高考英语写信作文范文10篇(实用20篇)

高考英语写作紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，以有指导的写作为主，要求考生在短时间内构思成文。由于它是对学生语言综合运用能力的考查，因此在高考中令很多考生感到十分苦恼，也是一个失分率很高的题型。对此，笔者有如下几条建议：

1上海高考英语作文命题特点

1.写作话题

每年高考在即，会出现许多对高考英语写作话题的预测，但这种具体的预测往往是徒劳的。分析近年来真题规律，上海市高考英语写作的话题都是跟高中生的生活密切相关，而非政治性或社会性话题。例如，2006年的话题是选择大学的问题；2007年的话题是礼物；2008年的话题是集体舞比赛；2009年是参加夏令营的课程；2010年则是学生上课情景。这些话题都源于高中生的日常生活。因此，考生不必担心无话可说。在备考过程也不必将过多精力放在一些重大的社会性及政治性话题上。

2.写作体裁

近年来，上海市高考英语写作从体裁上来说主要是偏重于叙议结合的文章，例如在2008年的高考中，考生首先要说明自己是否要参加集体舞比赛，之后要阐述自己的理由。又如，在2009年的高考中，考生首先要根据材料说明自己要参加夏令营的哪个课程，其次要阐述自己的理由以及描述一下希望从课程中学到的内容。刚刚结束的2010年高考题要求学生描述图片以及自己同时期上课的情景，再简单发表感想。纵观近三年的高考，都是夹叙夹议的文章，因此这种体裁的文章是考生接下来备考的重点。

2.如何写好高考作文

高考英语作文的考核目标是看学生能否根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达。我们在写作时应注意：

1.认真审题，确定内容。弄清写作要求是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。审题时应注意以下几个方面：

1)审题时要确定文章的体裁。

例：(2010年高考)下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，做出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景；比较你同时期的上课情况；简单谈谈你的感受。

这篇文章的内容必须覆盖题目给出的三块内容，其中前两项描述图片里学生上课的场景和比较你同时期的上课情况皆是记叙和描绘的部分。只有最后一部分简要发表感想是议论。

2)审题时，把握题目中的关键内容，以免跑题或遗漏。

例：(2009)高考作文：某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening)、烹调(cooking)、防身术(self-defense)、护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名)，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：你感兴趣的课程；你期望从这门课程中学到什么；为什么想学这些内容。

这个命题的关键内容有三块：是什么、为什么和学什么。很多同学在审题时把重点放在了为什么要学上，却忽略了想学什么这个关键内容。文章的主体段只交待了为什么要学习某个课程，却只字不提想学习这个课程的哪些方面，遗漏了关键的内容。

2.语言表达上要从三方面把好语言关。

1)准确性：在写作的过程中最好用自己熟悉的句型和词语，力求语言表达正确流畅。

2)句式多样性：在写作过程中，过多使用简单句和短句，会使文章显得罗嗦，幼稚。我们在书面表达时应学会合并短句，并注意句式的多样性。

3)语言恰当性：在高考英语写作时，还应注意用词的恰当性。有些同学喜欢用一些词汇等级较高的词以显示语言的水平，但若不贴切文章的内容，效果往往适得其反。比如，在一篇描写同学间友谊的文章中，用Itisuni－versallyacknowledgedthatfriendshipisveryimportanttous这样的语句来开头，就显得过大，十分不适合文章的主题和作者的身份。

3.组织结构上要做到结构正确，层次分明，运用适当的连接词使上下文连贯一致。

1)注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分(Openingparagraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分(Bodyparagraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分(Concludingparagraph)——对全文的总结和概括。

2)运用适当的连接词使段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。记叙文一般按照时间顺序来写，用一些表示先后顺序的连接词能使记叙的事件脉络更清楚。议论文中用一些连接词可以使文章层次分明，上下连贯。

3.高考作文的写作步骤：

高考写作理想时间是30分钟，最少不能少于20分钟，拿到考题后，写作的一般步骤为：

第一步：审题

第二步：谋篇布局

1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些词汇和句型等。

3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性

第三步：写后检查，写后复查全文，看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病，卷面是否整洁等。

[ 高考英语作文这样拿高分

你的朋友首次来该城镇。仔细观察下图，用英语写一篇短文，向他介绍城里最热闹的街道并告诉他从火车站怎样到达这条街(第一句话已给出)。

I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one.

Our City

I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one. The busiest street in our town is Prospect Avenue. There are many things to do and see in this street.First, you could visit the Art Museum, where an art show is going on.Directly across the street from the Art Museum is the library. If you would like to buy some books you could cross Third Street and go to the book store. It is on the south side of Prospect Avenue. From there, if you would like a snack, you have several choices. Continuing west on Prospect Avenue you could visit the ice-cream shop, the bakery, or the candy store. Finally, cross Second Street and enjoy all the unusual animals at the pet store.

To find Prospect Avenue from the train station,turn left on Fourth Street and head south. It is just two blocks to the entrance of the Art Museum. I hope you will enjoy your visit!

我们的城市

为了让您愉快轻松地参观我们的城市，现在我向您简要介绍一下我们的城市。在我们城市里最繁华的街道是Prospect Avenue，这条街上你可以看到许多景致，随意买到你喜欢的东西。首先，你可以参观艺术馆，那里即将举行艺术展。从这里穿过这条街有一座图书馆，如果你想购书的话，你可以穿过第三条街到书店里买，这家书店位于Prospect Avenue的南侧;如果你想就餐，你有好几种选择，沿着这条街继续西行，你就会发现一家冰淇淋店、一家面包店和一家糖果店。最后穿过第二条街，到一家宠物店你可以欣赏到许多与众不同的动物。

从火车站出来，在第四条街向左转，然后向南直行，即可到达ProsPect AVenue。仅仅通过两个街区，你就会找到艺术馆。希望你玩得开心!

1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。

2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。

3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前， 决不放弃!

4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。

5、Never say die.永不气馁!

6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。

7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。

8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10、Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life.苦难是人生最伟大的老师。

12、A man cant ride your back unless it is bent.你的腰不弯，别人就不能骑在你的背上。

13、Although again sweet candy, also has a bitter day.即使再甜的糖，也有苦的一天。

14、Sharp tools make good work.工欲善其事，必先利其器。

15、Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow.今日事今日毕!

16、Wasting time is robbing oneself.浪费时间就是掠夺自己。

17、The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart.世界上对勇气的最大考验是忍受失败而不丧失信心。

18、A mans best friends are his ten fingers.人最好的朋友是自己的十个手指。

19、Only they who fulfill their duties in everyday matters will fulfill them on great occasions.只有在日常生活中尽责的人才会在重大时刻尽责。

20、The shortest way to do many things is to only one thing at a time.做许多事情的捷径就是一次只做一件事。

21、Theres only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and thats your own self.这个宇宙中只有一个角落你肯定可以改进，那就是你自己。

22、The first step is as good as half over.第一步是最关键的一步。

23、Do one thing at a time, and do well.一次只做一件事，做到最好!

24、Believe that god is fair.相信上帝是公平的。

25、Wealth is the test of a mans character.财富是对一个人品格的试金石。

26、Let bygones be bygones.

过去的就让它过去吧。

27、Let sleeping dogs lie.

别惹麻烦。

28、Let the cat out of the bag.

泄漏天机。

29、Lies can never changes fact.

谎言终究是谎言。

30、Lies have short legs.

谎言站不长。

a lot of people shared their views to what love really is, or at least what love is in their eyes. perhaps love is just an illusion. a strong illusion, especially for those who are searching for a purpose of life. is love an answer? love can be wonderful, special, complicated, a distress, a gift, a curse, a tragedy, and most of all, an eperience. love is a mysterious and a complicated force. what do a person mean when they say they love someone? love is many different things. each of us have our own understanding of love is, and most of the time we base our definitions from feelings and eperiences. the book defines love in many ways. "it is a strong affection for another arising out of kinship or personal ties." it can be an affection and tenderness felt by lovers. love is the object of attachment, devotion, or admiration.

just when we thought we finally grasp what love is, somebody asks:"does anyone really know what love mean? i believe i have a true love, but true love is always hurt, isnt it?"i scratches my head with this thought and began to wonder. what is the answer to this? "this i have to know!" i said to myself. i looked in the mirror and asked "is it a true love when you know you want to live with this special person for the rest of your life? have we reached true love when we are ready to give everything away towards our subject? or maybe when can go as far as to sacrifice ourselves for our love? what about love as an obsession? is that possible?

"but isnt love suppose to be an obsession? if it is not, then youd have to rationalize. if you rationalize then its not love, because there is always a better rationalization.""i think the "in love" phase is obsessive but according to williamson (and backed up by my paltry eperience), love does not involve the ego, is selfless and the opposite of obsession."according to marriane williamson, the author of "a return to love," there is a "holy love" and a "special love." "the latter type is the obsessiveone; finding that one special person absorbs _all_ your attention."

so who is right and who is wrong about love? there is no wrong answer. love is many wonderful things. love may not work out all the time but it leaves you a special sort of feeling, like nothing you have ever imagined. is love a purpose of life? i think are life will be dull without it. but is it necessary? important? it is a part of life, and forever it will be a part of us.

一、引出开头

1. It is well-known to us that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

我们都知道知识在我们生活中扮演重要的角色。

2. Nowadays,the problem of the air pollution has been brought into focus.

如今，空气污染问题引起了关注。(***成为人们瞩目的焦点)

3. Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has also brought some problems.

如今,互联网已在我们生活中扮演越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些问题。

4. With the development of our society，more and more people believe that knowledge is very important.

随着社会的发展，越来越多的人认为知识很重要。

5. A lot of people think that knowledge is very necessary.

很多人认为知识很必要。

6. Peoples opinions about the Internet are different. Some think that it can bring a lot of benefits. However, others think that it dose harm to our health.

人们对互联网的观点各有不同，有些人认为互联网给我们带来了很多益处，然而，其他人却认为他对我们有害。

7. Everything has two sides and the Internet is not an exception ,it has both advantage and disadvantage.

每个硬币都有两面，互联网也不例外，它既有优点有与缺点。

8. Human beings are facing a big problem ,the air pollution ,which is becoming more and more serious.

人类正面临一个严重的问题，大气污染，这个问题变得越来越严重。

9. On the contrary，there are some people think it not useful.

相反，有一些人认为它没有用。

二、重要句子

1. It is time that we should take measures to solve this problem.(虚拟语气)

该是我们采取措施解决问题的时候了。

2. Only in this way can we solve this problem.(倒装)

只有这种办法才能解决这个问题。

3. If we dont take measures, the problem wont be solved.

如果我们不采取措施，问题将不能被解决。

4. There are many reasons for this problems.Firstly,****.Secondly,****.Last but not least,****.

这一现象存在有很多原因。第一，***。第二，***。最后但也是最重要的是，***。

5. On the one hand,……On the other hand,

……一方面……另一方面……:

6. The best way to solve the problem is that……

解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

7. It has the following advantages.它有如下优点。

8. It has more disadvantages than advantages.

他有很多不足之处。(他的缺点多于优点)

9. We should try our best to overcome the difficulties.

我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难。

10. We should solve the problems that we are faced with.

我们应该解决我们面临的困难。

11. It has increased/decreased from…to…

他已经从…增加/减少到…

12. No one can deny the fact that the Internet is very useful.

没人能否认这个事实:互联网很有用。

13. I prefer to read ,rather than watch TV.

与看你电视相比我更喜欢阅读。

14. As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.

作为一个学生，我非常赞成这个观点。

15. For example,some parents think that many students become addicted to the Internet.

例如，一些家长认为学生沉迷于网络。

三、万能结尾

1. All in all, it can be said that the Internet is very important.

总之，他的意思是互联网很重要。

2. Taking all these factors into consideration, we can come to the conclusion that……

把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……

3. As a result,it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that...

因此，我们不难得出结论……

4. As far as I am concerned that we cant live without the Internet .

就我而言，我们的生活不能没有互联网。

5. There is no doubt that the Internet is very useful for people.

毫无疑问互联网对人们非常有用。

6. However，we also try to use it in a right way , not waste a lot of time in it .

然而，我们也应该尝试正确的方式运用它，切记不要浪费过多时间在它上面。

7. The reason why the Internet is very necessary is that it is useful .

互联网很必要的原因是它很实用。

英语作文模板

模板1. 信的格式

Dear Li,

Glad to receive your letter .*******

******

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours

Jim

模板2. 观点对比

Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. There are two sides of opinion about it.Some students say … is their favorite. They think that… (理由一).What’s more, …(理由二).Moreover, … (理由三)

However, others think that… is a better choice. There are three reasons. (然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由) Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

As far as I am concerned that cant live without the Internet .The reason why ...is that…(……的原因是……)

模板3. 好处与坏处的对比

Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. There are many advantages in it. Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

However, everything has two sides and the Internet is not an exception ,it has both advantage and disadvantage.There’re some disadvantages. …. (之一). What’s more, ….(之二). Moreover, …. (之三)

As far as I am concerned that it has more disadvantages than advantages.(依我看，它有更多好处多于坏处)… However，we also try to use it in a right way , not waste a lot of time in it .

模板4. 问题与建议

Nowadays,human beings are facing a big problem ,the air pollution ,which is becoming more and more serious.(如今，人类面临一个问题，空气污染，这个问题变得越来越严峻).There are many reasons for this problems. For example,....

It is time that we should take measures to solve this problem.Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

As far as I am concerned that solve these problems are very necessary.(就我而言，解决这些问题非常必要)。。。Only in this way can we solve this problem.

需记忆的词组及单词

well-known 众所周知 important 重要的 pollution 污染

focus 面对 benefit 益处 development 发展

society 社会 knowledge 知识 necessary 必要的

opinion 观点 harm 危害 exception 例外

advantage 优点 disadvantage 缺点 serious严峻的

measures 措施 solve 解决 overcome 克服

increase 增加 decrease减少 deny 否认

prefer 喜欢 example 例子 addicted 沉迷

useful 有用的

play an important role in our life在生活中扮演重要角色

with the development of our society 随着社会的发展

bring a lot of benefits 带来很多益处

everything has two sides 任何事物都具有两面性

Become more and more serious 变得越来越严峻

on the contrary 相反 take measures 采取措施

solve this problem 解决这个问题

the best way to 最好的方法

overcome the difficulties 克服困难

be faced with 面对

No one can deny the fact that 没有人能够否认这个事实。。。

in favour of 赞同 支持 For example 例如

become addicted to the Internet 沉迷于网络 All in all 总之

come to the conclusion 得出结论

As far as I am concerned that 就我而言

There is no doubt that 毫无疑问

in a right way 正确的方法

waste a lot of time 浪费时间

1918年11月11日，延续4年之久的第一次世界大战以英、美、法等国的胜利和德、奥等国的失败而告结束。1919年1月，获胜的协约国在巴黎凡尔赛宫召开和平会议。中华民国作为战胜国参加会议。中华民国代表在会上提出废除外国在华特权，取消二十一条等正当要求，均遭拒绝。会议竟决定日本接管德国在华的各种特权。对这丧权辱国的条约，中华民国代表居然准备签字承认。消息传来，举国震怒，群情激愤。以学生为先导的五四爱国运动就如火山爆发般地开始了。

In November 11, 1918, the first World War lasted for 4 years in Britain, America, France and other countries and the victory of Germany, Austria and other countries come to an end in failure. 1919 January, winning xiediguo held in the Palace of Versailles in Paris peace conference. The Republic of China as a victorious nation to attend the meeting. The representative of China at the proposed abolition of privileges in China and foreign countries, cancel twenty-one legitimate demands were rejected. Japan has decided to take over the meeting in Germanys privileges in china. To humiliate the country and forfeit its sovereignty of this treaty, the representative of the Republic of China was prepared to recognize the signature. When the news came out, the country burning, burning with indignation. The student led five four patriotic movement like a volcano began.

5月4日下午，北京3000多名学生在天安门前集会游行，他们高呼：“还我青岛”“收回山东权利”、“拒绝在巴黎和会上签字”、“废除二十一条”、“抵制日货”、“宁肯玉碎，勿为瓦全”、“外争国权，内惩国贼”等口号，并且要求惩办交通总长曹汝霖、币制局总裁陆宗舆、驻日公使章宗祥，呼吁各界人士行动起来，反对帝国主义的侵略行径，保卫中国的领土和主权。这一运动得到的工人和各阶层人士的声援和支持，上海、南京等地的工人纷纷举行罢工或示威。在全国人民的压力下，北洋政府被迫释放被捕学生，罢免曹汝霖等人的职务，并指令巴黎参加会议的代表拒绝在和约上签字。

The afternoon of May 4th, more than 3000 students in Beijing shouting at them in front of the Tiananmen demonstrations,: "I also Qingdao" "Shandong," refused to withdraw the right "in Paris and will sign", "the abolition of the twenty-one", "boycott Japanese goods," "would rather die, not for your guns", "defend our sovereignty, punish traitor" and other slogans, and for the punishment of traffic chief Cao Rulin, President of monetary Bureau Lu Zongyu, Minister Zhang Zongxiang, calls for action, fight against imperialist aggression, defend the territorial integrity and sovereignty Chinese. This campaign workers and all sectors of the solidarity and support, Shanghai, Nanjing and other places of the workers have held strikes and demonstrations. In the country under the pressure of the people, the government was forced to release the arrested students, and others recall Cao Rulins position, and ordered the Paris representatives attending the meeting refused to sign the peace treaty.

为了继承和发扬“五四”运动以来中国青年光荣的革命传统，1939年，陕甘宁边区的西北青年救国联合会规定5月4日为青年节。1949年12月，中央人民政府政务院正式宣布这一规定。

In order to inherit and carry forward the "five four" youth movement Chinese glorious revolutionary tradition, in 1939, the Shaanxi Gansu Ningxia border region of the Northwest China Youth Federation provides for the May 4th Youth day. In 1949 December, the Central Peoples government officially announced the provisions.

1. It goes without saying that 。..不用说……

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 不用说， 早睡早起是值得的。

2. There is no denying the fact that 。..不可否认这个事实……=No one can deny 。..谁也不可否认……

There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 不可否认， 成功的关键在于健康的身心。

3. I am greatly convinced (that)。..=I am greatly assured (that)。..我深信……

I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 我深信预防胜于治疗。

4. Among various kinds of 。..=Of all the 。..在各种……之中， ……

Among various kinds of sports， I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中， 我尤其喜欢慢跑。

5. In my opinion 。..=As far as I am concerned ，。..在我看来， ……

In my opinion， playing computer games not only takes up much time but also is harmful to our health. 在我看来， 打电脑游戏既花费也有害健康。

6. According to my personal experience = Based on my personal experience根据我个人经验

According to my personal experience， smile has done me a lot of good. 根据我个人的经验， 微笑带给我很多好处

7. Of all the people I know， perhaps none deserves my respect more than 。..在我认识的人当中， 也许没有一个人比……更值得我尊敬。

Of all the people I know， perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang， my English teacher. 在我认识的人当中， 也许没有一个人比我的英语老师张老师更值得我尊敬。

8. In the course of my schooling， I will never forget 。..在我的求学过程中， 我忘不了……

In the course of my schooling， I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English. 在我求学的过程中， 我忘不了学习英语的巨大困难。

9. With the increase/growth of the population， 。..随着人口的增加， ……

With the advance of science and technology， 。..随着科技的进步， ……

With the rapid development of our economy ，。..随着我国经济的快速发展， ……

10. In the age of information and communication， 。..plays an important role. 在这信息年代， ……扮演重要的角色。

1、All things in their being are good for something.

天生我才必有用。

2、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.

困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。

3、Failure is the mother of success.——Thomas Paine

失败乃成功之母。

4、For man is man and master of his fate.

人就是人，是自己命运的主人。

5、The unexamined life is not worth living.——Socrates

混混噩噩的生活不值得过。——苏格拉底

6、None is of freedom or of life deserving unless he daily conquers it anew.——Erasmus

只有每天再度战胜生活并夺取自由的人，才配享受生活的自由。

7、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair, but the chalice of opportunity. So let us seize it, not in fear, but in gladness.——R.M. Nixon

命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。因此，让我们毫无畏惧，满心愉 悦地把握命运。——尼克松

8、Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.——John Ruskin

生活没有目标，犹如航海没有罗盘。-- 罗斯金

9、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.——George Eliot

没有了目的，生活便郁闷无光。——乔治·埃略特

10、Towering genius disdains a beaten path. It seeks regions hitherto unexplored.——Lincoln

卓越的天才不屑走旁人走过的路。他寻找迄今未开拓的地区。

11、There is no such thing as a great talent without great will - power.——Balzac

没有伟大的意志力，便没有雄才大略。——巴尔扎克

12、A man cant ride your back unless it is bent.你的腰不弯，别人就不能骑在你的背上。

13、Although again sweet candy, also has a bitter day.即使再甜的糖，也有苦的一天。

14、Sharp tools make good work.工欲善其事，必先利其器。

15、Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow.今日事今日毕!

16、Wasting time is robbing oneself.浪费时间就是掠夺自己。

17、The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart.世界上对勇气的最大考验是忍受失败而不丧失信心。

18、A mans best friends are his ten fingers.人最好的朋友是自己的十个手指。

19、Only they who fulfill their duties in everyday matters will fulfill them on great occasions.只有在日常生活中尽责的人才会在重大时刻尽责。

20、The shortest way to do many things is to only one thing at a time.做许多事情的捷径就是一次只做一件事。

21、Theres only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and thats your own self.这个宇宙中只有一个角落你肯定可以改进，那就是你自己。

22、The first step is as good as half over.第一步是最关键的一步。

23、Do one thing at a time, and do well.一次只做一件事，做到最好!

24、Believe that god is fair.相信上帝是公平的。

25、Wealth is the test of a mans character.财富是对一个人品格的试金石。

26、The best hearts are always the bravest.心灵最高尚的人，也总是最勇敢的人。

27、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.如果你想要成功，不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它，成功自然到来。

28、All things come to those who wait.苍天不负有心人。

29、Victory wont come to me unless I go to it.胜利是不会向我们走来的，我必须自己走向胜利。

30、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.只要一个人还有追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

如今,大学生的就业变得越来越多的一个问题。大约十年前,大学生在毕业后能找到满意的和令人羡慕的工作,而目前的情况有很大的不同。此外,据统计,约有30%的研究生找不到工作,但毕业后呆在家里。

就业困难的大学生是由于以下原因。其中,高校招聘的增加起着至关重要的作用。此外,许多学院和大学无法使他们的课程适应经济的发展。

考虑到大学生的失业的严重性,我认为这是时候,我们采取了有效的措施来解决这个问题。最重要的是,大学生应该意识到自己的缺陷和进一步提高自己在社会中保持他们的竞争优势。此外,学院或大学应该提供更多的培训和实习机会的学生进入社会。除此之外,大学生应该持有正确的态度工作,他们的工作预期在一个合适的水平。只有通过这些方式可以大学生找一份满意的工作,有一个光明的未来。

中考英语满分作文： Talking about Having Sports 谈论运动

David： Susan, you like sports, don’t you?

Susan： Yes. I have sports every afternoon.

David： Do you often go swimming?

Susan： Yes, I go swimming once a week.

David： I used to swim at middle school, but I don’t have time any more.

Susan： That’s too bad! Exercise is very important.

David： I know. I am getting fat, you see. Anyway, I don’t want to be heavy.

Susan： Well, I’m going to swim this afternoon. Do you want to go with me?

David： OK! I really need more exercises. When and where shall we meet?

Susan： How about three o’clock, at the swimming-pool?

David： All right. Good-bye!

Susan： Good-bye!

大卫:苏珊,你喜欢运动,不是吗?

苏珊:是的。我每天下午进行体育活动。

大卫:你经常去游泳吗?

苏珊:是的,我每周去游泳一次。

大卫:我曾经在中学游泳,但我现在没有时间。

苏珊:那太糟了!锻炼是非常重要的。

大卫:我知道。我变胖了,你看到的。无论如何,我不想重。

苏珊:嗯,我今天下午去游泳。你想和我一起去吗?

大卫:好的!我需要更多练习。我们何时何地见面?

苏珊:三点,在游泳池吗?

大卫:好的。再见!

苏珊:再见!

高考英语满分作文:志愿者申请 Volunteer Application

书面表达： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。字数100左右。

范文：

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Thanks. Li Hua

当我听说冬季奥运会将在我的城市里举行，我感到非常兴奋。我的名字是李华。我是一个高中学生，一个18岁的男孩。我想做一名志愿者。我非常喜欢英语和体育。我喜欢交朋友，我随时准备帮助别人。我可以做一个好的翻译，在每一个体育的时间。希望奥运会取得巨大的成功。希望我会被选为一个。谢谢李华

满分作文 时间是宝贵的 THE VALUE OF TIME

I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that it’s only one day. There goes a proverb, “Time is money”. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

我总是认为没有足够的时间。例如，我刚拍了三天假。但当我回头看时，我只是觉得它只是一天。俗话说“时间就是金钱”。现在我想说的是，时间比金钱更宝贵，因为当钱花了，我们可以再挣一些。但是，当时间消失或失去，永远不会返回。

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it’s a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

时间不被注意。我们学习和工作的时间通常是有限的。所以我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但遗憾的是，我始终没有意识到时间的重要性，直到为时已晚。

So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one’s life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

所以我想，我应该养成节约时间的好习惯，因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能做的事拖到明天！

高考英语满分作文 My Friend

作文一：

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得特别快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生，他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想，就是将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。

作文二：

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.

张东是我最要好的朋友，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外，我们两人都喜欢足球，爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力，他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累，他都坚持完成他的功课，所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。

高考英语作文满分范文背诵14 关于照片展示的新闻报道 A news report on the photo show.

A news report on the photo show.

关于照片展示的新闻报道

A photo show WuHan 4th Middle School HuBei. Early May a photo show was held in our school. It was a great success. All the photoes were taken by students themselves. There were black-white and color photoes visitig ourclass life, the beautiful nature, festival activities and so on. All the works are well on show in the reading room on the third floor. Everyday a large number of students went to enjoy ad they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful. Those whole photoes were chosen the best or given an expected prices. In sure, this photo show really made our life colorful.

湖北武汉第四中学的照片展示。五月初，我们学校举办了照片展示的活动。活动取得了成功。所有的照片都是学生自己拍摄的。有黑白照，彩色照，照片有学生的生活，美丽的自然照、节日活动等。所有的作品都展示在了三层的阅览室中。每天都有大量的学生前去参观，他们对照片的美丽而感到惊讶。所有的照片都经过的精心的挑选，并价格不菲。的确，这些照片让我们的生活变得更加美丽。

话题作文：求职简历介绍自己 Resume introduction

青岛某旅游区一家外资饭店要招聘一位懂英语的大堂副经理，以下是张红的一份登记表。请用英语写一篇介绍张红情况的短文。词数：80－120.

Name : Zhang HongSex : femaleDate of birth : 4/07 / 1980Birthplace : QingdaoOccupation : TeacherHeight : 1.72Education :Graduated from Qing Teachers’ College in 1999Interests : Singing and dancingmanagementAspiration : BusinessMastery of English : Having learned English for eight years. Be good at listening and reading

Zhang Hong， female， is a twenty-year-old teacher of a middle school. She was born in July 4， 1980 in Qingdao， and graduated from Qingdao Teachers’ College in July 1999. She has learned English for eight years. Zhang Hong is good at listening and spoken English. She can get along very well with others. She is 1.72 metres tall. She is interested in singing and dancing， and she wants very much to devote her life to business management.

张宏，女，是一所中学的一二零岁教师。她于1980年7月4日出生于青岛，七月毕业于青岛师范学院1999。她学了八年英语了。张宏擅长听和说英语。她和别人相处得很好。她身高1.72米。她对唱歌和跳舞很感兴趣，她很想把自己的生命奉献给企业管理。

导语：随着科技的发展，你发现家乡有什么变化吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My home town is in the center of Xuzhou which was a quiet and beautiful place. In the past, there were many animals. They were lovely and nice. The air was fresh and there were many birds fly in the sky.

Over the past years, it has changed a lot. At the present, it becomes a modern town and develops a lot. Now, the people in Xuzhou are richer than before, so most of people go to work by bus or by underground. Sometimes, they also drive their private cars to work. Many people sell out their old houses and move into new flats.

In some ways, the development has brought some good things, but it has also causes much environment pollution. I think we should take action to reduce the pollution.

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我的家乡在徐州，是一个安静而美丽的地方中心。在过去，有许多动物。他们是可爱的，漂亮的。空气清新，有许多鸟在天空飞翔。

过去的那些年，它已经发生了很大的变化。现在，它已经成为一个现代化城市，也得到了很大的发展。现在徐州的人都比以前富有，所以大多数人都是乘巴士或地铁去工作的。有时候，他们也开私家车去上班。很多人卖了他们的老房子，然后搬进新公寓。

在某些方面，发展带来了好处，但是也带来了环境污染。我认为我们应该采取措施来减少污染。

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某校开展"研究性学习",要求学生设计一下未来的居室.下面请以"My Dream House"为题,描述你设计的居室.内容要点如下:

我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅.前后有两个庭院,前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园,后面是一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳.

第一层进门有一个大厅,大厅的右边有一个客厅,平时大家可以在这里放松休息,看电视,娱乐等.左边有个电脑房,还有一毡属于我的书房.

第二层有6间卧室,每一间卧室都有浴室.

别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,电梯,可视电话,自动门等.

参考词汇: 书房study 安全报警器security alarm 可视电话vision phone

There?is?a?widespread?concern?over?the?issue?that?__作文题目_____.?But?it?is?well?known?that?the?opinion?concerning?this?hot?topic?varies?from?person?to?person.?A?majority?of?people?think?that?_?观点一________.?In?their?views?there?are?2?factors?contributing?to?this?attitude?as?follows:?in?the?first?place,?___原因一_______.Furthermore,?in?the?second?place,?___原因二_____.?So?it?goes?without?saying?that?___观点一_____.?

People,?however,?differ?in?their?opinions?on?this?matter.?Some?people??hold?the?idea?that?___观点二_______.?In?their?point?of?view,?on?the?one?hand，?___原因一_______.?On?the?other?hand,?____原因二_____.?Therefore,?there?is?no?doubt?that?___观点二______.??

As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I?firmly?support?the?view?that?__观点一或二______.?It?is?not?only?because?________,?but?also?because?_________.?The?more?_______,?the?more?________.?

假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据和给Sue写封电子邮件。

写作要点：

1.对她表达感谢之意;

2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;

3.希望了解她的近况。

要求：

1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4.书写须清晰、工整。

5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。

It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

你离开我们已经快一个月了。我们都很想念你，非常感谢你为我们所做的一切。

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

我们都很忙。那天我们有一次英语演讲比赛。我赢得了第一名！这再一次提醒我你的帮助。你还记得我们一起在山上种下的树吗？昨天，我们去那里浇水了。你种下的树长势良好，整个班级决定把它命名为“苏”。你回来看看苏木吗？

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

你近来一切都好吗？我们希望了解更多关于你和你的美国学生。希望保持密切联系。

All the best

所有最好的

Li Hua

李华

[中考英语满分作文精篇学习生活征文 study and life

In doing we learn. 我们在干中学习.

No cross,no crown. 未经苦难,得不到荣冠.

Care killed a cat. 忧虑能杀人。

Boys will be boys. 男孩子总是男孩子.

No song, no supper. 不出力,不得食.

The truth will out. 真相总会大白.

Time works wonders. 时间能创造奇迹.

To think is to see. 思考就是明白.

Truth will prevail. 真理必胜

A lie begets a lie. 谎言生谎言。

Years bring wisdom. 年岁带来智慧.

In love is no lack. 爱情不会感到缺乏.

Easy come, easy go. 来得容易去得 . /悖入悖出.

Every little helps. 点滴都有用.

Forgive and forget. 恢弘大度，勿念旧恶。

Manners maketh man. 举止造人品.

Laugh and grow fat. 心宽体胖 。

Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量.

Let the world slide. 人世沧桑,听其自然.

Love me,love my dog. 爱屋及乌.

Life means struggle. 生活就是斗争.

Fair plays a jewel. 比赛风格好,胜过珠宝.

Early sow,early mow. 种得早,收得早.

Grasp all, lose all. 贪多必失.

Whats lost is lost. 失者不可复得。

Waste not, want not. 不浪费,不会穷.

Tomorrow never comes. 切莫依赖明天. / 我生待明日,万事成蹉跎.

No man is infallible. 没有人不犯错误。

Alms never make poor. 施舍穷不了人.

Love will find a way. 爱心所至,金石为开.

Manners make the man. 举止见人品。

Patience is a virtue. 忍耐是一种美德.

Pity is akin to love. 怜悯生爱.

Call a spade a spade. 是啥说啥，难听不怕。

Delays are dangerous. 因循出危险.

Diamond cuts diamond. 强中自有强中手.

Counsel is no command. 劝告不是命令.

Poverty tries friends. 贫穷考验朋友.

Once bitten,twice shy. 吃一次亏,学一次乖.

Pain past is pleasure. 痛苦过去即欢乐.

Leal heart lied never. 心诚无谎言。

Hot love is soon cold. 过热的爱情冷得快.

As good lost as found. 有得必有失. /得失同喜.

Every dog has his day. 瓦块也有翻身日，人人都有运来时。

Currently,?there?is?a?widespread?concern?over?(the?issue?that)__作文题目_______?.It?is?really?an?important?concern?to?every?one?of?us.?As?a?result,?we?must?spare?no?efforts?to?take?some?measures?to?solve?this?problem.?

As?we?know?that?there?are?many?steps?which?can?be?taken?to?undo?this?problem.?First?of?all,?__途径一______.?In?addition,?another?way?contributing?to?success?of?the?solving?problem?is?___途径二_____.?

Above?all,?to?solve?the?problem?of?___作文题目______,?we?should?find?a?number?of?various?ways.?But?as?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I?would?prefer?to?solve?the?problem?in?this?way,?that?is?to?say,?____方法_____.?

Every Chinese knows the importance of the college entrance examination, so the high school students always can feel the stress from that exam, especially when that day is nearby. Some students will not do as well as usual because of heavy stress. It is necessary to adjust their mood well before the exam. They should not give too much pressure to themselves, instead of having usual heart. Then they can do in working order. To reach this goal, they can spare time to do some sports or just go running and keep telling themselves that the exam can’t decide their future, so they try their best would be OK and no one will blame them. The purpose is make them feel relax, as the status of relax is the best state for achieving good marks in the exam. It is helpful.

每个中国人都知道高考的重要性，所以，高考生常常能够感受到高考给予他们的压力，特别是高考即将来临的时候。有些学生会因为压力而在考试中发挥失常。在考试前调节好心情非常有必要。他们不应该给自己太大的压力，而是应该以平常心对待。这样才能正常发挥。所以，可以选择挤一点时间去运动或者跑跑步或者自我催眠高考并不能决定自己的未来，只要尽自己最大的努力就可以了，也没有人会责怪自己的。这样做的目的是让他们放松，因为放松是在考试中取得好成绩最好的状态。这个方法真的有用。

Dear Bob,

亲爱的鲍勃，

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

谢谢你的来信询问我们的图书馆。我们的图书馆位于教学楼和花园之间。它的形状似乎是一本书，欢迎我们的学生。这是从星期一到星期五开放，从上午九时至下午六时，我们可以借书。上午7:00 P。M。

There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

有许多书在我们的图书馆，几乎涉及了每一个主题。不仅书籍，也可以在这里阅读杂志。你可以一次借了五本书，并保持他们的最多十天。

Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

由于图书馆，我们提供了一个地方来获得尽可能多的知识。如果你对它感兴趣，欢迎来到我们的学校，我会带你参观。

Yours sincerely,

你的真诚，

Li hua

李华

Dear Miss Mao，

Hi, I am Shi Qi. I like playing pingpong and reading books. My father likes playing pingpong, too. My mother likes watching TV and playing computer games.What is your hobby?

Yours, Shi Qi

Life needs love and hope Life although is short, but it should like fireworks as brilliant.When we get the basic material needs, then also need higher after the spirit world, if we want to make our lifetime become wonderful, I think, life needs something to love, and to look forward to.

Love what Love youself , love people around you ,love the everything. Even is suffering, if you love it , it will be transformed the growing wealth, make you more strong and brave.

Love yourself, because in the world we are the only one, we should believe we are excellent, try to find our advantages and correct faults. Let yourself more and more perfect, so love others must first love yourself. Love our friends and family, they give us lifes warm, when we are alone, they accompany us; when we are sad, they comfort us; when we are failure, they encourage us, so learning gratitude will get more love. Love the nature, the sea,

mountains, rivers, forests and plateau, when we stay in the full of fresh breath natural surroundings, breathing the fresh air, listening the sounds of nature, appreciating the natural scenery, our body will be full of energy and We will be more love this world

When I am tired, Ill go to climb mountains, and put myself in the nature, it can make me to forget all the troubles, I will hold the

camera to take the beautiful moment reserved for eternal memory. I also love sport, it makes me more healthy, more courageous. I like to play badminton, I feel very happy when I sweat. I like to run,I can listen to my heart beating, when I toward the finish line

struggled to run，I will get more perseverance.

There is love there is hope ，when we believe that life has miracle, the future will give us hope. The purpose of life is to have hope, and toward it continuous efforts.

Im looking forward to one day I can travel the whole of China, and appreciate Chinese fine scenery. I expect I can become an excellent Chinese teacher ___"preach, impart knowledge and to reassure,"I will with love to water the flowers make it blooming . Im looking forward to have a coffee shop, where with a melodious tunes, a useful book, a glass of sweet coffee, a wisp of warm sunshine, we can provide them a space for tired heart

releasing ,teach them loving life, learning poetic ground life. Because there are loves and expectations in our life, it makes our hearts full, and makes our life more beautiful, Even if life is limited, but we can make unlimited exploits in the limited time . "We may not add the length of life, but can increase the thickness of life." So, let us keep the love in life, and keep something to look forward to .

生活要有所爱，有所期待

生命即使短暂，也要像烟火般灿烂。在我们满足基本的物质需求之后，我们便需要更高的精神世界，如何让我们的有生之年过得精彩，我认为，生活就该有所爱，有所期待。爱什么？爱自己、爱身边的人，爱生活的一点一滴，即使是苦难，你若爱它，它将转化为你成长中的一笔财富，让你更加坚强、勇敢。

爱自己，因为我们是世界上独一无二的，要相信我们是优秀的，努力发现自己的优点，改正缺点。让自己越来越完善，唯有先自爱才能去爱他人。爱朋友和家人，是他们给了我们生命的温暖，在孤独时，他们陪伴我们；在伤心时，他们安慰我们；在失败时，他们鼓励我们，所以感恩才会获得更多的爱。爱大自然，大海、山川、高原、森林还有河流，在充满新鲜气息的自然环境里，呼吸新鲜空气，倾听大自然的声音，欣赏大自然的景色，身体一定会充满能量，更加热爱这个世界。

当我疲惫时，我会去爬山，去旅游，把自己置身于大自然里，忘却一切

烦恼，拿着照相机，拍下生命里的瞬间美好，

留作永恒的记忆。我还热爱运动，它让我更健康，更勇敢。我喜欢挥着羽毛球拍幸福地流汗，我喜欢跑步，倾听自己有力的心跳，朝着终点奋力前进，它让我的毅力更加坚毅。

有了爱还要有期待。那么期待什么呢？期待生命的奇迹，期待未来给予的希望。我们活着的目的就是拥有梦想、朝着它不断地进步。

我期待有一天能靠自己走遍中国大地，领略祖国的大好风光；我期待自己能成为一名优秀的语文老师，“传道、授业、解惑、”，用爱浇灌花儿的盛开。我期待自己能有一个咖啡店，用一支悠扬的曲子、一本有益的书、一杯香甜的咖啡、一缕温暖的阳光、为疲惫的人们提供一个心灵释放的空间，热爱生活、诗意地生活。

因为有爱、因为有期待，才能让我们的心灵充实，让我们的生活更加美好，生命是有限的，但我们可以在有限的时间里做出无限的伟绩。“我们不可以增加生命的长度，但可以增加生命的厚度。”所以，让我们在生活中有所爱、有所期待吧。

书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位，而且相对于其他题型，书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧，欢迎大家阅读。

书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级)，内容第二位(要点齐全)，结构第三位(文章分段)的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。

亮点一共有四种：

一、高级词汇和语法;

二、修辞手法;

三、有效的连词;

四、名人名言或谚语。

首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。

肯定不如否定好

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude

towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。

陈述不如倒装妙

在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。

否定词开头

如果写出的句子中有否定词， 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词，如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。

地点状语开头

在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子，一个建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么东西，都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中，图书馆位于学校的中央，Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头：In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子，想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点：In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。

这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.

Only+介词短语

例如在2007年全国卷中，让外教帮你找个笔友，有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语，这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.

形容词+as+主语+be动词

例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中：Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the

car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构，很高兴收到的你的来信：So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。

主动不如被动巧

在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整个文章句型丰富。

例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分数会更高。

分词结构不能少

在前文提到，在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。

口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词;二看：看主语;三改：改分词。

If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if;第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格;第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。

如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。

以上技巧有语文迷小编整理，看过后你真的学到了吗?