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英语日记写作(实用20篇)

在学习、工作或生活中,大家都尝试过写日记吧,写日记可以锻炼我们的独处习惯,让自己的心静下来,思考自己未来的方向。日记的注意事项有许多,你确定会写吗?下面是小编给大家带来的英语日记写作6以供大家参考!

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寒假英语日记大全初一

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My winter holidays plans  My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every day. I will accomplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also , I may take the body exercise coming drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every day. I play with the once computer coming certainly may draw out one small Duan time , watch one meeting TV or. Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter holidays to plan!

我的寒假计划

我为了我的英语学习,我将努力学英语。坚持每天听半个小时的英语。我将以最快速度最好的完成老师布置的作业。我当然也不会忘记锻炼身体,我会在 每天的时间中抽出30——1小时来锻炼身体。我当然会抽出一小段时间来玩一下电脑,或者看一会电视。当然只要1小时。这就是我的寒假计划!

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篇1:短篇英语日记带翻译

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As is well known,books teach us to learn life,truth,science and many other

useful things.They increase our knowledge,broaden our minds and strengthen our

character.In other words,they are our good teachers and wise friends.This is the

reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing,but we must pay great attention to the choice of

books.It is true that we can derive benefits from good books.However,bad books

will do us more harm than good.

众所周知,书籍教会我们学习生活、真理、科学和许多其他有用的东西。它们增加了我们的知识,开阔了我们的思想,增强了我们的品格。换句话说,它们是我们的良师益友。这就是为什么我们的父母总是鼓励我们多读书。

读书是一件好事,但我们在选书上一定要十分注意,好书的确能给我们带来好处,但坏书弊大于利。

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篇2:英语日记

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June 1, 2013 Sunday

It is Childrens Day todany. My parents and I went to thenearby park for

celebrations. I was enjoying the programs when Ithought of my disabled classmate

Li Xin. It is not easy for her to come out.

After consulting with my parents, we went to Li Xins home and took her to

trhe park .We bought four colored balloons,on which we wrote:Cel-ebrating

ChildrensDay. We had lunch together. After ghat, I sent her back home .Both Li

Xin and I gad a happy time today.

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篇3:英语日记

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Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today。 I got up early at half past six。 I read English and then had breakfast。 I helped my mother washed the dishes。 Then I did my homework and cleaned my room。 I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon。 Then I played table tennis with my friends。 In the evening I watched TV and read a book。 I really had a busy and interesting day。

今天天气晴朗,热。 我在6:30很早就起了床。我读英语然后吃早饭。我帮助母亲洗碗。然后做作业打扫房间。下午我和母亲去买东西。然后和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视、看书。我今天的确很忙、过得很有趣。

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篇4:英语日记带翻译

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My New Deskmate

My new deskmate is a boy of sixteen. His name is Zhang Gao. He is 1.8

meters tall. His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a

sportsman. He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebows. It seems that

they are always smiling at you. Compared with my yellow hair, his hair is black

and thick. He speaks a little bit fast but very clearly. However, he likes to

gesture from time to time while hes talking. He has a dream of becoming a famous

actor one day. I believe his dream will come true because of his handsome face

and well-developed figure.

我的新同桌是一个16岁的男孩。他叫张高,身高一米八。结实的身材、晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像运动员。他浓浓的眉毛下有一双又黑又大的眼睛,似乎总是在对人微笑。与我的黄头发相比,他有一头浓密的黑发。他的语速有点快,但相当清楚,只是他说话时爱打手势。他的理想是当一名演员,我想他英俊的长相和匀称的身材定会让他好梦成真。

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篇5:高中生的英语日记

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Last night, my friends and I went back to the primary school. We walked around the school and talked about the funny things that happened at that time. We were going to college soon, so we would be apart soon, but we were happy about our future school life. Suddenly, an idea came across my mind, I said to my friends that we could make a deal about four years later, we would graduate at that time. My friends were so excited about it, they agreed with me. So we made the deal that four years later, we got together here.

I started to think about what I would become four years later, maybe a teacher, or a businessman. The deal helps us to have a chance to keep in touch with each other. I am so looking forward to carrying out it.

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篇6:高中寒假过年英语日记例

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Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.

The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.

China’s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people’s standard of living will become higher and higher.

At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.

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篇7:英语日记带翻译

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I like the Chinese new year better than any other festival。 This is a time

especially for rest and joy。 I need not study。 I wear good clothes and eat good

food。 I have a good time from morning till night。 I am as happy as a king。

翻译:我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时光。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服,吃好东西。我每一天从早到晚日子过得简单愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。

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篇8:英语日记格式

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Today is the first day that we start our summer camp. Everybody is amazed

at the foreign teacher. They have white skin, yellow hair, blue eyes……But no one

is very beautiful or handsome.

Foreigners are very tall or fat. I don’t like them. White skin with them is

a little ugly. All day around I found that two thirds of the day time I was

sleepy. I think tomorrow will be better.

班主任评语:Your English ability is auite good. Many of the sentences are quite

fluent. Keep on and make greater progress!you’d better pour more emotions in

it.

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篇9:英语日记带翻译

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My Foreign Teacher

Hello! I’m He Baoyi. We have three new teachers this term. But my favourite

teacher is English teacher. Who is she? Yes, she’s Linda.

Do you want to know her? Linda is very beautiful. Look! She has a round

face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. Her

hair is very long. She is not tall and not short. She likes wearing a white

dress. She looks like an angle. Linda works very hard every day. And she is

strict to us. But she is kind. Her class is so much fun. Really? Yes. In class,

she is our good teacher. After class, she is our good friend.

Her favourite food is tofu. It ’s very very healthy. She is not only good

at pingpong, but also good at singing. She likes talking with us. We all like

her.

你好!我他Baoyi啦。这学期我们有三位新老师。但是我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。她是谁?是的,自己是琳达。

你想认识她吗?琳达非常漂亮。看!她有一张圆圆的脸,两只黑色的小眼睛,一个直鼻梁,一个大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。她的头发很长。她个子不高,个子不矮。她喜欢穿白色的衣服。她看起来像个天使。琳达每天工作很努力。她对我们很严格。但她是善良的。她的课很有趣。真的吗?是的。在课堂上,她是我们的好老师。下课后,她是我们的好朋友。

她最喜欢的食物是豆腐。它非常健康。她不仅擅长乒乓球,而且擅长唱歌。她喜欢和我们谈话。我们都喜欢她。

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篇10:三年级英语动物日记

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I like the program" Animal World" . First of all, I like animals, especially small animals. Secondly, the host is able to make the program lively and interesting. Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I havent known before. I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the importance of animal protection.

I want to say that animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans. We must keep nature in balance.

Please give your love to animals. Stop killing them.

我喜欢“动物世界”这个节目。首先,我喜欢动物,尤其是小动物。第二,主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣。另一方面,通过这个节目,我知道了许多以前不知道的关于动物生活方面的事情,例如不同动物的不同生活习惯,人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系,还有保护动物的意义。

我想说的是,动物是自然的一部分,它们与人类不可分割,我们一定保持生态平衡。

请把你们的爱给它们吧,不可以杀害它们。

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篇11:英语日记

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Hello ! My name is li zi ming ,Im a boy. I like eat apples bananas and

Oranges. I like play computer games.Im tall but me is very thin.I have a big

eyes,i like smile,because smile can give me confident.My math and english is

very good.and now Im 12 years old.I like read books and make friend.I also ride

my bike go to school every day .

This is me.Do you like me?Do you want to make friends will me ?

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篇12:关于小学四年级寒假英语日记400字

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【摘要】时间飞逝,2014年的寒假如约而至。新的一年,新的希冀。对于广大小学生朋友来说怎样才能度过一个既快乐又充实的寒假呢?为此小学频道为大家搜集整理了四年级寒假英语日记400字,让大家在享受假期的同时,轻松愉快的安排好自己的学习生活!

February9201Ihavelosttwocomputers,butIhadanotherone.Iboughtitaboutfiveyearsago.Itcanbecalledcurio.Thoughitwasold.Butitcanstillwork.Althoughitworksslowly,Iwaspleased.Icangooninternetagain.Chattingwithmyfriendsisagoodrelaxing.Intheinternet,oneofmyoldfriendsinvitedmetotomorrow’sparty.Hetoldmethatsomefriendswouldgo,too.SoIpromisedtogo.A-ha!Icanseemyoldfriends.Iwasveryhappyandhopeful.

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篇13:如何零基础学习英语写作

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学习英语写作之前先来看下练习写作对你的英文有什么样的帮助:

好处1、辅助提升口语语言组织力

好处2、提升语法

好处3、帮助背单词和句型。

了解到联系英语写作带来的好处后让我们来看看学习英语写作有哪些方法:

基础英语写作入门方法一:背单词

单词是英语写作的基本构成之一,拥有大量的词汇才能写出你想要的文章,背单词有很多方法用mp3在零碎的时间边听边背边写,还有单词前后缀记忆法等众多方法,只要掌握其中一种适合你的方法,就开始大量的充实你的词汇吧。

零基础英语写作入门方法二:语法

语法是将单词串联在一起变成文章的那根线,学习好语法是整个英语阅读的重中之重。推荐熟读语法俱乐部,同时搭配大量的阅读自己感兴趣的文章,在大量的语境中去领受感悟本书的妙处。

零基础英语写作入门方法三:长时间的练习

写日记,这是最简单最长久的写作练习你不需要有任何的准备,这是你会接触到最基础的写作练习,你可以写任何你感兴趣的事情,你要做的就是拿起笔和本子把自已生活上的点点滴滴用英文记录下来。下面就是我的第一篇英文日记!

"today i rest,i stayed at home.sister call me go to the mother.i want not go there,because i must go to the company .去领 clothes.刚刚上完课come back.at home i find my 皮 shoes.now 要穿皮shoes了,write 日记好搞笑,还可以写点english了,i believe 以后 i sure i会更好。”

大家可能会看不懂这篇文章。你可能会觉得很好,说老实话当我现回过头去看我以前的日记我看了也觉得很好笑。但这就是我的第一篇英文日记,我的英文写作就是从这里开始的。你会发现写得非常直白,简直就是中文翻译毫无语法可言。但没有关系每个人开始都是这样的。

在写日记的开始阶段,你可能会像我这样不知道怎么去写或跟本无法组织语言,你可以像我这样按自已大脑里中文的想法去写,把会的单词都写上去不会的就用中文代替。在这个阶段你更多的是在使用你所学的词汇,有时候你会觉得这样很好玩。每天坚持写一篇,慢慢的你会发现你用的中文越来越少了有时候整篇文章都可以用英文写出来,随着你英语学习的进度不断推进,你在写句子的时候你不会直译了,你开始吧语法考虑到你的语言组织里面去。

当你要表边一个句子又找不到这个单词的时候,这种映像会深深的印在你的脑海里,当你在收集单词时候你就会注意收集那些非常实用的单词了。你会背更多的单词因为你想终有一天我的整篇文章是用英文写的。对于初期的写作,我认为就是这样写吧,请注意兴趣的培养。

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篇14:八年级寒假英语日记带翻译

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快乐的寒假到了,为了能过一个既快乐又有意义的寒假。这次,我计划先把作业搞定。每天完成10页的《寒假乐园》,还要安排一篇日记,练一小时的钢琴。

Happy winter vacation arrived, in order to be able to live a happy and meaningful winter vacation. This time, I plan to do my homework first. Finish 10 pages of "winter vacation" every day, and also arrange a diary to practice the piano for an hour.

作业做完了,我这个“书虫”终于能狂啃书了!我最喜欢啃柔萱写的《好玩数学博客》,在这本书中学到了让人意想不到的数学小知识,享受玩中学的快乐。我认识《今年你七岁》中调皮可爱的刘一波,从辫子姐姐写的《当时年纪实在小》我感受到她童年时代的快乐与悲伤,知道了《皮皮鲁遥控老师》的奇妙故事……狂啃书的滋味真好啊!

I have finished my homework, I was finally able to this "bookworm" mad kenshu! I love eating soft Xuan wrote "fun math blog", in this book to the mathematical knowledge of the unexpected, enjoy playing happy middle school. I know Liu Yibo, seven years old, who is very naughty and cute. From the braid elder sister wrote "at that age is very small", I feel the joy and sorrow of her childhood. I know the wonderful story of Pipiru remote control teacher. Its good to be crazy about books!

大年28,我回到了老家——马山。现在我可以狂吃狂喝狂玩狂乐了。我吃奶奶给我准备的香喷喷、黄澄澄的鸡腿,绿油油、白嫩嫩的蔬菜……喝的是甜滋滋,爽歪歪的橙汁。各种色香味俱全的美味佳肴。看着这些好吃的,我真想一口吃成个大胖子,吃完以后,我就挺着“将军肚”找小朋友玩。我们在沙堆上放火箭炮,只听“吱”的一声,火箭炮如离弦之箭一般直冲天空,“砰”的一声爆炸了!只见几张纸片缓缓地从空中漂落下来。后来我们放了威力最强的彩雷王,我把它点燃,放进纸管里,纸管被炸得面目全非。你看,我多开心呀!

In the year 28, I returned to my hometown, Mashan. Now I can be crazy, crazy, crazy, and crazy. My grandma gave me to eat delicious chicken, yellow, green, tender vegetables...... The drink is sweet, Shuangwai Orange Juice. All kinds of delicacies that are full of color and fragrance. Look at these delicious, I really want to eat into a big fat, eating, Im a "General belly" looking for friends to play. We put the Rockets in the sand, just listen to "squeak" sound, rocket like an arrow into the sky, a "bang" explosion! I saw a few pieces slowly from the sky fall down. Then we put the most powerful color of this, I lit it into the paper tube, paper tube was bombed out. You see, how happy I am!

嘿嘿,这样的寒假真是快乐啊!

Hey hey, such a winter vacation is really happy ah!

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篇15:小学生暑假旅游日记写作模板

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暑假的8月12——14号,我跟着爸爸妈妈随旅游团去普陀山游玩。普陀山是风景名胜区,以悠久的佛教文化和独特的海山风光驰名于世。

以前,我只是在书上和电视里看见过蔚蓝的大海。8月12号那天我好激动,因为我可以真的看见大海了,可以近距离的触摸大海了!可以在大海里尽情地游泳了!可是浙江沿海由于台风的原因,这天摆渡的车子实在太多了,到傍晚的时候,我才终于看到了蔚蓝的大海,闻到了大海的气息,心里甭提有多高兴了!

站在海岸上,放眼望去,一排排浪花涌向海边,真是漂亮极了。一片金黄色的海滩上已经有好多游客了,他们有的卧在沙滩上休息,有的在沙滩上堆着自己的艺术品,有的已经在大海里游泳了,也有的三三两两在散步……我有点迫不及待的想到大海里,和电视里的小朋友一样在大海里尽情的游一游。

妈妈马上带我到更衣室换好泳衣,我便赤脚跑下沙滩,暖暖的、柔柔的,“真舒服!”我高声叫道。可脚下都是沙子,软绵绵的,一点也跑不快。爸爸和妈妈也赤脚走了下来,妈妈提议,让我先跟大海和个影,我摆了个姿势,在浪花一排排涌来的时候,爸爸抓住时机按下了快门。

走进海水里,真凉快!可一排浪花涌过来,那浪花是力量真大,把我推回了几步,我便不敢往下走了,心里有点害怕。爸爸于是给我套上救生圈,拉着我的手拥着我向大海走去。还没走几步,一个浪头迎面打过来,弄得满脸都是海水,由于害怕嘴巴张开着还喝到了一口海水,海水又苦又涩,我差点哭出来,想要往回走上沙滩不想去游泳了。爸爸鼓励我勇敢些继续往前,并且告诉我在浪头打过来的时候,把头转向另一边,这样海水不会再扑面而来了。我随着爸爸游到了禁止线那里,一排排浪花把我时不时地托起来,我已不再害怕,相反感到象摇篮一样,一摇一摇,好舒服!怪不得有那么多的人喜欢大海,喜欢在大海里游泳!游了一阵子,爸爸便和我回到沙滩上,我便和几个小朋友也玩起了堆沙堆的游戏,我还在平整的沙滩上用手指写下了名字,还和妈妈一起捡到了大海送给我这个远道而来的朋友的礼物——漂亮的贝壳。虽然我没有捡到大的贝壳,但这些小巧带着五颜六色的贝壳我还是爱不释手。天色快暗下来了,导游催促我们回宾馆了,我才依依不舍离开。

接下来的两天,我们浏览了普陀山的美景,但我记忆犹新的就是这第一次在大海里游泳,因为大海告诉我要做一个勇敢的人。

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篇16:初二寒假英语日记

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My father is a manager.He likes singing and playing cards.He liakes drinking tea in his office.He likes watching TV and smoking.He likes making friends very much.So he has many friends,He`s outstanding and calm.I like his personality.My mother is a history teacher.She likes drinking juice in her free time.She likes playing volleyball and badminton.She likes watching tv ,too.And she also likes listening to the music.She always does housework because she wants to have a beatiful and clean house.She`s economical and smart.I love my parents.

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篇17:英语日记大全带翻译

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Saturday, my grandma made dumplings, one of the dumplings like obedient little ducks swimming in the bowl。 My in the mind have a little not to eat them。 But the smell of fragrance and let me greedy slobber, I eat up tit-bit。 But I eat dumplings, the heart have a kind of feeling can not tell。翻译:星期六我奶奶家包饺子了,一个个的饺子像听话的小鸭子在碗里游来游去。我心里有点不忍心吃他们了。但是那扑鼻而来的香味又让我馋得流口水,我就大口大口地吃了起来。但是我吃完饺子,心里有一种说不出来的感觉。

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篇18:考拉小巫的英语学习日记

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《考拉小巫的英语学习日记》一书中讲诉的是作者从一个英语菜鸟到高阶,从懒孩子到勤孩子、从中国环境到美国家庭的巨大转变,告诉我们即便你不出身名校、不天资聪颖,奋斗和坚持依然可以将你引向成功。这不仅仅是一本英语学习日记,更是一本作者在彷徨、无助、动摇时的人生感悟,是关于奋斗、坚持和梦想的故事,读完此书,让我们热血沸腾,激励着我们去为理想奋斗、拼搏。

考拉小巫的故事就是一个选择和坚持的故事,就像托福名师无老师所说:“人生中常常面临选择,而更常遇到的则是选择过后的迷茫与自我怀疑。就好像进入一间密室,只有从黑暗和碰壁中坚持下来的人,才有机会开启通向光明的大门。”我佩服考拉小巫的勇气,选择之后坚持到底,虽有过彷徨、迷茫、无助,甚至自我怀疑,但那孤注一掷的风格,坚持到底的毅力,生命不止、奋斗不息的精神,帮助她一路披荆斩棘,冲向梦想开花的地方。这样的女子,值得拥有一切美好的事物!

看了考拉小巫的故事,我觉得要想成功,需要有值得你奋斗的梦想,有孤注一掷的勇气和奋斗到底的坚持。翻上书本,我问自己,你的.梦想是什么?你准备好为你的梦想奋斗了吗?你有勇气放弃一切,有勇气面对“密室”中的灰暗和碰壁吗?你有坚持到底奋斗不息的毅力吗?

的确,并不是每个人都能做到这些。每个人都有梦想,但最终实现者确凤毛麟角,因为命运之神总是眷顾那些坚持到最后的人。

或许我做不到像考拉小巫那些拼,那样孤注一掷。但她的生活态度和想法对我来说很有启发。

书中的“傻子哲学”很有意思:为什么傻子能成功,是因为傻子很傻,他不管自己是不是能做成,也不管别人怎么笑话他,也不管遇到多少困难,他只是一个人傻头傻脑地一直做。而聪明人很聪明,他总是会考虑自己目前的目标对不对,会不会有更好的办法,能不能抄捷径省时间。最后,聪明人选了一条路又一条路,每条路都刚走了一点点就又换,所以,他总是在离起点不远的地方徘徊。而傻子却在一条路上一直走,虽然他速度慢,但他一直都在坚持。最后,傻子比聪明人先到达了终点。”其实傻子的哲学不复杂,就两个字“坚持”。

生活中有很多这样的聪明人,这样的人真的很搞笑,事情没做之前,总担心这害怕那,担心会失败,你把时间花在无谓的担心上,根本都还没做,当然不可能成功,有时候我们需要点傻子精神,一根筋到底。

从考拉小巫身上我学到了坚持,更让我感动的是她的拼劲,那股子年轻人的朝气蓬勃,似乎有挥霍不完的青春。而反思我们这一代的年轻人,身上还有多少锐意进取、干劲十足、青春无敌的精气神,渐渐得变得喜欢随大流、甘于平庸安逸生活、不愿冒尖。

做一个像考拉小巫一样勇敢的人,为自己的梦想而拼!

这是书中最让我感动的一幕:十二月里天气越来越冷,楼道里也很冷,但是我每天都把板凳从自习室里搬出来,坐在楼道的走廊里,把电脑架腿上,一边计时连口语题,一边给自己录音。说一道录一道,录完以后认真听,不满意了就重录,每道题都是录到自己完全满意的地步才继续下一题。当时我一直在矫正牙齿,满嘴上下都戴着布满细铁丝的牙套。由于练口语的缘故,嘴唇和舌头总是被无数次划破,一被冷风吹就特别疼,吃饭的时候也很困难,经常饿肚子。

成功无捷径,需要我们在梦想的征程中勇敢、坚持、不顾一切。

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篇19:七年级寒假英语日记50字

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My father took me out fishing today. At the beginning, we spent a long time waiting there but there was no fish. I was very impatient and didnt want to stay there. I wanted to come home. Father said to me, "Dont give up everything easily. We should keep on trying hard".

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篇20:小升初英语写作的技巧指导

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我们都知道,想在小升初英语写作拿高分,就要摸透老师的喜好,引起“读者”的注意。而在写作中句子偏长恰恰会适得其反,很容易让人漏听一、两个单词,影响对整个句子的理解,所以我们要教大家一些化繁为简的技巧——

1、巧用单个词:即用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词。比如:

用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)

用ignore(忽视)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)

用now(现在)代替at this point in time(此时此刻)

用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)

2、省略同义词或近义词。比如在下面例句中,形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的),就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词),我们可以省略important,只保留significant。

The government project is important and significant.(这项政府计划是重要的,有重要意义。)

The government project is significant.(这项政府计划有重要意义。)

3、在不改变句子含义的前提下,省略所有可以省略的单词。比如在下面例句中,the cover of the book(书的封面)可以省略成the book cover,is red in color(是红色的)可以省略成is red。

The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)

The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)

现在我们把这三种方法结合起来,将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子,改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。

University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的,不拥堵的,以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过,到达校园的各处。)

University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵,以便人们顺利通行。)

4、用介词短语替代从句。比如:

原句:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后:At the second traffic light turn left.

5、删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语。比如:

原句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。

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