我喜欢狗初一英语作文【精品20篇】

If someone asks me what little animal I like, I will not hesitate to tell him that my favorite little rabbit.

When I was five years old, my grandfather bought me a little white rabbit. This little rabbit looks very cute. Its ears long, pointed, whenever there is a voice, it is necessary to stand up and listen. Its mouth has three halves, both sides of the mouth also long long beard. Its body snow white, feels soft, slippery. Especially its pair of big eyes, like a ruby-like shiny.

White rabbits love carrots and vegetables. Once, when I feed it to eat, deliberately raised the cabbage, did not expect it to stretch the two front legs, all of a sudden put the cabbage to take away. I wanted to give it a song, did not expect to scare it jump, it was a coward.

You say, my little white rabbit is not very cute? Do you like it too?

我家养了一只顽皮可爱的小狗，它的名字叫毛毛。（开门见山开头，注意了词汇的运用。）

毛毛全身是白色的，略带斑点，（整体特征）一个圆溜溜的脑袋上嵌着一双珍珠般的大眼睛，下面是一个黑黑的鼻子和一张小小的嘴，（局部特征。）一条短尾巴向上卷起，像一团小绒球一样可爱极了!（典型特征）

毛毛有时候喜欢吃肉，有时候喜欢吃土豆片，还有的时候喜欢吃骨头，偶尔也会吃点香肠。它也是我的“小闹钟”，每天早上它都会跑到我床边叫醒我。（简单的介绍一下毛毛的生活习性，为下文做铺垫，最好再细致生动些！）

有一次，爸爸、妈妈都不在家，我在写作业。大概是毛毛太饿了，就自己去厨房找吃的，还好我们早上吃的是鱼，地上还有一些鱼骨头，它狼吞虎咽的吃着鱼 骨头，都没有发现我站在它身后。不一会，它填饱了肚子，刚一转身就发现了我，它在我身上蹭了几下，真是太可爱了!（缺少狗吃食物的一连串的动作描写，不够 生动形象，请你补上！）

都说狗是人类的朋友，我看这话一点也不假。自从毛毛到我家，不但给我带来了欢乐，也给家人带来很多乐趣。我喜欢它，我愿意永远和它是“好朋友”！（抒情式结尾。）

在我二年级的时候，我家养了一只漂亮的小狗，我叫他小黑，它的眼睛黑溜溜的，看起来像一颗甜甜的葡萄。

每当我去上学的时候，小黑就跑出家门要把我送到接近学校的地方才回家，那时候小黑看上去好像舍不得我，可是，它也只能回家了。我放学回家了，看到小黑在家门外等待着我回家，那时候高兴地不得了！小黑一跳一跳的摇着尾巴，好像在热烈地欢迎我回家呢！

一天，我出去玩，小黑也跟着我出来了，我走着走着，突然，我听见狗在叫，我过去看了看，是一群狗，啊！那群狗向我冲过来，要来咬我，我闭紧眼睛赶紧跑，一会儿后我感觉身后没有什么动静，一回头才发现小黑和那群狗打起来了。我的心砰砰直跳，想继续逃跑，可是心里面有一个声音在告诉我，小黑都知道保护我，那我为什么不能保护小黑呢？在我们齐心协力之下，那群狗被我们打跑了。

通过我和小黑的事，我明白了只要团结就能把任何东西打败，小黑高兴，我也非常高兴，就是因为这样我才非常喜欢小黑，真的是俗话说的好：“兄弟齐心，其利断金”。

这就是我家的小黑，怎么样，这么可爱的小狗，你们喜欢吗？

This afternoon, I finished the homework, took the skates to play, I was playing, saw a lovely puppy.

Puppys ear pointed, you can hear the voice of the speech, can be flexible. Water Lingling eyes inside a small round beads, a blink of an eye, like a star blinking like, the nose is very flexible, smell the delicious, and quickly ran over, it ran faster. Mouth sweet, like cherry mouth like. Head round yo. Body black and white, like a cute little panda. Calf and thick and strong, the tail of a Alice Alice a Alice, very cute.

I play every day with the lovely puppy, I am very happy, I put it every day as their own family. I hope it will always be happy. I gave the dog took a name, called "Wang Tsai".

春姑娘手拿七彩盒，点绿了小草和树木，染红了花儿;提着甘露，滋润了世间万物. Spring girl holds the colorful box in hand, ordered the green grass and trees, and the red flowers are stained; with the mani dew, it nourishes everything in the world.

春姑娘在阳春三月，把甘露洒得更欢了，像是给大地披上一层薄薄的雾似的，到处是朦朦胧胧。因为春姑娘派来了它的使者——春雨。

看到淅淅沥沥的春雨下起来了，农民伯伯高兴极了，笑呵呵的。因为春雨一下，农民伯伯就可以播种了!

小草贪婪地吮吸着春雨的甘露，小草醒了，掀开被子，从地下使劲往上钻，终于露出了它那尖尖的小脑袋，享受着春雨的沐浴。你看它们变得多精神，多嫩，多绿啊!这些小草高兴得像一个个调皮的小孩子，偷偷地，趁着爸爸妈妈或爷爷奶奶不在家，就在地坪上任凭春雨淋浴着自己，任凭小雨珠在它们身上打滚，荡秋千。

给春雨沐浴过的小草绿多了，那晶莹的小水珠一闪一闪的，远远看去就像一朵花儿。柳树也抽出了嫩嫩的，绿油油的枝条。瞧，那些细长的柳条，多像一位美丽的仙女披着一头长长的秀发。风儿一吹，长长的秀发就随风飘扬，美丽的“仙女”显得更加的漂亮了!

春雨一淋，地上一片生机勃勃，池塘里的青蛙也兴奋地叫着：“呱呱呱!呱呱呱!”好像在说：“啊!春姑娘来啦!春姑娘来啦!春姑娘，谢谢你，我又可以唱我的《春之歌了》”。我家的那盆水仙花，更是得意，张开那只美丽的大喇叭，也唱响了《春之歌》。我伸出小手去捉摸春雨，觉得凉丝丝的，一点颜色也没有。春姑娘的使者可真神奇。

I have a dog. It’s name is carl. Its black and white .And it is little size.It has got big ears,small eyes ,short legs and a short tail.It eats bones ,meat and rice. It can play with balls,give me a lot of happiness.It very smart and cute.So I like it very much!It usually go shopping with my mother. My mother to buy a little meat for Carl.It catches meat also eat meat.Is it very interesting?

我的狗的名字是卡尔。它是黑色和白色的。它是小尺寸的。它有大耳朵，小眼睛，短短的腿和一个短尾巴。它吃骨头，肉和米饭。它能玩球，给我很多的快乐。它非常聪明和可爱。我很喜欢它！它通常和我妈妈去购物。我的妈妈给卡尔买点肉。它捕捉肉类也吃肉。是不是很有趣？

When I was a little boy, I have a dog, the dog body white, so I named him "little white". Looked from a distance, small white is just like a regiment cotton, the regiment fat "cotton" is alive and kicking, most of the time passes in a pair of big round eyes look in the eyes, as if can understand the persons mood, nose is black, this is probably it only in white hair ornament, the empresss tail is shorter, meet the master of the yaw, can recruit people like!

Most of the time, small white character is gentle, but when you see a stranger, it will reveal ferocious expression, in his "bark" shout loudly, like changed a "person". It up when Im mad, always try to jump up and licked my hand and face, but I dont like to lick my face, it is always a picked it up and set aside. But, small white can clingy, just push again stick came over immediately, just like a piece of chewing gum. Its unhappy will climb into your body, or lying on the sofa and bed, alone with silent anger, who also ignore. But this time, as long as I said go out to play with it, made the action of the door and it instantly perked up.

Every meal points, small white always fart dian fart with its exclusive job, in my side, raised his head with a miserable eyes looked at me, a cry of "bark" mouth, as if to say: "master, you pity me, exceptional gave me something to eat." See it funny, and I will bring it to eat quickly with a smile. See a small white long tongue first, then roll out the food on the ground, the last to "yum yum" chew up their dinner.

Remember I am afraid of dogs and contact before, then mom back to the small white to my companion, only changed the habit of I am afraid of dogs. At first, I am always far away from it, but the small white always shaking his tail, while running after me, is that I am the owner of it. Then slowly I was moved by the small white lovely about, and began to try to touch it, but I still cant zero distance contact with it. Until one day afternoon, mother ulterior motives to importune me with small white go out for a walk, I thought to myself, dead, this time I can be your doom not escape. It can make me urgent cry, but no matter how I in front of my mothers favor, mother also ignore. In the end, I only bite the bullet and give it a try, Im adventurous, brought a small white village park, when it saw the other dog, and ran off to play, I have been sitting in situ scampering about looking at it. Its getting dark, time to go home, I stretch voice cry out: "small white", it will run to come over, though unwilling, but still keep up with my darling to go home. Small white innocent and lovely about finally melted my heart, I discovered that the original dog didnt I think so terrible, especially my little white, and contrary to what I imagined.

After I finish my homework every day, will take it out for a walk, although the small white is dead now, but it brought me happiness, I wont forget it.

[写狗狗的英语作文

I like small animals, like the small animals to count my little black dog.

My little black dog she is cute! In black, shiny hairs, eyes with two white spots, like two white beads. On the head and on his thighs hair is very long, like a horse head to the ground. Straight ear, as if time in listening to what passed around. Thick and long broom tail swing, from time to time as a cleaner for free! More funny is that it always speaks with a wet nose toward me, like a sick child, seems to be very poor, in fact, I know it really want to play with me. In the invitation to me!

The little black dog temperament is very docile, very human nature. I get along with it for a long time, in love, it seems very understand me. Whenever I am angry, it squatted beside me quietly motionless and seems to want to accompany me through the sad time. I am happy, it will run up to and around me, "an auf" cried, very agreeable.

The puppy experience dangerous also have several times. Is the first time fell into the river, fortunately, was found to pull up, feed it to take medicine, good soon. And on several occasions by poison poison dog several times, but also by early treatment, will have to escape. From then on, it can sniff out those toxic food, what food non-toxic. Later, our dog never in poison. It very sharp!

I love my dog. I hope it will stay with me, to accompany me joyful growth!

我喜欢的小动物，最喜欢的小动物要数我家的那条小黑狗了。

我家的小黑狗可逗人喜欢啦!一身黑亮亮的绒毛，眼睛上面有两个白点，颇像两颗白色珠子。头上和大腿上的毛很长，像马鬓一样拖到地面。直楞楞的耳朵，好象时刻在倾听着周围有什么动静。又粗又长的扫帚尾巴不时摇摆着，像一个免费清洁工呢!更逗人的是它总翘着潮湿的鼻子向着我，像一个生病的孩子，看起来似乎很可怜，其实，我知道它很想和我玩。在向我发出邀请呢!

小黑狗的性情很温顺，很通人性。我和它相处久了，产生了感情，它好像很理解我。每当我生气的时候，它就静静地蹲在我身边一动也不动，似乎想陪我度过那难过的时间;我高兴的时候，它就会围着我跑来跑去，“汪汪汪”地叫着，很讨人喜欢。

小狗的经历危险也有几次。第一次是掉进了河里，幸好被人发现拉了上来，喂给它吃药，不久就好了。还有几次是被毒狗的人毒了几次，幸好也被及早治疗，才得脱险了。从那以后，它就能嗅出那些食物有毒，哪些食物无毒。后来，我家的狗再也没中过毒。它够机灵吧!

我喜欢我家的小狗。我希望它永远伴随我左右，陪我快乐成长!

我最喜欢的动物是狗，因为狗是人的忠心玩伴，而且狗也可以陪伴我们一起度过充满喜、怒、哀、乐的时光。

我家里就养了一只小黄狗，叫小黄。小黄是一只既活泼又可爱的小狗，它肥肥胖胖的，有淡黄色的毛。它习惯站在家门口，或是趴在门口等我回家。他生气的时候，跟狮子一样凶猛;高兴的时候，却变得跟小兔子一样温和，好可爱喔!

令我印象深刻的是有一次我从楼上下来的时候，发现小黄不见了。我着急得像热锅上的蚂蚁一样，我跑出去一边到处寻找，一边叫：”小黄，小黄，你在哪里?”我一直找，一直找，找遍了整条巷子，也是没看到小黄，最后，我便失望的回家。突然，我听到小狗的叫声，原来是小黄。我高兴的抱着小黄，着急的心情也放松了下来。原来小黄只是躲在车子底下睡觉而已，并不是不见了。

我觉得狗真的是我最忠实的玩伴，因为它可以陪我一起难过、开心。难过时，它会陪在我身边;开心时，可以和它一起分享;爸妈不在家时，我不会寂寞，因为它会陪我玩，所以我最喜欢狗了。

Last Friday, a chance encounter changed me and my familys life greatly.

After school, I was about to enter my apartment building when a little dirty dog, lying beside the du，stbin, caught my eye. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. So I bent down and held him in my arms. I rushed him upstairs and right away fixed him some food. Then, I gave him a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. What a lovely dog!

When my parents got home, I asked if I could keep the dog. To my surprise and happiness, they agreed. From that day, he has become a member of our family. Everyone has enjoyed his company. My parents walk him often. He and I play joyfully.

Looking at the cute, happy dog today. I realize that I did the fight thing. I brought him to a warm, loving home and he has brought us great happiness and laughter.

I have a dog.His name is Bob.He is two years old.He is yellow and very fat.He has two big eyes.And he wears a black coat.I always play with him. My mother and my sister look after him every day. When I come back ,he often walk around me.He is very cute and friendly.I love him very much. Do you like him?

翻译： 我有一个狗。他的名字叫鲍勃。他两岁了。他是黄色的并且非常胖。他有两个大眼睛。他穿着一件黑色的衣服。我经常跟他玩。我妈妈和姐姐每天都照顾的他很好。当我回到家的时候，他经常围着我转。他非常可爱也很友好。我很喜欢他。你喜欢他吗?

我喜欢狗是因为狗很可爱。每当它热时它会把舌头吐出来降温。可是每当他睡觉时，只要有一丝声音，他就会竖起耳朵仔细的听一听，是不是坏人进来了，并且会叫上几声。爸爸说：“让我学狗吃饭，它会狼吞虎咽的吃下所有东西。但不要学狗睡觉，因为狗可是不爱睡觉的动物，像我之前说的那样狗总是没事儿找事儿。”爸爸说：“我喜欢睡觉，所以我不想被狗吵醒。”我很喜欢狗还有一个原因：狗很忠诚，你想要狗帮你干什么，它一定会尽力去做。狗可以帮你牧羊，可以帮你捡东西，还可以帮你找线索呢！我们学过一篇课文—小狗杜克。讲的是一只小狗救了它的主人的孩子。

我一直都很想养狗。我向爸爸请求我能不能养一只狗。但爸爸说：“你连小壁虎都养不好，你怎么养狗呢。”幸运的是后来圣诞老人送我一只狗，我很喜欢它。它是一只阿拉斯加雪橇犬。我去哪儿都带着它，晚上还抱着它睡觉。但是我不用给它打扫笼子，不用去溜它，还不用喂它。奶奶说，它是世界上最好的狗。你知道吗？他其实是一只玩具狗。

My favorite animal is a small rabbit, its very cute. Fluffy a white, two red and big eyes, three mouth, neck short, four legs. Short front legs, long hind legs long. There are five toes in the front leg and four toes in the hind legs. At the foot of the hair and more fluffy. Tail short, generally only 5 cm long.

Rabbit style gentle, timid. It likes a quiet environment, to see strangers, cats, dogs, snakes, etc. will have been panic, will issue a loud stomp sound, will hit the cage, running and so on. It runs fast, and can immediately stop without inertia. She likes to eat grass, vegetables and tender leaves and so on. Bunny has two pairs of overlapping incisors, they are permanent teeth, will continue long, in order to maintain the length of moderate, need to regularly give it to eat hard food, such as bamboo, branches and so on. White rabbit afraid of heat is not afraid of cold When the room temperature reaches 30 degrees, they will reduce the amount of food or eat, female rabbits, then easy to abortion, milk or not to rabbits feeding, easy to get sick. White rabbits do not like activities during the day, eat very little at night like activities, eat a lot, accounting for 75% of total food intake. Rabbit produces 4 to 12 rabbits per child. The normal life of the rabbit is 10 years.

I really like the white rabbit, had to force my mother bought me two, one is white, one is black. I call them white and black. We kept a few days, they died of illness. Now want to come, they are hot dead, starved to death. Because it was summer, we also put them on the balcony. White and small black dead I am very sad, called my mother gave me to buy one, my mother would not buy anyway, said too poor.

Now I know the living habits of small white rabbits, if there is a small white rabbit, I can always raise it now.

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一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

我非常喜欢小动物，但我最喜欢的是小狗。

I like small animals very much, but I like puppies best.

小狗的身子不大，但是头却很大。有一双小小的三角形的耳朵，面孔也是小小的。一对宝石般灵活透亮的大眼睛，一个圆溜溜的黑鼻子。身上的毛呈土黄色，光滑得像涂了一层油。尾巴毛茸茸的，常摆来摆去，摸上去很舒服。

The puppy is not big, but it has a big head. A pair of small triangular ears, the face is also small. A gem of a flexible bright big eyes, a round black nose. His hair Chengtu yellow, smooth coated with a layer of oil like. The tail is hairy and is often put on and feels comfortable.

小狗吃食物时会发出一点声响，吃得很快，好像很饿的样子。睡觉时一动不动，很安静，一有动静就抬起头看看，没事又继续趴在地上睡觉。做游戏时，如果很高兴，就会使劲摆尾巴，向远处跳来跳去，舌头经常伸出来。

A dog makes a noise when he eats food, eats quickly, and looks like he is hungry. Sleep motionless, very quiet, a move to look up, nothing, and continue to lie on the ground sleep. When you play a game, if you are happy, you will wag your tail and jump to the distance, and your tongue will stick out.

因为我邻居家有一小狗，所以我经常和它一起玩。小狗的头大，我就叫它“大头”。有一次，我刚回到家门口，看到小狗在路边玩耍，跑来跑去。我正准备开门，小狗马上跑了过来，在我跟前摇头摆尾，好像很欢迎我。

Because my neighbor has a little dog, so I often play with him. The puppys head is big. I call it "big head"". On one occasion, I just returned home and saw the dog playing on the side of the road, running around. I was ready to open the door, the dog immediately ran over in front of me yaotoubaiwei, seems very welcome to me.

我真喜欢这只可爱又顽皮的小狗！我相信你也会喜欢这只“大头”吧！

I really like this cute and naughty puppy! Im sure youll like this "big head" too!

我最喜欢的小动物——小狗。

My favorite little animal - puppy.

We grew up in a happy times, living conditions have made a lot of improvement than before. But the environment around us has suffered severe damage, human homes, earth is facing ecological crisis, if not protect the environment, human will be faced with a major disaster.

In recently listen to TV news said: our capital Beijing area and more dust storms have taken place in the city, these economic developed city almost was huge sand "bury", the oasis is gradually reduced, we human beings that only themselves to blame disorderly cut down trees, destroy the environment, make the soil and water loss. Dont, only the forest into the barren hills, grassland into desert, humans will suddenly realize?

Now the most polluted on earth resources, is the water. River that the original clear float above is full of garbage, plus factory emissions of industrial wastewater, the water is now dark and smelly, passing from the river to wu wear the nose, the fish in the river ah, shrimp had long ago lost.

Just take a look at the sky, is always a grey, which is called the blue sky white clouds, it is grey day ash cloud. Can only look at the moon at night, the stars are gone. See the most is the factory, thick tall a black smoke from the chimney. Took to the streets, often can smell exhaust frying. Recipients pollution everywhere around us.

Man is the master of the earth, but also its destroyer, is the final victim. As the owner of the new century, we cant let environment continue to be polluted. Environmental consciousness is the people should have modern consciousness of the 21st century, in order to in the new century to create a beautiful and pleasant environment, let us take action immediately: save a drop of water, save electricity, once more take a tree... To protect our home together!

我们生长在一个幸福时代，生活条件比以前有了很大的改善。但是我们周围的环境却遭到严重破坏，人类的家园——地球正面临生态危机，如果不保护环境，人类将面临着重大的灾难。

在前不久听电视新闻说：我们首都北京和区多城市都发生了沙尘暴，这些经济发达的城市几乎被巨大的风沙“埋没”，绿洲正在逐渐减少，这只能怪我们人类自己乱砍树木，破坏环境，使水土流失。难道，只有等森林变成了荒山，草原变成了沙漠，人类才会恍然大悟吗?

现在地球上受污染最严重的资源，就是水资源。原来那清澈的小河，现在上面飘满了垃圾，再加上工厂排放的工业污水，河水现在又黑又臭，从河边路过的人都要捂着鼻子，小河里的鱼呀、虾呀早就消失得无影无踪了。

再抬头看一看天空，总是灰蒙蒙的，哪叫蓝天白云，简直是灰天灰云。晚上也只能看看月亮，星星都不见了。看得最多的还是工厂那又粗又高的烟囱里冒出的一股黑烟。走到街上，经常可以闻到汽车排出的油烟味。我们周围到处都受者污染。

人类是地球的主人，但也是它的破坏者，又是最终的受害者。作为新世纪的主人，我们不能再让环境继续被污染下去了。环保意识是21世纪人们应有的现代意识，为了在新世纪里创造一个优美宜人的环境，让我们立刻行动起来：节约一滴水，节约一度电，多载一棵树……共同保护我们的家园吧!

说起我最喜欢的小狗，就是小七了。

记得去年春天，奶奶送我一只小狗，可好看了，它那细长的瓜子脸上，嵌着黑葡萄般的大眼睛，大大的耳朵向下褟拉着，圆溜溜的小鼻子高傲的向上翘着，显得十分神气。贝贝全身上下长着雪白的毛，白毛上长着许多小星星的图案。

贝贝十分玩皮，每次爸爸拖地的时候，它准会第一个拖把上‘‘乘免费公共汽车’

贝贝最喜欢的东西要数我的玩具小猫了，它的背弯成一个“弓”两眼怒气冲冲的看着小猫，忽然他后脚一蹬，像小猫扑去，结果没扑到小猫自己却摔了个脚朝天，这下小猫个到了霉，它一会儿被贝贝抛起来重重地扔下去，一会儿被贝贝撞来撞去。经过一阵撕咬后，贝贝像个大将军似的，大摇大摆的抛下小猫走了。小猫那狼狈样就别提了!

我家的贝贝很可爱吧!我喜欢我家的小七“”!

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在我家楼下有一条小狗，它的主人是一个六年级的大姐姐，小狗已经一周岁了，叫“COCO”，现在我们已经是朋友了。

小狗全身的毛是棕红色的毛，只有肚子是雪白的。它长有一对可爱的小耳朵，呈三角形状，平日总是耷拉着，但是一听到声音，耳朵就会立马竖起来，灵敏地朝向发出声响的地方。耳朵的下面是一双黑乎乎的、炯炯有神的眼睛，很灵活。再下面是一个湿漉漉的小黑鼻子，好像一个感冒的鼻涕虫。不过它的嗅觉很灵敏，经常东闻闻西闻闻地找吃的。真可爱！

那个姐姐告诉我，“COCO”很热情，一见到主人就会蹭着她的腿。可我发现“COCO”是个“两面派”，因为它一见到生人就像变了一个人似的，这时它会狂吠不止，直到生人离开为止。甚至有时走来一个带着另一只狗的人，它会立即扑上去，撕咬那个人的裤腿，好像在说：“这是我家，是为我盖的，不准你来，快出去！”看它一副嚣张、霸道的样子。

它还十分贪玩，一出去就是几天几夜，任凭谁怎么呼唤，它也不肯回来。有时回来它还会沾着一身烂泥，脏兮兮的，可臭了。还有一回，它过了三天两夜才回来，还断一条腿。说它贪玩吧，的确是呀，要不然怎么会三天两头不回家，还摔断了一条腿呢？我想：它现在一定不敢再出去了吧，可是没有想到，一个下午也见不着它的狗影。哎，真拿它没办法呀！

“COCO”它热情、凶猛、可爱、贪玩，真是一条性格古怪的小狗！

Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

In modern society, pressure is ubiquitous. As students, we have to endure

the pressure from examination, from homework and from our parents’

expectations.As workers, people are faced with the pressure from deadline, from

difficulties and from finance and so on. Here I would like to give some

suggestions about relieving pressure.

First of all, to confide to others is an efficient way for relieving

pressure. When we feel so anxious and worried that we cannot continue to work or

study, go to talk with our friends or family members and we will get some relief

and feel better. Second, to do some exercises is another way to relieve

pressure. If we are under pressure for a long time, doing some exercises can

make us refreshed and regain power to continue our task. Finally, another common

way for women to relieve pressure is to cry. The effect of crying is the similar

as the effect of confiding to others. After crying, we would find that we are

relaxed and then we have spirit to fight against difficulties again.

In a word, there are many ways to relieve our pressure. But the most

important point is that if we cannot solve the problem at once, we need to call

off our attention from the pressure we are faced with to other things. Only in

this way we would not be entangled with the pressure for a long time.

暑假来了，妈妈给我买了一只可爱的小狗。狗狗的一双眼睛亮晶晶的，身体的毛色像天上的白云一样白；脚很短，耳朵往下垂着，跑起来时，两只耳朵一摆一摆的，像两把小扇子，非常可爱。才6个多月大，圆滚滚的。如果你把它圈起来，你会发现它很像一个小皮球。所以我给它取个名字叫“球球”。

球球最不喜欢铁笼子。因为，今天早上，老爸把几根球球最喜欢吃的骨头放在笼子里让球球进去吃，最后老爸把球球关在笼子里，放在大厅的一个角落里很长时间。所以球球最不喜欢笼子。

下午，老爸把球球又关在笼子里，然后就去睡觉了。我告诉你，我家球球是最记仇的小狗。我就悄悄把球球放了出来。球球一出来，就跳到了老爸的头上，才几秒钟的工夫，球球先拉屎后拉尿——“啪——啪”。老爸一摸脸，醒了：“好臭啊！”爸爸看见了脸上有水说：“儿子，是不是球球干的？”我说：“是的。但爸爸你不能打它！”爸爸说：“哦，知道。”爸爸说完就去洗头和洗脸。爸爸洗完头和脸后，看见球球像个小孩子一样在屋外的墙角下趴着。

傍晚，我们一家人到街上去玩。大哥开着车载着我们刚走了几十米，我从反光镜里突然看见球球跟在车子后面跑。我急忙大叫：“大哥，快停车。”车停了，我把车门一打开，球球一蹦就到了车里。球球趴在我身上舔我的手和脸，我们亲热极了。

这就是我家的狗狗——球球。