远逝的英文（经典20篇）

Yruesday January lst Sunny

Its New Years Day today. This morning when I got up, I heardsomebody

singing a love song. It was mum! Ifelt very strange because Iknew mum didnt

enjoy popular songs. And I didnt think it was suitable formy middle-aged mother

to sing any love songs. Whats more, dad wasfollowing what mum was singing.

"What had happened to them?" Then Inoticed a box with a small card on the table.

I got close to it carefully andunderstood then. As a matter of fact, it was

their 15th marriage anniversarytoday. Thats why they were so happy. When seeing

their happiness, I alsofelt happy.

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’

ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and

is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants

to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share

his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to

cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to

protect the people safe.

Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

The Lunar New Year  a great occasion to the Chinese people. It lasts about the first four days of the year， during which people do not work except for the workers on duty. Students do not go to school， and shops are closed.

Several days before the new year， people begin to prepare. Farmers kill pigs， sheep， cocks and hens. City dwellers buy meat fh and vegetables. Houses are cleaned; coupletsare posted on the doors. Colourful lanterns are hung at the gate.

On the eve of the new year， each family has its members gatherd together and eats a family reunion dinner. After the meal they watch TV until the clock strickes twelve. Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers and other fire works to welcome the new year. On the first day of the new year， almost everyone  dressed in h or her best. When people meet on the way， they say to each other "Happy New Year". Friends and relatives pay new year calls and gives presents to each other. Children indulge themselves in games.

1．Pain past is pleasure.

（过去的痛苦就是快乐。）

2． While there is life, there is hope.

（有生命就有希望/留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。）

3． Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.

（脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。）

4． Storms make trees take deeper roots.

（风暴使树木深深扎根。）

5． Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

（心之所愿，无所不成。）

6． The shortest answer is doing.

（最简单的回答就是干。）

7． All things are difficult before they are easy.

（凡事必先难后易。）

8． Great hopes make great man.

（伟大的理想造就伟大的人。）

9． God helps those who help themselves.

（天助自助者。）

Dear Sir,

I am highly disappointed in the proposed 2004-05 budget cuts to educa1ion.

Taking away basic aid status and slashing our school budgets is a recipe for

educational disaster in our school. The future lies with our children. They must

have access to high quality educa1ion.

My husband and I have worked hard to be able to live in a school district

that provides high quality education for our children. Cutting funding in

districts like ours will have a negative impact on property values.

The school that my daughter attends is hardly wha1 I would describe as a

"rich" school. Parents are asked to pay for books for all the classes, science

supplies and for their students to participate in the performing arts among

other items. If our school is to remain a world leader in technological

development, cutting our school funds is the worst possible choice to make.

Education funds should not be diverted away from education.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Williams

I opened the "our festival", the first thing I saw is the introduction of the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is one of the oldest festivals in our country. Where does my hometown show the atmosphere of the Spring Festival? Lets look at it.

Before the Spring Festival, I saw on TV that the meals in the hotel were all booked. It shows that everyone is reunited with their family. 10 days before the Spring Festival, I noticed that the traffic in the train was getting bigger and bigger, and I couldnt even buy the tickets. What was the matter? It turns out that all people in other places want to go home and celebrate the Spring Festival. So, the flow of people home is getting higher and bigger.

Before the Spring Festival, I found that there are a lot of people who sell fireworks in the street, arent there? The traditional customs of our country during the Spring Festival! On the night of the Spring Festival, in the sound of thunderous firecrackers, fireworks flashes up and radiates a variety of gleaming rings in the night sky. Some are like chrysanthemums, some are like waterfalls, others are like big trees and golden lights. Some are like small lanterns full of sky. They are really gorgeous. Thousands of spectators are cheering with loud cheers.

After the Spring Festival, the people of our country should have an atmosphere of red and red fire and joy and bustle. You see, small red couplets, firecrackers red, red paper-cut, the old man for children red envelopes, new clothes, children red, paste “ Fu ” the word red, red lanterns and red, Chinese junction is red … … … … the whole country a piece of red.

The Spring Festival is celebrating the festival, more is a good day for thousands of households together, in this new years day, people in happiness and peace with a day every year, countries better every year.

I want to be a doctor twenty years later, to help people.Even when not a doctor, I want to be an astronaut to space exploration. If you can be a doctor to do a good doctorfamous. There are a lot of good doctor, for example, can help oneself. There are advantages to do an astronaut, for example, can have a look at the space is how, can help mankind to prove that the world there are aliens. But dothese two jobs are not easy, also very dangerous, such asthe doctor may have infectious diseases, do astronautsrocket launching and landing could explode. It is not easy to do so this two job.

我想二十年以后当一名医生，帮助人们。即使当不了医生，我也想当一名宇航员去太空探险。如果能当一名医生就要做一位有名的好医生。做医生有很多好处，比如能帮自己治病。做一名宇航员也有好处，比如能看一看太空是怎样的，能帮助人类证明世界上有没有外星人。但是要做这两份工作是不容易的，还很危险的，比如做医生有可能感染传染病，做宇航员火箭发射和降落时有可能会爆炸。所以做这两份工作都是不容易的。

Dear Emily,

Im glad to learn that youre interested in China. Im more than happy to introduce you more of China. China, being one of the four ancient civilizations, has a long history and therefore there are many places of ancient sites. Besides, China has a vast region hence many beautiful natural sceneries are found in China as well. And due to the long history and vast area, there are in total 56 races living harmoniously with huge populations in China. China has not only ancient sites and sceneries, also she has modern metropolitans such as Hong Kong and Shanghai which attracts millions of travelers each year As an old saying, talking is nothing more than seeing. I hope you can come and visit China yourself and view these beautiful sceneries with your own eyes.

Yours Sincerely,

Hua Li

Dear leaders and fellow students,

Everybody is good!

It is my great honor to stand here and participate in the election of the monitor. I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your support. First of all, I would like to introduce myself to you: my name is tao league. As a freshman at the university, I am one of the leaders of the department of health.

As a child, my father once said to me: do things with your feet on the ground and do them one step at a time. Therefore, I went from a middle school student to the first year of the university to enter this sacred place, I deeply feel the opportunity is hard-won, need to cherish. It is this power that makes me feel confident when I stand here.

Of course, it is not enough to have confidence, but also to have certain ability. From childhood, I will not be able to plan activities independently. I will never come to the meeting, from bad to good, and I will complete each work with confidence and modesty.

In middle school, I served as monitor and President of the student union. At work, I consciously cultivate my ability of cooperation and coordination, can I have a sincere cooperation with others, and to coordinate the relationship between the good students, dare to bold to bad behavior management, never soft, therefore, won the praise of teachers and students. I often look at our class cadres from the perspective of my classmates. Talk with your classmates on Saturdays and Sundays. Learn about their personalities, thoughts and hobbies, listen to their voices, and listen to their Suggestions and opinions. I always try to organize activities from their point of view, so the class activities are always in full swing. But "man to err, to err is human." and I also made a mistake, but I dare to face their own errors, from the students and the teachers help humbly accept criticism, and correct the mistake, and never allowing yourself to fall for the second time in the same place.

Im running here today. I hope to become school leaders and students in our class between the bridge of the mind, as a bond between teachers and students, and become a real service for students, the students really love it, also want to exercise their abilities, give yourself a stage to show ability. Compared with others, I feel I have more self-confidence, because I am an unyielding person, I have a real sense of responsibility and enthusiasm for our class. Of course, if I am not elected, I will work as hard as I can and will do better to support the work of the new presidium. Because I love this group, because of love, I will do my best. If I am lucky enough to be elected, I will draw lessons from the previous and the experience of the presidium, further carry forward the glorious tradition of the he, seeking truth from facts of service for students, and will work with the young students, the unity cooperation, advancing with The Times, bold reform, give full play to our proper role in our class, let it become a veritable group.

Finally, I sincerely hope that you can believe me, support me and give me this opportunity to demonstrate my ability.

I will paint a beautiful blueprint for the college campus tomorrow, in which I will spend the spring sweat in our sky. Im sure our class will be better tomorrow...

20 July 2006

Dear Mr. Wang,

Thank you for taking the time to write your wonderful letter in support of MCEA (Maywood Chinese Education Association). Your letter clearly articulates all the major reasons children in Maywood will benefit from studying the Chinese language as part of their elementary school education. It provides invaluable support that will help making bilingual Chinese education a reality in Maywood public schools.

Although MCEA would like to see Palo Alto public schools implement the first bilingual Chinese kindergarten class in September of 2006, we have learned that the school district must take the time to understand how a new program will affect existing educational offerings, and to validate community interest. Nevertheless, MCEA, with more than 70 members, will continue to actively promote bilingual Chinese education in the Palo Alto public schools and will keep you apprised of the progress we make.

Thanks again for sending a letter in support of MCEA. We will continue to do all we can to realize this program both for families of Chinese descent and those with a general interest in participating in the growing economic power of China.

Yours sincerely,

George Chen

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I have a classmate. His name is Li Ye. He has a fat figure and his eyes are round. Li Ye is a diligent student, he listen to the teacher carefully and actively raised their hands to speak, the teacher assignments he did very seriously, "homework seriously honor roll" he "is" the most times (homework carefully in a "positive" one pen).

Remember once the teacher arranged the language homework to let us go home to write. But the quality of our homework is too bad, only Li Ye and the other students do it well. Li Yes homework is a word worker, and even the teacher takes Li Yes homework to the students. Mathematics and English homework are also very serious. Mathematics and English often have to be conscientious and neat because of his homework. So he has many "positive" in "serious honor list".

Li ye not only works conscientiously and neatly, listens to lectures in class, raises his hand to speak, but also loves labor. His teacher makes him the leader of sweeping the floor on Monday. When Li Ye sweeps the floor, he not only urges his classmates to sweep the floor quickly, but also sweeps himself carefully. Thats why theres a lot of garbage on Monday, and it can be done quickly. During the course, teachers often help their teachers get their homework to go down, so that the teacher and the students are very fond of it.

Because Li Ye studied so seriously, he won the two prize in Mathematics Olympiad competition of grade four and grade five Chinese reading and writing contest. He was selected in this years English Olympic competition, hoping he can do well in the competition. In addition, he was elected the ten best young children this year, will be awarded in 61, after the vote, Li Ye was elected squad leader.

Li ye not only works seriously, but also loves labor to help the teacher. He is a good example of our study!

1、向你俩致以最美好的祝愿，祝你们终生幸福。I take great pleasure in sending here with a little wedding present in celebration Of the happY event

2、在你们订婚之际，请接受一个老朋友最美好的祝愿。MY verY best wishes to You for a lifetime of happiness

3、愿你俩婚姻美满幸福。Best wishes from one of Your old friends on Your engagement

4、值你俩大喜之日，谨致最诚挚的祝贺。Our best wishes to the two of You for a happY marriage filled with all the good things

5、谨向你们即将到来的幸福结合致以衷心的祝贺。MY sincere congratulations on this auspicious event of Yours

6、正值阁下新婚之禧，恭贺幸福无量。MY heart felt congratulations on Your coming happY union!

7、我丈夫和我一同祝愿你俩美满幸福，白头偕老。Wishing You manY happY returns of the wedding daY

8、值你新婚之际，请允许我加入祝福的行列。MY husband joins me in hoping that You have a long and happY and prosperous life together

9、请接受我对你和……的神圣结合的最诚挚的祝贺，并祝愿你俩幸福无量。Allow me to join the chorus of congratulations upon Your recent marriage

10、Wishing You a world of happiness and love as all Your dreams come true 但愿天从人愿，幸福与爱情无边！

11、He must be extra special, because he is marrYing a lovelY girl 新娘如此可爱， 新郎必定英俊不凡。

12、MaY the joY You share on Your wedding daY Be the kind Youll share all along lifes waY 愿你俩婚礼之日分享的喜悦，将伴随你俩共度人生的岁月。

13、I wish You manY more anniversaries each happier than the last 愿你们有更多周年纪念日，一年比一年更幸福。

14、We never knew two people better suited to each other 我们从未见过如此般配的一对。

15、Youre the luckiest guY in the world 你是世界上最幸运的人儿。

16、He must be extra special, because he is marrYing a lovelY girl 新娘如此可爱，新郎必定英俊不凡。

17、A wish to two happY people for a future of dreams comes true, congratulations! 祝两个幸福的人儿，来日美梦都成现实。祝贺你们!

18、OnlY once in a lifetime that a special dream comes true And suddenlY Your entire world seems beautiful and new Best wishes alwaYs! 一 生中只有一次美梦实现的奇迹，你俩的整个世界顿时变得绚丽新奇。祝永远幸福!

19、MaY the joY You share on Your wedding daY Be the kind Youll share all along lifes waY 愿你俩婚礼之日分享的喜悦，将伴随你俩共度人生的岁月。

20、God bless You and Yours, and surround You ever with his blessing 愿上帝祝福你和你的爱人，永远赐福于你们。

21、MaY You two alwaYs be in love! MaY happiness increase with age 愿你俩永浴爱河，祝你俩幸福与年俱增。

22、Wishing You a world of happiness and love as all Your dreams come true 但愿天从人愿，幸福与爱情无边!

23、MaY the coming Years, fill Your lives with love and happiness 在未来的数年，将你的生命装满爱和快乐。

24、MaY You have a long and loving life together 愿你们长久、热爱生活在一起。

25、Wishing You two an abundance of love and happiness 祝你们俩有丰富的爱和幸福。

26、Wishing You manY Years of joY and happiness 祝你有用永远的欢乐和幸福。

27、congratulations to both of You 祝贺你们俩。

28、Wishing You a wonderful beginning, and love to last a lifetime 愿你有一个美妙的开始,相爱一辈子。

29、For the Bride and Groom Wishing You love in Your hearts, joY in Your home 为新娘和新郎祝福你爱在心中，在你的家里。

30、Best wishes for a lifetime of love and happiness 最美好的祝愿，祝你们终生爱情和幸福。

Hello， nice to meet you.

My name is xxx. I am a sophomore studying in Beijing institute of petrochemical technology. My hobbies are varied from individual to group activities. Such as XXX XXX XXX XXX.

The main reason of applying to be Olympic volunteer of 20XX is that I think this will be my unforgettable and GREat experience in my whole life. This is the first time to hold Olympic Games in china， for every Chinese person， this Olympic game is very important and memorable. Besides， Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. As a citizen of Beijing， I feel very proud. Although I am only a graduate， I think that I must actively contribute to the Olympic Games. Unnumbered people want to be Olympic volunteers， but they have no opportunities.

I am so lucky that I am a graduate， and I have opportunity to work for Olympic. My heart tells me that I cannot lose this GREat opportunity. I have geographical conditions that I live in Beijing and I study in Beijing. I have no reason to give up this opportunity to be Olympic volunteer. Furthermore， I can learn and get exercises in many respects， for example， my language skills， communication skills， association skills and ability to deal with matters of sudden urgency. Of cause I may have opportunity to meet my dream sport stars who are XXX， XXX and XXX.

All in all， this experience has great influence on my future life and I have a lot of confidence.

[英文自我介绍志愿者

Directions: You have 25 minutes to plan and write an essay on the given topic. Do not write on another topic, as essays not on the topic receive a score of zero. You will be scored on how clearly and effectively you express your thoughts in writing. Develop your point of view carefully, as your writing will be evaluated on quality, not quantity; but do plan on writing several paragraphs to cover the topic adequately. Write legibly and be specific.

Prompt

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.

Technology promises to make our lives easier, freeing up time for leisure pursuits. But the rapid pace of technological innovation and the split second processing capabilities of computers that can work virtually nonstop have made all of us feel rushed. We have adopted the relentless pace of the very machines that were supposed to simplify our lives, with the result that , whether at work or play, people do not feel like their lives have changed for the better.

Adapted from Karen Finucan,Life in the Fast Lane

Assignment

Do changes that make our lives easier not necessarily make them better? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your readings, studies, experience, and observations.

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as an international trade specialized student, i know the importance of english in english learning, so i have been high-standard requirements themselves. through their own efforts, to xx passed cet band 4 and again to xx points passed cet6. in spoken english i have been in the exercise myself, and reached a certain level. in addition, i also laid a japanese primary basic. not only in english, as the rest of course also study hard. in six semester four times won the scholarship, and once passed the national computer rank examination (level 2).

moreover i took an active part in social practice activities, and to exercise their professional skills, increase their professional knowledge, and has achieved good results. through a series of stratified activities, i also gradually grasp the people contacts and communication skills, learning how to make ourselves in a harmonious interpersonal relationships. through studies i deeply realize the theory instruction practice meaning, and really in the code yourself. in learning and activities of remaining i also actively enrich himself, reading, rich knowledge, and grasped certain of the computer application skills enough to handle the job requirement.

believe after three years study the lives of hone, already will i hammer become a moral decently, strong-willed, high ideals and soaring aspirations, has the enterprising spirit and team cooperation spirit of excellent college students. believe i have knowledge and competence can completely fit for any difficult work, environment of hard did not prevent completed i finish work. if i am lucky to become a member of your company, i will put all the youth and enthusiasm exert into work, obtain due grades for the development of the company, and contribute their efforts.

[外贸公司应聘英文自我介绍

A good beginning makes a good ending.善始者善终。

A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。

A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever. 一本好书，相伴一生。

A good conscience is a soft pillow.不做亏心事，不怕鬼叫门。

A good fame is better than a good face. 美名胜过美貌。

A good husband makes a good wife.夫善则妻贤。

A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。

A good wife health is a man‘s best wealth.妻贤身体好是男人最大的财富。

A great talker is a great liar.说大话者多谎言。

A light heart lives long.静以修身。

A hedge between keeps friendship green.君子之交淡如水。

A joke never gains an enemy but loses a friend.戏谑不能化敌为友，只能使人失去朋友。

A leopard cannot change its spots.积习难改。

A liar is not believed when he speaks the truth说谎者即使讲真话也没人相信。

A little body often harbors a great soul.浓缩的都是精品。

A little knowledge is a dangerous thing.一知半解，自欺欺人。

A little pot is soon hot.狗肚子盛不得四两油。

All are brave when the enemy flies.敌人逃窜时，人人都成了勇士。

All good things come to an end.天下没有不散的筵席。

All rivers run into sea.海纳百川。

All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。

All that ends well is well.结果好，就一切都好。

All that glitters is not gold.闪光的不一定都是金子。

All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。

It is said that in the year of 300 AD, there was a kind old man and his name was Saint Nicholas. He was always ready to help the poor and often gave presents to them.

Today, Father Christmas is an imaginary figure, but nearly all young children believe in him. They think he is a happy old man with a long white beard and a long red robe.

On the night of the twenty-fourth of December every year, Father Christmas from some cold northern land comes down the chimney of the fireplace to put presents by the beds of children or to fill their stockings. So when children go to bed that night, they hang up their stockings, and on Christmas morning they wake to find them full of presents. Of course, it‘s really their parents who fill the stockings.

Another name for Father Christmas is Santa Claus.

译文：

据说，在公元300年，有一个善良的老人，他的名字是圣尼古拉斯。他总是愿意帮助穷人，常常送礼物给他们。

如今，圣诞老人是一个虚构的人物，但几乎所有的孩子都相信他。他们认为他是一个快乐长长的白胡子和一个长长的红色长袍的老人。

在第二十每年的十二月份的第四夜，父亲从寒冷的北方一些圣诞归结土地的壁炉烟囱提出的儿童床礼物或填补他们的袜子。因此，当孩子上床睡觉，那天晚上，他们就挂上他们的袜子，并在圣诞节早晨醒来发现他们装满礼物。当然，这需要他们的父母谁填补了袜子。

圣诞老人的另一个名字是圣诞老人。

[介绍圣诞老人的英文作文及翻译

A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from

them。 Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world。 To

have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones。 Friends who flatter

you to your face are not true friends。

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of

heart。 On the other hand， we should do our best to a void keeping pany with bad

people。

To all partners and riders:

How do you do!

It is such a delight to have friends coming from afar. Five years of wind

and rain, five years of love, all the way hard song!

In the course of development in the past year, I would like to thank every

partner and the vast number of riders for their support! Every little progress

and small success of our company can not be separated from your attention,

trust, participation and support.

Your attention and trust give us the greatest impetus to progress; your

participation and support are the source of our success.

There are thousands of friends in the world. We have not been fully

recognized as far as possible, but we have been working hard. Although we cant

achieve the consistency of all peoples needs, we are also constantly

innovating. In the course of running this marathon, I have encountered many

hardships and setbacks. Thank you very much for your understanding and

tolerance. Every time you participate and support, we are very excited and make

us keep forging ahead. Every brand is our motivation and encouragement. With

you, you will be prosperous forever.

We hope that in the years to come, we can continue to get the attention and

support of our friends. We will continue to provide you with the most sincere

service. We cherish the hard won friendly cooperative relationship with you. If

there is any deficiency, please do not hesitate to criticize. We will try our

best to do better!

Finally, I would like to thank Yueqis hardworking partners for their hard

work and hard work in this year. Perseverance; keep up; fight for 20_.

On the occasion of the lunar year of the monkey, Yueqi wishes you all good

health, family harmony, good luck, rich money!

Sincerely

Salute!

Elder sister, my name is XXX, I think I was a lively and cheerful, sunny boy positive. My motto is: simple life, practical work, to do their best. What is the simple life?

Is easy, communication with the people to be polite and friendly, but also keep a smile, with a sincere heart. What is the practical work? Is the treatment of learning and work, have to be out laughing and smiling face, conscientious, strict in demands, for what they are doing to take their share of responsibility. And what is called best? That is the last person to form their own the style, then this Style provides a reference for others to learn and live by themselves and others

Of course, I also have their own shortcomings and deficiencies, such as lack of social experience, not enough work experience, and this is the main reason why I want to join in this department, hope the skills take quite high on their own, to broaden its scope of communication, but also a strength of their own community contributions.

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。