一篇关于介绍你的笔友的英语作文(汇编19篇)
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1000英语写作加分和扣分点介绍
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+ 加入清单英语作文一般都是15-20分,你想指导你的分数被扣在哪些地方了吗?
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。
一:先看一下扣分点:
1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.
二:加分点
除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长[微博]和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
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+ 加入清单Hello, my name is Shi Yunjie, 22 years old this year. I am a Junior from the Jiangsu University. My hometown is Nantong, a city in Jiangsu Province.It is a seaside city, which has pleasant weather all year around. My character is optimistic.I like to communicate with people.For about three years in the university, I have made a lot of friends, coming from different professions and hometown all over the country. My hobby is listening to music, watching movies and reading. I especially like to read biographies,such as Franklin、Mao Zedong and so on, to get some useful inspiration about Life planning through this way,
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我叫于格沁。我九岁。我家有三口人,我爸爸,我妈妈和我。
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我妈妈很漂亮。她有两只大眼睛,黑色的头发很长。我妈妈是工人。她擅长她的工作。她也是个好主妇。
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The Middle-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals,it is often held in September or October.During the festival,family members get united and have mooncakes together.THere are various kind of mooncakes,such as bean paste,egg-yolk or meat.The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolizes a big moon.Moreover,in the evening of the Middle-Autumn Festival,people get together in a vacant place,eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the dark sky.To conclude,the Midde-Autumn Festival is a very nice festival for Chinese people.
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Mid Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of China. It used to be as important as Spring Festival .It is usually celebrated in September or Ocotber. This festival is to celebrate the havast and to enjoy the beautiful moon light.To some extent, it is like Thanks Giving day in western countries. On this day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. After that, people always eat delicious moon cakes, and watch the moon. The moon is always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relitives and friends. It is a day of pleasure and happiness. Hope you have a wonderful Mid Autumn festival!
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The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.
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译文:
中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日,在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天,家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子,把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的,灯笼挂在屋前。
晚上有一顿美餐,离家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后,人们点亮灯笼,一般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼。
晚上月亮又圆又大,人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特别的食品--月饼。人们在一起回顾过去,展望未来。据说天上有一条龙,它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮,孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。
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+ 加入清单I am from Xian,the capital city of Shanxi province,which is considered as one of the cradles of Chinese civilization. The more than 1100 years history of thirteen feudal dynasties,from the Zhou Dynasty to the Tang Dynasty,leaves the city abundant historical and cultural heritages.When yo step out of Xian railway station,the world-renowned city wall,built in Ming dynasty,will come your view.Walking around this city,you can feel its profound history everywhere.
Qingqiang opera is quite popular in this area which is characterized by its straightforwardness and enthusiasm,so the people here are no exception.If you are in trouble,we will always come to help you as soon as possible.Besides good nature,we are strict with our work,persistently pursuing high quality.For example,the famous director,Zhang Yimou, attaches high importance to every detail of his works,including the theme,the actors and the frame.As a result,his works enjoy wide popularity and reputation.Growing up in such a beneficial environment ,gradually,I develop a spirit of integrity,diligence and earnestness.
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+ 加入清单My father is 37 years old, he has a pair of bright and piercing eyes, eyes there are some years left traces. Dads hair is very short, he said it can be convenient to wash your hair. In my mind, he always wore the dirty clothes, two hands very rough, a look to know his work is very hard.
You do not see him usually always laughing, in fact, I was very harsh. Dad said, do not ask me to test the first class, as long as the first few to enter the line on the line. I remember one time I careless, only test eighty points. On the way home from school, my heart like "fifteen bucket water - seven on eight". Back home, my father asked me how many points test, I scared not speak. Dad took me past, said to me: "I usually teach you how, how can you afford me, how worthy of working hard in the mother abroad?" Dads words let me shed tears of pain.
Although my father is harsh, but the heart is very hurt me.
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Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.
She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.
She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.
This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?
嗨,我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师,但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。
她很年轻,但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌,和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。
她喜欢读书和运动。下课后,李老师经常和我们一起运动,我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。
这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?
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+ 加入清单Hi,everyone,Im excited to introduce myself to you.My name is __,and you can call me__.I was born in a tradition family,my father is a __,and my mother is a __.I am intrested in learning __,and in my spare time id like to play__.Now,we have went step to junior high school,Id like to be friend with you,angI think we will learn more during this period together.
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+ 加入清单American eating is funny. They eat almost everything with a fork, and it appears that holding a knife in ones right hand longer than a few seconds is considered to be against good table manners.
The system is that if it is absolutely necessary to use a knife, people take the fork in their left hand, and cut off a piece of meat or whatever it is in the normal manner. Then they put the knife down, transfer the fork to their right hand, and only then do they transport the food to their mouth. This is clearly ludicrous(滑稽可笑), but it is considered good manners.
There are several results of this system. First, if it is not absolutely necessary to use a knife, Americans dont use one, because obviously this greatly complicates(使复杂化) things, and you will therefore see them trying to cut things like potatoes, fish and even bacon(熏猪肉) with a fork. Second, towards the end of a course, since only one implement(器具) is being used, food has to bo chased around the plate with the fork - and for the last mouthful the thumb has to be used to keep the food in place, although one is not supposed to do this.
Third, tables are generally laid with one knife and two forks, the outside fork being for the salad. There is no need for foreign visitors to follow the American system and try to eat the salad with only a fork, but if you do use your knife, remerber to save it for the meat course. Even desserts(甜食) (except ice cream) are eaten with a fork if at all possible, and the spoon you see by your dessert is meant to be for coffee (but if you use it for your dessert no one will say anything).
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honor to be here to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Xing Heng and I’m
in my eighteen years old. I come fromXiamen, which is a famous and beautiful
city. I strongly suggest you visiting there and I can be your guide if it’s
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four years. Computer Science and Technology is my favorite subject and I am sure
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computer science and our society. I am glad to be a classmate of you and I hope
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+ 加入清单My mane is......Im....years old.My weight is...kgs.and height is.....cm.I have stuied English for about ...years.At school my favourite subject is English.I often talk with my classmate in English.In my spare time I like playing bascketball and swimming.My health is very good .I think I can be fit for the job because I like this kind of work and l enjoy learning new things.I am ready to deal with people.I have much patience and care.So I think I can do the job well.At last,I hope you can give me the chance.If you choose me,you never regret for ever.
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+ 加入清单Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways. But the stn way is to have fun by drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes frofriends and parents. Sotis, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show th(eir love for their children. Since birthday celebration is one of the iortant activities in ones life. It can be done in re aningful ways. For exale, we can buy so flowers or cook a delicious al for our thers on that day. In this way, we exprethanks to our parents in return for their love
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+ 加入清单My name . I am from . There are people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She also a busy woman. I have a older ster and a younger brother. My ster a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in Englh. My brother an elementary school student. He 8 years old.
Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wh I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.
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+ 加入清单Many of us are liking animals very much, some of us like dogs, others like cats, which can be easily seen in anywhere, well, im very keen on penguin.
the reason of mine to have keen on penguin is because their uniqueness, unlike with most of other animals, they only live in the South Pole, and unlike with most birds, though they cant fly, yet they can swim in the extreme cold glacier, and the most wonderful part is they can stand like a human and walking, its very cute when they are walking, Most of the endangered animals are very harmful, yet the penguin looks harmonious as well as entertaining, we even will put them on the movies and cartoons such as "Madagascar" and "Ice Age" and so on.
I like penguin, and when i grow up, wish to do research on the south pole to observe penguin and protect them.
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+ 加入清单My name is Wang Ming.My birthday is June 5th. I am Chinese. I am a student.I study very hard.My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and the trumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it.Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I think theyre interesting. I’m one of the best students in my class. My teachers all say I am a good student.They all like me and I like them, too.
我的名字是王明.我的生日是6月5日。我是中国人。我是一个学生.我学习很努力.我的最喜欢的科目是英语。我喜欢它,因为它很有趣。我可以弹钢琴和吹喇叭,但不是很好。我喜欢游泳并且我很擅长.在所有种类的电影中,我最喜欢喜剧片。我想他们很有趣。我是我班上最好的学生之一。我的老师都说我是一个很好的学生.他们都喜欢我,我也喜欢他们。
篇19:英语自我介绍常用句子
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+ 加入清单to introduce myself(介绍我自己)
hello,every one!(大家好)
my name is **** . (我叫****)
im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改)
i live in the beautiful city of rizhao.(我住在美丽的rizhao城)(你可以把rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)
im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)
in the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在学校,我最喜欢数学)
perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)
but i like it.(但我喜欢他)
i belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)
i also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)
such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)
im kind-hearted.(我很热心)
if you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助,就来找我)
i hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友)
ok.this is me .a sunny boy.(好了,这就是我,一个阳光男孩)