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写信介绍家乡英语

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dear eric,

My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low green hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere.

But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.

Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.

I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.

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篇1:介绍我的家乡的英语

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As everyone knows that China is one of the most beautiful Countries all over the world. It is really famous for its long history and civilizations. As a Chinese girl, I’m so proud of my Country. And of course, I love it deeply in my heart. not just because it’s my hometown.

Daqing is beautiful and modern. Thescenery here is so attractive. Everyone will love it at the fist sight.

When you come to Daqing, you will see museums, parks and shopping centers here and there. Wherever you go, you can see green trees, grass and beautiful flowers. what’s more,there are many places of historic interest in Daqing. Such as Iron Man Memorial Museum, Childrens Park, Times square and the wetland tourism Taikang. I am sure that the beautiful scenery will attract more people to come here.

Daqing is also famous for its oil. It provides oil for our Country. Thus it is an important city in China. I am proud of it.

I also love the spirit of Daqing-the Iron Man Wang Jinxi Spirit.Wang Jinxi is a hero of Daqing. I learn a lot from him. Work hard! Persevere! And never give up!

That is my hometown Daqing. I love it very much! I hope you love it as I do.

Thank you everyone!

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篇2:高一英语介绍新学校

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I am in primary school now, and I like my campus so much. The first time I

walk in the school, I am attracted by its beautiful scenery. There are so many

green trees and colorful flowers around. The environment here is so lively. So

many students do the sports in the playground. The comfortable environment makes

me study in good mood.

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篇3:英语简历自我介绍模板

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Name: Melvin

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: May, 1982

Citizenship: Junan county, Linyi, Shandong

Major: English (B.A)

⊿ Objective

Assistant of your office or the manager; Interpreter of company or organization which concerns international business; College or vocational university‘s teacher.

⊿ Education Background

September 2002 to July 2006, Shandong University of Architecture ⊿ Main Skills

About English

Have past the Test for English Major -4; fluent oral English, and good pronunciation.

Major target: ESP of technology, esp. architecture and real estate, and also international business.

About GermanAbout Chinese

Have got the Certificate of Chinese, the score is 86.2

About Computer

Have a good command of computer, knowing the basic maintain of hardware and software;

Good sense of Visual Foxpro language.Intersted in web page design, and had mastered the MACROMEDIA, which including Dreamweaver,Flash and Firework.

Skilled in Microsoft Office, including FrontPage.

⊿ Work Experience

Have part time job in Shanghai Yaru Consulting Co.Ltd during 2004 and 2005 summer holiday.

Did the market research for Shandong Shiguang Boiler Co.Ltd (shanghai branch) in shanghai.

Experiences on be a tutor of junior, senior middle school students and college students.

Many times of doing promotion sales for stores during the campus life.

⊿ ActivitiesFrom 2004 to 2005, be the minister of the Network Department and Publicity Department of the Students Union.

⊿ Awards & Honors

In the year of 2004, awarded the "Model student stuff "prize of our school.

In the year of 2004, won the third level scholarship of our school.

In the year of 2003, won the "Excellent Student" prize of our school.

⊿ Interests

Have intensive interest in traveling, photographing; Reading,esp.on business, economy and computer.

⊿ Self-Evaluation

Strong sense of responsibility, good spirit of teamwork. Can learn new things well in short time.

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篇4:介绍扬州的英语

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Yangzhou (simplified Chinese:扬州) is a prefecture-level city in central Jiangsu Province, Peoples Republic of China. Sitting on the northern bank of the Yangtze River, it borders the provincial capital of Nanjing to the southwest, Huaian to the north, Yancheng to the northeast, Taizhou to the east, and Zhenjiang across the river to the south. Historically it is one of the wealthiest of Chinas cities, known at various periods for its great merchant families, poets, painters, and scholars.

Geography and climate

Rivers: the Yangtze River, Jinghang Canal, Baoshe River, Datong River, Beichengzi River, Tongyang Canal, Xintongyang Canal, Baima Lake, Baoying Lake, Gaoyou Lake, Shaobo Lake.

Local landscape: Slender west lake, Ge garden, He garden, Da ming temple, Phoenix island, etc. Subtropical monsoon climate with humid changeable wind; longer winters for about 4 months, summers 3 months and shorter springs and autumns, 2 months respectively; frost-free period of 222 days and annual average sunshine of 2177 hours. Average temperature: 15 °C annually; the hottest in July of 27.6 °C and the coldest in January of 1.7 °C; maximum temperature of 39.8 °C and minimum 19 °C

The annual average precipitation is 1,030 mm, and about 45 percent of rainfall is concentrated in the summer. The rainy season known as "plum rain season" usually lasts from mid-June to late July. During this season, the plums are ripening, hence the name plum rain.

Cuisine

Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why the people of Yangzhou are so infatuated with their city. They have an appealing color, aroma, taste and appearance. The original color of each ingredient is preserved after cooking, and no oily sauce is added, so as to retain the fresh savor of the food.

In Yangzhou all dishes, whether cheap or expensive, are elaborate. Cooks will not scrimp on their work, even with Zhugansi (stewed sliced dry bean curd), a popular dish that costs only a few yuan. Dry bean curd is made by each restaurant that serves it, so the flavor is guaranteed. The cook slices the 1-cm-thick curd into 30 shreds, each one paper-thin but none broken, and then stews them for hours with chopped bamboo shoots and shelled shrimps in chicken soup. In this way the dry bean curd shreds can soak up the flavor of the other ingredients, and the soup is clear but savory. It is not only Yangzhou cooks but also the ordinary people who are conscientious about cooking.

[介绍扬州的英语作文

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篇5:介绍雷锋的英语

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Lei Feng was a model soldier, On December 1 8,1940, he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province. He didnt go to school till 1950. At the age of 18, he worked as a steel worker. He was often praised for his good job. On January 8, 1960, he joined the army. In the same year, he joined the Communist Party. He loved the Party and the people, and constantly did good for others. As a result, he became a model soldier. After his death, Chairman Mao called on the people to "Learn from Comrade Lei Feng". The whole nation were moved by his deeds. Lei Fengs spirit will live in our hearts forever.

雷锋雷锋是一名优秀士兵,1940年12月18日出生于湖南省一个小山村的贫困农民家庭里,他1950年才上学,18岁时做了一名炼钢工人,因工作好而经常受到嘉奖。1960年1月8日参军,同年加入中国共产党,他爱党爱民,经常做好事,所以他被评为优秀战士。

雷锋死后,毛主席号召。人民“向雷锋同志学习”,他的事迹感动了全国人民。雷锋精神将永远活在我们心中。

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篇6:介绍我的朋友英语MyBestFriend

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Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend. We have already known each other for ten years. We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kindhearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help. I feel proud to have such a good friend.

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篇7:介绍家人的英语

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My Family

there are five people in my family。they are my grandfather,my grandmother,my father,my mother and I 。

My father is doctor。He works in Yueqing。He goes to work on foot everyday。My father is not very tall,but he is strong,he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work。

My mother is teacher。She works in a middle school in Yue Qing。She goes to work by car。She is a very good teacher in my eyes。

I am a student in Yueqing FLS。My school is very beautiful。there are many tall buildings,GREen tress,nice flowers in our school。We have wonderful teachers too。I like studying in my school。

My grandparents don’t go to work any more。they have retired。they stay at home everyday。In the morning they go to the park and do morning exercises。In the afternoon,they drink tea with their friends。In the evening,they enjoy themselves watching TV and reading newspapers。

We have a happy family。I can’t say how much I love it!

我的家人

我家里有五个人。他们是我的祖父,我的祖母,我的父亲,我的母亲和我。 我的父亲是医生。他在乐清市工作。他每天步行去上班。我的父亲个子不高,但他很强壮,对病人很好,他喜欢他的工作。 我妈妈是老师。她在岳青的一所中学工作。她开车去上班。在我眼里她是个很好的老师。 我是一名在乐清市的学生。我的学校很漂亮。在我们学校有许多高大的建筑物,绿色的树,漂亮的花。我们也有很棒的老师。我喜欢在我的学校学习。 我的祖父母不再去工作了。他们已经退休了。他们每天呆在家里。早上他们去公园做早操。下午,他们和他们的朋友喝茶。晚上,他们喜欢看电视和看报纸。 我们有一个幸福的家庭。我不能说我有多爱它!

[介绍家人的英语作文及翻译

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篇8:小学生英语自我介绍

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Hello,everybody.大家好

My names( ).我的名字叫( )

Im in Class( )Grade six of( )school.我在( )学校6年级()班级

Im tall(short).Im ( )centimeters.我很高(矮),我()厘米。

I like English very much.我非常喜欢英语

Beacuse English is interesting.因为英语很有趣。

So my English is very good.所以,我的英语很好。

I acquire many award.我获得过很多奖项。

I hope that every of you will love me。希望大家能喜欢我。

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篇9:[英语自我介绍]

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A chubby face, a pair of bright eyes, a plasticine like soft nose and big mouth, this is me - Zou Shaoming.

I have a feature, one quick and one slow.

One of my fast meals is fast. I eat like a pig eating ginseng fruit, have not tasted the taste of swallow. I stop to eat the mother shall I read hastily and without thinking, 15 minutes can not eat, otherwise I cant punish the next meal to eat second bowls. In order to eat a little more, I had to obey my mothers orders. You dont say, it worked!

My slow speed is slow in doing homework. When doing homework, I always think of the international chess game, the results to the 7, 8 points or to do homework, I wish I could fast and slow upside down.

I dont think I have so many weaknesses, but I still have good points. I like reading books very much. In the morning, I also secretly read extracurricular books. I like to read in the toilet, my mother broke my throat, and I was immersed in the book.

How, I am one of the advantages and disadvantages of small fans?

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篇10:求职自我介绍英语版

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good morning !

it is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview, i hope i can make a good performance today. im confident that i can succeed.

now i will introduce myself briefly.i am 26 years old,born in shandong province . (general introduction)

i was graduated from qingdao university. my major is electronic.and i got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of XX. during university, i spent most of my time on study so that i have passed cet4/6 . and acquired basic knowledge of my major.(education background)

in july XX, i began work for a small private company as a technical support engineer in qingdao.because im capable of more responsibilities, so i decided to change my job. and in august XX,i left qingdao to beijing and worked for a foreign enterprise as an automation software test engineer.because i want to change my working environment, id like to find a job which is more challenging. moreover motorola is a global company, so i feel i can gain the most from working in this kind of company ennvironment. that is the reason why i come here to compete for this position. (research experience and academic activity)

i think im a good team player and im a person of great honesty to others. also i am able to work under great pressure.

that’s all. thank you for giving me the chance.

[求职自我介绍英语

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篇11:英语作文介绍自己最喜欢的老师

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我最喜欢老师

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛,一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上,她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

黄老师非常喜欢狗,因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色,因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

编辑点评:这篇小作文情感真挚,写出了真情实感,在教师节之际,特别适合表达对老师的感激之情。

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篇12:介绍家乡的英语

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HuangMei is my hometown. It is in the East in HuBei.It is East on the city named AnQing of AnHui.And it is south to the city named JiuJiang of JiangXi. It is a great city in my heart.It has a long history for about 1800 years in China .Example .The temple named SiZu and WuZu were in HuangMei for a long years-old.Today,Every year many visitor come different part to there.As a daughter from Huangmei.I leaved it away for about seven years. But I miss it everyday .Even in a lot of my dream in the night .I belive HuangMei will be richer and richer .The new year 2009 will going .Tonight I hope everything will be well in my new 26 years-old.All my friends will be well.I must work hard in the new year.I will be ain growth as my hometown .

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篇13:介绍雾霾的英语作文及译文

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A day in the morning, I am out of the door and embraced a lot of the fog, I confused looked at the side of the environment, a glistening, this let me unexpected, I found the station with his memory, my in the mind thinking about why so big fog today while walking up and down, later to the school geography class, just today climate, so the teacher then and we said: "the main reason of haze because we fail to protect the environment and leads to the deterioration of the environment rapidly, that the air filled with bacteria, so go out must remember to wear a face mask, the so-called illness..."

Teacher said a lot but I have no mood to go to again, came home from school in the afternoon, the fog is so big, I suddenly found a problem is I am a blind road, plus this weather, more cant find home, I immediately to go home with their feelings, but several times but all rest, I am breathless of sitting on the bench and wait for my mother will see me after work, half an hour later, mom finally came back home, mother saw sitting in the home I was surprised, said: "why and why not outside into the room?

"I was sat in the front half an hour, but did not know his home door, go home and watch newspapers also found a lot of people have got the wrong number, the more outrageous is that some people get married on that day the team lost to, ah, early know a good protection of the environment is good, we a pollution will cause harm to the nature is very big, so everyone is alert, so we dont take care of the nature, let she hurt her heart, be hurt instead of us, so we will influence our life bit by bit at ordinary times, if we live in a land gone, then it is too late to regret, therefore, to protect the environment, please start from the youth!

一大天早上,我出了门便拥抱了一大堆的气,我迷茫的看了看身边的环境,一片白花花的,这让我始料不及,我凭着自己的记忆力找到了车站,我心里一边想着为什么今天雾这么大一边走来走去,后来到学校上地理课,恰好今天讲气候,所以老师便和我们说:“形成雾霾的主要原因是因为我们没有好好地保护环境,导致环境快速恶化,以至于空气中都弥漫着细菌,所以出门一定要记得戴口罩,所谓病从口入。。。”

老师又说了一大堆可我也无心再去听了,下午放学回家,雾还是那么大,我忽然发现了一个问题就是我本来就是个路盲,再加上这样的天气,更找不到家了,我连忙凭着自己的感觉向家跑去,可是好几次却都坐吃山空,我气喘吁吁的坐在小区的石凳上,等待妈妈下班会看到我,半个小时以后,妈妈终于回来了,妈妈看见坐在家门口的我很是惊讶,说道:”在外边干嘛为什么不进屋子?

“我居然坐在家门口半个小时却不知道自己在家的门口,回家看报纸也发现了很多人都找错了家,更离谱的是有的人在那天结婚车队跟丢了,哎,早知道好好保护环境好了,我们一次的污染会造成自然很大的伤害,所以大家还是警醒一点吧,我们这样地不爱护大自然,让她伤了心,受到伤害的反而是我们,所以我们平时的一点一滴都会影响我们的生活,如果我们生活的土地一去不复返,到时候后悔也来不及了,所以,保护环境,请从青少年做起!

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篇14:介绍自己的英语作文

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My name is xxx.  I am from xx.  There are people in my family.  My father works in a computer company.  He is a computer engineer.  My mother works in a international trade company.  She is also a busy woman.  I have a older sister and a younger brother.  My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University.  She majors in English.  My brother is an elementary school student.  He is 8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much.  I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day.  I wish I could be a computer program designer in the future.  And that is why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

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篇15:2024高考英语作文高分技巧介绍

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以下是由语文迷网小精心整理提供的关于高考英语写作技巧,一起来看看吧。

一、要善于模仿

一些同学的办法往往是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,真正的模仿重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在高考(课程)写作中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行:“The bicycle is very popular in China for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”。如果要表示“总是能够”的概念,很多同学提笔就会写can always,但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定,用never fail to。

二、要灵活变通

在批改过上万份同学们英语(课程)作文中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“What is it made of”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“It is made of Miss Hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

四、要心有全局

英文写作如果结构意识良好,应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了,适当地填入观点、素材,文章就自然而然立起来了。

临考在即,同学们要牢记英语写作的基本要领,特编顺口溜如下:细审题,巧构思,列要点,防遗漏。写日记,同汉语;书信,通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理,写人记事按顺序;完稿后查遗漏,整洁干净莫忘记。

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篇16:介绍故宫英语作文

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The majestic the Imperial Palace museum is a world famous one of the Royal buildings.

Into the Tiananmen, through the side door, gate, came to the gate, a large palace show in my eyes, this is the office of the Taihe palace, after the temple came to the temple and temple, and there is. Each house has Zhu Hong walls and gates, the roof is covered with yellow glazed tiles. After then, then turn a corner, I saw a small door in the door, look right, see nine, nine engraved with nine dragons, their colors are white, blue, yellow, black four kinds of shapes of them, no two are the same. Over history, then from the left door into the room to watch. When I entered the room when I watch, startled, apparently came to the bell of the Kingdom, the clock of the ocean, big and small Guzhong row upon row of, a mahogany clock fan a superb collection of beautiful things, characters, gilded bronze green shark skin chronometer, clepsydra, hardwood carved since the name of clock, there are 1000 kinds of clock. The watch room, turn a circle came to the Imperial Garden, Imperial Garden, beautiful scenery, there are four flowers, the flowers are not welcome, that kind of opened again. There is a rockery in the middle of the garden, and the rockery is more beautiful under the cover of the surrounding grass.

The Imperial Palace Museum, the beautiful scenery everywhere, not to say that, I hope you have a chance to appreciate.

雄伟壮观的故宫博物院是世界闻名的皇家建筑群之一。

走进天安门,经过端门,午门,就来到太和门,一座高大的宫殿展现在我的眼前,这就是皇上办公的太和殿,经过太和殿就来到中和殿,过了中和殿就是保和殿。每个殿都有朱红的宫墙和大门,屋顶上盖的是黄色的琉璃瓦。过了保和殿,再拐个弯,就看到一个小门,进了门,向右看,就看见九龙壁,九龙壁上刻着九条龙,它们的颜色分别是白,蓝,黄,黑四种,它们的形状各异,没有哪两条是相同的。过了九龙壁,再从左边小门进去,就来到钟表室。当我进入钟表室时,我不禁愕然,分明是来到钟的王国,钟的海洋,大大小小的古钟鳞次栉比,琳琅满目,有红木人物风扇钟,铜镀金绿鲨鱼皮天文钟,铜壶滴漏,硬木雕花自名钟等,一共有钟表1000多种。过了钟表室,转个圈儿就来到御花园,御花园景色优美,四季都有花开,这一种花还没有谢,那一种又开了。花园中间有个假山,在周围小草的掩映下,假山更漂亮了。

故宫博物院到处有美丽的景色,说也说不尽,希望有机会你去细细赏玩。

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篇17:新初一的英语自我介绍

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My name is XXX.And Im 13 years old.My hobbies are singing,dancing and

drawing pictures.And Im a sanguine person.My favourite stars are Shu Chang and JJ Lam.I like playing computer game and reading classic

in the rest.Im studying at Xiao Shi Zhong Xin school.

My name is Liu yang. I`m a thirteen-year-old boy. I`m a student of Class Four, Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang . My study is well. I`m tall and strong.

I`m a diligent boy. I study hard at all my lessons. My dream is to be a knowledgeable man. I know it`s very hard. The way is very long. But I will try my best to do it well. And I belive myself. I have many hobies. They are reading, running, swimming, playing, basketball, climbing and playing table tennis. Everyday I all need some time to reading. On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.

In my free time, sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do. I have a colorful life!

[新初一英语自我介绍

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篇18:介绍自己的英语词

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Hi! My name is lisa.I am twelve years old.

I am a good student.

And I am a girl .

I am not handsome but I am very lovely .I am study in ...

shool.

The shool is very good and beautiful.I like it very much.

I have big eyes and my ears are big too.

But my nose and mouse are small.so I look like lovely.

My favorite sport is play basketball and table tennis I think health is very importante.And I hope you healthy.

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篇19:介绍企鹅的英语

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Many of us are liking animals very much, some of us like dogs, others like cats, which can be easily seen in anywhere, well, im very keen on penguin.

the reason of mine to have keen on penguin is because their uniqueness, unlike with most of other animals, they only live in the South Pole, and unlike with most birds, though they cant fly, yet they can swim in the extreme cold glacier, and the most wonderful part is they can stand like a human and walking, its very cute when they are walking, Most of the endangered animals are very harmful, yet the penguin looks harmonious as well as entertaining, we even will put them on the movies and cartoons such as "Madagascar" and "Ice Age" and so on.

I like penguin, and when i grow up, wish to do research on the south pole to observe penguin and protect them.

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篇20:英语写作加分和扣分点介绍

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英语作文一般都是15-20分,你想指导你的分数被扣在哪些地方了吗?

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。

一:先看一下扣分点:

1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.

二:加分点

除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

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