我的暑假计划英语作文参考 作文初一（经典20篇）

Looking at the Great Wall, it is the brightest star in human history. In the earth, we can see the continuous Great Wall winding in the mountains; In the long history of history, we can see the time of the Great Wall. In the eyes of the Chinese, the Great Wall is a soldier who defends his country. In the eyes of foreigners, the Great Wall is a mysterious Oriental dragon.

Looking at the Great Wall, we seem to be back in the qin dynasty. Under the whip swinging of qin shi huang, the men in the harsh voice yelling, the suffering of the Chinese civil shoulder load lines feldspar, mixed with his own blood, with hard work, with a patriotic heart, with a fresh life, of the built in the history of the Great Wall, and the Great Wall of flesh and blood can stand in the east of the world.

Looking at the Great Wall, we are back in history. In those wars, for many years, entrusted with Great Wall stand tall in the above the earth, rivers, and between the throat region, time and time again to resist the enemys invasion, defender of the sacred territory of the motherland. And you see, the stone on the strong wall of the towering sky, which did not shed the blood of our soldiers? What part of the world is not weeping about the soldiers hearts? Where did not the white bones of the intruders be buried in the stony and wild patches of land outside the wall? Which one does not show the marks of the soldiers battle with the enemy? Then the Great Wall became angry, and it hurt, and leaped up, and, at the top of his head, the iron walled giant of the wall, said to the world, "whoever dares to infringe it will kill one."

Look at the Great Wall, in the wind we see the love of the blazing love - the state - heart!

随着三年级暑假的结束，四年级已悄悄的向我们走来，我们又迎来了一个新的学期，新的学期应该有新的打算，所以我给自己准备了一份新学期的计划，请大家看一看，给我提一提意见和建议!

一、学习方面：

1、做好每一课的预习。语文先是读熟课文，认会一、二类字，不会的字查字典认会记会。然后结合课后问题和《英才教程》掌握文章的重点内容和中心思想；数学是先读几遍课文，提出问题，掌握本节的重点内容，做后面的习题；英语是先听录音，跟着读几遍，不会的单词查字典认会记会，然后翻译课文。

2、上课认真听讲，积极回答问题，做好笔记；

3、认真独立完成家庭作业，把平时的错题积累到错题本上，每次考试前复习错题集；

4、把每单元的考试成绩记录下来，以此鼓励自己取得新的提高；

5、平时多读一些课外书，多写博客，每周写2-3篇，提高自己的阅读和写作水平；

6、平时有时间多练习一些数学题，巩固数学知识；

7、每天早上听英语录音三遍；每课的英语单词、句子读熟、背会。

8、作好每科每单元的复习总结。

二、其它方面：

1、活动：多参加一些有意义的学校活动和课外活动，比如：博客大赛、换客活动、学校体育、演出等。

2、劳动：干一些力所能及的劳动，做到自己的事情自己做。

3、钢琴：每天晚上自己主动练习钢琴50分钟，明年争取考过六级。

四年级是学习非常关键的一年，我要好好把握四年级的学习时间，好好学习，一定要取得比三年级更好的成绩。让自己变得更棒!

盼望已久的暑假马上就要到了，我的心情好激动啊，因为我可以和妈妈一起去旅游了，这也是我暑假里最重要的一项活动。我已经和妈妈去过好多地方了，像北京、青岛、大连、厦门、福州，武夷山、井冈山、庐山……妈妈说：“行万里路，读万卷书”，旅游不仅能够放松心情，更重要的是能开阔视野，增长见识。今年暑假当然是要去上海看世博会，妈妈说还要去杭州、绍兴等上海周边地区。啊，我好期待这次“上海之行”啊！

暑假里，我还打算让爸爸教我练毛笔字，妈妈也要跟我一起练，这样我就更有动力啦。到时候我要跟妈妈比赛，看谁写得好。我知道做什么事都“贵在坚持”。据说，王羲之为了练好字，每天都要花费很多时间，他家后院里有个池塘，叫他涮笔涮得水都变黑了。他就是我的榜样。

我特别喜欢唱歌，喜欢听音乐。妈妈说：“音乐可以陶冶情操，让人变得更聪明。”上幼儿园的时候，我还学过半年电子琴呢。当时我特别感兴趣，会弹好几首曲子呢。可惜，现在已经忘得差不多了。所以，今年暑假我要“重操旧业”。妈妈已经答应给我买一个电子琴，将来还要给我买钢琴呢。

当然，暑假作业是每天都要写的，因为我是一名学生，应该把学习放在首位。上面写的，都是在不影响写暑假作业的前提下做的事情。我相信，今年的暑假一定会过得既充实又有意义的。

This time, the main destination is Australia, a country which is in the Southern Hemisphere. I want to feel the opposite climate, see never-seen scenery and experience the land and its people and live a quite new life for 7 days.

So I have chosen a travel agent to help me with my journey. They offer Qantas flights the entire journey with free meals and three-star or four-star hotels for accommodation.

The first day:

I will take the Qantas Airways non-stop international flight (QF106) to Sydney, the capital of South Wales and Australia’s oldest largest city and port, to star the trip to Australia, overnight on board.

The second day:

Upon arrival, I will take a bus to visit St. Mary’s Church, Hyde Park and other interests. Then, I will visit the world-famous, Australia’s most beautiful building----the Sydney Opera House. There will be professionals conducting a detailed explanation in the House. By the

evening, I can visit the well-known Darling Harbor; enjoy the Sydney Bridge and a western-style dinner on board.

The third day:

After the breakfast, I will start from Sydney to Wollongong by bus. We drive to the Sea Cliff Bridge, the most beautiful and special part along the road. I can visit in accordance with steep cliffs and built up to 655 meters of overhead bridges to appreciate the beauty of the Pacific. Then I’d go to the cleanest beach of the New South Wales State; visit the first brewery in Wollongong and have lunch there. In the afternoon, I plan to go to Flagstaff Hill and enjoy the quiet and beautiful environment. At last, return to the urban area.

The forth day:

I will take a flight to Cairns, a city which is rounded by palm trees. It’s a tourist city, where there are magnificent mountains, dense rain forests. The forests are the world’s oldest, largest tropical rain forest. I can novel amphibious vehicles traveling around the forests, experience exotic enjoyment. What’s more, I can watch the indigenous people’s wonderful dance performance.

The fifth day:

Take a bus to the Great Barrier Reef Marine Terminal and take a ship to the world-famous Reef. Located off the coast of the north-eastern Australia, it is the world’s largest coral island, which stretches over 2000km, including thousands of coral reefs and shoals, known as “the eighth wonder of the world”. I would watch the colorful sea view, taking a submarine. And I have enough time to enjoy a wide range of water sports. (Including a buffet lunch on the island)

The sixth day:

I would fly to the capital of Queensland----Brisbane. Then I’ll take a visit to the South Bank Parkland where the 1988 world exposition had been held. Go to the City Hall located in the King George

Square. It is the central symbol of Brisbane. Then I will drive to the Gold Coast, which is known as a paradise for tourists. After arrival, I’d visit the Fool Terminal.

The seventh day (the last day):

After breakfast, I will go to the Warner Movie World, which is a theme park of an area of 1.68 square kilometers. I can enjoy the

roller coaster and see a different film production process, great

effects and super performance and a lot of cartoon characters. Then I will go to a farm to pay a visit. There I can experience a real farm life and get close to the koala, kangaroo and take photos with the cute creatures. (I need to pay for the lunch.) At last, I will take the QF505 to Sydney and the QF105 back to Hangzhou.

It is my plan to have a journey abroad. It will cost about 12000 RMB for the agency and I need another sum of money to support my self-consumption and other costs. Now I am excited about my upcoming travel to the very place that I have longed for for a long long time. I can not wait to go there .With my well-prepared plan, I firmly believe that I will have a wonderful journey in Australia.

[7天出国旅行计划英语作文

个学期我的作文和英语水平有明显提高，计算和语文有一些提高，书写和数学则有些腿步，副科中体育还需努力，其他则比较好。

下个学期我准备继续提高作文和英语，做到更好，努力提高计算和语文，将书写和数学提高到原来的水平，副科中，提高体育，保持其他科目的成绩。以后争取每次都能英语100分，数学95分以上，语文90分以上。我是这样提高并争取的：

作文：多读课外书，积累好词好句，多写作文，写完作文后不能放那儿不管，应该修改五次以上。英语:上课认真听讲，多背英语单词、句型，会在生活中应用单词和句型，多做练习、听力，老师教的知识应及时复习、预习。计算：多练计算题，应对学过的计算知识了如指掌。语文：上课认真听讲，多看课文，会默生词，多做练习题，多做阅读题，多练拼音，发音准确。书写：多练字，用心写字。数学：多巩固知识，上课认真听讲，对书上讲述的内容了解，会应用，还可以适当做些提高。体育：应多锻炼身体，抽时间复习老师教的动作。其他科目：应认真听讲，抽时间复习书本上的内容。

我相信只要我照着计划执行，我的目标一定会实现。

[写初一新学期计划的作文

首先，应该先纠正自己的学习态度。“态度决定一切！”心态是取得成功的一个非常关键的环节，拥有好的心态，就会拥有好的成绩！

在这学期里，要加强自己不擅长的科目，在语文上，除了把课文中的内容、知识掌握好以外，还应多读一些课外书，如名人名着等。还要再想些办法提高自己的阅读、写作能力，不能只想课内不观课外了。数学，不能只明白课本上的习题应怎么做就够了，如果要学好它，就必须在课外再花一些时间来钻研和多做一些试题等。

上课仔细听讲，弄懂每一个问题，作业即使完成，追求质量和速度，回家做好预、复习工作。在空余期间多看一本好书，适当做些娱乐。做到“少在电脑前一会儿，多看一两本好书”，扩展知识综合面，提高阅读以及协作能力。早晚多听读外语，多积累一些单词，提高英语各方面的水平。从良好的基础上向着更高的目标出发。

“好记性不如烂笔头。”记好每一次的笔记，认真对待每一次的口头作业，只有基础扎实了，才可以累计更多。

最后，也是最关键的一点，就是要科学安排时间，没有合理的安排，再好的计划也会付之东流。所以，在新学期里，最要学会的就是要合理安排学习、娱乐、休息的时间，要把每一点一滴宝贵的时间都抓紧。

新学期，新打算，也为新的目标努力。我也一定会为每一天而做奋斗，做好自己的本分工作，认真学习，天天向上，不管怎样，我都要好好学习，做好每一天的作业任务，还要增强体质。

[初一下的开学计划作文

This is a most significant summer vacation, this is one of the most fulfilling summer vacation.

In this summer vacation. I paid a hard work, harvest the fruits of happiness. Become the I grew up in an indelible memory.

This summer holiday, I insist to get up at six every morning azuoweng.

Time is long, the body also becomes stronger. And, in this period of time, I I always fell more troubling problem, that is the problem to ride a bike.

Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival. It usually es in September or October .On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes. It is said "Hou Yi" missed his wife，so he made mooncakes. It looks like the moon.

There are many kinds of mooncakes. They are small round cakes with meat,nuts or something sweet inside . eating mooncakes has been our custom. Families stay outside in the open air eat a big dinner and mooncakes. The most important thing is looking at the moon,On that day,the moon kooks brighter and rounder. We call this moon the full moon.

On that day,families get together,so we call this day getting together. This is Mid-autumn Day. I love it very much. Because on that day I can eat mooncakes. And my brother es back home. He works outside all year. Only that day and the Spring Festival. He es back. So that day I am especially happy. On that day my family gets together.

中秋节是一个中国节日，通常是九月或十月。当天我们经常吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。据说“后羿”想念他的妻子，所以他做了月饼。它看起来像月亮。

有各种各样的月饼。它们是小圆饼，里面有肉，坚果或者里面的甜点。吃月饼是我们的习惯。家人在户外露天吃大餐和月饼。最重要的是看着月亮，在那一天，月亮变得越来越明亮。我们称这个月亮为满月。

在那一天，家庭聚在一起，所以我们称这一天聚在一起。这是中秋节。我非常喜欢。因为那天我可以吃月饼。而且我的兄弟回家了。他全年都在外面工作只有那一天和春节。他回来了。所以那天我特别开心。那天我的家人聚在一起。

Summer can be very hot in southern taibei where the temperature usually goes up to 32"C or more. Because of the heat it is a trying experience to go to school or do anything else in a place that is not air-conditioned. Also because of this I stay at home most of the time during the summer vacation and only occasionally go to the beach to plunge myself into the cool water as a way to keep my body less sticky. Actually I like swimming and think nothing is more refreshing than a swim. In the summer vacation that has just ended I went swimming many times with my classmates and we all had a good time. This summer vacation, however, was not spent entirely in seeking fun. As a second-year senior student I had to prepare myself for the college entrance examinations that were only a year away. In other words, I must find time to study, too. So I divided my time between work and play during the summer vacation and derived much benefit from this arrangement.

I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.

People help with each other, it is the greatest thing in the world. We should give our love to people who need help.

It was a nice day. A blind person Ben walked with a walking stick. When he was walking down the street, a little boy tumbled because of banana skin. Maybe there is something wrong with his legs. So the little boy cried sat on the floor. Although Ben can’t see anything, he walked to the little boy. Ben wanted to help the boy. So Ben said,” Don’t cry. Let me help you.” The little boy was very happy. Ben carried the little boy on the back. The little boy help Ben, too. So they were very happy.

If you see someone needs help, please help him. I’m sure you will be very happy.

[暑假初二英语作文

The longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. I cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest. The events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.

The following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. In the first few days I want to climb Mount Hua Shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. Then I tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). Besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, I will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

In short, I want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. Whatever I do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. Though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.

暑假即将来临的渴望,这是最好的学年的一部分给我。我不能让假期流逝逝去)无意义地,我的假期应该是一个阶段的丰收。发生在我身上的计划应该给我的无限潜力。

下面的计划可能揭示我渴望旅行的强度,工作和学习在这个假期。在头几天我想爬华山山和几个朋友来刷新自己。然后我倾向于探亲,高中老师和以前的同学。此外,找出最好的方法来培养我的能力,我将找到一份兼职工作,进行社会调查。

简而言之,我想在暑假做一些有趣的事。无论我做什么,我们的目标是一样的:获得必要的经验,获得知识,开阔我的眼界。虽然六周的假期将过去以闪电般的速度,其影响必将持续很长时间。

以下是为大家整理的关于初中生暑假生活英语作文：我的暑假生活的文章，希望大家能够喜欢！

I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations.

Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this.

At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Summer holiday is coming. I have made a wonderful plan for the holiday.

First of all, I am going to Shenyang with my father to visit my grandparents. They have been ill in bed for about two years. I am always worried about them. I will stay there for 20 days.

After I return home, I will spend some time studying math, because I am not good at it. I am sure I will do better in it.

Next, I will of course do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning the rooms.

I will have a good time during the holiday.

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暑假就要到了。我已经做了一个很好的假期计划。

首先，我要和爸爸去沈阳看爷爷奶奶。他们生病卧床不起已经两年了。我很担心他们，我要在那里呆20天。

回家以后，我要用一些时间来学习数学，因为我数学不太好。我相信我会学的好一些。

再有，我当然要做一些家务，如：做饭，打扫房间。

假期我会过得很愉快。

一个快乐而短暂的暑假悄悄地从我们的身边溜走，我们又迎来了一个新的学期，发生在暑假的趣事就像天空中的星星，数不胜数，是我心头不可抹杀的一件件往事。每一件事都闪闪发亮，深深的印在我的脑海中。

爸爸说;明天我们全家人去九仙山玩。我听后，高兴极了，早早的睡觉，生怕误了第二天的路程。

我们来到的第一个景点，就是龙潭沟。来到龙潭沟停车场，下了车，顺着弯弯曲曲的小路往前走去，走了几分钟，便听见龙潭瀑布的水哗哗作响。再往下走，便看见一条清可见底的小河，前面有一座小桥，桥非常高，走上去，龙潭瀑布便出现在眼前。波涛澎湃，看着龙潭瀑布，我才真正领略到“飞流直下三千尺，疑是银河落九天”的壮丽。

，我们随着游览的人群往里走，接着跃入眼帘的是一座古老的亭子，上面坐满了休息的人群，我们顾不上休息，鼓足了劲继续往前走，没走几步就停住了，我仿佛来到了另一个世界：这里，山清水秀，鸟语花香，吸一口气感觉都是甜的，我吮吸着清新的空气，耳边鸟鸣声，流水声，仿佛一支支乐曲，让人听了心旷神怡，久久不愿离开。

我们又参观了，九仙山最有名的两座高峰老母阁和情侣峰。我们顺着弯弯曲曲的山路往上爬，走一会歇一会，不知不觉身上已经汗津津的了。虽然我很想停下来休息，可是我知道只有爬到山顶，才能感受出“会当凌绝顶，一览众山小”的壮观。

想到这，我浑身好像充满了力气，脚步也轻快了许多，很快就到达了山顶。从山顶往下望，山谷中笼罩着一层薄雾，仿佛给郁郁葱葱的树木披上了一层白纱，一条清清的小河环绕其中，给山谷增添了许多生机，真是一个人间仙境呀!

告别了一学期,迎来了一个新暑假。在这美好的暑假里，我要把每月每天都过得开开心心。在假期里我准备要去宁波旅游，去看激烈的篮球赛，还有看许多的课外书

我去宁波旅游的地方是凤凰山，令我最难忘的是 飞天凤凰 ，开始的时候是慢慢上去，然后从40多米高的地方坠落下来，再绕一下360度拐弯。那时候我和姐姐都哇哇大叫起来。

从宁波回到衢山后。爸爸带我到衢山的岛斗中学去看篮球赛，当时人可多了，我和爸爸好不容易才走了进去。

在暑假里最重要的就是看课外书了，我分别看了作文书、童话书、故事书。这些书都对我很重要。

我的暑假生活真是有趣啊!

一年级我的暑假英语作文一

Happy summer vacation passed quickly. Im wearing a red scarf, with heavy pace came to the school, students watched the teacher, look at the familiar with the classroom and think again want to go to school, how much I miss the happy summer vacation. If every day this summer how nice!

Although there are many things in summer, cant cant meet, but summer is how free!

What time will you get up every morning, just a few o clock, even if you are not sleeping until noon someone called you, and want to go to school, youll have to get up early, brush your teeth, wash face, eat ┅ ┅ so many things to finish before 7 o clock, and hurriedly rushed to the school, was late to be scolded by the teacher again, how much is not free!

一年级我的暑假英语作文二

Summer vacation, this is a the students expect long-lost happy time, simply can and play, no more unpleasant sound alarm clock in the morning... But we looked at those high expectations, a less-pressured treasure mom, has arranged everything for us: early in the morning to go to remedial class, noon to classes every day and every day go to remedial classes in the afternoon. I every day in ask him, who invented the remedial class! Deprived of the time I watch TV, if let me know who it is, I will regard that man as my enemy.

一年级我的暑假英语作文三

How time flies, the twinkling of an eye a summer vacation is over.

In this summer vacation I do a lot of things, like swimming, my grandfather took me to the nine light city to go swimming, I would have learned how to swim, but havent swim back for a long time, my grandfather took me to swim, to practice. Grandpa to painting and help me to quote the hard-pen calligraphy class, and I can put the word practice more beautiful, beautiful. In July I also help my grandma do the green bean soup, green bean soup inside to put green beans, rice, kumquat, jujube, etc. I know how to make green bean soup tastes good. Put the materials into the bowl, then pour water and sugar, stick a few drops of peppermint essence with chopsticks.

Do you like this summer vacation?

There are a great number of subjects in school. Different subjects teach students different knowledge. They’re both very useful. However, different students like different subjects.As for girls, most girls like art Chinese. Maybe girls think these subjects are very interesting very easy. But most girls usually hate some subjects like math, chemistry or physics. Girls have a really hard time with these subjects they found out the worst report was from these subjects’ teachers.And what about boys? Of course, most boys’ heart are in math, chemistry physics. So boys always get good grades in these subjects. But most boys dislike Chinese or art. Perhaps they think Chinese art are really boring.Boys girls both like English. So English is the most popular subject in 2010.At last, what’s your favorite subject? You could write a letter to tell us.

[有关初三暑假英语作文

俗话说得好：“一年之计在于春”。这个学期我也制定了新计划。这个学期呢，我打算改掉一些坏习惯。我是语文课代表，可是我的一个坏习惯总是改不过来：我上课听得非常牢，可老师发问时，其实我一般都能答上来，可是我胆小，不敢大胆举手发言。就算老师说：“答错没关系。”我还是不敢举手。所以在这个学期里，我一定要尽力改掉这个跟随我五年的坏习惯。首先，我打算每堂课至少要举一次手，这样累积下来，一个学期我就可以把这个坏习惯改过来了。这样，老师就可以喜欢我了。

还有，这学期咱们的数学课本，别的同学都已经学过三分之一了，所以，我已经比别的同学落后了一点，正因为这样，我一定要更努力，更加油，这样我的学习成绩才不会落后。现在，我要开始做更多的课外练习，我决心不会被一个个难题给打败，我一定会用我的努力证明，我会赶上去的，让老师对我刮目相看。

另外我要改掉一个坏脾气，就是别的同学来问我题目时，我总是管自己做自己的事，不听他的话，我觉得这样就是不尊敬别人。换个角度来考虑，假如是我来问问题，被人拒绝是多么难过的事呀!我还有一个缺陷，那就是体育不好，每次到了期末，成绩都是及格。因为我平时少锻炼，才导致体育成绩不够好，所以在这个充满阳光的春天，我要多锻炼，做好各项保健工作。只要我天天这样，我想我应该可以再升一级。

好了，不说了，我的新学期计划可以说上个三天三夜呢!我现在要做的就是改掉坏习惯、坏脾气等，这样才可以做一个全优生。

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy. Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

暑假的时候，我总是会回到老家跟爷爷奶奶在一起。我喜欢那里的生活，它是如此的简单和快乐。住在乡下，我心里感受到了平静。在这里的日子似乎变得更长一些。早上，我听到公鸡的声音，好像是在唱歌，之后我就醒过来了。有时我会跑到山上去，可以听到一些鸟儿唱歌。我喜欢它们的声音。我是如此的接近大自然。我爱大自然带来的一切。绿色的树，五彩缤纷的花朵，干净的水甚至是新鲜的空气。我找到了它的美。

今天是暑假的第一天，我去参加小记者的一个活动，去焦作气象局参观。

到了那里，我看到了一个用白色的篱笆围成的小花园，里面全部都是测量气象的仪器，我迫不及待的想要钻进去真实看看那里的仪器。进去之后，有一位阿姨先让我们领了这里的介绍书和安全交通知识书······“哇!这么多的书，一二三四五，我来数一数，书本有几套，我来数一数。”我边翻书边嘴里嘟囔着这首儿歌。过了一会阿姨就带我们去看那些仪器，啊!仪器真的好高科技呀。那里的仪器有：太阳能板、雷达、风塔、酸雨架、冻土器、百叶箱······大家可能不知道百叶箱是什么东西吧，那么我就来和大家讲一讲吧。百叶箱是安装温、湿度仪器用的防护设备。百叶箱的作用是防止太阳对仪器的直接辐射和地面对仪器的反射和辐射，保护仪器免受强风、雨、雪等的影响，并使仪器感应部分分又适当通风，能当实地感应外界空气温度和湿的变化。

参观完仪器之后，我们又到了一个会议室里来看了气象局的种种资料，然后我们还看了天气预报是怎样回拨出去的。最后我们来到了一间屋子，那里面还有一个小屋子，是专门用来做天气预报的电视。我们大家在电视上看到有人告诉大家明天的天气会是什么，大家想知道是怎样做的么。其实呀，就是后面一个蓝色的背景，你只要站在那里说，然后再把你的录制出来的演讲把背景一调换就可以，我们班的三个同学还上去体验呢······

今天真的是太开心了，我真想明天再来一次!