我喜欢狗初一英语作文【汇集20篇】

There are many books in my family, father and mother, and many of them are mine. These books are thick and thin. In my book, what I like most is Tang Sulans school life of the wolf.

It is very interesting, especially when “ although the stupid wolf of art but utterly ignorant of, at the end of the semester, the school talent contest, he won the Wolf Prize, best performing ” Im curious, eager to read. The original is brown bear make practical joke help honest stupid wolf, a fluke, won the best performance award.

This book has a lot of wonderful clips, always makes me uproarious, taught me the truth in life a — — to do a good and honest people. Please have a look at this book! Youre going to love it as much as I do.

我家有很多书，有爸爸的，也有妈妈的，其中许多是我的。这些书有厚有薄，在我的书中，我最喜欢的是汤素兰写的《笨狼的学校生活》。

它很有趣，尤其是看到“虽然笨狼对艺术一窍不通，但是，学期结束时，学校进行才艺比赛，笨狼却得了个最佳演艺奖”时，我充满好奇，迫不及待地往下读。原来是棕小熊搞的恶作剧帮助了诚实善良的笨狼，歪打正着，获得了最佳演艺奖。

这本书还有很多精彩片段，总是惹得我捧腹大笑，教了我一个做人的道理——要做一个诚实善良的人。请有空看一看这本书吧！你一定会和我一样，喜欢它的。

If anyone ask me who is my favorite people? I would tell him my favorite person is my mother. My mother is 45 years old. But I still can see how beautiful she is when she is young. She is not too tall, but very thin. Her eyes are black. Her hair is grey and there is several white hair. She loves cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I love her.

如果有人问我谁是我最喜欢的人?我会告诉他我最喜欢的人是我的妈妈。我妈妈45岁了。但我仍然可以看出她年轻的时候是多么的漂亮。她个子不太高，但是很瘦。她的眼睛是黑色的。她的头发是灰色的，不过已经有一些白头发了。她喜欢烹饪。她经常为我做美味的食物。我爱她。

在我“破壳日”的第五年时，我收到了老天爷的礼物。

在我第五个生日的早上，我去找我的朋友张飞扬，在路上我听到了草丛里有哗 哗的声音。我一看，呀，原来这有一只小狗，它像一个婴儿一样，静静地在草丛里趴着。我连忙把它抱回我家。它有黑色的一毛一，水汪汪的大眼睛，长长的耳朵，仿佛 在听着一切声音。第二天一早，我去书店里卖了一本《怎样养小狗》的书。

我一回到家就看上了书，我看了怎样喂小狗之后就去办了。首先，我找来一个奶瓶，之后用热水把倒进去的奶粉冲开。我把奶嘴对上小狗的嘴巴里，它便吸了起来，吸了十多分钟，吸完了。我拿着奶瓶就走了。

过 了一个月，小狗可以自己吃饭了，只要把冲好的奶放到它身旁就可以了。看着小狗，我感到无比幸福。下午，爷爷生了一堆火，让小狗暖暖身一子。小狗烤完火之后， 稀疏的一毛一变整齐了，它好像刚来到这个世界一样，对一切东西都感到好奇，它一边走一边叫，好像在说：“东一看，西一看，这个世界真大呀！”

一 年后，小狗长成了大狗，像一个士兵一样守卫着家。每次我放学一回家，它都会跑到门口迎接我，有时还汪汪叫着，好像在说：“主人，主人，你可回来了，我都想 死你了！”这时，我也会回应一句：“我这不是回来了嘛！”它有时好像和我闹别扭，我把它的球拿走了，它就趴在角落里，好像在想：哼，让你抢我的球。不过， 过了一会儿，它感到没有趣了，就又找我来玩了。

我喜欢我的小狗！

Mid-autumn day Mid-autumn day is a special festival in China, which is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. Itfalls on the 15th day of august lunar month every year. Our Chinese will celebrate it on that day. I think there are not too many people can reject he temptation of it. I like this festival very much. I have two reasons.

First of all, mid-autumn has the deep meaning of reunite. In china, people regard mid-autumn day as very important, so no matter where they are, they will come back to their family if there is a chance. They don’t like celebrate this festival outside, which will make them feel lonely. Thus, they will go home by all means. Luckily, the government also pays great attention to this traditional festival. There are laws to make sure people have holidays in that special day. In the other word, mid-autumn festival gives a chance for family get together.

Secondly, every family will prepare a big meal in that day. All the food is delicious. It is good to have a big meal. I think nobody will not interest in delicious food. The mooncake is a necessary decoration for mid-autumn day. It tastes good, too. It is the traditional for a long time. How pleased to enjoy the glorious full moon with mooncake!

This is why I love mid-autumn festival so much. It is funny and happy time.

中秋节在中国是一个特殊的节日，是中国的传统节日。中秋节是每年农历的八月十五号。我们中国人会庆祝那一天。我觉得没有多少人可以拒绝它的诱惑。我很喜欢这个节日。我有两个理由。

首先，中秋节的深层含义是团聚。在中国，人们把中秋节看得很重，所以无论他们在哪里，如果有机会的话他们都会回到他们家人身边。他们不喜欢在外面庆祝这一节日，这会让他们感到孤独。因此，他们会竭尽全力回家。幸运的是，政府也非常重视这一传统节日。所以法律规定在这特别的日子里会放假。换句话来说，中秋节为家人团聚提供了机会。

其次，每个家庭都会在这一天准备一顿大餐。所有的食物都很好吃。有大餐吃真的很棒。我觉得没人会对美味的食物不感兴趣。月饼是中秋节的一个必需的装饰。它也很美味。这是很久以前的传统。一边赏月一边吃着月饼是多么惬意啊!

这就是为什么我那么喜欢中秋节的原因。那是快乐有趣的时光。

Tomorrow is New Year’s Day,my family have had a completely cleaning for two days.Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious food for our meal.After supper we watched TV program.How happy we were!

明天是春节,我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除.然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里,妈妈则在烧好吃的东西.晚饭以后,我们一起看电视节目,我们多高兴呀!

导语：从小到大，我们有很多老师，你最喜欢的老师是哪个呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My Favorite Teacher

Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficuit when we began to study English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss Wei!”

英语作文翻译

每个人都有他最喜欢的老师，所以I.我最喜欢的老师是魏小姐，我们的英语老师。我们觉得英语很难，当我们开始学习英语。魏小姐有个好主意来解决这个问题。一天，魏老师带着一些水果走进教室，如苹果、香蕉和橘子。她说：“今天我们要学习水果的名字。如果你能用英语告诉我他们的名字，你可以吃这些水果。所有的学生认真听讲，努力学习。甚至有人站起来回答问题。课结束了，水果都吃光了。从那时起，我对英语越来越感兴趣，我想从心里说：“谢谢你，魏小姐!“

I walked from the warm house to the school, and on the campus I saw a group of children who were playing an unknown dog. This little dog is white, big and small eyes, not thick and thin legs, the mouth is black. But it is flat belly deflated, a look that is not eat for several days, and very poor.

After they had finished, the dog was thrown into the snow, no matter what. Then, a bunch of college students to play it, to it a few drops of pen water, but also throw the child, no matter what. Then, a group of second-year children touched its hair, looked at it, fed it a french fries. They found the dog shivering, a little girl hold it up, want the dog warm and warm. Then they talked and said, "Put it in the trash." Then they put the puppy in the trash. The two children may think so: the dog into the trash, the purpose is to let the dog survive, because there are some garbage in the garbage box. This is also a puppy of their heart.

After school at school, the dog was gone, may be so that the grandmother picked up.

I believe it will be adopted by others, there is a warm home of their own.

I like the movementmy every morning jogspossibly this is the movement which I most like.

I will go to play the basketball in the afternoonI and my partners happy playingI thought together that will be very joyful.Therefore I most like playing the basketball.

what movement do you like?The movement both may exercise the body and to be very happy.Our together movement!

我喜欢运动，我每天早上跑步，这可能是我最喜欢的运动。

下午我要去打篮球，我和我的搭档玩的开心，我想在一起会很快乐.所以我最喜欢打篮球。

你喜欢什么运动?运动既可以锻炼身体又能很快乐.我们一起运动!

January 30.2012

today， i still went to my mother‘s office. my mother was very busy， so was my father. they always live in beijing. they must get up early. because they will manage the factory. so i know they are very laborious. so i should save my money. also i should help them. although i can’t do something useful， but i think i should share the work with them. i am one of my family member. in the future， i will take a job and work. it‘ time for me to begin to learn how to work.

[初一英语日记《暑假》

Nowadays many people like to have dogs as their pets. Dogs are friends of man not only because they are lovely but also because they are faithful to their masters.

Dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. But long ago, dogs all over the world were wild.

Dogs can date back to the Stone Age. All dogs have the same ancestor. It is believed that their ancestor was much like a wolf. Other animals, such as the fox, came from this ancestor, too. Hundreds of thousands of years ago, man began to tame wild dogs. After the dogs were tamed, they were trained. The strong dogs became working animals. They were trained to pull heavy loads. They learned to keep an eye on the sheep and other animals. Working dogs had other jobs, too.

Some dogs were not strong. But they could help man hunt for game. Other dogs were best as pets.

Today, there are more than 100 kinds of dogs in the world.

Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

My dream is to go to Hong Kong. As you know, Hong Kong is an important trade and financial centre in the world. It was once a British colony and on July lst, 1997 it smoothly came back to the motherland.

I like traveling. To make my dream come true I must study hard. If my dream comes ture, I am sure to enjoy myself to the fullest. I will see a lot of places of interest and buy a lot of delicious food for my parents. This is my dream.

一身灰白色的毛，圆圆的脸上长着一双水汪汪的大眼，一个小小的鼻子，一张小巧玲珑的嘴巴，可爱极了！这就是我最喜欢的动物---小狗。

小狗性格温顺，是个看家的能手，记得有一次，我和爸爸妈妈出去爬山，因为怕有坏人到家里来偷东西，就把小狗留在家里看家，我们走了一会儿，就有个坏人想到家里来偷东西，刚到门口，小狗见他鬼鬼祟祟的，就知道他是坏人，便“汪汪汪”的叫了起来，那个坏人见了，不仅不想走，还想打小狗的主意，小狗见他还不走，就咬了坏人的脚一口，坏人疼得嗷嗷嗷叫，只能逃之夭夭了。

这段情景被听到狗叫才赶来的李阿姨看见了，等我们回来后，李阿姨就全都告诉了我们，我们听了，准备给小狗开个盛宴，让它吃个饱，妈妈做完了饭，我拿了个鸡腿放进小狗的饭碗里，小狗舔了一舔鸡腿，汪汪汪地叫了起来，好像在说：“谢谢你，小主人。”我听了，高兴的笑了。

这就是我最喜欢的小狗，你听了我的介绍，也喜欢上我的小狗了吧！

June 23rd Sunday Sunny

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking,Dont do that. Its bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them. His face turned red and answered he wouldnt do that again.

6月23日星期日睛

今天是个风和日丽的好天，我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱，大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的，一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说：不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们，就应该爱护它们。他的脸红了，并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

[初一英语作文 爱护动物

I get to know Disneyland a year ago, at the time, my mother took me to Hong Kong, I was so happy, we went to Disneyland, I saw many lovely cartoon characters. I saw them when I was watching TV, I felt so happy, I told my mother I wanted to come to here again soon. I like Disneyland so much, I want to live in theDisneylandworld.

我一年前开始知道迪斯尼，那时，我的妈妈带我去香港，我感到很开心。我们去了迪斯尼，我看见了很多可爱的卡通人物。我看电视的时候才看到他们，我觉得很高兴，我跟妈妈说我想要快点再去香港。我很喜欢迪斯尼，我想要生活在迪斯尼的世界。

[我喜欢迪斯尼英语作文

My favorite book is "How the Steel Was Tempered." This book tells the hero Pavel Korchagin from a poor, struggling at the bottom boy, has grown into a cause of the motherland and the people fighting life-history of the proletarian revolutionary fighters. Paul had done the young clerk, as the fancy bullying; stole German pistol, due to save Zhu Helai jail; was removed in the smoke of the battlefield, many struggle with death; after the victory of the revolution turn all his heart them into the national development ... In this process, Paul has shown a real proletarian revolutionary fighters has the determination, courage and selfless devotion of the noble character, his own precious youth to the party and the people, in the case of paralyzed still bravely picked up the pen to serve the people. Pauls spirit is eternal side of the banner, Pauls deeds and character of every 21 young people to learn from.

last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".

last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.

my dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)

我家的小狗

去年，朋友送我一只小狗，我非常喜欢它，放学后就和它一起玩耍，无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。

去年冬天我忙于功课，每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚，这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时，它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来，似乎它是在叫我。

我家的狗不但对我照顾周到，而且还肩负着看家的重任，每当有陌生人来到我家，它总是叫个不停，但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!

[我的宠物狗高中英语作文

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

I have a dog baby, it is a purebred German shepherd. Uncle is just sent to me.

It all without a nap, if sleeping in the snow, Im afraid I couldnt find three days. It pointed ears, small and exquisite, warily up with; In the dark, dark eyes, shining light. The sense of smell is incomparable, in "V" from the blood of the basin mouth people terrified, sharp fangs more to make it better. It is robust limbs holds up a strong body. See it so fierce, I named it as "white tiger".

"White tiger" although looks a bit scary, but actually not. Remember when uncle just give it to me, it is a open mouth, I cant help but eat a surprised: very sharp teeth! I dont know it bites or not disorderly bite. But a few days later, it is not strange to me, and began to walk around me, when I went to the night market every day, I took it to so many readers, some children also follow "white tiger", "white tiger" go ahead but gently open for me, do not bite. I just know it temper is so gentle.

"White tiger" and after I acquainted, became inseparable friends. Go to school every day, it will go with me. No way, I have to again and again to take it home; Every day after school, it will run out early to meet me, see me back, it turned up front PAWS outstretched tongue, shaking his tail "standing" wait for me downstairs. Whenever at this time, I will comb it white hairs, go home together with it.

The lovely "white tiger" my head is not big, but want to eat a lot of things. Every night, the mother will then get a few extra piece of meat to eat, and white tiger at this time was with relish to enjoy the delicious barbecue. But in order not to raise a fat dog, it need to eat more vegetables. Meals a day, is decided by me.

Alas, my lovely pet dog! Thats my good partner.

姐姐家里养了一条小狗，它是我无聊假期的“救星”。

这条可爱的小狗名叫“桂花”，因为它全身上下都是金色的，像八月金黄的桂花一样。“桂花”有一个圆不溜丘的头。它的头，好似中秋节的月亮那样圆。它的眼睛像两颗黑葡萄一样又黑又亮。眼睛下面，有张小馋嘴。“桂花”整个身体胖嘟嘟的，走起路来，摇摇摆摆。但是，跑的比兔子还快，有时，我都快追不上它！它之所以跑的快是因为它有四条敏捷的“小短腿”。再加上它那细长的小尾巴，真是自然协调，绝配！

“桂花”不但外形可爱，而且十分聪明。

因为我很喜欢“桂花”，所以每次去姐姐家，都会给它带好多好吃的。有一次，我去姐姐家玩，走在半路上的时候，就隐隐约约听到了一阵兴奋的狗叫声，我一听就知道是“桂花”。所以，我加快了脚步。一到姐姐家，“桂花”就歪着小脑袋，摇着细长的尾巴边叫边向我扑来，又用它那萌萌的眼睛看着我，好像在跟我说“我知道，你又带了好吃的给我，因为我老远就闻到了香味，赶紧给我吃吧！”随后，我也给了它一个眼神，它好像一下子就懂了我的眼神，立刻就跑到它的“房子”边，迅速地坐了下去，露出长长的舌头，“呼呼”的喘着粗气，一动不动，乖乖地坐在那里，等着我口袋里的美味。我看着它那机灵乖巧的样子，一下给了它好多，它敏捷地用爪子按住食物，然后津津有味地吃了起来，仿佛吃的是山珍海味，分分钟就吃完了。

这就是我喜欢的“桂花”，聪明可爱的“桂花”！

My family has a lovely puppy. It is not a big face with a pair of water Lingling big eyes, body hairy, very cute!

It is not only cute, but also very slippery. Once, my mother and I buy food back, not into the house, the dog will run out, as if to meet us. But who knows it smelled the smell of ribs meat, only foolishly ran to meet us, really a "small slider". After dinner, my mother threw the bones out of it, did not think it will really enjoy it! While bathed in the sun, while enjoying the food, but also from time to time vigilant observation of the surrounding, for fear that others snatched away.

Do not look at it, but it is my faithful partner. Whenever I write homework in the house, it will always look out at the window with a small head looking at me; when I am sad, it will rub in my side to rub, as if to make me happy; When I am sick, it is always guarding at the door, hope I can recover soon ...

My dog is still very diligent. It is like a patrol every day, in front of the house after the cruise, as long as there is a movement, it will "barking" shouting. I remember once, the dog is patrolling the kitchen outside the door, suddenly heard the kitchen there is movement, they immediately ran to the table, after a fierce fight, and finally dragged a mouse in front of me, as if to show off their own Of credit.

I really like my puppy, how lovely it is, how intimate and how diligent it is!