一个好老师英语作文（汇集20篇）

In my eyes, Mr Li is really a good teacher, He teaches us math. At first,I was afraid of math, and thought it was boring. It was Mr Li who changed my mind. In his math class, he helped us try to find out the answers to the questions in different ways. Little by little. I found math was getting interesting. Now Im good at it.

Mr Li is not only a teacher but also a good friend of ours. He often chats with us and tells jokes. We all like him and his math class.

在我的眼里，李老师真是一位好老师，他教我们数学。起初我很害怕数学，觉得很无聊。是李老师改变了我的想法。在他的数学课上，他帮助我们试着用不同的方式去找出问题的答案。小的。我发现数学很有趣。现在我很好。

李老师不仅是老师，而且是我们的好朋友。他经常和我们聊天，讲笑话。我们都喜欢他和他的数学课。

I think she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She is exciting, amazing and sexy. When we first met I felt her erotic emanation. Now I know that she is extremely intelligent too. She is 25 years old, and she has a 3-year-old son. So she is a mother. A sharp mother. She has a piercing in her tongue and two tattoos, one on her stomach (an Indian man’s face) and one on her back (it is non-figurative). I like them very much. If you meet her, look at her face; it is so sweet. She has a birthmark on the tip of her nose. Sometimes I call her ”spotted nose.” It is so sweet. Really. Like a little cat. But her eyes. They are blue like the sky in spring or the ocean in a stormy night. They are so maddening. Well, let’s talk about her mouth. When she is smiling she has two little face-lines by the side of her lips. (dimples) She is the most beautiful mother in the world and she is a real muse, a muse which every poet wants, lovely, wild, tender, sweet, and deep with secrets and love. A real woman.

董老师是我的英语家教。董老师大概25岁了，她的头发是棕色的，很卷，眼睛大大的，亮亮的，脸上有几个小痘痘，长得很漂亮，人见人爱。董老师总是笑着对我们说话，不是傻笑，也不是冷笑，是一种温暖的笑容。董老师的声音甜甜的，让人感觉很舒服，真可谓听在“耳”里，暖在“心”里。记得暑假快结束的那会儿，董老师说要带我们去大禾寿司店吃寿司，我们很高兴。但是那天中午妈妈不在，董老师就对阿姨说：“我们要去吃寿司了，大概下午三点钟才能回来。”交待完毕，就领我们去吃寿司，我们从没吃过寿司，一进寿司店，坐下，端起一盘寿司就吃，（那个寿司店的寿司是摆在一个个盘子里的，盘子放在一个转盘上，盘子的颜色不一样，一种颜色表示多少钱，最后结账的时候就看你的盘子的颜色）董老师见我们狼吞虎咽的，就笑着说：“没人跟你抢！慢点吃，别呛着了！”董老师还告诉我们她自己最喜欢吃的口味——玉米沙拉和蟹籽，问我们要不要，我说：“要。”老师就让厨师给我们了一份，自己也有一份。那天，我们都很开心。这学期，董老师不再教我们了，我们都很不高兴，总想让董老师再来教我们。可是妈妈看这样我们都没什么东西学，又叫了一个老师来教我们英语。今天早上，我正在学习英语，董老师来了，我们就把那位老师给“抛弃”了，都争着给我们盼星星盼月亮盼来的“客人”——董老师拿拖鞋呢！董老师，你真是一个人见人爱的好老师！

[我的英语家教董老师英语作文

Our new English teacher, Mrss chang, is about twenty-two years old. She is easygong, and treats us as her friends. She helps the boys and girls read and write, we all like her. She is busy with her work all the day, because she loves teaching children. Both in and after class she is very kind to us.She often tells us how to study well.She often to urge student,good!very good!

Do like Miss chang? Oh, you like!

[英语作文你喜欢我的新英语老师吗

Sunday， June 13th

My Chinese teacher， Mr Zhou， is in his thirties. He looks young for his age. He is tall and strong， and he likes sports very much.

He likes singing and often teaches us songs in our spare time. He also tell us jokes in the class. So we all like to have his classes. Whenever we are in trouble， we will ask him for help， for we treat him as our friend.

This is our Chinese teacher. We all love him.

译文参考：《我的语文老师》

我的语文老师周老师今年30多岁了，他显得很年轻。他又高又壮，非常喜欢运动。

他喜欢唱歌，在我们的课余时间，他经常教我们唱歌曲。课上他也给我们讲笑话，因此我们都喜欢上他的课。每当我们遇到麻烦时，总是找他寻求帮助，因为我们把他视为朋友。

这就是我们的语文老师，我们都很喜欢他。

假如我当英语小老师，我要充分利这短短的40分钟，培养同学们学习英语的兴趣，让他们以后能自觉学习。

假如我当英语小老师，我首先要请教我的老师，家长，并去书店或者上网查资料。

假如我当英语小老师，我要认真备课，把我知道的英语知识全部教给同学。

假如我当英语小老师，我不会让同学们感到累。同学们可以随便怎么坐，只要认真听课就行。

假如我当英语小老师，我不会让同学们觉得上课没有意思。我会组织一些有意义的活动，让同学们积极参加。

假如我当英语小老师，我会买一些小东西作为奖品奖励给认真的同学。

初一第一学期刚开学，教室前门就进来一位中等个子，披散着一头又直又长头发的女教师。上下一打量，25岁左右，个子1米55左右。她一进门就用英文介绍了一下自己！我立刻就意识到她就是我们的英语老师！她在介绍过程中说了这么一句我很荣幸能和你们成为师生，不过我对你们在学习英语这一方面提一个要求：我希望你们能认真听好每一节英语课，做好该做的笔记，能做到课前预习课后复习。这句话着实把我们全班都镇住了。第一印象：严格！还没正式上课就已经如此严格要求我们听课，那以后上课不就谁也不敢往下想

不久后发现，她不仅是我们班的英语老师，她也是隔壁七班的班主任！我有点害怕了，不知做班主任的她会不会更凶、更严格？

可是时间久了却发现，实际上并不是我们以为的那样。我们都觉得她是那么的亲切、容易交流

她上课时，会弄得全班同学都哈哈大笑，因为她会时不时用上几句现代用语。虽然这些都是我们经常说，但是从一个英语老师嘴里说出来，难免会有些别扭。我们之间的距离感一下子就消失了，反而，亲切感一下子就增进了！比如她反复强调的某些东西时，都强调了至少10遍了就会成了她的口头禅！这还没什么，到后来演变成100遍、N遍；最后递进到N+1遍。她在我心目中的我的第一好印象——亲切、滑稽、是个好老师，便彻底被抹杀掉了。

平时课堂上，她经常让我们听写、考试、玩游戏等等不像班主任那样，一进来准没好事——不停在传授一些人生大道理给我们。语文老师抱着书不是听写，就是背书。她每次都会说一些连班主任都不太懂的人生哲理的、感人的文章给我们听，有时还会说笑话，即使是不好笑，她自己也会乐成一团。

有一天下午的英语课，打了上课铃之后班里仍是像炸了锅一样热闹：吵架的、打架的、嬉笑的、K歌的，应有尽有，无所不有。我正奇怪英语老师为什么还没来？突然间发觉班上顿时鸦雀无声，我好奇的望望门口，发现英语老师就站立在教室门口。一同来的，还有班主任。班主任宣布了放学后全班站到6点，再吵就站到7点的圣旨后生气地朝办公室走去。我们在下面后悔已经来不及了，因为我们班主任从来都是说话算数的。同时也深感不服，我根本没吵到，凭什么要我陪他们留到6点，我越想越不服气，最后还是决定暂时不追究她，先认真上课再说。

我刚回过神来，忽然发现英语老师已经站在我的身边。我立刻打起十二分精神！过了一会儿，她说：其实今天的事我也有责任。我来晚了。可是大家真的很乱，我一路走过来，别的班都很安静地上课、自习，最吵最乱就是你们班了那好吧，我也要为这件事负点责任，我也陪你们站，大家谁都别坐了，好吗？她严肃的表情上找不到任何的虚伪迹象，我们都为之感动，就差流泪了。结果那个晚上，她真的一边管七班的纪律一边陪我们罚站，不停地在我们班和七班两个班之间走来走去，因为我们班和七班的教室刚好捏在一起！那天晚上她一直都没坐下过。我们看见她如此辛苦的陪着我们，谁也没好意思偷懒，就凭她的那番话和行为，我愿意站十个晚上来奉还。

教过我的英语老师甚至是所有老师中，她的确是教得最好且最能拉近与学生之间距离的一个。翻开我们的英语作业本，你会发现，每个人的本上每天都会有一个大大的评分：A+！

你们都是我的学生，你们在我心目中都没有优差之分，我对待我的每一个学生都是一视同仁的。只要你肯学，我都会卖力地教育你们！——这就是她的教学方式。

老师，你不仅是我见过最好的英语老师，也是我们的良师益友。我相信，在我初中三年内，有您与我同行，我的英语成绩一定会更上一层楼！

Dear Mr. Hong

happy new year!

I really miss you for so many days off. Are you happy in the new year? I

have a good time this winter holiday. It snows, snowmen, snowmen, visitors,

books and toys. Of course, I dont forget to do homework and read books. Mr.

Hong, in the past year, I have done a lot of things wrong, so you have to worry.

In the new semester, I will work hard to get rid of the habit of doing small

movements and be an obedient good child. Finally, I wish you good health!

Salute!

我们的英语老师可凶了。她脸上没有一丝笑容，只会鼓起嘴巴生气。你看她的嘴角，总是鼓鼓的，随时都有一股气要发泄出来。

周四有英语课。上课前，吴老师提前来到我们教室。我们就当没看见，照旧玩自己的游戏。

一上课，吴老师站上讲台，我们就感觉大事不妙，赶紧坐得端端正正的。吴老师开始给我们上课，一切都好好的。

可是，有几个男生趁吴老师在黑板上写板书，没时间注意他们，开始说小话。谁知，吴老师耳朵特别灵。她听到同学说话，立刻火冒三丈，大吼大叫。我们都吓了一跳，那几个同学却不闭嘴。吴老师彻底被惹恼了，罚他们抄写英语单词。

啊，那么多，他们肯定会抄死去。这下，他们老实了，吴老师就好好给我们上课。

教师节那天，我们很多同学送花给吴老师。吴老师一边不停地接过我们的花，一边不停地说谢谢。这个时候，她的高兴藏不住了，露出了一丝丝笑容。嗯，笑起来的吴老师比生气时的吴老师漂亮多了。如果她可以哈哈大笑，一定会更漂亮。

吴老师，我们好好学习，你每天笑给我们看，好吗？

Dear sir，

I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English. You are one of the best teachers who I have ever met. There are many good points that I learn from you.

During these days in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it really helps me a lot。 Firstly， you let me know what the west thinking pattern is -straight thinking pattern. As an English learner, it is important for me to understand the difference between them. There is no denying the fact that this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. Whats more， Im glad to be your student， and I am very happy to learn the course under your guidance. English is an important tool, through which we can share our experience with the world. I treasure the chance of learning English， and I enjoy the happiness from your course.

The last not the least, please forgive those mistakes I have made which may upset you. What I have learned from you will help me pass the coming examinations and also be useful for my further education in abroad. It is not only a progress of learning, but also a cultivation of my ability.

May everything go well around you.

Your student,

Li ling

Dear teacher,

Time flies, sun and moon, now I have been in the sixth grade, looking back at those who have given us care and care of the teacher, they are still as kind. [] Teacher, you are a hard gardener, tirelessly cultivating the flowers of the motherland; Teacher, you are the disseminator of knowledge, to pass new knowledge to us; Teacher, you are like chalk, sacrifice themselves, to leave us knowledge, you are how great ah!

Teacher, without your careful cultivation, I could not have become a man of knowledge. You gave me the future. You want your students to be "better than blue" and have a bright future. Teacher, you regardless of their own fatigue to give us the day class, in the evening to prepare lesson plans, correcting homework, the rest of the time is very few. We students are ashamed of ourselves. As the saying goes, the profession of a teacher lies in "burning oneself, illuminating others", which is the so called contribution of every teacher to students.

Teacher, you are like an umbrella, in our need to you, you are always fearless to stand in front of us, for us shelter; When the weather is cold, you tell us to wrap up warmly so that we wont catch cold. When we cant do a certain problem, you will patiently explain to us, until we understand; When we need comfort, you always use the kind tone to comfort us?

Teacher, you are like the star in my heart. Winter to spring, although I have grown up, but the star is still in my heart shining bright, purify my heart, help me to find the secret of confidence and success, help me to find the truth.

Ah, teacher! You were our second parent, and For those few weeks, I felt your kindness and your comfort. The teachers love, like a warm current, always warm my heart, the teachers love, like a blazing flame to illuminate my learning future, I will never forget.

advance

Salute!

Student:

Dear Miss Zhu,

亲爱的周老师，

How time flies! It has been a few years since I left high school, but I still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s not only because you taught me knowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I have really benefitted a lot from you. So I would like to express my great thanks to you, and share my life in college with you.

时间飞逝!我高中毕业已经几年了，但我仍然把你记在我的心里，因为你是我心目中最好的老师。这不仅是因为你教与我知识，而且你还教我如何学习。从你身上我真的获益匪浅。所以我想向你表达我的感谢，并与你分享我的大学生活。

Now I’m studying in Hunan First Normal College, which is Chairman Mao’s former school. I major in English, because I find it so fun and interesting. As far as I’m concerned, our English Department is the best department in our college. The teachers in our department are knowledgeable, experienced, and warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a good atmosphere to study. When I have difficulties in study, I always ask my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Through their help, I have made great progress in my English study.

我现在在湖南第一师范学校学习，这是主席之前呆过的学校。我的专业是英语，因为我觉得它很有趣。我觉得我们英语系是我校最好的学部。我们系的老师知识渊博，经验丰富，热心肠。我的同学们也很和蔼，友好，乐于助人。因此，我拥有一个很好的学习氛围。当我在学习上遇到困难时，我总是向我的老师寻求帮助或与同学讨论。在他们的帮助下，我在英语学习上取得了很大的进步。

College life is much different from high school life. In college, we should acquire knowledge as well as improve our integrated abilities. There are a lot of English classes for us to learn, such as Basic English, Oral English, Listening, Reading, Writing, Translation, Grammar, English Literature, and so on. I enjoy these classes very much. Except English, we have many other subjects to learn. Life seems so busy here but it’s so fruitful for me.

大学生活与高中生活有很大的不同。在大学，我们要获取知识也要提高我们的综合能力。我们要上很多的英语课，比如，基础英语，英语口语，听力阅读，写作，翻译，语法，英语文学等。我非常喜欢这些课。除英语外，我们还要学习很多其他科目。在这里生活是如此的忙碌，但这对我来说是如此丰硕的收获。

After class, I usually go to the English Corner. There I can practice my oral English by talking with foreigners or chatting with my schoolmates. Now, I’m able to communicate with foreigners well. Sometimes I also take part in some social activities. For instance, last weekend I attended an interesting play. As it was my first performance, I felt a little nervous at the beginning. But when I appeared on the stage, I made every audience laugh happily. I was so proud of myself at that moment, because this was my first achievement.

下课后，我经常去英语角。在那里我可以通过与外国人或我的同学聊天来练习我的英语口语。现在我可以很好的和外国人交流了。有时候我也可以参加一些社交活动。例如，上周我参加了一个有趣的表演。因为是我第一次表演，所以一开始的时候我觉得有点紧张。但当我出现在舞台上时，我让每一个观众都开心的笑了。在那一刻，我为我自己感到骄傲，因为这是我的第一个收获。

What about your present life? I hope to hear from you soon.

你目前生活怎么样呢?希望很快能收到你的回信。

At last, I hope everything goes well with you. Please give my best regards to your family.

最后，我希望你一切顺利。请代我向你的家人问好。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.

Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we’re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

How time flies! It has been a few years since I left high school, but I

still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s

not only because you taught me knowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I

have really benefitted a lot from you. So I would like to express my great

thanks to you, and share my life in college with you.

Now I’m studying in Hunan First Normal College, which is Chairman Mao’s

former school. I major in English, because I find it so fun and interesting. As

far as I’m concerned, our English Department is the best department in our

college. The teachers in our department are knowledgeable, experienced, and

warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a

good atmosphere to study. When I have difficulties in study, I always ask my

teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Through their help, I have made

great progress in my English study.

College life is much different ...

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我们在这个学期，换了一名英语老师，想知道他是怎么样的吗？那就请看下文吧！

英语老师我们通常都叫他Ms谭，她长着一头乌黑的长头发，有着一双炯炯有神的眼睛，喜欢穿红色或粉红色的裙子和一双黑色的高跟鞋。

Ms谭对我们非常的严格，只要我们上课玩玩具或者开小差，她都会直接过来用手扭住你的脸，大声的骂你。

比如：有一次我们班的李佳乐上课在玩手指，Ms谭看到了，马上向李佳乐走过去，用力的扭着李佳乐的脸，大声的说“你在干什么。”李佳乐假装不知道的说“听课。”Ms谭听了，吼李佳乐说“你没玩手指吗？还在这假装不知道。”李佳乐听了，面如土灰的低下头，可是Ms谭还是不停手，大声的骂李佳乐说“上课不听讲，还在玩手指，还装作不知道，你越来越不像样了……”

Ms谭虽然有时候非常的严格，但是她有时候还是非常的和蔼的，有的时候，我们听写很好或者考试很好她会给一节课给我们到外面玩。

比如：有一次，我们全班听写全班的平均分在92.25分左右，是全年级第一，Ms谭非常高兴，走进教室说“这次听写我们全班平均分在92.25这节课给我们活动。

我喜爱我们的英语老师：Ms谭

[我的英语老师作文例文

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

朱宣翰

我的英语老师长得可漂亮了！

她那张尖尖的瓜子脸上有着一头黄黑相间的长发，每当上课的时候，老师都扎着一个马尾辫，看起来可真是精神抖擞啊！老师脸上最美丽的，当然是她浓黑眉毛下的那一双水汪汪的大眼睛，时不时会发出智慧的光芒，真是让人羡慕啊！她的身材特别苗条，穿上大红裙，配上银光闪闪的高跟鞋，简直是位美丽而温柔的仙女！

不过温柔的仙女有时也会为一些调皮的同学而大发雷霆，当她发火时，大家都屏住呼吸，连那小小的针掉下来，都可以听见。

英语老师的兴趣爱好非常广泛，有时会做一些美丽的小手工，有时会组织一些好玩的游戏给我们一起玩，时而还会哼哼唱唱……

英语老师的课真有趣啊！她总会想出许多好玩的游戏让我们在玩中学，学中玩。让我印象最深的就是“介绍木偶”，同学们按照老师的要求做了小木偶，只见大家制作的木偶各种各样，让人看得眼花缭乱。大家争着抢着要展示自己的木偶，一个个小手举得老高老高，老师看到我坐得端端正正的，奖励我和同桌第一个上台表演，我们带着激动而又喜悦的心情介绍了我们的小木偶。细心的英语老师，还会一边鼓励我们讲得很精彩，一边用手机给我们记录着，回到家，再看着英语老师给我们录的小片段，真让人回味无穷，英语老师的课堂可真有魅力啊！

这就是我的仙女老师，你们喜欢她吗？

1)结构2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。 三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏 知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考)。 我们管这样的文章叫做HamburgerWriting(汉堡写作)

顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下：

敬爱的英语老师：

您好!

我是您的学生李换双

自从初一开始，我就与您直接接触。记得刚开始我就是一名普通的

学生，后来因为我的英语成绩出众，您指定我担任英语课代表，我很高兴的接受了。从此以后，对英语除了喜爱，还有责任在此。实时的英语测验，我都得到了不错的成绩，自己心里非常高兴。但是随着时间的流逝，我的骄傲油然而生，慢慢的成绩开始下滑，有一次课堂上出题，我只得到了及格分。您给我的批语，是不理想。我看到三个大红字，在我的作业本上，心里悔恨极了。真是骄傲使人落后，耐心的听了您的讲解，改正错误，继续努力学习。

还有一次，学校食堂停电了，没有饭吃。我就去了您的家里，您拿出来自己家里的方便面和烧饼。硬要塞给我，我接受了，回去跟同学分享了，到处炫耀是您给我的，我可高兴了。如今，我就要参加中考了，马上就毕业了，马上就要离开您了。心里对您充满了感激，却又不知道该如何表达。唯一自己能做的就是，以后好好学习，找到好的工作，经常回来看望您。

最后祝愿您工作顺利，身体健康!

李换双

Mr. Cao

Hello!

Today, I would like to recommend a book for you. The name of this book is

"primary school students reading aid Library - folk culture". This book is

about the origin and customs of Chinese festivals. The reason why I like this

book is that when it introduces the calendar of festivals, it always tells a

story about the situation at that time. And each article is extremely vivid,

from which we can not only learn the origin of many customs, but also understand

some unknown history and legend.

My favorite article is called "Chongyang climbing, drinking with dogwood.".

This article is about the origin of the Double Ninth Festival. It is said that

there was a pestilence devil in Zhuangnan of the Han Dynasty, which was

extremely ferocious, and would come out to harm people every September 9. There

is a man named Huanjing in Zhuangnan county. Because Huanjings parents died in

the hands of the pestilence devil, Huanjing wanted to kill the pestilence devil

to avenge his parents. On this day, Huan Jing packed up and went to practice

magic arts with the famous immortal Fei Changfang, hoping to kill the evil

devil. After a long journey, Huan Jing finally found the immortal Fei Changfang.

However, things have not been smooth. After Huan Jing explained his intention,

Fei Changfang refused Huan Jings request. So Huan Jing knelt outside Fei

Changfang for two days and two nights. At last, Fei Changfang was moved by Huan

Jings sincerity and accepted him as an apprentice and taught him various

skills. On the ninth day of September the next year, Fei Changfang reckoned that

the pestilence would enter the southern city again and harm people. He ordered

Huan Jing to give him some dogwood leaves and chrysanthemum wine and send him

back to zhuangnang city. When Huan Jing arrived in Zhuangnan, he took the people

to the mountain, and let everyone drink chrysanthemum wine, and filled the

mountain with Cornus. After that, Huan Jing stood in front of the mountain with

a knife. After a while, the pestilence came as expected. It wanted to go up the

mountain and eat people. Huan Jing stopped him, so they fought together. The

smell of Cornus and dogwood is not stable for a few rounds. He raised a knife

from the mountain. The plague devil was removed, and the people in Nancheng

finally lived a comfortable life. Since then, in order to commemorate September

9, people have designated September 9 as the Double Ninth Festival. On this day,

people will climb high with their families, fill the mountains with Cornus and

drink chrysanthemum wine to pray for themselves and their families. This is the

origin of the Double Ninth Festival on September 9.

I like this legend best, because I think Huanjings persistence and bravery

are worth learning.

Finally, I hope you can enjoy this story. When you are free, you may as

well read this book with me.

wish

good health!

Your student: Guo Xugang

新学期开始了，学校里发生了很大的变化。我们的教学楼换了，我们的英语老师也换成了现在的何老师。何老师今年二十四岁，她有一双明亮的大眼睛，高高的鼻梁，一头乌黑的秀发，显得格外的美丽。

老师在课上，非常地认真，每一次都是先抓住重点，再详细的解释给大家听，解释完了之后，她会出一些同学们经常出错的题目教我们做，她还会让我们现场进行口语对话的环节，一个人问，另一个人回答。

有一次，老师叫我起来和她进行一次表示请求的对话，就是问一下可不可以做什么事情，另一方直接回答就可以了。很简单，只要听清楚老师说的是什么意思，根据意思来提问或回答就可以了。我就是这样做的，老师还说我做得非常好，这是我感觉到了学习英语也不是很困难，除了这些之外，她还教我们许多背单词的技巧和背诵课文的方法，我非常喜欢她，我很高兴有何老师这样好的人被我一起度过这一年，我相信在他的细心指导下，我的英语成绩一定会有更大的进步！

[以我的新英语老师为题的作文

My English teacher is a young lady. Her name is Kate. She looks beautiful.

我的英语老师是一位年轻的女士。她的名字叫凯特，看上去很漂亮。

Her English is very good. She teaches us many things, and she likes to introduce foreign countries to us. She works very hard, because she likes teaching.

她的英语很好，教了我们很多东西，而且她喜欢向我们介绍外国的国家。她工作很努力，因为她喜欢教书。

I like her spoken English. She has good pronunciation and writing. All of my classmates like her.

我很喜欢她的口语，她的发音和书写都很好。所有的同学都喜欢她。