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+ 加入清单【论文摘要】在高考英语试题中,写作是有效提高学生整体成绩的重要手段,写作是目的也是为了测试学生直接运用英语表达的能力而设置的,因此通常都会放在试卷的最后面作为压轴题出现。在高考英语写作要求中,明确提出要让考生运用所学知识进行书写,能组词成句、组句成文,语句符合英语语法和习惯。在写出的书面材料中,要求达到:切中题意,文理通顺,语言准确,得当。那么,怎样才能在高考英语写作中出类拔萃呢?这正是本文要探讨的内容。
一、有的放矢,了解高考英语写作要点
要对高考英语写作的题型及内容有所了解,才能把握好高考英语写作的考点,在此基础上才能找到行之有效的对策及方法。纵观近几年各省高考英语试题中,写作测试的命题思路,有一种从指导性写作逐步向半开放式写作过渡的趋势。半开放式写作,具体地说,就是给考生们提供一定的材料(包括图、文或图文结合)然后要求学生根据材料来进行书面表达,这样的考题形式,既限制了考生随心所欲的思维,又给予考生适当的发挥空间。这种命题方式能较好地考查考生的语言组织能力、书面表达能力以及思维能力。而在文体方面,记叙文、议论文、应用文及书信为最常见的写作题材。因此,我们可以做一个形象的比喻,写文章就像工厂里制造一台机器那样,首先要确定机器由几部分组成,然后对这几部分分别细化,形成初步的设计图;再根据要求对初步的设计图进行完善、补充、修改,随之形成最终的设计图;然后我们再按照图纸的设计,使用我们所掌握的零件去制造出机器;同样的道理,学生写作时可参照以下模式:
1.理解话题:学生在动笔前必须对指定的话题进行反复细读,认真思考,理解其真正的含义,了解出题者的意图,这是进行写作的第一步;
2.明确文体,确定人称时态:这一阶段的判断中,主要强调近十年高考最常见的两种文体:(1)说明文:必须按照事物的原貌加以说明、介绍、解释,常采用一般现在时,被动语态也常使用;(2)记叙文:通常采用第一人称,描述本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事;或用第三人称讲述他人的事情,如果是过去的事情,要用过去时。
3.初拟提纲,再理解话题:明确文体的基础上,草拟写作提纲;提纲是文章的骨架,可以是一句活,也可以是一个词组,由于考试时间所限,提纲内容不必面面俱到,但必须体现文章的整体结构和思路;目前绝大部分高中学生在英语写作时,还习惯于使用母语进行构思,然后将构思好的中文内容翻译成英文,这种情况是正常的;关键在于翻译过程中的语言表达必须符合英语语言的表达习惯
4.开始写作:提纲完成后,应根据提纲充实内容,如果说提纲是骨架的话,那么这时你必须将骨架填充血肉;具体的说就是要扩展要点,连词成句,适当地变换句型,组句谋篇成文;注意应简明扼要,层次分明、用词准确、语法概念清楚,使文章更具说服力,然后在写作完成后,还要对文章进行快速的检查,减少单词的拼写错误和句子表达的错误。
二、高考英语写作指导的具体策略
根据以上对历年高考英语写作试题的分析,我们可以从以下三个方面去指导学生进行写作:
1.细读材料,认真审题
仔细阅读书面表达题所给材料的全部内容,准确理解题目要求。需要认真审查的内容有:(1)文章的开头和结尾是否已给出;(2)用第几人称写作,书面表达要求中会明确指出使用第一人称还是第三人称;(3)提供的情景是图画、图表,还是提纲,如果是连环画,要注意故事情节的连贯性,确定合理的情节发展;(4)是否提供参考词汇,如果提供有参考词汇,写作中最好要用到;(5)采用什么文体,如果是议论文,要有论点、论据和结论三部分。如果是应用文,要注意其格式。如果是记叙文,要抓住六个要素:时间、地点、人物、事件、事情起因、事情的发展与结果。
2.恰当选择词语和句式
认真审题后,就可以列提纲了,将重点单词、短语、句型写在提纲里,关于选词切忌使用生僻词语,要求做到用词准确、得体、达意。选择句式时,尽量使用多种句式,如强调句、倒装句、各种名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句和固定句型等,长句和短句视情况交错使用,这样可以提高文章的档次,使文章生辉。
选词大多是在一组同义词或近义词之间进行。例如,我们要表达“好”这个意思,一般来说,大家会马上想起“good”,因为口语中我们经常说agoodfriend、goodluck、agoodpicture等。但是,在不同的短语中,可以选择不同的英语单词使表达更加准确、生动、形象。
3.多背常识性语句,扩大知识面
语言是有规律的,不同体裁的书面表达都有其常识性语句。如果同学们平时有大量的语句积累,在写作时就能把积累的东西调动起来。这些常识性语句既可增加文章的连贯性、逻辑性和可读性,同时还能提供地道的表达方式。写人物介绍时,应着重写人物的姓名、性别、年龄、职业、身高、健康状况、业余爱好、工作态度、与人相处和社会评价等语句。例如:lipingisagoodteacher,whoisthirtyyearsold.heis175centimetrestallandheishealthy.等。
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+ 加入清单阅读电视广告词: If we don t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop. 根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示:
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2.可饮用水在减少。
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Water is very important to humans.We can t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
水对人类很重要,我们不能没有水,水可以喝掉。但是有些人似乎并不在乎。他们浪费很多水。他们把污水排入河流和湖泊,水污染越来越严重,所以我们必须做点什么停止污染。我们不仅保护水,还发现利用它的方式。如果我们不这样做,最后一滴水将是一滴眼泪。
篇5:2024年高考英语作文分类汇总
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一.表示感想
1、我非常喜欢这部电影。
I like the film very much.
2、我很喜欢这个戏剧。
I am very fond of the play.
3、我厌烦了这儿的食物。
I am tired of the food here.
4、我感动得哭了。
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5、我兴奋得睡不着觉。
I was so excited that I could not fall asleep.
6、我如此的悲伤以至于眼里充满泪水。
I was so sad that tears came to my eyes.
7、多漂亮的画啊!
What a beautiful picture!
8、士兵们多勇敢啊!
How brave the soldiers are!
9、我从来没看过这么好的电影。
I have never seen a better film.
10、我的书比你的书多。
I have more books than you.
二.叙述事件
1、故事发生在伦敦。
The story happened in London.
2、起初,他没看见那个人。
At first, he didn’t see the man.
3、然后,他走到汽车那儿。
Then he went over to the bus.
4、过了一会儿,他上了小汽车。
After a little while,he got on the car.
5、后来,他掏出了枪。
Later on he took out his gun.
6、最后,他被捕了。
At last, he was arrested.
7、开始时,老师给我们做了简短的介绍。
In the beginning, the teacher gave us a brief introduction.
8、后来,他开始在黑板上写东西。
Afterwards, he began to write something on the blackboard.
9、同时,学生记笔记。
Meanwhile, the students took notes.
10、最终,学生们成功了。
In the end, the students succeeded.
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1、先生们,女士们,请注意!
Ladies and gentlemen,attention please!
2、我有重要的事告诉你们。
I have something important to tell you.
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We are going to have a lecture in the library at 3:00 this afternoon.
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The speaker will bean American professor.
5、他将谈论空气污染的问题。
He will talk about air pollution.
6、请大家按时到场。
Please be there on time.
7、我要说的就这些,谢谢!
That’s all. Thank you!
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How have you been recently?
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I am writing to tell you a piece of good news.
10、希望早日收到你的回复。
I am looking forward to your early reply.
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+ 加入清单Dear Mr. Smith ,
I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am
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写作要点:
1.对她表达感谢之意;
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3.希望了解她的近况。
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1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
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5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
你离开我们已经快一个月了。我们都很想念你,非常感谢你为我们所做的一切。
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
我们都很忙。那天我们有一次英语演讲比赛。我赢得了第一名!这再一次提醒我你的帮助。你还记得我们一起在山上种下的树吗?昨天,我们去那里浇水了。你种下的树长势良好,整个班级决定把它命名为“苏”。你回来看看苏木吗?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
你近来一切都好吗?我们希望了解更多关于你和你的美国学生。希望保持密切联系。
All the best
所有最好的
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+ 加入清单Time is a file that wears and makes no noise.光阴如锉,细磨无声
Time stays not the fools leisure.时间不等闲逛的傻瓜
Time and I against any two.和时间携起手来,一人抵两人
Time is life and when the idle man kills time, he kills himself.时间就是生命,懒人消耗时间就是消耗自己的生命。或时间就是生命,节省时间,就是延长生命
Time spent in vice or folly is doubly lost.消磨于恶习或愚行的时间是加倍的损失
Time undermines us.光阴暗中催人才。或莫说年纪小人生容易老
Time and tide wait for no man.岁月不待人
Time cannot be won again.时间一去不再来
Time is , time was , and time is past.现在有时间,过去有时间,时间一去不复返
Time lost can not be recalled.光阴一去不复返
Time flies like an arrow , and time lost never returns.光阴似箭,一去不返
Time tries friends as fire tries gold.时间考验朋友,烈火考验黄金
Time tries truth.时间检验真理
Time is the father of truth.时间是真理之父
Time will tell.时间能说明问题
Time brings the truth to light.时间使真相大白。或时间一到,真理自明。
Time and chance reveal all secrets.时间与机会能提示一切秘密
Time consecrates: what is gray with age becomes religion.时间考验一切,经得起时间考验的就为人所信仰
Time reveals(discloses) all things.万事日久自明
Time tries all.时间检验一切
There is no time like the present.现在正是时候
Take time by the forelock.把握目前的时机
To choose time is to save time.选择时间就是节省时间
Never put off till tomorrow what may be done today.今日事,今日毕
Procrastination is the thief of time.拖延为时间之窃贼
One of these days is none of these days.拖延时日,终难实现。或:改天改天,不知哪天
Tomorrow never comes.明天无尽头,明日何其多
What may be done at any time will be done at no time.常将今日推明日,推到后来无踪迹
Time works wonders. 时间可以创造奇迹或时间的效力不可思议
Time works great changes.时间可以产生巨大的变化
Times change.时代正在改变
Time is money.时间就是金钱或一寸光阴一寸金
Time flies.光阴似箭,日月如梭
Time has wings.光阴去如飞
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4.文章体裁不限,但必须结构合理,内容连贯,有条理性。
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Almost everyone knows that water covers three-fourths of the earths surface. Most of it, however, is in the oceans and is too salty to drink. Also, some of it is frozen and cannot be used. In fact, less than one percent is left for the use of people, animals and plant life. All through history men have tried to build their homes near the sources of fresh water. Now fresh water is becoming scarce, but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people in the world. Some industries also use large amounts of fresh water in the production of things such as steel, petroleum, paper and rubber and so on. Scientists estimate that the need for fresh water will have doubled by the year 2003. If they are correct, we must find new ways of saving it or producing it. Some nations have worked on the problem and are already sharing their information with others. They are trying to keep their rivers from becoming polluted. Deep wells are also being dug, and rain water is being collected in huge artificial lakes. In one way or another, they hope to provide enough water to satisfy the needs of their people.
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With the worldwide increase of population, more and more water is needed. Meanwhile,the water sources are getting polluted by human beings in one way or another. Some nations are taking measures to solve this problem. They even communicate with each other hoping to find better ways to save and produce water to meet the needs of their people.
随着世界范围内的人口增长,越来越需要更多的水。与此同时,水源被污染,人类以一种方式或另一种方式。一些国家正在采取措施来解决这个问题。他们甚至相互沟通希望能找到更好的方法来保存并生成水来满足人民的需要。
On a personal level, to solve the problem with fresh water, both the government and inpiduals should make every effort. For example, for the government, it is urgent to make detailed laws that require businesses and inpiduals to stop polluting the environment and to save water while it is not necessarily used. Besides, education should be offered to all the citizens to raise their awareness of the importance of protecting environment and saving water. As inpiduals, we need to take action to play our own part in our everyday life.
在个人层面上,用淡水来解决这个问题,政府和个人都应该尽一切努力。例如,对于政府来说,迫在眉睫的是做出详细的法律,要求企业和个人停止污染环境,节约用水,而不一定是使用它。除此之外,教育应该提供给所有的公民提高他们的意识保护环境和节约用水的重要性。作为个人,我们需要采取行动来扮演自己的角色在我们的日常生活。
篇10:2024高考有关环保的英语作文
全文共 1199 字
+ 加入清单As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Bird there is less and less fresh water in the world.Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Dot use paper cups. At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.
"There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
我们都知道,我们周围的环境变得越来越糟。在一些地方,我们不能看到鱼在河里游泳或树木在山上。鸟有越来越少的淡水。一些人甚至没有干净的水喝。所以我认为我们必须做些事情来保护环境。但我们能做些什么呢?如何保护我们的环境?例如,我们可以步行去学校或骑自行车而不是汽车。我们最好使用购物袋而不是塑料袋当我们去购物。我们应该使用纸的两边,当我们写。不使用纸杯。在我们学校餐厅,用我们自己的碗和筷子而不是一次性的。我们可以重复使用水和节省电力。总之,如果每个人都更加关注我们的环境,将会有更少的污染和我们的生活将会更好。
“只有一个地球”,我希望每个人都能保护我们的环境好。
篇11:高考英语作文万能模板
全文共 599 字
+ 加入清单Dear David,
Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful,
and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its
quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as
possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV
and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with
people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from
people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll
learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
篇12:高考英语作文模板——观点阐释段
全文共 436 字
+ 加入清单【示例一】
①Nowadays, a heated debate about ________(主题)is under way in China. ②A close inspection of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless)it is. ③As a matter of fact, ________(进一步说明).
【示例二】
①While the rhythm/pace/tempo of people’s living is speeding up, one of the topics many city residents are discussing is ________(主题). ②As part of domestic modernization, ________ needs to be developed urgently in china, for ________(进一步说明).
篇13:中考英语作文万能开头汇总
全文共 519 字
+ 加入清单1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻,…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到,…
6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…
篇14:难忘的高考记忆英语作文
全文共 1073 字
+ 加入清单The Memory About College Entrance Exam
The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday. I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.
高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试,他们已经学了那么多年,目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说,他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象,它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考,我能清楚地记得它,那情形就像发生在昨天。我很努力学习,在那些接近考试的日子,所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习,我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子,当我今日教室时,我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦,但是我们觉得很开心,因为我们为未来奋斗,我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里
篇15:2024高考英语冲刺作文OneThingI’mProudof
全文共 880 字
+ 加入清单One Thing I’m Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
我很自豪的一件事我还记得我如何成为一个优秀的乒乓球运动员。
第一天我去了高中时,我看到一些同学打乒乓球。惊讶于他们是多么巧妙,我决心一样好。后来,我经常看到他们认真学习他们的技术。然后我不停地练习,直到我有足够的信心去挑战了好球员。在学期结束的时候,我成为班里最好的球员之一。
我真的骄傲的这段经历,因为它让我意识到我们都能实现我们的潜能,通过努力工作才能实现我们的目标。它也帮助我更好地理解谚语“熟能生巧”。
篇16:高考优秀英语作文:AboutWeight-losing
全文共 905 字
+ 加入清单导语:现如今很多女孩子追求漂亮都会选择减肥,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Nowadays weight-losinghas become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty-looking, they try many different ways of losing weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise,some eat medicine ,others even turn to operation for help. As a result,a lot of products have come into being,such as special medicines, tea and equipment. They are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, its understandable that women seek beauty, but they should do it in a proper way. Taking exercise is the way that I most favor. But the other methods are likely to do harm to peoples health more or less.
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如今减肥已经成为中青年女性的热门话题。为了使自己看起来漂亮,他们尝试了许多不同的减肥方法。有的节食,有的运动,有的吃药,有的甚至转手术求助。因此,许多产品应运而生,如特殊药品、茶叶和设备等。它们用不同的方式和不同的工作,但有些有副作用。
在我看来,女人追求美是可以理解的,但她们应该以正确的方式去做。锻炼是我最喜欢的方式。但是其他的方法或多或少会危害人们的健康。
篇17:高考英语写作必背句式90个
全文共 14441 字
+ 加入清单一个句子必须按照一定的模式来组织,这个模式称为句式。下面是语文迷为大家提供的高考英语写作优秀句式,供大家参考。
1) on the other hand, the contribution of day schools cant be ignored.
2) due to high tuition fee, most of ordinary families cannot afford to send their children to boarding schools.
3) since it is unnecessary to consider students routinelife, day school can lay stress on teaching instead of other aspects, such as management of dormitory and cafeteria.
4) furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.
5) from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that both of day schools and boarding schools are important to train young students for our society.
6) there is much discussion over science and technology. one of the questions under debate is whether traditional technology and methods are bound to die out when a country begins to develop modern science and technology.
7) According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
8) The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
9) No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
10) People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.
11) An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
12) When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
13) Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.
14) Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful
15) An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
16) Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
17) There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
18) An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
19) A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
20) Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.
21) Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
22) In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
23) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
24) It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.
25) Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
26) No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.
27) People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
28) In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
29) In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.
30) We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
31) People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
32) The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.
33) Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.
34) This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.
35) For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
36) Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.
37) This view is now being questioned by more and more people.
38) Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.
39) Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.
40) In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.
41) Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.
42) Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.
43) Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.
44) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
45) There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.
46) This issue has caused wide public concern.
47) It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.
48) A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.
49) As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:
50) It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.
51) Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.
52) It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.
53) For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.
54) There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.
55) This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.
56) Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.
57) In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.
58) Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.
59) In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.
60) It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.
61) Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.
62) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.
63) Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
64) There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.
65) Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.
66) However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.
67) Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools.
68) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.
69) Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.
70) Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.
71) But is it really the case? The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think. In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority.
72) Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents. Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction.
73) Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water.
74) From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic projects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in peoples life and economic growth.
75) Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it.
76) There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areas to come into and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.
77) An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provide them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.
78) It must be noted that improvement in agriculture seems to not be able to catch up with the increase in population of rural areas and there are millions of peasants who still live a miserable life and have to face the dangers of exposure and starvation.
79) Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts.
80) Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems.
81) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
82) An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.
83) For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.
84) For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.
85) There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.
86) By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.
87) Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day
88) Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.
89) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.
90) These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
篇18:历年英语高考满分作文:鼠标Themouse
全文共 1138 字
+ 加入清单The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
使用鼠标是人与电脑交流最有效的装置。
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
对大多数人来说,它没有鼠标操作电脑是不可能的,更不用说上网。选择一个好的鼠标是非常方便的,在控制屏灵活方便。具有插入,删除,移动和复制,它使我们能够测试编辑,浏览网页和下载我们想要的东西。它甚至可以给我们带来大量的音乐,电影和电脑游戏。想象一下,所有这一切都可以做一个可爱的小老鼠。
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
一个方便的工具,可以使我们的工作更容易,但它并不总是能提供一种积极的方式。在我们的指尖留下太多准备好的资料很少追求知识的空间。太多的现成的答案让我们在寻求真理不那么兴奋。过分依赖鼠标使我们懒惰和缺乏创意的身心。
篇19:高考优秀英语邀请函:摄影展
全文共 997 字
+ 加入清单导语:忙绿的高考已经结束了,全国各地高考英语满分作文也相继出来了,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to .
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua
【参考译文】
我们学校摄影俱乐部将举办国际高中学生摄影展。主题的展示是环保。它将从6月15日开始,持续三周。有兴趣的学生参加。我知道你拍了好的照片,你总是想做一些环保的事。我记得你告诉我,你上一次主题的一些照片visitedour学校。这无疑是一个很好的机会让更多的人看到他们。如果你想加入,你可以发送你的照片。
希望不久能收到你的来信。
篇20:2024年上海高考满分作文:亦坚亦柔,成就和谐
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+ 加入清单《老子》曰:“天下之至柔,驰骋天下之至坚。”这便是所谓人心的奇妙之处,有坚如磐石处,亦有温柔如水时,二者周旋归一,共享方寸之地,方有一个和谐的自我,卓然而立。
诚如毕淑敏所言,优等的心,不必华丽,但必须坚固。人心,首先应该是一座坚固的堡垒。以道德准则为盾牌,以理想信念为防线的我们都是天赋使命的战士,应有勇气也有毅力捍卫生命中那些真正神圣的东西,像英国文豪托尔金在《魔戒》中诠释的那样,“相信这世界并非不可救药,而一定存在某种良善,值得我们奋战到底”。没有人能做到始终无畏不悔,那是只存在于神话之中的品质,而常人真正能做到的是,让对“自己的勇气有一天会消耗殆尽”的担忧战胜被“人世间的阴雨灰色帘罩”蒙蔽的恐惧。守护坚实稳固的初心,也即守护生命耿直不移的态度,这才能成全生命伟大力量的展现。
然而人心在某些方面应有的坚硬并不等同于一味的固执,冰冷刚硬到不可触碰也便更不应成为人生的常态,很多时候,我们也需要让心灵受到温存与爱意的滋养,由寸草不生的荒芜变为处处繁花的锦绣。是啊,在这个正在被冷漠的铁壁铜墙侵占的世界里,我们总以为百毒不侵刀枪不入的自我封闭就是坚强,可如果我们连呵护真诚、期许美好、拥抱爱情的能力都已失去,那么这种机械的行为构成的将不配被称为“人生”,甚至算不上好好地“活过”。我们既然没有理由封存扼杀美好,何不以最阳光的姿态享受心灵深处的柔软?故而,人心中那些必不可少的柔软的东西,与坚硬的组成部分一样,都是构成精彩人生的要素;故而,唯有那些亦坚亦柔的心灵,方能塑造成和成谐的自我。
我想,真正洞察了这一道理的人,一定会懂得英国诗人西格里夫·萨松写下的“我心有猛虎在细嗅蔷薇”的温存,因为坚强与温柔是相互融合而非完全对立的存在;一定会明了歌手Hita在《天命风流》中唱出的“灵秀上眉头,浩气存胸口”的洒脱,因为心坚如石或豪情满怀的人依然需要情感的滋养;一定会欣赏词作者荀夜羽表达的“击鼓动远雷,琵琶脆涟漪”的和谐,因为勇气与温柔的契合才是生命最本真的构形。所以,要想造就一个和谐的自我,要想活出一世动人的精彩,最重要的,便是让这方寸之地,亦坚亦柔,亦刚亦让。
心在方寸,所求为何?亦坚亦柔,成和成谐。如此,方能一路撷美好而行,方能一生尽光明磊落。