我的暑假计划英语作文带翻译初一（优秀20篇）

One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!".

一个晴朗的午后，当我开心地骑车回家时，我听到（有人喊）“救命！救命！”。

I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home.

我（赶紧）骑到河边，发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我（马上）跳进水里，游向男孩，并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他（刚刚）是在河边试着抓鱼，（后来），一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址，并送他回家。

"Thank you very much!" The boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.

一当我要离开他们家的时候，那个男孩的父母说：“非常谢谢你！”尽管在那个下午，我回家晚了，但我还是很开心的。

The summer holiday is coming. It is a great time to do something interesting.

In my class,talking there are it. many Some classmates about students are going to travel with their parents. Some are going to play ball game with their friends.

As for me, I want to read some books when the beginning of the holiday. I’ll go to the nearly library to borrow some interesting books like the Necklace of raindrops and the Lolita. In fact ，here are lots of surprise waiting for you. Of course，if you want to miss it. What fling time in the library!

I think it will be a perfect holiday.

[暑假计划英语作文范本

Happy Class Break

The bell rang and the class was over. Many classmates jumped up from the seat. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom while talking and laughing. Two girls were singing a song on their seats. Some boys were telling a joke loudly. They were laughing together. I was chatting with some classmates when Li Hong came to me. She joined us. Our class break was often full of fun and laughter. We often have a pleasant break

[初一英语作文：快乐课间

The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said

it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it

is cloudy, and friends are about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the

rain it can not play. after afternoon the rain stopped to help my mother to buy

food supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.

今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是一点点的雨，很cool.The天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友约打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中它不能玩。下午雨停后要帮妈妈买菜的超市。通常它不是今天心情不好。

Pressure seems to be a natural part in our daily life in this competitive

society. Like it or not there is always pressure of one kind or another. And it

seems there is hardly any way to avoid it or get rid of it. Moreover, as the

pace of modern life continues to quicken, pressure seems to be on the increase

all the time.

Different people have different ideas about pressure. Some hold that

pressure is something very vicious. If there is too much of it, it will lead to

the decline of ones physical and mental health. So they are always complaining

about it or trying to flee from it. They think, only relaxation, the opposite of

pressure, is what we should desire. On the other hand, others argue that

pressure is not as bad as is often thought. In fact a certain amount of pressure

is essential to provide motivation and meaning to our life. It is pressure that

propels our progress and contributes to our success.

Personally, Im in favor of the latter idea. I believe that a little

pressure is certainly an important incentive in life. It is only when the

pressure gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and bad health.

Since it is impossible to avoid pressure, certainly there is no sense trying to

do so or complaining about it.

暑假像可口的甜甜圈，等着我们去吃他。随着暑假的日子一天一天的变少，我也等得着急了，直到有一天，爸爸妈妈终于肯带我去玩，我高兴的活蹦乱跳，像河里的鱼一样自由自在，还没去就先想像有多快乐。

那天早上，我和全家人一起坐游览车，我们事先准备一些零食和饮料，等我们饿了就可以吃了，而且坐游览车时，司机伯伯就请我们吃麦当劳，我们还一边唱歌，一边跳舞，妈妈的同事还给我抱他们家养的小狗，那只小狗的毛摸起来很舒服呢！

跳舞跳得太累了，妈妈叫我休息一下，结果哥哥要上厕所，司机伯伯停到休息站，我们还买那里的牛舌饼，有各种不同的口味，每种都好好吃喔！结果我们到了做锣鼓的地方参观，那里有木头做的荡秋千和桥。

那里有漂亮的草地，我和哥哥玩黑白猜，我们规定：假如输了，就要当乌龟，结果哥哥输了，我就取笑他，哥哥就很用力的打我，我觉得他是个暴力狂，以后一定没有人嫁给他。我还跟哥哥玩踩影子游戏，看谁踩得比较多，我们玩得好刺激，玩得两个人的脸都快变红了，结果我就擦擦汗，再喝一杯水，冰冰凉凉的，就睡着了。

这一次跟全家去旅行很好玩，因为这是我暑假里最特别的旅行喔！让我睡觉都笑咪咪的。

Sat. , Feb. 6 Fine later cloudy

A book exhibition

Dropped in at National Library to see the National Book Exhibition which will close today. Suprised at the fact that so many kinds of books are published in our country. Thought the childrens books with many pages of colorful illustrations were made very nicely. Bought a copy of the Chinese version of English and American Short Stories at a 20 per cent discount. Am going to read this through in this good season for reading.

书展

信步走到图书馆看即将在今天结束的全国书籍。惊奇的是发现我们国家竟然出版了这么多种的书籍。我觉得富有多页彩色插图的儿童书籍印刷的相当精美。我买了一本打八折的《英美短篇小说》中文版。我要在这读书的好季节里将它读完。

Someone said “we are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a

book, whose pages are infinite”. I don’t know who wrote these words, but I’ve

always liked them as a reminder that the future can be anything we want it to

be. We are all in the position of the farmers. If we plant a good seed ,we reap

a good harvest. If we plant nothing at all, we harvest nothing at all.

一些人说“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”我不知道谁写了这些话，但是我一直很喜欢它，因为它提醒了我，我们能够创造我们想要的未来。我们都是农夫。如果我们播下好的种子，我们将会丰收。如果我们的种子很差，有很多草籽，收割的将是无用的庄稼。如果我们什么也不播种，什么收获也没有。

We are young. “How to spend the youth?” It is a meaningful question. To

answer it, first I have to ask “what do you understand by the word youth?” Youth

is not a time of life, it’s a state of mind. It’s not a matter of rosy cheeks,

red lips or supple knees. It’s the matter of the will. It’s the freshness of the

deep spring of life.

我们是年轻的。“怎样度过青春?”这是个有意义的问题。为了去回答它，我首先要问“从‘青春’这个词中你能理解到什么?”青春不是人生的一个时期，而是精神的一种状态。青春不是桃面、丹唇、柔膝，而是深沉的意志，。青春是生命的深泉在涌流。

A poet said “To see a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild

flower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour. Several

days ago, I had a chance to listen to a lecture. I learnt a lot there. I’d like

to share it with all of you. Let’s show our right palms. We can see three lines

that show how our love.career and life is. I have a short line of life. What

about yours? I wondered whether we could see our future in this way. Well, let’s

make a fist. Where is our future? Where is our love, career, and life? Tell

me.Yeah, it is in our hands. It is held in ourselves.

一位诗人说“从一粒沙看世界，从一朵花看天堂，把无限放在你的手掌，永恒在一刹那里收藏”。几天前，我有了一个听讲座的机会，从中我学到了很多东西。现在，我想把这些与大家共享。让我们伸出右手，我们可以看到手掌中的展示我们的爱，事业和生活的三条线。我在生活方面这条线很短，那你们的呢?我想知道我们是否可以用这种办法去看我们的未来。好的，让我们一起握拳。我们的未来在哪儿?我们的爱、事业和生活在哪儿?告诉我!是的，它们就在我们的手中。它们被我们自己掌握着。

We all want the future to be better than the past. But the future can go

better itself. Don’t cry because it is over, smile because it happened. From the

past, we’ve learnt that the life is tough, but we are tougher. We’ve learnt that

we can’t choose how we feel, but we can choose what about it. Failure doesn’t

mean you don’t have it, it does mean you should do it in a different way.

Failure doesn’t mean you should give up, it does mean you must try harder.

我们所有人都希望未来能比过去更美好，但是未来能自己变得更好。不要因为结束而哭泣，微笑吧，为你的曾经拥有。从过去来看，生活是艰苦的，但我们是更坚强。我们知道我们不能选择感觉，但是我们能选择和它相关的东西。失败并不意味着你不拥有成功，它只意味着你应该用另一种方式去做这件事。失败并不意味着你应该放弃，只意味着你应该更加努力。

As what I said at the beginning, “we are reading the first verse of the

first chapter of a book, whose pages are infinite”. The past has gone. Nothing

we do will change it. But the future is in front of us. Believe that what we

give to the world, the world will give to us. And from today on, let’s be the

owners of ourselves, and speak out “We are the world, we are the future.”

正如我在前面所说的“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”过去的已经过去，无论我们无力改变，但是未来却在我们前方。相信“我们给了世界什么，世界也将给我们”。并且从今天起，让我们一起做我们自己的主人，一起大声说出“世界是我们的，未来是我们的。”

我想我们大家在暑假中玩的都很愉快吧，但愉快归愉快，我们还要有自己的暑假计划。让我和你们一起分享一下我某一个方面的暑假计划，又是怎样完成它的吧。

大家一定知道我们的身体是最重要的，作息时间一定要安排合理，游泳、过马路、饮食都要注意。

当然体育运动也少不了，踢毽子，跑步都要做。甚至最简单的跑步也能锻炼身体。我每天都在做这些。

我们的眼睛也很重要，玩电脑看电视，也不能超过一个小时，看书写字时都要注意坐姿，爱护和保护视力。这些我都有了很大的进步。

其实这些我每天都在做，我的收获可不只这一点，我还编了一首诗呢。这就是我收获，你的呢。

The annual Chinese New Year came in 2008, the Spring Festival has come exceptionally busy, it is accompanied by the festive sound of firecrackers, sky in full bloom, and colorful fireworks came. The ancients as "firecrackers of the year" to commemorate Chinese New Year. The return of fireworks and firecrackers, so that the ancient city of Beijing is full of a thick smell of years, sound of firecrackers brings us endless joy, filled with a wonderful interesting traditional festivals.

As a girl, I do not like to put those little on the "crackling" sound of Mei Wan and loud firecrackers. I like those colorful light emitted after, four run around fireworks. There is a called channeling smallpox, a carefully ed in the ground began to release, and later on the secure enough to put in the hand grip, lit "squeak" is heard, a group with a small ball of fire flew up into the sky, screaming, "pit" Suddenly the sky on a flower in full bloom out, quite exciting. My favorite is called Setaria fireworks in one hand and a lit continuously emitted after the bright, constantly changing colors of the fireworks. My hands turned, arms on the emergence of two very nice Ring of Fire; my arms open, 4 running, I became a "Firebird." I have a another one to lying, I cried, ran, happy with ... ...

Chinese New Year fireworks is a traditional custom. Legend of the so-called "year" is an evil beast, people set fire to bamboo, the sound of bamboo bursting scared off "year", "years" away is the Chinese New Year in. I like fireworks, it made me able to live a traditional feature of the year. I think as long as we pay attention to safety, stressing civilization, this tradition will be able to have a wonderful New Year.

Last weekend ,I went to Beijing I love there .The summer Places is so beautiful and we went to Wangfujing .Though there are lots of people and the things are too expensive ,many people buy things in there.I bought a pair of beautiful shoes in there.I love Beijing .There are too beautiful!

Early this morning,my mother and i went for a walk in the park.we were

having great fun talking when suddenly a wallet,lying in the path, came into my

vision.i picked it up and opened it,trying to find any possible information

about the owner of the wallet.In great luck,we found a card with a telephone

number on it.so, we decided to call the owner.surprisingly,its right the owner

of the wallet.we agreed the meeting place and time for giving back his wallet on

the phone.finally,we returned the wallet right to the owner.he thanked us a lot

,and we feel pleased to.

what a nice day!

今天一大早，我和妈妈去散步在公园玩。正当我们玩得很高兴讲时，突然一个钱包在路上进入我的视野。我把它捡起来打开它，看能否找到任何关于钱包失主的信息。很运气，我们发现了一张卡片与住一个电话号码，我们决定通知失主。令人惊讶的是，这是正是失主的钱包。在电话里，我们约定了见面的地点和时间归还他的钱包。他很感谢我们，我们也感觉很开心。

The trees were naked during autumn.秋天里树木都是光秃秃的。

The rain was killing the last days of summer,you had been killing my last breath of love, since a long time ago.秋雨,带走了夏天的最后一丝余热,而你，也将我全部的爱都带走了。

The leaves turn yellow in autumn.秋天时叶子变黄。

Rain in the North seems peculiar, compared with that of the South, more appealing，and better-behaved.北方的秋雨，也似乎比南方的下得奇，下得有味，下得更象样。

My favourite season is autumn. 我最喜欢的季节是秋天.

In autumn,the weather is very dry and cool. 秋天的时候，天气很干燥和凉爽。

I think the most beautiful season in a year is autumn. 我觉得一年中最美丽的季节是秋天。

I think autumn is the most beautiful season in a year.我认为秋天是一年中最美的季节。

I like to collect russet autumn leaves.我喜欢收集秋天赤褐色的叶子。

I like autumn very much. 我很喜欢秋天。

I feel a little cool in the autumnal night.在秋天的晚上，我感到一丝凉意。

关于秋天的英语句子 Do you like autumn

I do not know when, you fall softly on my red sweater, you put a flower as I have it 不知什么时候，你轻轻地落在我鲜红的毛衣上，你把我也当成一朵花了吗

Golden butterfly you! Whom you are dancing in it Not smile flowers, grasses lost their luster. Oh, I see, you are in the garden that little daisy eyes. 金色的蝴蝶呀!你是在为谁而翩翩起舞呢花儿没有了笑容，青草失去了光泽。哦，我明白了，你是在为园子里那眨着眼睛的小雏菊。

Golden butterflies, you are willing to pay my friend Come! Flew into my books, accompanied by bright, I walked into the classroom金色的蝴蝶，你愿意和我交朋友吗来吧!飞进我的课本，伴着我走进明亮的教室

Fall to, chrysanthemum opened. There are red, yellow, with purple, and white, very beautiful! 秋天到了，菊花开了。有红的，有黄的，有紫的，还有白的，美丽极了!

Do you like autumn 你喜欢秋天吗?

Autumn, the ripe fruit. the pears, the bright red apples, is the sparkling grape. A cool breeze blowing, fruit child nodded, emitting a scent attractive children. 秋天到了，果子熟了。黄澄澄的是梨，红通通的是苹果，亮晶晶的是葡萄。一阵凉风吹来，果儿点头，散发出诱人的香味儿。

Wake up to drink ,people feel the middle of the night, moving wind over a lotus leaf pond

夜半酒醒人不觉，满池荷叶动秋风

Life is so si-mp-le, such as the autumn, such as fallen leaves.

生命如此简单，如秋，如落叶。

In autumn, some emotions, such as fallen leaves as they decline, some have lingering shadow, only in the virtual work is indistinct in the familiar names. It withered on the decline,ashes are also good, regardleof the feelings of like how the leaves like a tree in full bloom and how to decline. I was standing on the flow of time, laughing, even if the sky flying leaves, eventually covering the lives of desolation.

秋中，有些感情便如落叶般凋零了，有些影子却挥之不去，只在网络虚缈中才有熟悉的名字。凋零就凋零吧，倦缩也好，成灰亦好，管它感情如一树红叶般怎样盛开，怎样凋零。我站在川流不息的时间里，谈笑风生，任凭满天的叶子飞舞，最终覆盖苍凉的生命。

Strong technical skills enhance a beautiful scene that pares traditional and contemporized architectural styles.很强的技巧加强了景色的美感，在传统和现代化了的建筑风格之间的对比。

That is an oil painting of a landscape in spring.那是一幅描绘秋天景色的油画。

The travelers were beguiled by the beauty of the landscapes.游客们被景色的美丽所陶醉。

"This extraordinary natural preserve shelters a primeval forest, the continent’s largest population of brown bears, sizeable packs of wolves, and a host of other creatures which have all but disappeared elsewhere. 专门捕捉大自然美丽景色的导演高史林百格将会透过节目带大家融入这处仙境，享受大自然的真善美。

[高考英语作文的翻译

I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends during the summer vacation.

We went there by bus. It took us about two hours to get there. It was hot and

windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of

foreigners,we went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the

Great Wall. They were very surprised when they saw that our English were

exellent and we knew a lot about the Great Walls history. They thanked us a lot

and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.

我和我的朋友在夏令营期间去了长城，我们是乘汽车去的，经过两个小时才到的那儿。那天天气很热，风也很大，那里有很多很多的人，当我们看到一群外国人的时候，我们上去和他们攀谈。我们告诉他们很多关于长城的故事，他们非常惊讶我们的英语是如此的好，而且我们还懂那么多关于长城的故事。他们非常感谢我们，而我们也度过了愉快的一天。我们为自己是一名中国人而感到很自豪。

Hi!大家好！现在给你们介绍我的朋友。我有很多朋友。学语文时，我有个朋友叫玛丽。学数学时，我有个朋友叫杰克。学英语时，我也有个好朋友。她是我最好的朋友，我非常喜欢她。她每天帮我学习英语，教我怎样读英语，怎样写英语，怎样说英语……如果我有问题，我就问她，她会认真回答我。有时她教我一些句子，这些句子通常告诉我怎样做个好学生。有时她告诉我关于世界的知识。现在你知道谁是我最好的朋友了吗？对了，她就是《英语辅导报》。

Hi,everyone! I introduce my friend to you now. I have a lot of friends. In my Chinese lesson, I have a friend called Mary. In my maths lesson, I have a friend called Jack. In my English lesson, I have a good friend,too. She is my best friend. I like her very much. She helps me study English every day. She tells me how to read English, how to write English, how to speak English If I have some questions, I will ask her and she will answer me carefully.

Sometimes,I will ask her and she will answer me carefully. Sometimes,she tells me something about the world. Now, do you know who my best friend is? Right,she is English Coaching Paper!

我有一个朋友。她叫刘畅：她是一个快乐的女孩，今年12岁。

我们在同二个班。

刘畅高而且漂亮。她有一双黑色的大眼睛和一张小嘴。她看起来像一个可爱的娃娃。

她最喜欢蓝色。她的衣服大部分是蓝色的。她说：“海和天是蓝色的，它们很干净”。她很喜欢游泳，而且游得很好。

她一周有许多事情要做。从星期一到星期五她必须去上学。

周末，她帮妈妈做家务。她是个好女孩。

刘畅有许多朋友。我是其中之一，我们在学校互相帮助。她帮我做功课，我教她打篮球。我们课下经常在一起做游戏。

我喜欢我的朋友。

I have a friend. Her name is Liu Chang. She is a happy girl. She is twelve years old. We are in the same class.

Liu Chang is tall and beautiful. She has two big black eyes and a small mouth. She looks like a lovely doll.

She likes blue best. Most of her clothes are blue. She says, “The sea and the sky are blue. They are very clean. ” She likes swimming,and she can swim very well.

She has many things to do in a week. From Monday to Friday she must go to school. At weekends she helps her mother with the housework. She is a good girl.

Liu Chang has many friends. Im one of them,and we help each other at school. She helps me with my lessons and I help her with playing basketball. We often play games together after class.

I like my friend.

[英语作文翻译我的好朋友

I met a girl called Sue on the Intemet. We are of the same age.she is in France. She is in No.1 Middle School, Class 7, and Grade 9. She can speak English and French. And we talked happily with each other. We can write down what we feel and what we think and then forward to each other. We also try to write in English. She once lived in with her parents, so she can speak native English.

In this way, we are getting closer and closer. And furthermore both of our English has improved quickly and greatly. Her favorite sport is soccer. Her favorite subject is math. Her favorite color is red. Her favorite food is sandwiches. Her favorite movie is Home alone. She has a brother. Her brother’s name is Tom.

She is a happy girl. How nice it is to have a "pen pal”

I internet English that can give me a golden future.Because English is the most pupolar language in the world.These is no country in the world use English. Although English is no our mother language , but I learn hard in many ways.Some subjects are taught in English and some goods wrote in English. Nowdays, English is the more important.So I like it and learn it hard.

我迷恋英文，因为它可以给我一个好的未来，因为英文是世界上最主流的语言。世界上没有一个国家是不用英语的，虽然英语不是我的母语，不过我会尽我最大的努力通过各种方式来学习英语。现在很多科目都用英语教，然后很多商品也变成英文字了，所以我觉得英语很重要，我也要好好学习它，尽我最大的努力。

[《我的爱好》英语作文及翻译

Nowadays, most people, especially those who live in the country, want to

move to the city. But is the city life perfect? Every coin has two sides.

现在很多人，特别是那些生活在农村的人，都想去都市生活。但是，都市生活真的很好吗?每面硬币都有两面，每件事都有利有弊。

Its true that things seem to be more convenient in some ways such as

finding jobs, transportation service, etc. Also places for relaxing like parks

and hotels are attractive.

事实上，有些事似乎(因为在城市生活而)变得更方便，比如找工作、交通运输服务等等。有些供人放松的地方也非常吸引人，比如公园和旅馆。

But we have to say something bad, too. The environment is awful because the

population is too large and too much rubbish make the air unfresh.We have to pay

lots of money on our life including the bad things above!

但是，我们也必须说些弊端。因为众多的人口和大量的垃圾污染了空气，所以(城市)环境是很可怕的。我们必须花费非常多的钱在(改善)生活方面，其中便包括之前提到的那些不好的事。

In my opinion, we must take a correct attitude to it. No matter where we

are, we can creat our own sky if we try our best!

在我看来，我们必须采取正确的态度去面对都市生活。无论我们在哪儿，我们都可以尽自己所能，创造出一片属于自己的天空!

My Foreign Teacher

Hello! I’m He Baoyi. We have three new teachers this term. But my favourite

teacher is English teacher. Who is she? Yes, she’s Linda.

Do you want to know her? Linda is very beautiful. Look! She has a round

face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. Her

hair is very long. She is not tall and not short. She likes wearing a white

dress. She looks like an angle. Linda works very hard every day. And she is

strict to us. But she is kind. Her class is so much fun. Really? Yes. In class,

she is our good teacher. After class, she is our good friend.

Her favourite food is tofu. It ’s very very healthy. She is not only good

at pingpong, but also good at singing. She likes talking with us. We all like

her.

你好!我他Baoyi啦。这学期我们有三位新老师。但是我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。她是谁?是的,自己是琳达。

你想认识她吗?琳达非常漂亮。看!她有一张圆圆的脸，两只黑色的小眼睛，一个直鼻梁，一个大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。她的头发很长。她个子不高，个子不矮。她喜欢穿白色的衣服。她看起来像个天使。琳达每天工作很努力。她对我们很严格。但她是善良的。她的课很有趣。真的吗?是的。在课堂上，她是我们的好老师。下课后，她是我们的好朋友。

她最喜欢的食物是豆腐。它非常健康。她不仅擅长乒乓球，而且擅长唱歌。她喜欢和我们谈话。我们都喜欢她。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

“人一定要有计划,你也该定个计划了…”妈妈的声音从我耳边响起。哎，不论是暑假还是寒假，不论是上学期还是下学期的开端，妈妈都会让我制定一份详细到再也不能详细的计划。虽说做计划并不是什么坏事，但以我妈口中“详细”这一词，是个普通人都不会让她觉得百分百的满意。

于是我花了七七四十九分钟，终于制定出了一份计划：

首先，早上七点钟起来听英语，现在我的闹钟可以说是英语了。因为只要我妈一放录音，我的神经就会马上受到刺激，整个身子就快没有一点儿睡意了，一下子就蹦了起来。接着呢，就是一些琐碎的事情。像刷牙洗脸等等，一律7:30之前做完。

拜托了，拜托了，要知道英语还在放啊，不论我躲到家中的哪一个角落，都听得到。接下来，吃早餐的时间，我妈也要利用起来。你别小看这吃早餐的几分钟，这个时间可是用来让我了解时事新闻的，我可以边听妈妈给我说的最近发生的重大新闻，边吃早餐。

干完了这些事，我就要准备“行囊”了，可别以为我要去旅游什么的，其实我是要去上数学课!更别以为我上完2小时的数学课就万事大吉了，我还要再上2小时的英语课。上完课回家就12:30了，我只有20分钟吃饭时间，10分钟休息时间，班小时睡午觉。

先别急着把嘴巴张得那么大，我的事情还多着呢。13:30-14:30，我要把早上的数学作业完成，14:30-15:30，要把早上的英语作业完成，包括阅读，背诵等等。接着，用1小时写完一篇日记或作文，再用1个小时写完一套数学的奥数综合练习题!!哎，要知道，我可在数学方面不太好。

还有呢，还有呢。用30分钟高效率地练琴，这周要练《水边的爱迪丽娜》了。妈妈说，练琴可以当做休息，我可不觉得，休息是可以慢慢弹的，可是我却不能，必须集中高度注意力去练。现在总算可以休息15分钟了，不过一休息完就要吃晚饭了。当然了，我晚上还有一堂英语课，从7点一直上到9点!回到家，我洗漱完毕后……我知道你们以为是去睡觉，才不是呢。我要用20-30分钟自由阅读。虽说自由阅读不是什么苦差，但忙碌了一天的我更想立刻躺在床上舒舒服服地美美的睡上一觉。

好在我终于可以睡觉了，结束了这忙碌而又紧张的一天。可是，我还不能松掉这一口气。因为---我明天依旧如此啊，计划可是没变的。算了，既然改变不了事实，那就改变自己的心态吧!