierce threat， but its also how canines make their long distance calls。 Smell： this tells a dog more than all the other senses put together。

Inside its nose are around two hundred million smell sensitive cells， forty times more than in humans。 Through them the dogs brain can pick up signals from one molecule of scent in a million。 It gives the dog： a completely different picture of the world， based on what it smells， rather than what it sees。

Flowers are irrelevant to a dog。 So their scent is meaningless。 But food is a serious matter。 What to us is an empty plate， is covered with the smell of chicken to a hungry dog。

Each of us kown that there are four seasons a year,each season is diffent .Different people like different seasons, my favourate season is the spring.Spring is the season of hope.Green is the color of sping,and it is also the color of hope!Spring is also the season of life.All things started to recover at this time .It is a symbol of the beginning of life.So i like the sping!

I like the animals very much, but my favorite animal is my uncle picked up the puppy.

The puppys hair is yellow, his ears pointed, his high, his eyes round and big, black and bright, his nose black and upright, its mouth is small , Its tail long swing to swing, very cute.

Puppy eating food when very cute, I put the ribs into a small bowl inside, he far to see, all of a sudden ran over, first with a smell of the nose, it smelled the taste of ribs, immediately dangling, Big mouth to eat up. Puppy habits every time to see strange things, have to use the nose to smell, when it will eat something crisp sound.

It is always in front of his forefoot on the front, back on the back, he sometimes when he was going to sleep barking sound, as if in a dream.

Puppy and I often play the game is running, it ran like a river when the same action is very agile.

I really like this puppy, should be, it has been with me a good time.

My favorite little animal is the neighbors puppy, it is covered with white, and furry, it is bright and bright eyes especially God, two little ears shaking, really naughty! There is a small tail Often thrown to go, as if to show off their own! The most interesting is that little nose, how a sniffing is also idle. It is also particularly alert, a see stranger, it will "barking" barking, until the stranger away, it will stop calling. Once the evening met the mouse, it will be "barking" called a non-stop, listening to the neighbors said: since it came, also caught a few mice it!

We all like the puppy very much.