我喜欢狗初一英语作文（汇总20篇）

ustin Bieber is my favorite singer. Born on March 1st, 1994, he becomes famous at the age of 15. When he had his first music album, the whole world is crazy for this young boy. His most famous song is baby, has more than one billion hit on the Internet. He is not only very talented but also very warm-hearted. He has names his perfume Someday, and he has donated large sum of money to the poverty. I love him so much, I wish I could see him someday.

My family a few years ago to keep a puppy, it is long with a golden hair, a small nose, a pair of black pearl-like eyes, we call it "golden hair", it looks very cute!

In the morning, I got up to rinse, wash my face, and the puppy ran hard on the little tail, and around my side, and kept licking my trousers as if she were saying, "Good morning, small the host."

After dinner, I went to the neighborhood to play. Out of the door, I saw my dog at home in front of the neighbors, my friend is squatting on the ground with his familys dog playing it. I walked quietly, shouting behind my friend, he was shocked. I stood next to the "hehe" smile. Friend said: "scary." His puppy raised his head, stared at two round eyes, as if to me, said: "What do you scare my master, he did not call you." My puppy Hear a friend s dog called me a few times, quickly jumped to it, as if to say: "Do not say my master, is teasing your master to play.

A Sunday, I want to sleep a Lanjue, but my puppy I do not know what time into my room, it hard to pull my trousers, I wake up from a dream. I climbed up and looked at the cute puppy, and it was "barking" to me, as if to say, "The lazy man does not get up quickly and the sun is sunbathing."

This is my home dog, cute it!

我家有一只小黑狗，我们都叫它小狸。

小狸全身黑黑的，像穿着一件黑披风，可酷了！在阳光下闪闪发光，摸一摸滑滑的。一张小嘴里长出两颗小白牙，吃东西的时候露出来可爱极了。它那长长的尾巴一见到我就摇来摇去，像一根笔直的小天线。四条短小粗壮的腿，跑起来可快了，像火箭一般。

小狸很贪吃，每次吃东西都是狼吞虎咽的，我才刚给它一碗，几分钟就被消灭光，又摇着尾巴，舔着舌头向我要吃的。如果你不给它，它就使出撒娇计，在你脚边蹭来蹭去，好像在说：“小主人，你给我一点吃的吧，求求你了。”我实在受不了它的粘人，又给它找了几个肉骨头。小狸很爱干净，吃完东西总是用自己的小手掌擦嘴巴，那样子滑稽又可爱。

记得有一次我放学回家，刚推开房间门，就听到“呼呼”的声音，把我吓得魂飞魄散。我把被子一拉，原来是小狸爬到我的床上睡着了，而且睡得很香。我生气地用力戳了它一下，它跳了起来，立马比出攻击的姿势，好像要把我吃了一样。它一看是我，立马乖乖的趴下，继续做它的春秋大梦。有些时候，我小狸很调皮，经常把我的衣服用嘴叼到地上，然后舒舒服服的躺在上面，呼呼大睡起来，睡醒了就立马逃离“作案现场”。妈妈以为是我乱丢衣服，狠狠地骂了我一顿。可它呢，却摆出一副得意洋洋的样子，迈着优雅的步伐走开了，我真是有苦说不出呀！

小狸是我的好朋友，它让我的生活充满了快乐，我很喜欢它。

Music is an important part in my life,I even cant live without music.

Actually,I like many kinds of music,Id like to talk about my favorite music here.Well,I like Irish folk music best,New age is Irish style,and its mixes some morden melody,it sounds very nice and pure,can bring you into the never land and dream land,just relax,and forget all the problems.I like Enya,she is a very famous New age singer,her song just like the voice of heaven,her song is as nice and beautiful as herself!

Im not keen on American pop songs,they are terrible for me!The melody is not soft and nice at all!So fast and strong beat,too exciting,and cant hear them clearly.I cant stand the strong beat,that nearly make me fainted!

In a word,music has an very important place in my life.As for the importance of music to my life,I think you can guess,it just like meals and sleeping,I cant live without it.Does anyone want to take it away from me,Im gonna fight him and never give up!

The first time I swim, tie a rope on the swimming ring, swimming circle in the body, the rope hung around the neck, this will prevent swim ring accidentally flies away by water. At the time of swimming, I feel like a fish, in the water free swimming, very happy! Sometimes, I drift himself in the Yangtze river, floating in the wind. In addition, I learned breast stroke, I found that to learn breaststroke, heart must be quiet, can learn quickly. With swim to swim breaststroke, how happy heart!!!

On one occasion, I go swimming with my friend, hes also wearing swimming laps, and, hed breaststroke, he will also snakes swimming, I also want to learn swimming snake, so I must come on!

Here, you must be very strange why I swim in the Yangtze river? Because my friend and I swim coach is my dad. Before launching, dad told me and my friends: must be under adult supervision can swim, and wear swimming laps, or wear swimsuit, otherwise, cannot go.

Accompanied by my father, my friends and I have learned how to swim, the taste of happiness, only experience, only to experience. So, I like to swim this sport!

我第一次游泳的时候，在游泳圈上系了一根绳子，游泳圈圈在身上，绳子挂在脖子上，这样可以防止游泳圈不小心被水飘走。在游泳的时候，我感觉自己像一条小鱼一样，在水里自由自在的游来游去，快活极了!有时候，我把自己漂在长江上，随风飘浮。而且，我还学了蛙泳，我发现，要学蛙泳，心一定要静下来，就能很快学会。用蛙泳游起泳来，心里面多么舒畅呀!

有一次，我和我的朋友一起去游泳，他也戴着游泳圈，而且，他也会蛙泳，他还会蛇泳，我也想学会蛇泳，所以我一定要加油!

说到这里，你们一定很奇怪我为什么在长江游泳?因为我和我的朋友的游泳教练就是我爸爸。在下水之前，爸爸告诉我和我的朋友：一定要在大人的监督下才可以下水游泳，还要戴游泳圈，或穿游泳衣，否则，就不能下水。

在爸爸的陪同下，我和我的朋友都学会了游泳，那幸福的味儿，只有亲身经历了，才体会得到。所以，我喜欢游泳这项运动!

My favorite holiday has a lot of, have tomb sweeping day, Dragon Boat Festival, childrens day, the Mid-Autumn festival, but my favorite is the Spring Festival.

"Clicks" firecrackers on New Years eve, the street, the sky flashing dazzling spark, every household lights, the window of golden yellow, yellow-green, in combustion and off gradually, flowers, seemed to open the TV at the same time, in the play the wonderful show.

I stood on the sixth floor of the balcony, look, the New Years eve the night sky is bright, many colorful fireworks shining in the sky, sometimes like to live the day cage with, often is exploded here, before falling again raised a few, and then blasted, rise again... Some fireworks at lightning speed, ten 10 to move in the air, pour down, as if the next beautiful meteor shower, is like a big waterfall, also really a little "plunges three thousand feet" feeling! My mood is particularly bright and clear, this is "firecracker sound bowed out, every family to meet the New Year".

我喜欢的节日有很多，有清明节、有端午节、有儿童节、有中秋节，但我最喜欢的就是春节了。

除夕夜，街上“劈劈啪啪”的鞭炮声接连不断，空中闪烁着耀眼的火花，家家户户灯火通明，金黄色、黄绿色的窗户，在忽明忽暗、忽燃忽灭花中，好象同时打开的电视机，在播放精彩的节目。

我站在六楼的阳台上，放眼望去，除夕夜晚的天空格外亮，许多色彩缤纷的烟花在天空中闪亮着，有的时候好像还要把天笼照住似的，常常是这里炸开了，还没等落下就又升起了几个，然后再炸开、再升起……有的烟花以闪电般的速度，十个十个的往上蹿，在空中炸开，倾泻而下，好像在下一场美丽的流星雨，又好似一条大瀑布，还真有点“飞流直下三千尺”的感觉呢!我的心情格外爽朗，这真是“爆竹声声辞旧岁，家家户户迎新春”。

前几天我嚷嚷着让爸爸给我买鱼，他答应了。我们来到一个叫“海洋一族”的水族馆。

The other day I yelled for my father to buy me fish, and he said yes. We came to an aquarium called "marine family".

哇！好漂亮呀！我惊呆了，这里的鱼各式各样，有：热带鱼、野鱼苗……爸爸给我捞了七条鱼。有两条红色，两条黑的，三条花花的。我高兴地把它们带回了家。一到家，我就迫不及待地把它们放进鱼缸，并给它们喂了鱼食。

Wow! How beautiful! I was shocked, fish here are varied, including: tropical fish, wild fry...... My father fished me for seven fish. There are two red, two black, three huahua. I took them home happily. As soon as I got home, I couldnt wait to put them in the fish tank and fed them fish food.

就在第二天早上，鱼竟然死了三条，我十分伤心，爸爸安慰我，“没关系，别伤心。”听了爸爸的话，我的心情渐渐平静了下来。

On the morning of the second day, the fish died three, I was very sad, my father comforted me, "never mind, dont be sad."." After listening to my father, my mood gradually calmed down.

过了几天，剩下的四条鱼还活着，它们保持着旺盛的精力，游戏时它们摇头摆尾，舞动着鱼鳍。在水里欢快的游着。我给它们喂食的时候，它们总是争先恐后的抢食物，你追我赶。尤其是那条大金鱼，它非常霸道，另外三条小金鱼见了它，有些畏惧，总是小心的去吃食。

After a few days, the rest of the four fish alive, they maintained the exuberant energy, the game they yaotoubaiwei, waving fins. Swimming happily in the water. I to feed them, they always fall over each other to grab food, race each other. Especially the big goldfish, it is very overbearing, and the other three little goldfish see it, some fear, always careful to eat.

我很喜欢这几条小金鱼，我会好好爱护它们，并把它们喂养的更加健康，直到它们慢慢长大。

I like these little goldfish very much. I will take good care of them and keep them healthier until they grow up.

[我喜欢的动物英语作文及翻译

A boy went to a shop and bought a pencil and other things. When he was going to pay the bill, he took out his wallet and found he had not enough money to pay. He felt awkward. At that moment, an old man who was in charge of the shop smiled and said to the boy that he could give the rest of the money next time. The boy was so shocked, as the old man trusted him so much. When the boy went home, he remembered it all the time. So the next morning, when he passed the shop, he gave the money without hesitation. Integrity is priceless and decides who we are.

一个男孩去了一家商店买了一支铅笔和其他东西。当他要付钱的时候，发现钱包里的钱不够支付。他觉得很尴尬。在这个时候，这位管理商店的老人笑了笑，对那个男孩说他可以下次再给剩下的钱。男孩很震惊，老人竟然那么信任他。这个男孩回家后，他一直记得这件事。所以第二天早上，在他经过商店时毫不犹豫的给了老板钱。诚信是无价的，也决定着我们是怎么样的人。

I have a parrot. Its name is Nancy. I call it Nancy， because it is my passed grandmother’s name. I love her and hope she can accompany with， so I name my parrot her name. Nancy is very beautiful. Its fur is special comfortable. It is clever， too. At first， it can’t say any words， but now it can say many words. Like， good morning， good afternoon， good night， good bye and so on. it learns fast. I love it very much.？

My favourite season is summer. I often wear my shorts and T-shirt. Sometimes I wear my jeans. In summer it is often sunny and hot. Sometimes rainy in summer. I usually swim with my father. Sometimes I eat ice-cream at home.

作文翻译：

我喜欢的季节是夏季，我经常穿我的衬衫和运动衫。有时我穿牛仔裤。夏天，天气经常是晴朗的、热的。有时是多雨的。我通常和我的父亲去游泳，有时在家吃冰激淋。

My family had two lovely Bo Mei dog, one called toot, one called Bo Mei, toot is a brother, Bo Mei is the sister. They are very smart as long as we see the dogs necklace, we know to take them out to play, so it will be very happy to shake the tail. Bo Mei will be afraid of firecrackers, and occasionally he is not good, my father to learn the sound of the firecrackers scare it, it will be afraid to clip the tail, it is really a fun dog ah!

I read the dogs book, the dog wagged his tail to show pleasure; if the tail to sag, then expressed fear. I asked my mother, said: Why does the dog stretch his tongue? Mom told me that the dogs body without sweat, had no choice but to stretch his tongue to disperse the body heat. There are dogs before the pee will first smell, if there is a powerful dog than him, they dare not pee there, so each dog has its own fixed pee site.

When I was young, my brother was not born, every day to accompany me is toot and Bo Mei. Beep is the most loyal puppy, Bo is the most favorite puppy, Bo often grab my hands in the biscuits, we eat you a mouthful of me, toot more old, the teeth have been bite , So I did not take long time to heaven, and then a few years, Bo is also the United States, the family is no longer a dog, and really miss that good time.

My favorite animal is Bo Yang dog, although my family of two Bo Yang dogs are heaven, but I still miss their lovely look!

I have a pair of small turtles, black-green, shaped like a compass. Its head has a pair of eyes, like black agate, its mouth is very big, very sharp teeth. Its neck can long to short can be fun. Its four feet thick and powerful, the web is available in the water. With it the turtle in the water faster than the land, and its claws are very sharp. Its shell other small animals are not allowed to hurt yourself, its shell not only can protect themselves, can also dress up oneself, brown and green.

It exhaled to eat, it is not a vegetarian dishes, only eat meat, it rarely move, also not much. But there are times when it swimming in the water tanks, like looking for something.

There is one thing that makes me very angry and funny, just let me get it cant. Once I put a small goldfish turtle tank next to the tub, the turtle saw the climb, climb on water crock mouth, head forward, feet a stirrup, fell into the small goldfish in the tank. The turtle into a small goldfish tank, are constantly chasing small goldfish, small goldfish swim everywhere disorderly. I took the little turtle on the ground and gently pat it a few times. It shrinks the head, as if to say I cant anymore. Then I put it back into the tank, this time it a chastened, never climbed out.

I love my little turtle!

我有一对小乌龟，黑绿色的，形状像一个指南针。它的头上有一双水灵灵的眼睛，像黑色的玛瑙一样，它的嘴非常大，牙非常锐利。它的脖子能长能短可好玩了。它的四只脚粗壮而有力，它的蹼在水中可用了。有了它小乌龟在水的速度可比陆地上快，还有它的爪子也非常锐利。它身上的壳是不让别的小动物伤害自己，它身上的壳不仅可以保护自己，还可以打扮自己，身上棕色和绿色。

它吃起来大口大口的，它不吃素菜，只吃肉，它很少动，拉的也不多。但有些时候它在水缸里游来游去，像在寻找什么东西。

有一件事让我十分生气又好笑，简直让我拿它没办法。有一次我把一条小金鱼放在小乌龟的水缸旁边的水缸里，小乌龟看见了就往上爬，爬上水缸口上，头往前伸，脚一蹬就掉进了小金鱼的水缸里。小乌龟进了小金鱼的水缸里，就不停地追小金鱼，小金鱼吓得到处乱游。我拿出小乌龟放在地上，轻轻的拍它几下。它缩着头，好像在说我再也不敢了。接着我把它放回水缸，这回它学乖了，再也没有爬了出来了。

我真喜欢我的小乌龟啊!

I like animals very much， such as horses，monkeys， cats， tigers and so on。 But I like dogs best。 Why？ Because they are very cute and nice。

I have a white dog。 Its name is Bobo。 She is a female dog。She comes from Beijing，China。She wears white clothes and she has two big eyes and a small month。She often walks round and round at home。It has nothing to do。She likes eating ice—cream so much。So do I。When I eat ice—cream，she will look at the ice—cream carefully，So I will give her some to eat。

I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world。

I like reading，so I love many different kinds of books very much，because they not only broaden my horizons(视野)but also give me inspiration(灵感).

我喜欢阅读,所以我很喜欢各种类型的书，因为他们不仅拓宽我的视野，而且还给我灵感。

Up to now I have read a lot of books， for example，magazines，novels and storybooks and so on.But one of the books that I like best is My Life Story.It was created(创作)by an American writer—Helen Keller(海伦·凯勒)in 1902.She was a blind(盲的)，deaf(聋的)and dumb(哑的)person.In the book，she wrote that she had not been able to see，hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months.This unusual thing made her very sad.When she was seven years old，she knew Miss Sullivan(沙利文)，her good teacher.Helen was getting happier every day.Then，Miss Sullivan helped her learn how to write English words.At first，Miss Sullivan wrote some words on Helens hands with her own fingers again and again.Helen was a very diligent girl.Because of this，she tried as much as possible to remember words.After that，she wrote and published(出版)many famous works.My Life Story is one of them.

到目前为止我读过很多书，例如，杂志，小说和故事书等等。但是，我最喜欢的书是《我的生活的故事》。它是美国作家海伦凯勒写与1902的。她是一个又盲又聋又哑的人。在书中，她写道，自从她一岁零七个月后就没能再看到、听到或说过了。这些不寻常的事情让她很伤心。她七岁的时候，她认识了她的好老师，沙利文。海伦每天变得越来越开心。然后，沙利文小姐帮助她学习写英语单词。起初，沙利文小姐她自己的手指在海伦的手中一次又一次的写一些字。海伦是一个很勤奋的女孩。

My Life Story described her hard struggle to become an outstanding(著名的)writer and educationist(教育家)of the world.

阐述了她成为一个世界著名的作家和教育家的艰辛。

It shows us a universal(普遍的)truth：“Nothing is difficult if you put your heart intoit!”This is why I like it best.What about you?

这向我们展示了一个普遍的真理：“世上无难事只怕有心人!”这就是我最喜欢它的原因，你呢?

l like the dogs very much.They are very interesting and lovely.They like to eat sausages.Because they are delicious.

the dogs always are peoples best friend.It can help people to catch bad people and look after peoples children or house.

How useful the dogs are!

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

We wish to show our gratitude and thanks with a small gift. Happy Teacher‘s Day！

我们送您一件小礼物，以表我们对您的感激之情。教师节愉快！

You are like a third parent. We all love you and respect you.您就像我们的家长，我们都敬爱您。

We all like having you as our teacher. You have our respect and gratefulness.我们喜欢您做我们的老师，我们尊敬您、感激您。

This is Teachers‘Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness.

We are more thankful than we can express.对您的谢意，我们无法用语言来表达。

You have been a qualified teachers and even better friend. Thank you for all that you have done.您不仅是一位合格的教师，更是一位好朋友，谢谢您所做的一切。

Education is not the filling of a pail， but the lighting of a fire.教育不是灌满一桶水，而是点燃一团生命的火焰。

The man who can make hard things easy is the educator.能使艰难之事变得容易的人是教育者。

Send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulness and thankfulness on this special day.在这特别的日子谨向您致以我们永恒的感激之情。

A teacher affects eternity； he can never tell where his influence stops.一个教师对人的影响是永恒的。

It is the most appropriate time to show you our thanks.现在是向您表达感激之情最为恰当的时刻。

This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness. We all want to thank you.这件小小的礼物略表我们的感激之情。我们大家都很感谢您。

I am truly grateful to you for what you have done.我深深地感激您所做的一切。

Dear teacher， thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. My grateful sentiments come from the bottom of my heart.老师，感谢您用自己的生命之光，照亮了我人生的旅途，对您我满怀感谢之情。

The whole secret of the teacher‘s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.教师力量的全部秘密，就在于深信人是可以改变的。

No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.没有人比您更值得如此深厚的谢意。仅这一天远不足以表达我们对您的感激之情.

Thank you for making learning not a dull thing but a great joy.感谢您使我们把枯燥的学习变成了巨大的乐趣。

We all pitched to buy this gift. We are all grateful to you. Without your unselfish dedication could we achieve no success today.这是我们买给您的礼物，谢谢您，老师。没有您无私的奉献，就不会有我们今天 的成功。

Our beloved teacher， you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts. The love and care you have given us will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.亲爱的老师，您就像那春天的细雨，滋润着我们的心田。您给予我们的爱和关怀 将鼓舞着我们走过艰难困苦。

You are not only a good teacher but our close friend. Thank you for helping us make something of our lives.您不仅是一位好老师，也是我们亲密的朋友，谢谢您帮助我们奋发有为。

My heart felt thanks to you， dear teacher. On the voyage of life， you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honour you sincerely.亲爱的老师，向您表达我最衷心的感谢。在人生旅途上，您为我点燃了希望之光 ，您所做的一切润泽了我

I wish to express my thanks to you for instructing my child.谢谢您对我孩子的教诲。

My sincere thanks to you for being my child‘s teacher.衷心感谢您，我孩子的恩师。

My child speaks highly of you. Thank you very much.我的孩子很崇敬您。谢谢。

As parents we recognize the value of you in our child‘s development. Thank you for what you have done.作为父母，我们深知您在我们孩子成长道路中的重要。谢谢您所做的一切。

One good teacher in a lifetime may sometimes change a delinquent into a solid citizen.一个好教师具有化腐朽为神奇的力量。

Teacher， who educate children， deserve more honor than parents， who merely gave them birth； for the latter provided more life， while the former ensure a good life.教育儿童的教师应当享有比父母更多的荣誉，父母只给孩子生命，而教师则创造 了一个完善的生命。

Today, my father took me and my mother go to my grandma house to play.

To the grandmother I asked: "Grandma, the family dog?" Grandma said: "The dog birth to a dog, and it is to warm puppy." I was surprised and said: "wow! Birth to a puppy dog ah! "I hurried to the kitchen to see puppies. Really gave birth to four puppies. I grabbed a dog. Its claws dangling, also en en cried. Dog mom staring at me, afraid I had hurt its children. Watched it not look at me, Ill put them back. Soft hair dog that is very smooth, like polished oil-like. They are very lovely she is. I will always look after them.

I like a lot of animals, but my favorite animal is the panda. She comes from China, why did I love her? Because she is very cute, but she was very shy. Her body stout like bears, but the first round tail short, black and white fur and white head and body clear. She staple food of bamboo, but also addicted to love drinking water, most of the giant pandas homes are located near the water in streams, the nearest will be able to drink clear spring.

Hello! My name is Lv Jiayin. I’m twelve years old. I am study in Henan Hongli School in China. There are four people in my family: My father, my mother, my sister and I.

My father is an office worker. He works in an office. He is very tough and strict. But he has many friends. He’s very kind. But the standard he sets for me is very high. But I love him very much. I know he is strict with me because he loves me.

My mother is an office worker, too. But she is different from my father. She is very gentle. She likes cooking very much. She cooks for us. Every day I can eat different delicious food. In my opinion, she is the most beautiful mother in the world.

My sister is very young. She is only 5 years old. But she is a student, too. Because she is very lovely and bright, we all like her very much. She often gets in trouble. I have to help her every time.

Look! This is my family, a happy and vibrant family. Do you like it? I think it is a happiest family. I love it very much.

My favorite little animal is the neighbors puppy, it is covered with white, and furry, it is bright and bright eyes especially God, two little ears shaking, really naughty! There is a small tail Often thrown to go, as if to show off their own! The most interesting is that little nose, how a sniffing is also idle. It is also particularly alert, a see stranger, it will "barking" barking, until the stranger away, it will stop calling. Once the evening met the mouse, it will be "barking" called a non-stop, listening to the neighbors said: since it came, also caught a few mice it!

We all like the puppy very much.