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926初二关于食品安全英语作文
全文共 1745 字
+ 加入清单From the cartoons given above, we can see that the cow is explaining to the little baby that it is not her fault for giving the poisoned power milk/the keeper is feeding the pig with Clenbuterol . The cartoon wisely reflects the food safety issues which occur in recent years. Food safety related to people’s health and it concerns about people’s basic livelihood. Since the Sanlu Incident occurred in 2008, the entire society was increasingly concerned about food safety issue. It was in this context that the food safety issue has been referred to an unprecedented height.
Problems leading to food safety are as follows: 1) using poor quality raw materials in the food manufacturing process; 2) adding toxic substances; 3) excessive use of food additives; 4) abusing of chemical additives and so on. There are many reasons that cause this problem. It is regulators, producers, and even consumers who share the responsibilities.
As Confucius instructed: better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.
从上面给出的漫画,我们可以看到,牛是解释的小宝贝这不是她的过错给毒牛奶/权力门将与瘦肉精喂猪。明智的这幅漫画反映了近年来发生的食品安全问题。食品安全与人们的健康和人们关注的基本生活。自从三鹿事件发生在2008年,整个社会越来越关心食品安全问题。正是在这种背景下,食品安全问题已经被提到前所未有的高度。
导致食品安全问题如下:1)食品制造过程中使用劣质原料;2)添加有毒物质;3)过度使用食品添加剂;4)化学添加剂的滥用等等。有很多原因导致这个问题。这是监管机构,生产者,甚至消费者分担责任。
孔子教导:迟做总比不做好。提示和严格的应采取措施回头这邪恶的趋势。政府应该发动大规模的道德教育活动所有公民和制定更严格的法律打击那些不负责任的公司和禁止他们再次进入食品工业。我坚信通过我们的共同努力,我们注定要享受更多的无风险的食品在未来的日子里。
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篇1:初二年级英语作文:低碳生活
全文共 1998 字
+ 加入清单Low carbon life is a kind of environmental protection, saving and fashionable way of life. Electricity saving, water saving, fuel-efficient, throttle can help us to low carbon life into reality.
At present, our earth mother is "fever", warming the earth. Caused by the earth mother catches the "disease" culprit is a huge carbon emissions. However, to "cure disease" is not without its way. Nowadays, low carbon era had pulled, is changing our lives.
In fact, low carbon in the us. Such as: summer, we use air conditioning dont use too long, a few hours to shut the air conditioner, to open electric fan, it can save 50% of the electricity; Keep food in the refrigerator, the amount of food the best accounts for 80% of the volume, with the bag after the water cooling in freezer, such, can not only extend the downtime, can also reduce the boot time, saves the electricity; Created by the DIY craft again, you will find that the original waste is treasure, household environment that healthy and full of creative little joy.
Often start work at ordinary times, diligent brain, also can achieve low carbon life. Adds up the rest of the tea tea at ordinary times, can do a tea pillow; Do with short pencil, a pen cap, set in the above, you can then use; The rest of the small soap with soap, accumulate over a long period, also can into a soap.
In addition, travel, try to walk, ride a bike, ride the bus and subway more, less private cars; To use less disposable things; Open the computer or TV time not too long, about a few hours off.
低碳生活是一种环保、节约又时尚的生活方式。节电、节水、节油、节气可以帮助我们将低碳生活变成现实。
目前,我们的地球母亲正在“发烧”——地球变暖。而导致这次地球母亲染上这“病”的罪魁祸首就是巨大的碳排放量。不过,要治“病”也不是没有办法的。如今,低碳时代已经如约而至,正在改变着我们的生活。
其实,低碳就在我们的身边。比如:夏天,我们用空调不要用太长时间,几个小时后就关上空调,再开电风扇,这样可以省50%的电;在冰箱内放食物时,食物量最好占容积的80%,用袋子装上水制冷后放入冷藏,这样,既能延长停机时间,也能减少开机时间,更省电;经过手工DIY的再创造,你会发现原来废物也是宝,这样的家居环境健康且充满了创意的小欢乐。
平时勤动手,勤动脑,也可以实现低碳生活。平时喝茶剩下的茶叶积攒起来,可以做一个茶叶枕头;用短的铅笔,做一个笔套,套在上面,可以接着用;用肥皂剩下的小肥皂,日积月累,也能成一个肥皂。
另外,平时出行尽量步行,多骑自行车,多乘坐公交车和地铁,少开私家车;少用一次性的东西;开电脑或是电视的时间都不要太长,大约几小时就关掉。
篇2:暑假生活英语
全文共 544 字
+ 加入清单In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play, the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner.
Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!
篇3:有关压力英语初二
全文共 1492 字
+ 加入清单As the pace of life continues to increase, we are fast losing the art of
relaxation.Once you are in the habit of rushing through life, being on the go
from morning till night,it is hard to slow down. But relaxation is essential for
a healthy mind and body. Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is
no way to avoid it. In fact, it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to
be. A certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose
to life. It is only when the stress gets out of control can it lead to poor
performance and iiihealth. The amount of stress a person can withstand depends
very much on the individual. Some people are not afraid of stress, and such
characters are obviously prime material for managerial responsibilities. Others
lose heart at the first signs of unusual difficulties. When exposed to stress,
in whatever form, we react both chemically and physically. In fact, we make a
choice between "flight or fight"and in more primitive days the choices made the
difference between life or death.The crises we meet today are unlikely to be so
extreme, but however little the stress, it involves the same response. It is
when such a reaction lasts long, through continued exposure to stress, that
health becomes endangered. Such serious conditions as high blood pressure and
heart diseases have established links with stress. Since we cannot remove stress
from our lives (it would be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to find
ways to deal with it.
篇4:初二寒假英语日记带翻译
全文共 335 字
+ 加入清单I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep going’.
今天,我做了一个决定,有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样,我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在,我要说一句:加油!
篇5:暑假收获初二作文
全文共 564 字
+ 加入清单在暑假里,我有许多收获,学会了跳舞、写,还会打羽毛球了。其中最使我感到自豪的是我学会了写。我的学习经过先不告诉你,你想知道就自己往下看吧!
暑假刚放假,妈妈就在“快乐天地”给我报了名。去学的前一天,我心里非常害怕,因为我担心写不好,老师会批评我。到了学校,我看见许多同学都坐在教室里呢!还有一位老师正准备上课。刚开始我站在门外不敢进来,老师看到了我,亲切地拉着我的手说:“进来吧,不要害怕。”我鼓起勇气来到了教室里。
开始讲课了,我们第一次写的是看图,大屏幕上面出示四幅图,老师叫我们根据图写一个故事,老师首先引导我们观察,再把这四幅图的大概意思明白了一遍。老师还告诉我们要写时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果,这六大要素。我开始写了,首先是写开头,交代时间和地点。写完开头就详细地写经过。可是写到结尾时,我不知道该怎么写,就急得抓耳挠腮。突然,我灵机一动,想起该怎么写了,对!就写这个故事使我懂得的道理。
我写完了,拿去给老师检查,老师一看,爽快地说:“你真棒!过关了!”当时我都不敢相信自己的耳朵,高兴得都差点跳起来了。
一天天过去了,我一直都认真地学写,写得越来越好!暑假结束,班举行比赛,我还得了一等奖呢!
在这个暑假,妈妈给我报了班,使我的水平提高了,我也在利用别人玩的时间学习了新本领,我非常高兴,这个暑假过得真有意义!
篇6:高三年级关于我的暑假英语作文
全文共 2153 字
+ 加入清单In this summer holiday, I didnt attend the summer camp, also did not go out to travel, just stay at home to write my summer homework assignments.
Although it is summer vacation homework, but also do not have a flavor. I take out in writing homework first, open the book, a pen as in the copybook written up a row, particularly serious, because I know if there is no written, there will be a punishment comes. Time soon, after I have finished writing the a, pick it up in the sunlight, she look a look, really good. Followed by a second, I want to write this one looks very little, but it is not good to write to write. After I finish writing the content, a look, there are a lot of grid can collapse, had no choice but to rewrite it again.
Word is a kind of very good leisure, it can let a person quiet short-tempered, also can let a persons word more beautiful, I feel in writing is quite good. Sometimes feel the word hate, tired, why others dont tired, because their word by heart. Summer vacation, I at home day and others to play outside, I envy, but I think the word "game" is also a kind of happy, I like the word!
My English is not very good, so mom and dad give me to quote a cram school during the summer vacation, think of them so hard for me, I also want to more to learn English well.
Mathematics but I didnt make me tired, but mother busy every day during the summer vacation, was going to work and to teach me learn math,
Sometimes learn to learn to feel it is quite interesting.
Alas, I this summer vacation in addition to practice calligraphy, maths and English...... of all the other things didnt do, I live in learning all day.
在这个暑假里,我既没有参加夏令营,也没有出去旅行,我只呆在家里写暑假作业。
虽然是写暑假作业,但也别有一番风味。我先拿出练字的作业,翻开书本,一笔一划的照着字帖临写起来,特别认真,因为我知道如果没有写好,会有惩罚降临的。时间很快,转眼我已经写完一张了,拿起来在阳光的照射下,自己瞧一瞧,真是不错呀。紧接着我要写第二张了,这一张看起来内容很少,不过写起来就不一定好写。我把这些内容写完之后,一看还有很多格子,简直崩溃了,没办法只能再重新写一遍。
练字其实是一种很好的休闲方式,它既可以让一个毛躁的人安静,也可以让一个人的字更加漂亮,我就觉得练字挺好。有时是觉得练字很讨厌,很烦,为什么别人不厌倦呢,因为他们用心练字了。暑假里,我在家练字,别人在外玩,我很羡慕,可是我认为练字也是一种愉快的“游戏”,我喜欢练字!
我的英语不是很好,因此爸爸妈妈在暑假期间给我报了一个补习班,想到他们那么努力的为我,我也要更加学好英语才可以。
数学可是我的老大难,令我厌倦不已,但是在暑假里妈妈每天忙忙碌碌,又要上班又要教我学数学,
有时自己学着学着感觉还挺有意思的。
唉,我这个暑假除了练字、学数学和学英语······其他的事情都没做,我整天都活在学习当中。
篇7:初二年级优秀英语作文myfamily
全文共 1496 字
+ 加入清单Home is a sweet, warm place, I always believe that each student has a happy family, home and have a naughty, I have a very love my dad, my amiable grandma and my grandpa white-haired...
I, this year 12 years old, is a naughty girl, love sports, love volleyball become lively, love life, love sports...
My father this year 38 years old, is a bus driver, he was above the square face, a head of jet-black hair, from time to time under dark, thick eyebrows with a pair of glasses...
My grandmother is 64 years old this year, is an amiable man to man, grandma in the dark, dark hair, dont know how many gray hair, she has small eyes, she laughed eyes like two thin small crescent, there are many wrinkles on her forehead...
My grandfather is 66 years old this year, he has a sparse hair, sparse hair has many wrinkles, under the forehead with white eyebrows, he has small eyes, a high nose bridge, his hands wrinkles but also couldnt be much more. Grandpa is very kind to me, I also very love my grandpa.
This is my family, it is a warm home, a warm home, it is a full of happy, full of happiness.
家,是一个温馨又温暖的地方,我始终相信每一位同学都有一个幸福的家庭,家里有一个调皮的我,有一个很爱我的老爸,有我和蔼可亲的奶奶,还有我那白发苍苍的爷爷……
我,今年12岁了,是一个淘气的女孩子,是热爱运动,热爱排球使自己变得活泼起来,爱生活,更爱体育……
我的爸爸今年38岁了,是一名公交车司机,他方形的脸的上方,一头乌黑发亮的短发,又黑又浓的眉毛下时不时带着一副眼镜……
我的奶奶今年64岁了,是一个对人和蔼可亲的人,奶奶黑黑的头发上,不知道有多少根白发,她有着那小小的眼睛,她笑起来时的眼睛就好像两个细细的小小的月牙,她的额头上有许多条皱纹……
我的爷爷今年66岁了,他有着稀少的头发,稀少的头发下有着许多道皱纹,额头下有着白白的眉毛,他有着小小的眼睛,有着高高的鼻梁,他那双手上的皱纹更是多得不能再多。爷爷对我很好,我也很爱我的爷爷。
这就是我的家庭,这是一个温馨的家,是一个温暖的家,更是一个充满快乐的,充满幸福的家。
篇8:暑假英语日记
全文共 215 字
+ 加入清单20XX年X月X日 晴
Today was the vacation last day, I reorganized own went to school with the thing in the home, this vacation might be really quick, made me extremely not to give up, tomorrow also will be the new semester.
篇9:初二英语作文HelenKeller
全文共 737 字
+ 加入清单Helen Keller lived in the USA. She was a great woman.
Helen was blind and deaf. She couldnt see anything or hear anything. Her parents are very sad.
A teacher helped Helen study words. Helen studied them very hard when she grew up. She went to college. In Helen Kellers life, she wrote fourteen books and her first book is "My Life". The book "If you give me three days light" is very famous.
She has some words: Be of good cheer. Do not think of todays failures, but of the success that may come tomorrow. You have set yourself a difficult task, but you will succeed if you persevere; and you will find joy in overcoming obstacles.
Though she was blind and deaf, she found a way to see and hear.
[初二英语作文Helen Keller
篇10:暑假计划英语作文
全文共 1786 字
+ 加入清单The summer vacation has come quietly to us, as the saying goes, "the plan of the year is in the spring, the day is in the morning". It is the beginning of success that tells us to book early. So I made the following summer plans.
First, I will continue my studies during the summer vacation. Are you listening to the word "learning"? Do you want to ask me if I have to study for a vacation? No, your thoughts are wrong. Its a holiday, but we have to learn, too, because we can use the summer vacation to make up for the knowledge that we didnt have a solid knowledge before. Isnt that great?
I will not only learn to help my mother do some of the housework as I can, because my mother often does housework when I am going to school. So I want to help my mother do housework. For example: sweeping, sweeping every three days. The ground is delayed every four days. Get a table and chair every day. Let mom rest.
Not only do I have to study, I do housework, but I also go outside to experience the present society. So I spent the rest of my life doing social practice, work-study programs. Money can be used to buy school supplies
Have you seen my plans for the summer vacation? Move on and make a plan for the summer as well as I do. I believe that by working hard, we will succeed, and we will add a lot of luster to our life! Come on, summer vacation! Im ready!
暑假已经悄悄地向我们走来了,俗话说得好“一年之计在于春,一天之计在于晨”。就是告诉我们及早订好计划是成功的开始。所以我制定了下面的暑假计划。
首先我在暑假里要继续学习。你们是不是听了“学习”这两个字觉得很奇怪呢?是不是想问我放假了还要学习,不是让我们玩的吗?不,你们的想法是错误的。随然是放假,但是我们也要学习呀,因为可以利用暑假来补回我们以前学得不够扎实的知识,这不是很好吗?
我不单要学习还要帮妈妈干一些力所能及的家务活,因为妈妈在我要上学的时候,经常做家务。所以我要帮妈妈做家务。例如:扫地,每隔三天扫一次。拖地,每隔四天拖一次。每天抹一次桌椅。让妈妈休息。
我不仅要学习,做家务,还要去外面体验一下现在的社会。所以我利用剩余时间去做社会实践,勤工俭学。赚来的钱可以用来买学习用品
你们看了我的“暑假的计划”是不是心动了呢?心动不如行动,赶快和我一样也制订一个暑假计划吧。我相信通过努力就一定能成功,就能给我们的生活增添许多光彩!暑假,你快来吧!我准备好了!
篇11:我如何度过暑假英语作文
全文共 643 字
+ 加入清单How I spent my summer vacation?
The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
篇12:初二英语作文赏析
全文共 3869 字
+ 加入清单A Day to Remember
It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.
We got there at nine oclock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.
The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. They also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.
Now let me say something about Beijing Opera. Beijing Opera is very popular in China. It has a history of more than 200 years. During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera. In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing. Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration. In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes. The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera. Now is the performance. I hope you will like it.
初二英语作文:Why Do We Study English?
English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. It is spoken by nearly three hundred million people: in England, the United States, Australia, Canada and many other countries. It is one of the working languages at international meetings and is more used than the others. It is said that 60 percent of the worlds radio broadcasts and 70 percent of the worlds mail are in English. Millions of books and magazines are written in English, too. English is really a bridge to knowledge. With the help of English we can learn modern science and technology faster and better form the developed countries. In this way we can serve our country better.
初二英语作文:Spring Festival
The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival, it usually comes in February. There is a name for each year. It may be called the year of the dog or the year of the monkey. And this year is the year of the cock.
Before the Now Years Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a general cleaning. On the last day of the old year, there is a big family dinner. All members of the family try to be present at the meal. On the first day of the new year, people go to visit their relatives and friends. As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like.
People often have a good time during the Festival.
初二英语作文:How Cities Began
Do you know how cities began?
Long ago, the world had only a few thousand people. These people moved from place to place, hunting animals for food. No one knows how or when these people learned about growing food. But when they did, their lives changed. They began to live near one another. And so the first villages grew. Many people came to work in the villages. The villages grew very big. From there the cities began. joozone.com
When machines came along, life in the villages changed again. Factories were built. More and more people lived near the factories. The cities grew very big.
初二英语作文:Early Rising
Early rising benefits us in many ways.
First, it helps to keep us fit. We all need fresh air. But air is never so fresh as early in the morning. Besides, by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.
Second, it can help us in our studies. In the morning we can learn more quickly.
Third, it can enable us to plan our work for the day. We cannot work well without a proper plan. Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work..
So we say that those who always get up late should make great effort to get up early.
篇13:英语作文我的暑假计划
全文共 887 字
+ 加入清单期末考试完了,暑假就要来了。为了让暑假过得有意义,我有以下打算。
1、锻炼身体。参加学校的暑假足球队,每天坚持和爸爸打羽毛球、网球、篮球、排球,骑自行车,让身体更棒、更强壮。
2、我要把老师布置的作业做完,复习已学过的课本知识。
3、如果我考试考得好,作为奖励,爸爸妈妈带我去北京玩,看看美丽的长城、故宫、天安门牙、中华世纪坛、水立方等景点,拍很多很多的照片给同学分享。
这就是我的暑假计划。
The final exam is over and the summer vacation is coming. In order to make the summer holiday meaningful, I have the following plans.
1, exercise. At the school summer football team, I insisted on playing badminton, tennis, basketball, volleyball and cycling with my father every day to make my body better and stronger.
I will finish the homework assigned by the teacher and review the knowledge of the textbook.
3, if I was the exam, as a bonus, mom and dad took me to Beijing to play, see the beauty of the Great Wall, the imperial palace, tianan front teeth, the China millennium monument, water cube and other attractions, for students to share a lot of photos.
This is my summer vacation plan.
篇14:初二寒假英语日记
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+ 加入清单My Chinese New Year for this year was fantastic!
I went to Hai Nan with my parents during the Chinese New Year and visited my relatives over there. The weather over there was beautiful. It was so much warmer than my city. We stayed in a hotel and we spent a lot of time on the beaches. My parents also took me for a ride round the island. It was so much fun and I wish it was longer.
篇15:有关初三暑假英语作文
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+ 加入清单There are a great number of subjects in school. Different subjects teach students different knowledge. They’re both very useful. However, different students like different subjects.As for girls, most girls like art Chinese. Maybe girls think these subjects are very interesting very easy. But most girls usually hate some subjects like math, chemistry or physics. Girls have a really hard time with these subjects they found out the worst report was from these subjects’ teachers.And what about boys? Of course, most boys’ heart are in math, chemistry physics. So boys always get good grades in these subjects. But most boys dislike Chinese or art. Perhaps they think Chinese art are really boring.Boys girls both like English. So English is the most popular subject in 2010.At last, what’s your favorite subject? You could write a letter to tell us.
篇16:不要让你的字典的沉睡初二英语作文
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+ 加入清单Do you have a dictionary?I think almost everyone has one.But, how often do you use a dictionary? I dont believe that everyone makes good use of it.You may come across lots of new words in your study and you will ask someone for the answer.But if you have a dictionary, please dont let it sleep. You should make better use of it.
Dictionaries are very useful and important to us.They are like silent teachers.When you have a question,you can turn to them.They will give you the right answer.They are also like a trusted friend. You can learn a lot from them.
Dont be lazy.Dont let your dictionary sleep any more.
你有字典吗?我认为几乎每个人都有。但是,你经常使用字典吗?我不认为每个人都会很好的利用它。在学习中遇到了许多新单词时,你会问别人请教答案。但是如果你有一本字典,请不要让它睡眠。你应该好好利用它。
字典是非常有用和重要的。他们像无声的老师。当你有问题,你可以问他们。他们会给你正确的答案。他们也像一个值得信赖的朋友。你可以从他们身上学到很多。
不要偷懒。不要再让你的词典沉睡了。
篇17:动物初二水平英语Myfavourateanimal
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+ 加入清单My favourate animal is tiger,because tiger is very strong and powerful,it is the king of the forest.Tiger looks handsome as well, the skin has two corlors:yellow and black,and they are both my favourate colors.
I like tiger,and the year 201X is just the Chinese tiger year.I hope all the people will keep healthy,just like tiger.
篇18:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
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+ 加入清单要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
篇19:英语暑假生活作文
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+ 加入清单My summer vacation can be said to be happy, sunny, festive, during the summer vacation I went to my dear hometown, my old home green plant more than here hundreds of times, can say green factory.
I have a lot of interesting things in my hometown, my sister, my brother, they stick to me every day. I go fishing with them, and I drop two big fish. Hide and seek, should be dont know where to hide is good, we will open the window, climbed to the second floor of the stairs from the first floor window, because cant cant sitting room the walking up the stairs to the second floor. We also go swimming in the river, and so on. At the time of my hometown, we do not have at home, very comfortable, you can talk with your permanent no see relatives, finally met, met I couldnt say is what feeling, but also in nanjing when I have a lot of words want to grandma and grandpa said, each other can meet do not know what to say.
In fast left that night when I sleep with grandparents together, grandmother told me a lot of words, every time when I am in summer vacation and winter vacation, I will be back to my hometown once, every time go to grandma said: every other week must make a call back, talk with me.
This time, I got on the car and looked at grandma at a distance. Grandma smiled at me and I went away.
篇20:暑假作文英语4年级
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+ 加入清单Summer Vacation
I enjoy summer vacation very much.
Because summer vacation is the longest vacation of the year.
We have more than fifty days to rest.
Though it is very hot, we can either go to swim or stay in the air-conditioned room .
In the evening, I like to go shopping with my friends.
We can eat many things in summer, such as ice creams, watermelons, grapes, and so on.
In summer, I always go on a trip with my parents.
Its a good chance for us to visit some nice interesting places.